第一篇：三段式作文法123

三段式作文法 重點詮釋：

所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言，如何把握較大的寫作空間，三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為：

1．第一段開門見山，提出要解決的問題或觀點，或者把時間，地點，人物和主要事件及時點出。

2．第二段要擺出事實或提出論據，或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。3．最后一段，得出結論或理由。

注意：要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有： 遞進型： also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only…but also等；

解釋型：that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等；

轉折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等；

列舉型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等

舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等； 因果型：because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so… that, so that等； 讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等； 順序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等； 并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等

時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等

總結型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等

見解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等 條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等

第二篇：三段式作文法

2015高考英語作文指導：三段式作文法

所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言，如何把握較大的寫作空間，三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為：

1.第一段開門見山，提出要解決的問題或觀點，或者把時間，地點，人物和主要事件及時點出。

2.第二段要擺出事實或提出論據，或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。

3.最后一段，得出結論或理由。

注意：要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有：

遞進型： also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, to make matters worse, not only ?but also等;

例：You should go to see her, because she misses you, and what’s more, she needs your help.你應該去看她，因為她很想念你，更重要的是，她需要你的幫助。

You can’t play computer games too much, because it will do harm to your health.What’s worse, it will waste your time.你不能過分玩電腦游戲，因為它會損害你的身體。更糟糕的是，它會浪費你的時間。解釋型：that is(to say), in other words, or，namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;例： He will come on National Day, that is（to say）, October 1st.他國慶節，即十月一日來。

轉折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等;例：Mr.Crook didn’t come back at the usual time.instead , he met some friends and stayed out until midnight 列舉型：firstly?secondly?finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等

On the one hand, a lot of people going to the US, but on the other hand, a lot of people coming back from there.一方面，許多人前往美國；另一方面，很多人又從那回來。

I can't stay here for long.For one thing, I've no time.For another, I've no money.我不能在此逗留太久。首先,我沒時間,其次,我沒有錢。

舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take? for example等;

因果型：because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so? that, so that等;

讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等;

順序型：first?next?and then?finally, first?then?after that?finally 等;

并列型：and, both?and, or, either?or, as well as, 等 時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly?when, no sooner?than 等

例：I had no sooner reached home than it began to rain.我一到家天就下起雨來（主句用過去完成時,“than”后面的從句用一般過去時）

No sooner...than...常放在句首,表示強調.這時主句要倒裝.No sooner had I reached home than it began to rain.hardly...when 意思為:“還沒...就...”

We had hardly gotten there when it began to rain.我們還沒到那兒,天就下起雨了.(主句用過去完成時,從句用一般過去時)總結型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等 見解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure 等

條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等.例：You may take this book away so long as you return it on time.

第三篇：三段式作文法

備考2010寫作專題1 三段式作文法

重點詮釋：

所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言，如何把握較大的寫作空間，三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為：

1． 第一段開門見山，提出要解決的問題或觀點，或者把時間，地點，人物和主要事件及時點出。

2． 第二段要擺出事實或提出論據，或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。3． 最后一段，得出結論或理由。

注意：要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有：

遞進型： also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only …but also等；

解釋型：that is(to say), in other words, or，namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等； 轉折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等； 列舉型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等

舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等；

因果型：because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so… that, so that等；

讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等；

順序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等； 并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等

時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等

總結型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等

見解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure 等 條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等 對比觀點題型

（1）

要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。1．

有一些人認為。。2．

另一些人認為。。3．

我的看法。。

The topic of ①-----------------（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的觀點）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）

給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點(收集整理:

Some people believe that ①----------------（觀點一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（舉例說明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法)． 信件開頭常用語：

? You letter came to me this morning.? I have received your letter of July the 20th.? I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.? I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.? How time flies!It’s three months since I saw you last.? Thank you for your letter.? In reply to your letter about(the exhibition this year)…;? Let me tell you that… 信件結尾常用語：

? Please remember me to your whole family.? Give my best regards(wishes)to your mother.? Best wishes.? With love.? Wish you a pleasant journey.? Wish you success.Wish you the best of health.(luck)? Looking forward to your next visit to China.? Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.? Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.閱路和應答： ? Go down this street

? Turn night/left at the first crossing ? It’s about…metres from here

? You can’t miss it

? In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)? Pass two blocks ? wish you good luck!英語作文萬能模版 模塊（1）

Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX.模塊（2）

In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television 模塊（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that（）.If you（）, as a result ,your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that（）.You donn’t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon（）.With reference to my standpoint ,I think（）.模塊（4）

For most of us today ,（）.From above ,we can find that the reasons why（）are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is（）.Second,（）.The third reason, actually ,is（）.The significance for（）。Therefore ,（）.模塊（5）

These days we often hear that（）.It is common that（）.Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social? For one thing ,（）.For another,（）.What is more, since（）,it is natural that（）.To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as（）to improve he present situation ,and I do believe everything will

be better in the future.

第四篇：中考英語三段式作文法

中考英語三段式作文法

重點詮釋 ：

所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言，如何把握較大的寫作空間，三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為：

1.第一段開門見山，提出要解決的問題或觀點，或者把時間，地點，人物和主要事件及時點出。

2.第二段要擺出事實或提出論據，或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。

3.最后一段，得出結論或理由。

注意：要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有：

遞進型： also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only?but also等;

解釋型：that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;

轉折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等;

列舉型：firstly?secondly?finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take? for example等;

因果型：because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so? that, so that等;

讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等;

順序型：first?next?and then?finally, first?then?after that?finally 等;

并列型：and, both?and, or, either?or, as well as, 等

時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly?when, no sooner?than 等

總結型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等

見解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等

條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等

寫作典例 ：

假設你是李越，你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說，他和他的一些同學正在學中文，請你推薦兩本學中文的詞典。根據下表提供的信息，請你給他寫一封回信。

英漢詞典 新華字典

收詞

(字)18000(英語)

20000(漢語)10000

價格 52元 11元

特點 大量例子，用法說明，適合初學者 中國最常用的漢語字典

注意：

1.詞數：80左右;

2.參考詞匯：推薦recommend;英漢詞典The English-Chinese Dictionary(ECE);

新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)

Dear Steve，_________________________________________________

_________________________________________________

Yours

Li Yue

分析：此篇書面表達屬于實物說明文，其篇章結構可按三段式進行寫作。本文的第一段，可用直接的敘述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作為第二段，其主要內容是對兩本詞典的一些介紹。結束語即可作為第三段。應將兩本詞典的特點表達準確，以便加拿大筆友 Steve作出合理選擇。表達時，文章的基本時態可考慮用一般現在時。

范文：

Dear Steve，I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECD is more expensive.It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours，Li Yue

第五篇：file備考2010寫作專題 三段式作文法

備考2010寫作專題 三段式作文法 重點詮釋：

所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結構而言，如何把握較大的寫作空間，三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為：

1． 第一段開門見山，提出要解決的問題或觀點，或者把時間，地點，人物和主要事件及時點出。

2． 第二段要擺出事實或提出論據，或者把事情發展的經過詳細寫出來。3． 最后一段，得出結論或理由。

注意：要學會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當地使用過渡詞可避免結構松散，層次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有： 遞進型： also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only ?but also等；

解釋型：that is(to say), in other words, or，namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等； 轉折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等；

列舉型：firstly?secondly?finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等

舉例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take? for example等；

因果型：because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so? that, so that等；

讓步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等；

順序型：first?next?and then?finally, first?then?after that?finally 等； 并列型：and, both?and, or, either?or, as well as, 等

時間型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly?when, no sooner?than 等

總結型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等

見解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，I’m sure 等 條件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等 寫作典例：

假設你是李越，你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說，他和他的一些同學正在學中文，請你推薦兩本學中文的詞典。根據下表提供的信息，請你給他寫一封回信。

英漢詞典 新華字典 收詞

（字）18000（英語）20000（漢語）10000

價格

52元 11元

特點 大量例子，用法說明，適合初學者 中國最常用的漢語字典 注意：1。詞數：100左右；

2．參考詞匯：推薦recommend;英漢詞典The English-Chinese Dictionary(ECE);新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)Dear Steve，------------------------

Yours

Li Yue

分析：此篇書面表達屬于實物說明文，其篇章結構可按三段式進行寫作。本文的第一段，可用直接的敘述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作為第二段，其主要內容是對兩本詞典的一些介紹。結束語即可作為第三段。應將兩本詞典的特點表達準確，以便加拿大筆友Steve作出合理選擇。表達時，文章的基本時態可考慮用一般現在時。范文： Dear Steve，I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECD is more expensive.It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours，Li Yue 針對練習：（用三段式表達，注意用過渡詞）

1．目前，地球面臨水資源危機，請根據一下提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1）人們以為淡水是取之不盡的 2）實際上淡水是非常緊張的 3）人類應該怎樣辦

Global Shortage of Fresh Water

Many people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore, with the rapid growth of the world population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing the ganger of running out of fresh water.Actually, in some big cities, fresh water can not meet the daily needs.Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water, and try to find substitute to reduce the use of fresh water.2．這幾年，“考生該不該復讀”這個話題一直為社會各界所關注。下表是你班同學討論的結果，請你給英文報社寫一封信，客觀介紹講座情況，并簡要闡述自己的觀點。

要求：

1.信的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

2.詞數： 120左右.Dear Editor:

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students retake classes after failing the college entrance examination.Yours truly，Li Hua

Dear Editor，I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students retake classes after failing the college entrance examination.Opinions are various on the question.Many students are against the idea of retaking classes.They think it unfair for the students who take the exam for the first time.Besides, it also adds the family burden.So many of them suffer mental pressure as well as economic problems.Others think that it can be done because through one more year of hard study, they can make better preparations and may get a chance to enter their ideal universities.After all, the kind of university they enter, an important turning point in life, will directly affect their future employment.However, I think, this depends on different situations.If one student has no chance to be admitted to one university, maybe he can choose to retake classes.Yours truly，Li Hua

3．最近幾年越來越多的大學生加入打工的隊伍，請你結合下表，就這一現象寫一篇短文。

現象 1．根據最近調查，約25％的大學生打零工 2．在暑假，這一數字將增至72％

3．大學生常做的零活有：家教、服務員、售貨員等

原因 4．想賺錢支付一部分日益增長的學費 5．想經濟上獨立，買一些自己想買的東西 意義

(內容由考生自己擬定)6．

7． 8．

注意： 1．詞數：120左右。文章的開頭已為你寫好。

2．參考詞匯： 調查survey;家庭教師tutor;學費tuition;經濟地economically;視野outlook According to a recent survey,__________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________

According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job．During summer vacation, this figure will increase to 72 percent.College students are working as tutors, waiters or salesmen.Why do they want part-time jobs？First，they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition.Second, they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want.Third，In my opinion, by doing part-time jobs, college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook.What’s more, part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world.So it’s of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs.4．最近，網上展開一場關于“教科書是否要循環使用”的辯論。假如你是Li Hua，請你向報社寫信談談你自己的一些想法。要點如下：

（1.）據說我國的教科書壽命一般是半年，而美國則是五年。這說明浪費嚴重；（2.）我國有兩億兩千萬學生，每年要用三十億本教科書，這就需要消耗一千一百萬棵樹木。如果將教科書的壽命在延長一年的話，那么將節省好多樹木；

（3.）許多貧困家庭的學生買不起教科書，如果將不用的教科書贈給他們豈不是更好？（4.）你的看法（至少兩點）。要求：（1）.語句通順，結構合理；

（2）.開頭和結尾已給出，不記入總詞數（字數：150左右）（3）.參考詞匯：lifespan 壽命 Dear Editor, Recently there has been an argument about the reuse of textbooks on the internet.___________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours truly, Li Hua

One possible version: Dear Editor, Recently there has been an argument about the reuse of textbooks on the internet.I am writing to talk about it.As we all know, the average lifespan of a copy of a textbook is only half a year in our country while in America it is five years or so, which shows we waste too much.There are 220 million students consuming 3 billion textbooks each year, so about 11 million trees are needed to produce

them!If the lifespan of textbooks could be extended for one more year, a large number of trees could be saved each year.In addition, many children from poor families can’t afford textbooks.Will it be good if we can afford them to reuse the books? So I suggest that all of us should encourage students to take care of their textbooks, and not only does it do good to us but also to nature.At the same time, this can also help us develop awareness of thriftiness.5．2008上海高考英語卷寫作題：

你班將組隊參加學校組織的集體舞比賽（group dancing competition）,班長希望大家積極參與。對此談談你的看法。

你的文章必須包括以下內容：

l.你是否會參加比賽；

2.你做出該決定的具體理由。Version 1: A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision.First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation.Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years.Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.Version 2: Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reasons for my decision.First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me.Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time.What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner.I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class.In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.從寫作方法來說，考生可以根據高考議論文寫作的一般思路將整個文章分為三段來寫。

第一段是引言段，引出兩點：topic和thesis。Topic就是文章的話題，在這篇文章中就是集體舞比賽這個事情。而thesis就是指全文的中心內容，在本文中就是自己是否參加比賽。注意英語寫作需要開門見山地引出主題。有些考生到全文結尾的時候才表明自己參加或不參加的態度就是不對的，必須在開頭就表明自己是否參加這個比賽，然后再論述理由。例如在例文中，A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.或者Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.都是用

來引出topic的句子。而引出thesis的句子則是While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.或者But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.第二段是論證段，也是全文的重心所在，主要是講述自己的理由，即為什么參加或者不參加這個比賽。一般來說，對于一篇120－150words的文章來說，只要寫兩個理由就夠了，每個理由之后都有一個進一步的細節闡述，這樣整體的字數就差不多達標了。例如，在論述自己參加比賽的原因時，范文中寫了兩點：1.可以放松自己；2.可以展示自己的舞蹈水平并為班級做貢獻。每個觀點又都有自己的支撐句，例如對于“放松自己”的支撐句就是用一個諺語來引出relaxation的重要性。而對于“展示自己的才華”，支撐句是自己學舞蹈學了五年以上并且舞蹈技藝很好。第一個分論點的論證方式是先提出總的觀點，再進行論證，是演繹法的推理。第二個分論點的論證方式是先有理由，再有觀點，是歸納法的推理。

最后一段是總結段，本題目在總結段的時候可以寫的稍微簡潔一點，例如以上兩篇范文，最后的結尾都很簡單，能夠總結全文的中心即可。所用的句型也可以新東方高考寫作教材上找到原形。