第一篇：3月22日、23日托福獨立寫作預測

３月22日、23日托福獨立寫作預測

1.Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.同意：（1）技術使人們需要掌握的知識和技能變多了，因為駕馭和使用技能必須要學習很多使用方法神馬的，而且技術更新的很快，就要不斷學習和吸收；（2）技術讓選擇變多了，需要考慮的也變多了，因為技術豐富了產品和服務咩，人們就在選擇的時候需要去比較和思考呀，像買個洗衣機，要考慮神馬牌子的，全自動（automatic）還是半自動的(semi-automatic)，要不要有集成烘干功能

（combination washer with dryer）等等；（3）技術帶來的一些負面作用給人們的生活帶來了很多的麻煩咩，容易產生連鎖反應（domino-effect），例如車子方便了人們的出行，但是車增加了溫室氣體，北京開始限號了，萬一忘掉了單號和雙號還要被處罰，煩躁。

2.In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.同意：（1）廣告可以讓企業的產品更為人所知，口碑營銷（reputation marketing）有地理的局限性（geographical barriers），廣告比較無孔不入（rife），可以接觸到更多的潛在客戶（reach people in a larger scale）；（2）廣告可以促使消費者作出購買決定，因為好的廣告能激發出（stimulate）消費者的潛在需求

（inner desire），讓消費者產生購買這個產品的欲望，從而促進了產品的銷量；

（3）讓步：但是在廣告上花費多少企業要掌握好，必須根據財政情況（budget）來合理分配，防止在產品的生產和員工的待遇上資金不足，否則光靠廣告效應吸引了消費者，但是沒有辦法留住消費者也是不會成功的。

3.Should the government support artists or should artists support themselves?

應該由政府資助：（1）有利于保護文化，因為很多藝術家進行的藝術創作是一個國家的文化的符號（symbol），體現了一個國家的文化特征（cultural identity），但是這些藝術往往都不怎么賺錢，政府不資助的話從事這個藝術的人就會越來越少的；（2）讓藝術家可以專心藝術創作，藝術是比較燒錢的（money-consuming），像是買畫布之類的，很多藝術家不得不去做兼職來維持開銷，如果政府資助的話，避免他們因為金錢問題分散（distract）時間和精力；（2）可以保持藝術的純碎和本質（authenticity)；因為藝術家可以不用為了金錢去迎合（cater to）消費者和市場，可以堅持自己的藝術理念，就不會讓藝術的本質被扭曲了（distort）。

4.People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’

s no need for the government to help them.偏向不同意：讓步段承認有些問題確實不需要政府來解決了，個人解決問題的能力比過去強了，因為受到了良好的教育（well-educated），并且技術也更加發達；但是這并不是意味著就不需要政府，很多問題的解決依然需要依賴政府的（1）在面對很多問題的時候，個人依然是缺乏能力的，很多問題的解決需要投入大量的資金或者需要有比較大的影響力或者威懾（deter），個人都不具備；(2)個人在解決問題的時候往往沒有政府處理的更好，因為個人容易受到個人利益或者情感因素的左右（sway），而且眼界也會比較狹隘。

5.Teaching is harder than it was in the past.同意：（1）技術的發展讓人們可以自己在網絡上搜尋到很多的信息，學生經常會在課堂上問老師各種各樣的知識，老師在上課的時候需要了解更多的東西和知識，這樣才可以應對了解的東西越來越多的學生；（2）現在的學生不像過去那樣那么尊重老師了，隨著家庭結構（family fabric）的改變，孩子的數量變少了，父母對孩子都比較寵溺（spoil），孩子都比較自我（self-oriented），管理起來比以前困難；（3）現在的老師除了專業知識以外還需要掌握更多的技能，隨著多媒體（multimedia）在教學中的運用，老師必須要學會使用多媒體豐富課堂內容，學會用電腦制作PPT。

6.It is better to have a secure job with a low pay than to take a job wit a high pay but is easy to lose.選擇工資高但是可能會丟失的工作：（1）有失業風險但是工資高的工作能夠提高一個人的工作能力，因為處在可能失業的壓力下就必須非常努力的去完善自己，而穩定的工作容易消磨（sap）人們的進取心，變成混日子（idle）；（2）有失業風險但是工資高的工作可以提高生活水平（living standard），因為可以享受到更好的商品（commodities）和服務（service），即使失業了，也有足夠的資金能維持一段時間；（3）有失業風險但是工資高的工作給人更強的成就感（a sense of achievement），因為這樣的工作往往更加具有挑戰性，而穩定的工作基本都是重復性的勞動，容易讓人厭倦。

7.In twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisure life.同意：（1）技術的發展使得人們的休閑方式更加多樣化了（diverse），技術的進步是日新月異的（daily and monthly increasing），20年內會有巨大的飛躍（giant leap），讓人們能得到更好的放松（refresh）；（2）人們的觀念在20年內也會有所改變，人們越來越意識到（be conscious of）休閑的重要性，不會把大量的時間都放在工作上，不愿意成為工作機器（working machine）；（3）生活水平的提高使得人們更加能夠去享受休閑的生活，20年內，社會福利

（social welfare）會越來越完善，人們滿足基本生活需求所需要的金錢越來越少，有足夠的資金去享受更加休閑的生活。

8.Your job has greater happiness than your social life.偏向不同意：讓步段承認工作還是灰常重要滴，工作可以確保生活品質咩，因為工作好收入才高，才能支付得起一些商品和服務的說；但是social life給我們帶來的快樂時更多的：（1）social life可以使人們得到放松（refresh），緩解工作中的壓力（alleviate pressure），如果只有工作沒有social life就和工作機器一樣，人生就非常的單調（monotonous）；（2）social life對于工作會有促進作用，在人們進行social life的同時往往也在拓展社交網絡（social network），可以認識一些對于工作有幫助的人。

9.The effective leader should tries to make others feel they have been part of a decision.同意：（1）增強領導的領導力（leadership），因為讓團隊成員參與到決策中會增進領導和團隊成員之間的距離，讓交流會變得更加的順暢，互動（interaction）會更好，下屬（subordinate）也更加容易跟從；（2）提高團隊成員的工作表現（work performance），因為讓團隊成員參與決策是對他們的一種認可，這是一種非常好的激勵機制（incentive system）；（3）能減少團隊的失誤，因為不同的成員有不同的想法，彼此可以互補，想的比較全面（comprehensive），減少犯錯的可能。

10.In 20 years from now on，students will not use printed books any more.不同意：（1）printed books對學生的身體傷害比較小，在20年內，電子書的技術沒有辦法發展到消除輻射（radiation）的地步，printed books不會有輻射，比如對學生眼睛會比較好；（2）printed books成本更小，電子書的使用往往依賴于高科技設備，像IPAD，Smart Phone之類的，在未來的20年內，這些設備不會普及到所有學生都能負擔得起（affordable），所以不用紙質書不太現實

（practical）；（3）使用電子書有很多時候會讓學生分心（distract），因為學生自控能力不太強（self-discipline）的能力不強，這一點20年以前和以后都是一樣的，學生會利用看電子書的設備打游戲，上網什么的。

11.Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age

偏向不同意：讓步段承認年長的朋友在很多方面給出的建議是非常有用的，他們的經歷比年齡相仿的人要多，很多問題的解決時需要經驗的；但這并不意味著年齡相仿的朋友給出的建議不珍貴，在很多時候，年齡相仿的朋友能給出更有價值的建議（1）年齡相仿的朋友的建議更加實際（practical），因為年齡相仿的朋友更了解我們，而且經歷背景也比較相似；（2）年齡相仿的朋友給出的建議更容易被接受和采納（adopt），因為年齡相仿的朋友之間沒有什么代溝，相處交流的時間也更多，提出的建議影響力更大。

12.The telephone has greater influence on people’

s lives than television has.同意：（1）電話的使用頻率（frequency）比電視更多，人是社會動物（social animal），一個人可以一個月不看電視，但是不能一天不聯系他人；（2）電話比電視更加多功能（multifunction），現在的電話，特別是智能電話（smart phones）不僅包含了電視看的功能，還有很多其他電視沒有的功能，像是上網，玩游戲什么的；

（3）電話比電視更能滿足人們，特別是年輕人DIY的需求，比較彰顯個性，因為可以根據自我的喜好進行裝飾（decorate）。

13.The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individuals.偏向不同意：讓步段承認有些環境問題個人確實很難搞定，因為有些環境問題的解決需要投入大量的資金，比如治理一條被污染的河流（contaminated river），有的問題的解決需要有影響力，比如全球變暖，需要政府出面的；但是得出上述結論并不意味著所有的環境問題對于個人來說都太復雜了，個人還是可以在環境問題上采取措施發揮作用的：（1）個人的努力能夠從根源上解決很多環境問題（address many environmental issues from the root），因為很多環境問題就是由于個人的生活方式不當造成的，而且雖然個人的努力很微小，但是由于每個人都有社交網絡（social network），微小的努力可以積累(accumulate)并且傳遞，產生的作用就很大（make a great difference。（2）個人可以影響到更有實力的政府和企業，政府是公民的代表（on behalf of），如果公民都愿意為環保做些事，政府就不能違背公民的意志；企業必須要迎合（cater to）消費者，當企業的行為不環保或者生產了不環保的東西就得不到消費者的認可和支持。

14.Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language,science and history.同意：（1）可以給孩子的生活增添很多的樂趣（enjoyment），因為學習藝術和音樂讓學生在閑暇時多了打發時間（fill time）的方式，可以去聽聽音樂會，去看看藝術展之類的；（2）讓學生找到了成功的其他可能性，因為有的孩子不是太擅長學術型課程，但是在藝術和音樂上面比較有天賦（talented），學校沒有這樣的課程孩子接觸不到天賦可能就被埋沒了；（3）開發孩子的智力

（exploit intelligence），因為學生在學習音樂和藝術的時候使用的是平時用不到的另外一個大腦半球（brain hemisphere），能夠活躍大腦（activate brain）。

15.Movies and television programs should present stories in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.偏向不同意：讓步段承認給小孩子看的要這樣呈現，避免誤導孩子，因為小孩子還不成熟，無法明辨是非（tell the virtue from the evil），如果不這么呈現，孩子發現壞人做了壞事也沒有獲得懲罰可能也會去做壞事；但是這并不意味著給成年人看的電影和節目也要這樣呈現：（1）削弱了電影和電視的可看性，因為看到了開頭就知道了結尾，就會顯得很無趣（monotonous），而且把本來很復雜的人性就簡化（simplify）為好人和壞人顯得很弱智；（2）這樣呈現的電影不夠震撼人心（stunning），印象也不深（impressive），莎士比亞說悲劇是把人性中最美好的東西撕裂給人看，所以讓人記憶深刻的往往都是悲劇居多。

16.Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their ownmistakes.同意：（１）能夠幫助孩子避免再犯類似的錯誤，為下次的成功奠定基礎

（lay foundation for）。人們都需要在錯誤中吸取經驗和教訓，所以錯誤其實是不可避免的（inevitable），孩子犯了錯誤并且吸取了經驗，印象深刻，能取得進步；（２）培養（cultivate）孩子的面對挫折（frustration）的良好的心態，孩子在以后的學習和工作中一定會犯錯的，家長允許孩子犯錯會讓孩子在面對錯誤的時候不會去逃避（escape），而是以比較積極的心態去面對；（３）有利于家長和孩子之間的親子關系（family bond），如果父母不允許孩子犯錯，孩子一旦犯了錯就會非常的緊張和害怕，會采取隱瞞甚至撒謊的方式，這樣不利于父母和孩子的關系。

17.Professional athletes, such as football and basketball players, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid.不同意：（１）高工資是對他們的艱苦訓練（extraordinary tough training）的一種回報（reward），運動員都是從很小的時候就開始訓練了，每天的訓練量都是比較大的，而且訓練是很枯燥（monotonous）的，在訓練中還有可能受傷；（２）是對運動員短暫職業生涯的彌補（compensation），運動員由于生理條件的限制，無法一輩子從事這項運動，在２０－３０歲期間都要退役，之后需要金錢來維持生計的（sustain themselves）；（３）是市場經濟的（market economy）的結果，在現在的市場機制下，價值由需求決定，既然很多人喜歡看運動，喜歡某個運動員，愿意花錢去看比賽，這就是值得的。

18.If you own a lot of money, would you prefer to spend money on something that lasts a long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry, than on a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation.選擇投資維持時間長的：（1）持續時間長的東西帶來的快樂會更加持久，因為每次看到都會覺得比較開心，就像珠寶可以在很長時間讓女生看到就高興，而短期的愉悅的東東過去一般就沒有了，會隨著記憶淡忘的（fade）；（2）投資持

續時間長的東西用處比較大，因為在這方便進行投資以后也許會升值

（appreciate），而且當需要金錢的時候，這些東西可以去賣掉解決問題的；（3）持續時間長的東西更加具有紀念意義（memorable），可以傳給（pass on)子孫后代的（offspring）。

19.Patience is usually not a good thing and we need to take action at once.偏向不同意：讓步段承認在緊急情況（emergency）需要立即采取行動，因為在這樣的情況下，當機立斷可以避免損失，例如遇到有人心臟病（heart attack）發作的時候；但是在很多的時候還是有耐心會比較好，（1）耐心可以避免一些錯誤的行為或者決定，人們有的時候在采取行動或者作出決定的時候是不夠理智的（not rational），可能是出于沖動之類的（impulse），不立刻做決定可以理智分析，采取比較有利的行動；（2）有耐心在很多時候能帶來更好的時機（timing），因為有更多的時間去洞察（have an insight into），并且獲得更多的信息做好充分的準備（well-prepared），例如在商業談判中。

20.Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place.不同意：（1）人類的好奇心（curiosity）會促使（motivate）人們不斷去探索和發現，因為人類的本能（instinct）就是對未知的東西好奇，了解了一個東西以后，會有更多期望了解的東西出現；（2）人類先進的科技水平（advanced technology）使得現在人類科技發現的平臺（platform）比以前更加的廣闊，在現有的基礎上稍加改變可能就會帶來無數可能，產生巨大變化（make a difference）；（3）有很多東西存在，但是人類目前還沒有發現，因為認知能力（cognitive ability）或者科技發展的限制，當未來人類發現的時候，這些對人類的產生的影響可能是超乎想象的（beyond imagination）。

21.the car had has a greater effect on society than the airplane has

汽車對社會的影響更大：（1）汽車比飛機更加實用（practical）和靈活（flexible），飛機一般只有長途旅行才會用上，但是汽車短途的，甚至從家到公司都能用上，而且汽車想開的時候隨時都可以開，沒有什么時間，地點的限制；（2）汽車比飛機更加的流行（prevail），很多人一年坐飛機的次數比較有限，而且飛機也比較貴，汽車更加的便宜（affordable），使用的人更多；（3）汽車提供了人們一個緊密感情（strengthen the emotional bond）的很好的場所，在汽車開車的時候，人們可以一家人或者朋友之間相互交流，但是在飛機上一般都是要保持安靜的，個人基本都是各自干各自的說。

第二篇：托福 TPO31獨立寫作

托福 TPO31獨立寫作題目

Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福 TPO31 獨立寫作范文 ：

In modern society, there is no denying that our paces speed up.A small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment;however, in my view, it is not the case.As a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to become satisfied much more easily.First illustration which can demonstrate my opinion can be the trail of technological development.In the past five decades, millions of new inventions had appeared, entering our daily life, making it much more convenient.To name a good example, in 1896,Benz assembled the first three-wheel car in the world.Though it brought accidents and mortality to the world, we cannot deny the enjoyment of ferocious speed brought by cars, which made our jaunt convenient.We can simply drop by a old friend 100 miles, a distance taking at least half day before, away in one hour.Another good instance is the invention of smart phone.in 1972, Martin, the chief engineer in Moto devised the first portable telephone.Then, this innovation revolutionized out life.Just simply imagine what our life looked like without cell phones: people could not keep contact with their friends and exigent messages might be blocked.Then in 2007, Steve Jobs brought iPhone with Facetime to the world.The most significant aspect of Facetime is that this app allows us to communicate with actual image, not just voices.Then, how can we state that modern society steals the sense of fraternity among people? Second demonstration which can help me develop my view that a rapidly changing society makes people more satisfied is the use of new energy resources.We may still remember the Great Smog, one of the gravest air pollution accidents in our history due to the heavily gathered inversion layer of sulfur dioxide originated with burning of coal in 1950s, London.People died of respiratory diseases after inhalation of poisonous air.How can they live happily in a world brimmed with pollutions? But nowadays, we have developed new energy resources to tackle this problem such as hydropower and wind power.To name an example, in 2007, nuclear power plants generate 14% of the total electricity of the US, thus saving tons of coals and reducing the level of inhalable particles.Recently, governments and organizations have taken measures to support researches of renewable resources and to find substitutes for fossil fuels.Natural reserves and sanctuaries are established, places of interest and spots are refurbished, and factories and manufacturers with pestilent exhaust are shut down.People therefore are provided with much more opportunities to relax by enjoying the beauty of nature.To draw a conclusion, in a world that is rapidly changing, we are offered a variety of brand-new experiences and highly evolved products, which make life much easier than before.We are in a world filled with convenience brought by high technologies that develop so fast.Then, how can we blame on the changing world while enjoying happiness and satisfactions originated from them?

第三篇：托福獨立寫作作文修改

獨立5-現象證明P21 2010.10.31NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.Education is the foundation of a country.People today have a stronger concept（搭配不當，改為sense）of being educated than in the past.I agree with the statement that people gain an easier access to all kinds of educations at current times.Firstly, there are much more schools available today than in the past.No matter where you live, in big cities or in the countryside, the local government spends a large amount of money on the constructions of various types of schools, such as primary schools, middle schools, high schools and even schools for adults.More and more universities and colleges have been built to ensure higher education for top students.If you want to study in schools, you will always find a proper one to attend.Secondly, the teaching approach diversifies（there are diversified teaching approaches）.Except for（In addition to包括在內）blackboard and chalks, many advanced teaching devices are being used today in most schools, including computers, multi-media and some other instruments.Moreover, labs and libraries have also come into use for students to study deeper and wider(who want to make a deeper and wider study on the fields they are interested in).What is more, the teachers' teaching levels are greatly improved by communicating with other educators from all over the world.The technology becomes more developed than in the past, so it is easier now to study.Thirdly, people have equal rights to receive education.As we all know, people in the past were in terrible discrimination because of their sex and race(many people such as women and the black people were denied the right to education because they were discriminated against in the society because of their sex and race.兩句合起來)For example, women and black people were used to be considered as people in lower classes or even slaves and weren't allowed to go to school.However, they have equal rights to study in schools nowadays.（要回到主題，和更容易接受教育要直接聯系起來，所以再加一句）Obviously, these people surly have easier access to education.To sum up, almost everyone today has equal rights to go to all kinds of schools with diversified teaching approaches.So people do have an easier way to receive education now than in past times.The reasons above firmly support my opinion(最后一句話不夠有力，可以將三點簡明扼要的用一句話概括).(Word Count: 294)獨立8-包含因果關系P15 2010.3.20NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government.With the development of the society, people can do more things by themselves nowadays（于什么時候比較？）than in the past.But I disagree with the statement that people can solve many important problems, therefore the government does not need to help them（therefore they need not depend on the government for any support）.There(are)three reasons as follows:

Firstly, People today still cannot solve many important problems by themselves in fact in terms of education, unemployment, war, starvation, poverty and so on.These are international problems all over the world, so a single person or even a group of people may not have the abilities to solve(be capable of solving)them.For example, if a man wants to stop a war between two countries, even he is powerful or wealthy, he(he, however wealthy and powerful,)cannot prevent them from fighting with each other without the help of others.Secondly, people today need more help from the government.As the life standards are getting higher, people have more requirements than before.They ask for all kinds of utilities for entertainment or exercise in public places.They need various insurance to make their lives more comfortable.They also require more schools and hospitals to take care of the young people and patients(the sick).Thirdly, whether people today can solve many problems or not has nothing to do with whether they need the government's help.It is the responsibility of the government to help people.The government must give people help no matter how powerful they are.In a word, the statement that people today do not need help from the government because they can solve many important problems is wrong.The reasons above can firmly support my idea.(260w)

獨立1-包含should, important, necessary的簡單話題

P75 2009.5.30 Younger school children(aged between five and ten)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.In order to broaden the horizon of younger school children, it is suggested that they should study art and music as well as other common courses.I agree with it because of the following reasons.First of all, art and music can help students to relax.Campus life is stressful even for younger children who aged between five and ten, with all kinds of homework and assignments.However, by having music and art classes, students can get a much-needed escape from the heavy work.It can help them to relax their mind and study more efficiently in other classes.Second, music and art classes help improve students' interpersonal relationships.Students will meet together to talk about a same topic if they have common interests.For example, students attending art classes can talk about the masterpiece or life story of a famous painter.Students having music classes will enjoy the beautiful melody or sing songs together.By communicating with each other, they will build a strong friendship and learn how to behave in various situations.Third, music and art classes provide students with plenty of information about great artists and their works.By learning knowledge in artistic fields students can acquire different cultures from different countries.The artists and musicians describe what they see or hear in their works, showing feelings meanwhile, which bring the students the atmosphere at that time.To sum up, art and music classes should be taken by younger school students to broaden their horizon.(248w)

獨立2-包含比較(better, prefer)的簡單話題

P24 2010.10.9NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside.No matter where people live, in big cities or in the countryside, they must take care of their family members.Basically I prefer the former one.Living in big cities has more advantages than living in the countryside.Firstly, for old people, living in big cities can be convenient.There are a large number of hospitals which are available to all kinds of diseases.When the old people catch a cold, have a fever or even heart attack, they could be taken to the best hospital nearby and received treat in time and recover as soon as possible.But in the countryside, situations in hospitals are obviously terrible.Secondly, children should receive good education, so living in big cities is a wise choice.Schools in big cities which get finance support from(the)government provide sufficient teaching facilities for the students in order that the students can study more easily and do more experiments.Moreover, the teaching levels of the teachers in big cities are higher on average than that of the teachers in the countryside.Admittedly, Living in big cities may have a few downsides.For example, the air may be not as fresh as it in the countryside and the noise may make people crazy sometimes.However,(the)government is taking measures to prevent the pollutions and people are also becoming aware of the importance of environmental protection.It is sure that the problems can be solved in the future.In a word, people can take care of their family members much better when they live in big cities than in the countryside, because advanced society welfares are everywhere in big cities.（Word Count: 272）

獨立7-包含絕對詞（never, always, only ,no longer,最高級等）.P92 2007.8.4 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Printed books will no longer exist.With the development of technology, digital books are increasingly coming into use while printed book are less used in our lives.It has been argued that printed books will no longer exist in the future.I disagree(with this opinion)although the statement has a grain of truth.First of all, admittedly, digital books have some advantages over printed books.First, it is cheaper to download a digital version from the internet than to buy a hardcover printed book.You may download Harry Potter for only half the price of the paper version.Second, the digital book is very convenient for us to carry because it is much lighter than the printed book.We can download thousands of articles into our mp4 or electronic books to read them everywhere instead of carrying several heavy books.However, to say that printed books will disappear from our lives in the future is unacceptable.First, hardcover printed books are worth collecting.They are usually very valuable with their beautiful covers and plentiful contents.Second, the printed books made by(of)papers are good for people's eyes.If we stare at a digital book all the time, our eyes will be tired or even hurt.Reading for a long period may do enormous harms to people's health, especially to children.Third, printed books are of great importance in some special ceremonies.They are usually the symbols of holy things.It is ridiculous for a minister to read with a digital book in a church.To sum up, although the digital books are more and more useful, it is sure that printed books will exist forever.(267)

第四篇：托福獨立寫作題型分析[推薦]

呂欣澤：淺談托福獨立寫作題型及策略

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摘要：從題型上來講，托福獨立寫作分為絕對型、對比型和隱藏all型。針對不同的題型，我們對癥下藥，就會擁有手到擒來的寫作拓展方法，這樣，在緊張的考場上看到相應的題型，我們就可以像給老朋友打招呼一樣輕松自然了。

(一)絕對型

絕對型的題型一般是題目中含有最高級和絕對化的頻率詞的題，那么，針對這種類型的題目，我們又哪些策略呢?我給大家推薦的是兩種態度，四種方法。當然，這兩種態度就是“同意”和“不同意”，當同意的時候，我們可以采用“一邊倒”的策略，說A好處1，A好處2和A好處3，每個好處各成一個主體段，這樣文章就成型了;在同一的態度下，第二種方法就是若轉折，即前兩個主體段可以分別闡述A好處1和A好處2，第三個主體段可以進行一個弱弱的轉折，稍微說一下B也好，這樣，既湊了字數，也向考官展現了自己全面的思維;在“不同意”的態度下，我們也可以按照“A好——A有缺陷——B也好”的結構謀篇布局;也可以按照“A好——B好——C也好的結構”進行展開。

(二)對比型

對比型的題目即為事物之間進行比較。針對這類題型，共有兩種態度，三類寫法。在“同意”的態度下，我們可以采用A1>B1，A2>B2，A3>B3的寫法進行寫作，即把兩個不同的事物統一在三個相同的維度下進行比較;在“不同意”的態度下，我們有兩種寫法，我們依舊可以按照“A好——A有缺陷——B也好”的結構謀篇布局;也可以按照“A好——B好——C也好的結構”進行展開。

(三)隱藏all型

隱藏all型實質上就是含蓄的絕對型，它在寫法上和絕對型有異曲同工之處，卻也忽悠區別。在這種提醒下，我想推薦兩種寫法，首先是“同意”的太對下，我們依舊可以繼續采用“A好處1，A好處2和A好處3”的一邊倒寫法進行展開，如果是在“不同意”的態度下，我們可以采用“A有好處——A也有不好的地方”的邏輯順序進行展開，當然，也可以采用分類討論的寫法，其實分類討論的寫法是一種變了形的“讓步——轉折”，在邏輯上遵循的是一樣的規律和道理。

以上談了這么多理論上的話，但是還是需要同學們先分析歸納題型，然后按照不同的題型不同的方法進行練習，對癥下藥確實可以在考場上為我們節省大量寶貴的時間，加油哦!

第五篇：托福獨立寫作評分標準--英文版

托福獨立寫作評分標準

5分

? Effectively addresses the topic and task ? Well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and or details ? Displays unity, progression, and coherence ? Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors 4分

? Addresses the topic and task well, though some points may not be fully elaborated ? Generally well organized and well developed, using appropriate and sufficient explorations, exemplifications, and or details

? Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression, or unclear connections

? Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety and range of vocabulary, though it will probably have occasional noticeable minor errors in structure, word form, or use of idiomatic language that do not interfere with meaning

3分

? Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and or details ? Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured

? May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning

? May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary

2分

? Limited development in response to the topic and task ? Inadequate organization or connection of ideas ? Inappropriate or insufficient exemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the task

? A noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms ? An accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage 1分

? Serious disorganization or underdevelopment ? Little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics, or questionable responsiveness to the task ? Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage