第一篇:英語作文十句法
英語作文在高考里占了25分,差不多和數學里的兩個大題相當。
但是相較之下,你只需要付出很低的成本就能把這塊分數拿下,實在是太賺了,太賺了。通常,我們把這叫送分題。不過顯然,好多同學沒法拿到作文的高分。這大多是因為沒掌握高考英語作文的規律和技巧——也挺少有老師教這個的。吶,現在我們可以開始了。
(二)十句作文法
十句作文法,意思是寫英語作文,十句話就夠了。十句話就能拿二十多分,實在是太賺了,太賺了……
這十句,自有其排布的規律。本篇主講議論文,別的文體有機會我們再聊。真正的英語高分選手,是能把英語議論文作文答成填空題的,怎么說呢? 文分三段。
第一段記敘,寫對題目中對你要求的東西,寫背景,寫事件。需要2句話。第二段議論,是一句總起句,加三句論點,每一句論點后面加一句論據。第三段升華,大約是1-2句的篇幅。把文章提升至世界/社會/國家,或者個人成長的層面。如此,共十句。
閱卷老師閱卷時會看哪些東西呢?他們會看:你文章的開頭與結尾,然后是第二段的第一句話,你文章中用到的一些邏輯連接詞。最后大略地看看字數、拼寫、語法等細節,打分。
你按照那樣三段的格式寫,對閱卷老師也是一種友好,他覺得你懂行,這樣一個基礎分就有了。
當你有了這么一個詳細大綱,就可以繼續往下寫。怎么寫?
答,套用萬能句式+套用邏輯詞+填空。我們舉個例子……(2016天津)假設你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學生開展了為期兩周的交流活動?,F在,他們即將回國,你將在歡送會上致辭。請根據以下提示寫一篇發言稿。
(1)回顧雙方的交流活動(如學習、生活、體育、文藝等方面);(2)談談收獲或感情;(3)表達祝愿語期望。
這就是篇典型的記敘+議論+升華地文章,題目里都點明白了,甚至不需要我們自己思考每段要寫什么。下一步,套萬能句:
During the past two weeks, we had an unforgettable communication with friends from England, which would last long in our mind.…… 第一段記敘概括事件。這個句子,就非常地通用。但凡是回憶性文章,幾乎都可以這么寫。During the past ……, we had an unforgettable communication with ……, which would last long in our mind.…… 句式高端而優雅,屬于能鎮場子得分的那種。
This activity plays an important educational role in our daily life.For one thing…For another… Furthermore… In short, we have broadened our horizon and known more about the culture of different area.第二段,寫議論。和上面一樣,又是一些能通用的句子。而用到的“for another…furthermore…in short”也是你可以拿去用的東西。
除此,還可以用“besides”,”and also”也都很不錯。比我們常見到的at first, then , finally之類要來得好。
It is universally acknowledged that… I wish…
第三段,升華。又是一個萬能句。眾所周知如何如何,我希望如何如何。至此,文章的框架就已經出來了。只剩下我們先前說的“填空”。把題目里要求的東西塞進去,這文章就成了。
篇幅有,邏輯有,語法有,升華有。這文章不拿20+,什么文章拿20+
(三)一個完整的應用示例
我們寫篇關于電視機的稿子吧,議論下這個東西的好壞。怎么寫呢?
第一段寫記敘,寫本文的背景。用兩句話。
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.(1)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.(2)
第二段,寫議論。一句總起句,加五個短句,一個總結句。注意其中的邏輯詞。Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.(3)For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities.(4)For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World”, and “The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald”.(5)Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.(6)Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication.(7)And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.(8)In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious.(9)第三段,寫升華。用一句話搞定。
Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program being produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant.(10)啊,又一個萬能句式。
(四)你該努力做的正確方向 主要有三個。
第一,背單詞積累詞匯量。有用嗎?有啊,比如那些邏輯詞,不就是詞匯量的一種體現嗎。
第二,不要背作文了,沒意義的,去背句子。找那種可以通用的句子背。比方說:
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not…… Some are for the idea……However, others don’t hold the same view…… In my perspective …… I will never forget one thing which happened on me when I was…… It is universally acknowledged that/I believe… If everyone of us can…, the society will become… 哪里找這種句子呢?
其實最好的是課本……你可以去試試。比如我現在都記得中學課本里的一句:
The country, covered with cherry tree flowers, looks as though it is covered with pink snow.真好看。
還有,可以去這里:高考英語作文中可以用哪些特別地道的句子句式或單詞而得到格外加分?知乎 抄下來。
第三,注意字體,注意語法,注意時態,注意標點,注意所有可能會影響你得分的東西。以及,更多地嘗試復雜句。
第二篇:中考英語三段式作文法
中考英語三段式作文法
重點詮釋 :
所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言,如何把握較大的寫作空間,三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為:
1.第一段開門見山,提出要解決的問題或觀點,或者把時間,地點,人物和主要事件及時點出。
2.第二段要擺出事實或提出論據,或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。
3.最后一段,得出結論或理由。
注意:要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散,層次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章條理清楚,文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有:
遞進型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only?but also等;
解釋型:that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;
轉折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等;
列舉型:firstly?secondly?finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 舉例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take? for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so? that, so that等;
讓步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
順序型:first?next?and then?finally, first?then?after that?finally 等;
并列型:and, both?and, or, either?or, as well as, 等
時間型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly?when, no sooner?than 等
總結型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
見解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等
條件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等
寫作典例 :
假設你是李越,你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學正在學中文,請你推薦兩本學中文的詞典。根據下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信。
英漢詞典 新華字典
收詞
(字)18000(英語)
20000(漢語)10000
價格 52元 11元
特點 大量例子,用法說明,適合初學者 中國最常用的漢語字典
注意:
1.詞數:80左右;
2.參考詞匯:推薦recommend;英漢詞典The English-Chinese Dictionary(ECE);
新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)
Dear Steve,_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
Yours
Li Yue
分析:此篇書面表達屬于實物說明文,其篇章結構可按三段式進行寫作。本文的第一段,可用直接的敘述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作為第二段,其主要內容是對兩本詞典的一些介紹。結束語即可作為第三段。應將兩本詞典的特點表達準確,以便加拿大筆友 Steve作出合理選擇。表達時,文章的基本時態可考慮用一般現在時。
范文:
Dear Steve,I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECD is more expensive.It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours,Li Yue
第三篇:大學英語寫作十二句作文法
十二句作文法
大學英語四、六級考試寫作的評分依據是:文章切題、條理清楚、語言準確和字數符合要求。所謂切題就是看你寫的作文跑不跑題。所謂條理是指每一段的議論的正反清楚,說明的幾個方面清楚,描述的時間正確。語言準確要求作文的語法詞匯使用正確,符合英語表達習慣。
四、六級的作文的字數要求是四級不少于100字,六級不少于120字。針對四、六級考試的作文要求我們提出了十二句作文法,這里所說的十二句作文法不僅包括一般英文寫作的方法而且包括我們在多年考試輔導和閱卷中所總結出來的一套行之有效的寫作方法。它的具體內容有以下幾點。
一、審題
我們拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是審題。審題的作用在于使你的寫作不跑題(如果跑題,條理和語言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分)那么審題要審什么呢?
1.體裁(議論文、說明文、描述文)
審題就是要審作文的體裁和題材。因為什么樣的體裁就會用什么樣的題材去寫。那么體裁包括哪些呢?就四、六級考試而言,它包括議論文、說明文和描述文。從近些年來看,四、六級作文不是單一的體裁,而是幾種體裁的雜合體。例如有一次四級作文題是這樣出的:
Directions:
For this you’re your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at 1east 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
(1)做合格大學生的必要性
(2)做合格大學生的必備條件(可從德、智、體等方面談)
(3)我打算這樣做
很多人說這種類型的作文是議論文。我們認為說:它是議論文是片面的。因為,第一段要求寫“……必要性”,這說明本段體裁是議論文;第二段要求寫“……必備條件”,這說明本段要求寫說明文;而第三段要求寫“……這樣做”,說明本段要求寫的是描述文。所以我們說在大多數情況下,四、六級作文是三種體裁的雜
合體。
2.根據不同體裁確定寫作方法
我們審題的目的就在于根據不同的體裁來確定不同的寫作方法。通過審題,我們可以看出四、六級作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段為議論文、第二段為說明文、第三段為描述文。議論文有議論文的寫作方式、說明文有說明文的寫作方式、描述文也有它自身的寫作特點。
第一段為議論文:它的寫作特點是要有論點和論據,而且往往從正反兩面來論述。例如上面題目的第一段的寫作思路是:做合格大學生,會怎么樣(這是從正面論述);不能做到合格大學生,會怎么樣(從反面論述);所以我們要做合格的大學生(結論)。
第二段為說明文:它的寫作特點是從幾方面或幾條來說明一個問題,就跟機器的說明書一樣,通過1、2、3說明它的用途。就上面的作文而言,我們可從三個方面(德、智、體)來說明做合格大學生的必備條件。
第三段為描述文:以“人”為中心描述一個“做”的過程。跟上兩段相比,本段的主語多為人稱代詞。該段的描述要與第二段相呼應。
二、確定主題句
通過審題,我們知道該如何確定寫作的思路。下邊我們就談怎么樣寫。第一步就是要寫主題句。主題句是確保不跑題的前提,只有不跑題才有可能得及格分。寫主題句最保險的方法就是把中文提綱的各句譯成英語。例如上述作文的三段主題句分別為:
1.It is very necessary to be a good university student.(議論文主題句)
2.There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.(說明文的主題句)
3.What I will do in the future is the following.(描述文的主題句)
如果要求句是英語就可以把它擴充成主題句,例如這樣的一篇作文:Good Health
1.Importance of good health
2.Ways to keep fit
3.My own practice
這樣的作文的要求句就可以擴展成主題句。擴展后三段的主題句分別為:
1.It is very important to have good health.(將名詞importance變成形容詞important)
2.There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)
3.My own practices are the following.(采用原詞)
三、確保文章條理清楚
保證不跑題是寫作當中第一重要任務,第二個重要任務就是要做到條理清楚。對于議論文來說,正反面要清楚。對于說明文來說,1、2、3條要清楚,對于描述文來說,誰干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health來說,第一段保證正反面要清楚就應這樣寫:主題句(It is very important to have good health.)正面句(With good health,we can...),反面句(Without good health
we can do nothing.We can’t do...).第二段應當這樣寫:主題句(There are four ways to keep fit.),從幾方面說明:First,we should have our break fast in the morning.
Second, we should have a nap at noon.
Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon.
And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listeningto the music...)
為了使文章更具條理性,我們可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副詞,他們可以使文章的條理性十分突出。作文是主觀性題,要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進去。評卷老師的時間很短(每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完),所以我們在列條條時最好不用:
To begin with,……After that,……And then,……The next,……The following……At last……。因為用這樣的詞語不利于閱卷老師看出你作文的條理性。
第三段應當這樣寫:主題句(My own practices are the following.)具體情況(主語為第一人稱代詞I,與第二段呼應)
In the morning,I have my breakfast.
At noon,I have a nap.
And in the afternoon,I always play football.
In the evening,I usually listen to the classic music.
四、保證作文符合字數要求的十二句作文法
在四、六級考試中考生一定希望既讓作文達到字數要求又不至于寫得太多,因為寫得太多,一方面會更多地暴露自己的語言上的弱點,另一方面又會占用過多的寶貴時間。寫得太多還容易使寫作跑題。解決這些問題的一個有效的辦法就是采用十二句作文法。
我們知道,四、六級作文大都是三段式。我們算一下,如果我們在每一段中寫上四句話,即主題句加兩, 三句擴展句和一個結論句就可以了。這樣全篇在十二句左右。每一句十多個字,這樣就是120-150宇。同時,我們也提醒大家,不能寫得太多,寫得多容易跑題。在寫作時,我們要橫向寫作,即寫某一問題的橫段面。例如,上面講到健康的重要性時,我們只寫四句就可以了。第一句主題句,第二句從正面論述,第三句從反面論述,第四句為結論句。但有的同學在寫的時候說“健康非常重要,”然后就寫“吃波菜非常重要”,因為菠菜含有豐富的鐵,鐵對人是非常重要的,因為……。這樣的作文的基本模式是A-BB-CC-DD-正以此類推。這就叫流水賬,沒有中心。我們寫作時要根據橫段面去寫,而不要寫成流水賬。避免寫成流水賬的方法是不要就前一句中的一個非重點詞再進行描述。而要對主題句從橫段面去寫,寫完一個橫段面就不要再對這一橫段面進行闡述了,應當去寫另一個橫段面。
如果我們感覺字數不夠,就在每一句或某些句子上添加些詞語就行了。例如我們感覺上邊第二段不夠長,就可以這樣來加詞:
主題
句 There are four ways to keep fit.There are four or more ways to keep fit for everyone of us.從幾方面說明:
First,we should have our breakfast in the morning.
Firstly,we should have our breakfast,such as milk,eggs,bread and so on,in the morning.
Second,we should have a nap at noon.
Second,we should have a short nap,even 30 minutes,at noon.Thirdly,sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon.
Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can
do some sports exercises in the afternoon.
And fourth,we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening tomusic.
And fourthly,we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popularand classic music.
這樣一來,我們只要保持本句的主題不變,添加一些次要詞就能達到字數的規定標準。綜上所述,如果我們按以上幾個步驟和方法去寫作文,就可以保證及格以上的分數。
第四篇:三段式作文法
備考2010寫作專題1 三段式作文法
重點詮釋:
所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言,如何把握較大的寫作空間,三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為:
1. 第一段開門見山,提出要解決的問題或觀點,或者把時間,地點,人物和主要事件及時點出。
2. 第二段要擺出事實或提出論據,或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。3. 最后一段,得出結論或理由。
注意:要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散,層次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章條理清楚,文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有:
遞進型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only …but also等;
解釋型:that is(to say), in other words, or,namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等; 轉折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等; 列舉型:firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等
舉例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so… that, so that等;
讓步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
順序型:first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等; 并列型:and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等
時間型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等
總結型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
見解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等 條件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等 對比觀點題型
(1)
要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。1.
有一些人認為。。2.
另一些人認為。。3.
我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)
給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點(收集整理:
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think ②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法). 信件開頭常用語:
? You letter came to me this morning.? I have received your letter of July the 20th.? I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.? I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.? How time flies!It’s three months since I saw you last.? Thank you for your letter.? In reply to your letter about(the exhibition this year)…;? Let me tell you that… 信件結尾常用語:
? Please remember me to your whole family.? Give my best regards(wishes)to your mother.? Best wishes.? With love.? Wish you a pleasant journey.? Wish you success.Wish you the best of health.(luck)? Looking forward to your next visit to China.? Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.? Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.閱路和應答: ? Go down this street
? Turn night/left at the first crossing ? It’s about…metres from here
? You can’t miss it
? In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)? Pass two blocks ? wish you good luck!英語作文萬能模版 模塊(1)
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.模塊(2)
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television 模塊(3)
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that().If you(), as a result ,your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that().You donn’t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon().With reference to my standpoint ,I think().模塊(4)
For most of us today ,().From above ,we can find that the reasons why()are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is().Second,().The third reason, actually ,is().The significance for()。Therefore ,().模塊(5)
These days we often hear that().It is common that().Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social? For one thing ,().For another,().What is more, since(),it is natural that().To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as()to improve he present situation ,and I do believe everything will
be better in the future.
第五篇:故事作文法
作文教學法
主要以文學故事和討論為主的教學內涵分為三個階段:
第一階段以發展想象力、解放書寫能力為主軸,對象是7~9歲的學生,主題以奇幻故事為主,以生活小故事為輔,兩者可互相交融,發展孩子的文學書寫能力。
第二階段則以9歲以上的學生,乃至成人的年紀,教師在故事中,有意識加入文學性詞匯,并將口述故事文學化,發展書寫者描述內在世界、外在經驗世界的語言。在這個階段,可視年齡縮減奇幻內容,尤其是童話式的主題不宜大量在10歲以上的學生眼前出現,以免學生覺得幼稚,參與度降低。
第三階段是10歲以上,步入青少年乃至成年人的年齡層,將主題的多元討論擴大化,允許他們從不同觀點書寫文章,不致局限書寫思維。并大量以經典文學為主軸,讓學生親近文學,比如以蘇童、莫言、李銳、余華、黃春明、林海音、瓦歷斯、汪曾祺、魯迅、馬爾克斯、??思{、琦君、莫泊桑、契訶夫、甘耀明、徐國能、川端康成、芥川龍之介、王安憶、鐵凝的文本為主題,發展文學化的口語表達,也以故事協會推展的“故事海報法”為討論方法,每隔帶領孩子閱讀理解難度大的文章。
小學階段的兒童作文,大致依照上述的三個階段發展。初中以上的學生,發展第二階段與第三階段的策略,但會融入貼近學生文化的“次文化”,比如電玩、流行音樂、漫畫、輕小說的元素,提煉有意義的觀點,或將之與經典文學融合,深化學習者的寫作能力。