第一篇:雅思圖表作文第一段改寫方法
先看看劍7 TEST3的題目:
The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.再來看給出的6.5分范文
This chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five
different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houses in 1989.出路倒是有一條,那就是“句型變化+詞匯改變”,措辭改變大家很好理解,句型變化是大家以前很少想到去做的,其實句型變化很簡單,一般題目The table shows后面給出的通常是一個名詞性的詞組,我們把它改成句子即可,句型和詞匯雙變化,改寫就容易充分了:
The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2002.句型變化:名詞性詞組changes變為how…changed…詞匯變化:this chart變為the given diagram
average house prices變為the real estate market
in five different cities后面添加around the world
between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989變為from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2000同時我們也可以作另外一種改寫:
一般的題目是The graph shows…,改為The information given by the graph is about…則很輕易的改換了句型表達。再看幾個示例
示例 1
題目
The table below shows the proportion of different categories of family living in poverty in Australia in 1999.改寫一
The table illustrates what percentage of Australian families among various kinds lived in poverty in 1999.改寫二
The information given by the table is about the percentage of poor families in Australia coming from various backgrounds in 1990.示例 2
題目
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school
qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.改寫一
The bar chart demonstrates how many males and females in Australia in 1999 held various post-school diplomas.改寫二
The information provided by this bar chart is about the
percentage of Australian males and females holding the various post-school diplomas.示例 3
題目
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.改寫
The line graph above demonstrates how much water used in three areas changed from 1990 to 2000 while the data coming from the below table is about consumption in two different countries – Brazil and Congo.兩個圖表的題目最好寫了,可以一個寫成從句,一個以The information given by the table is about…來改寫。
第二篇:雅思圖表作文句
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雅思圖表作文模板句
Para1.This is a table / chart /(line線狀 bar柱狀 pie餅狀)graph which demonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict /privide information
about......Para2.(1)Obvious /Apparent from the graph is that...rank the
first/highest,while/whereas....turn out to be the lowest
(2)It is exhibited/shown in the table that.....(3)It can be seen from the table that.....Para3.(1)餅.柱圖 A,which accounts for...%,ranks the first;then next is B with...%;followed by C,constituting...%;finally it comes D.E.F at...%...%and...%respectively
(2)特殊變化(不變,增長或下降多的)
①It is worth mentioning that....②It must be pointed out that....③More striking/suprising is that....Para4.To conclude /In conclusion/overall
第一部分、用于雅思小作文開頭部分經典句型
1、通過第一個曲線圖,我們可以知道____,也說明了結果是___
According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.2、一張有趣、有教育意義的內容的圖片
There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: _
3、當前有一張涉及______的增長曲線圖,許多人______,然而其他人傾向于___.Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________.Many people like______________, while others are inclined to ______________.4、目前,共同之處是_____,許多人喜歡______因為_______除此之外還由于_____Nowadays, it is common to ____.Many people like___,because _______.Besides, _____________.5、(圖表所示)_____,就像許多其他事物,被____更加喜愛,然而這一觀點正被_______所抨擊,一些人認為_________,他們指出___________
______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______.While being attacked by the idea that _________, some people consider
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________.They point that ______________.6、每種事物都有兩面性和________,是沒有異議的,包括利和弊
Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.7、_____作為_____被觀察了許多年,但是人們現在像發現新大陸一樣注視著它For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________.But people are taking a fresh look at it now.8、政府保證________,對于這份保證,大多數人做出了強烈地回應,因為_____It has stipulated by the government that _________.To this
stipulation,many people respond actively because ______________.9、_______出現在我們日常生活中是很平常的,無論我們做什么,_______都是不可避免的._______ is a common occurrence in our daily life.Whatever we do, _______ can't be avoided.10、___在人群中已經成為熱門話題,特別是在年輕人中,激烈的爭論無休止
______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.11、最近,_______已經成為社會焦點,這樣,人們涌往______
Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.People swarm to ______________.12、_____在我們日復一日的生活中起到了越來越重要的作用,它為我們帶來了許多好處,同時也減少了許多問題
_____________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.13、人們正面臨著一個很嚴重的問題_______,首先______,然后________
Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ______________ second, ______________.14、現在,越來越多的人開始意識到________的嚴重性
Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.15、最近幾年人們基本意識到_________
It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that______________.16、有一個舊的說法________-,它是我們父輩的經驗,然而,今天在許多事情上,它仍是正確的There is an old saying, ______________.It's the experience of our forefathers,however, it is correct in many cases ever today.17、英國諺語_______,這是非常正確的,因為_________
The English proverb says, ___________.This is quite true because ________.18、_____是______,同時又是_____,這兩個因素已經引起______,我們應該做些什么解決________面對目前的環境
______________ is now______________, and at the same time______________.These two factors have caused ______________.Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.19、一位遠古的哲人說過,________,中國人已經銘記于心
One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________.Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.20、一位非常著名的作家說過______,如果這是真的,目前的狀況應使我們沉思______.One of the great early writers said that ______________.If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.第二部分、用于雅思小作文中間部分經典句型
1.最明顯的原因_______,因此_________
The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that __________.Consequently, _______.2.無論你喜歡與否,_____已經變得越來越流行,這是有原因的No matter you like it or not, AAA has become more and more popular and there are many reason for it.3.對我們來說,改變這個不利的環境________是非常緊急的It’s an urgent task for us to change this unfavorable situation: ______________.4.這個圖片會讓你想起一些奇怪的東西,這種現象還是會繼續存在這個社會The picture can reminds you of some strange, yet familiar phenomena existing in our society.5.提供了大量的解決方案,一些人建議______,另一些人建議______
A great number of solutions are being offered.Some people suggest that______________.Others argue that ______________.6.對于____,我們應該____
Confronted with AAA, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.7.然而,______引起了許多為問題,However, _______ may cause some problems.First, it is _______.Second, ______.Finally, ___________.So, it is clear that ________has its advantages and disadvantages.8.雖然____有一個______的非常大的好處,但是它不能完全______在_____方面Although ______________ has a great advantage of ______________, it can’tcompete with ______________ in ______________.9._____也許更喜歡_____,但是_____忍受_____的不利之出
______________ may be preferable to ______________, but it suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.10._____的有利之處比______的有利之處要多,舉例說明,_____
The advantages of ______________ are much greater that those of_________.For instance, ____________.11.But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ______________.For instance, ___________.Worst of all, _____________.12.There are many ways to _____.First, _____.Second, ____.Third, __
13.On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ______________.They believe ______________.Moreover, they think ______________.14.There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can ______________, there are a number of advantages of __________.Another solution is to ________.15.It is high time that something was done about it.For example, ___.In addition,_________.All these measures will certainly ______________.16.There are some other people, who ______________.Their reasons are different,something for ______________, sometimes for ______________, and sometimes simply for ______________.17.______________ is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction.First,______________.What’s more, ______________.Most important of all, ______________.18.However, if not managed properly, ______________ can create many problems.Sometimes ____________.Furthermore, ____________.Therefore, _____________ has been gaining public concern.19.有很多原因____,???
①There are probably many reasons for _______.First, _________.Second, ________.Finally, ________.There are,I think,two main reasons for _____.In the first place,______.In the second place, _________.Therefore,__________.② Well, why is there ______________? I think there might be two reasons.One is ______________, and the other is ______________.③Why ______________? For one thing, ______________.For another, ___________.Perhaps the main reason is ______________.④Why ______________? The first reason is that ______________.The secondreason is ______________.The third is ______________.For all this, the main cause of ______________ is due to ______________.20.It is no easy job to find the reasons for this tendency which involves several complicated factors.For some ________.For others ___________.21.“Why do ______________?” Many people often ask questions like this.22.In recent years, there is a general tendency to ______________.According to a study, there is ______________.compared with ______________ last year.Why______________?
23.According to a survey, there is a growing number of ______________.What brings this result? The main reason rests with.24.①Some people prefer to ______________.In their opinion, ___________.In addition, ______________.Nevertheless, nowadays, ______________ has become more and more common.②Many people are inclined to ___________.In their opinion, _____.They believe that ______________.25.Today, there _____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ second, _____.What makes things worse is that ___.26.Nowadays, _____ has become a problem we have to face.Though it’s easier said than done, with the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it.27.對于這個圖,說明了_____
①The graph shows the general trend in ______________.②According to the figures/numbers/statistics/percentages in the table/chart/bar graph/line graph, it can be seen that ______________.Obviously, ______________, but why?
③The figure indicates/shows/suggests/proves that ______________.There is a steady/rapid development/trend of ______________.④From the graph/chart, we know the statistics of ______________ and______________.It can be seen easily that ______________.⑤According to the two graphs presented, it can be observed that _____In the left graph, ______________.At the same time, ______________ as the right graph shows.28.現在我們經常聽到_____,但是真的如此嗎?
①These days we are often told that ______________.But is it true?②These days we often hear about ______________.But is this really the case?
29.一位著名的作家曾經說過_____,One of the great writers once said that ______________.Now it still has arealistic significance.30.回看歷史,______的想法從來都沒流行過,一方面_____另一方面______In our history, the idea that ______________ never has been so popular.On one hand,_____, on the other hand,____________.31.人們中有許多像____不同的意見,一些人認為_______
There are different opinions among people as to ______________.Some people suggest that ______________.32.一些人認為_______對_______來說在許多方面都是好的,然,其他人不同意Some people hold the opinion that ______________ is superior to ______________ in many ways: Others, however, disagree with it.33.現在雖然越來越多的人______,但仍有一些_____的人,他們也許認為_____Nowadays although more and more people ______________, still there are some who think ______________, they may think ____________.
第三篇:雅思小作文圖表作文數據寫法
1.介詞
? From..to..The proportion of married people decreased by 11% to about 59%.趨勢名詞+ofThe minutes of local fixed line calls reached the peak at around 90 billion.? With(帶一個或幾個靜止的數值)
-In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.Both nuclear power and oil went up during the period, although the rise of oil was not as dramatic as that of nuclear power(from 15, 20 to 126, 25 respectively).3.從句 與括號類似,都起到解釋的作用。括號→從句:在括號內容前加which+ v.People in Turkey spent on food with the largest percentage, which was 32.14%.Both nuclear power and oil went up during the period, although the rise of oil was not as dramatic as that of nuclear power, which increased from 15, 20 to 126, 25 respectively.4.直接(數字+趨勢名詞)
-There was an 11% decline to around 59% in 2000 in the proportion of married people.
第四篇:雅思小作文---TASK1圖表題
雅思小作文
TASK 1 圖表題規律
注意事項: 1.Task1 是客觀寫作,要求客觀真實。2.客觀性:不應該有任何圖里沒有而靠自己主觀想象加入的成分。結尾段針對圖形做出的總結性結論也應該是根據圖表的實際內容做出的符合邏輯的總結。
準確性:圖表里面的數據介紹要力求精確,不能抄錯數字。但當一個特征點沒有落在一個準確的坐標值上時,允許進行合理的目測或估計一個大概數值。詳盡性:要有層次感,并不需要把所有的數字都推到文章里。3.類型
Table
表格題 Line Graph
線圖 Bar Chart
柱狀圖 Pie Chart
餅狀圖 Process Chart 流程圖 4.看圖要注意單位,標題和圖例。5.對于多數小作文題,題中給出了幾個圖就對應的寫出幾個主體段。題目里只給出一個圖,根據圖中包含幾類圖形元素寫幾個主體段。圖中只給了一個圖,但圖中所含圖形元素很多,則分類。
題目中出現多線多柱多餅,用“對應提取法“,把每組里的對應元素提出來組織主體段。6.時態和發生時間意義對應。
陳述永恒事實的句型,其主句的謂語動詞必定用一般現在時。若題目里沒有出現時間,則全文都使用一般現在時。7.結構
開頭段(1~2句)改寫原題 主體段1
總體概括
具體介紹數字 主體段N
總體概括
具體介紹數字
結尾段(1~2句)介紹總數(若圖里并沒有明確的給出總數,則省略)
結論(根據圖里的數據得出有一定合理性的結論)8.開頭段的改寫
題目中
改寫成
Show
illustrate /compare Proportion
percentage Information
data The number/amount of
the figure for Family
household Males
men Female
women Influence
affect/effect Categories
kinds/types Subway system
underground railway/train system
Store
shop 9.介紹數據或描述變化趨勢的常用詞。動詞:
表示上升: go up;rise;increase : grow;experience a upward trend 表示急劇上升:jump;shoot up;surge;soar(高漲)表示下降: decline;drop;decrease : fall;experience a downward trend;fall back 表示急劇下降:plummet;plunge
強調上升或下降的起點數值,重點數值: from…to… 強調上升或下降的幅度: by 表示由…組成: consist of;be made up of;be composed of;be comprise of 表示波動:fluctuate/fluctuation(fluctuate between…and…)表示穩定在一個水平上:remain stable at;level off at;hover at 表示經歷了某種變化:see;witness;experience 表示達到最高點:peak at;reach its peak at;reach the highest level at 表示達到最低點:reach its lowest point/ level at 表示數量:reach;stand at
表示所占份額(百分比/份額)account for;represent;make up;constitute 表示對將來數字的預測:expect;predict;project
表示變成原來數字的二倍/三倍:(almost/more than)double/triple;increase twofold/tree fold 表示是另一事物的二倍/三倍:be twice/three times as high/long/fast/popular as 表示原有的差距縮小/擴大:The gap between…and…narrows/widens 表示原本少于但后來超過:exceed;overtake
形容詞
表示急劇:sharp;dramatic;rapid;deep 表示持續:gradual;consistent;steady;continuous;slow 表示顯著地,大幅度的: significant;considerable;marked;substantial;noticeable 表示幅度很小: slight;minimal(語氣很強,表示“極少的”)表示大約:about;around;approximately;just over/ under 表示分別:respectively(置于二組或多組數字后)
10.主體段寫法
第1句話 :概括該圖的總體變化趨勢(圖中存在時間推移)/概括該圖包含幾個部分(圖中不存在時間推移)第X 句:具體介紹數據
(1)盡可能地按照有規則的順序來介紹數據:
常規的線圖:按從左到右的自然順序介紹
常規的柱狀圖:若橫軸有時間變化,按從左到右的自然順序介紹
若橫軸沒有時間變化,則把各柱對應的數值從大到小排序介紹
常規的餅圖:按所占份額從大到小排序來介紹
表格題:按行或按列的順序依次介紹(把每行或每列的數值從大到小
介紹)
(2)并非要覆蓋所有數字,不可省略關鍵數字(起始點,終止點,文化趨勢,轉折點,極值,交點,百分點)
11.修飾作文
合理的分段,有持續的描述,盡量相識的特征數字介紹(1)比較意識:強調極值,對非極值進行適當對比
在第一句話的前半部分先定性地進行對比或類比,然后在該劇的后半部分用with+獨立主格結構(在句子的后部附加另一事物的趨勢或信息)/現在分詞短語(句子后部仍然介紹句子前部主語的趨勢或信息)/在括號里補充介紹數字來說明具體數字。
要能夠清晰介紹趨勢和數字(2)表示時間的介詞
In, from ,to , by(+一個具體的時間點,用于面熟某種變化趨勢截止某一時間,過去完成時),during(強調發生在該期間),over(表示某種變化從某時期的開始至結束)
(3)It is clear/particularly noticeable that …(不宜在作文里過早出現)(4)Interestingly,…/It is interesting to note that …(用于描述對比其他圖并不是很明顯的一個特點)
流程圖
(出現頻率:全年50場考試大概出現2-3次)1.看圖時必須仔細,不能漏掉任何一個細節。2.可將流程圖中的生詞直接抄到文章。3.多用表示順序的單詞,短語。
At the first stage of the process,…/First of all,…/ The process begins with At the second/third /fourth stage , …
After that / Next / At the following stage /Subsequently / Afterwards Then(不出現在句首,出現在被動語態里的be動詞和過去分詞之間)At this stage /point ,…
Finally / Eventually(全過程很曲折)/At the final stage 4.若流程圖特別復雜,則合并成幾個大步來寫(題目會有細節暗示)
舉例:
60%= three-fifths// three out of five = a/the majority of = a large/striking/ominant/leading portion/part/share/proportion/percentage/margin of >80%(93%)= a lion’s share
5%= a minority of, a marginal/micro/slim/tiny/small-scaled/meagre portion 37.8%= maximum/comparatively a majority of(<50%的最大值)comparatively a minority of WRONG 7.3%
87%/76%/53%
第五篇:雅思圖表作文的5個誤解
雅思圖表作文的5個誤解
NO.1 分析圖表背后的原因
這是中國學生的習慣性毛病,寫作文時候總喜歡寫上為什么。雅思小作文是客觀性寫作,只要求通過圖表描述和總結,不能寫上為什么,不需要解釋。參照劍5 TEST 1中曲線圖,日本在2030年左右65歲人口數量預計要陡增,但我們只要求寫出事實,不要求寫出陡增的原因!
NO.2 連接詞我用了,句子之間的連接也有了,文章完成沒問題了
在評分標準第二點中明確提到了Coherence and Cohesion(連貫與銜接),可見是一個相當重要的得分參考點。而很多中國學生的作文中充滿了then, after, before等這樣單調的低級連接詞,最后的得分自然不會上去。合理的使用一些從句,關聯詞會使你的句子看起來更加精煉和有創意。
NO.3 趨勢描寫就是increase和decrease以及level off
同學們在描寫趨勢的上升或下降的時候常常只用到了一個increase & decrease+副詞 的模式。殊不知對上升下降的描寫我們可以采取至少三種的描寫方式動詞+副詞,形容詞+名詞以及把上升下降的詞換做形容詞來使用。這也就正好避免了評分標準四Grammatical Range and Accuracy(語法范圍與精確)中的陷阱。
NO.4 有多少種屬性分多少段,有多少圖分多少段
關于information的organizing 和paragraphing也是一個很重要的得分參照點。劍4 TEST3中是一張技工,本科,學士,研究生,碩士以及博士的男女數量分布圖。很多同學在中間描述段的時候將其按照學位的排列順序分成了六段來寫,這又讓你的內容變得復雜和臃腫了!為何不按照性別來分段呢?只需要兩段就可以將圖表內容梳理清楚。所以建議大家在動筆之前首先在自己的頭腦中有一個最為清晰和直觀明了的分段。
NO.5 Ending 總結段可有可無,可加主觀觀點
在最后的結尾段,建議考生為求文章結構板塊的完整性,起到首尾呼應的作用,用1-2句話重申圖表突出特征,總結圖表反映的現象,揭示其規律和本質。切忌添加主觀觀點!圖表沒有反映的信息,絕對不寫,也不要隨意亂猜!