第一篇：bec寫作部分總結

作文總結： 語法錯誤：

1.單詞拼寫，如“installment 分期付款的攤付金，(經常被誤用)“installation 安裝，設置，軍事設備”；”available“誤寫成availble 2.介詞或短語但配用錯，多見于固定搭配的介詞用錯，如”be satisfied with“，有的同學掉動詞be,有的人介詞搭配錯誤。“report on…”,“proposal for…”, 3.介詞后面接名詞或動名詞，而不是不定時或動詞原形。如“for to do(x)for do(x)” 應為“for doing“；“aim at doing sth.”,“aim to do sth.”“due to+名詞”“because +從句”“because of（owing to）()名詞”等。

4.句型冗雜，注意從句不要漏了先行詞“that”“which”“where”等。例：“I have heard about there was a.....“(x)應為” I have heard about that there was a...“ 5.單詞詞義和詞性變化。”produce“ ”product“ ”production“的區別等。6.主謂一致問題。

7.時態一致。如“last year.....”有明確表明過去時，用一般過去時，而不是用完成時或現在時；recently, already, since等詞經常和完成時搭配。格式錯誤：

1.信函稱呼后用逗號，用冒號或不加標點都是錯誤的。2.信函寫完一定記得署名。

3.寫report 或proposal時一定要記得左對齊，每一個部分寫完要空一格。寫作內容：

1.不要漏些信息點，這樣扣分很嚴重！

2.條理要清晰，不要東一句西一句。一般情況下采用“總-分”的形式；每段的第一句是中心句，表明自己的觀點，立場，或想法，然后根據中心句展開。內容太多可分成幾段，如果是report 或proposal，必要時用序列號羅列，但不可千篇一律都羅列。3.寫作中要寫明具體事件，理由和實例，不要用“something“ ”somebody“ ”some problems“的含糊不清字眼。（實例和實踐可以多參考范文）。

4.句子簡潔明了，句型多變，不要整篇文章下來只有一個句型:“I have...” “I think....” “I do...” 5.寫report和 proposal時盡量用客觀的語氣，多用數據，實例說話，主語非人主語。6.多用范文中的句型，如 “It is...“ ”The reasons are as follows"“it is advisable(recommended, suggested)that…”等。

第二篇：BEC寫作

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Reference ???To: Mr.R.Harrison Date: 5 April, 2008From: Tina Sub: The transferring of the Photocopy RoomBecause the complex is being decorated, the photocopy room needs moving to some other building before this Friday for a four-week period of time.Please let me know where you think to be a properly temporal site for it by 8:30 tomorrow morning.?To: Sally Date：4 May, 2008?From: Jim Sub: the meeting?The monthly sales staff meeting is to be held at 9:30 Thursday(7 May).Mr.Scott is making a presentation at the meeting.Please see to that the overhead projector and computer are ready in the meeting room before the meeting starts.?If you have any problem in your arrangement, plslet me know.??To: Mr.Braun Date：3 March, 2008From: JesicaSub: New system is working.The Training Dept.is collecting the feedback of he operation of the new system.Plssend them the report on:1.How long the system has been working in your Dept.2.What jobs it is used for.3.How it is working.The report is expected by 4 p.m.this Friday(7 March).??????

?To: J.FegusDate：3 April, 2008?From: B.SchneiderSub: If the textbook is free for the trainee.?The part time oral English course is starting soon and the list of the trainees has been collected.Before distributing the textbooks to the trainees, I’d like to check on matter: if the textbook is free for the trainees.Please let me know about this as soon as possible.???To: Fred Date：May 6From: Peggy Sub: I’m having a meeting at HQ during Wednesday and Thursday and back to the office on Friday, so you have to:1.)pick up Ms.Homyat the airport at 5:10 pm(her flight number is CJ 473)on Thursday, and take her to the Grand Hotel where a single room has been reserved for her;2.)tell Ms.Homythat I’m sorry not to be able to pick her personally as planned, but I am meeting her in the office at 10:30 on Friday.Thank you a lot.???Try to write a memo?1.Suppose you are to send a memo for the Personnel manager to all staff on the May Day holiday, which starts at 4:30 pm on the 30th April and ends at 9:00 am on the third May.2.Send a memo, in the tone of a librarian, to one of your colleagues Jesica,to remind him that the book System Analysisby J.Harding, borrowed from the company’s library 8 weeks ago, has met the returning date on 5 November.?Reference 1?To: all the staff From: Personnel Manager?Date: April 25 Sub: May Day holiday?The May Day holiday starts at 4:30 pm on April 30 and ends at 9:00 am on May 3.it will be very much appreciated if your desks could be cleared up before your leave.?Have fun.Reference 2???To: JesicaFrom: Mary from the library Date: 1,November Sub: The book needs renewingI am sending the memo to remind you that the book, System Analysisby J.Harding, borrowed from our library 8 weeks ago is due to be returned by the date on 5 November.If you do need to keep it for another more days, you are expected to get it renewed by the deadline or, regretfully, you’ll have to pay the fine after the 5th November.?3.Send a memo to one of your assistants Jimmy as to ask him collect data for your attendance of the coming conference on the latest promotion.Youmay need to know about how much money you spent on the promotion, what were the mainmeans of the promotion and what was the result(or the sales)like.Set up a deadline for the data collection so that you can be sure to obtain thatbefore you go for the meeting.Reference 3???To: Jimmy From: MaryDate:27, May Sub: Data on last promotion needed.As at the company conference on the third of June I’m presenting our last promotion for solar water-heater, I’d like to ask you to collect the data on:1.when it was prepared and the length of its operation2.how much it was budgeted and how much exactly it cost finally.3.what the turnovers were like.4.what was supposed to be the strength and weakness.Please send me the data by the first of June.Thanks a lot.???????John Lathenis General Manager at West Garden Supplies of CreschentRoad.Ipwich.John Lathensays to you today:“I’d like you to write a memo for me to our van 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likely to make diseases such as flu catching on quickly.2)the dry air in an air-conditioned room is a nuisance and caused skin bothered problem.It seems if there is to be an conditioner in our office, a moisture maker should be installed at the same time and another small office is needed for at least two staff of us.Reference

第三篇：BEC高級第六部分改錯題總結

For each sentence, find the unnecessary word.If there is no mistake in the sentence, write correct.They use their time more productively and are less stressed.Correct Even though it is not yet clear how big the contract will be, but it is expected to grow steadily as more and more management training is gradually outsourced.英語中以even though（雖然）引導表示讓步的狀語從句，主句不再加but。Staying with a host family gives participant even more of exposure to the target language and 4 helps them to make immediate use of the language they have learned.Correct

形容詞more后面直接跟名詞。Even more exposure to ?It also provides an opportunity for them to make network with their counterparts.Network 在此不作“網絡”解。該詞在現代商務英語中可作動詞，意為“建立人際網或關系網”。其名詞為networking(人際網，關系網)With a reference to your letter dated 13 November…

With reference to(就?., 關于?.)是固定搭配，不可隨意添加冠詞。This can help them to achieve their learning objectives.Correct

Help sb.to do something It was also found that inflexible working hours are a certain major grievance among staff at all levels.Certain作定語表示“某個，某種”，在文中與前后詞缺乏語義上的貫通。此句意為“在各級員工中最主要的不滿是死板的工作時間。” Octacon suspects that a disgruntled employee who has been leaking crucial details to their competitor.這里has been leaking充當suspect后面賓語從句的謂語，不存在定語從句關系。This would be illegal, of course, but without a proof there is little Octacon can do.Proof 作“證據”，總稱為不可數名詞。This is how done by “scanning”, passing each item over a device reads the bar-code on it and automatically registers it down in the till.文中的意思是“掃描之后自動登錄”，在這里“register”是及物動詞，后面不需要加副詞down.They provide bags, often help to pack purchases, and change paper till rolls as being necessary.句中“as necessary” 是“as it is necessary”的省略形式，一般使用過程中只需用“as necessary” 可以表達相同的意思，所以“being”是多余的。Working overseas can offer you a once in a lifetime opportunity to live.Correct Working overseas can build the friendships in a very different environment.多余詞為the, 表示特指或后面帶有后置定語是加定冠詞the, 而這里的relationships不屬于這兩種情況，所以不加the.In addition to being resourceful, and you must be able to show sensitivity to cultural differences.介詞短語in addition to ?作狀語，不能與后面的主句形成并列關系，所以不能用表示并列的連詞連接。We will provide you a comprehensive package which includes free travel.通常provide 的固定搭配是：provide sb.with something,或 provide something to sb.而不能說provide sb.something.Goods sold by seller have to be delivered to the potential buyer abroad.Correct The delivery of goods is made possible by shipping to service.As basically, some 98% of world trade is having conveyed by sea transport.Ordering is easy and delivery fast.Correct We will inform you immediately should any items be out of stock.Correct Dawkin being strong in London and other big cities, and unlike Highway concentrates its efforts outside the major population centers.Customer service is included every employee’s responsibility.It has become so relatively complex and inclusive.Rising costs of sugar or cocoa may be force Hershey to raise its prices.Many companies prefer to buy multiple sources to avoid being depending from a single supplier.

第四篇：BEC寫作QUESTION1

BEC寫作范文QUESTION1

HEADLINE

Below is a report on the changes in turnover for three kinds of outlet,owed by one company, over a three-year period.The charts below shows sth given by customers in sth

Performance Report 2011-2012

Introduction

The aim of this report is to describe the company’s performance in the years 2011-2012

This report outlines the development of profits in three plants, in London… and describe the staffing situation in each plant.Article

The highest overall sth of number pounds was obtained/reached , on the other hand, the smallest turnover was made in sth.注意按順序寫，否則就是沒邏輯

Plummeted to about 1000 in 2012

Almost maintain this position throughout /remained almost unchanged Turnover rose steadily from 2000

-reaching it’s peak in 2012 with 1000(reach a low at 7.5 million)(peaked in the second quarter with earning exceeding the 4 million level.)

A slight increase of 100 in 2012

In conclusion, 把前面的總結一遍

不出數字者死。

Whereas

Said something negative/positive 想不出就用這個

結構上要變換： asked about… looking into… sth is… people say that總之不能一樣 否則就是BAND2 OR BAND3

連續下降不需要寫所有數據 Bristol employed 600 people and reached profits of 12 million in the first quarter.The profits plummeted steadily to 9 million in the last quarter.Are likely to maintain

換段之后可以直接出現名詞，例如：

TV sets, on the other hand

Increase during the time from xx to xx.再次上升soar once again to xx during xx.有波動： are likely to fluctuate starting off at 5000, sakes will increase to 10000 during the time, only to decrease to 5000 during the time.比例： ratio is xx to xx in a time, the first representing the number of women and the latter-men.In the group 44 to 49 the split is slight(29 male to 28 female)

The difference reaches 20 in range 50 to 59, with 39 male directors and 19 female.women hold the position in comparison to 21 men.Ending at 最后一個數據

背誦 higher4 test3

Regarding the passenger revenue during 2005 it started around 280 in the first quarter, and increased slowly to around 300 in the third quarter.Then it fell to around 290 at the end of the year.In 2006 the revenue increased steadily to 330 during the second quarter before falling rapidly to around 230 in the 3rd quarter ending at 225 at the end of the year.The percentage of trains arriving on time stayed stable at around 88% during the 1st and 2nd quarter in 2005 and then decreased to 85% in the 3rd quarter before recovering at around 87% at the end of 2005.Till the 2nd quarter in 2006 the percentage decreased steadily to 85% before falling rapidly to 68%(3rd quarter)and recovering to 75% at the end of 2006.Conclusion

It was concluded that sth will be the company’s core product area in the following year.

第五篇：BEC商務英語寫作

BEC商務英語寫作范文（1）

NOTICE OF OPPOSITION TO ZONING REQUEST

An application has been filed by [name of applicant] for a [variance，exception，special use permit] to permit [purpose for zoning request] at[address]in the City of[city]，County of [county]，State of[state]

The property in question is presently zoned for[zoning]，and the adjacent property is

[zoning]

As property owners in the area，the undersigned do hereby request that the pending application mentioned herein be denied by the [name of commission]on the following grounds：

[grounds for petition]