第一篇：中考英語作文十大常見錯誤分析
中考英語作文十大常見錯誤分析
俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從平時的課堂學習一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇優秀的英語作文在內容和語言兩方面應是一個統一體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經常出現名詞不變復數、第三人稱單數不加s，前后不一致，以及時態語態、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。
1.審題不清
如2004年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。
2.拼寫錯誤
拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。
3.名詞單復數問題
誤 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少動詞
在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有
動詞來構成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired。
誤 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
誤 the apples cheap.i'll take some。
正 the apples are cheap.i'll take some。
5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。
誤 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代詞的誤用
英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。
誤 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。
誤 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example, my friend in high school。
(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。
8.前后不一致
所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。
例1.when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has;同理，want應改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。
改為 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤
漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。例：
誤 when i get to the station the train leave。
正 when i got to the station the train had left。
10.綜合性錯誤
綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養。
如何寫好文章開頭
開頭是作文在閱卷老師面前的第一次亮相，它將決定你所寫的文章在閱卷老師心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味著有了良好的開端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我們該怎樣一提起筆就讓自己成功一半呢？
1.“開門見山”式開頭
一般來說，文章的開頭應盡量做到“開門見山”，即要用簡單明了的語言引出文章的話題，使人一開始就能了解文章要說明的內容。
① 對于敘事類的文章，可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭可以是：Last month，my family went to Huangshan by train.It took us ten hours to get there.What a long and tiring journey!We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us。
② 對于論述性的文章，可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點，接著展開進一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money(時間和金錢)”的開頭可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time.But I don't think so.First，when money is used up，you can earn it back，but??
2.回憶性開頭
在描述事件或游記類的文章中，采用回憶性的開頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類型的開頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯，如never forget(永遠無法忘記)、remember(記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、exciting(令人激動的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad(難過的)??如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭還以這樣寫：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.或It was really an unforgettable experience I had。
3.疑問性開頭
在敘事類或論述性的文章中，都可采用疑問型開頭，這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(種樹)”的開頭可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is?? 再如“Traveling Abroad(出國之旅)”的開頭可以是：If you have anopportunity to travel abroad，why not consider Singapore?
4.倒敘式開頭
在有的文章，特別是敘事類的文章中，可以采用倒敘的寫作手法，先寫出事件的結果，再陳述過程。如“Catching Thieves(捉賊)”的開頭可以這樣寫：I lay in bed in the hospital.I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt.Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you.It's a ?? story。
十字訣
初中英語作文分為四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分。教給大家十個字，搞定初中英語寫作，幫你拿到一等文。
要點+結構+邏輯+語法+亮點
要點：實際上中考[微博]英語寫作就等于兩個字，翻譯！因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點，要求必須在文章中有所體現。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的第二段內容，要做到全，圍繞中心。
結構：中考最流行的結構就是三段式，深受各地區中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么尼？因為這種結構十分清晰。“觀點——要點——總結”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話，如，我們想表達小強很強壯，第一段直接說XQ is extremely strong.觀點明確，這一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3點說為什么他強壯。1.每天吃10頓飯，He has ten meals everyday!詳舉吃的是什么。2.每天運動2小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day!詳舉做了什么運動。
第三段：經過第二段的論證，可以得出結論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
邏輯：這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的，轉折的，總結的邏輯詞等。遞進：除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的，如first of all(首先)，inaddition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all inall(表示總結的)。轉折：but, yet,however等。真正有經驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這些詞體現了這個文章的思路。
語法：其他幾點都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬性的。如，單詞的使用，時態等。
亮點：當我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后兩個字，亮點至關重要。大家設想如果我們是閱卷老師。有兩篇寫人美麗的作文擺在我們面前，都是結構清晰的三段式，要點都很全，都用了一些邏輯詞，都沒有語法錯誤，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以，以后寫英語作文要養成一般詞匯限量用的好習慣。
中考英語作文必備的10個“萬金油”句型
1.不用說?? It goes without saying that ?
=(It is)needless to say(that)?
= It is obvious that ?
例：不用說早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours。
2.在各種??之中，?? Among various kinds of ?，? /= Of all the ?，?
例︰在各種運動中我尤其喜歡慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular。
3.就我的看法??；我認為??
In my opinion, ?
= To my mind, ?
= As far as I am concerned, ?
= I am of the opinion that ?
例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health。
就我的看法打電動玩具既花費時間也有害健康。
4.隨著人口的增加?? With the increase/growth of the population, ?
隨著科技的進步?? With the advance of science and technology, ?
例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass。
隨著臺灣經濟的快速發展許多社會問題產生了。
5.??是必要的 It is necessary(for sb。)to do / that ?
?? 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb。)to do / that ?
?? 是適當的 It is proper(for sb。)to do / that ?
??是緊急的 It is urgent(for sb。)to do / that ?
例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean。
It is proper that we(should)keep the public places clean。
我們應當保持公共場所清潔。
6.花費 spend ? on sth./ doing sth.?
例：我們不應該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時間。
We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in。
7.how 引導的感嘆句
例：那至少可以證明你很誠實。
At least it will prove how honest you are。
8.狀語從句
A)如果你不??，你就會?? If you don't ?，you'll ?
例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance。
如果你不堅持努力工作，你就會失去這次機會。
B)如此 ??，以至于?? so ? that ?
例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up。
當時，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。
C)每當我聽到??我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear ?，I cannot but feel excited。
每當我做??我就忍不住感到悲傷。Whenever I do ?，I cannot but feel sad。
每當我想到??我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of ?，I cannot but feel nervous。
每當我遭遇??我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with ?，I cannot but feel frightened。
每當我看到??我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see ?，I cannot but feel surprised。
例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad。
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad。
每當我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。
9.賓語從句
我認為，?? / 我認為??不 I think / I don't think that ?
我想知道是否?? I wonder whether ?
例：He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club。
他認為我不應該阻止他參加這個俱樂部。
10.Since + S + 過去式，S + 現在完成式。
例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。
自從他上高中，他就一直很用功
中考指導：英語作文萬能開頭14句
1、關于??人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為??
There are different opinions among people as to ____。Some people suggest that
____。
2、俗話說(常言道)??，它是我們前輩的經歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______。Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in
many cases even today。
3、現在，??，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，??；其次，??。更為糟糕的是??。
Today，____，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First，____ Second，____。What makes
things worse is that______。
4、現在，??很普遍，許多人喜歡??，因為??，另外(而且)??。
Nowadays，it is common to ______。
Many people like ______because ______。Besides，______。
5、任何事物都是有兩面性，??也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages。
6、關于??人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認為(說)??，在他們看來，??
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。
7、人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題??，這個問題變得越來越嚴重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious。
8、??已成為人的關注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their
way。
9、??在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題。
_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。
10、根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出??。很顯然??，但是為什么呢？
According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______while.Obviously，______，but why？
11、Recently，the problem of ? has aroused people’s concern。
最近，?問題已引起人們的關注。
12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。
互聯網已在我們的生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色。它給我們帶來了許多好處，但也產生了一些嚴重的問題。
13、Nowadays，(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face。
如今，(人口過剩)已成為我們不得不面對的問題了。
14、With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that?
隨著科技的發展，越來越多的人認為?
沖刺高分四步驟法
多關注焦點、熱點、人文關懷類題材
李老師告訴記者，近幾年的中考書面表達命題常見題型一是根據所給標題寫作，即命題作文，如 My school/family/class/hometown 等；二是根據英語情景提示寫作或者是根據表格提示寫作，即話題作文；三是根據一幅圖畫或者帶有一些圖片說明的題目，即看圖寫作。
這三種都屬材料作文，特點是給出特定的書面材料，并準確地記述、描寫、轉達某一活動的內容或動機，從而達到書面語言交際的目的。體裁有記敘文、描寫文、說明文和應用文(英文書信、E-mail、感謝信)、日記、請假條、便條、講稿、啟事、電話留言條、賀卡、發言稿(值日報告)、介紹、通知、看圖寫話等。
李老師著重強調了一點，近年的中考英語作文基本上是材料作文。這些題材與生活實際緊密聯系，并關注社會焦點、熱點問題，體現人文關懷。所設計的情景密切聯系現實生活，寫作題材源于生活，使學生有話可說，有利于寫出真情實感，也有利主動性、創造性地發揮。所以，學生在復習時要多關注社會焦點、熱點問題、人文關懷類題材。
打牢基礎，養成勤練習的好習慣
李老師表示，要想在有限的篇幅和時間內，使書面表達行文流暢，語言豐富、得體，就要按題目的需要和自己實際英文水平，揚長避短，選用最熟悉的最有把握的詞、句，注意時態、語態等多種句式的交替使用。
“最主要的是一定要平時打牢基礎，練好基本功，養成練習的好習慣；多研究中考書面表達的要求，重視技巧訓練；適時進行備考訓練。”李老師提醒學生要掌握中考書面表達對學生的能力要求。
這些能力包括：在所學詞匯、語法和句型的基礎上寫出句意完整、語法準確的句子；能根據所提供的材料、信息、圖片、圖表及英文詞匯完成應用文、話題作文和看圖作文；切中題意，文理通順；上下文連貫，邏輯正確；要素完整，語言得當；格式正確；無拼寫錯誤及大小寫錯誤，書寫規范整潔，標點正確。
四步驟法輕松“拿下”書面表達
李老師結合自己多年的教學心得，以及近幾年編寫指導學生中考英語的經驗，就中考英語書面表達如何能夠在考場有限時間內得高分，給出了四個步驟，初三學生不妨一試，并在寒假里按此法多多練習。
認真審題 包括文字說明、圖表、短文提供的資料和信息，以及參考詞匯、字數要求等，準確把握人物關系和故事情節，理解主題大意，審清文體，確定格式，確定人稱、主體時態。
列出要點 結合提示信息，把涉及的所有寫作要點逐條列出，編寫要點提綱，組織語言。如：1.開篇句：I think that.。我認為......；It is often said that....。人們經常這么說......2.連接句：Among all the given reasons, one should be mentioned。在所有理由中，有一個值得一提；The main reason why......is that....。之所以....。的主要原因是......3.結束句：一般情況下，記敘文和說明文采用自然結尾法；夾敘夾議和發表觀點類的文章則往往有結束語，首尾呼應。結尾的形式也因文章類別和開頭的風格而靈活多變。如：Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that??考慮到所有這些因素，我們可以做出這樣的結論??另外，書信的結尾常有以下形式的祝福語：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year等。
完成寫作 寫作時語言要純正地道，避免母語的影響；用多種表達方式，避免重復和呆板；使用熟悉的短語、句式，提高準確率。如：1.并列關系的過渡詞：and, as well as, not only...but also, neither...nor......both...and??2.轉折關系的過渡詞：but, yet, however??3.時間關系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last??4.空間關系的過渡詞：near(to)，far(from)，in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right??5.比較關系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as??6.對照關系的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of??7.遞進關系的過渡詞：also, and, then, too, in addition??8.因果關系的過渡詞：because, since, then, so, therebefore??9.解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually......10.強調的過渡詞：in fact, in deed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important??11.目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose??12.列舉的過渡詞：for example, such as??13.總結性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally??
仔細檢查 查格式是否有誤；人稱、時態是否恰當；語法結構是否正確；注意英漢表達的差異；字母大小寫；字數是否合乎要求等
第二篇：中考英語作文十大常見錯誤分析
中考英語作文十大常見錯誤分析
1.審題不清
如2004年中考作文
要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。
2.拼寫錯誤
拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。
3.名詞單復數問題：
誤 My father and my mother is all teacher.正 My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少動詞
在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有 動詞來構成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：I'm tired.誤 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.誤 The apples cheap.I'll take some.正 The apples are cheap.I'll take some.5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。
誤 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代詞的誤用 / 6
英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。
誤 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整
有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。
誤 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.For example, my friend in high school.(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)
正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等.例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has;同理，want應改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致.改為 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤
漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。例：
誤 When I get to the station the train leave.正 When I got to the station the train had left.10.綜合性錯誤：
綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養。
特別說明：由于各方面情況的不斷調整與變化，新浪網所提供的所有考試 / 6
信息僅供參考，敬請考生以權威部門公布的正式信息為準。/ 6 / 6 / 6 / 6
第三篇：中考英語作文常見錯誤分析
中考英語作文常見錯誤分析
1.審題不清
如某年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。
2.拼寫錯誤
拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。
3.名詞單復數問題：
誤 My father and my mother is all teacher.正 My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少動詞
在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有動詞來構成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：I'm tired.誤 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.誤 The apples cheap.I'll take some.正 The apples are cheap.I'll take some.5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。
誤 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代詞的誤用
英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。
誤 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father
7.句子不完整
有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。誤 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.For example, my friend in high school.(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)
正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等.例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has;同理，want應改為wants。本句是
典型的主謂不一致.改為 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤
漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。例：
誤 When I get to the station the train leave.正 When I got to the station the train had left.10.綜合性錯誤：
綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養.
第四篇：英語書面表達十大常見錯誤解析
在長期的英語教學過程中，我分析了學生寫作時常犯的錯誤，主要表現在以下幾個方面：
（1）時態錯誤：文章中忽視了動作發生的時間。
（2）人稱代詞錯誤：單復數、形容詞性物主代詞與名詞性物主代詞錯誤。
（3）名詞單復數、動詞單復數、主謂語不一致。
（4）用詞錯誤：對同義詞的區別、使用場合、習慣用法不熟悉，或者忘記了單詞。
（5）內容不連貫：不會用關聯詞，語序混亂。沒有統籌安排，寫到哪里，就停在哪里。
（6）不會使用某些英語應用文格式。
（7）大小寫、標點符號錯誤，缺少冠詞。
（8）書寫混亂，卷面潦草。
根據以上分析，若要提高學生書面表達能力，就需要進行大量訓練和指導，就寫作步驟來說，要指導學生遵循以下幾點：
（1）認真審題，確定體裁。要求學生仔細審題，明確體裁，領會出題者用意。
（2）構思要點。根據題目要求，理解要表達的要點，設計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態、人稱等，把要點串聯起來，構成文章框架。
（3）選詞造句，避難選易。在要點、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞、句式進行造句，如果不會用復雜句就用簡單句表達要點，注意主謂語一致、人稱、數量、大小寫、標點。
（4）認真檢查，避免錯誤。仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確，邏輯是否一致。
面表達是中學生學習英語應掌握的一項基本技能，它要求學生有扎實的語言基本功，具備一定的審題能力、想象能力、表達能力和評價能力等。《英語課程標準》也對學生的寫作提出了一定的要求，然而從近幾年的考試情況來看，學生書面表達錯誤較多，與《英語課程標準》前言中“發展學生綜合語言運用能力”的要求還有一定的差距。具體說來，學生書面表達中主要存在以下錯誤：
1．時態誤用
主要表現在兩方面：1）學生寫作之前沒有判斷整篇文章主要用哪種時態，常出現該用一般現在時的句子，用了一般過去時；而該用將來時的句子，用了完成時。2）時態構成表達錯誤。由于學生對各種時態掌握不好，常常將所學的各種時態混淆，以致出現如下的錯誤如，I?m go to school by bike.He told some children that there are some places of interest in Beijing.2.漢語式英語
由于受漢語的影響，再加上對英語句子結構掌握不好，導致學常常按漢語的詞序來翻譯句子，在學生的作文中常常見到這樣的句子： You can be bus.In china have different places of interest.In autumn is best season for traveling.3.邏輯錯誤
在做書面表達的過程中，有的學生一拿到考題慌慌張張開始寫，在寫作之前沒有構思好先寫什么后寫什么，哪些內容應該詳寫，哪些內容應該略寫，而是一邊寫一邊構思，從而導致整個文章邏輯不清，層次感不強，整篇文章不知所云。
4．單詞拼寫錯誤
由于部分學生平時不注意記憶單詞，基礎知識掌握不牢固，所以在文章中常出現單詞拼寫錯誤如，September 寫為 septber because 寫為 beacause
5.缺少銜接
有些學生雖然在詞匯運用書面表達方面能夠達到基本要求，但由于句子之間沒有添加適當的銜接成分，使句子之間和文段之間缺乏必要的過渡和連貫，影響了信息的傳遞和表達效果。
6．文體不對
中學階段要求學生掌握的文體主要有說明文、記敘文、議論文和應用文，其中應用文又包括通知、請假條、書信和電子郵件等，由于一些學忽視了各種體裁的寫作特點，從而導致文章體裁格式不正確如：將寫信的日期寫在信末；寫請假條不寫署名等。
英語書面表達十大常見錯誤解析
俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從平時的課堂學習一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇優秀的英語作文在內容和語言兩方面應是一個統一體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經常出現名詞不變復數、第三人稱單數不加s，前后不一致，以及時態語態、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。
1.審題不清
如2004年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。
2.拼寫錯誤
拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。
3.名詞單復數問題
誤 my father and my mother is all teacher.正 my father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少動詞
在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有
動詞來構成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired.誤 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.誤 the apples cheap.i'll take some.正 the apples are cheap.i'll take some.5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。
誤 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代詞的誤用
英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。
誤 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整
有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。
誤 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example, my friend in high school.(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等.例1.when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has;同理，want應改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致.改為 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤
漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。例：
誤 when i get to the station the train leave.正 when i got to the station the train had left.10.綜合性錯誤
綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養。
第五篇：中考英語十大常見作文話題
中考英語十大常見作文話題---按要點分類
一、難忘的事（1）別人幫助我 We became friends by accident.One day Jack was playing basketball on the playground.Amazed at how skillful he was, I made up my mind to play as well as him.I was grateful when he agreed to teach me.Every time when I wanted to give up halfway, it was Jack who encouraged me.Gradually, I mastered the skills and became confident enough to challenge the best players in our school.（2）我幫助別人 It happened on a Friday when I was seated in a crowded bus, heading for my school.It was just at that moment that an elderly lady with her little grandson stepped onto the bus.Immediately, I offered my seat to them without hesitation.The elderly lady expressed her great appreciation to me and we enjoyed a pleasant short trip together.（3）做家務表示對父母的感恩 Being a 15-year-old middle school student and feeling my parents have done so much to me, I have been considering what I can do for them to show my gratitude.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I decided to take this opportunity to do something helpful for our family.Not only did I clean the bowls and cookers, but I put all the messy things away.Tired and sweaty, I was about to open the door to throw rubbish when my parents showed up at the door.They were amazed to see what I had done and praised me.From then on, I determined to work harder to do more for my family.二、寫人（1）外貌 My favorite teacher is Mr.Wang who is handsome and of medium build.My best friend is Linda who is a beautiful girl with long black hair and beautiful bright eyes.（2）性格
Mary is always wearing a sweet smile and willing to help others.Mr.Lee is our favorite teacher who has great sense of humor and always makes his class lively and interesting.（3）愛好 He is not only good at playing basketball but also does well in playing chess.Swimming is his favorite thing to do in his free time and he also shows great interest in playing soccer.（4）學習成績 She is very good at lessons especially English, so she is one of the top students in our class.（5）難忘的一件事（見話題一）（6）感想（體會）I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream.That’s his best quality I should learn from him.Maybe that’s only a small thing and it’s not worth being mentioned.But I always believe a small act of kindness will make a big difference, so I make up my mind to learn from him to be the person who offers timely help to those in need.（7）祝福（祝愿）I sincerely hope Li Lei will make greater progress in a new high school.And I also wish he will have a bright future.三、與人相處，友情
（How to get on well with others）建議式
In our daily life, it is of great importance to know how to get along well with other people.First, sharing common hobbies or happiness with others may be of great help for you to make new friends.Then, being a friendly person, you’d better learn to smile to others often.Because smile passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Last but not least, when facing problems, always remember to communicate with each other patiently, try to overcome the difficulties together, which will also deepen your friendship.四、與父母溝通
例題：如何與父母建立良好關系（1）父母與子女關系良好的重要性
An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth.（2）這種良好關系應該是怎樣的
Parents always show love and concern for us.They are our good listeners, advisers and supporters.With their help, we can over many difficulties in our life.（2）如何建立良好關系
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children show respect each other and exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind, parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.五、課余生活，興趣愛好（1）集郵版 I’ve always been fond of collecting stamps since I was a little child.As far as I’m concerned, collecting stamps is a meaningful hobby, making my spare time interesting and exciting.Besides, when reviewing my collection of valuable stamps, my heart if filled with great sense of satisfaction and I can relax myself and keep away from the great pressure of school study life.Although my parents are strongly against my hobby for they consider it as a waste of money and they also think that searching for stamps may take up much of my time, which should be spent on my studies, I will try my best to communicate with them patiently and I believe they will understand and support me eventually.（2）運動版 戶外運動---（健康話題）If the weather is fine, I will always spend my weekends jogging in a park to breathe fresh air which can refresh my mind and make energetic enough to concentrate better on my study.團隊運動---（與人相處話題）Playing basketball / volleyball / football with your classmates after school will be a good idea, which will be of great help to not only keep you physically strong but build up team work spirit and deepen the friendship between you and your friends.六、環保
（1）環保的重要性 It is of extreme importance to protect the environment by leading a low-carbon life style which is environmentally friendly.（2）具體做法
種樹---
Firstly, planting trees in a park on weekends with your friends will be a good choice.Because by doing so, the air will be refreshed and the environment where we live will be beautified.走路/騎車上學---
Besides, if I were you, I would walk to school instead of driving so that the gas that does to our health will be reduced effectively.隨手關水龍頭---Last but not least, It is necessary to save water by turning off the tap after washing hands.Or we’ll run out of fresh water very soon.（3）結尾，呼吁大家一起來保護環境 The environmental protection is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us.Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take actions from now on to protect our environment.七、學習方法（1）學習英語---聽 It is of great help for you to listen to English songs and radio in order to improve your English pronunciation every morning on your way to school.（2）學習英語---說 It is strongly suggested to make friends with native English speakers so that you will know the culture of English speaking countries better and speak the language fluently.（3）學習英語---讀 Reading some English newspapers and books will be a good idea, this way your English vocabulary will be enlarged effectively.（4）學習英語---寫 If I were you, I would write to my pen pal who lives in America because by doing so, my writing skills will be improved.（5）老師指導 Having an English teacher is of great importance.Because you can hardly learn English well without instruction.（6）有信心 If you believe in yourself, you will be strong enough to overcome any difficulty that you face in studying English.（7）團隊合作式學習 Study with a group by discussing problems that you can solve and learn from the practical study methods shared selflessly by others.八、假期計劃（1）志愿者
做法---Our school is home to many special young people who all volunteer their free time to help others.I have been always dreaming of becoming a professional singer.So in the coming vacation, I volunteer to sing for groups of the elderly people at the old people’s home to cheer them up.What’s more, I love reading, and I put this love to good use by being a volunteer and working in the after-school care center at her local elementary school.Here, I help young children to read.感想---Volunteering is great!Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.”（2）旅行放松（減壓話題）After a tiring and stressful school term, the summer vacation which I have been longing for is around the corner.回老家度假---I will go to visit my grandparents and spend my summer vacation there because beautiful natural views of that small country always flash in my mind during the busy school days.I was brought up by them and I always take the place as my second hometown.國內外旅行---Traveling around China or abroad will be my first choice to spend the summer vacation.It can enrich my knowledge that can’t be gained from school books and broad my horizons.What’s more, I will be completely relaxed and free from the stress and tiredness of busy school study life.九、健康話題
（1）以H1N1為例，說明健康的重要性 Presently, the disease HINI is flooding every corner of the world which seriously threatens people’s health.Therefore, it is a hot topic among people to keep healthy.（2）具體做法
吃---To start with, it’s very essential for us to for good habits of eating and drinking.Eating more fruits and vegetables serves our benefit.Meanwhile, keeping balanced diet is equally important to our health.運動---What’s more, we’d best take part in the proper sport activities such as playing basketball or running.It is said that no health without sports because sports can keep us refreshed and improve our immunity system.作息習慣（充足睡眠）---Additionally, a good lifestyle matters a lot.Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.樂觀的生活態度---Last but not the least, an active attitude keeps the doctor away.We are supposed to get along well with our friends and keep happy all the time.（3）總結 To conclude, if we hope to lead a healthy life and be strong, we must bear in mind these words: healthy diet, proper sports, good lifestyle and active attitude.十、周圍環境（1）交通安全（紅燈）It’s very important for students to know about the traffic rules.When the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking.Even though you have something urgent to do or maybe you think the drivers dare not run over you.But do you know that rushing is at the cost of your life? So it’s not worth taking the risk.（綠燈）It’s safe to cross the road when the light is green.（黃燈）When the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, because the red light will be on very soon.Here are some suggestions to protect ourselves.First, we should follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules.Second, we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before stepping forward to cross the street.Last but not least, don’t forget that it’s very dangerous to play on the street.From now on not only I myself will strictly obey the traffic rules but I’ll also call on my classmates and my family to do so.（2）網絡安全
利---The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.We can not only read news from home and abroad, but also get information, send emails, make phone calls, attend on-line schools, read various books and study English by ourselves.What’s more, people can enjoy music, watch sports matches, play all kinds of games and go shopping on-line.弊---However, every coin has two sides.It’s risky to make friends and shop on-line.What’s worse, some students who are addicted to the Internet don’t study hard or even quit school.個人觀點---For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that the Internet has more disadvantages than advantages.It results in various computer crimes.What is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young.Something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.
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