第一篇：高考開放式英語寫作訓(xùn)練

高考英語議論文寫作“三年四步走”

【摘要】學(xué)生高考英語寫作成績的好壞，歷來是檢驗(yàn)高中教師英語教學(xué)效果的一塊“試金石”。一篇高水準(zhǔn)的高考英語臨場作文，通常是優(yōu)教優(yōu)學(xué)的客觀體現(xiàn)。目前，在高考英語寫作教學(xué)中，教師過于強(qiáng)調(diào)寫作技巧、忽略寫作基本功的現(xiàn)象十分普遍，存在著一種把“作文考場應(yīng)對策略”視為取勝法寶的短視教學(xué)行為：為學(xué)生炮制各種考前文本框架；要求學(xué)生強(qiáng)記開篇套句、中間鋪陳套句和結(jié)尾套句；要求學(xué)生背記各種復(fù)合句、經(jīng)典句等。這也許一時(shí)能起到一定的瞬間效果；然而，這種忽略學(xué)生真實(shí)能力培養(yǎng)、本末倒置的作文教學(xué)法，不僅會(huì)把教學(xué)引入死胡同，而且還會(huì)嚴(yán)重制約學(xué)生英語寫作過程中的思維活躍和思想表達(dá)的自由。

【關(guān)鍵詞】高考 英語 寫作 四步走

在目前的高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練中，強(qiáng)調(diào)寫作技巧，忽略寫作基本功訓(xùn)練的現(xiàn)象很普遍，存在著一種把“作文考場應(yīng)對策略”視為取勝法寶的短視教學(xué)行為：為學(xué)生炮制各種考前文本框架；要求學(xué)生強(qiáng)記開篇套句、中間鋪陳套句和結(jié)尾套句；要求學(xué)生背記各種復(fù)合句、經(jīng)典句。這也許一時(shí)能起到一定的瞬間效果；然而，這種忽略學(xué)生真實(shí)能力培養(yǎng)、本末倒置的作文教學(xué)法，不僅會(huì)把教學(xué)引入死胡同，而且還會(huì)嚴(yán)重制約學(xué)生英語寫作過程中的思維活躍和思想表達(dá)的自由。

在高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練中，許多教師把“作文考場應(yīng)對策略”當(dāng)作教學(xué)核心：如何審題、如何抓要點(diǎn)、如何遣詞造句、如何謀篇布局等。這些寫作基本功固然重要；然而，如果一個(gè)學(xué)生不具備基本的英語思維，不注重漢英思維轉(zhuǎn)換，不能嫻熟自如地運(yùn)用英式思維表達(dá)自己的所思所想，即使在突擊式“作文考場應(yīng)對策略”的幫助下僥幸過關(guān)，也很難在其今后的個(gè)人發(fā)展中形成一種自身的英語寫作能力。

寫作是思想與情感的表達(dá)，它的特性在于個(gè)性的獨(dú)立體現(xiàn)，在于思維角度的多維，在于感悟上的差異性。在寫作教學(xué)上，如果千人一面、千篇一律地對學(xué)生進(jìn)行模式化的雕塑訓(xùn)練，其結(jié)果不僅會(huì)抹殺學(xué)生的思維個(gè)性，限制他們思維角度的多維，而且還會(huì)挫傷他們的思維積極性和自由表達(dá)思想的熱情。

訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的英語寫作能力，讓他們在高考應(yīng)試中寫出一篇高分作文，這并非英語教學(xué)的終極目的；從真正意義上說，是通過寫作訓(xùn)練來提升他們的個(gè)人素質(zhì)，從而為他們將來的個(gè)性發(fā)展奠定基礎(chǔ)。因此，那種教學(xué)方式上“急功近利、冒險(xiǎn)通關(guān)”的思想，只會(huì)把學(xué)生引入一片狹小的天地，很難對他們的長期發(fā)展帶來裨益。

現(xiàn)在是一個(gè)需求能力多元的時(shí)代，教師應(yīng)從人云亦云的各種“考場應(yīng)對策略”中解脫出來，從根本上去思考如何真正有效地訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的英語寫作基本功，如何提升他們寫作時(shí)的英式思維，如何通過訓(xùn)練達(dá)到短期教學(xué)目標(biāo)與長期教學(xué)目標(biāo)的有效結(jié)合，如何把階段能力培養(yǎng)與終生能力培養(yǎng)合二為一。

學(xué)生在緊張的高考應(yīng)試中寫出思維流暢、表意準(zhǔn)確、語言地道、結(jié)構(gòu)完整的英語作文，絕非一日之功，也絕非各種“作文考場應(yīng)對策略”所能企及的。

進(jìn)入高中后，教師在英語作文訓(xùn)練上應(yīng)打持久戰(zhàn)，要抓學(xué)生的“三年之功”，擬定嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)挠?xùn)練計(jì)劃，制定適宜的實(shí)踐步驟，從而推動(dòng)作文訓(xùn)練的有序進(jìn)程，為

他們開拓一片思維表達(dá)的快樂天空。

在多年的高中英語寫作教學(xué)中，我也經(jīng)歷過“力氣下了不少，卻收效甚微”的苦惱，也曾有過迷惘無措，“流了汗水仍然毫無收獲”的尷尬。通過反思與實(shí)

踐，實(shí)踐與反思，我的英語寫作教學(xué)效果有了極大的提升。同時(shí)，我也在這種“窮

則思變”的陣痛中獲得了教學(xué)靈感。在那種“無路時(shí)方能找到出路”的喜悅中，漸漸形成了自己的一套寫作教學(xué)與訓(xùn)練方法。

我把這套寫作教學(xué)與訓(xùn)練方法稱之為：高考英語議論文寫作“三年四步走”

第一步：高一全年，語法促表達(dá)，單句思維訓(xùn)練；

第二步：高二上期，段落促表達(dá)，文段思維訓(xùn)練；

第三步：高二下期，篇章促表達(dá)，短文思維訓(xùn)練；

第四步：高三全年，審美促表達(dá)，提煉思維訓(xùn)練。

第一步：高一全年，語法促表達(dá)，單句思維訓(xùn)練；

在高考議論文寫作中，如果學(xué)生想靈活準(zhǔn)確地使用相應(yīng)詞匯來表達(dá)自己的各

種思想，就必須具備下列條件：詞匯豐富，不能過于單一；語法準(zhǔn)確，清晰表達(dá)

思想；英式思維，擯棄漢式英語。

高考英語議論文是很多考生的一個(gè)瓶頸。在這道題上，相當(dāng)部分的考生難以

取得高分；要攻克這一難關(guān)，絕非一日之功，學(xué)生必須具備豐富的詞匯積累，準(zhǔn)

確的語法知識，以及嫻熟的英式思維。這就要求教師在高一階段加大學(xué)生的詞匯

積累，夯實(shí)語法知識，強(qiáng)化英式思維。

1）詞匯積累

在詞匯積累上，教師應(yīng)注重授人以漁，教給學(xué)生自我積累詞匯的過硬本事；

而要達(dá)到這一目的，就必須腳踏實(shí)地走“語音----構(gòu)詞----識記”這條教學(xué)老路。

語音：音標(biāo)人人過關(guān)，認(rèn)得清讀得出；拼讀英語生詞要像讀漢語拼音那樣

脫口而出。

構(gòu)詞：讓學(xué)生了解英語構(gòu)詞方法及規(guī)律，即前綴---詞干---后綴。讓學(xué)生學(xué)

會(huì)分解詞匯，像記漢字的偏旁部首那樣去記憶。

識記：讓學(xué)生死記與巧記相結(jié)合，分類記憶與歸納記憶相結(jié)合，短期記憶

與長期記憶相結(jié)合，定額記憶與自由記憶相結(jié)合，閱讀記憶與操練記憶相結(jié)合等。

在“語音----構(gòu)詞----識記”這一教學(xué)過程中，教師必須是學(xué)生的引導(dǎo)者和伴行者。對學(xué)生詞匯的積累數(shù)量，教師要進(jìn)行階段性表格統(tǒng)計(jì)，對學(xué)生的詞匯運(yùn)用程度進(jìn)行把握。要對學(xué)生提出短期和長期記憶目標(biāo)，并借助于各種形式的檢查來推動(dòng)他們高中三年的詞匯記憶過程。

2）語法知識在語法教學(xué)上，教師應(yīng)注重語法主干----時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)教學(xué)。在學(xué)生對基本的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)牢固掌握并達(dá)到運(yùn)用自如的基礎(chǔ)上，再開始其他語法知識的延伸教學(xué)。

延伸教學(xué)的內(nèi)容包括名詞性從句、定語從句、狀語從句、虛擬語氣、非謂語動(dòng)詞、主謂一致、倒裝與省略等。主干與延伸的關(guān)系，也就是“點(diǎn)和圓”的關(guān)系：一切延伸知識的教學(xué)，都圍繞“時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)”這個(gè)核心點(diǎn)；反過來，再借助“核心點(diǎn)”的牢固掌握，進(jìn)而促進(jìn)“延伸知識”的提升。在“核心點(diǎn)”與“延伸知識”交互促進(jìn)、反復(fù)循環(huán)的過程中，讓學(xué)生認(rèn)識各個(gè)語法要點(diǎn)的關(guān)鍵內(nèi)涵，從而提高對簡單句和復(fù)合句的認(rèn)知水平。

在語法教學(xué)進(jìn)度上，教師不能拘泥于教材的安排，盡量做到語法集中教學(xué)，也就是在高一階段下大力氣集中完成“時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)”這一“核心點(diǎn)”的教學(xué)，完成名詞性從句、定語從句、狀語從句、虛擬語氣、非謂語動(dòng)詞、主謂一致、倒裝與省略等“延伸知識”的教學(xué)。

教師在高一階段要為學(xué)生提煉出一個(gè)整體語法框架表，讓他們對高中英語語法有一個(gè)語法學(xué)習(xí)“路線圖”。如果在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到問題，他們可以去反查各個(gè)語法要點(diǎn)和規(guī)律。

有了詞匯，掌握了語法結(jié)構(gòu)，就可進(jìn)行單句訓(xùn)練。

3）單句訓(xùn)練高一學(xué)生由于英語底子薄,要提高他們的寫作水平必須從基礎(chǔ)著手，提高其單句的寫作能力。在單句訓(xùn)練上，應(yīng)當(dāng)重復(fù)訓(xùn)練英語簡單句的五種基本句型。英語五種基本句型如下：

句型一： S +V（主＋謂）

句型二： S +V +P（主＋系＋表）

句型三： S +V +O（主＋謂＋賓）

句型四： S +V +IO +O（主＋謂＋間賓＋直賓）

句型五： S +V +O +C（主＋謂＋賓＋賓補(bǔ)）

對這五種基本句型的訓(xùn)練，教師可采取下列訓(xùn)練法：語法訓(xùn)練法、翻譯法、仿寫法、改錯(cuò)法、典句摘抄法。

當(dāng)這五種基本句型的訓(xùn)練達(dá)到一定程度，教師可以在此基礎(chǔ)上拓展訓(xùn)練高級句型，如含有名詞性從句、定語從句、狀語從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、虛擬語氣、非謂語動(dòng)詞、主謂一致、以及倒裝的復(fù)雜句型寫法訓(xùn)練。

單句訓(xùn)練的目的：一是鞏固學(xué)生的英語語法；二是轉(zhuǎn)換學(xué)生的漢式思維；三是熟練運(yùn)用不同句型自由表達(dá)思想。

第二步：高二上期，段落促表達(dá)，文段思維訓(xùn)練；

段落表達(dá)訓(xùn)練，也就是讓學(xué)生就某一現(xiàn)象、某一事件、某一行為發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。

在這一階段，教師只要求他們寫一小段英語，即可論及各種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象、也可發(fā)表自己的生活感悟；即可寫自然現(xiàn)象的觀察洞見，也可評議人倫道德。段落長短不限，但要求語言具有一定檔次，做到言之有物、言之有理。

堅(jiān)持不懈地對學(xué)生進(jìn)行這種小段訓(xùn)練，即可鍛煉他們思維的精準(zhǔn)性，也可提他們的思維個(gè)性；而且，在減輕篇幅長度的同時(shí)，還能給他們一個(gè)寬松的提煉語句水平的空間。在這一階段，教師的批改和糾正是學(xué)生語言和思維得以提升的關(guān)鍵。

單句訓(xùn)練的目的是為段落訓(xùn)練服務(wù)的，一個(gè)單句只能表達(dá)思想的一個(gè)點(diǎn)，而段落則可表達(dá)思想的一個(gè)面。因此，在段落訓(xùn)練上，不僅要求單句的準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，而且要求語句之間的思維連貫。

段落思維訓(xùn)練：

1）訓(xùn)練段落的主旨性段落主旨訓(xùn)練，就是讓學(xué)生就某一現(xiàn)象提煉自己的思想觀點(diǎn)，并圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)出自己的段落主旨。這就需要教師培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的歸納總結(jié)能力。

2）訓(xùn)練段落的完整性段落主旨是通過拓展句得以呈現(xiàn)的。表意準(zhǔn)確的拓展句，在詮釋主旨、分析主旨、升華主旨的同時(shí)，也給人一種一氣呵成的段落完整性。這種段落完整性訓(xùn)練，不僅可以提高學(xué)生思想表達(dá)的凝練程度，還可以杜絕他們作文中的東扯西拉，漫無邊際。

3）訓(xùn)練段落的邏輯性段落行文時(shí)，要求學(xué)生做到思想表達(dá)的邏輯性，即

寫作時(shí)圍繞一個(gè)主旨，有條有理，脈絡(luò)清晰，說理充分，合乎邏輯。

4）訓(xùn)練段落的流暢性就是不僅要求語句表達(dá)流暢，同時(shí)還需思維的流暢。

語句表達(dá)流暢，就是要求盡量寫出規(guī)范地道的英語句子，表意準(zhǔn)確；思維流暢，就是要求思辯過程中的承上啟下、合理有度、思路清晰。

第三步：高二下期，篇章促表達(dá)，短文思維訓(xùn)練；

在學(xué)生具備了一定的段落寫作水平后，教師可以抓住時(shí)機(jī)進(jìn)行議論文的篇章訓(xùn)練。訓(xùn)練的內(nèi)容為：

1、結(jié)構(gòu)訓(xùn)練，如何立論、如何論證、如何結(jié)論，也就是訓(xùn)練他們提出問題、分析問題、解決問題的能力；

2、語言訓(xùn)練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，高度概括，語義清晰，生動(dòng)形象；

3、思維訓(xùn)練，嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)乃季S，緊扣主旨擇意立論；形象的思維，從具體到抽象；理性的思維，條分縷析地展開議論；創(chuàng)新的思

維，展現(xiàn)個(gè)性表達(dá)。思維，被恩格斯譽(yù)為“世間最美麗的花朵”。在議論文寫作上對學(xué)生進(jìn)行一定的“思維”訓(xùn)練，是從根本上提高學(xué)生寫作能力的良方。

1）、結(jié)構(gòu)訓(xùn)練議論文的格式由三個(gè)部分組成：立論部分；論證部分；結(jié)論部分。立論部分，鮮明地提出中心論點(diǎn)，即文章的主題；論證部分，擺出有利的事實(shí)，對論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行嚴(yán)密的論證，要求圍繞中心論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析對比、歸納演繹、推理總結(jié)；結(jié)論部分，在文章的結(jié)尾得出綜合性結(jié)論。

一篇高水準(zhǔn)的議論文，必定是由高水準(zhǔn)的段落構(gòu)成的。立論、論證和結(jié)論這三個(gè)段落的思想光芒，將匯聚成一篇議論文的整體光芒。

立論：在立論訓(xùn)練中，教師可通過某一現(xiàn)象，訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的獨(dú)立思維能力，讓他們透過現(xiàn)象看本質(zhì)，從不同的角度提出自己獨(dú)特的觀點(diǎn)和看法，確立自己新穎的論點(diǎn)來。與此同時(shí)，教師可以收集一些英語經(jīng)典議論文的立論段落，通過分析和對比，讓學(xué)生從中受益，獲得啟迪。

論證：在論證訓(xùn)練中，教師可讓學(xué)生借助英語思維，對某一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行邏輯推理。既要語言規(guī)范準(zhǔn)確，又要推理有序，對學(xué)生來說，的確有很大的困難。教師可以提出某一論點(diǎn)，借助“頭腦風(fēng)暴”形成課堂上的“群雄舍辯”，讓學(xué)生在這種思維互補(bǔ)、彼此啟迪的過程中獲得自己的個(gè)性論證思路。此外，還要提倡學(xué)生的個(gè)性思維，鼓勵(lì)他們的冷性思考，養(yǎng)成獨(dú)立思索的習(xí)慣。

結(jié)論：不同的推理，會(huì)得出不同的結(jié)論。教師要訓(xùn)練學(xué)生基于論證部分的分析判斷來達(dá)到反饋論點(diǎn)、驗(yàn)證論點(diǎn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)論點(diǎn)的效果。

在結(jié)構(gòu)訓(xùn)練階段，對學(xué)生習(xí)作中凸顯出的睿智語言、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)推理、深度視點(diǎn)，教師要不吝表揚(yáng)、大加贊賞、充分鼓勵(lì)。教師要定期評析優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生習(xí)作；同時(shí)，教師不能光說不練，也要就同一話題拿出自己的“下水文章”，讓學(xué)生在對比與感悟中更真切地體味寫作的無窮魅力。

2）、語言訓(xùn)練議論文的語言概括性強(qiáng)，通常是利用比較抽象的詞語來表現(xiàn)豐富的內(nèi)容。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、高度概括、語義清晰、形象生動(dòng)是議論文的語言特色。教師可精選一些議論文來分析文中的語言，讓學(xué)生感悟文中的準(zhǔn)確性、概括性、形象性等語言風(fēng)格，繼而提高他們的語言水平。

這種借助經(jīng)典文章分析來獲取議論文語言風(fēng)格的方法，是學(xué)生議論文語言水平提升的一條必經(jīng)之路。即可讓學(xué)生直接感受地道英式思辯語言的魅力，也可讓他們習(xí)得地道英式思辯語言的常規(guī)句式。除此之外，還可借助仿寫、摘抄典句的方法來學(xué)習(xí)英語議論文的語言風(fēng)格。

3）、思維訓(xùn)練在議論文寫作的教學(xué)過程中，教師必須借助一定程度的思維訓(xùn)練，來提高學(xué)生的思想認(rèn)識水平。

高考英語議論文寫作通常要求學(xué)生在120詞，約12句的短文中完成思想的表達(dá)與呈現(xiàn)。由于詞數(shù)限制，在思辨過程中，即不能漫無邊際、天馬行空，又不能言之無物、不切要點(diǎn)。要想讓學(xué)生在有限的文字內(nèi)達(dá)到議論文主旨明確、論證充分、結(jié)論深刻基本要求，教師就必須在立論思維、論證思維及結(jié)論思維訓(xùn)練上很下功夫。

立論思維訓(xùn)練：必須在3句內(nèi)提出論點(diǎn)；做到開門見山，提綱挈領(lǐng)。

論證思維訓(xùn)練：必須在6句內(nèi)完成論證過程；論證方式不限，可舉例、對比、歸納，也可演繹、推理、因果。但無論借助哪種論證方法，都必須做到語言客觀，表意精準(zhǔn)，句式規(guī)范。

結(jié)論思維訓(xùn)練：必須在3句內(nèi)圍繞論點(diǎn)作出結(jié)語，對論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)。其目的就是揭示文章主旨，對全文內(nèi)容給予歸納、概括、總結(jié)。

第四步：高三全年，審美促表達(dá)，唯美思維訓(xùn)練。

由于高一高二兩年的前期基本功訓(xùn)練，在進(jìn)入高三備考階段后，教師對學(xué)生議論文訓(xùn)練的側(cè)重點(diǎn)應(yīng)轉(zhuǎn)移到文章的審美上來。就一篇高考英語議論文而言，其審美要求包括以下幾個(gè)方面：結(jié)構(gòu)美、視角美、語言美、思辨美。

（1）、結(jié)構(gòu)美：

在英語議論文教學(xué)實(shí)踐中，學(xué)生經(jīng)常犯的一個(gè)通病就是：文章從外在形式上看，的確是三個(gè)段落；仔細(xì)一讀，思路不清，沒有內(nèi)在的思辨統(tǒng)一性，給人牽強(qiáng)附會(huì)的感覺；形式為三個(gè)段落，思想上卻看不出層次。針對這種情況，在語篇結(jié)構(gòu)的審美訓(xùn)練上，教師要求學(xué)生熟練把握議論文“總—分—總”的行文規(guī)律，讓閱卷者在有著密切內(nèi)在聯(lián)系的三個(gè)段落里，清楚明晰地感知文中的論點(diǎn)、論證、及結(jié)論；要求學(xué)生在注重文章外在的“總—分—總”形式的同時(shí)，更要注重論述過程中思辯上的“總—分—總”，也就是，形式和內(nèi)容的有機(jī)統(tǒng)一。

（2）、視角美：

在論點(diǎn)提出上，要訓(xùn)練學(xué)生獨(dú)特的視角。培養(yǎng)他們在思考中辨析，在辨析時(shí)思考的能力，從而真切感受全新發(fā)現(xiàn)的美感和新穎思辨的魅力。要訓(xùn)練學(xué)生獨(dú)到的思想和獨(dú)特的感受，要求他們能透過現(xiàn)象的層面，提出個(gè)性話題，給人一種視角美。

（3）、語言美：

由于高考英語議論文詞數(shù)的限制，教師應(yīng)訓(xùn)練學(xué)生論述語言的美感：生動(dòng)、形象、清楚、流暢。要求學(xué)生在闡述理念時(shí)體現(xiàn)或莊或諧，或張或馳、或排比或反問等語言風(fēng)格，追求語言的具體、形象及感染力。

（4）、思辨美：

思辨是議論文理性表達(dá)思維的一個(gè)重要方法。就一篇議論文的主旨而言，思辨就是從紛繁中理出秩序、從謬論中得出真理的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)思維過程。訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的思辨美，教師應(yīng)培養(yǎng)他們對作文命題或作文材料的獨(dú)到認(rèn)識，培養(yǎng)他們在論證過程中精辟、深刻、周詳?shù)乃急嫠剑约八急娴膶哟涡浴?/p>

高考英語議論文寫作是一個(gè)極具挑戰(zhàn)的教學(xué)難題，有語言水平無思維水平難出美文；有思維高度無語言高度也難出美文。這就要求教師在議論文教學(xué)中堅(jiān)守一份執(zhí)著，本著一種對學(xué)生未來發(fā)展負(fù)責(zé)的務(wù)實(shí)態(tài)度，在訓(xùn)練上要打持久戰(zhàn)，在方法上要循序漸進(jìn)。堅(jiān)決擯棄把“作文考場應(yīng)對策略”視為取勝法寶的短視教學(xué)行為。花三年之功，費(fèi)三載心血，加上一步一臺階的教學(xué)思路，不愁目標(biāo)達(dá)不到，不愁學(xué)生寫不出好文章。

第二篇：高考英語寫作系列-優(yōu)秀(開放式作文)

優(yōu)秀范文(開放式作文)

An Interesting Thing

一件趣事

情景內(nèi)容

Last month your parents were both on a business trip, and you were left home alone for a few days.Tell your friends what a difficult(or happy)time you had during those days.范文

I really had a difficult time.My parents would wake me up every morning, but during those days I had to get up myself.On the first night I set the alarm at 6 o’clock, but it didn’t wake me up at all the next morning.I was scolded for being late by my teacher.Afterwards, I bought three new clocks and set them all together.What noisy mornings I had!

on a business trip 出差

be left home alone 被單獨(dú)留在家中

set the alarm at 6 o’clock 把鬧鐘調(diào)到六點(diǎn)鐘

be scolded for being late 因遲到而被責(zé)備

I Have A Dream

我有一個(gè)夢

情景內(nèi)容

Have you ever had a dream about your splendid future or imagined something unreal but interesting or meaningful? Tell your close friend about it now.范文

I have a dream that I am always young.Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want.Moreover, I don’t have to worry about old age during which I even can’t take care of myself.I know that my dream will not come true.However, I think it is lucky that I am young now.So I will treasure my time, enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.close friend 親密的朋友

have enough energy to do everything 有足夠的精力做一切事情

moreover 并且，更進(jìn)一步

worry about old age 害怕年老

take care of myself 照顧自己

come true 變成現(xiàn)實(shí)

treasure my time 珍惜時(shí)間

Tell Him or Her What He or She Should Do

告訴他/她應(yīng)做些什么

情景內(nèi)容

One of your close friends tells you, “I’m suffering from depression.I have trouble sleeping.I’m often tired.When I think about the future I feel hopeless about it.I don’t enjoy anything.I’m never happy.I don’t laugh or smile any more.”You would like to help him / her to find one or more solutions.范文

First of all, you’d better try to find an adult you can trust to talk to.For example, your parents are a good place to start, but if that doesn’t work, try teachers or someone else, and simply tell this person about yourself and how you feel.It sometimes seems like everyone else in the world is happy and you are the only one who is miserable.You will be surprised to learn that you are completely normal.I hope this helps and the next day will be better.suffering from depression 正處于沮喪/抑郁之中

feel hopeless 感覺沒有希望

I don’t laugh or smile any more.我不再笑

that doesn’t work 那不起作用

you are the only one who is miserable

你是世界上唯一遭受苦難的人

Learn From Lei Feng

向雷鋒學(xué)習(xí)

情景內(nèi)容

Today is March 5th.To learn from Lei Feng, at 3∶30 p.m., my classmates and I went...范文

Today is March 5th.To learn from Lei Feng, at 3∶30 p.m., my classmates and I went in groups separately to visit some old teachers who had retired from our school.We chatted with them for a while, and then began to do some cleaning for them.Everyone worked very hard and we really felt glad we were able to do something for the old teachers.We hoped to have more chances to take part in such activities.visit some old teachers who had retired from our school

看望從我們學(xué)校退休的老教師

chat with sb 和某人聊天

do some cleaning 打掃衛(wèi)生

have more chances to take part in such activities

有更多的機(jī)會(huì)參加這樣的活動(dòng)

Misunderstanding

誤會(huì)

情景內(nèi)容

My best friend Wang Ping held a birthday party.He / She invited all of my best friends except me.I was wondering at it when suddenly I remembered that one day...范文

One day when we were taking an English exam, Wang Ping, sitting next to me, passed me a piece of paper and asked me to tell her the answers to the reading comprehension.But I thought it was wrong to cheat in the exam, so I refused.After class, I tried to explain it to her, but she angrily told me never to mention it again.I knew she must have misunderstood me.So I decided to have a heart-to-heart talk with her tomorrow.hold a birthday party 生日聚會(huì)

invite all of my best friends except me

邀請了其他朋友，惟獨(dú)沒邀請我take an English exam 英語考試

the answers to the reading comprehension 閱讀理解題答案

cheat in the exam 考試作弊

never to mention it again 不要再提這件事

a heart-to-heart talk傾心交談

No Smoking Day

世界戒煙日

情景內(nèi)容

May 31st, No Smoking Day, is drawing near.Now what do you want to say to smokers to help them get rid of the bad habit?

范文

Today more and more people care for the problem of smoking.On that day, nobody is allowed to smoke, because smoking is polluting the air, also it’s harmful to people’s health and will cause lung cancer.I hope you should make a plan to get rid of the bad habit.It’s our hope that we all take an active part in the activity.I’m sure you’ll succeed in giving up smoking.May 31st, No Smoking Day, is drawing near.5月31日，世界戒煙日，正臨近了。

help them get rid of the bad habit 幫助他們擺脫這個(gè)壞習(xí)慣

care for the problem of smoking 關(guān)心抽煙問題

cause lung cancer 引起肺癌

take an active part in the activity 積極參加這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)

succeed in giving up smoking 成功地戒煙

An Incident

一次小事故

情景內(nèi)容

It was a summer morning in the classroom on Monday.Amy found a Band-Aid on Billy’s ankle.She asked Billy what was wrong with his ankle.Supposing you are Billy, please tell Amy what happened to your ankle.范文

Yesterday afternoon I was playing ball games with a few boys from the neighborhood.While kicking the ball, I slipped and fell over.My angle was injured.It bled a bit, so I had a Band-Aid on it.But I don’t think it serious.I hope it will be all right soon.Band-Aid 創(chuàng)可貼

what was wrong with 怎么了，出了什么事

supposing you are Billy 假設(shè)你是比利

slipped and fell over 滑倒

bled a bit 流了許多血

On My Way To School

在上學(xué)的路上

情景內(nèi)容

You missed class this morning.Your classmate called you to find out why you were absent.You tell him what happened.I broke my leg on my way to school this morning.It was foggy.I was riding my bike very fast.Suddenly a car drove towards me and knocked me off my bike.I was taken to the hospital immediately.The doctor examined me and found my left beg broken.I had to lie in bed for at least three weeks.missed class 缺課

find out why you were absent 弄清楚為什么遲到

knocked me off my bike 把我從自行車上撞下來

lie in bed for at least three weeks 至少在床上躺三周Sports Meeting

運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)

情景內(nèi)容

Last Thursday a sports meeting was held in Li Ping’s school.Li Ping was in the boy’s 1000-metre race, but he didn’t finish the race.Suppose you are Li ping, you tell us what happened.范文

When the race began, I felt great!My friend Wang Xiaopeng was running by my side.Halfway during the race, he told me that his legs were hurting.I knew he couldn’t run any further though we only had 200 meters to go.Then, ‘Bang, ’he fell to the ground.Of course winning was my goal, but being a good friend was more important.boy’s 1000-metre race 男子1000米比賽

I felt great!我感覺棒極了！

couldn’t run any further 不能再跑

fell to the ground 摔倒在地上

My Old Tape Recorder

我的舊錄音機(jī)

情景內(nèi)容

You are a middle school student.You’re going to have an important English examination in two months.You want your parents to buy you another tape recorder to take the place of the old one.Now you tell your parents why you need a new tape recorder.范文

You see, two months later I will have the English examination, including the listening test.I have to do some listening practice.But my tape recorder doesn’t work properly because something is wrong with it.So I need a new tape recorder to take the place of the old one.I hope I can get it as soon as possible.have an important English examination

進(jìn)行一次重要的英語考試

tape recorder 錄音機(jī)

take the place of 代替，頂替

do some listening practice 做聽力練習(xí)

get it as soon as possible 盡快地拿到錄音機(jī)

Why Do People Play Football

人們?yōu)槭裁刺咦闱?/p>

Why do people play football? It’s a stupid game and dangerous, too.Twenty－two men fight for about two hours to kick a ball into a net.They get more black eyes than goals.Sometimes they even break their bones.Football players must be mad.And why do people watch football matches? They must be mad, too.They certainly shout and scream like madmen.In fact I’m afraid to go out when there is a football match.The crowds are so dangerous.I’d rather stay at home and watch TV.But what happens when I switch it on? They’re showing a football match.So I turn on the radio.What do I hear? The latest football scores.And what do I see when I open a newspaper? Photos of football players.Oh, I’m afraid I may be mad about it some day.范文

As a middle school student, I have no much time to spend playing football.However, I watch a football match on TV whenever possible.I like it not only because it’s an exciting game, but also because it is brave and be full of confidence, courage and perseverance.You need to learn to work together with others perfectly.The sport of football can show a spirit as well as strengthen your body.When you are tired after a long time of study.Just watch a football match, which can give your brain a good rest.Over all, I like the sport of football.It’s a game full of challenge.fight for 為??而戰(zhàn)斗

kick a ball into a net 把球踢進(jìn)網(wǎng)內(nèi)

shout and scream like madmen 象瘋子一樣尖叫

I’d rather stay at home and watch TV.我寧愿呆在家里看電視。

switch sb.on 換（電視）臺

a game full of challenge 一項(xiàng)充滿挑戰(zhàn)的比賽

描寫本類主題常用語言集錦

1.With the development of the mode of public transport, the communication between people becomes more and more frequent.隨著交通工具的發(fā)展，人們的交往越來越頻繁。

2.With the result of the Party’s policy of economic reform, there has been a great increase in economic growth, from which Chinese people have benefited a lot.由于黨的正確的經(jīng)濟(jì)改革政策，我國的經(jīng)濟(jì)有了很大的增長，人們從中獲益不淺。

3.Some people say the most important element to success is luck, while others claim it is hard work.有人說，成功的關(guān)鍵是運(yùn)氣，而有些人則認(rèn)為成功是靠努力工作。

4.Now people in growing populations are beginning to recognize the importance of birth control.現(xiàn)在越來越多的人認(rèn)識到計(jì)劃生育的重要性。

5.According to a recent survey, more and more students are doing part-time jobs.根據(jù)最近的調(diào)查表明越來越多的學(xué)生在打工。

6.As far as learning a language is concerned, practice is of great importance.就學(xué)習(xí)一門語言而言，不斷的實(shí)踐是十分重要的。

7.It goes without saying, without advanced science and technology, a country will have poor living conditions.毫無疑問，沒有先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)，一個(gè)國家將只能處于貧窮的境地。

8.The telephone has made it possible for us to communicate with our friends far away, without leaving our houses.電話的使用能使我們有可能不出家門而與在遠(yuǎn)方的朋友們交談。

9.With help from a computer, this project was completed ahead of time.有了計(jì)算機(jī)的幫助，這一工程提前完成了。

10.Complicated as the problem is, it can be solved in a few minutes with an electronic computer.雖然這個(gè)問題很復(fù)雜，用電子計(jì)算機(jī)幾分鐘就解決了。

11.So far, computers have found applications in the field of industry, which has caused a surprising change in terms of the productivity.迄今為止，計(jì)算機(jī)在工業(yè)領(lǐng)域中的使用使得生產(chǎn)發(fā)生了驚人的變化。

12.The school should make it its aim to help students to develop themselves in an all-round way.學(xué)校應(yīng)該把學(xué)生的全面發(fā)展作為自己的目標(biāo)。

13.Professor Mary pointed out that in learning a foreign language, great attention should be paid to the improvement of reading speed.瑪麗教授指出，在外語學(xué)習(xí)過程中，應(yīng)特別注意閱讀速度的提高。

14.He owed his success entirely to his family support.他把自己最終的成功全都?xì)w功于他家人的支持。

15.If you persevere, you will accomplish wonders.如果你堅(jiān)持不懈，定能創(chuàng)造奇跡。

16.What we learn in school will have a great effect on our future.我們在學(xué)校所學(xué)的東西對我們的未來有很大的影響。

17.Failure is also a type of learning if you can draw a lesson from it.如果能從失敗中吸取教訓(xùn)的話，失敗也是一種學(xué)習(xí)。

18.We learn a foreign language in order to communicate with people all over the world.我們學(xué)習(xí)外語是為了同世界人民進(jìn)行交往。

19.Newspapers and magazines keep us informed of what is happening around the world.報(bào)紙雜志使我們了解世界各地發(fā)生的事情。

20.Once you have confidence in yourself, you are sure to make remarkable progress.一旦你對學(xué)習(xí)有了信心，你的學(xué)習(xí)就一定會(huì)取得顯著進(jìn)步。

21.The result from the study and research has shown／illustrated that people are becoming more and more concern about the quality of their life.研究和觀察結(jié)果表明，人們越來越關(guān)心生活的質(zhì)量。

22.The first thing I do every morning is to turn on the radio to listen to the weather forecast and the news of the day.我每天早上做的第一件事情是打開收音機(jī)聽天氣預(yù)報(bào)和當(dāng)日新聞。

23.Once you get into the habit of smoking, you’ll find it hard to give it up.一旦養(yǎng)成了抽煙的習(xí)慣，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很難戒掉它。

24.It indicates that all living things on the earth are being greatly threatened by industrial pollution.這表明地球上所有的生物正在受到工業(yè)污染的嚴(yán)重威脅。

25.It’s not allowed to blare horns here, those who fail to obey the regulation will be fined.此地禁止按喇叭，不能遵守此規(guī)定者將被處以罰款。

26.People all over the world believe that it won’t be long before a cure for cancer comes into being.世界人民期待著不久的將來有治療癌癥的新藥出現(xiàn)。

27.He has got into the bad habit of reading in bed, which is harmful to his eyesight.他已養(yǎng)成一個(gè)在床上看書的壞習(xí)慣，這習(xí)慣有害于他的視力。

28.Working hard is important, but knowing how to make the most of one’s abilities is more important.用功是重要的，但知道如何充分利用自己的才能更重要。

29.Even though l have studied English for a few years, I still find it hard to express myself effectively in English.盡管我已學(xué)了幾年英語，但仍不能有效地用英語表達(dá)自己的想法。

30.Sick and weak as Grandma is, she has taken on all the housework in the family.祖母雖體弱多病，卻承擔(dān)了家里所有的家務(wù)。

31.Referring to this accident, the driver admitted that his car knocked down a child.在談及這次事故時(shí)，司機(jī)承認(rèn)他撞倒了一個(gè)孩子。

32.I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.我認(rèn)為，私車應(yīng)該限制而不是鼓勵(lì)。

33.Measures must be taken to make the water clean before it goes into the river.必須采取措施，將廢水凈化后才能排放入河流。

34.Helping others is the source of happiness.幫助別人是快樂的源泉。

35.The computer has completely changed our life.計(jì)算機(jī)大大地改變了我們的生活。

36.Without computers, the realization of modernization would remain a dream.沒有計(jì)算機(jī)，實(shí)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)代化只能是個(gè)夢。

37.We must work hard if we want to achieve success.要想獲得成功，我們就必須努力學(xué)習(xí)。

38.Lack of education is an obstacle to success.缺乏教育是成功的障礙。

39.The earth is the only planet and home for the human race.地球是人類唯一的家園。

40.No one will be able to survive if the land, water and atmosphere are seriously polluted.當(dāng)土地、水和大氣受到了嚴(yán)重污染，沒有人能存活。

第三篇：高考英語寫作

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高考英語寫作模板

一：議論文模版

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型（選擇型）

①There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.②People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.③As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

①Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.②Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點(diǎn)一______.In addition, ____缺點(diǎn)二______.③To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文【問題解決型】

①Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.②As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.③Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)圖表作文的框架

①As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goes /increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.②There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing

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如何寫出好作文

1.謀篇布局：認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的體裁并列出提綱 2.段落發(fā)展：條理清楚、銜接得當(dāng)、句式多樣 3.句子表達(dá)：語言正確、表達(dá)地道、信息豐富

高考大綱中常用的連接詞

1.表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容

另外，還有：what is more;besides;

also;moreover;in addition

2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;

instead;on the other hand;

on the contrary.3.表示因果關(guān)系

因?yàn)椋虼耍? since;as;because

(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;

4.表示條件關(guān)系

如果，只要: if;on condition(that);

as long as

除非: unless

否則: or else 5.表示時(shí)間關(guān)系

當(dāng)… 的時(shí)候 : when;while

在…之后: after

在…之前: before

直到: until

一…就… : as soon as

后來，然后: later;afterwards

不久: soon 近來: lately;recently

自從… :since

從那時(shí)起: from then on 6.表示特定的順序關(guān)系

首先，最主要的: above all

其次: secondly

然后: then;next

最后: finally;in the end

7.換一種方法表述

換句話說: in other words;

that is to say;

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例如，比如: for instance;for example;

like;such as

9.用于陳述事實(shí)

實(shí)際上: in fact;actually;

as a matter of fact

跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth

10.對一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)

總而言之，總的來說:

on the whole;in short;all in all;

in general;in a word 11.其它常用到的副詞

Therefore;otherwise;finally;

furthermore;Thus;

namely;

although;afterwards;personally;

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第四篇：高考英語寫作

高考英語作文范文50篇

2009年全國各省市高考英語書面表達(dá)題

范文集錦完整18套（附解析及專家簡評）

一、（2009全國卷I、海南、寧夏卷）

假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給Mrs Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括： 1．外出購物 2．替房東還書

3．Tracy 來電話留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）見面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3)盡快回電

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【參考范文】 Mrs Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua 【解析】

作文題仍然同去年一樣，屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫一張留言條，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1）注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給房東（第二人稱）寫便條；2）注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用：從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)1和2時(shí)應(yīng)用將來時(shí)；而要點(diǎn)3中的幾個(gè)方面則需要注意時(shí)態(tài)的替換，會(huì)用到一般過去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。3）注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，是各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。

【專家簡評】

依然保持全國卷I短文寫作的老套路：人物李華（自1999年以來，中間除了02年，統(tǒng)統(tǒng)都是李華同學(xué)在寫信，歷時(shí)十年，眾多效尤者），話題為簡單的外語外事活動(dòng)，形式為寫信（郵件或留言），實(shí)則依然是短文寫作，控制程度較高，體裁以陳述說明為主。

二、（2009.全國卷II）

假定你是李華，你的美國朋友sarah 打算暑期來北京旅游，來信詢問改建后前門大街的情況。請你寫封回信，簡單介紹以下內(nèi)容：

1.簡況：長800余米、600多年歷史、300余家商鋪；

2.位置：天安門廣場南面；

3.交通：公共汽車17、69、59等路，地鐵2號線； 4.特色：步行街、當(dāng)當(dāng)車、茶館、劇院等。

參考詞匯：步行街 pedestrian street 當(dāng)當(dāng)車 trolley car 地鐵 subway 注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好，請將完整的回信書寫在答題卡上。

【參考范文】 Dear Sarah, Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops.As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus.You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.I’m sure you‘ll like it.【解析】

本文是書信格式，給出四個(gè)要點(diǎn)，屬于常規(guī)文體，學(xué)生只要把四個(gè)要點(diǎn)寫全，注意上下文，句與句之間的合理過渡即可。

【專家簡評】

人物李華，簡單的外事活動(dòng)。體裁屬于陳述說明性質(zhì)。話題是介紹前門大街改建情況。但這個(gè)話題對全國卷II考區(qū)的考生多少有些歧視。這種歧視可以理解為城鄉(xiāng)歧視和信息歧視。因?yàn)樵摽紖^(qū)學(xué)生對前門并不熟悉，所幸試題控制很嚴(yán)，只當(dāng)是翻譯了。另外，試題所提供的名詞類詞匯缺乏考試的實(shí)際意義，只是照抄而已，對考生并無挑戰(zhàn)。

三、（2009.北京卷）

第一節(jié)，情景作文（20分）

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60 提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbs 第二節(jié) 開放作文（15分）

請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50 第一節(jié) 情景作文（20分）

一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1、騎車去植樹

2、植樹

3、安插提示牌

4、照相

二、說明：

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)

【參考范文】

Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【解析】

本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，學(xué)生只要注意理清思路按照活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容和時(shí)間來寫即可。

【專家簡評】

在全國卷和地方卷中，08年只有北京卷是記敘文，09年又是記敘文。有趣的是，都是“紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華”。場景設(shè)置幾無二致，形式更是何其相似乃爾。如果追索源頭的話，全國卷NMET時(shí)代的連環(huán)畫看圖說故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年書面表達(dá)題跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格連環(huán)畫的形式，多少讓人回到了九十年代。一個(gè)是紅星農(nóng)場，一個(gè)卻是紅星中學(xué)。就話題而言，08北京是春游活動(dòng)，09北京是植樹主題，而NMET1998則是參觀活動(dòng)主題，話題顯然高度相關(guān)。

第二節(jié) 開放作文（15分）

【參考范文】

What an interesting picture!A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【解析】

本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)。考生重點(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。

【專家簡評】

北京卷每年的第二篇作文（開放作文）一直都比較新穎，也能引人思考，問題是往往那個(gè)思考的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)（文眼），學(xué)生未必能抓住或說未必能清楚地表達(dá)出來，尤其是要達(dá)到一語破的之妙，在高考那種氛圍中，似乎不易。In my opinion,we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.這樣的靈智多么需要現(xiàn)場的急智啊！如何讓自己的思想收縮在幾個(gè)簡單的句子結(jié)構(gòu)里面，這本身就是智慧。

北京卷的短文寫作基本形成了自己的風(fēng)格。近幾年一直比較穩(wěn)定。而2010年的北京隨著課改的深入，高考應(yīng)該會(huì)發(fā)生一些變化。

四、（2009.天津卷）

61.假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦每年一度的英語演講比賽，本的主題為“The English Novel I Like Best”。作為組織者，你將在演講比賽開幕時(shí)發(fā)言，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

1.說明比賽的意義，如提高英語聽說能力，養(yǎng)成讀書的習(xí)慣等；

2.說明比賽的注意事項(xiàng)，如每人演講不超過5分鐘，語言流利，發(fā)音準(zhǔn)確等； 3.預(yù)祝比賽圓滿成功。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)：不少于100詞；

2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

一、評分原則

1．本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分 2．評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后綜合給分。

3．詞數(shù)少于100的，從總分中減去2分。

4．評分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。

5．拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。每錯(cuò)誤書寫3個(gè)單詞從總分中減去1分，原則上不超過3分，重復(fù)的不計(jì)。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號錯(cuò)誤，將視其對交際的影響程度酌情減分。

6．如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

1.說明比賽的意義，如提高英語聽說能力，養(yǎng)成讀書的習(xí)慣等；

2.說明比賽的注意事項(xiàng)，如每人演講不超過5分鐘，語言流利，發(fā)音準(zhǔn)確等； 3.預(yù)祝比賽圓滿成功。

【參考范文】

Good afternoon.Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English.While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English.In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules.First, you should finish your speech in five minutes.Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently.Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.I hope that the English speech competition wil be a great success!Thank you!【解析】

本題屬于提綱式作文，體裁為應(yīng)用文中的演講稿，題材內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，給出要點(diǎn)表述較全，題的難度較小，考生注意一下幾點(diǎn)即可：

1、學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯，語言不要太書面化。

2、正確運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使上下文聯(lián)系更加密切，邏輯性強(qiáng)。

3、注意要使所寫內(nèi)容和原文所給出的開頭、結(jié)尾處銜接自然，渾然一體。

【專家簡評】

天津卷的一貫風(fēng)格接近全國卷I。前五年主要涉及與中學(xué)生生活學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)（04，07，08）話題和與外事活動(dòng)相關(guān)話題（05，06）。09年則是與外語學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)的話題。本題屬于標(biāo)題作文，天津共出現(xiàn)三次標(biāo)題作文（04：中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何使用家長給的零花錢。07：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。體裁屬于陳說性質(zhì)，連續(xù)多年都使用陳說性質(zhì)或陳說+議論性質(zhì)，08年則是敘事+議論，這說明天津比較偏好陳說性質(zhì)和議論性質(zhì)這兩類寫作文體。

五、（2009.四川卷）

假設(shè)你是李華。你的外國筆友Jane打算于七月來中國，特來信了解中國人的社交習(xí)俗。請你用英語回一封信，從以下幾個(gè)方面作具體介紹。1.頁面時(shí)的問候方式； 2.對毛病伯回答方式； 3.接收禮物時(shí)的回應(yīng)方式； 4.餐宴禮節(jié)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

【參考范文】 Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July.The following are some Chinese customs.Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care.Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners.Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away.Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.Anyhow, different cultures, different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】

本文是一種常規(guī)的書信體提綱式作文，要點(diǎn)有四，學(xué)生只要把四個(gè)要點(diǎn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言，條理的句子，合適的句式，表達(dá)完整，注意過渡和復(fù)雜句使用即可。

【專家簡評】

我一直認(rèn)為語言學(xué)習(xí)的過程中應(yīng)該雙向度滲透文化，而不是單純地從目的語國舶來文化，而且，更應(yīng)該在學(xué)習(xí)目的語的過程中就開始將母語文化做對等的交流。惟其如此，才能充分使學(xué)生在語言學(xué)習(xí)中體會(huì)文化比較的快感，這個(gè)快感也是雙向的：一方面來自對異族語言文化的吸納與接受，一方面來自對母語文化的更深層次的認(rèn)同感和自豪感。如果僅僅是單向度的獲取甚至是“掠取”異族文化或母語文化，而對其中之一進(jìn)行貶損、排斥，這必然將語言學(xué)習(xí)引向反面，也必然會(huì)使生動(dòng)有趣的語言學(xué)習(xí)變得枯燥乏味，同時(shí)也必然會(huì)使兩種語言的學(xué)習(xí)都產(chǎn)生障礙，由學(xué)習(xí)觀念的障礙演變成為學(xué)習(xí)行為的障礙。可喜的是，目前國人已有一種共識：要想學(xué)好外語，母語必須學(xué)好。雙語相長，漢英互補(bǔ)，這樣就可以大大的提高中國學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)語言的效率。

六、（2009.安徽卷）

假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現(xiàn)象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。

演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

認(rèn)為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；

希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；

建議與父母進(jìn)行交流和溝通。注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【參考范文】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong.My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them.If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.Thank you!【解析】

本文屬于提綱類作文，體裁為應(yīng)用文中的演講稿，題材的現(xiàn)實(shí)性強(qiáng)，考生的話語較多，顯見這種作文，難度不大，考生應(yīng)注意基本語言和句式的運(yùn)用，以及上下文的過渡。

【專家簡評】

五年來，安徽基本上都是走的陳說（05）和陳說+議論（06，07，08）的文體路線。09年則來了一個(gè)典型的議論性質(zhì)文體，這是一個(gè)很了不起的進(jìn)步。和天津卷一樣，話題場景設(shè)置為英語演講比賽一類的活動(dòng)。話題非常好，貼近中學(xué)生的實(shí)際生活。也是中學(xué)生十分困惑又十分敏感的一個(gè)問題。對于這樣的問題，中學(xué)生一般都有話可說，也有話能說。往往有這樣的情況，有話可說是滿肚子的漢語在心中翻滾，可是無法轉(zhuǎn)成英語。而這個(gè)話題的最大好處就在于有話能說。不過，本題的控制程度較高，三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)已經(jīng)用漢語給出，考生只需將其翻譯或形成比較好的適合書面形態(tài)的英語即可。有幾個(gè)問題值得師生們探討。在這樣的控制下，如何使語言表達(dá)更加貼切？如何用較高級語匯來表達(dá)？如何過渡？如何畫龍點(diǎn)睛？如何使文氣貫通等等？

七、（2009.山東卷）

第二節(jié) 寫作（滿分30分）

假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的美國老師Mr.Smith,但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國同學(xué)Tom 寫一封信： 1． 感謝Tom對你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；

2． 詢問Mr, smith 的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式； 3． 邀請Tom在春節(jié)期間來中國感受中國文化。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120-150； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

【參考范文】

Dear Tom, I am now back China and sound.In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York.Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.However, his email address is not available.So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.With my best regards!Yours cordially, Li Hua 【解析】

本文仍屬于半開放性體裁，與書寫體結(jié)合給考生發(fā)揮的空間，考生按照三個(gè)要點(diǎn)的提

示，用合適的句式，句型表達(dá)出來即可。

【專家簡評】

李華，寫信，海外學(xué)習(xí)背景，回國后的聯(lián)系。和全國卷I短文寫作的基本命題路數(shù)一致，是一種小心翼翼的翻版。所給話題第三條“邀請Tom在春節(jié)期間來中國感受中國文化”不失為很好的思路。語言的學(xué)習(xí)離不開文化，語言的交流更離不開母語文化的輸出，學(xué)習(xí)別國語言并不代表別國的語言優(yōu)于母語，更不等于別國的文化優(yōu)于母語文化，只不過各自文化的發(fā)展路徑不一樣，文化的優(yōu)勢結(jié)構(gòu)也不一樣，等等。其實(shí)，文化的多元性和多樣性只能說明我們這個(gè)世界豐富多彩，而不能由此得出自家文化不如別國文化的觀點(diǎn)。所以，學(xué)習(xí)語言的目的不外乎兩個(gè)，一是要“師夷之長技”，也就是要將別國的器物文化、制度文化到思想文化化為己用，使自己的文化更為先進(jìn)和發(fā)達(dá)；另一個(gè)則是“自立于世界民族之林”，也就是要將自己的獨(dú)特的燦爛的文化推介出去。所以，分省命題六年來，大家都接受了這樣一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，那就是不僅要掌握目的語背后的東西，更要關(guān)懷母語背后的東西。不僅要關(guān)注異族語言與文化的輸入，更要關(guān)注母語及自家文化的輸出。

八、（2009.陜西卷）

假定你是李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上, 你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助, 請根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容, 寫作要點(diǎn)和要求回貼。

寫作要點(diǎn)：

1.告訴Grown-up要理解母親；

2.給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議。

要求：

1.短文需寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。

2.短文詞數(shù)不少于80（不含已寫好的部分）。3.內(nèi)容充實(shí), 結(jié)構(gòu)完整, 語意連貫。4.書寫須清晰、工整。Ks5 【參考范文】 Hi, Grown-up，As a student of your age, I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.Here are a few suggestions.First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”.It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.【解析】

考生在寫作中應(yīng)該注意如下幾點(diǎn)： 1.文體：應(yīng)用文（電子郵件）。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.主體人稱：第二人稱。

4.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：① 問題介紹；②建議一；③建議二；④我的愿望。

亮點(diǎn)句式：

1.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.2.Here are a few suggestions.3.it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.4.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards many things.5.Second, you should learn to do your own things well.【專家簡評】

李華，英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇，這是高考英語寫作中第一次出現(xiàn)回帖的形式，盡管回帖和回信、回電子郵件沒有本質(zhì)的差別，但是場景設(shè)置顯然更加貼近時(shí)代了，也更沒有寫信的形式限制了。因此，質(zhì)而言之，這種回帖仍然屬于短文寫作范疇。這個(gè)話題是關(guān)于成長的困惑和煩惱，即自己認(rèn)為自己已經(jīng)成人，但在父母眼中仍然是孩子。這個(gè)當(dāng)然是老話題，無甚新意，但由于這個(gè)話題是開放式的，即題中所提供的材料只是起到了引發(fā)話題的作用，不像其他卷種那樣由于材料豐富使得考生作文只是做一做翻譯或接近翻譯的工作，而陜西卷卻要求考生提出個(gè)人思考：“理解母親”和“解決問題的具體建議”。“理解母親”起碼可以有兩個(gè)思路：一是可以寫出年輕人應(yīng)該主動(dòng)接近母親，積極理解母親。二是可以寫出如何理解母親的具體方式，比如，開誠布公的談話，多關(guān)心母親等等。而“解決問題的具體建議”卻要求考生放開思維，自己找話說。可能因?yàn)楸姸嗫忌紩?huì)有話可說，甚至可能出現(xiàn)千差萬別的思路和千差萬別的作文，這樣可能對有效和公平閱卷會(huì)產(chǎn)生一定的不利影響。但是，09陜西卷不僅有個(gè)好話題，而且還有個(gè)好形式，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)展開性話題留給考生的思維空間相對較大。

九、（2009.江西卷）

學(xué)校即將舉行以“Turning a bad mood（心情）into a good one ”為題目的英語作文比賽，請按下列要求定一篇100詞左右的記敘文或議論文。1.好心情的重要性。2.產(chǎn)生壞心情的原因。3.應(yīng)該如何調(diào)整心情。

記敘文 議論文

1.發(fā)生的具體事件。

2.對你的心情有何影響？

3.你如何應(yīng)對？

【參考范文】議論文

Turning a Bad Mood into A Good One It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life.If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world.Most importantly, you will have a optimistic effect on the people around you.We all will live a harmonious and happy life.It is also good for your health.However，sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something.You may have a bad mood.If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible.As we all know, every thing has its two sides.So you should think more about its bright side.We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by.Remember: Only you can make yourself happy.I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!【解析】

今年依然是開放式的作文，只提出了一個(gè)話題“Turning a bad mood into a good one”, 并給出了體裁上的選擇和內(nèi)容上的簡要提示。話題非常切合學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，考生只要按照要點(diǎn)去寫，注意過渡即可。

【專家簡評】

這是第一次在地方卷種中對寫作形式（體裁）作出的可選性規(guī)定，并分別給出了具體寫作內(nèi)容及寫作說明。此舉為創(chuàng)新。這個(gè)標(biāo)題作文的命制具備雙重可選特征，即既可以通過一個(gè)故事的敘述來完成，也可以通過對同主題的議論（重要性、原因與方法）來完成。這是一個(gè)典型的標(biāo)題作文，江西05年獲得自主命題權(quán)，五年來，基本上為標(biāo)題作文形式（除05年外），此次尤為特別。可以預(yù)見，在今后的全國卷地方卷試題改革中，這種形式將會(huì)成為各卷種效仿的對象，甚至可能走得更遠(yuǎn)。

不過也要指出的是，在本題記敘文要求下的第三條“你如何應(yīng)對”，筆者認(rèn)為這樣的表述說明文的口氣過重，容易誤導(dǎo)考生的寫作。最好表述為“你是如何應(yīng)對的”。這樣的表述才是敘事性的而不是說明性的了。第二條稍微好一點(diǎn)，不過建議改為“對你的心情產(chǎn)生了什么影響”。總之，那種“如何”，“有何”之類具有說明文性質(zhì)的表述容易讓考生寫作時(shí)發(fā)生體裁“跑偏”現(xiàn)象。

十、（2009.江蘇卷）

鼠標(biāo)是計(jì)算機(jī)時(shí)代最佳的人機(jī)交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計(jì)算機(jī)操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標(biāo)的習(xí)慣也會(huì)帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標(biāo)為切入點(diǎn)，根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。

鼠標(biāo)的必要性對多數(shù)人來說，操作計(jì)算機(jī)，上網(wǎng)沖浪??

鼠標(biāo)的便捷性

點(diǎn)擊、移動(dòng)、插入、拷貝、刪除??編輯文本，搜索信息??

收發(fā)郵件，選購商品??

點(diǎn)播音樂，下載電影??

如果過分依賴鼠標(biāo)??（請考生結(jié)合自身感受，列舉兩到三點(diǎn)）

注意：

1．對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

【參考范文】

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer． For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.（153 words）

【解析】

本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。

【專家簡評】

對于江蘇的考生而言，自08年改革以來，整卷分值雖然下降為120分，但短文寫作的分值仍然是25分，和絕大多數(shù)卷種同題賦分一樣。但是，從寫作詞數(shù)要求、寫作話題和寫作形式（體裁）幾個(gè)維度來看，江蘇卷的寫作可以歸為比較難的一類。第一，寫作詞數(shù)要達(dá)到150左右的卷種，目前只有廣東和江蘇兩地，09年江蘇范文詞數(shù)為153詞。第二，六年來，江蘇的話題選擇有一個(gè)明顯的特點(diǎn)：時(shí)代性比較強(qiáng)。從“江城介紹”（04）、“建設(shè)和諧社會(huì)”（05），“奧運(yùn)志愿者的宜與忌”（06），“陽光體育活動(dòng)”（07），到09年的“鼠標(biāo)的利弊”等，這個(gè)話題選擇的路徑鮮明地反映出江蘇卷對時(shí)代的敏感性，問題是這些特色話題又給考生帶來了表達(dá)上的困難。對于優(yōu)秀的考生，這種話題可能如魚得水，而對于中等偏下的考生，這種話題顯然有點(diǎn)“尷尬”：想說點(diǎn)什么，但要嘛說不出，要嘛說不好。第三，這個(gè)“難”還表現(xiàn)在寫作形式上，幾年來，江蘇卷主要采用的是混合形式的寫作：陳說+議論。我分析了一下09年江蘇卷給的范文，盡管鼠標(biāo)的好處部分漢語提示很充分，控制很嚴(yán)，但要想精確表達(dá)，也不容易。尤其是題中未列出“不利影響”的部分，考生要想用寥寥三、四句話把這個(gè)“不利影響”說明白顯然需要功力，這個(gè)功力首先是要分析什么才是不利影響，列出個(gè)一二三，其次是如何轉(zhuǎn)換成英語，最后才是如何集中而簡潔地優(yōu)化句子結(jié)構(gòu)，使之達(dá)意而且有條理。由此看來，江蘇卷今年的難度不低，如果再在閱讀上加大閱讀量，那整卷難度就可想而知了。另外，江蘇有命制標(biāo)題作文的習(xí)慣（05，06，08），09年卷雖然沒有直接給出標(biāo)題，也沒有要求考生寫出標(biāo)題，但主體性標(biāo)題已十分明晰。

十一、（2009.湖南卷）

假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)新老師李紅，請給你的朋友張華寫一封信，告訴他你第一天上課的情況，主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情； 2.介紹你處理該事的方式； 3.談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/p>

注意：

1.詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；

2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與本人及學(xué)校相關(guān)的任何真實(shí)信息。

【參考范文】

Dear Zhang Hua, It’s three months since I heard from you last time.Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson.On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class.He stood outside the classroom, silently.I smiled to him and let him came in.After a while, he cried on his desk.Then I walked to him and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students.How time flies!Class was over before I realized it.From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them.Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Li Hong 【解析】

本文屬于半開放性提綱式書信體，要點(diǎn)有三，選材學(xué)生熟悉，也是發(fā)生在他們身邊的故事，學(xué)生只要把握準(zhǔn)情景和要求，使表達(dá)的內(nèi)容不走題即可。

【專家簡評】

湖南卷這是第二次在短文寫作中涉及老師（06Mr Moore，09李紅）。第一次出現(xiàn)考生假設(shè)人是教師——“假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)新老師李紅”。這個(gè)假設(shè)在歷年的高考英語各卷種中都沒有出現(xiàn)過，可以理解為考生畢業(yè)后的可能，但這個(gè)可能只能是大學(xué)畢業(yè)后的事情了，看來這個(gè)未來生活起碼還得四年時(shí)間。可以劃歸到第三主題“與考生未來生活相關(guān)”。但由于考查的主題仍然是有關(guān)學(xué)習(xí)和課堂之間的事情，總的說來，有話可說，也有話能說，起碼可以杜撰一點(diǎn)熟悉的東西。

十二、（2009.湖北卷）: 假設(shè)你是華華，與英國網(wǎng)友湯姆約定用對方的母語通信，以提高各自的外語水平。最近你收到湯姆的電子郵件（附后），發(fā)現(xiàn)有一個(gè)成語使用不當(dāng)。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文回一封電子郵件。

要點(diǎn): 1．不應(yīng)使用 “無所不為”，應(yīng)使用 “無所事事”;2．說明這兩個(gè)成語的用法;3．給予鼓勵(lì)。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)為1叨左右;2.參考釋義:無所不為一do all kinds of bad things 無所事事一have nothing to do 3.除以上兩個(gè)成語外，郵件中不得使用其它漢字或拼音;4.電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)人你所寫詞數(shù)），但不得抄人答題卡。

附（湯姆的郵件）: 華華，你好!近幾天在忙什么事?有什么有意思的事嗎?我們的學(xué)校放假了，所以這幾天在家無所不為，飽食終日，只好上網(wǎng)發(fā)伊妹兒。沒意思。我決定找份工作，做個(gè)自食其力的人。祝好!湯姆

（以下所給內(nèi)容不得抄入答題卡）

【參考范文】 Hi!Tom Nice to read your e-mail today.I noticed you’ve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However, I’m afraid there is one mistake I’d like to point out.It is “無所不為”.This idiom means “do all kinds of bad things”.Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that you’ve got nothing to do these days.In that case, you should use “無所事事”.We usually use “無所不為” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and “無所事事” to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do.Have I made myself clear? Anyway, I’m amazed at the progress you’ve made.Hop you’ll find a good job soon.Huahua 【解析】

本文題材現(xiàn)實(shí)性強(qiáng)，屬于較為保守的提綱式作文，考生只要審好題按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)即可。

【專家簡評】

六年來，湖北卷的寫信人物比較多樣而且有趣：05年是明華給建華寫信，07年是李華（也是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，跟09天津卷一樣）寫信，08年則改成了一個(gè)十分怪異人名——卜曼宜，其諧音極似“不滿意”或“not very easy”.而09年搖身一變又改成了華華，看來湖北卷是離不開李華同學(xué)的影子了。不過好歹總比卜曼宜好些。

本題和04年全國卷I的寫作題類似（外國人學(xué)中文，中文歌曲比賽），另外，07年高考語文湖北卷作文題也是以母語為話題的，這三者之間似乎有某種聯(lián)系。不過，本題對語言本身要求更具體，甚至討論到了成語的用法。應(yīng)該說，能討論這么細(xì)致的漢語問題對于中學(xué)生學(xué)英語而言是一個(gè)很大的刺激或促進(jìn)。而且，毫不夸張地說，跨語言、跨文化的啟示意義深蘊(yùn)其間，對其他各卷種的命題思路不無裨益。

十三、（2009.福建卷）

某英語報(bào)社擬成立“微笑俱樂部”，現(xiàn)向癸未征募會(huì)員。要求申請者提交一篇題為“I want to Smile”的英語短文。請你以申請者的身份，根據(jù)以下思路圖的提示用英語寫一篇短文。

注意：

1.根據(jù)思路圖適當(dāng)展開，以使行文連貫； 2.詞數(shù)：120左右

There are many advantages of smiling.It can not only make us happy, but also please others.If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return.So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.They arrange almost everything for me.With their help, I have made great progress.I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile.Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile.Tomorrow is another day.【解析】

本文為圖畫式作文，做題的關(guān)鍵是審題，考生要把握如下幾點(diǎn)： 1.文體：說明文。

2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.主體人稱：第一人稱。

4.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①微笑的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；②想對其微笑的人物（父母）；③對父母微笑的理由；④對

自己微笑的理由；⑤總結(jié)。

【專家簡評】

本題是一個(gè)好的標(biāo)題作文（05福建卷：My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations）。六年來，福建卷基本上使用的是議論性質(zhì)的寫作文體（04陳說，05、06議論，07、08陳說+議論），09年是一個(gè)典型的議論性質(zhì)的文體。話題也非常好，和安徽卷一樣，非常適合中學(xué)生表達(dá)。但從命題的角度看，寫作難度較高，因?yàn)楸绢}的控制方法不是采用漢語提綱形式，而是采用圖文形式，在語言轉(zhuǎn)換上較安徽卷難。從所給范文看，語言難度不高，但思維難度不低。考生得分不易。

十四、（2009.廣東卷）

第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時(shí)間: 上周末

對象: 眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授

主題: 我國中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness）問題

基本信息:（1）發(fā)生率: 略高于50％

（2）人數(shù): 世界第一

專家解讀:（1）原因: 很復(fù)雜

（2）治療: 沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視

（3）建議: 不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng)

（4）特別提示: 如何握筆也和近視有關(guān) [寫作內(nèi)容] 根據(jù)以上情況寫一篇采訪報(bào)道，并包括如下內(nèi)容: 1.采訪的時(shí)間、對象和主題； 2.中小學(xué)生近視的發(fā)生率及人數(shù)； 3.專家解讀。[寫作要求] 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

【參考范文】 Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness.It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No.1 in the world, are short-sighted.Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness.He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises.What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【解析】

本文題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，這個(gè)話題真正的做到“話題來源于學(xué)生實(shí)際生活”。近視眼是每個(gè)校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學(xué)生校園生活得隱形熱點(diǎn)。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題目讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話可說。考生要注意三大要點(diǎn)和表格內(nèi)容，恰當(dāng)表達(dá)即可。

【專家簡評】

本題話題為近視問題，天津卷曾涉及過（07天津卷：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。但角度有不同。廣東卷側(cè)重的是問題本身的描述，而天津則是強(qiáng)調(diào)的如何保護(hù)視力。不過，能有做天津卷的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，對廣東卷也就不會(huì)有難的感覺。更何況廣東卷所給信息非常充分，對于考生而言，剩下的主要是組織句子了。需要特別指出的是，陳說性質(zhì)的文體其核心在于陳述和說明（包括介紹），即講清楚一樁事情。

第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分）

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia.All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining.You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off.That’s right—sleep it off.The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.Thereason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience.Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable.How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? * 考拉即樹袋熊 [寫作內(nèi)容] 1.以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；

2.然后以約120個(gè)詞就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括:（1）人們在參觀動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；

（2）假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)；

（3）你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。[寫作要求] 1.在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

【參考范文】

The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos.The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people.Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have.But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed.No having peaceful surroundings to

sleep, don’t you suffer restless and fidgets.No doubt we do and so do the animals.I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.【解析】

今年的讀寫任務(wù)讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開議論。議論文的寫作有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生正確的價(jià)值觀，糾正不正確的價(jià)值觀。今年的讀寫任務(wù)暗中旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的觀念、把多一點(diǎn)的空間還給動(dòng)物的觀念、與動(dòng)物和諧共存的觀念。

如果考生從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料，同時(shí)也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞。

【專家簡評】

自2007年廣東卷改革以來，寫作部分的兩個(gè)試題在寫作要求上均過于詳細(xì)，控制程度很高。尤其是后者，盡管是閱讀后的寫作，但要領(lǐng)已經(jīng)被列出，實(shí)際上難度已經(jīng)大大下降。當(dāng)然，廣東卷這么做的主要目的無外乎便于教師閱卷，收縮考生的思維，不給考生跑題的機(jī)會(huì)。但是若往深的追問，本題給學(xué)生的思維空間并不多，這個(gè)值得考量。三年來，廣東卷已經(jīng)在短文寫作上逐漸形成定勢。

十五、（2009.遼寧卷）

假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。

要點(diǎn)：

時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果

報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前

提示：帶帽子、手套

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已為你寫好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：社區(qū) community 第二節(jié)：

一、評分原則

1.本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2.評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

3.詞數(shù)少于80和多余120的，從總分中減去2分。

4.評分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

5.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

6.如書寫較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

1.時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00 2.內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果

3.報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 4.提示：帶帽子、手套

5.歡迎踴躍參加

【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】

本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。

第一步：審題

1、看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。

2、理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。可以先將活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來；然后再寫5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。

第二步：寫作

可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語從句、賓語從句等，但句式不易過于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。

第三步：檢查

作文寫完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫對了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、大小寫用對了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。

【專家簡評】

主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W校活動(dòng)無關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語寫作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事活動(dòng)。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出，對考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過難或過易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果.打掃.聊天等）。假如你是校英語報(bào)的記者，請按下列要點(diǎn)用英語寫一則100-120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。1.時(shí)間.地點(diǎn).任務(wù).活動(dòng)； 2.老人們的反應(yīng)； 3.簡短評論。

注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

s5【參考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper 【解析】

本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來寫即可。

【專家簡評】

09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了無新意。但這并不就說明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看，該卷第一次出現(xiàn)在題中直接給出漢語拼音人名，而不是漢語人名，這也算是一個(gè)首創(chuàng)。目的只有一個(gè)：避免考生出錯(cuò)。其實(shí)，遮掩在漢語拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個(gè)人名究竟是漢語中的哪幾個(gè)字，因?yàn)閷τ谕鈬硕裕帜溉嗣皇且粋€(gè)符號，他們是無法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。

浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標(biāo)題作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個(gè)問題?（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個(gè)對于檢測考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說的是新聞報(bào)道，但實(shí)際上是一個(gè)典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質(zhì)的寫作。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求。對于浙江考生而言，其寫作難度應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)低于前五年的寫作要求了，應(yīng)該是福。

十七、（2009.重慶卷）

國外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問該網(wǎng)站。現(xiàn)請你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。

內(nèi)容包括：

自我簡介

寫信目錄

話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）

推薦的理由

預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.郵件格式已為你給出

3.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息

4.請?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答

【參考范文】 Dear, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】

這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發(fā)性提綱式作文。話題樹有教育意義，符合中學(xué)實(shí)際引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考問題。在寫作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)： 1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。

2.但自我簡介、寫信目錄、推薦的理由、預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功都是圍繞話題展開。3.注意分清段落層次，上下文的過渡。

【專家簡評】

從寫作文體要求看，重慶卷04年要求寫記敘文，05年則改成議論文，近四年基本上是陳說性質(zhì)的文體。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動(dòng)或外語學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)。不過，09年的話題是涉外的話題征集，有些特點(diǎn)。六年來，三次短文寫作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。李華同學(xué)出現(xiàn)3次（06，07，09）。總的說來，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒有超出全國卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語夏令營，開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking）,防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫一封申請信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括：

你感興趣的課程

你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么

為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容

【參考范文】 Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from

college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是書信格式，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)，屬于半開放式作文。學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.先談自己感興趣的學(xué)科，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說學(xué)科，這是寫作的關(guān)鍵，過渡要自然；

2.再寫自己希望學(xué)到什么，要把握實(shí)用性。

3.然后談出想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容的原因，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)，理由合情合理。4.在寫作過程中可以嘗試句型的復(fù)雜化，適度增加情節(jié)

【專家簡評】

上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。還有一點(diǎn)，從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說+議論。話題涉外，且與教育教學(xué)課程相關(guān)，是很好的話題。但對于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否過于豐富了些？！參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)上海卷習(xí)慣于提供簡練的題干信息，以利于考生的發(fā)揮。這次算是一個(gè)異數(shù)了。

【總評】

2009年高考英語全國卷地方卷共19套，短文寫作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧?海卷共享全國卷I的短文寫作題）。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個(gè)年份、某個(gè)卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。這說明各卷種的命題者們已經(jīng)認(rèn)識到了母語文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現(xiàn)實(shí)性，這是最令人感到欣慰的。相信對你有用！珍惜吧！值得擁有！相信對你有用！珍惜吧！值得擁有！相信對你有用！珍惜吧！值得擁有！相信對你有用！珍惜吧！值得擁有！相信對你有用！珍惜吧！值得擁有！相信對你有用！珍惜吧！值得擁有！

2010年高考英語作文真題題目及范文

江西卷

英語中“please.” “thank you” “sorry”等禮貌用語具有增進(jìn)友誼，改善關(guān)系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量，因而被稱為“magic words”。請 “Magic Power of Polite Words”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語作文。體裁不限（敘述文、議論文、說明文??）

【參考范文】

Magic Power of Polite Words We use magic words in our daily life without realizing it.These magic words , for instance “please” “thank you “ “sorry” , can add luster to our life.Magic words can help build friendship.They make you polite and easier to get along with , thus strengthen the relationship between you and others.Once you offend someone else , you can as well use these words.A word such as “sorry” will make him less annoyed.Try using polite words every now and then.Once you do , you will never find yourself drained of energy for life.You use polite words , in return , these words will provide you with magic power.安徽卷

假如你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動(dòng)，征文的內(nèi)容要求你在電視、手機(jī)(cell)和網(wǎng)絡(luò)三考中，放棄其中一個(gè)并陳述理由。請你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

【范文】

We are now living in an intonation age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used.It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet.I could do without TV because few shows my fancy, and there are too many commercial programs on TV are also available.As for cells and the Web.they are more necessary to me.I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family.And almost all information can be gathered on the Internet..遼寧卷

你校學(xué)生會(huì)需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語學(xué)習(xí)顧問，請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括：1)母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先2)解答用語學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動(dòng)3)每周4小時(shí)，報(bào)酬面議4)聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel:***）

【參考范文】

English Advisor Wanted The Students’ Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term.The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English , answering their questions , and helping organize activities such as singing English songs , English evenings , or lectures on interesting topics.The applicant should be a native speaker of English.Fluency in Chinese is preferred.The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.If you are interested , please call Li Hua at *** for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.Students’ Union Yucai High School 山東卷

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封電子郵件： 1.表示歉意； 2.解釋原因； 3.另約時(shí)間。

【參考范文】 Dear Tom, I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised.I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened.Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me.I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again ,Ｉ’

m sorry for any inconvenience caused.Sincerely yours, Li Hua 陜西卷

假定你是李華。你們學(xué)校和一所美國中學(xué)簽署了教師交流協(xié)議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學(xué)的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。

寫作要點(diǎn)：

1.對她表達(dá)感謝之意;2.介紹她離開后你自己及班里發(fā)生的事情;3.希望了解她的近況。

【參考范文】 Dear Sure, I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.It’s almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together.We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school ? Yesterday , we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well , and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood ? How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students.Hope to keep in close touch.All the best Li Hua 四川卷

假定你校將舉行一個(gè)成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言。請你按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英文發(fā)言稿。

1.過去對成年的向往；2.現(xiàn)在的感受和認(rèn)識；3.將來的目標(biāo)及措施。

參考詞匯：責(zé)任 responsibility 【參考范文】

Good morning , everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”As a child , I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.Now I’m a grown-up , but I find things do not go as I expected.Although I can enjoy more freedom , at the same time I realized that being a grown-up not only means this , but also more responsibilities.I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful.To reach the goal , I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.Thank you for your listening.浙江卷

最近，李越被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據(jù)她的事跡（在上周六下午，不顧天氣的炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝），用英語為班級板報(bào)寫一篇100—120個(gè)詞的短文。

你的文章應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：1.李越的事跡及其對同學(xué)的影響；2.你的評論。

參考詞匯：singing contest 歌詠比賽 costume 服裝

【參考范文】

Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class.On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting.Finally , she found the right clothes.Deeply moved by her efforts , we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class.Besides , she often devotes her spare time to helping others.She deserves the honor and we should learn from her.重慶卷

假設(shè)你是李華，于2010年6月3日搭乘國外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回國后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個(gè)行李箱（suitcase）。現(xiàn)請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信，請他們幫你尋找。信件要點(diǎn)包括:陳述寫信原因，簡要描述該行李，說明其重要性，期待回復(fù)并表示感謝。

【參考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam , I’m Li Hua.I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010.But when I came to my home , I found I lost a suitcase.I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip.There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it.It is really important for me , because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card , passport and so on.Besides , it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours truly, Li Hua 【參考范文】(2)Dear Sir/Madam , I am very sorry to say that I left my suitcase in flight number BA793 on 3 rd , June , so I am writing this letter to ask you for help.The lost suitcase is a red one with a long handle.It is of great importance to me.In it are some valuable books and my credit cards.I will be very grateful if anyone of you contact me by telephone immediately after seeing it.My telephone number is 133456.There is nothing more gratifying to me than your reply.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Li Hua 天津卷

假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語。你希望參加此活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：

● 對此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識（如對本人、學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處等）

●個(gè)人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等）

●你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）

參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學(xué) Chenxi Hope School 【參考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua from Class One , Senior Two.I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English.Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation.Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole school.I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others.I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence.English is my favorite subject and I ‘ve won several prizes in English contests.So I think that I’m qualified for the position.I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need.Besides , I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs , playing games and so on.I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 江蘇卷

假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的“英語學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)”，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡單介紹自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對學(xué)校今后的英語教學(xué)提出建議。

自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況

1.英語學(xué)習(xí)的目的2.英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法3.課外自學(xué)的途徑???.對學(xué)校英語教學(xué)的建議

（請考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議）。【參考范文】

Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well.As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language , just like bricks in a building.I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.After class ．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio.Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly , we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals.Thank you for listening.湖南卷

假設(shè)你和幾位同學(xué)成立了一個(gè)英語俱樂部，開展了為期兩個(gè)月的活動(dòng)。現(xiàn)在，你將代表俱樂部在課堂上進(jìn)行經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流，請寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，主要內(nèi)容如下：

1．簡要描述俱樂部開展的一項(xiàng)與英語有關(guān)的主要活動(dòng)2．談?wù)勀銈冮_展該活動(dòng)的收獲。

【參考范文】 Boys and girls，Today I’ll talk about our English club.Our English club was set up two months ago.Now we have members of 25.We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon.So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , including a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students.Last week we held an English story-telling competition.We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes.Every member took an active part in the activity.Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges.At last Li Bing won the first place.Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways.Not only did it improve their spoken English , but also it brought them much fun.They hope many such activities can be held.That’s all.Thank you.湖北卷

請你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勎⑿Φ淖饔谩he best example of universally understood body language may be the smile.A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers.A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題； ②內(nèi)容只需涉及一個(gè)方面； ③詞數(shù)為100左右。

【參考范文】(1)I still remember how serious I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.The teacher spoke English throughout the class , which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day , the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students.After listening to me for a while , she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and the following days.A week later , I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class , I began to be confident.【參考范文】(2)No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling.Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted.Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan / overtook Wenchuan.Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them.His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness.It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult.It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.全國I卷

假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽(speech contest),希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

【參考范文】 Dear Ms.Smith, I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students’ Union of Yucca Middle School , which is close to your university.I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2：00 pm and last for about three hours.Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes, Li Hua 福建卷

假設(shè)你是李華，福建省某中學(xué)高中學(xué)生，今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活動(dòng)。請你以代表的身份，根據(jù)以下圖片提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

【參考范文】 Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning.I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China.It’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasing severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.Therefore, it’s a high time we did something about it.Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use.Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law.Last but not least, it’s everyone responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situaiton of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.That’s all.Thank you.高考英語作文范文47篇 I.看圖作文類

1.今年寒假，你參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，去某旅行社當(dāng)業(yè)余導(dǎo)游。請根據(jù)該旅行社提供的數(shù)據(jù)和你的所見所聞，用英語寫一篇短文，作為寒假作業(yè)交給你的英語老師。Number of people in City X travelling abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006 要求：1.簡析表格，說明產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；2.結(jié)合漫畫，談?wù)劸惩饴糜纬霈F(xiàn)的問題；

3.針對所出現(xiàn)的問題闡述你自己的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）； 4.詞數(shù)120左右；5.參考詞匯：吐痰 spit v.When people’s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad.The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already much

larger than that of the year 1996.It’s a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast.However, reports about people’s bad manners flood in.Some are even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere.The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.China has long been regarded as a country with good manners.Everybody should keep some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad.Win respect for yourself and our country!2.根據(jù)以下圖畫，寫一篇英語短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右2．生詞：通訊：communicate 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)：the Internet Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life.In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries.In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.3.受某英文報(bào)的委托，你最近對高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調(diào)查。請根據(jù)以下信息，用英語為該報(bào)寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文的標(biāo)題及首句已為你寫好。

調(diào)查內(nèi)容：在新聞、故事、科普、學(xué)習(xí)方法四種英文文章中，學(xué)生最喜歡哪一種

調(diào)查范圍：湖北省的10所中學(xué) 調(diào)查對象：高中生

調(diào)查人數(shù)：1200 調(diào)查方式：訪談 調(diào)查結(jié)果：（見下圖）Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed.They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite.Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods.However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.4.目前，全區(qū)上下都在大力開展城鄉(xiāng)清潔工程的活動(dòng)。為了響應(yīng)政府的號召，3月25日，星期天，你們班參加了一次校外環(huán)境衛(wèi)生清潔活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇日記，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā＃榉奖闩虐妫瑘D見下頁）

注意： 1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、完整； 2.詞數(shù)：100左右。Sunday, March 25 Fine Today our class went out to do some cleaning.We gathered at the school gate and started out early in the morning.Some collected the rubbish in the park, some cleared the old posters off the walls, and others swept the street.We hoped to make our city more beautiful with our own hands.At the same time some of us went to the public

places, where there were a lot of people.We kept on telling people not to destroy the beauty of nature so that we can have a cleaner world.In my opinion, such activities are necessary and instructive because some people are unaware of the importance of protecting the environment at present.5.根據(jù)圖畫寫一篇短文，敘述某天小明與其媽媽發(fā)生的故事。

①媽媽阻止兒子去扶摔倒的女孩；②兒子對于倒了的油瓶置之不理。

要求：1．不僅要表述出圖中的內(nèi)容，還要發(fā)表自己的感想； 2．字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右；3．開頭已給出。

One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over.He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be.And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I did something about the bottle, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.” I disagree with what the mother did in the story.I think parents should set a good example to their children.They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds.They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble.We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right? 6.下列圖表反映的是我校2002年與2005年學(xué)生健康狀況調(diào)查的部分?jǐn)?shù)據(jù)。請你用英文為某報(bào)寫一份報(bào)告，反映該校三年間學(xué)生健康狀況的變化情況，分析其原因并提出相應(yīng)的改進(jìn)措施（不少于兩條）。

注意：1．報(bào)告必須包括圖表中所有內(nèi)容。

2．詞數(shù)：120左右。第一句已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005 , and that of overweight , from 36% to 52.4%.Compared to 2002 nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do.Besides , over 15% more students has become mentally unhealthy.To improve students’ health , we call for less homework.Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from getting nearsighted.Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight.With their heavy burdens removed , students can then be mentally healthy.7.假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Paul來信詢問北京2008奧運(yùn)吉祥物。請根據(jù)以下福娃圖案寫一封回信，簡單介紹其所代表的涵義，以及顏色意義等內(nèi)容，并邀請Paul屆時(shí)來京觀看比賽。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．參考詞匯：吉祥物—mascot；福娃（Fu Wa）—Friendlies Dear paul, It was great to hear from you and I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing Olympic Mascots.There are 5 Friendlies , or Fu Wa in Chinese , to serve as the Mascots for Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.Designed to express the nature of Chinese children, the 5 doll-like Frinedlies are symbols of four popular animals-the Fish , the Panda , the Tibetan Antelope , the Swallow –and the Olympic Flame.Each of the Friendlies has

a Chinese name-Beibei , Jingjjing , Huanhuan , Yingying and Nini.When we put them together , they say Beijing Huan Ying Ni, or “Welcome to Beijing!” in English.These lovely dolls show us the Olympic spirit of universal friendship , and they each represent one of the following-the sea , forest , fire , earth and sky.As you can see , their colours have something to do with the 5 colours of the Olympic rings.I really hope you may come to Beijing in 2008!Certainly I’ll be your company then!Looking forward to your arrival!Yours , Li Hua 8.假如你叫王平，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Smith, How are you? How time flies!Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival.It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China.Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons.As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away.Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a number of science problems and so on.When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday.How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Wang Ping 9．根據(jù)下列圖示以 “The New Grading System in Our School”為題為你校英語報(bào)寫一篇短文,說明這一舉措以及你對學(xué)校實(shí)施這一舉措的認(rèn)識.要求: 1.詞數(shù) 100左右, 已給出部分不包括在內(nèi).生詞: 評分體制grading system 參與participation（n.）

① tests ④ class participation ② notes ⑤ team work ③ homework The New grading system in Our School In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system.This chart shows how it works.The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts.About 30% of it will come from their test results.The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework.If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score.Teamwork in class is also important.If you want

a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.In my opinion, our school has made a good decision.This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves on all sides.10.下面的餅狀圖（pie chat）顯示了你對你校學(xué)生興趣愛好的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請你用英語給English Weekly寫一篇短文，報(bào)道你的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并對此結(jié)果發(fā)表你的看法或建議。詞數(shù)120左右。首句已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。

A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time.From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school.The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it.Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby.And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students.Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.11.閱讀下面漫畫，先對漫畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后對這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。（100詞左右）參考詞匯： 西瓜皮：

water-melon skin 長凳：bench The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon.When they went away they left the melon’s skin on the bench, making it very dirty.They didn’t want to take any trouble to throw it into the dustbin although it was very near where they were sitting.Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.However, what they did makes others look down upon them.If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases.Besides, it will be impossible for dustmen to clean the world woth such people living in it.12.根據(jù)以下圖畫再結(jié)合你的想象，寫出一篇100字左右的短文：

It is the old man’s birthday today.Now he is sitting on a sofa alone.Maybe his wife has been dead.On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son.And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left.Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy.Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.Our life is getting better and better than before.Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink.I think they are quite wrong.Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do.So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.II.應(yīng)用文類

13.外籍教師Lynne任教期滿準(zhǔn)備回國，學(xué)校答應(yīng)派車送她去機(jī)場。她在臨行前一天寫了張便條提醒辦公室李老師：

1)．請檢查(check on)明天的車是否落實(shí)，提醒司機(jī)(remind sb.of sth.提醒某人做某事)。

2)．她之所以要確定一下，是因?yàn)樘绮缓媒谐鲎廛嚒?)．感謝費(fèi)心，并感謝一年來的關(guān)心。

4)．在學(xué)校一年來，生活愉快、難忘，很可能再來。

5)．留下一些英語書給貴校圖書館，希望對學(xué)生有用。字?jǐn)?shù)：100—120個(gè)詞。Hi, Mr.Li, Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this.I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesn’t show up.I am sorry to trouble you again.Here I thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school.I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students.Probably I will come back some day.I leave some English books to your library.I hope they will be useful to your students.Yours Lynne 14.假設(shè)你是李華，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報(bào)紙正在討論北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報(bào)寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。

贊成遷出：

反對遷出：

①．游客多，交通堵塞 ①．建于1906年，中外聞名

②．郊區(qū)環(huán)境好

②．搬遷易造成動(dòng)物死亡

注意：1)．詞數(shù)100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。2)．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3)．參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)—suburb June 3 ,2005 Dear Editor , Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.Some of my classmates are in favor of the move.They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad.So it should remain where it is.What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals.To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly, Li Hua 15.假設(shè)你的英文名為Jack，是英國諾丁漢大學(xué)的中國留學(xué)生。你負(fù)責(zé)為在該校就讀的32名中國學(xué)生籌劃圣誕節(jié)期間的蘇格蘭之行，為期7天，請你給諾丁漢的STA（Students’Travel Agency）經(jīng)理Phil發(fā)一封電子郵件，聯(lián)系有關(guān)事宜。要點(diǎn)如下：

（1）希望能夠派車接送；（2）需要一名說標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語，并非常熟悉蘇格蘭的導(dǎo)游；

（3）請求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅館、費(fèi)用等情況；

（4）你的聯(lián)系方式：電子郵箱地址：Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn或電話號碼：07747745007 注意：（1）詞數(shù)：100詞左右；（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

（3）參考詞匯：旅館住宿accommodation；旅行日程安排itinerary；長途客車coach Hi, Phil，I’d like you to organize a trip to Scotland for us.I have here a group of 32 Chinese students studying in Nottingham University, who want to go on a seven-day tour during the Christmas days.I hope we can have a coach which will take us to Scotland and then bring us back to Nottingham.We also need a guide who speaks standard English and knows Scotland well.I would be very grateful if you can work out an itinerary as soon as possible and tell me about our accommodation, meals as well as how much each of us has to pay.If you have any information, please either email me to Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn or call me at 07747745007.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours Truly.Jack 16.加拿大高中生David在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上登出啟事notice，希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言、文化。假設(shè)你是重慶實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)的李華，請?jiān)诳吹竭@則啟事后，用英文給David發(fā)出一封電子郵件。主要內(nèi)容包括：

①.你怎樣得知他的愿望 ②.你愿意成為他的朋友

③.你打算如何幫助他 ④.你盼望他的回復(fù) 注意：詞數(shù)：100詞左右 Dear David，I am LiHua.I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture.I want to be your friend.Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.I was born in Chongqing in 1990，I study in the Experimental Middle School of Chongqing and I am good at English.I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails.What’s more，we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese or English and I’ll tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods，etc.of the Chinese.I hope we can keep in touch with each other.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours, LiHua 17.假如你是一名大學(xué)生叫李華，對近年來大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)情況頗有已見，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息向報(bào)社寫信談?wù)勀愕目捶āＷ謹(jǐn)?shù)100左右。開頭已給出。

學(xué)生心態(tài)向往城市，不愿下鄉(xiāng)。

就業(yè)現(xiàn)狀城市人才過剩；農(nóng)村渴求人才。

就業(yè)前景農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have

in the city.Yours, Li Hua 18.假如你叫王東，你的叔叔三十年前離開家鄉(xiāng)去了美國。不久前，他觀看China Report節(jié)目，得知中國決定加大建設(shè)社會(huì)主義新農(nóng)村的力度，感慨萬分，于是發(fā)了一份e-mail給你，詢問近來家鄉(xiāng)的變化情況。請根據(jù)email內(nèi)容和提示要點(diǎn)，給你叔叔做簡要回復(fù)。E-mail開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

日期：20-03-2006 發(fā)件人：Wangguifu usa@hotmail.com 收件人：Wangdong_88@l63.com 主題：T0 Xiaodong Dear Xiao Dong How are you doing? The other day when 1 was watching China Report CCTV at home, I was excited to learn that the Chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside.The report at once took my thoughts back to the small village I once lived in.The houses were old and low.The roads were muddy and narrow.Villagers had to go a long way on foot or by bike in order to do some shopping or see a doctor in town.Because of very small income, villagers lived quite a plain life, even without TV sets or telephones.How time flies!.It is 30 years since I left my home village.It must have changed a lot.Would you please write and tell me something about its changes? Remember me to your parents!Yours，Wang Guifu 要點(diǎn)：①．叔叔離家后，家鄉(xiāng)變化很大。②．生活條件愈來愈好。

③．房子大而寬敞，許多人住進(jìn)了設(shè)施齊全的公寓。

④．裝了電話，買了彩電、洗衣機(jī)、冰箱等。⑤．寬敞的道路連接了村莊和城鎮(zhèn)。

⑥．買了拖拉機(jī)、卡車和汽車。⑦．學(xué)校教育良好。⑧．政府重視農(nóng)村城市化建設(shè)。

要求：1)、詞數(shù)：100左右。2)、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Uncle , I’m very glad to receive your email.Great changes have already taken place since you left , Our living conditions are getting better and better.Villagers have moved into big and comfortable houses, and many live in well-equipped blocks of flats.Almost all have been equipped with telephones.They have not only bought color TV sets , but also washing machines , fridges, etc.Wide roads have been built to connect villages and towns.Some families have got their own tractors, trucks or even cars.Besides, children can now enjoy very good education.Our government cares very much about the reconstruction of our countryside.We are speeding up the citifying of the villages.I hope that you and aunt will come back and have a visit to the new village.Best wishes.Yours Xiao Dong 19.請以宿舍管理委員會(huì)的名義寫一份通知，2007年4月2日發(fā)出。內(nèi)容如下：

①時(shí)間：4月5日晚上7點(diǎn)。②地點(diǎn)：3號樓103房間。

③內(nèi)容：學(xué)生宿舍安全問題：安全用電、火災(zāi)應(yīng)變、防止失竊等。

④參加人員：每間寢室一名同學(xué)。

⑤要求：帶筆記本，按時(shí)到場，做好記錄，并傳達(dá)給室友。

注意：1）通知的格式已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2）詞數(shù)：100左右。

參考詞匯：學(xué)生宿舍 dormitory，盜竊theft（n.）Notice A meeting is going to be held in Room 103 of Building 3 at 7 on the evening of April 5.Problems to be talked about at the meeting include the safety of the dormitories, proper use of electricity, what to do in case of fire, prevention of theft and so on.A member of each dormitory is required to be present.They should take notebooks with them and arrive on time.They should take notes carefully and after the meeting they are to inform their roommates of what is discussed and what measures will be taken.The Dormitory Committee April 2nd, 2007 20.假如你叫李平，是一位成績優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生，你班班主任在安排座位時(shí)，讓成績好的學(xué)生和成績差的學(xué)生作同桌，這在你們班成績優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生中引起了反響，團(tuán)活課上大家就此進(jìn)行了討論。現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下表把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下，并說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

贊同反對你的觀點(diǎn)

1．人人有長處和不足，成績差的學(xué)生也有可取之處； 2．相互學(xué)習(xí)，建立友誼；

3．通過幫助學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)從而使他們建立自信。1．部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常違反校規(guī)校紀(jì)，擔(dān)心自己會(huì)受影響，養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣。2．老是問問題，使自己不能專心學(xué)習(xí)。？

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100~120，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．短文需包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。3．參考詞匯：成績差的學(xué)生：a slower student Dear Mr.Zhang, We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.Some are for the idea.As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses.Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts.Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all.However, others don’t hold the same view.They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits.Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that

we can learn from each other and make progress together.Yours, Li Ping 21.假如你是校報(bào)負(fù)責(zé)人，急需在學(xué)校內(nèi)聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯，請你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”為題目寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容要如下：

⑴．該工作主要包括兩部分：一是從英文報(bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學(xué)生的文章；二是選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來稿。⑵．希望該同學(xué)滿足下列要求：

① 樂意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù)； ② 英文與美術(shù)皆好；能熟練使用電腦。

③ 感興趣的同學(xué)請?jiān)诒局軆?nèi)與學(xué)生會(huì)（Students’ Union）聯(lián)系。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）不要逐字翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。An English Editor Wanted Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students.The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．

We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts.Besides, the ability to use the computer is important． Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week．

Students’ Union 22.假定你是某市居民，名叫李華。你覺得該市出租車行業(yè)問題較多，請寫一封信給該市市長，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

問題(1)停靠點(diǎn)太少，不易打的;(2)欺詐外地乘客;(3)車速過快，事故頻頻;(4)仍有拒載者;(5)深夜聚集在娛樂場所外等客時(shí)制造噪音，影響他人休息。

建議 要求加強(qiáng)管理

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。文章開頭已給出。2.參考詞匯：繞道：take a roundabout route 不替別人著想的：inconsiderate(adj.)行業(yè)：trade 加強(qiáng)管理：tighten control over? Dear Mayor, I’m a resident of the city.I feel there are many problems existing in the trade of taxi in our city.First of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a taxi.And taxis often run very fast, which causes many traffic accidents.What’s more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick up some passengers without any reason.Another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night taxis waiting around the entertainment places make much noise.Many people suffer from this inconsiderate action.A friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our city’s taxi drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route.What will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience? I think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade.Maybe the first thing to do is raise the taxi drivers’ professional morality.We are looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours，Li Hua 23.如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請根據(jù)下面圖表，用英語寫一則關(guān)于春游的通知。

參加者高中一、二年級的學(xué)生

活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.去博物館看《人與自然》的展覽。2.參加泉山植物園。

集合地點(diǎn)學(xué)校大門前

集合時(shí)間1.4月25日上午乘校車前往； 2.早上七點(diǎn)集合，七點(diǎn)二十分開車。

注意事項(xiàng)1.參觀展覽時(shí)保持安靜；并認(rèn)真記筆記，準(zhǔn)備回來后討論。2.在山頂野餐，要自帶午餐和飲料。3.參加者在本周四前到學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名。

注意：

1.通知必須包括表內(nèi)所列內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整內(nèi)容的順序和增加細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。2.詞數(shù)：100左右。3.通知時(shí)間：4月24日 4.生詞：植物園the botanical garden;報(bào)名sign up for;學(xué)生會(huì)the Students' Union Notice The students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two will go out for a visit on April 25.We'll first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature.When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back.After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it.So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.Our school bus will take us there.The school bus will leave at 7:20.Please gather at our school gate at 7:00 a.m.Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students’ Union before Thursday.The Students’ Union April 24 24.假設(shè)你是浙江大學(xué)的老師，你將在開學(xué)典禮上向一年級的新生致辭。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇演講稿就大學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)生活提出幾點(diǎn)要求，并適當(dāng)闡述其重要性。

①．合理安排學(xué)習(xí)和生活 ②．同學(xué)之間關(guān)系融洽 ③．積極參加校園社團(tuán)活動(dòng) ??

參考詞匯：大學(xué)一年級新生 freshman n.社團(tuán) society n.注意：1)．演講稿必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語。2)．演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。3)．詞數(shù)：100—120 Good morning, everybody.Welcome to Zhejiang University!As a freshman, you are going to have a completely new life.So here is something you should keep in mind.First, arrange your time properly.You’d better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and take advantage of every minute.It will make your work more efficient.Living in the university, sometimes you will face some problems that you can’t deal with all alone.Then help from others will make things easy for you.So get along well with all the people around you.Always be open-minded and warm-hearted.Don’t speak ill of others at will.You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family.At last, take an active part in societies.Societies

at school are your second teachers.It will not only provide you more chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but make your school life rich and colorful as well.Enjoy your university life!25.下面是一個(gè)中學(xué)生給某報(bào)編輯部寫的一封信，仔細(xì)閱讀并就信的內(nèi)容以編輯的名義給此中學(xué)生回一封信。Dear editor.I am an active girl, and I speak and laugh loudly in the classroom, like a boy.I don’t care about small matters.On the contrary, my neighbor, the girl who sits next to me, speaks quietly and dare not do the things I often do.I can understand this.What I can’t stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things.How can I get along with her? yours Sunny, 注意：1)．書信格式要規(guī)范；

2)．回信需就原信內(nèi)容給出至少三條建議（如談心，相互理解，參加他們的生日等活動(dòng)，談?wù)摴餐掝}，分享快樂等等）； 3)．字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右。Dear Sunny, It’s very good that you want to be friends with this girl.In my opinion, you’d better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her, because understanding each other is very important for you two.And I also think it’s better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities, such as birthday parties, going out for a walk, discussing some fashionable topics, and so on.Besides, helping each other is also very important for both of you.Just share happiness and sadness with her.And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you two will be good friends inthe future.Good luck to you.Yours, Editor 26.假如你是李華，針對目前有些中學(xué)生購買彩票的現(xiàn)象，給21st Century 報(bào)社編輯寫信，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ渲邪ㄒ韵乱c(diǎn)：

①．弊遠(yuǎn)大于利；②．中學(xué)生沒有經(jīng)濟(jì)來源，容易誘發(fā)一些不良行為；

③．從當(dāng)前說，會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)；

④．從長遠(yuǎn)看，會(huì)養(yǎng)成事事走捷徑的僥幸心理，其危害將影響其一生。

注意（1）信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；（2）必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐句翻譯；（3）字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，不包括開頭、結(jié)尾。Dear editor , At present , many high school students are addicted to buying lottery tickets and they seem to have good reasons.However , I’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon.In my opinion , its disadvantages are far more than its advantages, despite one of their reasons that they can do something useful for society in this way.High school students can’t support themselves financially but depend on their parents for the moment.Thus, in order to collect money with which to buy lottery tickets, they may try every possible means , even commit crimes.In addition, if they put their minds on lottery tickets, their lessons will be more or less affected.And in the long run, lottery ticket purchasing may contribute to their wrong understanding that there must be a shortcut to every destination , which will surely do great harm to their future life.Therefore, I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now.Yours , Li Hua 27.假如你是王林，李明是你的好友，他對布朗先生的公司感興趣，打算到該公司謀職（apply for a position）。請根據(jù)下面李明的簡歷表，用英語為他寫一封推薦信。

詞數(shù)110左右。

姓名李明性別男國籍中國

出生地重慶婚否已婚出生日期1980.8.21 通訊地址重慶市人民路148號電話023-63335550 職業(yè)律師學(xué)歷大學(xué)畢業(yè)

外語水平擅長英語，懂一些日語、德語

其他有三年工作經(jīng)歷，辦事認(rèn)真，待人誠懇，與人和睦相處 Dear Mr.Brown, I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr.Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position in your firm.He graduated from college three years ago and has worked as a lawyerever since.He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German.He works hard and is careful in everything he does.He is honest, kind and easy to get on with.He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Chongqing, China.He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Chongqing city.His telephone number is 023-63335550.He shows great interest in your firm.If he is accepted, he will do his best.I’m sure he will be fit for the position.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Wang Lin 28.假如你是業(yè)余氣象員，你從電臺天氣預(yù)報(bào)節(jié)目得知了今晚和明天上午你處的天氣情況，晚飯后6點(diǎn)鐘在校廣播室用英語向全體師生作天氣預(yù)報(bào)，并提出忠告。要點(diǎn)如下： ①午夜至凌晨兩點(diǎn)有強(qiáng)勁北風(fēng)。②氣溫將下降5-8度。

③明天上午有陣雨。④要求同學(xué)們今晚離開教室時(shí)關(guān)好門窗。

⑤明天早上起床時(shí)多穿些衣服，以防感冒。詞數(shù)100在右。Attention, please.It is six o'clock in the afternoon.I'm now giving the weather forecast as usual.From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8℃.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning.Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning, please put on more clothes in order to keep yourself from catching cold.That's all.Thank you.III.表格提示類

29.下表是對某中學(xué)高三一班50個(gè)學(xué)生健康問題的調(diào)查表。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，綜述學(xué)生

當(dāng)前存在的健康問題，并就中學(xué)生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。詞數(shù)要求: 120左右。

問題類型學(xué)習(xí)焦慮逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏鍛煉視力不佳

人數(shù)352015402535 比例70％40％30％80％50％70％

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep.Coming next is the lack of physical exercise.40% of the students surveyed won't obey their parents or teachers.Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others.So far as 1 am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies.Just like a saying goes:“ All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything;However, too much attention has been paid only to studies.Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of--classroom activities to solve all the problems.Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.30.去年，上海復(fù)旦大學(xué)開始通過面試自主招收學(xué)生，今年又有一些學(xué)校加入到這一行列。這一新的招生方式在學(xué)生中引發(fā)了一場討論。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容給二十一世紀(jì)報(bào)編輯寫一封信反映討論情況。60% 的學(xué)生贊成40%的學(xué)生反對

1．面試可以全面綜合地評價(jià)一個(gè)學(xué)生； 2.鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生發(fā)展個(gè)性和特長； 3．社會(huì)需要一種更加開放和有效的錄取方式。1.面試帶有主觀性、片面性，可能不公正； 2.并非所有學(xué)生都擅于在面試中展示自己； 3.不可能在3-5分鐘內(nèi)評價(jià)一個(gè)人。

注意：1.開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。2.詞數(shù)：100左右

3.參考詞匯：comprehensive綜合的，subjective主觀的，one-sided片面的，evaluate 評價(jià)

Dear Editor, Recently, a discussion has been held in our school on whether it is reasonable for the universities to admit students through interviews.The results are as follows: 60% of the students support this action.They express that interviews can evaluate a student in a more thorough and comprehensive way.It can encourage students to develop their own interests and personalities.What’s more, with the development of society, a more open and efficient way to test a student’s abilities is needed.On the other hand, the other 40% students are against this idea.They argue that first, interviews may be subjective and one-sided, which could lead to unfairness.Second, not all students are good at showing their talents in interviews.Last but not least, a student can’t be judged in only three or five minutes.31.人類已進(jìn)入了一個(gè)嶄新的世紀(jì)，不同的人有不同的幸福觀。某英語雜志正在中學(xué)生中進(jìn)行幸福觀討論，請你根據(jù)下表的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述一些人的觀點(diǎn)及理由，發(fā)表對其中某一觀點(diǎn)的看法，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由，然后向該刊投稿。Students Opinion Reason Some MoneyBuying and doing anything Some Health For enjoyment

Some Wealth from parentsFree from work I ??

注意：1．不要照抄表中的原句，否則酌情扣分。2．詞數(shù)：120左右。What is happiness in my mind? Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.32.你校同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一場有關(guān)高考英語聽力測試的討論。討論的主題是：高考英語測試中的聽力部分該不該取消？請你根據(jù)下表中的提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該取消另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)該取消

聽是語言的四項(xiàng)基本技能之一，不能忽視

聽是獲取信息的重要途徑之一

國際合作日益增多，聽說能力應(yīng)加強(qiáng)考試中各地收聽效果好壞不

一、不公平

英語教師和語音設(shè)備城鄉(xiāng)差異過大

今后并非人人都要與外國人口頭交流

注意：1．文章的起始句已給出。2．詞數(shù)：100左右（不包括已給的起始句）。3．參考詞匯：取消—cancel 國際合作—international cooperation The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.Some students think that listening test should not be canceled.They insist listening is among the four basic skills.We therefore can not ignore it.Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world.So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.But others don’t agree.They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future.Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively.And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.33.請以My favorite Newspaper為題用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹21世紀(jì)報(bào)，短文應(yīng)包括下面表格中所提供的內(nèi)容。

報(bào)紙名稱及使用語言21st Century, 英文報(bào)紙

出版地點(diǎn)及出版周期北京，每周一期

版面內(nèi)容每周新聞，今日世界，語言課堂，體育與音樂，學(xué)生報(bào)導(dǎo)

特色圖文并茂

目的學(xué)習(xí)英語詞匯，提高英語水平，獲取各種信息

效果廣為人知，深受喜愛 My Favorite Newspaper

21st Century is my favorite newspaper.It is an English language newspaper which is published in Beijing each week.It has sections of different kinds, including News of the week, the World Today, Language Class, Sports and Music and Students Report.There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it.I enjoy reading the paper.I read it to improve my English.I have learnt a lot of new words and useful expressions.Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music.21st Century is very popular wiEnglish learners.I do love it.34.據(jù)調(diào)查，中國城市居民的電腦擁有率達(dá)30%。很多農(nóng)村居民對電腦也越來越感興趣，甚至有的家庭也買了電腦。參考下表寫一篇題為“Computers in China”的短文。詞數(shù)為100左右。

家庭買電腦的目的中學(xué)生使用電腦的情況

類別 比率因別 比率

孩子學(xué)習(xí)需要 70%學(xué)習(xí)資料查詢 30% 家長工作需要 20%上網(wǎng)、聊天、游戲 60% 娛樂 30%聽音樂、看光盤 20% Computers in China According to a recent investigation, about 30% of the city families have computer.Besides, many village people are more and more interested in computers and some of them even have bought computers.About 70% of the parents bought computers for their children to study, and some for their work.And even some people bought them for entertainment.The fact how the middle school students use the computers really surprises us.Only about 30% of them use computers to find out useful in formation.About 60% use computers to play games and 20% use computers to watch VCDs or listen to music.In my opinion, we should make better use of our best invention— computers.35.如今，外出旅游已成為時(shí)尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游時(shí)必備的。請你選擇至少最重要的五種物品，并說出理由。字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。DocumentsID card, passport Clothessweater, coat, walking, shoes Articlesmedicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle（熱水瓶）Equipmentmobile phone, compass Booksguidebook, map, magazine Other thingscamera, CD player, Mp3 While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes.I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go.The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun.The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests.Without it, we may get lost.And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane.What’s more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place.In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.36.目前，重慶的街頭出現(xiàn)了越來越多的貓與狗，對此“中學(xué)生英語報(bào)”組織了一場討論：城市內(nèi)是否可以飼養(yǎng)寵物。根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，介紹討論情況，并說明自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。

支持飼養(yǎng)寵物反對飼養(yǎng)寵物你的觀點(diǎn) 1．安慰孤寡老人

2．人與動(dòng)物和諧相處，增添生活情趣1．造成環(huán)境污染 2．吵鬧聲，甚至傷人??

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。2．可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3．開頭語已為你寫好。One possible version: Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.Some students think it’s a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets.Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.On the contrary, the other students are against the idea.In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment.What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals, so I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home.But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment or causing other troubles.37.據(jù)報(bào)道，2008年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)將選拔約十萬志愿者為之服務(wù)。請你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，討論志愿者應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么。短文應(yīng)包括下表中的內(nèi)容： DosDon’ts 1.待人禮貌、友好1．避免不得體的言行 2．堅(jiān)守崗位2．不忘履行自己的職責(zé)

3．介紹中國歷史和文化3．不損害祖國的形象

如果你成為志愿者，你還應(yīng)該做什么，不應(yīng)該做什么。（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：1。對所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2．字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。短文中已寫好了的部分，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。3．參考詞匯：形象—— image One Possible Version It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.What should the volunteers do and what should they not do? Firstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behaviour.Secondly, they should stick to their posts, offering good services, satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty, and never fail to do their duty.Thirdly, they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland.If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer, besides the above, I will work hard and creatively, but never be lazy.I will follow the law and disciplining, but never break them..I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors, and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great success.38．請你根據(jù)列表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文，比較newspaper與website的異同，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

相同點(diǎn)不同點(diǎn)

1．向讀者提供信息1．報(bào)紙一經(jīng)出版不能改變，而網(wǎng)站可以不斷更新內(nèi)容。2．通過刊登廣告賺錢2．報(bào)紙要花錢，而在網(wǎng)上可以免費(fèi)瀏覽信息。3．可以容易地在網(wǎng)站上發(fā)表自己的看法。

我的看法??

注意：

1、短文必須包括表內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；

2、首句已給出，不列入總詞數(shù)；

2、詞數(shù)：120詞左右。One possible version: Newspapers have been popular for a long time, but in recent years more and more people prefer to get news from the Internet.Newspapers and websites are similar in several ways.For example, they both aim at providing information to the public.Besides that, advertising is an important way for both of them to make money.In spite of the above similarities, there are a few differences.Websites update their news freely.As for newspapers, nothing can be changed once published.So websites offer us the latest news faster than newspapers.Furthermore, newspapers have to be paid for while most websites are free.And it is on the websites that we can express ourselves and exchange ideas with others more easily.In my opinion, websites and newspaper play their own roles in our lives and they are part of our lives.39.假如你是一名高三學(xué)生，經(jīng)常為看電視的事跟媽媽鬧意見，今天你和媽媽達(dá)成一致。請根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容，以An Agreement為題寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。

母親兒子

高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，看電視浪費(fèi)時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)一天很疲勞，看電視可以放松一下

兒子自制力差，看電視會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)，長期看電視會(huì)影響視力看電視也可以增長知識，了解國際國內(nèi)大事，緊跟時(shí)代

星期中不準(zhǔn)我看電視，但在周末允許我看新聞、文藝、體育或科普類節(jié)目

注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100—120，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．不要漏掉表格中的內(nèi)容，但不能逐字翻譯；3．可適當(dāng)增添合乎情理的過渡性語言。I am a senior three student.I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV.It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I’ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often.But I really can’t accept her ideas.I think it is a relaxation to watch TV after a day’s hard work.Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons.Now we’ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news, programs ,entertainment, sports and science.IV.純文字信息提示類

40.目前家長為孩子請家教是一種普遍現(xiàn)象。前幾年多見于初、高中學(xué)生，現(xiàn)在有些小學(xué)生也請家教。父母們?nèi)绱松岬没ㄥX和忍心占去孩子的時(shí)間，究竟是為什么呢？某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)正在征文，了解其中原因。請根據(jù)下面所給的標(biāo)題和首段內(nèi)容，分析慢、中、快三類學(xué)生請家教的原因并說明你對家教現(xiàn)象的態(tài)度。注意：詞數(shù)100詞左右。

參考詞匯：1．慢等生：catch up with sb.;become dependent on sth.依賴??

2．中等生：surpass vt.超過 3．快等生：more competitive 更有競爭力的 Why Students Have Tutors（家教）？

Les’s take one class, either in primary or high school, as an example and divide it into three groups: the slow, the middle, and the fast learners.In the past, the slow learners used to have tutors.Today, however, it seems all of them have tutors for one reason or another.The slow learners need tutors because they can’t catch up with others with their own efforts.They have difficulty in understanding the teachers and doing their homework..So after – class tutoring is really important to them.But the problem is that they may become dependent on tutors and not work very hard in class.As to the middle group learners, they worry about being surpassed and turn to tutors, too.What about the fast learners? Though they are confident about their present position, they are not quite satisfied.They fix their eyes on a high goal.They desire to learn more in order to be more competitive later.I think they have the right to have tutors, though I have no tutors.41.閱讀下面這封中學(xué)生來信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.Dear Editor: I am a new student at No.1 Middle School of Chongqing.My home is far from Chongqing, so I must live at school.This is the first time for me to get away from my parents.I feel very sad.When I left home, I could hardly tearing myself away from them..I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl.I have been crying in bed at night these days.I want to stay at home forever.I miss my parents very much..Could you tell me what to do ? Your early reply is expected.Regards Amy 請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，寫一封回信（信的開頭已為你好。詞數(shù)120左右）。

回信應(yīng)包括如下要點(diǎn)；1．鼓勵(lì)A(yù)my堅(jiān)定求學(xué)信心，志存高遠(yuǎn)，四海為家。2．就Amy的目前狀況，提兩到三個(gè)建議。Dear Amy: Thank you for your letter.I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.People often miss their parents the first time they leave home.Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment.You cannot live with your parents forever.I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.You need to make friend in your school, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now.Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life.Also I suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school.You will get much pleasure from it.Wish you happy every day.Faithfully yours

Editor 42.眾所周知，2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)將在北京舉行。為了辦好這次國際盛會(huì)，北京市將進(jìn)一步改善環(huán)境，修建更多的體育場館。與此同時(shí)，提高市民的素質(zhì)和修養(yǎng)也勢在必得，因?yàn)槲拿鞯呐e止在國際交往中非常重要。作為年輕人，我們自身也存在著一些不文明行為。請列舉你所觀察到的一些不文明行為（三種以上），并就此做出評論或提出建議。

It is known to all that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.In order to make it successful event, we will improve the environment of Beijing and build more venues.As the same time ,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication.I notice that sometimes some young people don’t behave properly in our daily lives.For example ,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere.The lawns are entered in the park although it is not right to do so.The flowers in public garden are picked.What is worse , rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street.In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China.So every one of us should form good habits from now on.43.肥胖已經(jīng)成為危害人們健康的嚴(yán)重問題，中小學(xué)生的肥胖趨勢更為明顯。你們班對此展開討論。根據(jù)不同的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

1．肥胖危害健康，應(yīng)該節(jié)食，鍛煉，預(yù)防肥胖。已經(jīng)超重的，應(yīng)該采取措施減肥。2．中學(xué)生長身體的時(shí)候，減肥會(huì)影響身體發(fā)育，也會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)，因此應(yīng)該順其自然。

肥胖：fatness Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health.And at present the situation in the teenagers is even worse, As to this, a discussion was carried out in our class.Some students think fatness does harm to our health, so it is necessary to be on a diet and take suitable exercise to prevent it.Those who are overweight should take measures to lose weight to be healthy.But others have a different opinion.They say losing weight will be bad for the teenagers during their growth course, as well as their studies.So there is no doubt to leave it as it is.44.請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩，展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂螅瑢懸黄涛摹?/p>

標(biāo)題為：My Teacher Mr Moore There’s a teacher Mr.Moore.Who is lovely and therty-four.Always encouraging us to try.He leads us to a world of“why”.We all admire him more and more.注意：1.不得照抄短詩原文。2.必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開。3.必須突出短詩的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。4.短文不能寫成詩歌形式。5.詞數(shù)：120左右。My Teacher Mr Moore Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most.,Though he is 34,he looks very young for hes age.And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.Compared with other teachers ,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of

teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”.So ,instead of giving us answers immediately ,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help.we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problem.What a wonderful world of “why”he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.45.哈爾濱第六制藥廠研制了一種新藥，藥品已經(jīng)被外商定購。請你根據(jù)提示為該廠產(chǎn)品寫一份使用說明書：

本藥品為中藥（traditional Chinese medicine），對肺病療效顯著。2 常量：每天三次，一次三粒，根據(jù)情況可以加服1－2粒。

服藥后身體不適要停服，小孩和老人禁服。4 本藥品應(yīng)存放在陰涼干燥處。5 使用本藥品要嚴(yán)格遵從醫(yī)囑。注意：寫作時(shí)要包括要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條翻譯。Medicine Operation Instructions The medicine is made by the Sixth Medical Factory of Harbin.It is a kind of traditional Chinese medicine.It has a great effect on lung disease.Take three pills once and three times a day.One or two pills can be added according to your condition.Stop it if you feel uncomfortable after taking it.It is not suitable for children or the old people.Please strictly follow the doctor’s instructions when you take it.This medicine should be in dark and dry places.46.以“Form a Good Habit”為題，談?wù)勗缙鸬暮锰帯Ｒ笱灾欣恚瑑?nèi)容連貫，可參考以下提示：1.有些學(xué)生遲到，是因?yàn)橥砥穑?2.晚起不僅影響學(xué)習(xí)，而且也是一種壞習(xí)慣； 3.早起是一種好習(xí)慣，因?yàn)樗芙o你帶來很多好處。早起有助于身體健康，有助于學(xué)習(xí)，有助于品德培養(yǎng)。英國有句俗話，“Early to bed, and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”這是千真萬確的，希望大家養(yǎng)成早起的習(xí)慣。

（注：品德培養(yǎng) train character；俗話 a saying）

Some students are often late for class because they get up late.Getting up late not only affects their studies but also is a bad habit.To get up early is a good habit, for it can do you much good.Getting up early can help you to be healthy.The air in the morning is fresh.If you breathe such air, it does you a lot of good.You can have some sports, too in the morning.This can make you stronger.The fresh air and quietness in the morning make you think more quickly than any other time of the day and memorize what you have learned easily.Another reason for you to think quickly and memorize things easily is that you have taken a long rest during the night.Getting up early can also help you to train your character.Some students can get up early, but some can not.This needs perseverance.There is a saying in English, “Early to bed, and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” This is very true.I hope everyone will form the good habit of getting up early.47.越來越多的學(xué)生在校外租房而不愿住大寢室。請根據(jù)下面提示，一分為二地用英語寫一篇短文，說說兩者各自的好處與壞處，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

1.學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間； 2.安全； 3.自由性； 4.與同學(xué)交往； 5.學(xué)習(xí)效果。

注意：可從其他角度闡述，但兩方面的理由都至少要有兩條；詞數(shù)100左右。Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm.Instead, they rent houses outside the school.There are advantages for both.Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates.And of cause it is safer.A dorm is

more like a society, wich enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later.As for renting houses to live alone, it’s better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly.But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.編者建議：如果想書面表達(dá)有較大進(jìn)步，多背誦范文不失為一種有效方法。作文范文來源途徑非常廣泛，例如《英語周報(bào)》。最好自己至少先構(gòu)思，再參照范文。另外，每次老師布置的作文以及考試作文要認(rèn)真對待，在文章內(nèi)容、書法、卷面等方面嚴(yán)格要求，之后認(rèn)真對照范文，找出自己不足，不斷改進(jìn)。還有，《核按鈕》上面關(guān)于書面表達(dá)有著豐富的、內(nèi)容實(shí)用的講解，對于這樣的素材同學(xué)們可千萬不要浪費(fèi)喲！

高考英語作文范文4篇

一．假如你是高三的學(xué)生，最近你就高三模擬考試該難還是該容易這個(gè)問題進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。請結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹有關(guān)調(diào)查情況，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

贊成偏難，反對偏易

贊成偏易，反對偏難

1．喜歡挑戰(zhàn)，越難越好；

2．有助于學(xué)生了解自己的薄弱環(huán)節(jié)，改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法。

1．題目太難，學(xué)生會(huì)泄氣，會(huì)害怕今后的高考； 2．題目容易，易獲高分，有自信。

注意：1．詞數(shù)150左右，開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter．

Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence．

I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy,teachers will not know how we are getting on with our studies, but if it is too difficult, we will lose heart 二．從學(xué)校畢業(yè)，或上大學(xué)，或步入社會(huì)，畢業(yè)意味著前進(jìn)、意味著選擇。請以Graduation and moving on為題，寫一篇100詞左右的畢業(yè)感言。

要求：

1、畢業(yè)前活動(dòng)：照相、留言等；

2、心情（依依不舍，又要前進(jìn)）及原因等。首句已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Graduation and Moving on Graduation is a time when we move on, from school to university, or out into the real world．

Before graduating from school, We usually have a variety of activities, like taking pictures, leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship，or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect．

However, I have mixed emotions about moving on．I want to stay and have more fun with my friends, but I will have to move on．Graduation means taking a step forwardmoving onward and upward．Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced．

Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not．Let's make great efforts so that our dream will come true．

三．假定你是某英文報(bào)的小記者，最近你對大學(xué)生的就業(yè)觀點(diǎn)及專家對此的看法進(jìn)行了采訪。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇題為“Different Job Outlooks”的短文，詞數(shù)100詞左右。

學(xué)生觀點(diǎn)：1．大部分想找一份薪金豐厚的工作； 2．部分持觀望態(tài)度，等待良機(jī)； 3．少數(shù)想自己創(chuàng)業(yè)。

專家觀點(diǎn)：不應(yīng)坐等，要盡快找份工作，理由是： 1．積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)； 2．掙錢養(yǎng)活自己；

3．明年就業(yè)形勢或許更嚴(yán)峻。Different Job Outlooks Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks.For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed.However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs.They are just waiting for better chances.Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting.They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later.Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.四．不知不覺我們已進(jìn)入高三年級，高考一天天逼近。為了在學(xué)習(xí)上不落后于同學(xué)，很多學(xué)生搬出學(xué)校的集體寢室，在學(xué)校附近租了房子。就這一現(xiàn)象請你寫一篇英語短文來發(fā)表自己的看法。內(nèi)容包括：

1在校外租房子的利與弊。（至少各寫兩點(diǎn)）2．你同意還是反對這種做法?并陳述你的理由。（至少寫兩點(diǎn)）

注意：

1．詞數(shù)為120個(gè)左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3．開頭語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總宇數(shù)）。

參考詞匯：宿舍dormitory Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year．The college entrance examination is approaching day by day．Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count． It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room．What’s important，with their morns taking care of them，they can spare more time for studies．However，there exist some disadvantages．For example，sometimes their minds go wandering easily without

competitors round．Furthermore，a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily． In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship，noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10：30 p.m.，leading to a serious lack of sleep，I think．Worse still，they don’t make fullest use of time to study so，from my perspective．I prefer to live in the rented room．

2008年上海英語高考作文范文

高考英語開放性作文的典范

——1999—2008年上海高考英語作文及范例 1999年上海高考作文及范例

一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為學(xué)英語很重要；一些學(xué)生則認(rèn)為不必學(xué)英語；我認(rèn)為??（觀點(diǎn)、理由）Some students think it is very important to master English.They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”.Others consider English useless.They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school.Of all subjects I like English best.There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject.First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world.Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work.Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities.In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible.(166words)2000年上海高考作文及范例

1、我最難忘的一課

2、具體說明為何難忘

3、感想 An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things.But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident.One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us.While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced.But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom.With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.She sat on a chair and began her lesson.She spoke slowly but forcefully.She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same.Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.A good teacher is many things to many people.Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is.In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the

students are perhaps liked best.(210 words)2001年上海高考作文及范例

請你談?wù)勣I車大量進(jìn)入家庭后，對家庭、環(huán)境和經(jīng)濟(jì)可能產(chǎn)生的影響。Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise.Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners.A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely.Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year.Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars.Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically.What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.Every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents.In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.(199 words)2002年上海高考作文及范例

簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容，結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，就圖片的主題談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/p>

Duo to theone-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole world family.Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child.We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child.Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease.If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future? For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles.Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century.(219 words)2003年上海高考作文及范例

你的好友因家境一般買不起名牌而悶悶不樂。給他寫信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。

受信人：徐海青 寄信人：黃平寫信日期：2003年六月八日 June 8, 2003 Dear Xu Haiqing，You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands.So you felt very depressed.There are different views on people’s wear.The following are my ideas about it.Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies.No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality.Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family.You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.I hope you understand what I mean.I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.(205 words)2004年上海高考作文及范例

老師要求你負(fù)責(zé)班級墻報(bào)（wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意見。在日記中表述你的決定并談?wù)勏敕ā?/p>

Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class.I was so glad at that.But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it.I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job.On the other hand, I’m good at drawing.The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study.Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper.Perhaps it will affect my studies as well.Perhaps?

No!No!No!I should believe my ability.I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper? It will be an hour for me to do something for my class.I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job.I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow.(187)2005年上海高考作文及范例

古人云：“天生我材必有用”（There must be a use for my talent）。通過描述你

生活中一件事，說明人各有所長，無論才能大小都能成為有用的人。There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent.I have regarded it as my motto for many years.From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another.With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road.He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture.Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s

第五篇：高考英語寫作

【寫作模版】

(1)辯論式議論文①模版1

Some people believe(argue，recognize，think)that 觀點(diǎn)1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點(diǎn)2.As for me，I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all，論據(jù)1.More importantly，論據(jù)2.Most important of all，論據(jù)3.In summary，總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student，I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above，we can predict that 預(yù)測.②模版2

People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點(diǎn)1，while others point out that 觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned，the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing，論據(jù)1.For another，論據(jù)2.Last but not the least，論據(jù)3.To conclude，總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student，I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above，we can predict that 預(yù)測.③模版3

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（爭論的焦點(diǎn)）。Some people are of the view that 觀點(diǎn)1，while others take an opposite side，firmly believing that 觀點(diǎn)2。As far as I am concerned，the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all，論據(jù)1。

Furthermore，論據(jù)2。

Among all of the supporting evidences，one is the strongest.That is，論據(jù)3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。

As a college student，I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above，we can predict that 預(yù)測.(2)圖表式作文

It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1，Y reaches its peak value of…(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all，…(第一個(gè)原因).More importantly，…(第二個(gè)原因).Most important of all，…(第三個(gè)原因).From the above discussions，we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).★★★對比觀點(diǎn)題型作文模板

（1）要求論述兩個(gè)對立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。

1．有一些人認(rèn)為……

2．另一些人認(rèn)為……

3．我的看法……

The topic of ①-----------------（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由

二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的觀點(diǎn)）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對這一觀點(diǎn)

Some people believe that ①----------------（觀點(diǎn)一）.For example, they think

②-----------------（舉例說明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one

thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤---------(反對的理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我對文章所討論主

題的看法)．

★★★闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述．

1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義．

2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí)．

3.給出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)

The good old proverb----------------（名言或諺語）reminds us that----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of

all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion,----------------(我的觀點(diǎn)).In short, whatever you do, please

remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.★★★解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑

1.問題現(xiàn)狀

2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))

In recent days, we have to face a problem-----問題的內(nèi)容, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明該問題的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,----------(進(jìn)一步舉例說明現(xiàn)狀)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).★★★說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測）

1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀

2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（或一方面）

3.你對現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法

life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之

一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預(yù)測)．)

★★★議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型（選擇型）模板

目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person tPeople, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people，因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view

Itis not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文模板

_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as fJust As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with,點(diǎn)一..into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that c

(3)答題性議論文模板

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.F______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I wo

(4)諺語警句性議論文模板

語 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It heoretically)

______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語

_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..★★★圖表作文的模板

（一）As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the _____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.（二）

It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1，Y reaches its peak value of…(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all，…(第一個(gè)原因).More importantly，…(第二個(gè)原因).Most important of all，…(第三個(gè)原因).From the above discussions，we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).★★★ 話題作文模板

現(xiàn)象說明文

（一）Nowadays, there are more and morein It is established that 相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù).Why have there been so many 某種現(xiàn)象? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is.The third one is the main cause of is due to It is high time that something was done upon it.On the one hand,.On the other hand, All these measures will certainly reduce the number of

現(xiàn)象說明文

（二）Recently, what amazes us most is ___.It is true that ___.There are many reasons explaining___.The main reason is ___.What’s more, ___.Thirdly,___.As a result,____.Considering all these, ____.For one thing, _____;for another, _____.In conclusion, ______.★★★ 應(yīng)用文（申請信）模板

Your addressMonth, Date, YearReceiver’s address

Dear ____,I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for the position in ___And I would like to write a letter to tell you that___/ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the ___ you are advertising___/I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand…On the other hand… I am enclosing my resume for you kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you offer me a precious opportunity to an interview./ I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience./ I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Best regards!

Yours sincerely,____________

★★★ 記敘文寫作

記敘人的文章要注意人物的肖像描寫，語言描寫，行動(dòng)描寫，心理描寫，以及細(xì)節(jié)描寫。記事的記敘文要注意人物，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)和事件的前因后果。過渡詞語要適當(dāng)變化，最好是夾敘夾議。

模式：

1.時(shí)間順序：One day sb was doing…, when…/ Hearing(Seeing)this, sb…/ When…, sb…/ After…, sb…/ While sb, sb…/ Though…, sb…/ How(What)…!First,…Then,…After/ When/ As soon as…Finally,…

2.地點(diǎn)順序

At eight in the morning, September 16, sb set off/ out for some place.As soon as sb got to the place, sb… About half an hour later, sb arrived at… where… After sb reached…, sb began to do… When sb came to the …, sb…