第一篇:托福作文
摸班1:
Recently there is a debate over whether high school should require students to wear school uniforms.Some people assert that high school should permit students to decide what to wear in school, while other people believe that students should be only allowed to wear school uniforms in school.As a matter of fact, this is a complex and controversial issue.Different people hold different views due to their different
backgrounds.Accordingly, it is impossible for us to give a universal answer to this question.As far as I am concerned, I agree that students should be asked to wear only school uniforms in school.I will prove my point of view by following discussion...............Certainly, we could not ignore the advantages from wearing what students want in school, such as
makeing them enjoy lives.Taking the practical situation into account that learning knowledge and skills is the most important thing in school, however, we can safely draw the conclusion that school should require students to wear school uniforms in school.黃的大家不要看了,是我寫的練習之一,呵呵。但是要強調的是:轉折很重要!但是沒必要單寫一段,我想最后一段用個小轉折就OK了,因為我們畢竟主要還是說另外一方面嘛。
摸班2:
It seems, in so many items, very difficult to choose one of the animals to be the most important animal in my country.Because all of them in my country have their special functions and characteristics.But it does not mean that they are the same to me.To be frank, I would choose panda as the most important animal in my country if the practical situation that panda is such an animal that lives only in China is considered.To explain my point of view, I will illustrate it in following three aspects.因為是列舉題目,所以最后簡單總結一下就OK,2,3句話足夠了。
第二篇:托福作文
I disagree that people now can better protect the environment than they could in the past.As technology develops, in order to satisfy the increasing population’s demand of natural products, people do harm on environment through creating pollutions, cutting down trees and hunting animals.Although people gradually realize the significance of protecting the environment they are living in, the damages they’ve done is hard to recover.Firstly, the number of pollutions from transportations and factories is growing in a high rate.When time goes by, people become richer and are also able to buy more high-technology products such as cars.Like other products, cars can provide convenience and can help people save their time, so most people want to use them.In this way, factories need to manufacture a great number of products in order to reach the need and make more money although they know that it will truly bring pollutions to the air and water when some machines work.Even if they do try to reduce the pollutions, the environment is still getting worse and worse.Just like the reason why more and more high-technology products are produced, the number of trees that are cut down is also increasing quickly.There are so many things that need trees—napkins, furniture , books and so on that people have to keep cutting down trees.Certainly, people know how significant it is to have trees in the nature, so they grow trees as long as they cut them down and make them in to notebooks.But unfortunately, the speed people grow new trees will never catch up the speed they cut down trees, so the trees could only become less and less.As we all know, trees play a important role in keeping the nature environment balance and absorb the CO2 in the air, so the decrease of trees has a bad influence on the environment.Finally, hunting the animals in the wild will obviously destroy the environment.Although animals in the wild are protected by the government and it is forbidden to hunt or kill them, there are still some people who want to hunt the animals and eat or do research on them.For example, some people in Guangdong like to eat the brain of monkey, and they hunt monkey in the case of law forbid.Such things will influence the food chain and the balance of ecological and then ruin the environment.Although people now have more advanced ways to protect the environment, the harm they do is still hard to restore.So people could not protect the environment better than they did before.
第三篇:托福作文,英語作文
On Throw-away Society
Currently, our life is infiltrated with various disposable goods, among which throwaway tableware is the most commonly seen.Until now, even disposable cameras, disposable shavers, and disposable lighters have come into existence.These throwaway goods benefit us enormously, bringing convenience to our life.Notwithstanding, they give rise to a series of environmental and social problems.Convenience and sanitation are two most notable features of throwaway goods in our society.These ephemeral goods are widely used in certain places like hospitals, airplanes and fast food industry.Throwaway pinheads and tongue depressors, to some degree, prevent communicable diseases from spreading.Disposable chopsticks and bowls guarantee the efficiency for fast food providers, saving their time of washing.Besides, disposable toilet seat pads are coming into sight, contributing to the public sanitation.From these perspectives, throwaway products seem to be indispensable in our society.Simultaneously, the influx of disposable goods is turning our society into a throw-away society, which brings about severe environmental problems.The production of throwaway commodities consumes large quantities of natural resources, intensifying the diminution of resources.According to a research, China consumes about 45 billion pairs of disposable chopsticks annually, leading to the reduction of forest coverage by over two million square meters every year.Such a waste of resources is huge and only makes up a small section of the total resource-wasting.Our society cannot afford long-term mass consumption of disposable products.Apart from environmental degradation, the fact that we are rumbling into a throw-away society provokes social problems.In respect of producers, “planned obsolescence” was devised, with the goal of making products break down in a relatively short time and urging customers to replace them.If an electric appliance stops working, people are disposed to buy a new one, owning to the expensive repairing expenses and the impatience to waiting for it to be examined and fixed.In addition, technique advances reduce the cost and price of electric items.This trend not only causes more resource-wasting, but stirs up the climate of squandering and fickleness as well.Regarding consumers, people used to have a sentimental attachment to their possessions, but the fast-changing society ruthlessly breaks these bonds.In the past, a television could accompany us for more than twenty years,while nowadays we will renew it in a couple of years.By and large, throw-away society has dim prospects.On the whole, though we have to admit that disposable goods have their advantages, we should put the brakes on the trend of turning into a throw-away society.The usage of throwaway products should be limited in a proper amount to eliminate the problems appearing along with it.
第四篇:托福滿分作文
托福滿分作文
很多新托福考試的考友總是在感嘆,這個世界上能拿到的好作文實在是太少了,其實很多時候不是這些作文少,而是很多考友沒有努力去發掘這些作文。這不是太傻論壇就有考友分享了自己的滿分作文。無老師第一時間轉過來,推薦給各位考友!
拿這些滿分作文都該做些什么呢?看整篇結構,要看一看這些作文的結構是怎么展開的。要仔細的讀一下,這些作文每一段的寫作目的,到底是支持還是反對,以及哪幾段支持,哪幾段反對。看段落結構,要仔細分析在一段之中,每一句話所起到的作用。到底是主題句,還是例證。看句型多樣性,要仔細想想這些作文每一句話說話的分寸。比對自己的寫法。看每一句話的時候,腦中都要思考,這句話中文是什么意思,如果是我自己來寫,我會怎么寫!并且在下一篇自己的作文中替換為這些用法。5 用詞多樣性和準確性。如果有需要的話,再背一下是最好的了,沒有輸入就沒有輸出嗎!
比如:In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays anegative role in learning information.這句話,我們自己很有可能寫的就是,In this case, computer that is a equipment of modern technology
have a bad effectin learning information.這里的差距就很十分明顯了!因此,當給你美的東西,還要有一雙發現美的眼睛!2011-8-2
Independent Writing:Does modern technology help students learn more information and learn it more quickly?
Marvelousas it looks at first sight, modern technology does not help students
learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency in most cases;
or it could work towards the opposite direction which led students to lose theirinitiative to learn and explore.First of all, one property of modern technology is latently harmful to any
learning mind – it distracts.One thing we feel about when we are searching forinformation online is that the internet, as an outstanding example of modern
technology and even regarded as the innovator of education, provides us with notonly relevant results to make use of, but also external links to click.More
than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but
ended up watching Youtube videos.In this case, computer as a representative ofmodern technology plays a negative role in learning information.We do acquiremore information with the convenient tool, yet most of them are irrelevant andin the end procrastinating would lower our learning.Also, students would easily become disoriented in the huge sea of information.Although modern technology could equip us with easy access to information, thehuge amount of resources would actually leave us discombobulated.Therefore, itis only we possess information more quickly rather than we learn it more
quickly.An illustrating example is my experience with a HK digital library
which stores almost all the books I desire.At first I enjoyed downloading them
from the database, however, one month later I ended up with hundreds of booksstored in my hardware yet none of them finished or ever clicked.Furthermore, modern technology gives students an illusion that information andreal knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse or watching videos.Butin fact this forms only the first step towards useful information and effective
learning, as learning of any kind requires full concentration and interactive
thinking, which are almost absent in the pocess of popular e-learning
experience.To summarize, modern technology does not help students learn more informationand learn it more quickly, though it does make access to information and
resources much more easily.The popular e-learning still lacks the
concentration, depth, and interaction that are the hallmarkof traditional ways
of educating and learning.2011-8-10
TPO Independent writing:我們生活的時代比父輩們年輕時生活的時代更好還是更壞? It seems that people always have a desire to compare: am I prettierthan others?Are we living in a better age? Or, as the question goes, is our life easier and
more enjoyable than it was several decades ago? I would say no, as I have
witnessed the struggle and paradox of our generation.First of all, we are now living in an age of revolution with no previous human
experience that could be referred to.Living in such a fast-changing world wouldnot be easy and comfortable at all;with everything keeps changing, everyone hasto move fast in order to catch up with the majority.However, people were muchmore stable and care-free when our grandparents were children;they did not haveto learn a second language in order to get a better job, or read a lot in order
to get informed.Yet in our age, these are supposed to be the responsibility of
young people.Another discomfort of our age is that we are experiencing interpersonal
alienation.With the development of communication technology, people in factbecome alienated with friends and relatives since they could be so easily
accessed via phone or email.Too often we feel that few of our friends are true
friends, without the traditional feeling of mutual affection which could only becreated by longtime apart.But several decades ago, people treasured their
friends and maintained relatively close interpersonal relations, which is much
more enjoyable than the estrangements we are experiencing.The last factor that has made our age so uncomfortable is the abusive use of
technology.Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human –we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices.We rushto metro station in order to catch an early train, sit in front of radioactive
computers all day long in order to get our work done, and stay in
air-conditioned rooms all summer without experiencing the natural changes
outside thick cement walls.Several decades ago, people could still live closer
to nature and make rational use of modern technology, which to me is the essenceof human living experience.However, the comparison between different times is itself ridiculous.Thecriteria could not be easily determined, and opinions are highly personal.Anyway, we have a longer life span, more advanced medical facilities, and easiertraffic than our grandparent when they were children, and we should treasure thepresent experience.Imagination of the past might only be nostalgia – if I askmy grandparents the same question, they might as well say that our life is muchbetter than the past generations.Who knows? As long as the world is stillpeaceful, life at any time would not become too difficult to handle.
第五篇:托福滿分作文
題目,環境保護和醫療改革哪個更重要)(這個是那篇據作者說是托福滿分作文)
“Water and air are the sources of people's lives, and the bases of the world.” This was said by the ancient Greek philosopher ThalesLooking at the dirty air in the sky, smelling the gross smell from Yangtze River, I can't agree with him any more.The environmental issues are always the most important to a country, especially the country I live in, China
When the environment is becoming worse and worse, I have to say it is the most serious problem in this country.My junior high classmate , Anita, lived by the end of the Yangtze River.The industrial area is around there and all the factories pollute the water day by day.Unfortunately she got cancer, like many people who lived there If the polluted environment wants to “kill” you, there is no doctor in this world can save us.Looking at her face in the funeral, I finally understood the importance of protecting environment
It is always early to improve the health care, but never the environment.My dad is the president of the city hospital, and he always tells me “If the government gives us enough money, this hospital can be the best one in this country very quick by hiring best doctors and buying newest equipment but we all know that the environment is always harder to save.After second industrial revolution in Britain, the pollution in Thames River became horrible.When the British government realized that problem, it took them tens of years to solve it.Just like my mom always told me, ” It's easy to make something dirty, really hard to make it clean again.“
It's kind of like the paradox, but many times, the environmental problems cause many health care issues Many data do prove that, the people who live in a good environment have better qualities of lives.In 1970s, LBJ, the president of United States, passed a proposal which was called Clean Water Plan It was made to make the water clean in the US, and it did work.The most amazing thing is that the data show the numbers of patients in hospital decreased rapidly during first 15 years.That does prove my point, the environmental issue is a important factor of the health care issues.As I said, we do realize the seriousness and importance of the environmental issues.We do need a ”Heaven“ with clean water and air, green trees and beautiful mountains.The ”Hell" with doctors and hospitals is always our last choice.