第一篇：汪亮老師Bryan托福獨立寫作(友誼)

Will you continue the friendship if your friend does something you dislike?

Friends are those who share the similar interests, likes and dislikes with us and are able to be a good companion when we are alone.Without friends, one is isolated.However, every friend of yours is not your real friend.What should we do when one of our friends does something that we do not like? Will you choose to remain the friendship or just give it up? As far as I am concerned, it depends on whether the thing he does is on purpose or oversteps the bounds.Sometimes, friends truly do something that we don’t quite like, which, however, is not a big deal since they don’t do it intentionally.As is known to all, characters and opinions vary from person to person, even if they are friends.Different people have distinctive behaviors and habits cultivated from childhood and growth environment, thus, it’s no wonder they may have diverse ideas or tastes on things, leading to the consequence that they may not notice what they do may be an offence to their friends.For one thing, a friend of yours may love lakers, which makes you unhappy since you are a die-hard fan of Spurs.For another thing, a vegetarian friend mentions unconsciously about the fact that he prefers to have healthy diet, which may seem impolite to you because you are a carnivorous animal.Similarly, a friend who directly points out your mistake actually wants to help you become better.Will you end the friendship? Of course not!

On the other hand, it’s undeniable that some friends doing something malicious may turn out to be enemies who are like spies or betrayers, in which case, getting rid of them is definitely the best choice.In retrospect, there were too many examples of betrayal happening between bosom friends who were supposed to be life-long brothers or sisters because of various reasons, money, power, love, or merely jealousy, etc, all of which may lead friendship to an end.Take Ren Zhengfei, the former billionaire who established Huawei, a great IT company of China, as an example, it is the betrayer who pretended to be his friend that stole the core technology and sold it to his counterpart Xiaomi, resulting in 3 years’ of depression and crisis of Huawei.As a result, Ren decisively terminated the so-called “friendship”.In conclusion, I assert that whether to continue friendship relies on whether the thing done by friend crosses our bottom line and whether he does it deliberately.Friendship is a pure relationship, which should by no means be related to any tangible benefits.If a friend takes advantage of it and does something that really irritates you, it’s not worth remaining it.450 words

第二篇：托福 TPO31獨立寫作

托福 TPO31獨立寫作題目

Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福 TPO31 獨立寫作范文 ：

In modern society, there is no denying that our paces speed up.A small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment;however, in my view, it is not the case.As a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to become satisfied much more easily.First illustration which can demonstrate my opinion can be the trail of technological development.In the past five decades, millions of new inventions had appeared, entering our daily life, making it much more convenient.To name a good example, in 1896,Benz assembled the first three-wheel car in the world.Though it brought accidents and mortality to the world, we cannot deny the enjoyment of ferocious speed brought by cars, which made our jaunt convenient.We can simply drop by a old friend 100 miles, a distance taking at least half day before, away in one hour.Another good instance is the invention of smart phone.in 1972, Martin, the chief engineer in Moto devised the first portable telephone.Then, this innovation revolutionized out life.Just simply imagine what our life looked like without cell phones: people could not keep contact with their friends and exigent messages might be blocked.Then in 2007, Steve Jobs brought iPhone with Facetime to the world.The most significant aspect of Facetime is that this app allows us to communicate with actual image, not just voices.Then, how can we state that modern society steals the sense of fraternity among people? Second demonstration which can help me develop my view that a rapidly changing society makes people more satisfied is the use of new energy resources.We may still remember the Great Smog, one of the gravest air pollution accidents in our history due to the heavily gathered inversion layer of sulfur dioxide originated with burning of coal in 1950s, London.People died of respiratory diseases after inhalation of poisonous air.How can they live happily in a world brimmed with pollutions? But nowadays, we have developed new energy resources to tackle this problem such as hydropower and wind power.To name an example, in 2007, nuclear power plants generate 14% of the total electricity of the US, thus saving tons of coals and reducing the level of inhalable particles.Recently, governments and organizations have taken measures to support researches of renewable resources and to find substitutes for fossil fuels.Natural reserves and sanctuaries are established, places of interest and spots are refurbished, and factories and manufacturers with pestilent exhaust are shut down.People therefore are provided with much more opportunities to relax by enjoying the beauty of nature.To draw a conclusion, in a world that is rapidly changing, we are offered a variety of brand-new experiences and highly evolved products, which make life much easier than before.We are in a world filled with convenience brought by high technologies that develop so fast.Then, how can we blame on the changing world while enjoying happiness and satisfactions originated from them?

第三篇：托福獨立寫作作文修改

獨立5-現(xiàn)象證明P21 2010.10.31NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.Education is the foundation of a country.People today have a stronger concept（搭配不當(dāng)，改為sense）of being educated than in the past.I agree with the statement that people gain an easier access to all kinds of educations at current times.Firstly, there are much more schools available today than in the past.No matter where you live, in big cities or in the countryside, the local government spends a large amount of money on the constructions of various types of schools, such as primary schools, middle schools, high schools and even schools for adults.More and more universities and colleges have been built to ensure higher education for top students.If you want to study in schools, you will always find a proper one to attend.Secondly, the teaching approach diversifies（there are diversified teaching approaches）.Except for（In addition to包括在內(nèi)）blackboard and chalks, many advanced teaching devices are being used today in most schools, including computers, multi-media and some other instruments.Moreover, labs and libraries have also come into use for students to study deeper and wider(who want to make a deeper and wider study on the fields they are interested in).What is more, the teachers' teaching levels are greatly improved by communicating with other educators from all over the world.The technology becomes more developed than in the past, so it is easier now to study.Thirdly, people have equal rights to receive education.As we all know, people in the past were in terrible discrimination because of their sex and race(many people such as women and the black people were denied the right to education because they were discriminated against in the society because of their sex and race.兩句合起來)For example, women and black people were used to be considered as people in lower classes or even slaves and weren't allowed to go to school.However, they have equal rights to study in schools nowadays.（要回到主題，和更容易接受教育要直接聯(lián)系起來，所以再加一句）Obviously, these people surly have easier access to education.To sum up, almost everyone today has equal rights to go to all kinds of schools with diversified teaching approaches.So people do have an easier way to receive education now than in past times.The reasons above firmly support my opinion(最后一句話不夠有力，可以將三點簡明扼要的用一句話概括).(Word Count: 294)獨立8-包含因果關(guān)系P15 2010.3.20NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government.With the development of the society, people can do more things by themselves nowadays（于什么時候比較？）than in the past.But I disagree with the statement that people can solve many important problems, therefore the government does not need to help them（therefore they need not depend on the government for any support）.There(are)three reasons as follows:

Firstly, People today still cannot solve many important problems by themselves in fact in terms of education, unemployment, war, starvation, poverty and so on.These are international problems all over the world, so a single person or even a group of people may not have the abilities to solve(be capable of solving)them.For example, if a man wants to stop a war between two countries, even he is powerful or wealthy, he(he, however wealthy and powerful,)cannot prevent them from fighting with each other without the help of others.Secondly, people today need more help from the government.As the life standards are getting higher, people have more requirements than before.They ask for all kinds of utilities for entertainment or exercise in public places.They need various insurance to make their lives more comfortable.They also require more schools and hospitals to take care of the young people and patients(the sick).Thirdly, whether people today can solve many problems or not has nothing to do with whether they need the government's help.It is the responsibility of the government to help people.The government must give people help no matter how powerful they are.In a word, the statement that people today do not need help from the government because they can solve many important problems is wrong.The reasons above can firmly support my idea.(260w)

獨立1-包含should, important, necessary的簡單話題

P75 2009.5.30 Younger school children(aged between five and ten)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.In order to broaden the horizon of younger school children, it is suggested that they should study art and music as well as other common courses.I agree with it because of the following reasons.First of all, art and music can help students to relax.Campus life is stressful even for younger children who aged between five and ten, with all kinds of homework and assignments.However, by having music and art classes, students can get a much-needed escape from the heavy work.It can help them to relax their mind and study more efficiently in other classes.Second, music and art classes help improve students' interpersonal relationships.Students will meet together to talk about a same topic if they have common interests.For example, students attending art classes can talk about the masterpiece or life story of a famous painter.Students having music classes will enjoy the beautiful melody or sing songs together.By communicating with each other, they will build a strong friendship and learn how to behave in various situations.Third, music and art classes provide students with plenty of information about great artists and their works.By learning knowledge in artistic fields students can acquire different cultures from different countries.The artists and musicians describe what they see or hear in their works, showing feelings meanwhile, which bring the students the atmosphere at that time.To sum up, art and music classes should be taken by younger school students to broaden their horizon.(248w)

獨立2-包含比較(better, prefer)的簡單話題

P24 2010.10.9NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside.No matter where people live, in big cities or in the countryside, they must take care of their family members.Basically I prefer the former one.Living in big cities has more advantages than living in the countryside.Firstly, for old people, living in big cities can be convenient.There are a large number of hospitals which are available to all kinds of diseases.When the old people catch a cold, have a fever or even heart attack, they could be taken to the best hospital nearby and received treat in time and recover as soon as possible.But in the countryside, situations in hospitals are obviously terrible.Secondly, children should receive good education, so living in big cities is a wise choice.Schools in big cities which get finance support from(the)government provide sufficient teaching facilities for the students in order that the students can study more easily and do more experiments.Moreover, the teaching levels of the teachers in big cities are higher on average than that of the teachers in the countryside.Admittedly, Living in big cities may have a few downsides.For example, the air may be not as fresh as it in the countryside and the noise may make people crazy sometimes.However,(the)government is taking measures to prevent the pollutions and people are also becoming aware of the importance of environmental protection.It is sure that the problems can be solved in the future.In a word, people can take care of their family members much better when they live in big cities than in the countryside, because advanced society welfares are everywhere in big cities.（Word Count: 272）

獨立7-包含絕對詞（never, always, only ,no longer,最高級等）.P92 2007.8.4 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Printed books will no longer exist.With the development of technology, digital books are increasingly coming into use while printed book are less used in our lives.It has been argued that printed books will no longer exist in the future.I disagree(with this opinion)although the statement has a grain of truth.First of all, admittedly, digital books have some advantages over printed books.First, it is cheaper to download a digital version from the internet than to buy a hardcover printed book.You may download Harry Potter for only half the price of the paper version.Second, the digital book is very convenient for us to carry because it is much lighter than the printed book.We can download thousands of articles into our mp4 or electronic books to read them everywhere instead of carrying several heavy books.However, to say that printed books will disappear from our lives in the future is unacceptable.First, hardcover printed books are worth collecting.They are usually very valuable with their beautiful covers and plentiful contents.Second, the printed books made by(of)papers are good for people's eyes.If we stare at a digital book all the time, our eyes will be tired or even hurt.Reading for a long period may do enormous harms to people's health, especially to children.Third, printed books are of great importance in some special ceremonies.They are usually the symbols of holy things.It is ridiculous for a minister to read with a digital book in a church.To sum up, although the digital books are more and more useful, it is sure that printed books will exist forever.(267)

第四篇：托福獨立寫作題型分析[推薦]

呂欣澤：淺談托福獨立寫作題型及策略

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摘要：從題型上來講，托福獨立寫作分為絕對型、對比型和隱藏all型。針對不同的題型，我們對癥下藥，就會擁有手到擒來的寫作拓展方法，這樣，在緊張的考場上看到相應(yīng)的題型，我們就可以像給老朋友打招呼一樣輕松自然了。

(一)絕對型

絕對型的題型一般是題目中含有最高級和絕對化的頻率詞的題，那么，針對這種類型的題目，我們又哪些策略呢?我給大家推薦的是兩種態(tài)度，四種方法。當(dāng)然，這兩種態(tài)度就是“同意”和“不同意”，當(dāng)同意的時候，我們可以采用“一邊倒”的策略，說A好處1，A好處2和A好處3，每個好處各成一個主體段，這樣文章就成型了;在同一的態(tài)度下，第二種方法就是若轉(zhuǎn)折，即前兩個主體段可以分別闡述A好處1和A好處2，第三個主體段可以進(jìn)行一個弱弱的轉(zhuǎn)折，稍微說一下B也好，這樣，既湊了字?jǐn)?shù)，也向考官展現(xiàn)了自己全面的思維;在“不同意”的態(tài)度下，我們也可以按照“A好——A有缺陷——B也好”的結(jié)構(gòu)謀篇布局;也可以按照“A好——B好——C也好的結(jié)構(gòu)”進(jìn)行展開。

(二)對比型

對比型的題目即為事物之間進(jìn)行比較。針對這類題型，共有兩種態(tài)度，三類寫法。在“同意”的態(tài)度下，我們可以采用A1>B1，A2>B2，A3>B3的寫法進(jìn)行寫作，即把兩個不同的事物統(tǒng)一在三個相同的維度下進(jìn)行比較;在“不同意”的態(tài)度下，我們有兩種寫法，我們依舊可以按照“A好——A有缺陷——B也好”的結(jié)構(gòu)謀篇布局;也可以按照“A好——B好——C也好的結(jié)構(gòu)”進(jìn)行展開。

(三)隱藏all型

隱藏all型實質(zhì)上就是含蓄的絕對型，它在寫法上和絕對型有異曲同工之處，卻也忽悠區(qū)別。在這種提醒下，我想推薦兩種寫法，首先是“同意”的太對下，我們依舊可以繼續(xù)采用“A好處1，A好處2和A好處3”的一邊倒寫法進(jìn)行展開，如果是在“不同意”的態(tài)度下，我們可以采用“A有好處——A也有不好的地方”的邏輯順序進(jìn)行展開，當(dāng)然，也可以采用分類討論的寫法，其實分類討論的寫法是一種變了形的“讓步——轉(zhuǎn)折”，在邏輯上遵循的是一樣的規(guī)律和道理。

以上談了這么多理論上的話，但是還是需要同學(xué)們先分析歸納題型，然后按照不同的題型不同的方法進(jìn)行練習(xí)，對癥下藥確實可以在考場上為我們節(jié)省大量寶貴的時間，加油哦!

第五篇：托福獨立寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)--英文版

托福獨立寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

5分

? Effectively addresses the topic and task ? Well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and or details ? Displays unity, progression, and coherence ? Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors 4分

? Addresses the topic and task well, though some points may not be fully elaborated ? Generally well organized and well developed, using appropriate and sufficient explorations, exemplifications, and or details

? Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression, or unclear connections

? Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety and range of vocabulary, though it will probably have occasional noticeable minor errors in structure, word form, or use of idiomatic language that do not interfere with meaning

3分

? Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and or details ? Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured

? May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning

? May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary

2分

? Limited development in response to the topic and task ? Inadequate organization or connection of ideas ? Inappropriate or insufficient exemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the task

? A noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms ? An accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage 1分

? Serious disorganization or underdevelopment ? Little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics, or questionable responsiveness to the task ? Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage