第一篇：六級寫作經典及點評藝術與幽默

我們或許不能像偉人那樣超凡脫俗，但可以時時借助幽默來使自己開心，使自己超脫塵世的種種煩惱。漫畫就是這樣的一種幽默形式。

Art and Humor

Millions of people struggle out of bed each morning, fumble into some

clothes, and make their way to a cup of coffee and the morning newspaper①.They need something cheerful to remind them that the rest of the day will be less difficult than getting up.This need may be the reason that many of them turn their half-opened eyes to the comics section of the newspaper as they sip their first cups of coffee of the day.Cartoons reflect the times and the troubles and worries of people.They give people an opportunity to laugh at themselves and at familiar situations.For example, a cartoon might say that the government of a country is responsible for the bad economy and also show the government leaders as a group of ridiculous people.Being able to use the leaders as scapegoats and to laugh at the leaders somehow makes people feel better about their situation.Cartoons also make people laugh at their own personal worries.Young people who are not always sure of how to act can smile at their awkwardness.Old people whose grown children pay little attention to them can chuckle at their neglect and loneliness.Students who have studied too little before an examination can laugh at their anxiety.Everyone’s problems are made

bigger–than–life in the comics.Perhaps the problems seem funny because there is humor in something that is real being made unreal.A cartoon combines art and humor.When it is skillfully done, a simple line drawing and a few words can make people laugh.Their troubles seem less important, and they enjoy life more fully.［276 words］

行文點評

這篇文章結構比較清晰。第一段提出觀點：漫畫可以令人快樂，作者用了struggle out of bed, fumble into some clothes, 形象地展示了一個大多數讀者都非常熟悉的生活場景。第二、三段從公眾和個人的角度說明，漫畫反映人們的時代和生活特點；每段的第一句話都是主題句(topic sentence)，即每一段都在第一句提出這一段的分論點，再對其加以論證。第四段總結全文，點明文章的主題。

文中排比句的運用，比如第三段中對不同類型人的笑的描述Young people … Old people … Students …，也值得讀者在寫作中借鑒。

好文妙譯

藝術與幽默

每天清晨，成千上萬的人不情愿地起床，摸索著穿上衣服，然后喝咖啡，看早報。他們需要一些令人高興的事情來提醒自己一天中剩余的時間將不會像起床那樣難受。這就是為什么他們會在喝一天中的第一杯咖啡時將惺忪的睡眼投向報紙上的連環漫畫專欄的原因。漫畫反映一個時代，也反映人們的問題和煩惱。它給了人們一個自我解嘲的機會，讓人們對他們熟悉的事情發笑。例如，某幅漫畫會把經濟不景氣歸咎于一個國家的政府，但也會把政府領導人畫成一群可笑的人。把領導人當成替罪羊來加以嘲諷，在某種程度上這會讓人們對自己的處境感覺好一點。

漫畫也使人們對個人煩惱付之一笑。年輕人不知所措時可以對困境微微一笑。被成年子女冷落的老人可以對自己被人遺忘、孤獨的境地輕輕苦笑。而“平時不燒香，臨時抱佛腳”的學生也可以對考試前的焦慮笑一笑。連環畫把人們的問題夸張地表現出來。也許那些問題看上去很可笑，這是因為當真實的事物被夸大到不真實的程度時，本身就產生了幽默。漫畫結合了藝術和幽默。巧妙地畫幾筆簡單的線條，寫幾句簡潔的話就能讓人開懷大笑。人們的煩心事看上去不再那么重要了，而人們也能夠更充分地享受生活。

詞匯斟酌

fumble v.笨拙地做，摸索

comic n.連環畫頁，連環漫畫

sip v.呷，啜

ridiculous a.荒謬的, 可笑的scapegoat n.替罪羊

awkwardness n.笨拙, 不雅觀

chuckle vi.吃吃的笑, 咯咯叫

佳句臨摹

①【解析】make one’s way(to/toward sth)向…前進

【臨摹】I’ll make my way home now.我現在要回家了。

思如泉涌

It is a great art to laugh at your own misfortune.對己之不幸付之一笑，這是一門偉大的藝術。

Art lies in concealing art.隱而不露即藝術。

第二篇：六級寫作要點

六級寫作要點

寫作常見錯誤綜述

１.缺少標題；相對于作文長短來說標題太大，應該根據文章的主要內容縮小標題；標題的大小寫不規范.?作文的標題中的首尾單詞的第一個字母要大寫,另外,中間出現的單詞中,除冠詞,連詞(and, or, but, nor, for),短的介詞和不定式的to要小寫外,其它詞要大寫:

my first visit to the palace museum

?the people without a country

?rules to abide by

?dickens and david copperfield

?what can the artist do in the world of today?

?what reform means to china

?the myth of a “negro literature”

?the English-speaking people in Quebec

My First Visit to the Palace Museum ?The People Without a Country

?Rules to Abide By

?Dickens and David Copperfield

?What Can the Artist Do in the World of Today?

?What Reform Means to China

?The Myth of a “Negro Literature”

?The English-Speaking People in Quebec

2.段落開頭空格不規范，應該空四至五個字母的距離；

文章要分段，不能全文只有一或兩段，一般要有至少三段，而且開頭結尾段不宜太長，一般各部分不超過四句話。

?3.除去開頭結尾一般就應該是文章的中心部分，這部分的內容不能太少。這部分的內容從字數上應該至少超過開頭結尾的總和。而且，從語言形式上看，要把這部分內容分成幾部分且用關聯詞語進行連接，使這部分從形式上看條理清楚。

?中心部分的內容也要意思上是相互聯系的，如先寫重要的，再寫次要的；或先一方面再寫另一方面。

4.不論議論文寫什么內容，請記住只要寫一個中心觀點。可以開頭段或結尾段亮明你的觀點。

但文章中所有內容都應該為這個中心觀點服務，不論是證明中心觀點的次觀點，還是舉例，請緊緊圍繞你的觀點寫作文。

5.因為是議論文，文章的目的是說服文章讀者認同你的觀點，所以文章要客觀，有說服力。為此，要避免主觀偏激的議論，舉出有說服力的事例或數據，引用名言，做出合理的分析討論。

5.因為是議論文，文章的目的是說服文章讀者認同你的觀點，所以文章要客觀，有說服力。為此，要避免主觀偏激的議論，舉出有說服力的事例或數據，引用名言，做出合理的分析討論。

6.書寫潦草會影響你的得分。單詞拼寫錯誤也常常出現，建議多查字典，考試中對那些沒把握的詞盡量不用。句子的語法錯誤也不少，對此要學好語法，也可通過多練筆請別人改的方法提高。有些表達令人費解，建議寫作完成后嘗試以一個讀者的身份給自己的作文挑刺。

?7.文章的開頭是非常重要的,這是文章的引子。作為讀者, 會從開頭段傳遞出來的信息來對下文的內容有一個合理期待, 如果與期待不符, 會讓讀者覺得文章寫作很不緊湊。

?8要提高寫作不是一朝一夕能做到的，需要下工夫。可以通過多寫作文，多看范文或多背范文，學習寫作知識來提高寫作。平時多背一些好的句型，并能在說的時候盡量用上，多做翻譯練習（口頭的可節省時間，筆頭能進行細致分析）對提高寫作也很有幫助。

寫作如何開篇

??以校園內或社會上的某種現象或趨勢作為文章的引子來開篇 ?1)With the steady growth in the country’s economy as well as the people’s living standards, ….?2)With the rapid improvement in …/ growing awareness of …, more and more …/ sth…

?(e.g.With the considerable improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people’s minds at ease.)

?3)Recently, sth./the problem of …has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern.?(e.g.Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.)

?4)One of the universal issues we are faced with/ that cause increasing concern is that …

?(e.g.One of the universal issues that draw(cause)growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile.)

?5)In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…

?(e.g.In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.)

?6)Nowadays, more/most important/dangerous for our society is …

?(e.g.Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.)

?(過渡句)

?1)To prevent this phenomenon/trend from worsening/running wide/To guide the matter/situation to the best advantage, it is necessary/important to …

?2)In the face of …some people take the position that …/some people come to believe that …, to which I can’t attach/add my consent.?In the face of …people retain/take/show/assume different attitudes/positions/standpoints.?3)But many people feel puzzled about/ perplexed at…

?2 圖表常用開篇語

?1)As can be seen form the table above, some changes in …have taken place over the period from… to ….?(e.g.As can be seen form the table above, some changes in people’s diet have taken place over the period from 1986 to 1990.)

?2)According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that…

?3)As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is a marked increase/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in …

? 4)As we can see from the table/graph/figure above, drastic/considerable/great changes have taken place in …over the period of time form … to…

?(過渡句)

?1）To get a sense of how …we must turn first to causes for it.?2)This is a(n)favorable/unfavorable/unhealthy/

?essential/marked/grateful change/tendency/

?situation, but factors/causes/reasons for it are not hard to find.?3)The progress/improvement/change(s)in …is(are)really tremendous/remarkable/marvelous, so it is necessary to understand what has caused it(them).?

?3)反襯法：從事物的對立面出發，引出思考。

?e.g.As modern cities have been brought into rapid development, more and more of vegetation is going out of urban life.Trees are being pulled down to make room for high-rise office buildings, and industrial pollution makes it harder for the rest of greenery to survive among the forest of apartment structures.This is a situation worth improving, as vegetation is as essential to health as fresh air to life in big cities.? 1)The current situation of …, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that…

?(e.g.The current situation of our reforms in political structure, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that much of the achievement is far from satisfactory.For example, …)

?(過渡句)

?1)This situation/phenomenon/trend/tendency is rather distressing/ disturbing/depressing/heart-rending, for the opposite of it is just in line with our wishes/just what is to be expected.?2)This is what we are unwilling to see, so some way must be found

out to …

?3)Fortunately, however, more and more people come/begin to realize that…

?4)Unfortunately, things have worsened/come/developed to the point where…

4．直入法

?Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its leading role in all senses.But agreement ceases as soon as they attempt to determine how to read more profitably, upon which views vary from person to person.?1)To sb.’s mind/In sb.’s eye(s), sth.seems/means…

?2)No one would deny that…

?Or: Everyone would agree that…

?(過渡句)

?1)If we take a further/closer look at this problem/matter, however, more secrets/grounds/chances/ways will be found out for … ?2)If you push the analysis/study/

?argument/comparison/exposure further, you will see that…

?5.讓步法：先承認其好的一面，再轉而討論其不好的一面。?1)The birth/invention of …has made an enormous/essential difference to …But it does not mean that…

?(e.g.The birth of the computer has made a radical difference to the human progress.But it does not mean that this wonder does no threat to our society.)

?2)Sth.has changed the way of our society develops,….But its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.?3)No/Little doubt that… But…

?(e.g.Little doubt that the traditional schooling has contributed much to our social development.… But some grave defects in it begin to stand out against the modern times.)

? 6．設問法：如題就是一問題，可用此方法

?Title: On Youth

?What does “youth” mean?.....?1)What is the best definition for …?

?2)How/Why does sth.affect our life?

?7.情景法：設計情景，再引出討論。

?1）Suppose/Imagine that …/Let’s suppose/assume/imagine(that)…

?(e.g.Suppose, by any chance, you heartily disagree with anything that is going on about you, you are less likely to stay on the good side of people around you.)

?2)We often find ourselves caught/involved in a dilemma whether…

?(e.g.We often find ourselves caught in a dilemma whether we should reach for the bear’s paw or for the shark’s fin/whether to reach for…)

?(過渡句)

?1)In that case, however, I prefer to … rather than…

?2)When exposed to/subject to the same conditions/challenge/choice, however, different people tend to behave in different ways.?8)引言法：引用名言，不可用直接引語，可自己造名言，只要能說得通。

?1)One of the great sociologists/psychologists once said that?(e.g.One of the great sociologists once said that society affects human character as vitally as the clothes one wears, the food one eats and the friends one involves himself with.)

?(過渡句)

?1)If this is true/the case, what accounts for such an issue:

?2)His voice arouses echoes among people of insight, who have come up with some practical measures.

第三篇：六級寫作素材

六級寫作素材素材一：Technology

﹢Technology helps to

the increase/enhance/promote

efficiency in people’s study and work, making our/their activities more economical and less time-consuming.﹣The youngsters are more likely to/tend to/ incline to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.﹣Technology could make/render city-dwellers slaves to high

technology, alienating people from one another.﹣Technology deprives the citizens of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.素材二：Mind, soul

﹢enable the students to grasp their subjects better, helping them to broaden their horizons.﹢relax their bodies and ease the minds.﹣The citizens are more likely to be monotonous and un-motivating.﹣The youngsters might even suffer from mental diseases/illnesses, such as depression.素材三：Society

﹢promote the development of society

﹢keep the society safe and stable ﹣increase the already high crime rate

素材四：Environment

﹣The proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish（such as disposable plastic bags）poses a

threat to environment and humanity.how We should not develop economy at the expense of environment.素材五：Employment, competition ﹢create more job opportunities

﹢enable the students to find jobs more easily

﹣The competition in modern society is increasingly fierce, which alienates the city-dwellers from one another and makes them cold and cruel.素材六：Culture globalization ﹢It is manifest that globalization can bring numerous benefits to human.﹢promote/enhance the cultural communication and interaction between people from different countries/ethnic minority.﹣create tension and conflicts between…

素材七：Money（egoism←→altruism）

﹣Youngsters today tend to be

money-oriented and are likely to fall prey to materialism and egoism.﹣It is wrong to equate happiness with making more money and living in a spacious house.

第四篇：2013年 六級真題寫作及

2013年6月大學英語6級考試真題寫作

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”.You may cite some examples to support your view.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.【寫作提示】

本文是一篇議論文，要求對“微笑是兩個人之間最短的距離”做出論述。文章可分為三部分：第一部分引出話題，提出觀點——微笑可以拉近人們之間的距離；第二部分論述微笑拉近人們之間距離的具體表現，并舉例支持論述；第三部分總結微笑的作用，升華自己的觀點。

【寫作范文】

Smiles Shorten the Distance between People

As the proverb puts it, a smile is the shortest distance between two people.In my opinion, a smile could bring people closer and we should smile as much as we can.Firstly, a smile may help ease the tension in personal relationship.For example, when we make a mistake, a smile of our parents may remove our fears, what’s more, give us the courage to amend and make progress.During the process, we become closer to our parents.Secondly, a smile may help break the ice between two strangers.For instance, when we fall down on the ground, we will be grateful if a stranger with a smile on his or her face gives a hand to us.We’ll suddenly feel warm in the heart and feel the distance between the stranger and us is much shorter, and if we are lucky enough, we make a new friend.To conclude, a smile could be an effective way to shorten the distance between people.Hence, it is advisable for people to smile more, not only to our beloved ones but also strangers.By doing so, we can build a more harmonious world and live a happier life.

第五篇：六級作文點評

The Way to Success

Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for.But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power.It’s indeed one way to define success.But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing。

To achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind

three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having

the diligence to realize your dream.In other words, they are “what” “why” and “how” of success.It’s really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful。

Although it’s never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, you’ll be the one。

【作文解析】

這是一篇議論文。作者首先提出問題”what is success?”，但并沒有在這個問題上著更多的筆墨，而是直接引出了自己的觀點：success is doing something one really feels like doing.算是立意較為新穎的地方。隨后在第二段對這種成功背后的三種必要條件做出了闡述。整體看，行文流暢，用語規范地道。

本篇亮點：

1.排比詞組或句子的運用：

Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for。

…namely, knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream。

2.bear in mind

3.lie in

4.strong will to pursue your interest

本文有待提高之處：

1.文中人稱有些混亂。有些使用第二人稱代指讀者，有些又以第三人稱指代，建議統一。

2.結構上，一般情況下我們建議考生使用典型的“三段式”，即，提出問題、分析問題、解決問題。該作者基本上遵循了這個原則，但第三段更多的卻是重復了第二段的中心思想，并沒有起到很好的總結作用。如果第三段，作者可以與第一段的“成功定義”相呼應，例如：即使沒有這些身外之物，但心靈上的滿足，夢想的實現，才是我心中成功的本質。整體看，文章在語言表達和立意上還不錯。但在文章結構上有些松散，有待提高。