第一篇：2014年上海中考英語改革解析首字母

2014年上海中考英語改革解析——首字母

★字母SECTION 解題秘籍

▲答題步驟：

– 閱讀全文（粗讀和細讀）

– 判斷所缺單詞詞性

– 填出使文章完整通順的單詞

– 檢查所填單詞的數和時態

▲解題重點：

– 詞性（尤其是長句）；

– 上下文；

– 固定搭配

– 積累高頻詞匯；復查語法

▲注意事項： 會判斷詞性，具備分析句子的結構和成分能力 2 關注細節（時態，語態，人稱，名詞單復數，形容詞副詞的級）

3一般全文中5-6個單詞相對比較簡單，可順利填出 要學會猜測單詞，不留空格 不要在一時拿不定主意的詞上糾纏

▲解題難點：

考綱詞匯生僻或冷門詞匯；

一詞多義的詞；

實戰秘籍揭示：

1.關注特征題目

I.具特征：L_____, H_____, S______, B______,A____........，……....或T___......,…...(前后半句有反意的信息)果斷填寫

（13普陀）It was quite difficult, and I had to study very hard.L 88 , I got a good mark in the exam in the end.(13浦東一模)H __90__ , Ross Anderson, a computer security engineer at the University of Cambridge, thinks the i_ _91__ could put Microsoft in big trouble.(13浦東二模)It’s not easy for us to forgive(原諒)someone who has ever hurt you or made you disappointed.H 86 , several new studies say that it could be good for your health.(11上海)B____96____, you need to make up a story.（13長寧）A___87___ he had not seen it for more than 20 years, he recognized it immediately.（13奉賢）A____89____ the Internet has made our world better in many ways, in some ways it can be a bad influence.II.具特征much/even______ … than… 加形容詞比較級

（13奉賢）The Internet makes it much e____86____ for people to search for information.（13松江）“Goods online are often much c _ 88_.It also saves me a lot of time.(13楊浦)Some pop groups find that m 86 people listen to their songs on their mobile phones than they do on CDs.So many people have mobile phones that sometimes you don’t know when your phone rings.（13楊浦二模）When there is only one parent, of course the responsibilities of looking after the children are much h____89____ for him or her.III.具特征w______ doing i______ of doing(13崇明)You will be able to review your teacher’s lecture w___92___ even getting online again.（崇明二模）One family in the UK went “back in time” to see what life was like w 96 having all the modern inventions.IV.具特征w______ A or B e______ A or B（中考模擬）In this way, they could find out w_______ the stranger was a friend or an enemy.（13閘北二模）In all, 50% of Wayview students get to school in a vehicle, e 88 the bus or a car.V.關注轉折詞 in fact, but, however 一般前后意思相反

（崇明二模）“Life is speeding up.Everyone is becoming unwell.” This may sound like something someone would say t 92.But in fact, an unknown person who lived in Rome in AD 53 wrote it.VI.具顛覆整句句意的詞：h____, s_____, r_____(中考模擬)80% British people who take part in the survey feel that their neighbours h_____ pay attention to others’ feelings.（12徐匯）“I don’t see what’s so interesting about these hutongs.The streets are too narrow---I could h___91___ drive my car down them.(12靜安)At home, girls learned washing, cooking, dancing, and the basics of taking care of a household.Poor children s 91 attended school.（13虹口二模）I like driving, just out of pleasure.It’s lucky that I s________ drive without a passenger.So I can earn three or four thousand yuan a month easily.VII.具修飾整句子的副詞: r_____, e_____(中考模擬)But have all these developments r 93 improved the quality of our lives?(12浦東)Nobody knows e 88 how many Hutongs there are in nowadays Beijing.2.注意平行結構

A and B 特點 1詞性相同 II意思相近or 相反

變式：逗號, or, but, better than, rather than, from A to B（13普陀）I got on the plane with ten other passengers.We took off from the runway and c 90 higher and higher.（13奉賢）But remember to use the Internet p____92____ and wisely.（13崇明）In an online classroom your teacher’s lecture is written rather than s___88_____.(12上海)Cycling with a large guided group is better than r____92 ____ alone.(12 黃浦)Later, I knew an exam was a kind of competition.In competitions, there are always w 90 and losers.（13浦東一模）Microsoft is developing a new software that could accurately guess your name, your age, your s 87 and possibly even your location.（11楊浦）“Don’t throw out your o 93 running shoes.They are better than modern ones,” the study suggests.（13浦東二模）They also have fewer headaches, l 90 blood pressure(血壓), and fewer problems on sleeping.(12寶山)It has one hundred and three levels and six thousand five hundred windows.Visitors can ride in one of seventy-three elevators that take them from the b__87__ to very near the top of the building.Some of these elevators are very fast, reaching the eightieth floor in only forty-five seconds.3．合理判斷詞性(動詞注意時態，名詞注意單復數)★名詞

（12浦東）But if we connected all the Hutongs together, their total l 89 would even be longerthan the famous Great Wall, which is about 4,000 miles.（13靜安二模）You can even look on the Internet at sites such as E-bay.Or you can have an e 92 of things you have for something else that you would like to have.★形容詞

（13普陀）My parents visited space last year, but I was too y 86 to go with them.I admit that for a few seconds I felt a little n 91 when I sat in the space shuttle.（12靜安）In the Renaissance Period(文藝復興時期)(1500-1650), people became interested in higher education.They wanted to learn the a 86 languages such as Greek and Latin – languages that were used in the old times, and study mathematics, science, and so on.Many universities were set up during the 16th century.(11靜安)Don’t feel worried.It’s not your fault（過錯）!Being bullied can make you feel very l 93___ and angry, but you are not alone.（13閔行二模）In the Northeast and Middle West, it is very hot at some times and very cold at other times.People in these states have more heart trouble because of the c____86____ weather in February or March.（13閔行二模）Low air pressure(壓力)may make people f____91____.People leave more bags on buses and in shops on low air pressure days.(12徐匯)“It’s really s___87___---we’re in the middle of one of the biggest cities in the world, but in these hutongs it feels as if we are in a village in the countryside.★動詞原形OR一.過

（13松江一模）“Middle school students should pay more attention to their study.Searching for things w 92 their time.”

（13閘北一模）Many online stores o 87 abig discount(打折)and free delivery service.(13浦東二模)On the other hand, studies p 87 that something like anger can change you（12靜安二模）University education was a privilege(特權)of the rich.Girls were not allowed to attend and poor people could not a 87 to go.★動詞過去分詞（被動語態）特征：be動詞+V(P.P)+(by)（13松江二模）Beyond supermarkets, barcodes are n 89 everywhere: for renting cars, for luggage checks on a plane, for parcels you send;（13閔行二模）Are you feeling sad, tired, unhappy or hard to remember things today? If you have one of the above feelings, it may be c____92____ by weather because weather influences people’s health, intelligence and feelings.（12黃浦二模）In Africa, when an antelope(羚羊)wakes up every morning, the first thing it thinks about is, “I must be able to run faster than the fastest lion, or I will be k 86.”（12靜安二模）He might study at different universities and since(既然)the teaching was all d 88 inLatin, it didn’t matter(v.= be important)which country he studied in.（13長寧二模）In many countries, oral storytelling is still important, but in most countries now, stories are written down and p 88 in books.★副詞

（13長寧）The package consisted of a long, narrow box, c___86___wrapped(包裝)in brown paper.（13閘北）Young students are e 91 attracted by advertisements on the Internet and buy things they don’t need.★疑問詞

（13閘北）“I like eating duck neck very much and I often buy it on Taobao from shops in Wuhan.It’s much more delicious than w 90 our local stores sell.”

（13楊浦）Now you can have a different sound for every person you know.Your address book is used to find out w 91 is calling.（12松江）Now speaking the foreign language is w 87 most people want.4.注意固定搭配

pay a_____ to 關注 f_______ on an interesting person 關注一個有趣的人

a_____ wine to the recipe 把紅酒加入菜譜

by h______用手寫 be on s_____ 大甩賣 to my s_______ 讓我吃驚的是

be so d_____ from 與…如此不同 be the s______ as 與…相同

It o us good opportunities to meet people from other countries, learn about their c_____ and c_______.它給我們提供和其他國家人見面，學習他們的文化和習俗的好機會

in p_____ 在公眾場合 financially i________ 經濟獨立

have no i______ in following fashion 對追逐時尚不感興趣—> show great i_____ in…

be l_____ / c_____ to … 連接到。。B____,= In a_____, 除此之外 b_____ A and B 在兩者之間 l______ traffic 交通通暢

be n_____ about 對。。緊張 he feels so f______ 感到如此驚恐

be p_____ with 對。。耐心 be c_____ with 對。。小心（13楊浦）

make their teachers feel w_______ 使他們的老師感到擔憂

think about c_____ for help 想到求助他人

be more l______ to do 更有可能做 keep his p______ 信守諾言

a_____ the world= t_______ the world 整個世界

share many life e_________ 分享很多生活經歷

get into the h______ 養成習慣 sth.you are f______ with 你所熟悉的。。

do r______ on the Internet 在網上做調查 be f______ for 以… 而著名

be f_____ of =be k_____ on喜愛 be a_____ with sb.對… 生氣 be m____ up of 由…組成

be l_____ in/on 坐落于… be p____/s______ with 對…滿意

have a s _ of public manners 有公共道德的意識 do something in e_______ 做些事作為交換

to my s_______ 讓我感到驚奇的是

travel for s_______ 觀光旅行

search for the a_____/k______ to the mysteries of space 尋找太空秘密的答案

第二篇：中考首字母填詞訓練

A

Robot Vogel is a p officer in New York.One Morning, he was drinking coffee in a restaurant.Suddenly a man ran in and shouted, “Officer!A car is going down the Officer Vogel ran out of the restaurant and saw a car going at about 25 miles an hour.He jumped intoit.When he was behind it, he turned on his red light and siren(警笛of the road and stopped.Officer Vogel got out of his police car and looked inside.The driver was a littleseat was his littlechildren were crying.”I want my mommy!“ Rocco cried.”But she can't get here, I have the car.“ Then he had an idea ”Just a minute,“ he told Officer Vogel.”I can drive.I will go to get her.“ ”No!“ Officer Vogel said.“You stay with me.”

Officer Vogel drove Rocco and his sister to the police station.Then he called theirfrom thehis father was at work and his mother was sleeping.about Rocco, and a lot of reporters went to his house.One reporter asked Rocco, “What do you want to be when you grow up?” Rocco smiled “I want to be a truck driver,” he said.B

One day a man put an ad in most of the newspapers in England.He said that he himself was a young man of m.He’d like toa girl to be his wife, and the girl must be like the one in books wby Somerest Maugham.This ad was at once k by thousands of parents and young girls.Parents went to shops to look for the books written by Maugham.They bought those books for their daughters as p.Girls tried to get those books to read.They wanted to know what kind of girl the rich and wise young man wfor.Before long all the books written by Maugham were sout and the writer was known all over the country.Who was the rich man? It was Somerest Maugham who put an ad in the newspapers!The ad s, too!

C

up my first job as a teacher.The students in my class were about sixteen or seventeen years old, only several years than me.In fact, some of them looked older and seemed more like grownups.And some of them even didn’t listen to me c___3__ in class.The classroom was on the second floor and it was directly above the street.One day, I was writing on the blackboard w____4____ I heard a sudden change in the noise behind me.There was a man standing in the room with half an apple in his hand.He lookeda____5____

“Who threw this？”he shouted, looking around the class.“I beg your pardon？”I said.“s___6_____ threw this apple out of the window.” he said,“It landed on my car.”

“Who threw an apple out of the window？”I shouted to the class.There was no a_____7___.“I want the one who threw this.” said the man, “I will be waiting outside for you.”And then he left, slamming(摔)the door.There was silence and I went on w____8____the lesson.At the end of every lesson, as the bell rang, usually the class were all gone before it finished r___9___, leaving me saying “That's all for today, ”to an empty room.This time, when the bell went for the end of the lesson, no one m___10____.“That's all for today,”I said, “You go first, sir.”said one of the boys.It made a nice change, being first out.D

Life is not always.So you should learn to enjoy your life.Try to stay and longer.Here are some ways to help you live your life more happily.Write down all the good things.These can make you happier.And as for the bad thinking of them.Do not try to with others.They might have a bigger house or a more in your life.Your life may be very busy，you don’t have to do what o7ask you to do each time.Remember to tell your family and friends that you love them.Take activities.You can go hiking in the mountains to breathair.It can make you relaxed.You can also go to the beach to enjoy beach volleyball.Learn new things.There’s always s__10___ new to learn.Read a book or learn on a computer, they can open your mind to the world.Give a helping hand to others.It is also helpful for yourselves and others.You make them happier, and you will be the happiest of all.E

Everybody has one of those days when everything goes wrong.This is what h__1__ to Harry.One morning, he got up very late because his clock stopped.He t__2__ to shave(刮臉)quickly and cut himself.When he got dressed, he got blood all over his shirt,so he had to find a__3_ one.The only other shirt that was clean n_4__ ironing(熨).While he was ironing it, there was a knock at the door.It was the man to collect money for water.After he paid the water b_5__ and showed the man out, he found the iron had burnt a hole in his shirt.So he had to wear the one with the blood on it after all.By this time it was very late, so he t_6__ he couldn’t go to work by bus.He c_7__ for a taxi to take him to work.In another part of the town, a man had killed a woman with a knife and was s_8__ to run away in a taxi.When Harry’s taxi stopped outside his office, a policeman happened to be s_9__ there.He saw the blood on Harry’s shirt, and took him to the police station.He was k__10_ till 3 o’clock p.m.before the police found out that he was not the man they wanted.When he finally arrived at the office at about 4 p.m., his boss took a look at him and told him to find another job.KEYS

A1.police2.driving3.slowly4.followed5.side

6.back7.Both8.key9.while10.heard

B1.millions2.knowledge3.choose4.written5.known

6.presents7.wished8.sold9.saved10.famous

C1.took2.younger3.carefully4.when5.angrily

6.someone7.answer8.with9.ringing10.moved

D1.perfect2.healthier3.keep4.compare5.compare

6.cares7.parts8.others9.fresh10.something

E1.happened2.tried3.another4.needed5.bill

6.thought7.called8.seen9.standing10.kept

第三篇：上海中考英語作文

上海中考英語作文學習資料

一.評分標準

上海中考英語作文總分為20分，其中內容分8分、語言分8分、組織結構分4分。

以下為上海中考英語作文官方評分標準：

1.內容分8分。內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚完整。

2.語言分8分。學生需用語規范，表達準確，無或少見語法錯誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句型使用恰當。首先是字數，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3.組織結構分4分，也就是我們常說的文采分。根據學生使用復雜句型/單詞和諺語/俗語的情況來加分。

二.注意點：

每少5個詞扣0.5分，拼寫錯誤每處扣0.5分，標點，大小寫錯誤每2處扣0.5分

3內容和語言表達總分達15分及以上，得2~3分

內容和語言總分13~14分，如確有好句型或表達用語，可酌情給1~2分

通篇句型，句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，也不給分 開頭句+給的幾個參考點+結尾句+亮點。

先劃檔次：A檔 18~15分

B檔 14.5~12分

C檔 11.5~8分

D檔 3.5~0分 然后再仔細批閱看有否語法錯誤,最后給出總分。

三.學生常出現的問題：

1.內容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達能力不強，總是用一些不合適的句子內容來表達，所以可能讓老師覺得理由或是內容太假，當然也就得不了高分。

2.議論過多，描寫不足。大多數情況下，我們把議論當成的作文的重點，所以常常會跑題。應當多描述提示的內容或加以想像，不能只翻譯了事。

3.總是使用同一個主語寫句子，重復太多。盡量使用不同的主語來表達，比如：I must learn English well.就可以換成：It is important for me to learn English well.4.結構散漫，想哪兒寫哪兒，亂七八糟。應該使用總分或總分總的結構。

5.都是簡單句，缺少復合句。多用狀語從句，賓語從句，定語從句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目標初二下英語同步輔導

（一）初中二年級下un...初中二年級下Un...可以用用被動語態。

6.連詞的使用較少，句子之間的連接很生硬?？梢约尤胍恍罕热? to my surprise(讓我驚 訝的是), what’s more（而且，還有）等，讓上文與下文銜接更緊密。意思也能更流暢地表達。

四． 中考寫作高頻使用詞組、句法

1.作文開頭的有用句

As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies!In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.2、中間分層部分的有用結構:

分正反兩面論述:On one hand, On the other hand 分兩點：For one thing, For another，分三點：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least

3、結尾部分

All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的說，簡單的說 Last but not least

組織語言 發表觀點的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not，表示遞進的 In addition Furthermore More importantly

What’s more Moreover 其他與“我”有關的寫作材料

1、重點句型

It`s+a.for sb.to do sth.So +a./ad.That

such a +a.+n.that too?to do Not?.until That’s why+句子

那是。。的原因 It’s said that +句子 There’s no doubt that+句子

毫無疑問··· It goes without saying that+句子

毫無疑問···

There’s no need to do

沒必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫無意義

2、提建議 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的話，我會做``` It’s best to do

3、表示喜歡，感興趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth.Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in

4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to do

Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do

5、打算做···/計劃做··· Intend to do/plan to do

Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do

6、表示想/希望

Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing

7、其他有用的短語

From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn?by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in?.8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on?vary from person to person

4、增添亮點 使用復合句和諺語 諺語舉例

I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”.As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses.An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”

五．2002-2013 上海中考英語作文題目集錦

2002 My favorite thing(s)

我的心愛之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese

做一個可愛的上海人

2004 Leave School

畢業時分

2005 Growing pains and gains

成長的煩惱

2006

I have a dream

我有一個夢

2007 A Story about My Parent(s)

一個關于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me

愛在我身邊

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想為我的學校做點什么

2010 I'm proud of myself

我為我自己感到自豪

2011 My Favourite Thing（s）

我的心愛之物

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result.寫給一個考試焦慮考生的一封信，并給予建議。

2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文)

六．近5年上海中考英語真題范文分享

2009命題作文

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”.(以“我想為學校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下內容僅供參考)l What do you want to do for your school? 2 Why do you want to do it? 3 How are you going to do it? 例文1：

I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think so.Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean.” But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean.Of course, I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now, do you think it is simple? 2 One possible version I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school.I want to plant a tree in my school garden.I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful.If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me.In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命題作文

上海中考英語作文題:I'm proud of myself

1、What kind of person are you?

2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)

3、Why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文：1

I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment, I just wanted to give up.But my parents encouraged me: “impossible is nothing,” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2.I am proud of myself The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years.By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person.It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone.At first, I felt my body was filled with energy.As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down.For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind.But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on.Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top.When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life.How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.3.I am proud of myself I used to be a girl with few words.Last month I failed in the exam.I felt so depressed that I couldn’t help crying.However, my mother told me, “The life is a tough road full of ups and downs.Everyone has to experience the low times.” Her encouraging words lifted me up.I made up my mind to prepare for the next exam.I always listened to the teacher carefully and did my homework attentively.To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam.At that time, I actually felt proud of myself.I’m proud because I achieved success as well as courage.Now I’m more active than before, and I always believe as long as you keep your heart facing the sun, the world will always bring you new hopes.2011話題補全式作文

Writing(作文)共18分

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of “

(以“我是??的一員”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格子” 提示： 你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團的一員，或者作為家庭，班級，社區額的一員，寫出你的經歷，感受等。

Use the following points as a reference Are you glad to be a member of ??？ What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member? 例文：1 I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone!I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club.I have been in this club for 2 years.I’m an actor in the club.I like singing and dancing very much.I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends.Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.It makes me feel very happy.2 In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son.For plenty of people, families are very important.when you are very said, you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is you family.I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother.When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook;she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brother and I are healthy.As a daughter，I shouldn't make my parents worry.As a sister ,l should look after my brother.l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family 2012書信類作文

Writing(作文):(共20分)

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根據所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信)Suppose you are Joe.Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result.What do you think? Try to offer her some advice.(假設你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因為過于在意考試結果而感到焦慮。請給他寫一封信，談談你的看法，并給她一些建議。)例文：1 Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried.Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result.There are some effective ways to calm down.Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful.Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports.Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you.As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.2.Dear Betty，How time flies!The exam is finally near at hand.Important as it is to you, you really shouldn't care too much about the result and get yourself overly upset.Remember all the hard work you have put in!As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, I'm sure there will be nothing difficult for you and the exam will be smooth sailing.I suggest you talk more to parents and teachers about your anxiety and take better care of your health such as getting enough sleep and doing more exercise.Above all, no matter what the result, all you need to do is to act more and think less because action is worry's worst enemy.Keep faith and calm down, and you are sure to come out with flying colors.All the best of luck.Yours, Joe

2013自由命題類作文

Writing(作文)(共20分)99．Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)提示： 自我保護是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請談談你在生活中怎樣進行自我保護(可

結合生活中的某一個情景或具體事例，如：面對災難如何自救，如何預防受騙或侵

害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。Phrases for reference(以下短語僅供參考)： Ask…for help

in danger

calm down prevent．．．from

(注意：文中不得出現具體人名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分)范文1 As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations.First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help.Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself.As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators.IN conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.2：How to protect myself

Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking.The first word that came to my mind was earthquake.When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors.Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake.I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building.I couldn’t take the lift but walk downstairs.No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help.And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead.Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake.I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.3： A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families.So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself.First, I would stay calm.A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time.Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then.Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows.With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.七．熱點話題背誦篇目

關于上海的變化

1.Great changes in Shanghai

With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in Shanghai.Many years ago, there used to be narrow bridges, roads and houses in Shanghai.But now, we can find big bridges, wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere.People live in Shanghai used to live in small houses in narrow streets, but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments.What’s more, we can see grass, lakes and parks here and there.To our great joy , the 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai as well.As a shanghainese, I am pound of all these changes.We are sure Shanghai will have a bright future.關于學校生活

2.Our school life

Our school life is very colorful.They are many hobby groups in our school, such as singing group, dancing group, science group and so on.We can learn a lot by joining these groups.For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May.We can enjoy ourselves by singing.It’s so interesting that everyone likes it very much.We also have a sports meeting in October.It always makes us excited.Sometimes we even have friendly matches with other schools.What an enjoyable school life we have!關于網上購物

3.Shoppign on the internet

Nowadays，shopping on the internet has become a new way of shopping.Indeed，it offers people a lot of advantages.So I prefer to do some shopping on the internet.For one thing, it is convenient because the online shops are open 24 hours a day and we don’t have to queue.For the other thing, it is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet and it is also easy to find out what we want.Additionally，we can save a lot of time.Isn’t it great to do shopping on the Internet? 關于學習4.My way of Learning English

As we all know, English is one of the most important language in the world.So it’s important for us to learn it.Then how can we it well？In my opinion, the best way to learn English is to do more listening, speaking, reading and writing.What’s more, we should practice these skills every day.Of course, interest is the best teacher.The more we learn, the more interesting and helpful we’ll find English.As the saying goes,”Practice makes perfect.’’

關于節日

5.The Spring Festival As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.On the New Year’s Eve, families always get together and have a big dinner.Many people like to set off firecracker.People also eat dumping---a kind of traditional Chinese food.Especially, children like the festival very much because they can nit only have delicious food, wear new clothes but also receive red packets from their parents or their elders.It is said that the money in the red packets will bring children good luck.Chinese people have a good time during the festival.關于保護環境

6.Environment around us

The environment is very important to us.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now, people cut down too many trees and the environment around us becomes worse and worse.So as students, we should try to protect our environment.First of all, we should plant as many trees as possible.Second, we should ride bikes or walk to school instead of taking buses or cars.Third, we shouldn’t’t use plastic bags.In a word, if everyone knows the importance of environment protection, we’ll have a green world.關于電腦7.My view on computer

With the development of science and technology, computers are playing more and more important roles in our daily life.They can do most of the things people can do.By using computers, we can gain huge amount of knowledge and information, especially, computers have made the communication with our friends and relatives more convenient and easier.But some students are so keen on playing games online that they even don’t want to go to school.I don't think it is right.In my opinion, we should make good use ot computers.關于出國8.Is it helping to study abroad

In recent years, more and more students in China go abroad for their further studies.Most Chinese people think it is helpful to story abroad.But I don’t think so.For one TOEFL or GRE, and this will surely waste us plenty of money and time.In addition, if we study home, we can stay with our family and friends, and we can study in a more friendly environment In a word, I prefer to study home.關注時事

H1N1流感

★ 范文01.根據中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文.所給英文提示詞語供選用.請不要寫出你的校名和姓名.世界上已有許多國家發現了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1 flu virus)病例.據了解，人感染該病毒后會出現咳嗽、發燒、疲勞等癥狀.為了加強同學們的預防意識，(21世紀中學生英語報>正在舉辦征文活動，請你給該報投稿，描述感染該病毒的癥狀并談一談為了預防該病毒我們該怎么做，最后表達我們能戰勝病毒的信心.提示詞：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus.It?s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired.To prevent the virus, we can do many things.Firstly, we?d better not go to places where there are many people.Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze.It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly.It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.And having a good sleep is important, too.People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily.And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong.Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh.If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus.So there is no need to be worried.I believe we will win through in the end.★ 范文02.★ 上海世博會對中國的影響

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai, this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So it is a great honor for our country.It is also a great honor for all the Asians.As a host city, Shanghai will have more chances to develop quickly.The theme of the Expo is “Better City, Better Life”.We all really hope that Shanghai will become more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest.Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend, at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo.It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.★ 范文04.How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened, firstly, don't panic and calm down.Secondly, find some safe place to stay and don't run in such a hurry.If in the room, one should hide himself/herself under something hard, such as desk, table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard, and never take a lift to go downstairs.If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.Thirdly, we should help each other when we meet trouble.At last, no matter how strong the earthquake is, if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up, we must be able to overcome any difficulties.二、環保問題

★ 范文05.環境問題今天環境變得越來越糟糕,環境問題影響著人們的工作,學習,生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產等又使環境污染越來越嚴重??,如何保護我們的環境?請以“ How to protect our environment? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴重；2.砍伐森林嚴重；3.大氣污染嚴重；4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保護環境?至少：3至4個方面。How to protect/save our environment/world? As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted;we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down;some animals are getting less and less.Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky.The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People?s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution.It?s our duty to protect our environment.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.Trees are very helpful and important for us.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.限塑令

★ 范文06.有關限塑令問題

根據國務院發布的“限塑令”，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商場實行塑料購物袋有償使用制度，超市、商場一律不得免費提供塑料購物袋。請你寫一篇英語短文，要求包括以下內容：

現狀：目前中國每天消費近30億個塑料袋，造成了嚴重的資源浪費和環境污染；

限塑令的意義：減少塑料袋使用量，提高公眾的環保意識；

提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜籃子。

參考詞匯：禁令 ban 意識 awareness 提倡 advocate The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role.In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1.I agree with the rule, which people can?t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets.It advocates people to use their cloth bags and baskets.It?s good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop using the plastic bags, and to use our own cloth bags.I hope we can take care of our environment.Let?s make our world more and more beautiful.★ 范文07.節約水是我們每個人的責任

As we know, water is very important to man, we can?t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.But some people don?t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And I think it?s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It?s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!Only in this way can we live happily.If we don?t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.低碳生活

★ 范文08.現在全世界都在倡導“低碳生活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。內容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。

提示詞語：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it?s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we?d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.提出建議

學習★ 范文09.根據中文提示和英文書信內容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開頭和結尾已經給出，其字數不計入所完成的回信內。

假如你叫Zhang Fang，是美國中學生Lucy的筆友，你收到了她的電子郵件。請根據她來信的內

容寫一封回信。針對她的困惑，談談你的看法，同時提出一些建議，并表達對她的祝愿。

Dear Zhang Fang，I have been in this school for two years.My school?s not too bad.But I haven’t got used to it.Some of the teachers are very good, especially my science teachers.They try to make lessons interesting.I like to have their classes and spend much time on it.So I usually get A in science exams.But I don?t like having English and history classes.There are too many things to memorize and they’re so boring.Besides, it seems that the teachers can only read again and again.They don?t try to make lessons interesting.Whenever the lessons start, I feel sleepy.I often get C in the exams, sometimes D.The final exam of this term is coming.What shall I do? Could you give me some advice? Yours，Lucy Dear Lucy，I’m very happy to hear from you.Don’t worry too much.Many students have the same problem like you.I think it?s very common for students to dislike memorizing.Here’s my advice.But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think.If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons.It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class.Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers? questions.It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly.What?s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class.If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help.I really hope my advice can help you out and get A in English and history exams.Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.Yours, Zhang Fang.生活 ★ 范文10.假如你是韓梅，下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發來的e-mail, 請根據e-mail的內容，給他寫一封回信。與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。

提示詞語：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

Dear Han Mei , I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” And so on.I’m annoyed(煩惱).What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?

Alice Dear Alice，as a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get on/ along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.I'm sure your mum loves you very much.Maybe it shows your mother?s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother?s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you?re thinking about.If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Han Mei

娛樂 ★ 范文11.根據中文提示和英文書信內容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。（信的開頭和結尾已給出，其字數不計入所完成的回信內）。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

75.中學生學習時間長、大力大，專家建議學生每天課后應采取適當的方式放松自己。為此，不同的同學有不同的放松方式，有的愛看電視，有的聽音樂，有的做運動?請你談談你通過哪些方式放松自己并說說原因，談談你的感受。提示詞語：relax, TV, music, think The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming.In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little.Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways---Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me I enjoy taking exercise most.Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour(in)walking or jogging in the park.Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class.In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies.I think it?s really helpful to both my health and my study.I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed.I wish you all every success in the coming examination！

運動 ★ 范文12.假如你叫李飛，是學?！靶@英語報”的編輯。你收到你同學張麗的姐姐的來信。請根據這位姐姐的要求，給張麗寫一封回信。

Dear Editor，I am really worried about my sister, Zhang Li.She always watches TV or reads books in her free time.She doesn?t like going out to exercise.I?m afraid that she will be not strong enough.Could you write to her to tell her the importance of doing exercise and give her some advice?

A worried sister Dear Zhang Li，Your sister is worried about you very much.Because you don?t take any exercise in spare time.I think health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body.Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic.If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily.So you should go out instead of staying at home.There are many kinds of sports you can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.Just remember “Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.” Good luck!

Yours，Li Fei

多彩校園

學校簡介

★ 范文13.在一次英語班會上，老師請同學們以Proud of My School 請根據下面所給的提示寫一篇發言稿。內容包括學校面貌，你在校的活動，以及你喜歡學校的原因。提示詞：bigsmall, trees, play games, family, be kind to, befeel proud of Proud of my school My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.8 My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes.I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis.I love my school because it?s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I'm leaving my school.I'll never forget the days I've spent here.友情至上

★ 范文14.假設你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你與同學們在一起學習、參加各種活動，相互幫助，彼此之間建立了深厚的友誼.校園網的英語論壇開辟了 “Thank you letter” 專欄.請按下面的要求給你的同學Ling Feng寫一封感謝信.注意：1.這封信要表達你對Ling Feng的感謝；2.信中要簡述感謝Ling Feng的原因，適當舉例，并談談自己的感受；提示詞語：thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help? with, stay in touch Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week.When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help, I didn?t fall behind others.Since then, we have become very close friends.I think I?ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools, I?ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.Yours, Liu Yan

課余活動 ★ 范文15.體育鍛煉與參加夏令營

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week, some do less than one hour.As for me, most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it?s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it?s good for our health and study.And I?d

love to take part in the summer camp.First we?d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums, places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it?s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we?re in the same world.At the same time, the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.運動會 ★ 范文16.一家英文報社正在舉辦征文活動，請你積極參加.題目是“一次難忘的運動會”.內容要求：你或你的朋友參加了什么項目，結果怎樣，感覺如何？提示詞語：year, take part in, field event(relay race, high jump, long jump, shot put, excited, take the first prize.This year, I took part in the relay race, I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began, everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn, I could feel the Class 4?s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster, finally, our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my class.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.畢業感想 ★ 范文17.初中生活馬上就要結束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經過和事后你的感想（請不要寫出真實的學校名稱以及真實姓名）。

提示詞供參考。three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years? life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I?m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.★ 范文18.2008年政府取消了“五一”黃金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢復7天的長假.同學們也在校園網的“自由論壇”上展開了激烈的討論.請你選用下面表格所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談談恢復長假的利與弊，并簡述你的觀點，給出一至兩條理由.Advantages Disadvantages have a good rest spend more time …with … … cause a lot of trouble… be crowded everywhere… … In 2008, May golden week was canceled, but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew May golden week or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important.Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family.Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However, other people hold the opposite view.They think it causes a lot of problems.It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student, I prefer a 7-day holiday.Not only can I sleep well and do exercise, but also I can read some interesting books.How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then!

公共規則 ★ 范文19.It?s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places.Everyone should obey the rules.Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude.Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable.We should stand in line when we are waiting for the bus.Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones.We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely.Especially, we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus.I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life.Please cherish the public property.使用手機 ★ 范文20.關于中學生使用手機

贊成意見：1.現在是信息社會，手機是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.應充分利用好手機。如偶遇突發事故，可立即撥打手機求助。3.可在每天學習之余利用手機游戲放松一下自己。4.只要正確使用好手機，緊跟時間并無過錯，追求時尚可以理解，但學習是首要任務。反對意見：1.學校已提供了公共電話，因此手機并不能帶來更多的方便，而且花費較多。2.若課堂接聽手機會影響上課。3.學生玩手機游戲或接發短信，將無法集中精力學習。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone.But some people do not think so.They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study.And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed.In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there?s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There?re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we?re tired of our studies.In my opinion, it?s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.網絡游戲 ★ 范文21.沉迷網絡游戲

題目：李小虎沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學習。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢？ 請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇短文。

提示詞：

give up

concentrate on

be(become)interested in Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.First, I think it?s very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.電視節目 ★ 范文22.As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life.It's quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers.It is an important tool to spread culture and information, including foreign languages.And we can learn much knowledge from TV which we can?t get from books.What?s more, good TV programs can keep us wise and healthy.With TV, children can grow up happily.So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV.But watching TV too long is not good.Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study.So we should take a correct attitude to students watching TV.六、飲食與健康

飲食安全 ★ 范文23.假如你是一所國際學校校辦英文雜志的學生編輯.你看了下面這封信后，也想寫一篇關于該信的讀后感，內容要點包括：你對此事件的看法；解釋你的理由并提出你的建議；向受害者表達盡快康復的祝愿.Today, I received the reader's letter.I was shocked at it.Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety.The government must make some necessary laws.What's more, some businessmen shouldn't be only interested in making money.They must care about people's health.We'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.減肥問題 ★ 范文24.假設你是《21世紀中學生英語報》“heart to heart”專欄的編輯.下面是你收到的一位中學生的來信.請你根據他來信的內容寫一封回信.針對他的問題 Dear Xiaowei，Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere.So I don?t think you have much to worry about.Here are my suggestions.Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.Also, when you are free, you?d better do more exercise.Running is great.You don?t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball.I?m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight.I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies.“Believe myself, and I will win.” It?s really important for us when we meet difficulties.Don?t lose heart;I?m sure you will succeed one day.Good luck.Editor

中國城市與傳統節日

介紹首都北京 ★ 范文25.請你閱讀你的加拿大網友Tommy的e-mail，根據e-mail的內容，給他寫一封回信.Dear Li Lei，I haven't heard from you for a long time.I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation.It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games.I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Tommy

Dear Tommy, I’m glad to know you will come to Beijing.Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world.There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall.All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world.Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.Now, people pay more attention to the environment.More trees and flowers have been planted.For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built.If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful.What's more, a lot of people can speak English.Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.I'm looking

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon.Yours, Li Lei

中國傳統節日 ★ 范文26.根據中文大意和英語提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞供選用。注意：不要寫出你的真實姓名和校名。

假設你是劉偉，你的美國朋友MIKE 想通過你了解中國的傳統節日。請你根據提示，給Mike 寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國傳統節日春節的情況。

內容提示：1.春節是中國最重要的傳統節日；2.春節期間人們的主要活動（節前、除夕、節日期間）Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money Dear Mike, How are you? I?m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on.I?d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses.They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.They decorate their houses with paper cuts.On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals.Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the new year.During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people.People visit their relatives and friends.They wish each a happy year and good luck.How happy we are.Best wishes!Yours, Liu Wei

名言警句

01.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧.02.Time is money.時間就是金錢 03.Easier said than done.說來容易做來難 04.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成.05.Look before you leap.三思而后行.06.Knowledge is power.知識就是力量 07.God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助.08.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿，無事不成 09.It?s never too old to learn.活到老，學到老 10.No pains, no gains.不勞無獲 11.Once in a blue moon.千載難逢 12.To make the impossible possible.將不可能變為可能 13.Failure is the mother of success.失敗乃成功之母 14.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情 15.First things first.先做重要之事 16.Great minds think alike.英雄所見略同 17.Rome was not built in a day.成功并非一朝一夕的事 18.All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子 19.East or west, home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩 20.Time and tide wait for no man.時間不等人

21.There is but a secret to success—Never give up!成功只有一個秘訣—永不放棄！22.Where there is life, there is hope.有生命必有希望 23.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能當飯吃 24.Better late than never.遲做總比不做好 25.Every little helps.點滴都有用；積少成多 26.The shortest answer is doing.最簡短的回答就是行動 27.No news is good news.沒消息，就是好消息 28.Well begun, half done.好的開始是成功的一半 29.All for one, one for all.人人為我，我為人人 30.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，謬以千里 31.Facts speak louder than words.事實勝于雄辯 32.As the tree, so the fruit.種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆

33.To live is to learn;to learn is to better live.活著為了學習，學習為了更好的活著 34.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投

35.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只學習不玩耍聰明的孩子也變傻.八、書面表達的考點講解和訓練

【考點掃描】

書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的?！久麕熃怆y】 一.訓練方法

1.記。認真系統復習和背誦基礎知識和優美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們若有大量的現成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發揮。2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進行實戰寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內寫出100個詞的短文，并且質量高、內容全、形式正確。這樣形成習慣，考試時就能得心應手。

二.應試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意?！吨锌伎荚囌f明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？

就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。

2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調：定出時態、人稱、順序、開頭、結尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型?？蛇m當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態、時態要準確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法：

1）表示并列關系的：and, as well as, or? 2）表示轉折關系的：but, yet, however? 3）表示時間關系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that? 4）表示因果關系的：so, therefore ,as a result? 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that? 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as? 7）表示總結性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking?

(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。

6.改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態、語態錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項

書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關。【中考范例】 VII.書面表達

假如你叫張強。請根據下面美國朋友Bob的來信內容，結合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內容，從中獲得你需要的信息。 2.詞數：80左右?；匦诺拈_頭、結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。注意：回信中不得出現你的真實地址和所在學校的名稱。

Dear friend, I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I?m fifteen.I?m American.I live in New York. I am a middle school student.I?m good at math.It is very interesting.My favorite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs together.After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I?m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I?m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, Bob

Dear

Bob，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，Zhang Qiang

【解析】根據前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內容應是介紹張強自己的情況。

2.圈要點：根據來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we?ll meet in China

4、定基調：1.時態：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結尾題目已經給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob，I got your letter yesterday.I?m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I?m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I?m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I?m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang

6、改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正。

第四篇：2015上海中考語文作文解析

【巧夫子】2015上海中考語文作文解析

巧夫子：楊巧鈴老師

2015年6月13日上午9:00-10:40，上海市一年一度的中考拉開了序幕，第一場語文卷考試，此次作文題目依然保持了歷年上海中考作文的出題思路：命題式作文，即：“不止一次，我努力嘗試”。同樣，對于考生來言，此題目審題看似難度不大，大家肯定會想到什么努力學習突破困難之類，或者為夢想努力的過程。其實想寫好，我們不必非寫此類不可。如何打破思維寫出深邃并富有梯度的中考作文呢？

?2015年上海市中考作文題目特點解析

題目：不止一次，我努力嘗試

從形式上看這是個主謂短語，若加上句號就是個句子，但是特殊的是這個句子從意義上并不完整。我們需要打開思路來進行解析。從成分上入手。

一、狀語成分----不止一次

這個狀語是表頻率時間狀語，也就是文章一定要體現多次，這個多次是圍繞一個目標或境界來努力的。而且這個努力的過程中，你的認識和境界最好有層進性。

二、主語----我

主語“我”是文章主人公，要寫親身經歷的的事情，所以，這個題一旦限制了，就好入手了。一定要明白，“我”不是線索人物，而是主人公。

三、謂語---“嘗試”

“嘗試”這個詞的字典意義是“指人的一種行為、一種活動、一種精神，也是一種挑戰，嘗試，是做別人不敢做的事?！币簿褪钦f，是挑戰。挑戰自己之前沒做過的行為。但是得有目的，不然，那就是沒有意義了。你有什么目標？要什么發現？要了解什么??。圍繞這個點去構思。

四、狀語---“努力”

這里又一個狀語“努力”，直接來修飾“嘗試”的，也就是說，奮力去嘗試。其實表明了態度。這個過程要體現出來。

接下來，我們用我們課堂上講過的“萬象歸四”法來看這類作文如何寫。

?“萬象歸四法”解析2015年上海市中考作文“不止一次，我努力嘗試”

我分析過2012至2015年濟南市中考作文題目解析的時候，解析過在課堂上講過的萬象歸四法。當然不同的老師或學校分類也有所不同，或者按照這個思路，分類很多。有的分為6種、8種、16種等，其實，對于考生來講，分類越多，越不容易運用和歸類。那么2015年上海市中考作文題目“不止一次，我努力嘗試”如何運用這四個類型實現中考作文的千變萬化的無縫鏈接呢，實現“化萬為一”呢？ 中考作文的命題方向有四大類：

1、成長感悟類

2、感恩感動類

3、勵志素養類

4、審美感悟類

第一類：成長感悟

此類作品，可以結合題目“不止一次，我努力嘗試”寫出自己變化的。其實，成長類可以包括以下方面：

1、努力嘗試：為夢想奮斗、為目標努力捅破學習方式或方法寫出親身經歷的剪影

比如：你為了某個比賽，去突破學習中的障礙或心理的障礙

2、努力嘗試改變自己的弱點：自卑、怯懦、任性等

比如：之前的狀態是自卑的，寫出你不止一次，努力幾個場景，慢慢突破這個障礙的過程，然后走向樂觀。

寫的時候，注意重點在過程，如何努力嘗試的，而不是重點在結果上，最好結果一筆帶過。

深化主旨的時候，要回扣到理上來：

比如：只要有努力嘗試勇氣，我們可以達到目標。

第二類：感恩感動

此類作品，可以結合題目“不止一次，我努力嘗試”，我們可以運用層進法來寫。用層層遞進的方式寫出認識或理解的不同和梯度。

我們可以寫親情，這個如何立意呢？我們需要用造句法來確定

造句法：不止一次，我努力嘗試解讀如何讓爺爺快樂，才明白什么才是真正的孝道。舉例子：

爺爺退休后，一直悶悶不樂

1、我嘗試買了些爺爺最愛吃的東西，他不快樂??

2、我嘗試著與爺爺聊天，關注老年人的心理，爺爺好了些，但有時還是不開心

3、我嘗試著想出我們全家陪爺爺看他最愛的京劇，并通過一定渠道讓爺爺參加了業余京劇社團，從此爺爺每天顯得非常有精神。

主旨：什么才是孝道？孝父母之身，孝父母之心，孝父母之志，孝父母之慧?? 這類文章需要有一定的文學和思想境界方可。第三類：勵志素養

此類作文需要考生平時的思維訓練，結合題目“不止一次，我努力嘗試”，我們需要從自身的瓶頸入手，然后想努力嘗試突破瓶頸。

舉個例子：

我有一個弱點就是；受外界影響較大，然后讓自己心神不寧。取得成績時，別人的夸獎，讓自己沾沾自喜，飄飄然；失敗時，面對別人的否定，開始懷疑自己。如何做到“寵辱不驚”的淡泊心態呢？我開始做了努力的嘗試.1、在失敗時，面對別人的否定，我努力嘗試學會坦然處之，開始反思自己

2、在面對別人的嫉妒時，我努力嘗試保持平和心態，覺得這是另一種對自己的認可。

3、在面對別人的夸獎時，我努力嘗試讓它穿耳而過，擺正姿態，居安思危。

升華主旨：在一次次的努力嘗試中，我獲得什么才是“真豁達”！第四類：審美感悟

此類作文一般寫的是文化。結合題目“不止一次，我努力嘗試”，我們需要從一次次閱讀經典入手，解讀到經典的真諦

如：不止一次，我努力嘗試發覺《西游記》的不同層次的魅力。

明清小說在文壇中達到古典小說的高峰，為什么大家認為的經典，我為什么沒有發覺？為這個疑惑，不止一次，我努力嘗試解讀，挖掘魅力所在

1、第一遍讀它，我盡力去讀，只是領略了孫悟空的本領之大

2、第二次讀它，我努力去品，發現了孫悟空的的成長其實是一個由自發到自覺的過程

3、第三次讀它，我慢慢咀嚼，發現了：一個道理，無論是玉皇大帝、如來佛祖還是唐三藏還是孫悟空，只有堅持才能活得成功。

深化主旨：在一次次的努力嘗試中，我看到經典的不同層次的魅力，看見了自己的成長軌跡。

因為近期一直上課，分析較晚，希望能給新初

一、新初

二、新初三同學一些寫作啟示。其實，寫作也要看人生境界，記住厚德載物的道理。

（寫作思路分析皆出自巧夫子巧鈴老師的課堂經驗，若粘貼請注明或回帖，否則必究）

我是因，世界是果！

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