第一篇：高三改錯 看圖作文雷鋒

假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，校報英文版正在開展“續寫雷鋒日記”活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，向校報投稿。注意：1．日記的開頭已為你寫好。2．詞數不少于100。

This morning, I was jogging in the park when I caught sight a wallet on a bench.Clearly, someone had left it there by an accident.I picked it up and checked the contents.Inside them, I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately try the number.A man answered it in an anxious voice.Hearing that I had his wallet, he signed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minute later, the man arrived.After confirm he was the owner, I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb down, he expressed his thanks to me repeated.Seeing the smile on face, I felt happy that I was able to help.考察看圖作文 【寫作指導】

本題考察的是看圖作文。要求以李華的口吻并用日記的形式來描述圖片內容。所以使用一般過去時和第一人稱。要點：1.李華早晨起來在公園里跑步，發現了長凳上有一個錢包。2.打開錢包，發現里面有一些錢和名片。3.李華聯系錢包的主人；4.對方過來取錢包，并表揚李華的好行為。

看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉換成英語語言文字，再根據這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據詞數要求，適當拓展并發揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論。此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內容?！疽痪涠嘧g】 1.錢包里面是一些錢和一張印有電話號碼的卡片。

①Inside it, I found some money and a card with a phone number.②Inside it were some money and a card with a phone number.2.聽說我撿到了他的錢包，你送了一口氣并告訴我他馬上就過來。

①Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.② On hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Saturday, May 3 Fine This morning, I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.Clearly, someone had left it there by accident.I picked it up and checked the contents.Inside it, I found some money and a card with a phone number.Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an anxious voice.Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes later, the man arrived.After confirming he was the owner, I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up, he expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly.Seeing the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.

第二篇：高三英語看圖作文

As can be seen in the picture, a

family including parents and a little boy, sitting in the car, but seems to be in trouble.The mother wants to go right, at the meantime, the father insists to go left.Well, the boy sitting in the middle of them, with a confused face.In my opinion, the picture tries to convey the meaning that people should communicate with each other very often when they hold a different idea.Especially when parents have a conflict on the education of their children.Communicating

with

others ,including their children, can gain a good result.There are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, family members can talk calmly and feel at ease if their opinion can be listened by others.Futhermore, in the second place, the family can get better advice from each members’ idea.In this way, communication cannot only gather good advice , but also can reduce the conflict between family members.What’s more, children will also live with happiness.So, why not listen to others as

well as children’s advice? Communication is so magic that it can not only lead to family harmony, but also gain a good outcome.

第三篇：高三復習短文改錯1+答案

短文改錯專練

（一）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A

March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.B

I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.C

Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, Nadia

D

People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.E

Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!

F

I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.G

Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!

H

My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.答案

1....at my room.2....have to getting...3....my parents asks...4....when you grow?” 5.And she doesn’t...6....not her idea of...7....at the school.8.He knew I hate...9....I’m getting tiring...10....I’m lain down.1.We firstly met...2....five years before.3....to the music...4....go on holiday...5.It is great.6....beautifully beach.7....a lot of funs.8....changed her job...9....to other town.10....in the phone...A

at → in getting → get asks → ask

grow后加up And → But her → my 去掉the knew → knows

tiring → tired

lain → lying

B

firstly → first before → ago 去掉the go前加to is → was

beautifully → beautiful funs → fun her → his

other → another in → on / over

C

1.Thanks to your...to → for

2....to know when...when → that或去掉when 3....next weeks with...weeks → week 4....with four days!with → for 5....and doing some...doing → do 6....about the animals!7....or the horses.8....have some times...9....finish homework...10....to telling you...1.People had always...2....what bees make.3.In the fact...4....thousand of years.5....recently past...6....working so hard.7....we talk with...8....has a new reason...9....bees able to...10....surprised facts...1....I had listened...2....by my earphones.3....that I should...4....bus in hurry.5....to finding it...6....the bus companies...7.Fortunate, at the...去掉the or → and

times → time

homework前加my

telling → tell

D

had → have what → that / which

去掉the thousand → thousands recently → recent

working → work

with → about

has → have

able前加are

surprised → surprising

E

去掉had by → with

that → where

hurry前加a

finding → find companies → company

Fortunate → Fortunately

8....I see my bag.see → saw 9....and the staff...and → but 10.How a good man!

How → What

F

1....an interested piece...interested → interesting 2....they do it in...do → did 3....a wide ranges...ranges → range 4....losing the weight...去掉the 5....managed to meeting...meeting → meet 6....like “very successful.” like → as

7....so much failed...much → many 8....and led by...led前加were 9....time on thinking...on → in或去掉on 10....what would happen...what → that

G

1.Last weekends...weekends → weekend 2....I feel very happy.feel → felt 3....anything I needed...anything → everything 4....too much people...much → many 5.Then it was my...Then → When 6....wait the next bus.the前加for 7....was broke down.去掉was 8....filled with angry...angry → anger 9....an emptier bus...emptier → empty 10....in a rain.a → the

H

1....I wanted to be...wanted → want 2....or easy-going.or → and 3....have vary interests.vary → varied 4....as well soccer.soccer前加as 5....be always open...去掉be 6....do the job good.good → well 7....in our classes...classes → class 8....who is falling...is → are 9....among teachers...among → between 10....to this post.to → for

短文改錯專練

（二）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A

Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours，Jack

B

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.C

Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.D

Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.E

My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.F

Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.G

My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.H

Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.答案

A

1....apologize to what...to → for 2....gotten here on...here → there

3....gone wrongly.wrongly → wrong 4....what the time...去掉the 5....I have to...have → had 6....get changing.changing → changed 7....another buses...buses → bus 8....and my brother...and → but 9....too angrier with...angrier → angry 10.Hope to hear you...you前加from

B

1....my classmate and...classmate → classmates 2.I get up at...get → got 3....had good time...good前加a 4.Two hours late...late → later 5....that the farmers...that → where 6....they began to plant...they → we 7....to getting close to...getting → get 8....on the open air.on → in 9....all of us was...was → were 10....more unforgettable.去掉more

C

1....mother has...has → have 2....at early age...early前加an 3....to be dependent.dependent → independent 4....be easier to me...to → for 5....that will prepare...that → which 6.Moreover, my good...Moreover → However 7.He thought my...thought → thinks 8....for his family.his → my 9.In my opinions...opinions → opinion 10....hard at now...去掉at

D

1....about newer products...newer → new 2....with everything...with → on / about 3....serious problems...problems → problem 4....are actually very...are → is 5....its disadvantages.its → their 6....buying things...buying → buy 7....sense reality.reality前加of 8....the white teeth!”

去掉the 9.And it doesn’t...And → But 10....a health diet and...health → healthy

E

1....all the funitures...furnitures → furniture 2....made a mess.made → making 3.He told his friends...friends → friend 4....so old to look...so → too 5....in a very cold...in → on 6....and surprised to...surprised前加was 7....found his way...his → her 8....such a cold weather.去掉a 9....the cat outside...10....he will never...1....living in a...2....live on much...3....has strong ties to...4....changed very slower.5....when changes will...6.Values are passing...7....with little changes...8....much quickly at...9....than at other.10....including deserts...1....aunt come home...2....discovered huge...3....were covered...4....which they saw...5....had happened to.6....holding the wastes...7....had burst openly.8....it fell towards...9....broke into piece...10....after melting in...outside → inside

will → would

F

living → live

on → in

has → have slower → slowly

去掉when passing → passed

little → few

much → more或quickly前加more

other → others deserts前加the

G

come → came huge前加a were → was which → what 去掉to wastes → waste openly → open

it → they

piece → pieces

after → before

H

1.Taking parts in...parts → part 2....help us keep...help → helps 3....kinds of activity...activity → activities 4....going to cinema.cinema前加the 5....better to have...去掉to 6....sit too longer...longer → long 7....brains getting...getting → get 8.But it’s a good...But → So 9....some runnings...runnings → running 10....make it smart...it → them

短文改錯專練

（三）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A

Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!

Ben

B

My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.C

Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!

D

A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.E

Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.F

Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!

Yours，Li Hua

G

My friend Jake is eighteen years old and lives in a small village, not far with the city of Nottingham.He grew up in this village, so he knows everyone here.But he feels boring in the village.At the moment, he travels Nottingham every day to the shop where he works.This is a bus at 7:30 in the morning and the latest bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From the September, however, he’s going to stay in Nottingham with his aunt and uncle when his cousin join the Navy.He can use his cousin’s room.He’s really looking forward to live in Nottingham.He’ll be able to go out with his friends in the evening and he doesn’t have to get up earlier in the morning to catch the bus.H

Last night, our neighbor visited my family and complained for the noise from our home at night.We feel very sorry to cause so much trouble.I explained why my parents fixed our kitchen at night because we worked all day and only came back home in the evening.What’s more, they fixed the kitchen by themselves because the high cost of workers.Since my parents are not professional, so it took them a long time to fix it.Considering the noise and trouble the neighbor were having, my parents decided to hire some workers to fix our kitchens on the weekend.We promised we would finish the work as soon as possibly.At last, we expressed our shame again and the neighbor forgiving us.答案

A

1....on holidays in...holidays → holiday 2....we spend a few...spend → spent 3....feel very good.good → well 4....when I left...I → we 5....not enough bed!

bed → beds

6.“Why don’t try...don’t → not或try前加you 7....he were joking.were → was 8.But there we are...there → here 9....it much that...much前加so 10....explore for everything.去掉for 1.My uncle buys...2....to set up...3....with the side of...4....of his houses.5.After he finishing...6....very much hot...7....were on fire.8....was putting out.9....her neighbor’s...10....but had caused...1....express our love...2....which we perform...3....less fortunate to...4....the other people...5....we sat down to...6....related with...7....that the presents...8....the one we...9.They forget to...10....has complete...1....his bag by...B

buys → bought up前加it with → to houses → house finishing → finished 去掉much were → was putting → put her → his but → and

C

express前加to

which → when to → than

去掉the sat → sit

with → to that → whether / if one → ones

They → We

complete → completely

D

by → with

2....feeling a pair...feeling → felt 3....he sees an eagle...sees → saw

4....frightening to move...frightening → frightened 5....after ten minute...minute → minutes 6.Therefore, the eyes...Therefore → However 7....parents returned to...去掉to 8....turned the light...the前加on或light后加on 9....she was arrested.she → he 10....eagle were better...were → was

E

1....were found cheating...were → are 2....or prepared note...note → notes 3....communication tool...tool → tools 4....some worse effects.worse → bad 5....will result unfair...unfair前加in 6....cheats in exams...cheats → cheat 7.On my opinion...On → In 8....put into the effect...去掉the 9....understood what kind...understood → understand 10....or try to build...or → and

F

1....come Beijing to...Beijing前加to 2....but I always get...but → and 3....better grades in...better → good 4....the spoken...去掉the 5....with you frequent.frequent → frequently 6.Beside, my...Beside → Besides 7....and is friends...is → are 8....of their friend...friend → friends 9....during you stay...you → your 10....willing to helping...helping → help

G

1....not far with...with → from 2....he feels boring...boring → bored

3....travels Nottingham...Nottingham前加to或into 4.This is a bus...This → There 5....the latest bus...6....the September...7....his cousin join...8....to live in...9....he doesn’t have...10....get up earlier...1....complained for...2.We feel very sorry...3....explained why my...4....we worked all day...5....because the high...6....so it took them...7....were having...8....fix our kitchens...9....as soon as possibly.10....forgiving us.latest → last 去掉the

join → joins

live → living doesn’t → won’t earlier → early

H

for → about / at

feel → felt

why → that

we → they

the前加of

去掉so were → was

kitchens → kitchen

possibly → possible forgiving → forgave

第四篇：看圖作文

期末考試

乖乖、鬧鬧和淘淘是三只可愛的小老鼠，它們住在一個院子里，是從小一起長大的好朋友。它們平時一起上學、一起玩、一起寫作業，形影不離。乖乖平時愛看書，學習也最好；鬧鬧平時愛說話，總是吱吱說個不停；淘淘非常淘氣，曾經跑到花貓家門前去玩，被小花貓咬掉了半只耳朵。

今天，是這學期的最后一天，也是最重

要的一天：期末考試。三個好朋友早早地就起床來到了學校，排著整齊的隊伍準備進入考場。乖乖走在最前面，他非常高興而且信心十足，因為他已經復習了好多天。鬧鬧緊跟在乖乖后面，他一點也不緊張，還在回頭回腦的跟淘淘有說有笑地聊著天。淘淘走在最后，面帶微笑，看起來也是自信滿滿。

三個小家伙都為這次考試做好了充分的準備，因為它們知道取得了好成績才能實現愿望，乖乖最想去書店，鬧鬧最想去看電影，淘淘最想去游樂場，同學們，你們猜猜它們的愿望能實現嗎？

第五篇：看圖作文

【課題】：看圖作文

【年級】：三年級

【教學目標】

1、教會學生認清圖畫，并能說出圖中所畫內容

2、引導學生發揮想象，將圖畫寫清楚

【教學重難點】

1、教會學生認清圖畫，并能說出圖中所畫內容

2、引導學生發揮想象，將圖畫寫清楚

【教學過程】：

一、故事導入

在意大利佛羅倫薩附近的海濱小鎮里，一個名叫列昂納多·達·芬奇的孩子出生了。他的童年在祖父的田莊里度過，雖然孩提時代的達·芬奇聰明伶俐，勤奮好學，興趣廣泛，但相信誰也不會想到就是這樣一個孩子，將來會成為世界上有史以來最具影響力的人物之一。他歌唱得很好，很早就學會彈七弦琴和吹奏長笛，他的即興演唱，不論歌詞還是曲調，都讓人驚嘆。他尤其喜愛繪畫，常為鄰居們作畫，有“繪畫神童”的美稱。在他14歲那年，父親送達·芬奇到意大利名城佛羅倫薩，拜當時最有名的畫家弗羅基奧為師。正是這位老師，用其獨特的教學方法與嚴謹、嚴格的教學手段為后世塑造了一位偉大的人物。

弗羅基奧是一位嚴厲的老師，達·芬奇的每一個小差錯都會被他責罰，因為他確信小毛病不改，將來一定會鑄成大錯。他沒有急著教達·芬奇繪畫技巧，也沒有讓達·芬奇創作什么作品，他的第一堂課就只安排達·芬奇畫雞蛋，并且要求其一絲不茍地照著樣子去畫；第二堂課還是畫雞蛋；第三堂課、四堂課、連續幾個月的時間，一直都只讓達·芬奇畫雞蛋。達·芬奇畫了一個又一個，剛開始不耐煩還可以調整，久而久之終于無法忍受，甚至懷疑這個老師是不是有真的本事。

“為什么一直讓我畫雞蛋？到什么時候才能畫完？”

看到達·芬奇不耐煩的樣子，老師并沒有生氣，只是微微一笑說：“不要以為畫雞蛋簡單容易，要知道，在一萬個雞蛋中，都沒有兩個形狀是完全相同的，即使是同一個雞蛋，只要變換角度去看，形狀也會不同，比如說，把頭抬高一點或是放低一點，這個雞蛋的輪廓就會有差異，所以，如果想要在紙上將它們完全形象地畫出來，就必須下苦工夫?！边_·芬奇似乎有所頓悟，一時沒有說話。

“叫你反復畫雞蛋，就是訓練你細致地觀察所畫的對象，然后用手和筆細膩、準確地畫出來。只要做到手眼一致，那么以后畫什么都會得心應手?！?/p>

聽完老師的講話，達·芬奇終于領悟到老師的良苦用心，心悅誠服，每天自覺地、默默地堅持畫雞蛋，終于有一天他所畫的雞蛋，各個特點不同，各個形象逼真。

達·芬奇不斷的努力與堅韌不拔的毅力，再加上深刻的思考，終于慢慢進入了狀態，繪畫水平大幅提升。后來經過漫長的藝術實踐，達·芬奇創作了多幅不朽之作，最終成為一代宗師。其中，最為著名的《蒙娜麗莎》現在還陳列在巴黎盧浮宮，堪稱鎮館之寶。

師：讀了這個故事，你們有什么感想？

生：（回答）

師：對了。其實我們不管畫畫也好，還是寫作文也好，都離不開仔細的觀察。所以，今天我們來學習一下看圖作文，考考同學們的觀察力。（板書：看圖作文）

二、教授新課

師：我們把課本翻到56頁，一起來看看這4副圖上都畫了什么

（帶領學生仔細看圖）

師：我們一起來看看這篇范文。勾出圖畫上沒有的句子。

生：（學生勾畫）

師：這些都是圖畫上沒有的。小作者是怎么添加進去的呢？

生：通過想象

師：對了我們在寫看圖作文的時候，除了要仔細觀察之外，還要發揮我們的想象力，把圖片上的內容豐富起來。（板書：仔細觀察；展開想象）

師：那我們現在就來考考同學們的想象力。把書翻到60頁。這里有一副圖，現在發揮你們的想象力，再往圖上畫上你所想到的東西。然后起來說一說，看誰既畫得好，又說得棒。生：（學生動筆繪畫，并請學生起來描述自己所畫的內容。）

三、學生實踐

師：看來同學們都說得很不錯。不過，有的同學會說，能不能寫下來呢？現在我們就來試試吧！書上61頁，作文大練筆，看看這兩幅圖都畫了寫什么？最后一幅圖上應該畫上什么呢？開動你的小腦筋，將最后一幅圖畫出來，并動筆將三副圖寫下來。

四、板書設計

看圖作文

仔細觀察

展開聯想