第一篇：大同托福英語輔導班：如何寫一篇高分托福作文

大同托福英語輔導班：如何寫一篇高分托福作文

托福寫作考試是對大家英語綜合運用能力的考察，想要寫一篇讓考官眼前一亮的文章需要同學們在平時做大量的準備工作。很多參加過托福考試的同學都抱怨說，明明自己感覺文章寫得非常不錯，但是最終的分數卻很低，這是為什么呢?如何寫一篇高分托福作文呢？下面就由譯林培森大同托福英語輔導班為大家支幾招吧。

第一，用詞一定要多樣化。

通過對歷年考生托福作文的分析總結，我們發現低分作文都有同樣一個問題，那就是用詞單一，一篇文章當中反復出現同樣的詞匯，這會給閱卷老師留下很糟糕的印象。大同托福英語輔導班的老師建議同學們，平時一定要多積累，多總結，豐富擴大自己的詞匯量，要學會用不同的詞語來表達同一個意思，這樣會讓閱卷老師覺得你英語基礎很扎實，詞匯掌握量很豐富，作文也就容易得高分。

第二，文章主題要明確，要有充分的材料來支持自己的觀點。

很多同學在拿到文章題目的時候，做了簡單思考之后就立即動筆，結果是想起一句寫一句，使整篇文章顯得東拼西湊、毫無條理。大同托福英語輔導班提醒同學們，在正式動筆之前一定要列好提綱，確定文章主題，然后在寫的時候將主題突出。然后還要有充足的資料來論證文章主題，不然會讓整篇文章顯得很空洞，文章主題也會站不住腳。

第三，要注意細節問題，不要在細微地方失分。

在文章完成之后，大家還要注重細節問題，比如詞匯拼寫是否正確，人稱是否符合文章，時態是否正確等。有些同學為了讓自己的文章出彩，會使用一些較為復雜的句子，這樣的句子由于結構復雜所以容易出錯，大家一定要注意。除此之外，大同托福英語輔導班提醒同學們，在寫完文章之后一定要看一下字數是否符合題目要求，千萬不要因為這些細微的問題被扣分，那可就太可惜了。

在托福考試當中，寫作其實是很容易拿分的部分，大同托福英語輔導班的老師希望同學們在平時的復習過程中多練習，多自己動手寫，多總結，為自己制定嚴格的復習計劃。我們從不打無準備之仗，只要準備工作做到位了，大家就一定可以寫出一篇高分英語作文。

第二篇：托福高分感言

TOEFL二戰感想

自我介紹：

我叫，在2015年7月6日至7月12日期間，參加了杭州新航道學校的托福寫作口語強化班，學習期間，很感謝杭州新航道學校老師給我提供了許多學習上的技巧和如何學習英語的能力，經過6天的在校學習，我于7月16日參加了托福考試，取得了TOEFL IBT總分105、閱讀30，聽力27，口語20，寫作28的好成績，其中口語提高兩分，寫作提高一分。下面，我來和大家分享一下我在托福中取得高分的心得體會。

一、上課感受

我曾于去年三月份參加過托福考試，但是時隔一年有余，對考試感覺十分生疏。而且在那次考試中，我的口語僅僅只有18分，成為了拉分的大項，況且許多學校有小分的要求，我自己感覺不是很滿意，于是決定在考試前參加新航道的集中培訓。在培訓中，寫作老師循循善誘，幫助我迅速回憶起寫作的套路。寫作老師有一套行之有效的方法，從題型入手，讓我們逐步了解托福寫作并不是那么難，極大地增強了我的信心，而且之前我一直在語言運用上面感覺有瓶頸，提升不上去，通過學習老師所寫的例文，也掌握了許多地道的固定搭配，使我獲益匪淺。并且之前我的綜合寫作并不是很好，總是感覺聽到了一大堆東西卻抓不住重點，寫作老師幫我們理清了聽力材料的思路，并著重強調得分點，使我在考試中迅速在十分鐘之內就完成了綜合寫作，并贏得了寶貴的檢查時間。

口語模塊向來是我的短板，大三上半學期我曾經在德國交流過半年，所以我與人溝通的能力是具備的，但缺乏在極短的時間內迅速總結分析自己想法并用正確語句表達出來的能力。口語老師鼓勵我們多多表達，并跳出模板的局限，將有限的時間全部用來表述內容極大的激發了我，雖然最后只提高了兩分，但我仍感到獲益匪淺。

另外，我感到托福的出題越來越靈活，特別是一二題，如這次考試我就遇到了對整形手術有什么看法的題，所以在平常生活中多鍛煉自己在短時間內思考不同問題的能力十分重要，可以多與同學，家長交流。學校的英語角也是一個鍛煉口語的好去處，并且要隨時注意總結發現別人有沒有用什么好詞好句等好的表達方式。

閱讀和聽力是我的強項，本次閱讀也比較簡單。但是聽力出現了一些新的問題，主要是題目與問題的同義替換較多，可能要注意一下。

二、寄語

希望大家勇于挑戰自己，特別是敢說敢于表達是最關鍵的，記住，以后的競爭者會來自全球，不表達別人永遠不會知道我們的優秀。珍惜每一次小的進步，因為那都是來之不易的。祝杭州新航道學校越辦越好！就是不要再排連著五小時的課了。

杭州新航道學校網絡部 2016.8.16

第三篇：最新托福英語作文

最新托福英語作文模板

TOEFL班的托福作文模板，100句常用句型按照托福作文結構組合而成。

作文文套一A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由進行解釋_____________________.For instance,____________________

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由進行解釋___________________For example,____________________

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the

disadvantages are more obvious.Such as________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.作文文套二A or B

將原題復述 ___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence-A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一種觀點的缺點

__________.In a word, _____________重復觀點句并縮寫理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.作文文套三單一命題式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style.In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books.So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________復述前文中的理由______________.作文文套四agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a

_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them.There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact

that______________解釋本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe

that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, ________________.作文文套五A or B

Some people prefer to A.others believe B.When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is

that_____________________.Take___________as example, ______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.Such as

________________________.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider

that______________.(exmaples:___________).From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.作文文套六Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________.MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more_______________.Examples___________

General speaking, __________.Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.作文文套七A or B

In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B.So it is sagacious to choose A.Among count less factors which influence A.there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered.For exmaple,___________________ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than

B.For instance,_______________

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important.B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they

sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A.For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.作文文套八A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in

contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point.This quite different view

is based on the propensity of following points.We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is

____________________.For example, ______________.Also, ________________________.This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.作文文套九A or B

When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that.Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________.This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此處論述B的1-2優點___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.作文文套十

____________改寫并復述題目____________.There may be by one or two

disadvantages to ___________________;however, I believe that there are far more advantages.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________.Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________.For example, ____________.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them.The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________.For exmaple_____________.Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________.For example, _________________.In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to

_____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重復優點__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.作文文套十二A or B

____________改寫并復述題目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A.There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary cause is that_______________________.What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.Futhermore, ________________________.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________._______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say

that___________________.作文文套十三A or B

____________改寫并復述題目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.In a word, ___________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.作文文套十四A or B

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B.My arguments for this

point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.In a word, ________________________.While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.作文文套十五agree or disagree

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________.But others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe

that________________.In a word, _________________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

第四篇：托福作文,英語作文

On Throw-away Society

Currently, our life is infiltrated with various disposable goods, among which throwaway tableware is the most commonly seen.Until now, even disposable cameras, disposable shavers, and disposable lighters have come into existence.These throwaway goods benefit us enormously, bringing convenience to our life.Notwithstanding, they give rise to a series of environmental and social problems.Convenience and sanitation are two most notable features of throwaway goods in our society.These ephemeral goods are widely used in certain places like hospitals, airplanes and fast food industry.Throwaway pinheads and tongue depressors, to some degree, prevent communicable diseases from spreading.Disposable chopsticks and bowls guarantee the efficiency for fast food providers, saving their time of washing.Besides, disposable toilet seat pads are coming into sight, contributing to the public sanitation.From these perspectives, throwaway products seem to be indispensable in our society.Simultaneously, the influx of disposable goods is turning our society into a throw-away society, which brings about severe environmental problems.The production of throwaway commodities consumes large quantities of natural resources, intensifying the diminution of resources.According to a research, China consumes about 45 billion pairs of disposable chopsticks annually, leading to the reduction of forest coverage by over two million square meters every year.Such a waste of resources is huge and only makes up a small section of the total resource-wasting.Our society cannot afford long-term mass consumption of disposable products.Apart from environmental degradation, the fact that we are rumbling into a throw-away society provokes social problems.In respect of producers, “planned obsolescence” was devised, with the goal of making products break down in a relatively short time and urging customers to replace them.If an electric appliance stops working, people are disposed to buy a new one, owning to the expensive repairing expenses and the impatience to waiting for it to be examined and fixed.In addition, technique advances reduce the cost and price of electric items.This trend not only causes more resource-wasting, but stirs up the climate of squandering and fickleness as well.Regarding consumers, people used to have a sentimental attachment to their possessions, but the fast-changing society ruthlessly breaks these bonds.In the past, a television could accompany us for more than twenty years,while nowadays we will renew it in a couple of years.By and large, throw-away society has dim prospects.On the whole, though we have to admit that disposable goods have their advantages, we should put the brakes on the trend of turning into a throw-away society.The usage of throwaway products should be limited in a proper amount to eliminate the problems appearing along with it.

第五篇：高分必備 托福口語句子分享

高分必備 托福口語模板句子分享

掌握一些托福口語句型，尤其是一些典型的高分新托福口語模板句子，對于大家備考托福口語非常有幫助。將這些句子背下來，并練習熟悉了，則可將最地道的句子脫口而出。

1.It takes me three clear / cleanly days.它花了我整整三天時間。

2.There are fifty and odd(or and more)students in our class.我們班有五十余人。

3.The total expense amount to a hundred dollars.全部費用合計100 美元。

4.We were fifteen, all told.我們一共十五人。

5.The delegation consisted of 15, inclusive of(including)two interpreters.代表團共十五人，包括兩名翻譯在內。

6.There were fifty people present, not counting(excluding)the children.出席者達五十人，兒童未計算在內。

7.We take a rest at intervals of two hours.我們每隔兩小時休息一次。

8.I ask you to teach me every other day.我請你每隔一天來教我。

9.Beijing is ten times as big as my home town.北京有我的家鄉十個那么大。

10.The sun is a huge blazing ball, a million times larger than the earth.太陽是個龐大的熾燃火球，比地球大一百多萬倍。

11.By comparison with 1992, the foreign trade turnover of that country in 2003 increased(to)3.5 times.與1992年相比，這個國家2003年對外貿易總額增加了2.5 倍(增加到3.5 倍)。

12.That table measures three feet by three.那張桌子三英尺長，三英尺寬。

13.He valued the house for me at ?,500.這房子他替我作價為三千五百鎊。

14.His coat is rated at 20 yuan.他的大衣值價二十元。

15.The job was finished at a sitting(a stretch).這工作一下子(一口氣)就做完了。

以上就是托福口語句型的介紹，一些非常使用的新托福口語模板句子，將這些句子基本的句型掌握，代換成自己的情況，運用在考試中一定可以取得理想的成績。