第一篇:高水平高考英語寫作
求助信
Dear Mary,I am sorry to trouble you, but nobody would come into my mind to help me except you.You know, I had planned this holiday for several years.At last, my dream came true.You could imagine how excited I was.My mind was completely occupied with the holiday.I forgot to collect my laundry.I don't know if you can help me collect my laundry.I sent the laundry to the John's.It is the one down the corner on St.Peter's Street.You can't miss it, because the house is painted green-a big green house.I have got two pairs of trousers, three shirts, one T-shirt and a blanket.Call a taxi to send you home.I will pay you back when I am home.My first stop is London.It is raining.The streets are very clean.How I wish I could have the chance to see the famous London fog.But someone told me that was already the history.One can only read things like that about London in books.My best wishes to you.Yours sincerely,Peter Chen
邀請函
Dear Mr.Williams,Thank you for your letter of congratulation on my exam results.I was very pleased to hear from you.The results were a great relief.I did much better than I thought I would.We are having a celebration party on Saturday 22 May and we shall be pleased if you can come.It is a party for me, but my parents and some of their old friends are joining in, so you will find “real people” as well as teenagers to talk to.The party starts at half past six- drinks, and a buffet supper later.You said in your letter that you've given up driving, so my father will meet you with the car at San Mateo station.Please let me know what time your train arrives.There is a good train back to San Palo at 10:30 and we'll arrange transport for you to catch that.I hope that won't be too late for you.It would be a pity if you had to leave while the party was still in full swing.I do hope that you will be able to come.Yours sincerely,Lily Chen
描述信
Dear Tom,I'm just writing to let you know that we're all well, and I hope you are, too.Unfortunately, I've got some rather bad news for you: I'm afraid I made a bit of a mess of John's car.Anyway, here's what happened.We were on our way to Carol's after a long party, and I suppose it must have been about eleven o’clock.Well, the last few miles back home were really dark and deserted.I now realize I was probably going a bit too fast for a country lane because, although the road was fairly straight, I drove up onto the curb and went into a tree.Of course, John was absolutely furious and started shouting at me and cursing.After we'd argued for a few moments, we decided to look at the damage, and he calmed down a bit.Well, we found we could move the car, but the wing was caught on the wheel, so we couldn't drive it.I tried to pull the wing clear, but I didn't succeed.Anyway, John went off to phone for a breakdown lorry, but while he was away, I had another go at the wing and this time succeeded in pulling it right off.I threw it onto the back seat, and by that time John got back and we were ready to go, so we didn't need the breakdown lorry at all.John has more or less forgiven me now, but he was very angry with me for a few days.I suppose I was a bit careless.Well, that's all for now.Next time I write I hope I'll have better news for you.Yours sincerely,Linda Chen
道歉信
Dear Ms.Reinhart,I am terribly sorry that I failed to arrive at BLCU last Friday.I hope that this did not mess you up completely, although I know that you had already made some special arrangements for my visit with you parents and friends.I am very sorry about all that.I am sure you will be sympathetic, however, when I tell you that my father is dangerously ill in hospital, and that I found it impossible to leave for the visit when he is in this state.My father was working very hard on his project on protecting the environment.I know the project has come to a very important stage.He and his assistants did not take regular rest for three weeks.Last night, my father had a heart attack and was soon sent to the hospital.The doctor said my father was in a very serious situation, and, he might need an operation.hours have passed.Nothing has changed.I have to stay at the hospital.I will let you know if there is any good news.I am sorry again and look forward to seeing you soon.Yours sincerely,Tom Willia
感謝信
Dear Mr.Seaton,Thank you very much for taking me with you on that splendid outing to London.It was the first time that I had seen the Tower or any of the other famous sights.If I'd gone alone, I couldn't have seen nearly as much, because I wouldn't have known my way about.The weather was splendid on that day, which I thought was rare.I still remember some people told me that in Britain there was weather and no climate.During the same day, it might snow in the morning, rain at noon, shine in the afternoon and be windy before the night falls.So I think I was lucky.I think the river trip was the best thing of all.London really came alive for me as we saw it from the Thames during that wonderful journey down to Greenwich.It was all tremendously exciting - a day that I shall never forget.Thank you for giving me such a great birthday treat.Yours sincerely,Linda Chen
建議信
Dear Mary,Thanks for your last letter.I'm so glad that you have been able to arrange a holiday in Australia.As I fear I won't be able to meet you at the airport when you arrive, nor will I be able to be home until later in the afternoon, so here are some instructions and suggestions.There is a bus from the airport to the city.It is much cheaper than a cab.Take the bus to the city and ask to get off at Town Hall railway station.To get to my place in the eastern suburbs you have three options.You can either take a cab, a bus or the train.I suggest you take the train, since the airport bus will leave you right at the station.Get off at Cliff Station.From there you can either walk to my place(about ten minutes)or take a taxi.Probably you should take a taxi as you will have luggage.When you arrive at my flat, ring the intercom for Flat 2.My friend Lillian will be at home and she will open the front door for you and let you into my flat.Presumably you will be tired and want to sleep.But if you feel like some exercise after that long flight, you could go to Cooper Park, which is only ten minutes away, and you can see it from the window.Cheers and looking forward to seeing you.Yours sincerely,Annie
求助邀請信
Dear Tom,It is a long time since I heard from you last time.How is everything going?Are you accustomed to the life in Germany since you have stayed there for several months? Do you like the German food? If there is something interesting please tell me, and I will be pretty happy to hear that.I am also interested in German but I find it really hard to learn.I don’t know whether you have good methods to learn it.My teacher tells me that to master a foreign language we need a good dictionary.Will you recommend a good dictionary to me to help me study German?
Now it is good time to travel since there are attractive sceneries everywhere in China.If you have free time, I strongly recommend that you come to China and have a look.I will be a good guide and I am sure you will not be disappointed.Hope to hear from you soon./Look forward to your reply.Yours
第二篇:高考英語寫作
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高考英語寫作模板
一:議論文模版
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
①There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.②People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.③As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
①Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.②Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____缺點二______.③To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文【問題解決型】
①Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.②As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.③Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)圖表作文的框架
①As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goes /increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.②There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing
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如何寫出好作文
1.謀篇布局:認真審題,確定文章的體裁并列出提綱 2.段落發展:條理清楚、銜接得當、句式多樣 3.句子表達:語言正確、表達地道、信息豐富
高考大綱中常用的連接詞
1.表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內容
另外,還有:what is more;besides;
also;moreover;in addition
2.表示轉折關系
但是,然而,相反:but;however;yet;
instead;on the other hand;
on the contrary.3.表示因果關系
因為,因此,所以: since;as;because
(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;
4.表示條件關系
如果,只要: if;on condition(that);
as long as
除非: unless
否則: or else 5.表示時間關系
當… 的時候 : when;while
在…之后: after
在…之前: before
直到: until
一…就… : as soon as
后來,然后: later;afterwards
不久: soon 近來: lately;recently
自從… :since
從那時起: from then on 6.表示特定的順序關系
首先,最主要的: above all
其次: secondly
然后: then;next
最后: finally;in the end
7.換一種方法表述
換句話說: in other words;
that is to say;
高考直通車網站:http://www.tmdps.cn/ 歡迎關注@高考直通車 微博:http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 8.進行舉例說明
例如,比如: for instance;for example;
like;such as
9.用于陳述事實
實際上: in fact;actually;
as a matter of fact
跟你說實話 : to tell you the truth
10.對一個話題進行總結
總而言之,總的來說:
on the whole;in short;all in all;
in general;in a word 11.其它常用到的副詞
Therefore;otherwise;finally;
furthermore;Thus;
namely;
although;afterwards;personally;
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第三篇:高考英語寫作
高考英語作文范文50篇
2009年全國各省市高考英語書面表達題
范文集錦完整18套(附解析及專家簡評)
一、(2009全國卷I、海南、寧夏卷)
假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在家,你準備外出,請給Mrs Wilson 寫一留言條,內容包括: 1.外出購物 2.替房東還書
3.Tracy 來電話留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)盡快回電
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】 Mrs Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua 【解析】
作文題仍然同去年一樣,屬于提綱式要點作文,要求學生就所給內容寫一張留言條,是學生比較熟悉的題材,體現了英語學習應該注意實用性,生活型的原則。應注意下面幾點:1)注意人稱,應該用第一人稱的形式給房東(第二人稱)寫便條;2)注意時態的正確使用:從試題的內容上可以看出在表達要點1和2時應用將來時;而要點3中的幾個方面則需要注意時態的替換,會用到一般過去時,現在時和將來時。3)注意恰當使用邏輯詞語,是各個要點間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句,因此要仔細組織語言,合理安排結構。在語言方面,要特別注意簡潔明了,開頭要開門見山。
【專家簡評】
依然保持全國卷I短文寫作的老套路:人物李華(自1999年以來,中間除了02年,統統都是李華同學在寫信,歷時十年,眾多效尤者),話題為簡單的外語外事活動,形式為寫信(郵件或留言),實則依然是短文寫作,控制程度較高,體裁以陳述說明為主。
二、(2009.全國卷II)
假定你是李華,你的美國朋友sarah 打算暑期來北京旅游,來信詢問改建后前門大街的情況。請你寫封回信,簡單介紹以下內容:
1.簡況:長800余米、600多年歷史、300余家商鋪;
2.位置:天安門廣場南面;
3.交通:公共汽車17、69、59等路,地鐵2號線; 4.特色:步行街、當當車、茶館、劇院等。
參考詞匯:步行街 pedestrian street 當當車 trolley car 地鐵 subway 注意:
1.詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭語已為你寫好,請將完整的回信書寫在答題卡上。
【參考范文】 Dear Sarah, Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops.As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus.You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.I’m sure you‘ll like it.【解析】
本文是書信格式,給出四個要點,屬于常規文體,學生只要把四個要點寫全,注意上下文,句與句之間的合理過渡即可。
【專家簡評】
人物李華,簡單的外事活動。體裁屬于陳述說明性質。話題是介紹前門大街改建情況。但這個話題對全國卷II考區的考生多少有些歧視。這種歧視可以理解為城鄉歧視和信息歧視。因為該考區學生對前門并不熟悉,所幸試題控制很嚴,只當是翻譯了。另外,試題所提供的名詞類詞匯缺乏考試的實際意義,只是照抄而已,對考生并無挑戰。
三、(2009.北京卷)
第一節,情景作文(20分)
假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華,為響應綠化祖國的號召,你班四月十二日去郊區植樹,請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序,介紹植樹活動的全過程,給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。
注意:詞數不少于60 提示詞:郊區 suburbs 第二節 開放作文(15分)
請根據下面提示,寫一篇短文,詞數不少于50 第一節 情景作文(20分)
一、內容要點:
1、騎車去植樹
2、植樹
3、安插提示牌
4、照相
二、說明:
內容要點可用不同方式表達
【參考范文】
Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【解析】
本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文,與環保結合,立意較好。題材貼近學生實際,學生只要注意理清思路按照活動的內容和時間來寫即可。
【專家簡評】
在全國卷和地方卷中,08年只有北京卷是記敘文,09年又是記敘文。有趣的是,都是“紅星中學高三一班的學生李華”。場景設置幾無二致,形式更是何其相似乃爾。如果追索源頭的話,全國卷NMET時代的連環畫看圖說故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年書面表達題跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格連環畫的形式,多少讓人回到了九十年代。一個是紅星農場,一個卻是紅星中學。就話題而言,08北京是春游活動,09北京是植樹主題,而NMET1998則是參觀活動主題,話題顯然高度相關。
第二節 開放作文(15分)
【參考范文】
What an interesting picture!A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【解析】
本文是開放性作文,要求考生把握好圖畫內容,發散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發高鼻的外國人,要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。
【專家簡評】
北京卷每年的第二篇作文(開放作文)一直都比較新穎,也能引人思考,問題是往往那個思考的關鍵點(文眼),學生未必能抓住或說未必能清楚地表達出來,尤其是要達到一語破的之妙,在高考那種氛圍中,似乎不易。In my opinion,we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.這樣的靈智多么需要現場的急智啊!如何讓自己的思想收縮在幾個簡單的句子結構里面,這本身就是智慧。
北京卷的短文寫作基本形成了自己的風格。近幾年一直比較穩定。而2010年的北京隨著課改的深入,高考應該會發生一些變化。
四、(2009.天津卷)
61.假設你是晨光中學的學生會主席李華。學生會將舉辦每年一度的英語演講比賽,本的主題為“The English Novel I Like Best”。作為組織者,你將在演講比賽開幕時發言,請你根據以下提示用英語寫一篇發言稿。
1.說明比賽的意義,如提高英語聽說能力,養成讀書的習慣等;
2.說明比賽的注意事項,如每人演講不超過5分鐘,語言流利,發音準確等; 3.預祝比賽圓滿成功。
注意:
1.詞數:不少于100詞;
2.可適當加入細節,以使行文連貫;
3.發言稿的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入詞數。
一、評分原則
1.本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分 2.評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最后綜合給分。
3.詞數少于100的,從總分中減去2分。
4.評分時,應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。每錯誤書寫3個單詞從總分中減去1分,原則上不超過3分,重復的不計。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。標點符號錯誤,將視其對交際的影響程度酌情減分。
6.如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。
二、內容要點
1.說明比賽的意義,如提高英語聽說能力,養成讀書的習慣等;
2.說明比賽的注意事項,如每人演講不超過5分鐘,語言流利,發音準確等; 3.預祝比賽圓滿成功。
【參考范文】
Good afternoon.Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English.While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English.In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules.First, you should finish your speech in five minutes.Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently.Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.I hope that the English speech competition wil be a great success!Thank you!【解析】
本題屬于提綱式作文,體裁為應用文中的演講稿,題材內容貼近學生生活,給出要點表述較全,題的難度較小,考生注意一下幾點即可:
1、學生在寫作時對所給要點逐一陳述,適當發揮,不要逐條翻譯,語言不要太書面化。
2、正確運用關聯詞,使上下文聯系更加密切,邏輯性強。
3、注意要使所寫內容和原文所給出的開頭、結尾處銜接自然,渾然一體。
【專家簡評】
天津卷的一貫風格接近全國卷I。前五年主要涉及與中學生生活學習相關(04,07,08)話題和與外事活動相關話題(05,06)。09年則是與外語學習相關的話題。本題屬于標題作文,天津共出現三次標題作文(04:中學生應該如何使用家長給的零花錢。07:How to Protect Our Eyesight)。體裁屬于陳說性質,連續多年都使用陳說性質或陳說+議論性質,08年則是敘事+議論,這說明天津比較偏好陳說性質和議論性質這兩類寫作文體。
五、(2009.四川卷)
假設你是李華。你的外國筆友Jane打算于七月來中國,特來信了解中國人的社交習俗。請你用英語回一封信,從以下幾個方面作具體介紹。1.頁面時的問候方式; 2.對毛病伯回答方式; 3.接收禮物時的回應方式; 4.餐宴禮節。
注意:
1.詞數100左右,信的開頭和結束語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)。2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節,使行文連貫。
【參考范文】 Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July.The following are some Chinese customs.Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care.Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners.Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away.Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.Anyhow, different cultures, different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】
本文是一種常規的書信體提綱式作文,要點有四,學生只要把四個要點用恰當的語言,條理的句子,合適的句式,表達完整,注意過渡和復雜句使用即可。
【專家簡評】
我一直認為語言學習的過程中應該雙向度滲透文化,而不是單純地從目的語國舶來文化,而且,更應該在學習目的語的過程中就開始將母語文化做對等的交流。惟其如此,才能充分使學生在語言學習中體會文化比較的快感,這個快感也是雙向的:一方面來自對異族語言文化的吸納與接受,一方面來自對母語文化的更深層次的認同感和自豪感。如果僅僅是單向度的獲取甚至是“掠取”異族文化或母語文化,而對其中之一進行貶損、排斥,這必然將語言學習引向反面,也必然會使生動有趣的語言學習變得枯燥乏味,同時也必然會使兩種語言的學習都產生障礙,由學習觀念的障礙演變成為學習行為的障礙。可喜的是,目前國人已有一種共識:要想學好外語,母語必須學好。雙語相長,漢英互補,這樣就可以大大的提高中國學生學習語言的效率。
六、(2009.安徽卷)
假設你正在參加全省中學生英語演講比賽,請你針對有些父母經常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現象,寫一篇演講稿,陳述你的觀點。
演講稿的主要內容應包括:
認為同學們不必為此苦惱;
希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷;
建議與父母進行交流和溝通。注意: 1.詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。
【參考范文】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong.My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them.If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.Thank you!【解析】
本文屬于提綱類作文,體裁為應用文中的演講稿,題材的現實性強,考生的話語較多,顯見這種作文,難度不大,考生應注意基本語言和句式的運用,以及上下文的過渡。
【專家簡評】
五年來,安徽基本上都是走的陳說(05)和陳說+議論(06,07,08)的文體路線。09年則來了一個典型的議論性質文體,這是一個很了不起的進步。和天津卷一樣,話題場景設置為英語演講比賽一類的活動。話題非常好,貼近中學生的實際生活。也是中學生十分困惑又十分敏感的一個問題。對于這樣的問題,中學生一般都有話可說,也有話能說。往往有這樣的情況,有話可說是滿肚子的漢語在心中翻滾,可是無法轉成英語。而這個話題的最大好處就在于有話能說。不過,本題的控制程度較高,三個觀點已經用漢語給出,考生只需將其翻譯或形成比較好的適合書面形態的英語即可。有幾個問題值得師生們探討。在這樣的控制下,如何使語言表達更加貼切?如何用較高級語匯來表達?如何過渡?如何畫龍點睛?如何使文氣貫通等等?
七、(2009.山東卷)
第二節 寫作(滿分30分)
假設你是李華,曾在美國學習半年,現已回國。你想聯系你的美國老師Mr.Smith,但沒有其聯系方式。請根據以下要點給你的美國同學Tom 寫一封信: 1. 感謝Tom對你英語學習的幫助;
2. 詢問Mr, smith 的近況并索要其聯系方式; 3. 邀請Tom在春節期間來中國感受中國文化。
注意:1.詞數120-150; 2.可適當增加細節。
【參考范文】
Dear Tom, I am now back China and sound.In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York.Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.However, his email address is not available.So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.With my best regards!Yours cordially, Li Hua 【解析】
本文仍屬于半開放性體裁,與書寫體結合給考生發揮的空間,考生按照三個要點的提
示,用合適的句式,句型表達出來即可。
【專家簡評】
李華,寫信,海外學習背景,回國后的聯系。和全國卷I短文寫作的基本命題路數一致,是一種小心翼翼的翻版。所給話題第三條“邀請Tom在春節期間來中國感受中國文化”不失為很好的思路。語言的學習離不開文化,語言的交流更離不開母語文化的輸出,學習別國語言并不代表別國的語言優于母語,更不等于別國的文化優于母語文化,只不過各自文化的發展路徑不一樣,文化的優勢結構也不一樣,等等。其實,文化的多元性和多樣性只能說明我們這個世界豐富多彩,而不能由此得出自家文化不如別國文化的觀點。所以,學習語言的目的不外乎兩個,一是要“師夷之長技”,也就是要將別國的器物文化、制度文化到思想文化化為己用,使自己的文化更為先進和發達;另一個則是“自立于世界民族之林”,也就是要將自己的獨特的燦爛的文化推介出去。所以,分省命題六年來,大家都接受了這樣一個觀點,那就是不僅要掌握目的語背后的東西,更要關懷母語背后的東西。不僅要關注異族語言與文化的輸入,更要關注母語及自家文化的輸出。
八、(2009.陜西卷)
假定你是李華。在一個英文網絡論壇上, 你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發帖(post)尋求幫助, 請根據帖子內容, 寫作要點和要求回貼。
寫作要點:
1.告訴Grown-up要理解母親;
2.給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議。
要求:
1.短文需寫在答題卡的指定區域。
2.短文詞數不少于80(不含已寫好的部分)。3.內容充實, 結構完整, 語意連貫。4.書寫須清晰、工整。Ks5 【參考范文】 Hi, Grown-up,As a student of your age, I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.Here are a few suggestions.First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”.It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.【解析】
考生在寫作中應該注意如下幾點: 1.文體:應用文(電子郵件)。2.主體時態:一般現在時。3.主體人稱:第二人稱。
4.內容要點:① 問題介紹;②建議一;③建議二;④我的愿望。
亮點句式:
1.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.2.Here are a few suggestions.3.it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.4.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards many things.5.Second, you should learn to do your own things well.【專家簡評】
李華,英文網絡論壇,這是高考英語寫作中第一次出現回帖的形式,盡管回帖和回信、回電子郵件沒有本質的差別,但是場景設置顯然更加貼近時代了,也更沒有寫信的形式限制了。因此,質而言之,這種回帖仍然屬于短文寫作范疇。這個話題是關于成長的困惑和煩惱,即自己認為自己已經成人,但在父母眼中仍然是孩子。這個當然是老話題,無甚新意,但由于這個話題是開放式的,即題中所提供的材料只是起到了引發話題的作用,不像其他卷種那樣由于材料豐富使得考生作文只是做一做翻譯或接近翻譯的工作,而陜西卷卻要求考生提出個人思考:“理解母親”和“解決問題的具體建議”。“理解母親”起碼可以有兩個思路:一是可以寫出年輕人應該主動接近母親,積極理解母親。二是可以寫出如何理解母親的具體方式,比如,開誠布公的談話,多關心母親等等。而“解決問題的具體建議”卻要求考生放開思維,自己找話說。可能因為眾多考生都會有話可說,甚至可能出現千差萬別的思路和千差萬別的作文,這樣可能對有效和公平閱卷會產生一定的不利影響。但是,09陜西卷不僅有個好話題,而且還有個好形式,因為這個展開性話題留給考生的思維空間相對較大。
九、(2009.江西卷)
學校即將舉行以“Turning a bad mood(心情)into a good one ”為題目的英語作文比賽,請按下列要求定一篇100詞左右的記敘文或議論文。1.好心情的重要性。2.產生壞心情的原因。3.應該如何調整心情。
記敘文 議論文
1.發生的具體事件。
2.對你的心情有何影響?
3.你如何應對?
【參考范文】議論文
Turning a Bad Mood into A Good One It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life.If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world.Most importantly, you will have a optimistic effect on the people around you.We all will live a harmonious and happy life.It is also good for your health.However,sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something.You may have a bad mood.If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible.As we all know, every thing has its two sides.So you should think more about its bright side.We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by.Remember: Only you can make yourself happy.I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!【解析】
今年依然是開放式的作文,只提出了一個話題“Turning a bad mood into a good one”, 并給出了體裁上的選擇和內容上的簡要提示。話題非常切合學生實際生活,考生只要按照要點去寫,注意過渡即可。
【專家簡評】
這是第一次在地方卷種中對寫作形式(體裁)作出的可選性規定,并分別給出了具體寫作內容及寫作說明。此舉為創新。這個標題作文的命制具備雙重可選特征,即既可以通過一個故事的敘述來完成,也可以通過對同主題的議論(重要性、原因與方法)來完成。這是一個典型的標題作文,江西05年獲得自主命題權,五年來,基本上為標題作文形式(除05年外),此次尤為特別。可以預見,在今后的全國卷地方卷試題改革中,這種形式將會成為各卷種效仿的對象,甚至可能走得更遠。
不過也要指出的是,在本題記敘文要求下的第三條“你如何應對”,筆者認為這樣的表述說明文的口氣過重,容易誤導考生的寫作。最好表述為“你是如何應對的”。這樣的表述才是敘事性的而不是說明性的了。第二條稍微好一點,不過建議改為“對你的心情產生了什么影響”。總之,那種“如何”,“有何”之類具有說明文性質的表述容易讓考生寫作時發生體裁“跑偏”現象。
十、(2009.江蘇卷)
鼠標是計算機時代最佳的人機交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計算機操作。但是,過分依賴鼠標的習慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標為切入點,根據下表所提示的信息,用英語寫一篇短文。
鼠標的必要性對多數人來說,操作計算機,上網沖浪??
鼠標的便捷性
點擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除??編輯文本,搜索信息??
收發郵件,選購商品??
點播音樂,下載電影??
如果過分依賴鼠標??(請考生結合自身感受,列舉兩到三點)
注意:
1.對所給要點逐一陳述,適當發揮,不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數150左右。開頭已經寫好,不計人總詞數。3.作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
【參考范文】
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.(153 words)
【解析】
本文為提綱式說明文體裁,所選內容與我們生活相關,考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述,適度發揮,不要逐條翻譯即可。
【專家簡評】
對于江蘇的考生而言,自08年改革以來,整卷分值雖然下降為120分,但短文寫作的分值仍然是25分,和絕大多數卷種同題賦分一樣。但是,從寫作詞數要求、寫作話題和寫作形式(體裁)幾個維度來看,江蘇卷的寫作可以歸為比較難的一類。第一,寫作詞數要達到150左右的卷種,目前只有廣東和江蘇兩地,09年江蘇范文詞數為153詞。第二,六年來,江蘇的話題選擇有一個明顯的特點:時代性比較強。從“江城介紹”(04)、“建設和諧社會”(05),“奧運志愿者的宜與忌”(06),“陽光體育活動”(07),到09年的“鼠標的利弊”等,這個話題選擇的路徑鮮明地反映出江蘇卷對時代的敏感性,問題是這些特色話題又給考生帶來了表達上的困難。對于優秀的考生,這種話題可能如魚得水,而對于中等偏下的考生,這種話題顯然有點“尷尬”:想說點什么,但要嘛說不出,要嘛說不好。第三,這個“難”還表現在寫作形式上,幾年來,江蘇卷主要采用的是混合形式的寫作:陳說+議論。我分析了一下09年江蘇卷給的范文,盡管鼠標的好處部分漢語提示很充分,控制很嚴,但要想精確表達,也不容易。尤其是題中未列出“不利影響”的部分,考生要想用寥寥三、四句話把這個“不利影響”說明白顯然需要功力,這個功力首先是要分析什么才是不利影響,列出個一二三,其次是如何轉換成英語,最后才是如何集中而簡潔地優化句子結構,使之達意而且有條理。由此看來,江蘇卷今年的難度不低,如果再在閱讀上加大閱讀量,那整卷難度就可想而知了。另外,江蘇有命制標題作文的習慣(05,06,08),09年卷雖然沒有直接給出標題,也沒有要求考生寫出標題,但主體性標題已十分明晰。
十一、(2009.湖南卷)
假設你是某中學新老師李紅,請給你的朋友張華寫一封信,告訴他你第一天上課的情況,主要內容如下:
1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情; 2.介紹你處理該事的方式; 3.談談你的感想。
注意:
1.詞數不少于120個;
2.可適當發揮想象,增加細節,以使行文連貫; 3.文中不得出現與本人及學校相關的任何真實信息。
【參考范文】
Dear Zhang Hua, It’s three months since I heard from you last time.Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson.On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class.He stood outside the classroom, silently.I smiled to him and let him came in.After a while, he cried on his desk.Then I walked to him and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students.How time flies!Class was over before I realized it.From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them.Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Li Hong 【解析】
本文屬于半開放性提綱式書信體,要點有三,選材學生熟悉,也是發生在他們身邊的故事,學生只要把握準情景和要求,使表達的內容不走題即可。
【專家簡評】
湖南卷這是第二次在短文寫作中涉及老師(06Mr Moore,09李紅)。第一次出現考生假設人是教師——“假設你是某中學新老師李紅”。這個假設在歷年的高考英語各卷種中都沒有出現過,可以理解為考生畢業后的可能,但這個可能只能是大學畢業后的事情了,看來這個未來生活起碼還得四年時間。可以劃歸到第三主題“與考生未來生活相關”。但由于考查的主題仍然是有關學習和課堂之間的事情,總的說來,有話可說,也有話能說,起碼可以杜撰一點熟悉的東西。
十二、(2009.湖北卷): 假設你是華華,與英國網友湯姆約定用對方的母語通信,以提高各自的外語水平。最近你收到湯姆的電子郵件(附后),發現有一個成語使用不當。請根據下列要點,用英文回一封電子郵件。
要點: 1.不應使用 “無所不為”,應使用 “無所事事”;2.說明這兩個成語的用法;3.給予鼓勵。
注意: 1.詞數為1叨左右;2.參考釋義:無所不為一do all kinds of bad things 無所事事一have nothing to do 3.除以上兩個成語外,郵件中不得使用其它漢字或拼音;4.電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好(不計人你所寫詞數),但不得抄人答題卡。
附(湯姆的郵件): 華華,你好!近幾天在忙什么事?有什么有意思的事嗎?我們的學校放假了,所以這幾天在家無所不為,飽食終日,只好上網發伊妹兒。沒意思。我決定找份工作,做個自食其力的人。祝好!湯姆
(以下所給內容不得抄入答題卡)
【參考范文】 Hi!Tom Nice to read your e-mail today.I noticed you’ve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However, I’m afraid there is one mistake I’d like to point out.It is “無所不為”.This idiom means “do all kinds of bad things”.Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that you’ve got nothing to do these days.In that case, you should use “無所事事”.We usually use “無所不為” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and “無所事事” to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do.Have I made myself clear? Anyway, I’m amazed at the progress you’ve made.Hop you’ll find a good job soon.Huahua 【解析】
本文題材現實性強,屬于較為保守的提綱式作文,考生只要審好題按照要點去表達即可。
【專家簡評】
六年來,湖北卷的寫信人物比較多樣而且有趣:05年是明華給建華寫信,07年是李華(也是學生會主席,跟09天津卷一樣)寫信,08年則改成了一個十分怪異人名——卜曼宜,其諧音極似“不滿意”或“not very easy”.而09年搖身一變又改成了華華,看來湖北卷是離不開李華同學的影子了。不過好歹總比卜曼宜好些。
本題和04年全國卷I的寫作題類似(外國人學中文,中文歌曲比賽),另外,07年高考語文湖北卷作文題也是以母語為話題的,這三者之間似乎有某種聯系。不過,本題對語言本身要求更具體,甚至討論到了成語的用法。應該說,能討論這么細致的漢語問題對于中學生學英語而言是一個很大的刺激或促進。而且,毫不夸張地說,跨語言、跨文化的啟示意義深蘊其間,對其他各卷種的命題思路不無裨益。
十三、(2009.福建卷)
某英語報社擬成立“微笑俱樂部”,現向癸未征募會員。要求申請者提交一篇題為“I want to Smile”的英語短文。請你以申請者的身份,根據以下思路圖的提示用英語寫一篇短文。
注意:
1.根據思路圖適當展開,以使行文連貫; 2.詞數:120左右
There are many advantages of smiling.It can not only make us happy, but also please others.If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return.So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.They arrange almost everything for me.With their help, I have made great progress.I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile.Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile.Tomorrow is another day.【解析】
本文為圖畫式作文,做題的關鍵是審題,考生要把握如下幾點: 1.文體:說明文。
2.主體時態:一般現在時。3.主體人稱:第一人稱。
4.內容要點:①微笑的優點;②想對其微笑的人物(父母);③對父母微笑的理由;④對
自己微笑的理由;⑤總結。
【專家簡評】
本題是一個好的標題作文(05福建卷:My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations)。六年來,福建卷基本上使用的是議論性質的寫作文體(04陳說,05、06議論,07、08陳說+議論),09年是一個典型的議論性質的文體。話題也非常好,和安徽卷一樣,非常適合中學生表達。但從命題的角度看,寫作難度較高,因為本題的控制方法不是采用漢語提綱形式,而是采用圖文形式,在語言轉換上較安徽卷難。從所給范文看,語言難度不高,但思維難度不低。考生得分不易。
十四、(2009.廣東卷)
第一節 基礎寫作(共1小題,滿分15分)
你是校報小記者,最近進行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時間: 上周末
對象: 眼科醫生(eye-doctor)王教授
主題: 我國中小學生近視(short-sightedness)問題
基本信息:(1)發生率: 略高于50%
(2)人數: 世界第一
專家解讀:(1)原因: 很復雜
(2)治療: 沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視
(3)建議: 不要過度用眼;多參加戶外活動
(4)特別提示: 如何握筆也和近視有關 [寫作內容] 根據以上情況寫一篇采訪報道,并包括如下內容: 1.采訪的時間、對象和主題; 2.中小學生近視的發生率及人數; 3.專家解讀。[寫作要求] 只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。[評分標準] 句子結構準確,信息內容完整,篇章結構連貫。
【參考范文】 Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness.It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No.1 in the world, are short-sighted.Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness.He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises.What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【解析】
本文題材貼近學生實際生活,這個話題真正的做到“話題來源于學生實際生活”。近視眼是每個校園所必不可少的現象,是學生校園生活得隱形熱點。因此今年的基礎寫作題目讓每個學生都有話可說。考生要注意三大要點和表格內容,恰當表達即可。
【專家簡評】
本題話題為近視問題,天津卷曾涉及過(07天津卷:How to Protect Our Eyesight)。但角度有不同。廣東卷側重的是問題本身的描述,而天津則是強調的如何保護視力。不過,能有做天津卷的經驗,對廣東卷也就不會有難的感覺。更何況廣東卷所給信息非常充分,對于考生而言,剩下的主要是組織句子了。需要特別指出的是,陳說性質的文體其核心在于陳述和說明(包括介紹),即講清楚一樁事情。
第二節 讀寫任務(共1小題,滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia.All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining.You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off.That’s right—sleep it off.The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.Thereason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists,who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience.Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal,which is understandable.How would you react,my friend,if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round,furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? * 考拉即樹袋熊 [寫作內容] 1.以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容;
2.然后以約120個詞就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”進行議論,內容包括:(1)人們在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照;
(2)假如你處在那些動物的處境,你會有什么反應;
(3)你認為是否應該禁止游客和動物拍照。[寫作要求] 1.在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。[評分標準] 概括準確,語言規范,內容合適,篇章連貫。
【參考范文】
The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos.The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people.Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have.But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed.No having peaceful surroundings to
sleep, don’t you suffer restless and fidgets.No doubt we do and so do the animals.I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.【解析】
今年的讀寫任務讓學生就“該不該禁止游客和動物拍照”展開議論。議論文的寫作有助于培養學生正確的價值觀,糾正不正確的價值觀。今年的讀寫任務暗中旨在培養學生保護野生動物的觀念、把多一點的空間還給動物的觀念、與動物和諧共存的觀念。
如果考生從“應該禁止游客和動物拍照”這一觀點入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料,同時也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞。
【專家簡評】
自2007年廣東卷改革以來,寫作部分的兩個試題在寫作要求上均過于詳細,控制程度很高。尤其是后者,盡管是閱讀后的寫作,但要領已經被列出,實際上難度已經大大下降。當然,廣東卷這么做的主要目的無外乎便于教師閱卷,收縮考生的思維,不給考生跑題的機會。但是若往深的追問,本題給學生的思維空間并不多,這個值得考量。三年來,廣東卷已經在短文寫作上逐漸形成定勢。
十五、(2009.遼寧卷)
假定你住在一個涉外小區。社區委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件,將周末農家采摘活動的安排傳達給住戶。
要點:
時間:下周六上午8:00至11:00 內容:采摘蘋果
報名:辦公室,下周四下午5:00前
提示:帶帽子、手套
注意:
1.詞數100左右,開頭已為你寫好。2.可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯:社區 community 第二節:
一、評分原則
1.本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。2.評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最后給分。
3.詞數少于80和多余120的,從總分中減去2分。
4.評分時應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的豐富性和準確性及上下文的連貫性。
5.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時,應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。
6.如書寫較差以至影響交際,將其分數降低一個檔次。
二、內容要點
1.時間:下周六上午8:00 至 11:00 2.內容:采摘蘋果
3.報名:辦公室,下周四下午5:00前 4.提示:帶帽子、手套
5.歡迎踴躍參加
【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】
本題命制穩健,是中學教學中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點學生有話可說。
第一步:審題
1、看要求:本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件,將周末農家采摘活動的安排傳達給住戶。開頭已經寫好,這樣格式應該已經給出,審題的重點放在要點和要求上:要點有五項,注意有三項,但注意的第一項是重要的一項。
2、理思路:調整要點,講清本次活動的安排。可以先將活動的時間,活動的內容,要求、注意事項表達出來;然后再寫5和3要點,這樣邏輯清晰表達合理。
第二步:寫作
可以先在草紙上起草,用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達,要嘗試最簡單的復雜句,如用定語從句、賓語從句等,但句式不易過于復雜,要用一些恰當的連詞,使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。
第三步:檢查
作文寫完后,最后要進行檢查。重點放在要點寫全了嗎?時態、語態、動詞的數、單詞拼寫對了嗎?標點符號、大小寫用對了嗎?檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上,注意卷面的整潔。
【專家簡評】
主題與考生學習生活或學校活動無關,但由于是以涉外小區為背景所開展的社區活動,主題空間更為開闊,因此該主題大體符合高考英語寫作話題的一般思路,可以歸類為外事活動。通常,命題以要點形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出,對考生而言,前者的難度要大于后者。因為要點內容的呈現一般看不出英語的句式結構,而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語句式結構。這本身就是一種便利。因此,對于各命題單位而言,這幾種形式都應該依據整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用,以免過難或過易。
十六、(2009.浙江卷)
5月1日,高二(3)班的學生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動(送水果.打掃.聊天等)。假如你是校英語報的記者,請按下列要點用英語寫一則100-120個詞的新聞報道。1.時間.地點.任務.活動; 2.老人們的反應; 3.簡短評論。
注意:報道的標題和記者姓名已給出(不記詞數)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
s5【參考范文】
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper 【解析】
本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文,選材貼近學生實際,有利于考生的正常發揮,考生只要按照所給要點的思路來寫即可。
【專家簡評】
09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似,又是志愿者,又是敬老,了無新意。但這并不就說明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看,該卷第一次出現在題中直接給出漢語拼音人名,而不是漢語人名,這也算是一個首創。目的只有一個:避免考生出錯。其實,遮掩在漢語拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個人名究竟是漢語中的哪幾個字,因為對于外國人而言,字母人名只是一個符號,他們是無法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。
浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標題作文。例如:“Film or book, which do you prefer?”(06),請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個問題?(07),“Working Individually or Working in a Team”(08)。09年不在題中給出標題,卻在文中直接給出標題,不知何意?不知這個對于檢測考生的實際能力有何幫助?另外,雖然說的是新聞報道,但實際上是一個典型的敘事性質的短文寫作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質的寫作。09年,除了北京繼續考了敘事外,浙江也出現了敘事性質的文體要求。對于浙江考生而言,其寫作難度應該遠遠低于前五年的寫作要求了,應該是福。
十七、(2009.重慶卷)
國外某網站舉辦新一輪網上討論活動,正面向全球中學生征集話題。假設你是新華中學的學生李華,經常訪問該網站。現請你用英文給該網站發送一封電子郵件,向其推薦話題。
內容包括:
自我簡介
寫信目錄
話題:我們應該感恩(thankful)
推薦的理由
預祝活動成功
注意:
1.詞數100左右
2.郵件格式已為你給出
3.郵件中不能出現本人真實信息
4.請在答題卡上作答
【參考范文】 Dear, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】
這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發性提綱式作文。話題樹有教育意義,符合中學實際引導學生思考問題。在寫作中應注意如下幾點: 1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應該感恩”。
2.但自我簡介、寫信目錄、推薦的理由、預祝活動成功都是圍繞話題展開。3.注意分清段落層次,上下文的過渡。
【專家簡評】
從寫作文體要求看,重慶卷04年要求寫記敘文,05年則改成議論文,近四年基本上是陳說性質的文體。就話題而言,近四年都與外事活動或外語學習相關。不過,09年的話題是涉外的話題征集,有些特點。六年來,三次短文寫作,三次郵件(其中兩次電子郵件)。李華同學出現3次(06,07,09)。總的說來,重慶卷一直比較謹慎,命題基本上沒有超出全國卷I的范式。
十八、(2009.上海卷)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學校舉辦英語夏令營,開設了如下課程:園藝(gardening),烹飪(cooking),防身術(self-defence),護理(nursing)。假如你是王躍華(不可以用自己的真實姓名),寫一封申請信,報名參加其中一門課程的學習。信的內容必須包括:
你感興趣的課程
你期望從這門課程中學到什么
為什么想學這些內容
【參考范文】 Dear leader,I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses,such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening,because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing,I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more,I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another,after graduation from
college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。Yours,Wang yue hua 【解析】
本文是書信格式,報名參加其中一門課程的學習,屬于半開放式作文。學生在寫作時應注意如下幾點:
1.先談自己感興趣的學科,從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說學科,這是寫作的關鍵,過渡要自然;
2.再寫自己希望學到什么,要把握實用性。
3.然后談出想學這些內容的原因,結合現實,理由合情合理。4.在寫作過程中可以嘗試句型的復雜化,適度增加情節
【專家簡評】
上海卷的一貫特點有以下幾條:題干短,話題一般與學習或學校生活相關,寫作形式主要是議論性質,間或插以混合性質,給考生的思維空間大。還有一點,從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質:陳說+議論。話題涉外,且與教育教學課程相關,是很好的話題。但對于上海考生而言,材料的提供是否過于豐富了些?!參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷,你就會發現上海卷習慣于提供簡練的題干信息,以利于考生的發揮。這次算是一個異數了。
【總評】
2009年高考英語全國卷地方卷共19套,短文寫作共20篇(上海卷和廣東卷各2篇,寧?海卷共享全國卷I的短文寫作題)。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題,我們發現最重要的一個特點就是關于地方或傳統特色話題,也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多(5篇),以前只是在某個年份、某個卷種中有這種話題的點綴,現在看來已經蔚成風氣。這說明各卷種的命題者們已經認識到了母語文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現實性,這是最令人感到欣慰的。相信對你有用!珍惜吧!值得擁有!相信對你有用!珍惜吧!值得擁有!相信對你有用!珍惜吧!值得擁有!相信對你有用!珍惜吧!值得擁有!相信對你有用!珍惜吧!值得擁有!相信對你有用!珍惜吧!值得擁有!
2010年高考英語作文真題題目及范文
江西卷
英語中“please.” “thank you” “sorry”等禮貌用語具有增進友誼,改善關系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量,因而被稱為“magic words”。請 “Magic Power of Polite Words”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語作文。體裁不限(敘述文、議論文、說明文??)
【參考范文】
Magic Power of Polite Words We use magic words in our daily life without realizing it.These magic words , for instance “please” “thank you “ “sorry” , can add luster to our life.Magic words can help build friendship.They make you polite and easier to get along with , thus strengthen the relationship between you and others.Once you offend someone else , you can as well use these words.A word such as “sorry” will make him less annoyed.Try using polite words every now and then.Once you do , you will never find yourself drained of energy for life.You use polite words , in return , these words will provide you with magic power.安徽卷
假如你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動,征文的內容要求你在電視、手機(cell)和網絡三考中,放棄其中一個并陳述理由。請你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”為題,寫一篇英語短文。
【范文】
We are now living in an intonation age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used.It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet.I could do without TV because few shows my fancy, and there are too many commercial programs on TV are also available.As for cells and the Web.they are more necessary to me.I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family.And almost all information can be gathered on the Internet..遼寧卷
你校學生會需招聘一名留學生做英語學習顧問,請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內容主要包括:1)母語是英語,漢語流利者優先2)解答用語學習問題,協助組織英語活動3)每周4小時,報酬面議4)聯系人:李華(Tel:***)
【參考范文】
English Advisor Wanted The Students’ Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term.The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English , answering their questions , and helping organize activities such as singing English songs , English evenings , or lectures on interesting topics.The applicant should be a native speaker of English.Fluency in Chinese is preferred.The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.If you are interested , please call Li Hua at *** for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.Students’ Union Yucai High School 山東卷
假設你是新華中學的學生李華,你和在上海上學的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴約。請根據以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件: 1.表示歉意; 2.解釋原因; 3.另約時間。
【參考范文】 Dear Tom, I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised.I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened.Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me.I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again ,I’
m sorry for any inconvenience caused.Sincerely yours, Li Hua 陜西卷
假定你是李華。你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年里,你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。
寫作要點:
1.對她表達感謝之意;2.介紹她離開后你自己及班里發生的事情;3.希望了解她的近況。
【參考范文】 Dear Sure, I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.It’s almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together.We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school ? Yesterday , we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well , and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood ? How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students.Hope to keep in close touch.All the best Li Hua 四川卷
假定你校將舉行一個成人儀式,你將作為代表在儀式上發言。請你按以下內容要點準備一篇英文發言稿。
1.過去對成年的向往;2.現在的感受和認識;3.將來的目標及措施。
參考詞匯:責任 responsibility 【參考范文】
Good morning , everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”As a child , I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.Now I’m a grown-up , but I find things do not go as I expected.Although I can enjoy more freedom , at the same time I realized that being a grown-up not only means this , but also more responsibilities.I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful.To reach the goal , I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.Thank you for your listening.浙江卷
最近,李越被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據她的事跡(在上周六下午,不顧天氣的炎熱,為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝),用英語為班級板報寫一篇100—120個詞的短文。
你的文章應包括下列要點:1.李越的事跡及其對同學的影響;2.你的評論。
參考詞匯:singing contest 歌詠比賽 costume 服裝
【參考范文】
Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class.On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting.Finally , she found the right clothes.Deeply moved by her efforts , we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class.Besides , she often devotes her spare time to helping others.She deserves the honor and we should learn from her.重慶卷
假設你是李華,于2010年6月3日搭乘國外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回國后,發現遺失了一個行李箱(suitcase)。現請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信,請他們幫你尋找。信件要點包括:陳述寫信原因,簡要描述該行李,說明其重要性,期待回復并表示感謝。
【參考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam , I’m Li Hua.I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010.But when I came to my home , I found I lost a suitcase.I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip.There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it.It is really important for me , because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card , passport and so on.Besides , it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours truly, Li Hua 【參考范文】(2)Dear Sir/Madam , I am very sorry to say that I left my suitcase in flight number BA793 on 3 rd , June , so I am writing this letter to ask you for help.The lost suitcase is a red one with a long handle.It is of great importance to me.In it are some valuable books and my credit cards.I will be very grateful if anyone of you contact me by telephone immediately after seeing it.My telephone number is 133456.There is nothing more gratifying to me than your reply.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Li Hua 天津卷
假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優秀學生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據以下提示,用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信:
● 對此活動的認識(如對本人、學生及社會的益處等)
●個人優勢(如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等)
●你的計劃(如怎樣進行輔導等)
參考詞匯:晨曦希望小學 Chenxi Hope School 【參考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua from Class One , Senior Two.I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English.Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation.Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole school.I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others.I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence.English is my favorite subject and I ‘ve won several prizes in English contests.So I think that I’m qualified for the position.I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need.Besides , I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs , playing games and so on.I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 江蘇卷
假設你應邀參加學校組織的“英語學習師生座談會”,請你根據下表所提示的信息,用英語寫一篇發言稿,簡單介紹自己英語學習的情況,并對學校今后的英語教學提出建議。
自己英語學習的情況
1.英語學習的目的2.英語學習的方法3.課外自學的途徑???.對學校英語教學的建議
(請考生根據自己的經歷與感想,提出兩至三點建議)。【參考范文】
Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well.As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language , just like bricks in a building.I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.After class .I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio.Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly , we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally,1 suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals.Thank you for listening.湖南卷
假設你和幾位同學成立了一個英語俱樂部,開展了為期兩個月的活動。現在,你將代表俱樂部在課堂上進行經驗交流,請寫一篇英語發言稿,主要內容如下:
1.簡要描述俱樂部開展的一項與英語有關的主要活動2.談談你們開展該活動的收獲。
【參考范文】 Boys and girls,Today I’ll talk about our English club.Our English club was set up two months ago.Now we have members of 25.We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon.So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , including a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students.Last week we held an English story-telling competition.We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes.Every member took an active part in the activity.Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges.At last Li Bing won the first place.Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways.Not only did it improve their spoken English , but also it brought them much fun.They hope many such activities can be held.That’s all.Thank you.湖北卷
請你根據以下提示,結合生活中的一個事例,用英語寫一篇短文,談談微笑的作用。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile.A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers.A smile can open doors and tear down walls.注意:①無須寫標題; ②內容只需涉及一個方面; ③詞數為100左右。
【參考范文】(1)I still remember how serious I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.The teacher spoke English throughout the class , which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day , the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students.After listening to me for a while , she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and the following days.A week later , I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class , I began to be confident.【參考范文】(2)No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling.Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted.Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan / overtook Wenchuan.Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them.His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness.It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult.It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.全國I卷
假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽(speech contest),希望附近某大學的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。
注意:詞數100左右。
【參考范文】 Dear Ms.Smith, I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students’ Union of Yucca Middle School , which is close to your university.I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours.Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes, Li Hua 福建卷
假設你是李華,福建省某中學高中學生,今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活動。請你以代表的身份,根據以下圖片提示,用英語寫一篇發言稿。
【參考范文】 Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning.I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China.It’s my great honor to be here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasing severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.Therefore, it’s a high time we did something about it.Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use.Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law.Last but not least, it’s everyone responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situaiton of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.That’s all.Thank you.高考英語作文范文47篇 I.看圖作文類
1.今年寒假,你參加了社會實踐活動,去某旅行社當業余導游。請根據該旅行社提供的數據和你的所見所聞,用英語寫一篇短文,作為寒假作業交給你的英語老師。Number of people in City X travelling abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006 要求:1.簡析表格,說明產生這種現象的原因;2.結合漫畫,談談境外旅游出現的問題;
3.針對所出現的問題闡述你自己的看法(至少兩點); 4.詞數120左右;5.參考詞匯:吐痰 spit v.When people’s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad.The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already much
larger than that of the year 1996.It’s a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast.However, reports about people’s bad manners flood in.Some are even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere.The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.China has long been regarded as a country with good manners.Everybody should keep some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad.Win respect for yourself and our country!2.根據以下圖畫,寫一篇英語短文,描述今昔通訊方式的變化,以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。注意:1.詞數:100左右2.生詞:通訊:communicate 互聯網:the Internet Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life.In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries.In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.3.受某英文報的委托,你最近對高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調查。請根據以下信息,用英語為該報寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文的標題及首句已為你寫好。
調查內容:在新聞、故事、科普、學習方法四種英文文章中,學生最喜歡哪一種
調查范圍:湖北省的10所中學 調查對象:高中生
調查人數:1200 調查方式:訪談 調查結果:(見下圖)Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed.They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite.Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods.However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.4.目前,全區上下都在大力開展城鄉清潔工程的活動。為了響應政府的號召,3月25日,星期天,你們班參加了一次校外環境衛生清潔活動。請根據圖畫所提供的信息,用英語寫一篇日記,并談談你的看法。(為方便排版,圖見下頁)
注意: 1.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫、完整; 2.詞數:100左右。Sunday, March 25 Fine Today our class went out to do some cleaning.We gathered at the school gate and started out early in the morning.Some collected the rubbish in the park, some cleared the old posters off the walls, and others swept the street.We hoped to make our city more beautiful with our own hands.At the same time some of us went to the public
places, where there were a lot of people.We kept on telling people not to destroy the beauty of nature so that we can have a cleaner world.In my opinion, such activities are necessary and instructive because some people are unaware of the importance of protecting the environment at present.5.根據圖畫寫一篇短文,敘述某天小明與其媽媽發生的故事。
①媽媽阻止兒子去扶摔倒的女孩;②兒子對于倒了的油瓶置之不理。
要求:1.不僅要表述出圖中的內容,還要發表自己的感想; 2.字數:100字左右;3.開頭已給出。
One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over.He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be.And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I did something about the bottle, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.” I disagree with what the mother did in the story.I think parents should set a good example to their children.They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds.They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble.We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right? 6.下列圖表反映的是我校2002年與2005年學生健康狀況調查的部分數據。請你用英文為某報寫一份報告,反映該校三年間學生健康狀況的變化情況,分析其原因并提出相應的改進措施(不少于兩條)。
注意:1.報告必須包括圖表中所有內容。
2.詞數:120左右。第一句已給出(不計入總詞數)。A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005 , and that of overweight , from 36% to 52.4%.Compared to 2002 nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do.Besides , over 15% more students has become mentally unhealthy.To improve students’ health , we call for less homework.Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from getting nearsighted.Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight.With their heavy burdens removed , students can then be mentally healthy.7.假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Paul來信詢問北京2008奧運吉祥物。請根據以下福娃圖案寫一封回信,簡單介紹其所代表的涵義,以及顏色意義等內容,并邀請Paul屆時來京觀看比賽。
注意:1.詞數100左右;2.參考詞匯:吉祥物—mascot;福娃(Fu Wa)—Friendlies Dear paul, It was great to hear from you and I’m very glad to tell you something about Beijing Olympic Mascots.There are 5 Friendlies , or Fu Wa in Chinese , to serve as the Mascots for Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.Designed to express the nature of Chinese children, the 5 doll-like Frinedlies are symbols of four popular animals-the Fish , the Panda , the Tibetan Antelope , the Swallow –and the Olympic Flame.Each of the Friendlies has
a Chinese name-Beibei , Jingjjing , Huanhuan , Yingying and Nini.When we put them together , they say Beijing Huan Ying Ni, or “Welcome to Beijing!” in English.These lovely dolls show us the Olympic spirit of universal friendship , and they each represent one of the following-the sea , forest , fire , earth and sky.As you can see , their colours have something to do with the 5 colours of the Olympic rings.I really hope you may come to Beijing in 2008!Certainly I’ll be your company then!Looking forward to your arrival!Yours , Li Hua 8.假如你叫王平,根據圖表提示,給你的加拿大網友Smith 寫一封信,介紹你的寒假生活(共20天),可根據自己的實際情況添加細節。
注意:1.詞數:100左右; 2.開頭已經給出,不計入總詞數。Dear Smith, How are you? How time flies!Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival.It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China.Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons.As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away.Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a number of science problems and so on.When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday.How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Wang Ping 9.根據下列圖示以 “The New Grading System in Our School”為題為你校英語報寫一篇短文,說明這一舉措以及你對學校實施這一舉措的認識.要求: 1.詞數 100左右, 已給出部分不包括在內.生詞: 評分體制grading system 參與participation(n.)
① tests ④ class participation ② notes ⑤ team work ③ homework The New grading system in Our School In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system.This chart shows how it works.The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts.About 30% of it will come from their test results.The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework.If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score.Teamwork in class is also important.If you want
a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.In my opinion, our school has made a good decision.This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves on all sides.10.下面的餅狀圖(pie chat)顯示了你對你校學生興趣愛好的調查結果。請你用英語給English Weekly寫一篇短文,報道你的調查結果,并對此結果發表你的看法或建議。詞數120左右。首句已給出(不計入詞數)。
A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time.From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school.The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it.Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby.And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students.Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.11.閱讀下面漫畫,先對漫畫的內容進行描述,然后對這一現象發表自己的看法。(100詞左右)參考詞匯: 西瓜皮:
water-melon skin 長凳:bench The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon.When they went away they left the melon’s skin on the bench, making it very dirty.They didn’t want to take any trouble to throw it into the dustbin although it was very near where they were sitting.Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.However, what they did makes others look down upon them.If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases.Besides, it will be impossible for dustmen to clean the world woth such people living in it.12.根據以下圖畫再結合你的想象,寫出一篇100字左右的短文:
It is the old man’s birthday today.Now he is sitting on a sofa alone.Maybe his wife has been dead.On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son.And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left.Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy.Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.Our life is getting better and better than before.Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink.I think they are quite wrong.Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do.So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.II.應用文類
13.外籍教師Lynne任教期滿準備回國,學校答應派車送她去機場。她在臨行前一天寫了張便條提醒辦公室李老師:
1).請檢查(check on)明天的車是否落實,提醒司機(remind sb.of sth.提醒某人做某事)。
2).她之所以要確定一下,是因為太早不好叫出租車。3).感謝費心,并感謝一年來的關心。
4).在學校一年來,生活愉快、難忘,很可能再來。
5).留下一些英語書給貴校圖書館,希望對學生有用。字數:100—120個詞。Hi, Mr.Li, Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this.I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesn’t show up.I am sorry to trouble you again.Here I thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school.I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students.Probably I will come back some day.I leave some English books to your library.I hope they will be useful to your students.Yours Lynne 14.假設你是李華,最近國內一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應遷出市區。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信,反映討論結果。
贊成遷出:
反對遷出:
①.游客多,交通堵塞 ①.建于1906年,中外聞名
②.郊區環境好
②.搬遷易造成動物死亡
注意:1).詞數100字左右,信的開頭已為你寫好。2).可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。3).參考詞匯: 郊區—suburb June 3 ,2005 Dear Editor , Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.Some of my classmates are in favor of the move.They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad.So it should remain where it is.What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals.To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly, Li Hua 15.假設你的英文名為Jack,是英國諾丁漢大學的中國留學生。你負責為在該校就讀的32名中國學生籌劃圣誕節期間的蘇格蘭之行,為期7天,請你給諾丁漢的STA(Students’Travel Agency)經理Phil發一封電子郵件,聯系有關事宜。要點如下:
(1)希望能夠派車接送;(2)需要一名說標準英語,并非常熟悉蘇格蘭的導游;
(3)請求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅館、費用等情況;
(4)你的聯系方式:電子郵箱地址:Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn或電話號碼:07747745007 注意:(1)詞數:100詞左右;(2)開頭和結尾已為你寫出,不計入總詞數;
(3)參考詞匯:旅館住宿accommodation;旅行日程安排itinerary;長途客車coach Hi, Phil,I’d like you to organize a trip to Scotland for us.I have here a group of 32 Chinese students studying in Nottingham University, who want to go on a seven-day tour during the Christmas days.I hope we can have a coach which will take us to Scotland and then bring us back to Nottingham.We also need a guide who speaks standard English and knows Scotland well.I would be very grateful if you can work out an itinerary as soon as possible and tell me about our accommodation, meals as well as how much each of us has to pay.If you have any information, please either email me to Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn or call me at 07747745007.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours Truly.Jack 16.加拿大高中生David在互聯網上登出啟事notice,希望結識一位中國朋友,以便學習中國的語言、文化。假設你是重慶實驗中學的李華,請在看到這則啟事后,用英文給David發出一封電子郵件。主要內容包括:
①.你怎樣得知他的愿望 ②.你愿意成為他的朋友
③.你打算如何幫助他 ④.你盼望他的回復 注意:詞數:100詞左右 Dear David,I am LiHua.I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture.I want to be your friend.Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.I was born in Chongqing in 1990,I study in the Experimental Middle School of Chongqing and I am good at English.I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails.What’s more,we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese or English and I’ll tell you the customs,the festivals,the foods,etc.of the Chinese.I hope we can keep in touch with each other.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours, LiHua 17.假如你是一名大學生叫李華,對近年來大學畢業生就業情況頗有已見,請根據下面提供的信息向報社寫信談談你的看法。字數100左右。開頭已給出。
學生心態向往城市,不愿下鄉。
就業現狀城市人才過剩;農村渴求人才。
就業前景農村天地廣闊,可施展才華。Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have
in the city.Yours, Li Hua 18.假如你叫王東,你的叔叔三十年前離開家鄉去了美國。不久前,他觀看China Report節目,得知中國決定加大建設社會主義新農村的力度,感慨萬分,于是發了一份e-mail給你,詢問近來家鄉的變化情況。請根據email內容和提示要點,給你叔叔做簡要回復。E-mail開頭和結尾已經給出。
日期:20-03-2006 發件人:Wangguifu usa@hotmail.com 收件人:Wangdong_88@l63.com 主題:T0 Xiaodong Dear Xiao Dong How are you doing? The other day when 1 was watching China Report CCTV at home, I was excited to learn that the Chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside.The report at once took my thoughts back to the small village I once lived in.The houses were old and low.The roads were muddy and narrow.Villagers had to go a long way on foot or by bike in order to do some shopping or see a doctor in town.Because of very small income, villagers lived quite a plain life, even without TV sets or telephones.How time flies!.It is 30 years since I left my home village.It must have changed a lot.Would you please write and tell me something about its changes? Remember me to your parents!Yours,Wang Guifu 要點:①.叔叔離家后,家鄉變化很大。②.生活條件愈來愈好。
③.房子大而寬敞,許多人住進了設施齊全的公寓。
④.裝了電話,買了彩電、洗衣機、冰箱等。⑤.寬敞的道路連接了村莊和城鎮。
⑥.買了拖拉機、卡車和汽車。⑦.學校教育良好。⑧.政府重視農村城市化建設。
要求:1)、詞數:100左右。2)、可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。Dear Uncle , I’m very glad to receive your email.Great changes have already taken place since you left , Our living conditions are getting better and better.Villagers have moved into big and comfortable houses, and many live in well-equipped blocks of flats.Almost all have been equipped with telephones.They have not only bought color TV sets , but also washing machines , fridges, etc.Wide roads have been built to connect villages and towns.Some families have got their own tractors, trucks or even cars.Besides, children can now enjoy very good education.Our government cares very much about the reconstruction of our countryside.We are speeding up the citifying of the villages.I hope that you and aunt will come back and have a visit to the new village.Best wishes.Yours Xiao Dong 19.請以宿舍管理委員會的名義寫一份通知,2007年4月2日發出。內容如下:
①時間:4月5日晚上7點。②地點:3號樓103房間。
③內容:學生宿舍安全問題:安全用電、火災應變、防止失竊等。
④參加人員:每間寢室一名同學。
⑤要求:帶筆記本,按時到場,做好記錄,并傳達給室友。
注意:1)通知的格式已經為你寫好,不計入總詞數;2)詞數:100左右。
參考詞匯:學生宿舍 dormitory,盜竊theft(n.)Notice A meeting is going to be held in Room 103 of Building 3 at 7 on the evening of April 5.Problems to be talked about at the meeting include the safety of the dormitories, proper use of electricity, what to do in case of fire, prevention of theft and so on.A member of each dormitory is required to be present.They should take notebooks with them and arrive on time.They should take notes carefully and after the meeting they are to inform their roommates of what is discussed and what measures will be taken.The Dormitory Committee April 2nd, 2007 20.假如你叫李平,是一位成績優秀的學生,你班班主任在安排座位時,讓成績好的學生和成績差的學生作同桌,這在你們班成績優秀的學生中引起了反響,團活課上大家就此進行了討論。現在請你根據下表把討論結果向班主任寫一封信反映一下,并說出自己的觀點。
贊同反對你的觀點
1.人人有長處和不足,成績差的學生也有可取之處; 2.相互學習,建立友誼;
3.通過幫助學習差的學生的學習從而使他們建立自信。1.部分學習差的學生常常違反校規校紀,擔心自己會受影響,養成壞習慣。2.老是問問題,使自己不能專心學習。?
注意:1.詞數:100~120,短文的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。2.短文需包括表中所有要點,內容可適當發揮,以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯:成績差的學生:a slower student Dear Mr.Zhang, We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.Some are for the idea.As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses.Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts.Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all.However, others don’t hold the same view.They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits.Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that
we can learn from each other and make progress together.Yours, Li Ping 21.假如你是校報負責人,急需在學校內聘一位同學任英文版的編輯,請你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”為題目寫一則招聘啟事。內容要如下:
⑴.該工作主要包括兩部分:一是從英文報刊雜志及互聯網上選擇適合學生的文章;二是選擇與編輯同學們的來稿。⑵.希望該同學滿足下列要求:
① 樂意奉獻出一些業余時間為同學們服務; ② 英文與美術皆好;能熟練使用電腦。
③ 感興趣的同學請在本周內與學生會(Students’ Union)聯系。
注意:(1)詞數100左右;(2)不要逐字翻譯,要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。An English Editor Wanted Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition.The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students.The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use.
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others.Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts.Besides, the ability to use the computer is important. Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week.
Students’ Union 22.假定你是某市居民,名叫李華。你覺得該市出租車行業問題較多,請寫一封信給該市市長,內容應包括:
問題(1)停靠點太少,不易打的;(2)欺詐外地乘客;(3)車速過快,事故頻頻;(4)仍有拒載者;(5)深夜聚集在娛樂場所外等客時制造噪音,影響他人休息。
建議 要求加強管理
注意:1.字數100詞左右。文章開頭已給出。2.參考詞匯:繞道:take a roundabout route 不替別人著想的:inconsiderate(adj.)行業:trade 加強管理:tighten control over? Dear Mayor, I’m a resident of the city.I feel there are many problems existing in the trade of taxi in our city.First of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a taxi.And taxis often run very fast, which causes many traffic accidents.What’s more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick up some passengers without any reason.Another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night taxis waiting around the entertainment places make much noise.Many people suffer from this inconsiderate action.A friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our city’s taxi drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route.What will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience? I think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade.Maybe the first thing to do is raise the taxi drivers’ professional morality.We are looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 23.如你是學生會主席,請根據下面圖表,用英語寫一則關于春游的通知。
參加者高中一、二年級的學生
活動內容1.去博物館看《人與自然》的展覽。2.參加泉山植物園。
集合地點學校大門前
集合時間1.4月25日上午乘校車前往; 2.早上七點集合,七點二十分開車。
注意事項1.參觀展覽時保持安靜;并認真記筆記,準備回來后討論。2.在山頂野餐,要自帶午餐和飲料。3.參加者在本周四前到學生會報名。
注意:
1.通知必須包括表內所列內容,可以適當調整內容的順序和增加細節,使其連貫、完整。2.詞數:100左右。3.通知時間:4月24日 4.生詞:植物園the botanical garden;報名sign up for;學生會the Students' Union Notice The students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two will go out for a visit on April 25.We'll first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature.When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back.After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it.So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.Our school bus will take us there.The school bus will leave at 7:20.Please gather at our school gate at 7:00 a.m.Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students’ Union before Thursday.The Students’ Union April 24 24.假設你是浙江大學的老師,你將在開學典禮上向一年級的新生致辭。請你根據下面的提示寫一篇演講稿就大學的學習生活提出幾點要求,并適當闡述其重要性。
①.合理安排學習和生活 ②.同學之間關系融洽 ③.積極參加校園社團活動 ??
參考詞匯:大學一年級新生 freshman n.社團 society n.注意:1).演講稿必須包括所有提示要點,但不要逐條譯成英語。2).演講稿的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入詞數。3).詞數:100—120 Good morning, everybody.Welcome to Zhejiang University!As a freshman, you are going to have a completely new life.So here is something you should keep in mind.First, arrange your time properly.You’d better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and take advantage of every minute.It will make your work more efficient.Living in the university, sometimes you will face some problems that you can’t deal with all alone.Then help from others will make things easy for you.So get along well with all the people around you.Always be open-minded and warm-hearted.Don’t speak ill of others at will.You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family.At last, take an active part in societies.Societies
at school are your second teachers.It will not only provide you more chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but make your school life rich and colorful as well.Enjoy your university life!25.下面是一個中學生給某報編輯部寫的一封信,仔細閱讀并就信的內容以編輯的名義給此中學生回一封信。Dear editor.I am an active girl, and I speak and laugh loudly in the classroom, like a boy.I don’t care about small matters.On the contrary, my neighbor, the girl who sits next to me, speaks quietly and dare not do the things I often do.I can understand this.What I can’t stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things.How can I get along with her? yours Sunny, 注意:1).書信格式要規范;
2).回信需就原信內容給出至少三條建議(如談心,相互理解,參加他們的生日等活動,談論共同話題,分享快樂等等); 3).字數:120左右。Dear Sunny, It’s very good that you want to be friends with this girl.In my opinion, you’d better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her, because understanding each other is very important for you two.And I also think it’s better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities, such as birthday parties, going out for a walk, discussing some fashionable topics, and so on.Besides, helping each other is also very important for both of you.Just share happiness and sadness with her.And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you two will be good friends inthe future.Good luck to you.Yours, Editor 26.假如你是李華,針對目前有些中學生購買彩票的現象,給21st Century 報社編輯寫信,并談談自己的看法,其中包括以下要點:
①.弊遠大于利;②.中學生沒有經濟來源,容易誘發一些不良行為;
③.從當前說,會影響學習;
④.從長遠看,會養成事事走捷徑的僥幸心理,其危害將影響其一生。
注意(1)信的開頭和結尾已經給出;(2)必須包括以上要點,可適當發揮,但不要逐句翻譯;(3)字數100左右,不包括開頭、結尾。Dear editor , At present , many high school students are addicted to buying lottery tickets and they seem to have good reasons.However , I’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon.In my opinion , its disadvantages are far more than its advantages, despite one of their reasons that they can do something useful for society in this way.High school students can’t support themselves financially but depend on their parents for the moment.Thus, in order to collect money with which to buy lottery tickets, they may try every possible means , even commit crimes.In addition, if they put their minds on lottery tickets, their lessons will be more or less affected.And in the long run, lottery ticket purchasing may contribute to their wrong understanding that there must be a shortcut to every destination , which will surely do great harm to their future life.Therefore, I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now.Yours , Li Hua 27.假如你是王林,李明是你的好友,他對布朗先生的公司感興趣,打算到該公司謀職(apply for a position)。請根據下面李明的簡歷表,用英語為他寫一封推薦信。
詞數110左右。
姓名李明性別男國籍中國
出生地重慶婚否已婚出生日期1980.8.21 通訊地址重慶市人民路148號電話023-63335550 職業律師學歷大學畢業
外語水平擅長英語,懂一些日語、德語
其他有三年工作經歷,辦事認真,待人誠懇,與人和睦相處 Dear Mr.Brown, I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr.Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position in your firm.He graduated from college three years ago and has worked as a lawyerever since.He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German.He works hard and is careful in everything he does.He is honest, kind and easy to get on with.He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Chongqing, China.He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Chongqing city.His telephone number is 023-63335550.He shows great interest in your firm.If he is accepted, he will do his best.I’m sure he will be fit for the position.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Wang Lin 28.假如你是業余氣象員,你從電臺天氣預報節目得知了今晚和明天上午你處的天氣情況,晚飯后6點鐘在校廣播室用英語向全體師生作天氣預報,并提出忠告。要點如下: ①午夜至凌晨兩點有強勁北風。②氣溫將下降5-8度。
③明天上午有陣雨。④要求同學們今晚離開教室時關好門窗。
⑤明天早上起床時多穿些衣服,以防感冒。詞數100在右。Attention, please.It is six o'clock in the afternoon.I'm now giving the weather forecast as usual.From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8℃.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning.Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning, please put on more clothes in order to keep yourself from catching cold.That's all.Thank you.III.表格提示類
29.下表是對某中學高三一班50個學生健康問題的調查表。請根據表格內容,綜述學生
當前存在的健康問題,并就中學生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。詞數要求: 120左右。
問題類型學習焦慮逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏鍛煉視力不佳
人數352015402535 比例70%40%30%80%50%70%
As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep.Coming next is the lack of physical exercise.40% of the students surveyed won't obey their parents or teachers.Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others.So far as 1 am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies.Just like a saying goes:“ All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything;However, too much attention has been paid only to studies.Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of--classroom activities to solve all the problems.Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.30.去年,上海復旦大學開始通過面試自主招收學生,今年又有一些學校加入到這一行列。這一新的招生方式在學生中引發了一場討論。假如你是李華,請根據下表提供的內容給二十一世紀報編輯寫一封信反映討論情況。60% 的學生贊成40%的學生反對
1.面試可以全面綜合地評價一個學生; 2.鼓勵學生發展個性和特長; 3.社會需要一種更加開放和有效的錄取方式。1.面試帶有主觀性、片面性,可能不公正; 2.并非所有學生都擅于在面試中展示自己; 3.不可能在3-5分鐘內評價一個人。
注意:1.開頭已為你寫好,不計人總詞數。2.詞數:100左右
3.參考詞匯:comprehensive綜合的,subjective主觀的,one-sided片面的,evaluate 評價
Dear Editor, Recently, a discussion has been held in our school on whether it is reasonable for the universities to admit students through interviews.The results are as follows: 60% of the students support this action.They express that interviews can evaluate a student in a more thorough and comprehensive way.It can encourage students to develop their own interests and personalities.What’s more, with the development of society, a more open and efficient way to test a student’s abilities is needed.On the other hand, the other 40% students are against this idea.They argue that first, interviews may be subjective and one-sided, which could lead to unfairness.Second, not all students are good at showing their talents in interviews.Last but not least, a student can’t be judged in only three or five minutes.31.人類已進入了一個嶄新的世紀,不同的人有不同的幸福觀。某英語雜志正在中學生中進行幸福觀討論,請你根據下表的提示,用英語寫一篇短文,敘述一些人的觀點及理由,發表對其中某一觀點的看法,并表明自己的觀點和理由,然后向該刊投稿。Students Opinion Reason Some MoneyBuying and doing anything Some Health For enjoyment
Some Wealth from parentsFree from work I ??
注意:1.不要照抄表中的原句,否則酌情扣分。2.詞數:120左右。What is happiness in my mind? Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.32.你校同學進行了一場有關高考英語聽力測試的討論。討論的主題是:高考英語測試中的聽力部分該不該取消?請你根據下表中的提示寫一篇短文,介紹討論的情況。
一些同學認為不應該取消另一些同學認為應該取消
聽是語言的四項基本技能之一,不能忽視
聽是獲取信息的重要途徑之一
國際合作日益增多,聽說能力應加強考試中各地收聽效果好壞不
一、不公平
英語教師和語音設備城鄉差異過大
今后并非人人都要與外國人口頭交流
注意:1.文章的起始句已給出。2.詞數:100左右(不包括已給的起始句)。3.參考詞匯:取消—cancel 國際合作—international cooperation The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.Some students think that listening test should not be canceled.They insist listening is among the four basic skills.We therefore can not ignore it.Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world.So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.But others don’t agree.They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future.Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively.And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.33.請以My favorite Newspaper為題用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,介紹21世紀報,短文應包括下面表格中所提供的內容。
報紙名稱及使用語言21st Century, 英文報紙
出版地點及出版周期北京,每周一期
版面內容每周新聞,今日世界,語言課堂,體育與音樂,學生報導
特色圖文并茂
目的學習英語詞匯,提高英語水平,獲取各種信息
效果廣為人知,深受喜愛 My Favorite Newspaper
21st Century is my favorite newspaper.It is an English language newspaper which is published in Beijing each week.It has sections of different kinds, including News of the week, the World Today, Language Class, Sports and Music and Students Report.There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it.I enjoy reading the paper.I read it to improve my English.I have learnt a lot of new words and useful expressions.Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music.21st Century is very popular wiEnglish learners.I do love it.34.據調查,中國城市居民的電腦擁有率達30%。很多農村居民對電腦也越來越感興趣,甚至有的家庭也買了電腦。參考下表寫一篇題為“Computers in China”的短文。詞數為100左右。
家庭買電腦的目的中學生使用電腦的情況
類別 比率因別 比率
孩子學習需要 70%學習資料查詢 30% 家長工作需要 20%上網、聊天、游戲 60% 娛樂 30%聽音樂、看光盤 20% Computers in China According to a recent investigation, about 30% of the city families have computer.Besides, many village people are more and more interested in computers and some of them even have bought computers.About 70% of the parents bought computers for their children to study, and some for their work.And even some people bought them for entertainment.The fact how the middle school students use the computers really surprises us.Only about 30% of them use computers to find out useful in formation.About 60% use computers to play games and 20% use computers to watch VCDs or listen to music.In my opinion, we should make better use of our best invention— computers.35.如今,外出旅游已成為時尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游時必備的。請你選擇至少最重要的五種物品,并說出理由。字數100字左右。DocumentsID card, passport Clothessweater, coat, walking, shoes Articlesmedicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle(熱水瓶)Equipmentmobile phone, compass Booksguidebook, map, magazine Other thingscamera, CD player, Mp3 While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes.I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go.The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun.The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests.Without it, we may get lost.And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane.What’s more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place.In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.36.目前,重慶的街頭出現了越來越多的貓與狗,對此“中學生英語報”組織了一場討論:城市內是否可以飼養寵物。根據下表所提供的信息,介紹討論情況,并說明自己的觀點和建議。
支持飼養寵物反對飼養寵物你的觀點 1.安慰孤寡老人
2.人與動物和諧相處,增添生活情趣1.造成環境污染 2.吵鬧聲,甚至傷人??
注意:1.詞數100左右。2.可以適當增減細節,以使行文連貫。3.開頭語已為你寫好。One possible version: Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.Some students think it’s a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets.Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.On the contrary, the other students are against the idea.In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment.What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals, so I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home.But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment or causing other troubles.37.據報道,2008年北京奧運會將選拔約十萬志愿者為之服務。請你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”為題,用英語寫一篇短文,討論志愿者應該做什么,不應該做什么。短文應包括下表中的內容: DosDon’ts 1.待人禮貌、友好1.避免不得體的言行 2.堅守崗位2.不忘履行自己的職責
3.介紹中國歷史和文化3.不損害祖國的形象
如果你成為志愿者,你還應該做什么,不應該做什么。(內容由考生自己擬定)
注意:1。對所給要點,不要簡單翻譯,要有適當發揮。2.字數120左右。短文中已寫好了的部分,不計入詞數。3.參考詞匯:形象—— image One Possible Version It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.What should the volunteers do and what should they not do? Firstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behaviour.Secondly, they should stick to their posts, offering good services, satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty, and never fail to do their duty.Thirdly, they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland.If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer, besides the above, I will work hard and creatively, but never be lazy.I will follow the law and disciplining, but never break them..I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors, and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great success.38.請你根據列表格內容,寫一篇短文,比較newspaper與website的異同,并談談你的看法。
相同點不同點
1.向讀者提供信息1.報紙一經出版不能改變,而網站可以不斷更新內容。2.通過刊登廣告賺錢2.報紙要花錢,而在網上可以免費瀏覽信息。3.可以容易地在網站上發表自己的看法。
我的看法??
注意:
1、短文必須包括表內所有的內容,可以適當增加細節,使內容連貫;
2、首句已給出,不列入總詞數;
2、詞數:120詞左右。One possible version: Newspapers have been popular for a long time, but in recent years more and more people prefer to get news from the Internet.Newspapers and websites are similar in several ways.For example, they both aim at providing information to the public.Besides that, advertising is an important way for both of them to make money.In spite of the above similarities, there are a few differences.Websites update their news freely.As for newspapers, nothing can be changed once published.So websites offer us the latest news faster than newspapers.Furthermore, newspapers have to be paid for while most websites are free.And it is on the websites that we can express ourselves and exchange ideas with others more easily.In my opinion, websites and newspaper play their own roles in our lives and they are part of our lives.39.假如你是一名高三學生,經常為看電視的事跟媽媽鬧意見,今天你和媽媽達成一致。請根據以下表格的內容,以An Agreement為題寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。
母親兒子
高三學生學習任務重,看電視浪費時間學習一天很疲勞,看電視可以放松一下
兒子自制力差,看電視會影響學習,長期看電視會影響視力看電視也可以增長知識,了解國際國內大事,緊跟時代
星期中不準我看電視,但在周末允許我看新聞、文藝、體育或科普類節目
注意:1.字數100—120,短文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數;
2.不要漏掉表格中的內容,但不能逐字翻譯;3.可適當增添合乎情理的過渡性語言。I am a senior three student.I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.My mother holds the view that students in senior three, shouldering heavy loads, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV.It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I’ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often.But I really can’t accept her ideas.I think it is a relaxation to watch TV after a day’s hard work.Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons.Now we’ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news, programs ,entertainment, sports and science.IV.純文字信息提示類
40.目前家長為孩子請家教是一種普遍現象。前幾年多見于初、高中學生,現在有些小學生也請家教。父母們如此舍得花錢和忍心占去孩子的時間,究竟是為什么呢?某中學生英語報正在征文,了解其中原因。請根據下面所給的標題和首段內容,分析慢、中、快三類學生請家教的原因并說明你對家教現象的態度。注意:詞數100詞左右。
參考詞匯:1.慢等生:catch up with sb.;become dependent on sth.依賴??
2.中等生:surpass vt.超過 3.快等生:more competitive 更有競爭力的 Why Students Have Tutors(家教)?
Les’s take one class, either in primary or high school, as an example and divide it into three groups: the slow, the middle, and the fast learners.In the past, the slow learners used to have tutors.Today, however, it seems all of them have tutors for one reason or another.The slow learners need tutors because they can’t catch up with others with their own efforts.They have difficulty in understanding the teachers and doing their homework..So after – class tutoring is really important to them.But the problem is that they may become dependent on tutors and not work very hard in class.As to the middle group learners, they worry about being surpassed and turn to tutors, too.What about the fast learners? Though they are confident about their present position, they are not quite satisfied.They fix their eyes on a high goal.They desire to learn more in order to be more competitive later.I think they have the right to have tutors, though I have no tutors.41.閱讀下面這封中學生來信(摘自 China Daily 21 Century).Dear Editor: I am a new student at No.1 Middle School of Chongqing.My home is far from Chongqing, so I must live at school.This is the first time for me to get away from my parents.I feel very sad.When I left home, I could hardly tearing myself away from them..I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl.I have been crying in bed at night these days.I want to stay at home forever.I miss my parents very much..Could you tell me what to do ? Your early reply is expected.Regards Amy 請根據以上內容,寫一封回信(信的開頭已為你好。詞數120左右)。
回信應包括如下要點;1.鼓勵Amy堅定求學信心,志存高遠,四海為家。2.就Amy的目前狀況,提兩到三個建議。Dear Amy: Thank you for your letter.I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.People often miss their parents the first time they leave home.Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment.You cannot live with your parents forever.I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.You need to make friend in your school, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now.Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life.Also I suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school.You will get much pleasure from it.Wish you happy every day.Faithfully yours
Editor 42.眾所周知,2008年奧運會將在北京舉行。為了辦好這次國際盛會,北京市將進一步改善環境,修建更多的體育場館。與此同時,提高市民的素質和修養也勢在必得,因為文明的舉止在國際交往中非常重要。作為年輕人,我們自身也存在著一些不文明行為。請列舉你所觀察到的一些不文明行為(三種以上),并就此做出評論或提出建議。
It is known to all that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.In order to make it successful event, we will improve the environment of Beijing and build more venues.As the same time ,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication.I notice that sometimes some young people don’t behave properly in our daily lives.For example ,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere.The lawns are entered in the park although it is not right to do so.The flowers in public garden are picked.What is worse , rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street.In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China.So every one of us should form good habits from now on.43.肥胖已經成為危害人們健康的嚴重問題,中小學生的肥胖趨勢更為明顯。你們班對此展開討論。根據不同的觀點,寫一篇100詞左右的短文。
1.肥胖危害健康,應該節食,鍛煉,預防肥胖。已經超重的,應該采取措施減肥。2.中學生長身體的時候,減肥會影響身體發育,也會影響學習,因此應該順其自然。
肥胖:fatness Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health.And at present the situation in the teenagers is even worse, As to this, a discussion was carried out in our class.Some students think fatness does harm to our health, so it is necessary to be on a diet and take suitable exercise to prevent it.Those who are overweight should take measures to lose weight to be healthy.But others have a different opinion.They say losing weight will be bad for the teenagers during their growth course, as well as their studies.So there is no doubt to leave it as it is.44.請根據下面的英文短詩,展開適當的想象,寫一篇短文。
標題為:My Teacher Mr Moore There’s a teacher Mr.Moore.Who is lovely and therty-four.Always encouraging us to try.He leads us to a world of“why”.We all admire him more and more.注意:1.不得照抄短詩原文。2.必須結合短詩的內容,發揮想象,適當展開。3.必須突出短詩的主題,結構完整,語意連貫。4.短文不能寫成詩歌形式。5.詞數:120左右。My Teacher Mr Moore Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most.,Though he is 34,he looks very young for hes age.And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.Compared with other teachers ,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of
teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”.So ,instead of giving us answers immediately ,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help.we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problem.What a wonderful world of “why”he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.45.哈爾濱第六制藥廠研制了一種新藥,藥品已經被外商定購。請你根據提示為該廠產品寫一份使用說明書:
本藥品為中藥(traditional Chinese medicine),對肺病療效顯著。2 常量:每天三次,一次三粒,根據情況可以加服1-2粒。
服藥后身體不適要停服,小孩和老人禁服。4 本藥品應存放在陰涼干燥處。5 使用本藥品要嚴格遵從醫囑。注意:寫作時要包括要點,但不要逐條翻譯。Medicine Operation Instructions The medicine is made by the Sixth Medical Factory of Harbin.It is a kind of traditional Chinese medicine.It has a great effect on lung disease.Take three pills once and three times a day.One or two pills can be added according to your condition.Stop it if you feel uncomfortable after taking it.It is not suitable for children or the old people.Please strictly follow the doctor’s instructions when you take it.This medicine should be in dark and dry places.46.以“Form a Good Habit”為題,談談早起的好處。要求言之有理,內容連貫,可參考以下提示:1.有些學生遲到,是因為晚起; 2.晚起不僅影響學習,而且也是一種壞習慣; 3.早起是一種好習慣,因為它能給你帶來很多好處。早起有助于身體健康,有助于學習,有助于品德培養。英國有句俗話,“Early to bed, and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”這是千真萬確的,希望大家養成早起的習慣。
(注:品德培養 train character;俗話 a saying)
Some students are often late for class because they get up late.Getting up late not only affects their studies but also is a bad habit.To get up early is a good habit, for it can do you much good.Getting up early can help you to be healthy.The air in the morning is fresh.If you breathe such air, it does you a lot of good.You can have some sports, too in the morning.This can make you stronger.The fresh air and quietness in the morning make you think more quickly than any other time of the day and memorize what you have learned easily.Another reason for you to think quickly and memorize things easily is that you have taken a long rest during the night.Getting up early can also help you to train your character.Some students can get up early, but some can not.This needs perseverance.There is a saying in English, “Early to bed, and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” This is very true.I hope everyone will form the good habit of getting up early.47.越來越多的學生在校外租房而不愿住大寢室。請根據下面提示,一分為二地用英語寫一篇短文,說說兩者各自的好處與壞處,并表明自己的觀點。
1.學習時間; 2.安全; 3.自由性; 4.與同學交往; 5.學習效果。
注意:可從其他角度闡述,但兩方面的理由都至少要有兩條;詞數100左右。Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm.Instead, they rent houses outside the school.There are advantages for both.Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates.And of cause it is safer.A dorm is
more like a society, wich enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later.As for renting houses to live alone, it’s better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly.But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.編者建議:如果想書面表達有較大進步,多背誦范文不失為一種有效方法。作文范文來源途徑非常廣泛,例如《英語周報》。最好自己至少先構思,再參照范文。另外,每次老師布置的作文以及考試作文要認真對待,在文章內容、書法、卷面等方面嚴格要求,之后認真對照范文,找出自己不足,不斷改進。還有,《核按鈕》上面關于書面表達有著豐富的、內容實用的講解,對于這樣的素材同學們可千萬不要浪費喲!
高考英語作文范文4篇
一.假如你是高三的學生,最近你就高三模擬考試該難還是該容易這個問題進行了一次調查。請結合下表內容,用英語寫一篇短文,介紹有關調查情況,并發表自己的看法。
贊成偏難,反對偏易
贊成偏易,反對偏難
1.喜歡挑戰,越難越好;
2.有助于學生了解自己的薄弱環節,改進學習方法。
1.題目太難,學生會泄氣,會害怕今后的高考; 2.題目容易,易獲高分,有自信。
注意:1.詞數150左右,開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數); 2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy.Opinions are divided on this matter.
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge.The harder, the better.It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.Others,however,are against a difficult exam.In their opinion,if it is very difficult,they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination.Besides,with an easy exam,they can get high marks and gain confidence.
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy,teachers will not know how we are getting on with our studies, but if it is too difficult, we will lose heart 二.從學校畢業,或上大學,或步入社會,畢業意味著前進、意味著選擇。請以Graduation and moving on為題,寫一篇100詞左右的畢業感言。
要求:
1、畢業前活動:照相、留言等;
2、心情(依依不舍,又要前進)及原因等。首句已經給出,不計入總詞數。Graduation and Moving on Graduation is a time when we move on, from school to university, or out into the real world.
Before graduating from school, We usually have a variety of activities, like taking pictures, leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship,or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect.
However, I have mixed emotions about moving on.I want to stay and have more fun with my friends, but I will have to move on.Graduation means taking a step forwardmoving onward and upward.Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced.
Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not.Let's make great efforts so that our dream will come true.
三.假定你是某英文報的小記者,最近你對大學生的就業觀點及專家對此的看法進行了采訪。請根據以下要點寫一篇題為“Different Job Outlooks”的短文,詞數100詞左右。
學生觀點:1.大部分想找一份薪金豐厚的工作; 2.部分持觀望態度,等待良機; 3.少數想自己創業。
專家觀點:不應坐等,要盡快找份工作,理由是: 1.積累經驗; 2.掙錢養活自己;
3.明年就業形勢或許更嚴峻。Different Job Outlooks Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks.For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self – employed.However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs.They are just waiting for better chances.Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting.They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later.Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.四.不知不覺我們已進入高三年級,高考一天天逼近。為了在學習上不落后于同學,很多學生搬出學校的集體寢室,在學校附近租了房子。就這一現象請你寫一篇英語短文來發表自己的看法。內容包括:
1在校外租房子的利與弊。(至少各寫兩點)2.你同意還是反對這種做法?并陳述你的理由。(至少寫兩點)
注意:
1.詞數為120個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 3.開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總宇數)。
參考詞匯:宿舍dormitory Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year.The college entrance examination is approaching day by day.Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count. It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room.What’s important,with their morns taking care of them,they can spare more time for studies.However,there exist some disadvantages.For example,sometimes their minds go wandering easily without
competitors round.Furthermore,a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily. In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship,noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10:30 p.m.,leading to a serious lack of sleep,I think.Worse still,they don’t make fullest use of time to study so,from my perspective.I prefer to live in the rented room.
2008年上海英語高考作文范文
高考英語開放性作文的典范
——1999—2008年上海高考英語作文及范例 1999年上海高考作文及范例
一些學生認為學英語很重要;一些學生則認為不必學英語;我認為??(觀點、理由)Some students think it is very important to master English.They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”.Others consider English useless.They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school.Of all subjects I like English best.There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject.First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world.Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work.Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities.In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible.(166words)2000年上海高考作文及范例
1、我最難忘的一課
2、具體說明為何難忘
3、感想 An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things.But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident.One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us.While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced.But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom.With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.She sat on a chair and began her lesson.She spoke slowly but forcefully.She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same.Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.A good teacher is many things to many people.Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is.In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the
students are perhaps liked best.(210 words)2001年上海高考作文及范例
請你談談轎車大量進入家庭后,對家庭、環境和經濟可能產生的影響。Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise.Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners.A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely.Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year.Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars.Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically.What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.Every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents.In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.(199 words)2002年上海高考作文及范例
簡要描述圖片內容,結合生活實際,就圖片的主題談談自己的感想。
Duo to theone-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole world family.Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child.We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child.Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease.If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future? For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles.Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century.(219 words)2003年上海高考作文及范例
你的好友因家境一般買不起名牌而悶悶不樂。給他寫信,談談你的看法和建議。
受信人:徐海青 寄信人:黃平寫信日期:2003年六月八日 June 8, 2003 Dear Xu Haiqing,You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands.So you felt very depressed.There are different views on people’s wear.The following are my ideas about it.Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies.No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality.Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family.You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.I hope you understand what I mean.I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.(205 words)2004年上海高考作文及范例
老師要求你負責班級墻報(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意見。在日記中表述你的決定并談談想法。
Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class.I was so glad at that.But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it.I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job.On the other hand, I’m good at drawing.The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study.Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper.Perhaps it will affect my studies as well.Perhaps?
No!No!No!I should believe my ability.I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper? It will be an hour for me to do something for my class.I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job.I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow.(187)2005年上海高考作文及范例
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent)。通過描述你
生活中一件事,說明人各有所長,無論才能大小都能成為有用的人。There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent.I have regarded it as my motto for many years.From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another.With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road.He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture.Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s
第四篇:高考英語寫作
【寫作模版】
(1)辯論式議論文①模版1
Some people believe(argue,recognize,think)that 觀點1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點2.As for me,I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,論據1.More importantly,論據2.Most important of all,論據3.In summary,總結觀點.As a college student,I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above,we can predict that 預測.②模版2
People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1,while others point out that 觀點2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,論據1.For another,論據2.Last but not the least,論據3.To conclude,總結觀點.As a college student,I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above,we can predict that 預測.③模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that 觀點1,while others take an opposite side,firmly believing that 觀點2。As far as I am concerned,the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,論據1。
Furthermore,論據2。
Among all of the supporting evidences,one is the strongest.That is,論據3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點。
As a college student,I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above,we can predict that 預測.(2)圖表式作文
It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1,Y reaches its peak value of…(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,…(第一個原因).More importantly,…(第二個原因).Most important of all,…(第三個原因).From the above discussions,we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).★★★對比觀點題型作文模板
(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為……
2.另一些人認為……
3.我的看法……
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由
二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think
②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③---------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one
thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤---------(反對的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我對文章所討論主
題的看法).
★★★闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述.
1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.
2.分析并舉例使其更充實.
3.給出個人觀點
The good old proverb----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of
all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).
In my opinion,----------------(我的觀點).In short, whatever you do, please
remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.★★★解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1.問題現狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----問題的內容, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明該問題的現狀).Second,----------(進一步舉例說明現狀)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).★★★說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1.說明事物現狀
2.事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)
3.你對現狀(或前景)的看法
life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優點之
一).Besides-------------------(A的優點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預測).)
★★★議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)模板
目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person tPeople, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people,因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view
Itis not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文模板
_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as fJust As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with,點一..into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that c
(3)答題性議論文模板
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.F______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I wo
(4)諺語警句性議論文模板
語 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It heoretically)
______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語
_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..★★★圖表作文的模板
(一)As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the _____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(二)
It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1,Y reaches its peak value of…(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,…(第一個原因).More importantly,…(第二個原因).Most important of all,…(第三個原因).From the above discussions,we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).★★★ 話題作文模板
現象說明文
(一)Nowadays, there are more and morein It is established that 相關數據.Why have there been so many 某種現象? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is.The third one is the main cause of is due to It is high time that something was done upon it.On the one hand,.On the other hand, All these measures will certainly reduce the number of
現象說明文
(二)Recently, what amazes us most is ___.It is true that ___.There are many reasons explaining___.The main reason is ___.What’s more, ___.Thirdly,___.As a result,____.Considering all these, ____.For one thing, _____;for another, _____.In conclusion, ______.★★★ 應用文(申請信)模板
Your addressMonth, Date, YearReceiver’s address
Dear ____,I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for the position in ___And I would like to write a letter to tell you that___/ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the ___ you are advertising___/I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand…On the other hand… I am enclosing my resume for you kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you offer me a precious opportunity to an interview./ I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience./ I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Best regards!
Yours sincerely,____________
★★★ 記敘文寫作
記敘人的文章要注意人物的肖像描寫,語言描寫,行動描寫,心理描寫,以及細節描寫。記事的記敘文要注意人物,時間,地點和事件的前因后果。過渡詞語要適當變化,最好是夾敘夾議。
模式:
1.時間順序:One day sb was doing…, when…/ Hearing(Seeing)this, sb…/ When…, sb…/ After…, sb…/ While sb, sb…/ Though…, sb…/ How(What)…!First,…Then,…After/ When/ As soon as…Finally,…
2.地點順序
At eight in the morning, September 16, sb set off/ out for some place.As soon as sb got to the place, sb… About half an hour later, sb arrived at… where… After sb reached…, sb began to do… When sb came to the …, sb…
第五篇:英語高考寫作
For one thing, for another,that we should recycle the textbooks.Some students in my group agree to this suggestion.For one thing, recycling textbooks can save a recycling textbooks is very popular and it gives us a good example, saving plenty of family expenses.There are many advantages of smiling.It can _not only_make us happy, _but also__ please others.微笑有許多益處, 它不但能使我們快樂,△以你自己成長的經歷說明你的感受
I felt depressed, you would encourage me with a smile.But when our teacher advised us to help parents(to)wash feet, I thought nothing of it.How silly I was to take it for granted that you make every effort to bring me up and give me everything!I feel ashamed that I failed to notice your tiredness, unhappiness or even illness.△對中學生活的感受(2008廣東高考)
the details of my life in high school As a matter of factwhere I gained a great deal of knowledge and made a large number of good friends.Therefore, I cherished the life of my high school.這類要點中常含有“怎么辦”“如何/怎樣做(應對、處理、解決)” “采取什么措施”“對解決……,你有什么建議”等字眼
To avoid such conflicts, firstly, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life.Secondly, and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.Last but not least, instead of blaming each other, we
這類要點常含有虛擬條件句“假如……”,寫作時注意謂語要使用恰當的虛擬語氣。
(表對現在情況的假設)假如我是……我會……首先……其次……
If I were/Were I…, I would do….First of all…What’s more…
of great help to us.I would tell her all about what I felt and what I thought about her.I would also tell her if she continues doing like that, nobody could bear it and she would have no friends any more.理想的暑期生活what I am eager for is to have
a good rest in the vocation,during which I can go to bed early and get up late.I will have a chance to travel around home and abroad with my classmates,broadening my horizons.Therefore,it would be wonderful if I can do what I want to do in my summer holiday.你對高中生帶手機到學校有什么看法senior high school students bring mobile phones to school.The reasons why I think so are as follows.For one thing, the main task for senior students is to study hard for a good university, and using mobile phones will take their attention away., some students may use mobile phones to cheat in the exams,which will do harm to their development.我們為什么要遵守規則, only if we follow the rules can we all live together with harmony.Besides, accidents may be lessened or prevented with all of us following the rules., we will win others’ trust in us and will never be punished by following the rules.垃圾處理不當將會帶來什么影響 If rubbish or garbage is not disposed properly, it will do great harm to our society and the living environment., it will be a great waste of energy because some garbage can be sorted out and recycled., the harmful or poisonous substances will go into the water or the air, which will certainly affect people’s health.Worst of all, the affected garbage may spread infectious diseases among people, doing harm to our health.越來越多的私家車給社會和環境帶來的影響
An increasing number of private cars not only influenced/ affected the people’s life but alsopolluted the deteriorating air, which harmed the public health.For another thing, the noise made by cars did annoy the ordinary people, affecting our everyday life.too many cars led to a great number of traffic jams and car accidents, making people worried and upset.表達對同學或朋友的謝意
Tim, you your help in senior school.thank you for helping me with my studies, so I have made great progress.Besides,with your encouragement, I have built up my confidence and strengths to face up to difficulties and failures., it is your kindness and positive attitude to life that enable me to live a happy life and keep my spirits up.In a word, I will never forget the three happy years I spent with you.