第一篇：高中英語短文改錯高三練習2篇

高中短文改錯

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My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college and he hasn't found the job yet.He was once advising to learn computer skills,so he thought it difficult.When he sawothers learning English,he shook his head,said it was too hard to remember the new word.He enjoyed watching TV,playing cards,smoking and so on.He felt it was hardfor him to give up all this habits.Not long ago,he went to look for a job.when heknew that talents were great needed,he sighed and regretted the time that what hehad wastde.How he wished he has worked hard in college!

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My spare time is full of interested activities.I read all kinds of books in the reading roomwhenever I am free.I learn much in the library than in class in this way.Meanwhile, Iparticipated in many sports activities, of that my favorite is volleyball.I often play volleyball after the school.Sports and games keep me healthy and energetic enough to get across a variety of difficulties.Sometime I go in for social practice with my classmates outside school.Thus, I can gain much social experiences.Out-of-class activities are quite necessary for our students.Through these activities we can learn many things can not be learned in class.

第二篇：經典短文改錯練習

短文改錯.1.Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong.Together 76.with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four.In the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78.prize.The song “Bad Girl” made her famous.The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records.Some of her songs 80.were very popular.She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends.When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82.organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83.Kong people to bravely face the disease.Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003.The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85.remembered by people.2.When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to have.One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, too.This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．

3.Every day John goes to work by trains.He always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more quickly.One day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his station.He didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go back.He arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ 4.In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for dinner.So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the restaurant.After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79．___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ meal.Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.I wrote something improper down secret.My 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.I looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was poor.Then I wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5.Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog.There are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less alone.We were 77． right.They play together happily all days.Our daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she used.In a way it 79．

is like having two children in the house.All of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． want.The dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wash.My wife is also happy because of 84． I have given up smoke.The dog doesn’t like the smell.85．

6.I went shopping with my wife.We have a lot of things to 1._________ buy them.We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the shop.An hour late, we came back 3._________ to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the door.So we asked policeman for help.He was 5._________ glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“How are 7._________ you doing with my car ” We were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the car.What you think we did then 9._________ We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ 7.To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by train.Travel by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ railway.However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good rest.So you can see every 83.______ coin has two sides.You'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______

8.Dear Worried, I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76.__________ suggestions.First in all, don't be disappointed.Many students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write well.In my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several things.First, 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures.Second, 80.__________ read as much as possible.There are many things can't be 81.__________ learnt.You must see it in books many times.Then you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly yourself.But, in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read much.Finally, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good passages.Good luck for you in your writing.85.9.My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home.71.___ It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in Second World War.In fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous way.We 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ 10.As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as possible.For instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our friends.However, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ 77.in---at78.but---and 79.see---saw 80.made---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she 83.concert—concerts 84.Sadly 85.the ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81． 去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really ⑶76.trains 改為 train 77.去掉 piece。78.pass 改為 passes。79.important 前加 an 80.such 改為 so。81.此行無錯。82.wait 改為 waited。83.lately 改為 late。84.to 改為 with。85.importance 改為 important。

⑷76.in--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right 80.at the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 83.served 84 waiting 85.reason ⑸ 76．there改為where 77．alone改為lonely 78．days改為day 79．used改為used to 80．All改為Both 81．but改為and 82．easy改為easier 83．無錯 84．去掉of 85．smoke改為smoking ⑹1.Have改為had 2.them去掉 3.late改為later 4.正確 5.asked 后加a 6.minute改為 minutes 7.How 改為What 8.surprising改為surprised 9.What 后加do 10.speak 改為 say ⑺76.To—In 77.Travel—Travelin9 78.comfortably--comfortable 79.Unless--If 80.safety--safe 81.正確 82.was—is 83.can后加not 84.去掉to 85.or--and ⑻76.accepted→received 77.in→of 78.difficulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.對 81.things后加that 82.it→them 83.But→So 84.去掉to 85.for→to

⑼71.left-leaving 72.none-neither 73.froze-freezing 74.stay-stayed 75.in 后面加the 76.so-but/yet 77.be去掉 78.that-which 79.正確80.in-on ⑽ 76.As →It 77.on →in 78.or →and 79.get ⌒much as 80.are81.However →Besides 82.∨ 83.kind →kinds 84.watching →watch 85.left →leaving

⑾ 76.accepted→received 77.去掉more, 78.because后加of, 79.other→another 80.say→said 81.and→or兩,三天用two or three days.82.family前加the這里特指家庭的其他成員.83.fast→soon fast指動作的迅速,soon指時間“盡快地”.84.√ 85.happily→happy

⑿ 76.√77.is→are 78.felt→feel 79.Therefore→However 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to 82.play→playing 83.like→as 84.grade→grades“分數”, 85.for→in

⒀ 76.have→had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him 80.shoulders →shoulder 81.taking → taken 82.was后加 not 83.He→I 84.explain后加to ⒁ 1.calling—called 2.walking前加was3.and—or 4.and—but5.dead—died 6.√7.All—Both 8.去掉not 9.great前加a 10.danced—dance

第三篇：短文改錯練習

短文改錯專練：March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!

Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!

I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!

My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours, Jack

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!

Ben

My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!

A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21

Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

第四篇：高中英語短文改錯總結

高中英語短文改錯寫作訓練

（一）教學指導

短文改錯是高考寫作中的一部分，文體大都是記敘文，旨在測試考生發現、判斷和糾正錯誤的能力。它要求考生具有詞法、句法和在語篇中綜合運用英語的能力，因此考點綜合性強，覆蓋面廣，錯項設置類型多，是歷年高考英語中的難題。為了提高做短文改錯題的能力，除了要加強基礎知識的積累、提高語篇的整體理解能力之外，還應該對其錯項設置的基本情況有所了解，以便做到目標明確，有的放矢，從而提高解題的正確率。短文改錯要從從語法和邏輯的角度，用口訣的形式，向同學們介紹高考英語短文改錯中最常見的幾類錯誤 1.常見謂語動詞錯誤類型有① 一般現在時與一般過去時錯用；② and 前后動詞時態不一致;③ 主謂不一致;④ 缺少動詞,特別是be動詞;⑤ 第三人稱單數形式錯用;⑥ 主動語態和被動語態錯用。

1）They did not want me to do any work at home;they want me to devote all my time to my studies.（did 改為do 錯誤類型屬于 ①）2）As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(visiting 改為 visited錯誤類型屬于②)3）There will an important game next month.(will后加be錯誤類型屬于④)4）One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.(③ 主謂不一致,was應為were)2.名詞的常見錯誤：單復數名詞錯用；注意區分名詞是可數還是不可數；或根據名詞前的修飾語或謂語動詞的單復數來判斷。

① I’ll get good marks in all my subject.（subject 改為subjects）② Their word were a great encouragement to me.（word 改為words）

③ Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.（knowledges是不可數名詞，改為knowledge）3.連詞錯誤

連詞包括關系代詞、從屬連詞和并列連詞and/ or/but等（一般考查從句關系 who/ whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether）

① I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.(錯用了who的所有格形式改為whose)② I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此處應該是并列的關系而非轉折，but改為 and)③ Clever as she is, but she works very hard.（已經有連詞as ,所以去掉but）

4.冠詞錯誤：誤用a和an（根據單詞的因素來判定）；誤用a 和the（固定搭配，各自單獨使用的地方）

多余冠詞或缺少冠詞。

① We may be one family and live under a same roof.(a 改為the the same 是固定搭配)② As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants.（mountain是可數名詞需用冠詞，所以加 a）③ I hope you have pleasant journey.（一次愉快的旅行，所以pleasant前加a)5.形容詞和副詞錯誤

1)系動詞后用形容詞（be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性動詞 smell /feel）2)詞性的誤用

形容詞修飾名詞

副詞修飾 實義動詞，形容詞和副詞，過去分詞用副詞修飾

① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.（time是名詞 所以要用形容詞wonderful修飾）

② My pronunciation was terribly.(作表語要用形容詞terrible)6.代詞錯誤 1）代詞的主格和賓格（I / me;He/him;She/ her;We/ us;They/ them）2）反身代詞（myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves）3）代詞的單數和復數4）多余的代詞和少代詞

① Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.(express oneself, me 改為 myself)② One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.(在to 前加it)③ If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.（other應為others）

④ What’s more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.（him應為them）7.非謂語動詞的常見錯誤

1）不定式，動名詞作主語，賓語。2）and 連接的不定式或動名詞前后一致（尤其距離較遠時），3）介詞后用動名詞ving形式作賓語。4）某些動詞后要求接動名詞或不定式。① Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was….(enjoy 后需接動名詞 talk--talking)② But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(go作主語 改為 going)③ Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.(read應為reading)8.介詞錯誤

1）詞組中的介詞誤用，2）介詞意思理解偏差，3）介詞的多用或少用 ① There are too many people among my family.（among 改為 in my family 為固定搭配）

② I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.（去掉 at）此外，還有一些錯誤是固定搭配中的錯誤，需要同學們在日常學習中注意積累固定短語。短文改錯解題步驟

1）通讀全文，掌握大意 2）整句分析，逐行推敲3）反復通讀，復查驗證

第五篇：高中英語短文改錯總結

高中英語短文改錯寫作訓練

（一）教學指導

短文改錯是高考寫作中的一部分，文體大都是記敘文，旨在測試考生發現、判斷和糾正錯誤的能力。它要求考生具有詞法、句法和在語篇中綜合運用英語的能力，因此考點綜合性強，覆蓋面廣，錯項設置類型多，是歷年高考英語中的難題。為了提高做短文改錯題的能力，除了要加強基礎知識的積累、提高語篇的整體理解能力之外，還應該對其錯項設置的基本情況有所了解，以便做到目標明確，有的放矢，從而提高解題的正確率。短文改錯要從從語法和邏輯的角度，用口訣的形式，向同學們介紹高考英語短文改錯中最常見的幾類錯誤

1.常見謂語動詞錯誤類型有① 一般現在時與一般過去時錯用；② and 前后動詞時態不一致;③ 主謂不一致;④ 缺少動詞,特別是be動詞;⑤ 第三人稱單數形式錯用;⑥ 主動語態和被動語態錯用。

1）They did not want me to do any work at home;they want me to devote all my time to my studies.（did 改為do 錯誤類型屬于 ①）

2）As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(visiting 改為 visited錯誤類型屬于②)

3）There will an important game next month.(will后加be錯誤類型屬于④)

4）One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.(③ 主謂不一致,was應為were)

2.名詞的常見錯誤：單復數名詞錯用；注意區分名詞是可數還是不可數；或根據名詞前的修飾語或謂語動詞的單復數來判斷。

① I’ll get good marks in all my subject.（subject 改為subjects）

② Their word were a great encouragement to me.（word 改為words）

③ Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.（knowledges是不可數名詞，改為knowledge）

3.連詞錯誤

連詞包括關系代詞、從屬連詞和并列連詞and/ or/but等（一般考查從句關系 who/ whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether）

① I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.(錯用了who的所有格形式改為whose)② I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此處應該是并列的關系而非轉折，but改為 and)

③ Clever as she is, but she works very hard.（已經有連詞as ,所以去掉but）

4.冠詞錯誤：誤用a和an（根據單詞的因素來判定）；誤用a 和the（固定搭配，各自單獨使用的地方）

多余冠詞或缺少冠詞。

① We may be one family and live under a same roof.(a 改為the the same 是固定搭配)

② As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants.（mountain是可

數名詞需用冠詞，所以加 a）

③ I hope you have pleasant journey.（一次愉快的旅行，所以pleasant前加a)

5.形容詞和副詞錯誤

1)系動詞后用形容詞（be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性動詞 smell /feel）

2)詞性的誤用形容詞修飾名詞副詞修飾 實義動詞，形容詞和副詞，過去分詞用副詞修飾

① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.（time是名詞 所以要用形容詞wonderful修飾）

② My pronunciation was terribly.(作表語要用形容詞terrible)

6.代詞錯誤 1）代詞的主格和賓格（I / me;He/him;She/ her;We/ us;They/ them）2）反身代詞（myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves）3）代詞的單數和復數4）多余的代詞和少代詞

① Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.(express oneself, me 改為 myself)

② One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.(在to 前加it)

③ If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.（other應為others）

④ What’s more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.（him應為them）

7.非謂語動詞的常見錯誤

1）不定式，動名詞作主語，賓語。2）and 連接的不定式或動名詞前后一致（尤其距離較遠時），3）介詞后用動名詞ving形式作賓語。4）某些動詞后要求接動名詞或不定式。① Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was….(enjoy 后需接動名詞 talk--talking)

② But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(go作主語 改為 going)

③ Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.(read應為reading)

8.介詞錯誤

1）詞組中的介詞誤用，2）介詞意思理解偏差，3）介詞的多用或少用

① There are too many people among my family.（among 改為 in my family 為固定搭配）

② I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.（去掉 at）

此外，還有一些錯誤是固定搭配中的錯誤，需要同學們在日常學習中注意積累固定短語。短文改錯解題步驟

1）通讀全文，掌握大意 2）整句分析，逐行推敲3）反復通讀，復查驗證

注意：短文改錯中“一致性”問題：

1、主謂一致

2、時態與語態的一致

3、代詞先后指代一致

4、名詞數的一致

5、平行結構中的一致

6、全文寫作邏輯語義一致

我去探險

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有十處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處增加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改:在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多著(從11處起)不計分.Dear Sir,I'm writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.In order to reducing the cost and make more profits，some food

companies don't take necessary safety measure to guarantee the

food quality.As a result of ,more and more low-quality food flows

into the market,do a lot of harm to consumers' health.In my

Opinion, food are essential to human beings.We can not live without

properly food.If no notice were taken of food safety, the health of

the whole nation could suffer.So I call the whole society to

take action and put an end for the low-quality food.Only in this

Way can we live the healthier life.Yours truly,Li Hua