第一篇：英語作文高分秘籍

高考英語作文高分秘籍，非常管用哦！

（一）掌握技巧：

（1）注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局

開始部分（opening paragraph）——說出文中的要點、核心問題。

正文部分（Body paragraphs）——圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。

結(jié)尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——對全文的總結(jié)和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機(jī)地聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng)，祛除與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容.（2）確定主題句

主題句是對全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點睛”的作用。通常主題句出現(xiàn)在一篇文章的開頭，而后，全文對主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋，擴(kuò)展。

寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點：

①歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個要點

②提煉出一句具有概括性的話

③主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，抓住、吸引讀者。

（二）巧用連接詞

要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要學(xué)會正確使用連接詞

表示羅列增加

First, second, third，F(xiàn)irst, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…，On(the)one hand…on the other hand，Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also，Especially / In particular，表示時間順序

now, at present, recently，after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days，at first, in the beginning, to begin with，later, next, finally，immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment

form now on, from then on，at the same time, meanwhile，till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during，表示解釋說明

now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover

furthermore, in fact, actually

表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other

hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except(for), instead, of course, after all，表示并列關(guān)系

or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor

表示因果關(guān)系

because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result(of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示條件關(guān)系

as(so)long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示讓步關(guān)系

though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever，whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how(who, what, which, where, when, whom)

表示舉例

for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比較

be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with(to)…just like, just as，表示目的

for this reason， for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly，obviously, above all，表示概括歸納

in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we

all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion，（三）掌握常用句型：

1.in order to

為了實現(xiàn)他的夢想，他學(xué)習(xí)非常努力。

He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.2.in order that

她拼命干活以便到六點時把一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒。

She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock..3.so…that

他們太累了，除了伸懶腰什么都做不了了。

They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.4.such…that

天氣非常冷，以致于街上一個人都沒有。

It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.5.would rather do…than do

他寧愿聽他人講而不愿自己說。

He would rather listen to others than talk himself.6.prefer doing to doing

他寧愿在精心準(zhǔn)備后去做報告。

He prefers making speeches after careful preparation.7.prefer to do…rather than do

比起女人，男人總是寧可在家睡覺也不愿花那么多時間來購物。

Compared with women, men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time shopping.8.not only…but also

在短短的三年的時間里她不但完成了所有課程，而且還獲得了博士學(xué)位。

In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor’s degree.9.either…or

如果考試過關(guān)，你可以買一個MP3或去云南玩一趟。

You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.10.Neither…nor

他是一個無聊的人，既不愛娛樂，也不愛讀書。

He is a boring man.He likes neither entertainment nor reading.11.as well as

他善良又樂于助人。

He was kind as well as helpful.12.…as well

這個小孩活潑又可愛。

The child is active and funny as well.13.One…the other

你看見桌子上有兩只筆嗎？一支是紅色的，另一支是黑色的。

Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black.14.Some…others

每個人都很忙，有些在讀書，有些在寫作。

Everyone is busy in classroom.Some are reading, others are writing.15.make…+adj /n

我們所做的可以讓世界更美麗。

What we do will make the world more beautiful.16.not…until

直到他告訴我發(fā)生的事，我才了解真相。

I didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened.17.as if

他夸夸其談好像什么事都知道。

He talks a lot as if he knows everything.18.It is no use(good)doing…

假裝不懂規(guī)則是行不通的。

It’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules.19.find it + adj to do…

我覺得作聽力時有必要作筆記。

I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.20.It is + time since…

我已經(jīng)有兩年沒見他了。

It is two years since I last met him.21.It is + time when…

我到電影院時已經(jīng)八點鐘了。

It was 8 o’clock when I got to the cinema.22.It is + time before…

不久我們就會再見面的。

I won’t be long before we can meet again.23.It is…that…

我最珍視的是友誼。

It is friendship that I value most.24.It is + n / adj + that / to do…

每個人都必須懂得如何使用計算機(jī)

It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers.7大姑8大姨的英文表達(dá)

表姑

Second cousin 表叔

Second cousin 表兄弟 Father's sister's sons;male cousin 表兄弟

Maternal male cousin 表侄

Second cousin 表姊妹

Father's sister's daughters;female cousin 表姊妹

Maternal female cousin 伯父/大爺

Father's older brother;Elder uncle 伯母/大娘

Father's older brother's wife;Aunt 伯叔祖父

Father's father's brother;Great uncle 伯叔祖母

Father's father's brother's wife;Great aunt 長兄/哥哥

Older Brother 長姊/姐姐 Older Sister 大伯

Husband's older brother;brother-in-law 大姑

Husband's older sister;sister-in-law 弟婦/弟妹

Younger brother's wife;sister-in-law 兒子 Son 父親/爸爸 Father 高祖父

Great great grandfather 高祖母

Great great grandmother 公公

Husband's father；father-in-law 姑夫

Father's sister's husband;Husband of paternal aunt;uncle 姑母

Father's sister;Paternal aunt 姑爺

Father's father's sister's husband;Paternal grandaunt's husband 繼父

Step father 繼母

Step mother 襟兄弟

Husband of wife's sister 舅父/舅舅

Mother's brother;Maternal uncle 舅母/妗子 Mother's brother's wife;Maternal uncle's wife 妹夫

Younger sister's husband 母親/媽媽 Mother 內(nèi)弟/小舅子

Wife's younger brother 內(nèi)兄/大舅子

Wife's older brother 女兒

Daughter 女婿

Daughter's husband;Son-in-law 婆婆

Husband's mother;mother-in-law 妻子/老婆 Wife 嫂/嫂子

Older brother's wife;sister-in-law 嬸母/嬸子

Father's younger brother's wife;Aunt 叔父/叔叔

Father's younger brother;Uncle 叔丈母

Wife's aunt 叔丈人

Wife's uncle 孫女

Son's daughter;Granddaughter 孫女婿

Son's daughter's husband;Granddaughter's husband 孫媳夫

Son's son's wife;Grandson's wife 孫子

Son's son;Grandson 堂兄弟

Father's brother's sons;Paternal male cousin 堂姊妹

Father's brother's daughters;Paternal female cousin 同胞兄妹 Sibling 外甥

Sister's son 外甥

Wife's sibling's son 外甥女

Sister's daughter 外甥女

Wife's sibling's daughter 外甥女婿

Sister's daughter's husband

界上最最恐怖的12個英語單詞

1.honorificabilitudinitatibus 這個字是由27個字母組成的。出現(xiàn)在大文豪莎士比亞的劇本「空愛一場」Love's Labour's Lost里，意思是「不勝光榮」。

2.antidisestablishmentarianism 這個字是由28個字母組成的。根據(jù)范克和華格若爾斯編的「英語新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)辭」里面的解釋，這個字的意思是「反對教會與國家分開學(xué)說」。

3.floccinaucinihilipipification 這個字是由29個字母組成的?！概＝蛴⑽霓o典」里就有這個字，意思是「把某事的價值加以抹殺的行為或習(xí)慣」。

4.supercalifragilisticexpiadocious 這個字是由34個字母組成的。出現(xiàn)在一部名叫Mary Poppins的電影里，意思是「好」。

5.hepaticocholecystostcholecystntenterostomy 這個字是由40個字母組成的。出現(xiàn)在高德編的「醫(yī)學(xué)辭典」里,為一個外科術(shù)語，亦即在膽囊與膽管之間或腸子與膽囊之間接人工管子的手術(shù)。

6.pneumonoultramicyoscpicailicovolcanoconiosis 這個字是由45個字母組成的。出現(xiàn)在韋氏辭典第八版的版本中意思是「吸入硅酸鹽細(xì)末或石英巖灰而形成的肺塵埃沉著病」。礦工特別容易得這種病。

7.Antipericatametaanaparcircumvolutiorectumgustpoops of the Coprofied 這個字是由50個字母組成的。有個圖書館的書架上，陳列著法國作家拉伯雷著的「葛甘塔和潘特古」故事系列。其中有一本，書名就是這個長長的英文字。

8.osseocaynisanguineoviscericartilagininervomedullary 這個字是由51個字母組成的。它是人體構(gòu)造一術(shù)語，曾出現(xiàn)在英國作家皮考克(Thomas Love Peacock,1785-1866)那本名叫的小說中。

9.aequeosalinocalcalinoceraceoaluminosocupreovitriolie 這個字是由52個字母組成的。它是英國醫(yī)學(xué)作者愛德華.史特羅哲創(chuàng)造的字，專用來形容英格蘭格洛斯特夏布瑞斯陀這個地方的礦泉水成分。10.bababadalgharaghtakamminarronnkonnbronntonnerronntuonnthunntrovarrhounawnskawntoohoohoordenenthurnuk 這個字是由100個字母組成的。就出現(xiàn)在愛爾蘭作家喬埃斯作Finnegans Wake的扉頁，象征，代表亞當(dāng)和夏娃的墮落。

11.lopadotemachoselachogaleokranioleipsanodrimhypotrimmatosilphioparaomelitokatakechymenokichlepikossyphophattoperisteralektryonoptekephalliokigklopeleiolagoiosiraiosiraiobaphetraganopterygon 這個字是由182個字母組成的。它是從希臘字英譯過來的英文字，源出自希臘喜劇作家亞里斯多芬尼斯的劇本The Ecclesiazusae中。它是指由剩余的菜和牛肉函煮而成的辣味食物。

12.1913個字母，“色氨酸合成酶A蛋白質(zhì)”（一種含有267種氨基酸酶）的化學(xué)名： MethionylglutaminylarginyltyrosylglutamylserylleucylphenylalanylalanylglutaminylleucyllysylglutamylarginyllysylglutamylglycylalanylphenylalanylvalylprolyphenylalanYlvalythreonylleucylglycylaspartylprolylglycylisoleucylglutamylglutaminylsErylleucyllysylisoleucylaspartylthreonylleucylIsoleucylglutamylalanylglycylalanylasparthlalanylleucylglutamylleucylglycylisoleucylprolylphenylalanylseRylaspartylprolylleucylalanylaspartylglycylpRolylthreOnylisoleucylglutaminylasPfraginylalanylthreonylleucylarfinylalanylphenylalanylalanylalanylglycylvalythreonylprolylalanylglutaminylcysteinylphenylalanylglutamylmethionylleucylalanylleuOylisoleucylarginylglutaminyllysyhistidylprolylthreonylisoleucylprolylisoleucylglycylleucylmethionyltyrosylalanylasparaginylleucylvalylphenylalanylasparaginyllysyglycylisoleucylaspartylglutamylphenylalanylthrosylalanylglutaminylcysteinylglutamyllysylvalylglycylvalylaspartylserylvalylleucylvalylalnylaspartylvalylprolylvalylglUtaminylglutamylserylalanylprolylphenylalanylarginylglutaminylalanylalanylleucylarginylhistidylasparaginyvalylalanylprolylisoleucylprolylisoleucylphenylalanylisoleucylphenylalanylisoleucylcysteinylprolylprolylaspartylalanylaspartylaspartylaspartylleucylleucylarginylglutaminylisoleucylalanylseryltyrosylglycylarginylglycyltyrosylthreonyltyrOsylleucylleucylserylarginylalanylglycylvalylthreonylglycylalanylglutamYlasparainylarginylalanylalanylleucylprolylleucylasparaginylhistidylleucylValylalanyllysylleucyllysylglutamyltyrosylasparaginylalanylalanylprolylprolylleucylglutaminylglgycylphenylalanylglycylisoleucylserylalanylprolylaspartylglutaminylvalyllysylalanylalanylisoleucylaspartylalanylglycylalanylalanylglycylalanylisoleucylserylglycylserylalanylisoleucylvalyllysylisoIeucylisoleucylglutamylglutaminylHistidylasparaginyliSoleucylglutamylprolylglutamyllysylmethionylleucylalanylalanylleucyllysylvalylphenylalanylcalylglutaminylprolylmethionlysylalanylalanylthreonylarginylserine

第二篇：考研英語作文最新高分秘籍

考研英語作文最新高分秘籍

一、背誦、默寫范文

背誦不能不說是積極備戰(zhàn)快速提高寫作成績的一條捷徑?？忌梢赃x擇歷年真題的范文和一些與真題作文相近的文章進(jìn)行背誦。同時，基礎(chǔ)稍好些的同學(xué)，可以背一下小作文的優(yōu)秀模板，及大作文的模板框架和句式，然后依據(jù)模板進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練。

語言要求：

用詞準(zhǔn)確：用詞準(zhǔn)確是最基本的要求之一。

語法正確：語法錯誤是考試的失分點所在，在小作文的寫作中應(yīng)盡量少用縮略語和口語。句型多變：既有并列句，也有復(fù)合句，還有從句。

小作文的考查要求中會體現(xiàn)出文章的背景場合和寫作目的，考生應(yīng)針對不同情境選擇不同表達(dá)。不同的應(yīng)用文有不同的用語，建議2015年的考生對某些應(yīng)用文的格式和習(xí)慣用語加以熟悉和背誦，以便運用自如。

二、活用模板，注重素材的積累，適當(dāng)加入自己的內(nèi)容。

我們在初練寫作的時候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一個必經(jīng)的過程，只有先試用別人的東西，才能學(xué)習(xí)和積累寫作素材。模板要活學(xué)活用，不要一字不差的照抄無誤，而是要根據(jù)自己所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行更改。寫作不一定要字字句句都是難詞，長句，而是要學(xué)會運用一些常見詞的常見短語去表達(dá)，這樣才能真正顯示寫作的水平。這就要求學(xué)生在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累常用的短語或者詞組，以備寫作之用。

另外，關(guān)于寫作素材，不僅僅指寫作常用的詞匯，句型或者語法結(jié)構(gòu)，還要包括所用的事例。比如：2001年的寫作真題，要求寫“愛心”，第二段要求用實例證明主題。有的考生見題就寫“我考試面臨很大的壓力，我的朋友是如何幫助我排解壓力的”，這顯然就是素材貧乏造成的后果。題目中的“愛心”是指“大愛”，陌生人互幫互助的心態(tài)。如果寫“汶川地震，希望工程”這類事例，顯然非常符合題目要求，而且事例又廣為人知，比寫“朋友如何幫助我”更生動，更有說服力。因此，在平常的練習(xí)中要注意從閱讀中積累素材，積累詞句，而不要僅僅局限于模板之中。

三、使用諺語，增加閃光點

有些意志品質(zhì)類的文章，如果加入一句相關(guān)的諺語會讓你的文章大放光彩。但是不能直接寫句子。加一個模板句型：An ancient oriental philosopher said，“諺語”：一位古老東方的先哲曾經(jīng)說過，??有同學(xué)說西方的諺語為什么用東方的先哲呢?比如：Where there is a will, there is a way.是西方的諺語，中國也有有志者，事竟成的語句。文化都是相通的，可以放心來用。建議大家在閑暇的時候多翻看一下英文的諺語，積少成多，相信對大家一定有所幫助。

第三篇：中考作文高分秘籍

中考作文高分秘籍

一、好卷面。美觀的字，整潔的卷面。卷面是“臉”

二、巧立意。

立意新穎，別致，深刻的文章。立意 是“靈魂”。立意決定著一篇文章怎樣寫，寫什么，如何謀篇布局，如何裁剪等。立意：文章的中心論點新穎，一是要能說出別人未曾說過的話，未曾想 到的觀點；二指在別人觀點基礎(chǔ)上得出更新更深的結(jié)論；三指發(fā)現(xiàn)與別人的觀點相對或相反的看法，即所謂的“反彈琵琶”。

1要有些自己高遠(yuǎn)深刻的立意?！?要善于觀察、善于思考，對待事物要有自己獨立、獨特的立意。○

三、慎構(gòu)思。

即確定文章主題中心之后，要考慮怎么樣來表現(xiàn)這個中心，選取什么樣的材料來表現(xiàn)與謀篇布局。構(gòu)思，是立意后關(guān)鍵的一步。一篇文章的綱，應(yīng)首先想好，有了綱，文章就有層次、有條理，有輕重安排，有詳略取舍。

四、精選才。即要精心選擇新鮮、新穎的材料，以豐富或者適當(dāng)?shù)牟牧蟻肀磉_(dá)文章中心。

五、妙安排。

安排，在這里指文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，也就是把不同的材料有機(jī)的組合在一起。結(jié)構(gòu)，就是文章材料的安排，文章個部分之間的關(guān)系。在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上，有兩種很有規(guī)律、很容易掌握的方法，即小標(biāo)題法和排比段法。

小標(biāo)題法：根據(jù)需要把多個材料進(jìn)行提煉，用一個小小的標(biāo)題總領(lǐng)本部分。

排比斷法：即文章每一段落或幾個重要段落的開頭，使用排比句，構(gòu)成排比段。這種方式最適合用于抒情色彩較濃的文章。

六、美言辭。

言辭指文章的語言。生動細(xì)致或者樸實準(zhǔn)確的語言都能傳達(dá)出作者的內(nèi)心感情，優(yōu)美的語言往往領(lǐng)評卷者嘆賞，給出高分。

文章的三大要素：思想內(nèi)容；組織結(jié)構(gòu)；語言表達(dá)。

1、首先要使自己的語言美。

語言美：包括優(yōu)雅美和質(zhì)樸美。優(yōu)雅美，要求作者有較深的文學(xué)素養(yǎng)，在遣詞造句方面有獨到的功力，能將語言組織的富有美感，生動形象，使讀者如沐春風(fēng)的新鮮感受；質(zhì)樸美，體現(xiàn)在詞語的組織和句子的組織，整體風(fēng)格上要有本色，用詞準(zhǔn)確而不華麗，句式變化不多而能很好地表達(dá)情意，整體風(fēng)格給人一種質(zhì)樸、厚道的感覺。

2、要使自己的語言有鮮明的時代特征。只有保持心靈對時代的新鮮特征，及時了解語言的發(fā)展變化，才能在文章中使用富有新鮮感的詞語，才能使自己的文章具有語言新這一特征。

七、新角度。

指在表現(xiàn)同一主題各自不同的切入點，是對同一主題從不同的方面或側(cè)面進(jìn)行闡釋。在下筆之前想一想，選什么角度，用什么材料，這樣寫出來的作文才有可能是新穎的。要想寫出新穎的家角度，首先在選材和構(gòu)思上要下一番功夫。在選材和構(gòu)思上，要想一想別人寫這篇文章時大致會從什么角度去寫，會選用什么材料，把自己所了解的材料仔細(xì)的琢磨一下，看是不是獨特和新穎，是就寫下去，不是就另外再找角度寫。

八、多手法。

手法在這里指寫作文時選用到的種種表現(xiàn)方法、方式或手段，用新穎的手法來表現(xiàn)主題也可給人耳目一新的感覺，作文自然可以得高分。

表現(xiàn)手法還應(yīng)該指更廣泛的內(nèi)容，包括人稱和角色的變化，行文方式的變化，語言風(fēng)格的變化，聯(lián)想方法的變化，敘述方法的變化等。人稱和角色的變化可以使文章在手法上顯得新穎。行文方式新也是手法新穎的一種表現(xiàn)。

九、抓主流。注意文章立意的正面性和主流性，內(nèi)容思想的健康型。在要求考生寫出真實情感的前提下，更傾向于友情、親情、孝心、堅強(qiáng)、求真、友善、熱愛社會和祖國等積極向上的主題。

抓主流之一是對老師的贊美。在文章和材料上選擇表現(xiàn)老師偉大的精神、崇高品格、美好人格辛勤勞動的內(nèi)容，讓評卷者在讀你的文章時內(nèi)心充滿喜悅和歡樂，使他們在沾沾自喜之中把高分給你。當(dāng)然這種贊美是恰當(dāng)?shù)?、合適的、發(fā)自真心的，決不可虛偽、做作和肉麻。

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滿分策略：

4.1信函寫作：個人書信

語域使用：正式—使用禮貌表達(dá)，不用縮略語（對公）

半正式—可以使用縮略和口語表達(dá)（對私）

非正式（一般不考）——It depends

組成部分：稱呼、正文、落款

4.1.1格式：稱呼、落款、正文

4.1.2內(nèi)容

三段（8句）：寫作目的段、細(xì)化段、感謝或者期待。

4.1.3各種信函內(nèi)容安排

建議信：2007年及2009年P(guān)artA真題及解析：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：

Dear?

自我介紹，贊揚在先，仍需改進(jìn)，提出建議。

建議細(xì)節(jié)

期望改進(jìn)，表示感謝。

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

與投訴信比較：仍然以提建議為主：無需贊揚，直接表明寫信目的—即提建議：最后無需感謝，只需表示期待改進(jìn)。

常用句型：

I am writing with my suggestion about???

I would like to suggest that?

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful

I would like to extend my appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration

We would like to draw your attention to something you have obviously failed to notice（投訴信）

I am writing to express my concern|dissatisfaction|disappointment about?（投訴信）

To improve the situation，it is advisable for you to take the following measures（投訴信）

We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind（投訴信）

致歉信：2008PartA真題及解析

基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：

Dear?

表明寫信目的：道歉

闡述道歉原因，并提出解決方法。

再次道歉。

常用句型：

I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to ?

Here is my deepest apology for ??

I would like to express my apologies for not being able to?

I am writing to you with some embarrassment and many apologies.Excuse me for my carelessness in making such a mess

I am really sorry for the trouble.Would you mind if I ?。？

Would it be convenient for you ?？

To make up for the inconvenience caused，I would like to ??

Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.申請信：2006年P(guān)artA 真題及解析（申請信）

基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：

Dear?

告知信息來源及寫信目的突出重點的自我介紹，附簡歷

表示感謝。

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

常用句型：

I learnt from the newspaper that you are wanting an accountant and I would like to apply for the job

Sb，suggested me to write to you about the medical physicist position at ABC Med-Instrument Corporation

Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information about my undergraduate work.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss further how my qualifications meet the needs of your organization.Thank you for your time and consideration.辭職信：2005年P(guān)artA真題及解析（辭職信）：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：

Dear?，寫信目的表明要辭職。

給出辭職原因。

感謝栽培并表示抱歉。

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

常用句型：

I am sorry to tell you that I decided to quit the job of being a ?職業(yè)。

I am writing to inform you of my decision： I am going to quit my present job.Please accept my apology.I have been trying in vain to convince myself that the job is interesting.I highly appreciate the invaluable experience and happy days working here.Thank you for your patience，understanding，and trust.詢問信：考研英語大綱樣題應(yīng)用文部分（詢問信）：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：

Dear ?，自我介紹，表明寫信目的是咨詢某事。

詢問細(xì)節(jié)。

感謝及相關(guān)信息。

Your sincerely

Li Ming

常用句型：

27.I am writing this letter to inquire about ?

28.I want to/would like to know ?

29.I wonder if ?

30.Would it be possible for you to ?？

31.How should I pay for these books ？—by cash or by other means ？

32.Finally，if I order these books now，when can I get them ？ How will these books be delivered to my house？

33.I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply.邀請信：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)：

Dear?，發(fā)出邀請。

為何邀請細(xì)節(jié)。

期望參加。

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

常用句型：

We are having a farewell party/a gather together/meeting/seminar in（place）on（date）at（time）。Would you like to come？（不太正式）

It is my honor to inform you that there is an academic meeting in（place）on（date）at（time）。（正式）

We would be too glad to invite you as an expert to our school for the inquiry of studying abroad.If you have no other plans for this weekend night，will you do us a favor of going to our party？

接收邀請與謝絕邀請的表達(dá)法：都要表示感謝。

Accept the invitation：

Success is the last persistence at the toughest moment.成功是最艱難時刻的堅持。

Thank you very much for your invitation.It‘s our great pleasure to accept your invitation.Nothing would give us greater pleasure than accepting your kind invitation.Refuse the invitation：

Thank you so much for your invitation，but I have had plans at the time.If you don‘t mind，let’s make an appointment next time when you are available.I regret that I can‘t make it because of a sudden illness/full schedule/business trip.范文解析：

Dear Professor Wang，It is my honor to inform you that there is a “Culture Festival” held in mu school.Would you like to give us an excellent lecture on Phychology in the auditorium of our campus on sept.13th at 6：30 P.M.？

Since phychology has caused more and more concerns among the students，and you are an expert in the area，we all expect your acceptance and your wonderful lecture.I very much hope than you will be able to attend and give us a talk in your branch.If you have any question.Please contact me.Look forward to hearing your lecture.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

感謝信：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)

Dear?，表示感謝。

感謝緣由及內(nèi)心感受。

再次感謝，寄予希望。

常用句型：

I sincerely appreciate your kindness and generosity.Thank you ever much for the latest information.Please accept out sincerest thanks for what you have done for us.（heartfelt gratitude）

I don‘t know how to thank you for such generous behavior.It is something that I will cherish for a long time to come.I am now writing to express my great appreciation for the timely help you offered.It was considerate of you to do me a great favor.I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation.Many thanks again for your generous hospitality.Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you.范文解析：

Dear Jim，I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day，when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid，I fear that the Consequences might have been much more serious.Everynoe agrees that it was your quick-witted 9 response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome??

Although nowdays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish，we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you，this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

祝賀信：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)：

Dear?。，表示祝賀，為之高興。

祝賀緣由，勞有所獲。

寄予期望，取得更大成就。

再次祝賀。

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

常用句型：

Congratulations to you no getting the scholarship.I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations no your achievement/success/graduation.10

What wonderful news！I know how happy you must be at the news of your promotion/election.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on your graduation/getting such a good job.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.范文解析：

Dear Mr.Smith，I was very happy to learn that you have been elected President of the Seotland-China Associatioin and Iwould like，on behalf of the Chinese People‘s Association for Friendship with Foreign Countries and in my own name，to express to you our warmest congratulations.I hope that during your tenore of office the relations of friendship and cooperation that already exist between our two organizations will be further developed.Let us join our efforts to make greater contributions to the promotion of mutual understanding and friendship between the people‘s of China and Scotland.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

慰問信：

基本結(jié)構(gòu)：

Dear?，表示同情，進(jìn)行安慰，11

鼓勵其努力，在此表示同情，并希望其早日復(fù)原。

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

常用句型：

I just can not tell you how sorry I was to learn of your unhappy experience/injury/accident/divorce.I felt very sorry indeed when I was informed of your sickness.I wish there were something I could say or do to ease your sense of loss/to soften your grief.I know there were no words that can be a comfort to you now.I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health/get well again.Please don‘t hesitate to call on me if there is anything I can do now and always.范文解析：

Dear Li Gang，I was really shocked andsaddened to hear of your unhappy experience in the earthquake.There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief，but I would express my deepest sympathy.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it，and that it 12 will be useful ai your present moment.What‘s more，please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back to school.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

4.2 備忘錄/告示類應(yīng)用文寫作（Memorandum/Notice）

基本結(jié)構(gòu)：

TO：

FROM：

SUBJECT：

DATE：（month day，year）

正文

簽名

模擬題及范文：

Directions：

You are an active member of the student newspaper.The newspaper is currently looking for journalists for the summer semester.Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.Date： August 10，2005

To： All students

From： Li Ming

4.3 摘要寫作（Abstract）

This article focuses on the ?。

This thesis discuss/analyzes?。

This paper provides an overview of ?

This paper presents up-to-date information on ?

1、簡單概括

2、描寫畫面內(nèi)容，兩句話描寫一幅圖。

3、點明中心：重點又是新起點。

This is a very interesting and though-provoking picture.1 as is vividly depicted in the picture，the goal keeper thought he was too small for the gate and was afraid that he could not keep the ball from entering the gate.But what the player，who was ready to shoot，thought about the goal keeper could not help us thinking the truth of the picture it conveys.In his eyes，the goal keeper was so strong that he had almost covered the whole gate.And little did he have the chance to win.2 obviously，the two players looked at the same thing in a different angle.3（in different angles）

簡單概括

描寫畫面內(nèi)容，每幅圖分開描述，并遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。

點明中心，從不同視角看待同一問題。

2.現(xiàn)象簡介

Today，advertisements is mounting numbers are appearing on the TV screen.1 they are not only shown before and after all kinds of programs —— news，weather forecasts and quiz shows，etc.—— but even interrupt dramas and movies，2 and annoy the viewers.3

1、概括介紹

2、細(xì)節(jié)介紹：怎么個多法兒——是節(jié)目前后和中間都有

3、帶來的后果就是激怒觀眾。

3.寓意象征

What a vivid and accrate picture it is when describing the meaning of love in the dark.1 As is shown in the picture，the love is just like the light in the picture，which seems insignificant in the sun，but it certainly shines brighter in the dark.2 in other words，the darker the place is，the more precious the light will be.3 love is somewhat the same.It surely means much moer to the man who is in great difficulty than to the one who is in comforts.4

簡要評價

對畫面的簡單描述。（結(jié)合love對畫面進(jìn)行分析）

寓意說明，符合題目要求

結(jié)論：燈光在越微弱的地方越明亮，愛心在越需要的地方越有價值

Species‘extinction in America.Facing the figures，we can only admit that America’s population growth has had undesirable effect on its wildlife and will still pose a formidable threat to its wildlife resources if sufficient care is not given.3

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1、總括介紹了圖畫內(nèi)容（運用對比，強(qiáng)調(diào)后者）

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2、特別好的過渡方式：不是描述勝過描述

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3、結(jié)論：如果不足以重視，結(jié)果不堪設(shè)想

4、原因分析

（As far as I am concerned，there are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon.）1 First and foremost，the reasons for this phenomenon are that TV is the most efficient and rapid way of dissemination（傳播）information.2 As China develops its highly competitive market economy，manufacturers and sales people（salespersons）need to inform the general public of the latest commodities that are available.3 Furthermore，TV stations use the money that they earn from showing the advertisements to produce more programs.Last but not least，it is necessary to keep consumers informed of the range of（the）products that they may choose from.（原文的過渡出現(xiàn)在下一段）

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1、闡述中心，或者引導(dǎo)本段。

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2、例舉原因

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3、對已經(jīng)提出原因的拓展

However，the tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease，1 According to the given figures，the tobacco production in 1994 was 14.364 billion pounds while in 1995 it reduced to 14.2 billion pounds.This is mainly because 2 more and more people have become aware of the harm of smoking to human brings.Many of them resist the addiction to tobacco and advise people around not to smoke.Furthermore，governments of many countries realizing the serious effects of tobacco have taken effective measures to call on people to give up smoking.So I believe a healthy tomorrow of less tobacco will be achieved through efforts of every person.3

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1、闡述中心

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2、列舉原因，this 作過渡詞

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3、如果減少吸煙人群，可能產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果（注意命題的積極傾向，展望未來式很合命題者口味）

5、利弊分析

In the country，on the other hand，one can enjoy the advantages of fresh air and food，and a more relaxed（relaxing）life style.Housing is usually spacious and inexpensive in the country.I and，as for recreation，what could be more relaxing than a stroll down a country lane amid beautiful scenery？ 2 However，there are disadvantages of living in either the city or the country.3 City air tends to be polluted，and the streets are always crowded and noisy.In the country，on the other hand，the lack of stimulating activities can make a person feel bored and isolated.4

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1、列舉鄉(xiāng)村居住的優(yōu)勢

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2、對優(yōu)勢的拓展說明

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3、過渡說明：劣勢開始

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4、列舉無論城鄉(xiāng)居住皆有劣勢

6、舉例說明

It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon，but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily life.1 Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society.From departments of government to common shopping centers，many businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers.2 They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent service.3 As a matter of fact，many of these businesses claim in the same way that（比較）the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay eggs.4

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1、過渡：第一段說到可笑，下面就談不可笑——連接

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2、例子：商場、政府的承諾行為

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3、拓展：深化承諾行為的細(xì)節(jié)

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4、結(jié)論：同母雞下蛋的承諾一樣虛無沒有價值

※表示性質(zhì)，代替adj.=of +n.（小作文高分必殺）

e.g.helpful=of any help assistant=of any assistance good=of any good harmful=of any harm

The following examples will support this point.1 In schools，a unit-exam not only declares the end of the former unit，but also acts as a reminder of the preview work for the next unit.In the business field，what a CEO needs to do at the end of a year is more than review and summarize（review and summarizing）。It is the time to formulate and effective and efficient development plan for next year.2 Just turn back to the sports ground.（句號結(jié)束）although in front of the end there isn‘t a real start——arrowhead，there surely exists an invisible one sprouting（appearing）in every athlete’s mind，blooming（being）the training strategy of the preparation for next competition.3

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1、承上啟下

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2、舉例論證

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3、舉例的同時說明結(jié)論：終點又是新起點，正是這種心態(tài)成為下次比賽成功的技巧或策略。

7、判斷評論

It is clear that promise is what you claim you can do or you will do，not what you really are or you are expected to be.1 Generally speaking，it is good and sometimes necessary to make commitment to people，but promising what you must or should do can be considered a kind of cheating.2 What the cartoon really aims at is not the funny picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our society.3

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1、既點名了本段主題：談承諾，又是一個定義，起承上啟下作用。

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2、自己的建議。

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3、再次強(qiáng)調(diào)“承諾”這一社會現(xiàn)象。

8、問題建議

Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts，but also by people in all walks（職業(yè)、行業(yè)）of life.1 The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves.Thus，it‘s high time that parents，educators and the government made concerted（共同努力的，同心協(xié)力的，conert得來）efforts to put an end to this situation.2（家長，老師和政府應(yīng)該怎么做）

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1、引出本段主題，兒童教育的現(xiàn)狀，用婉轉(zhuǎn)的方式表達(dá)。

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2、本段結(jié)論：三方行動

In our life，what we need most is self-insurance and a proper view of challenges before us.1 Therefore，we should bear in mind that our competitors may not be as terrible（frightening）as expected，and our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and confidence.2 Only in this way can we overcome any difficulties and challenges.3

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1、從自己角度提出意見

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2、具體行動的方法

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3、only 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)，以及建議的價值。

9、個人選擇

All in all，I would say that living in the city is best（better），1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work（job opportunities）；2 after all，one can always spend 19 vacations in the country——and get the best of both.3

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1、選擇結(jié)果

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2、選擇原因

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3、總結(jié)

As for me，I have always led a regular life.1 By everyday exercises，I build up a strong body，2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life.3

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1、個人選擇或?qū)嵺`

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2、選擇帶來的好的后果

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3、拓展

10、現(xiàn)實運用

As we all know，children are the future of our country，Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people.1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love.The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future.When faced with difficulties，they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties.When faced with fierce competition，they can employ their knowledge，skills and experience to confront with their rival.2 This is the younger generation we can expect.3

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1、價值體現(xiàn)：孩子關(guān)乎祖國的未來。

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2、啟示：重要的原因

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3、寄予希望

2007年范文寫作

首段：圖畫描述：

This is a series of interesting and thought-provoking pictures.A goalkeeper，who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal，sees himself as a dwarf.What‘s funnier is that the football-player，preparing to kick the ball，regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal.The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound.Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges.中間段：寓意象征+舉例說明

The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her mind.What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence.（We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings.）We，undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM（the Examination for postgraduate candidates），provide a good illustration.Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well，so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination.In fact，the exam is not as difficult as they suppose，and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs.尾段：建議+展望

Accordingly，it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence.What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence.（In other words，We should be honest about the challenges we face.）only in this wa we can se a right goal.challenge it，and achieve it.Tips：

1.穩(wěn)重下體的部分是精彩的語言，即文章的高分點，希望同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)。

2.文中有下劃線的部分是范文的錯誤，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在寫作時犯這樣的錯誤。

3.再次強(qiáng)調(diào)，希望大家不要背范文，學(xué)習(xí)精彩的句式表達(dá)，背會，通過多練習(xí)掌握這些 21 句型。

小作文范文及解析

2007年P(guān)art A 真題及解析（投訴信

Directions：

Write a letter to your university library，making suggestions for improveing its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Ues “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern，I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend ma spare time.Generally speaking，the services you offer here are quite good； however，I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with，will you please prolong the time for reading？ In the daytime，most of the students are having classes，so they can‘t come to the library.Moreover，some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines，we will be very pleased.I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

2008 Part A 真題及解析（致歉信）：

Directions：

You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob，your landlord there.Write him a letter to

make an apology，and

suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Ues “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.解析

Dear Bob，I am writing to express my apology to you.Several days ago，I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house.Unfortunately，after I came back from Canada，I found it in my luggage.Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you.I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible.If necessary，I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.Once again，I feel so sorry for any inconvenrence caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

2006年P(guān)art A真題及解析（申請信

Directions：

You want to contribute to project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned，asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter in no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.（10points）

解析：

To Whom It May Concern，I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation.I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area.I would like to help two kinds of children：first，those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees，and second，those whose academic performance in school is excellent.I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary

financial aid required to accomplish my goal.I would also like to be kept informed as to the academic progress of each student every term.I have not doubt（There is not doubt）that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you.Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

推薦信：

Dear，寫作意圖：簡單介紹，自己與被推薦人關(guān)系，推薦他做什么。

推薦原因：被推薦人的相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷或個性特點，應(yīng)當(dāng)突出與寫信人的相關(guān)性。

感謝與期待。

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

解析：

Dear Sir，It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you Mr.Li Lei，an outstanding accountant，for working in your firm.Mr.Li graduated from China Financial University in 1991，majoring in accountancy，After graduation，he came to our firm to be an accountant.In 1996 he obtained the certificate of a certified accountant，and in 2001 he was promoted to the one of the chief accountants of our firm because of his excellent work.In association with me，mr.li impressed me that he was a friendly and pleasant gentleman，devoted to his firm and profession.it is surely a huge loss for our firm that he has to leave us for some personal reasons.I recommend mr.li without reservation and believe you will find him a real treasure very soon??

Yours sincerely，Li ming

2005年part a 真題及解析（辭職信）：

Directions：

Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion.but now you find that the work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss，mr.wang，Telling him your decision，stating your reason（s），and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words.Wrte it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter； use “l(fā)i ming”instead.You do not need to write the adress.解析：

Dear mr.wang，I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editior for you are your magazine for the reason of myself.Two months ago，I was accepted by the design and fashions，as a member of it.I was deeply impressed by the kindness，diligence of all staff members around me.But during the span of working here，I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more pesceful life，such as a teacher.And you know that I am not an outgoing girl.I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not reslly like.So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.please accept my apology.Yours sincerely，26

Li ming

2009年考研英語大綱樣題應(yīng)用文部分（詢問信）

Directions：

You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to

the sales department of bookstore to ask for：

detailed information about the books you want，methods of payment，time and way of delivery.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end

Of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.解析：

Dear Sir/Madam，As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May，I am writing to ask if you have

Appoches to TOEFL complied by professor Wamg Sming and published by University College

Press in 2006（注意次序）

If you have the book for sale，I‘d like to mail order it.Pleasel let me know if I can pay for it.by money order or do you accept the credit card？

I‘d appreciate it if you could send me the book at your earliest convenience by EMS to the following address：

Li Ming

Room 158，student dormitory no.8

West campus，Beijing university

Beijing，100081

Sincerely yours

Li Ming

第五篇：小學(xué)作文高分秘籍

小學(xué)作文高分秘籍

學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)

1．內(nèi)容具體、感情真摯地敘寫故事，清晰地表達(dá)自己的獨特感受和真切體驗。

2．多角度地觀察生活，發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的豐富多彩，捕捉事物的特征，力求有創(chuàng)意的表達(dá)。

3．根據(jù)中心，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)方式。合理安排內(nèi)容的先后和詳略，條理清楚地表達(dá)自己的意思。運用聯(lián)想和想象，豐富表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。

考點聚焦

1．根據(jù)既定的文題自行確定中心寫事。

2．圍繞給定的話題或者中心詞自擬題目編寫故事。

3．依據(jù)給出的材料擴(kuò)寫、改寫故事。

4．給出開頭續(xù)寫故事或者根據(jù)結(jié)尾編寫前文。

記敘文：是一種以記敘為主要表達(dá)方式的文章，在行文中還結(jié)合描寫、議論、抒情等方式來共同表現(xiàn)一定的思想主題。寫好寫“事”類的記敘文應(yīng)注意以下幾點：

1．記敘的要素

任何一件事情，都是由時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果這六個方面的內(nèi)容構(gòu)成的。作文時要把這些要素盡可能地交代清楚，也可以在自然環(huán)境或者人物語言中間接地交代。

2．記敘的結(jié)構(gòu)

所謂結(jié)構(gòu)，是指文章的組織、構(gòu)造、布局，即文章的總體表現(xiàn)形式。結(jié)構(gòu)是文章的“骨骼”，寫“事”文章的常見結(jié)構(gòu)方式有：

① 以時間推移為順序。也就是按照事件發(fā)生的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果來敘述某件事情。

② 依照空間的變換來安排。有較大的地域跨動或者游記類文章多有運用。

③ 以時間為“經(jīng)”、空間為“緯”的縱橫交錯的結(jié)構(gòu)形式。一般不止一條線索的記敘文多采用這種形式。④ 以作者的認(rèn)識發(fā)展為順序。那種以作者對某事物認(rèn)識的逐步深化為線索貫穿事實材料的記敘文常采用這種結(jié)構(gòu)方式。

3．細(xì)節(jié)描寫

寫“事”類文章的細(xì)節(jié)描寫要做到：

① 注意表現(xiàn)生活的本質(zhì)，盲目的、只顧表面現(xiàn)象的細(xì)節(jié)描寫只能屬于贅筆；

② 細(xì)節(jié)必須真實，不是來自生活的編造的細(xì)節(jié)，常會由于違背生活邏輯而損害全篇；

③ 要用到關(guān)鍵處，濫加運用會淹沒描述對象的主要特征；

④ 準(zhǔn)確簡練，避免隨意鋪陳，拖沓冗長。

魔師點化

結(jié)合以下要點努力會讓你的作文更加優(yōu)美：

① 深刻雋永的立意，② 新穎獨特的材料，③ 巧妙別致的構(gòu)思，④ 生動傳神的細(xì)節(jié)，⑤ 詩情畫意的環(huán)境，⑥ 豐富多彩的修辭，⑦ 標(biāo)新立異的個性。

①語言精彩，動作傳神 ②事件結(jié)局，開頭藏好 ③波折多多，合乎情理 ④心理時間，務(wù)必把握⑥如有事理，讓人回味

卓越思維

告訴讀者一個故事，在故事中表現(xiàn)作者的思想情感、人們的喜怒哀樂、社會的價值取向，就是最常見的寫“事”作文。寫“事”作文重在寫“事”神在言“情”，也就是用具體生動、波瀾起伏的故事表達(dá)一定的思想主題。走進(jìn)網(wǎng)絡(luò)、擁抱自然、關(guān)注熱點、研究課題、參加競賽、服務(wù)社會、善待他人、學(xué)做家務(wù)??生活處處是課堂。這些多姿多彩的課堂能開闊視野，增長才干；能鍛煉體魄，磨練意志；能使心靈得到凈化，智能得到開發(fā)??請以“這也是課堂”為題，寫一篇文章。要求： ①文體不限； ②字?jǐn)?shù)不少于500字；③文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。（2003年溫州市初中升學(xué)考試語文試卷）這是一個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的命題作文?？础白哌M(jìn)”“擁抱”“關(guān)注”等詞，知道應(yīng)該是以寫“事”為主，注意題目中的那個“也”字，它告訴我們選材范圍最好定在“課堂”之外?？梢悦枥L一次失敗的經(jīng)歷。例如“我”曾 1

經(jīng)認(rèn)為只有校園內(nèi)的課堂才是真正的課堂，直到經(jīng)受了一次挫折和失敗后才認(rèn)識到外面廣闊的世界也是課堂。也可以描述一回成功的體驗。雖然“我”平時沒有意識到“我”所關(guān)注的對象的特殊之處，忽然有一天發(fā)現(xiàn)從中受到了教益和啟迪，于是明白了許多。還可以客觀地描述一種狀態(tài)。例如從自然、書籍、網(wǎng)絡(luò)或者同學(xué)的交往中得到了許多，意識到自己的種種不足，并且認(rèn)真總結(jié)自己的心路歷程，表述“我”對“課堂”的理解。

一、作文的開頭

開頭遵循的原則：

1．向心性。開頭必須與全文的主要內(nèi)容、中心思想緊密相聯(lián)，為突出中心服務(wù)。

2．精簡性。語言要精簡，最好是開門見山。

開頭常見的毛?。?/p>

1．拐彎抹角離題千里。落筆時，總愛兜圈子。有人把它比作大頭娃娃。

2．千篇一律格式固定。開頭寫來寫去就是這么幾句話。

3．追求花樣弄巧成拙。寫得很好，表達(dá)思想感情不明白，不清楚，不真實。

常見的作文開頭：

1．點題式。開門見山，不拐彎抹角，開頭第一句就點文章的題目。初學(xué)者最好用這種方法。如《翠 鳥》的開頭：“翠鳥喜歡停在水邊的葦稈上。”又如《愛迪生》。

2．交代式。開頭就交代時間、地點、人物、事件這“四大要素”，如《視死如歸》的開頭：“一九三一年深秋（時間），王若飛同志（人物）在包頭（地點）不幸被捕（事件）”

3．描寫式?；蛎鑼懭宋锿饷玻蛎鑼憚游锿庑?，或描寫建筑外觀，或描寫周圍環(huán)境。給人一個鮮明的印象。如《燕子》的開頭：“一身烏黑的羽毛，光滑漂亮，一對俊俏輕快??”

4．設(shè)問式。開頭就提出問題，或引起讀者注意，或激發(fā)讀者思考，或造成懸念引人入勝。如《海底世界》的開頭：“你可知道，大海深處是怎樣的嗎？”

5．引用式。開頭或引用名言警句，點明中心；或引用人物語言，突出人物性格；或引用詩歌，喚起讀者共鳴；或引用俗語諺語，說明事理等等。如《桂林山水》的開頭：“人們都說?桂林山水甲天下??！?/p>

6．抒情式。開頭直抒胸臆，以情感人。如《別了，我愛的中國》的開頭：“別了，我愛的中國，我全心愛著的中國！”愛國深情一下子就出來了。

7．總起式。開頭總領(lǐng)全文。如《偉大的友誼》的開頭：“馬克思和恩格斯是好朋友。他們共同研究學(xué)問，共同??”

8．聯(lián)想式。文章的開頭或從遠(yuǎn)到近，或由此及彼，從別的事物寫起，再聯(lián)想到要寫的事物上來，供以烘托要寫的事物。如《春蠶》，開頭從春天聯(lián)想到養(yǎng)蠶，從養(yǎng)蠶聯(lián)想到母親，再回憶母親養(yǎng)蠶的情景。

9．倒敘式。從事情的結(jié)果寫起，引人入勝，再回過頭來敘述事情的原因和經(jīng)過。如《十六年前的回憶》的開頭：“一九二七年四月十八日，我永遠(yuǎn)忘不了那一天，那是父親的被難日，離現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)有十六年了?！?/p>

二、作文的結(jié)尾

結(jié)尾常見的毛?。?/p>

1．畫蛇添足。添上一些無關(guān)緊要的東西。

2．公式化?？蘸爸刑枴?/p>

常見的作文結(jié)尾：

1．自然式。事情結(jié)束了，文章也結(jié)尾了。如《麻雀》的結(jié)尾：“我急忙喚回我的獵狗，帶著它走開了?！?/p>

2．照應(yīng)式。結(jié)尾或點題，與文題遙相呼應(yīng)；或與開頭相照應(yīng)，收攏全文。如《頤和園》的結(jié)尾是：“頤和園的景色可真美啊！”與開頭：“北京的頤和園是個美麗的大公園”首尾照應(yīng)，有力地突出了中心。

3．引申式。結(jié)尾或展開聯(lián)想，由此及彼，由表及里，深化主題；或總結(jié)提高，使主題得到升華。如《高大的皂莢樹》的結(jié)尾：“想著，想著，我的心里，好像有一顆種子在生根、發(fā)芽??”

4．抒情式。結(jié)尾直接抒發(fā)作者的感情，以引起讀者的共鳴，從中受到感染，受到教育。如《再見了，親人》的結(jié)尾：“再見了，親人，我們的心永遠(yuǎn)跟你們在一起”。

5．評價式。結(jié)尾對人物或事物進(jìn)行總結(jié)、評價，表達(dá)作者的看法，突出文章的中心。如《狼牙山五壯士》的結(jié)尾：“這是英雄的中國人民堅強(qiáng)不屈的聲音，這聲音驚天動地、氣壯山河。”