第一篇：2009年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文注意事項(xiàng)

2009年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文注意事項(xiàng)：

英語(yǔ)寫作是中考英語(yǔ)試卷中最后一道題，考察的是初中畢業(yè)生使用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力。它是同學(xué)們最感困惑和失分比例較高的大題。寫作是考察語(yǔ)言綜合運(yùn)用能力的項(xiàng)目，它要求考生能熟練運(yùn)用學(xué)過(guò)的詞匯、句型等，并且能良好地進(jìn)行謀篇布局。由于作文難度較高，導(dǎo)致很多考生望“文”興嘆。

從歷年的考題來(lái)看，中考英語(yǔ)寫作涉及的內(nèi)容和主題一般都貼近中學(xué)生的生活，命題人希望考生在面對(duì)這些題目時(shí)有感而發(fā)、有話可說(shuō)，是廣大考生現(xiàn)有的語(yǔ)言水平和生活經(jīng)歷所能掌控的。我們回顧一下往年的題目，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)其中的規(guī)律：

2004年的作文題為“Leaving School”，讓考生以“離校”為題寫一篇文章，這篇文章應(yīng)該從考生自己的角度出發(fā)，寫出離校時(shí)對(duì)于原來(lái)學(xué)校、老師和同學(xué)的留戀以及對(duì)未來(lái)的打算。2005年的“Growing Pains and Gains”，同樣也是應(yīng)該結(jié)合自身，闡述pains和gains兩方面內(nèi)容。2006年的“I Have a Dream”，2007年的“Things I Hate to Do”和2008年的“Love around me”無(wú)一例外的都是需要考生從自身出發(fā)，結(jié)合學(xué)校、家庭和社會(huì)進(jìn)行寫作。

由此可知，中考命題人的思路是讓我們針對(duì)身邊的事情和現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行寫作，并且最重要的是能結(jié)合自身，從“我”的角度出發(fā)來(lái)創(chuàng)作。

今年的中考英語(yǔ)試卷做出了比較大的調(diào)整，原有的“完成對(duì)話”題型被取消了，其6分分值被分配到了閱讀和寫作中，寫作由原來(lái)的16分一下子提高到了18分，那么評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)也作了相應(yīng)的改動(dòng)。具體地，內(nèi)容分為8分，語(yǔ)言分為7分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)分為3分。內(nèi)容分，要求考生主題明確，內(nèi)容緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)條理清晰，表達(dá)清楚、完整；語(yǔ)言分，考察考生單詞拼寫、語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的正確使用；組織結(jié)構(gòu)分，考察考生熟練正確地運(yùn)用所學(xué)的單詞、詞組和句型的能力。分值的提高預(yù)示著今年作文難度的提高，但是無(wú)論難度再怎么提高，其命題思路是不會(huì)改變的，因此廣大考生不必驚慌，應(yīng)從容地抓住命題人的脈搏，沉著應(yīng)對(duì)。知己知彼，方可百戰(zhàn)不殆。考生應(yīng)首先明確自己寫作中的問(wèn)題所在，對(duì)癥下藥方可“藥到病除”。在教學(xué)中筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)，考生的問(wèn)題一般存在于以下幾個(gè)方面：

1.文章主題不突出

很多同學(xué)一般都是通過(guò)一遍不超過(guò)1分鐘的讀題就進(jìn)入了寫作過(guò)程，忽視了寫作最初也是最重要的步驟——審題。導(dǎo)致寫出來(lái)的文章要么偏題跑題，要么內(nèi)容沒(méi)有很好地緊扣主題，一般常見的低分和零分的文章就出于此，還有的同學(xué)作文分?jǐn)?shù)時(shí)高時(shí)低也是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)原因。建議考生最好能花3~5分鐘時(shí)間進(jìn)行仔細(xì)的審題和構(gòu)思，圍繞主題，列出提綱，這樣寫文章的時(shí)候就能主題明確，并且內(nèi)容能很好地支撐主題。審題應(yīng)該從以下方面入手：首先，明確

文章的主題是什么，也就是核心話題。其次，文章的文體是什么，根據(jù)文體確定寫作選用的時(shí)態(tài)，比如記敘文常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第三，確定要寫得內(nèi)容，比如2008年的“Love around me”就應(yīng)該寫生活中你受到的愛并舉例說(shuō)明，寫出你對(duì)愛的感受，以及對(duì)愛的回饋。這幾方面缺一不可。

2.語(yǔ)言不規(guī)范

考試的時(shí)候由于時(shí)間緊迫以及心態(tài)等問(wèn)題，考生通常會(huì)犯很多低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，諸如時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用不當(dāng)、主謂不一致、漏用冠詞、介詞搭配錯(cuò)誤、拼寫錯(cuò)誤等問(wèn)題層出不窮，導(dǎo)致了直接的失分，三年的艱辛很可能就因?yàn)檫@一兩分化為烏有。另外，簡(jiǎn)單句用逗號(hào)分隔后漏用連詞等現(xiàn)象也是屢見不鮮，一個(gè)and，but，so，yet這樣簡(jiǎn)單的連詞在這時(shí)候就能助你一臂之力。考生在語(yǔ)言規(guī)范方面另外一個(gè)大問(wèn)題就是把中文的使用習(xí)慣放到了英語(yǔ)表達(dá)中，也就是常說(shuō)的中式英語(yǔ)Chinglish的現(xiàn)象，諸如“I very liked playing football.”在考生的文章中頻頻出現(xiàn)。考生在平時(shí)練習(xí)寫作的過(guò)程中應(yīng)著重注意這些方面的問(wèn)題，并且在考試中完成作文后進(jìn)行仔細(xì)的檢查和修改。

3.表達(dá)單一

很多考生由于怕犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，通篇文章都使用幾乎沒(méi)有任何修飾的簡(jiǎn)單句，也就是通常所說(shuō)的短句。造成文章乏味，語(yǔ)言平淡，結(jié)構(gòu)感差。針對(duì)此現(xiàn)象，希望考生能夠盡可能地豐富自己的句式，將一些熟練掌握的賓語(yǔ)從句、主語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等運(yùn)用到文章中，同時(shí)還可以采用不定式、分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)等插入語(yǔ)，或者使用一些并列句，讓句子有一定得長(zhǎng)度。另外，一些被動(dòng)句、倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句在文章中適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用也是相當(dāng)閃光的元素。

考生在用詞方面也比較貧乏，以good，nice，bad這樣模糊化的詞走遍天下，導(dǎo)致文章在用詞方面和小學(xué)生作文無(wú)太大差異。考生應(yīng)避免用詞平凡和用詞單一，比如good，可以用great，excellent，outstanding，wonderful這樣的詞來(lái)代替；在文章中多用些詞組代替簡(jiǎn)單的單詞，比如表示“喜歡”，除了用like，love，prefer之外，我們還可以用be fond of，be keen on，be crazy about等。

4.文章銜接不當(dāng)

很多考生的文章就是一些句子的簡(jiǎn)單堆砌，句子與句子之間缺乏關(guān)聯(lián)，讀起來(lái)相當(dāng)散亂，給人的感覺就是條理不清。針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，我們可以用一些過(guò)渡詞和詞組，來(lái)使文章句子之間的聯(lián)系更加緊密，結(jié)構(gòu)更加高效。比如，表示三層意思或三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，我們可以用first of all, in addition, last but not least;也可以用in the first place, besides, what’s more等；表示相反的兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，我們可以用on the other hand, however, on the contrary, in spite of, despite等。

希望廣大中考考生能找到自身問(wèn)題所在，及時(shí)糾正自己在寫作中的錯(cuò)誤，注重平時(shí)的積累，并且結(jié)合中考作文命題的思路，寫出讓自己和閱卷人都滿意的文章，取得理想的分?jǐn)?shù)，進(jìn)入自己夢(mèng)寐以求的高中，翻開人生新的一頁(yè)！

第二篇：上海中考英語(yǔ)作文

上海中考英語(yǔ)作文學(xué)習(xí)資料

一.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

上海中考英語(yǔ)作文總分為20分，其中內(nèi)容分8分、語(yǔ)言分8分、組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分。

以下為上海中考英語(yǔ)作文官方評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

1.內(nèi)容分8分。內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚完整。

2.語(yǔ)言分8分。學(xué)生需用語(yǔ)規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無(wú)或少見語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句型使用恰當(dāng)。首先是字?jǐn)?shù)，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3.組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分，也就是我們常說(shuō)的文采分。根據(jù)學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜句型/單詞和諺語(yǔ)/俗語(yǔ)的情況來(lái)加分。

二.注意點(diǎn)：

每少5個(gè)詞扣0.5分，拼寫錯(cuò)誤每處扣0.5分，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫錯(cuò)誤每2處扣0.5分

3內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)總分達(dá)15分及以上，得2~3分

內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言總分13~14分，如確有好句型或表達(dá)用語(yǔ)，可酌情給1~2分

通篇句型，句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，也不給分 開頭句+給的幾個(gè)參考點(diǎn)+結(jié)尾句+亮點(diǎn)。

先劃?rùn)n次：A檔 18~15分

B檔 14.5~12分

C檔 11.5~8分

D檔 3.5~0分 然后再仔細(xì)批閱看有否語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,最后給出總分。

三.學(xué)生常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題：

1.內(nèi)容空洞，沒(méi)有清晰的思路，表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，總是用一些不合適的句子內(nèi)容來(lái)表達(dá)，所以可能讓老師覺得理由或是內(nèi)容太假，當(dāng)然也就得不了高分。

2.議論過(guò)多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，我們把議論當(dāng)成的作文的重點(diǎn)，所以常常會(huì)跑題。應(yīng)當(dāng)多描述提示的內(nèi)容或加以想像，不能只翻譯了事。

3.總是使用同一個(gè)主語(yǔ)寫句子，重復(fù)太多。盡量使用不同的主語(yǔ)來(lái)表達(dá)，比如：I must learn English well.就可以換成：It is important for me to learn English well.4.結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，想哪兒寫哪兒，亂七八糟。應(yīng)該使用總分或總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)。

5.都是簡(jiǎn)單句，缺少?gòu)?fù)合句。多用狀語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目標(biāo)初二下英語(yǔ)同步輔導(dǎo)

（一）初中二年級(jí)下un...初中二年級(jí)下Un...可以用用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

6.連詞的使用較少，句子之間的連接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise(讓我驚 訝的是), what’s more（而且，還有）等，讓上文與下文銜接更緊密。意思也能更流暢地表達(dá)。

四． 中考寫作高頻使用詞組、句法

1.作文開頭的有用句

As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies!In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.2、中間分層部分的有用結(jié)構(gòu):

分正反兩面論述:On one hand, On the other hand 分兩點(diǎn)：For one thing, For another，分三點(diǎn)：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least

3、結(jié)尾部分

All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的說(shuō)，簡(jiǎn)單的說(shuō) Last but not least

組織語(yǔ)言 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not，表示遞進(jìn)的 In addition Furthermore More importantly

What’s more Moreover 其他與“我”有關(guān)的寫作材料

1、重點(diǎn)句型

It`s+a.for sb.to do sth.So +a./ad.That

such a +a.+n.that too?to do Not?.until That’s why+句子

那是。。的原因 It’s said that +句子 There’s no doubt that+句子

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)··· It goes without saying that+句子

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)···

There’s no need to do

沒(méi)必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫無(wú)意義

2、提建議 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的話，我會(huì)做``` It’s best to do

3、表示喜歡，感興趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth.Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in

4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to do

Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do

5、打算做···/計(jì)劃做··· Intend to do/plan to do

Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do

6、表示想/希望

Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing

7、其他有用的短語(yǔ)

From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn?by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in?.8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on?vary from person to person

4、增添亮點(diǎn) 使用復(fù)合句和諺語(yǔ) 諺語(yǔ)舉例

I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”.As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses.An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”

五．2002-2013 上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題目集錦

2002 My favorite thing(s)

我的心愛之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese

做一個(gè)可愛的上海人

2004 Leave School

畢業(yè)時(shí)分

2005 Growing pains and gains

成長(zhǎng)的煩惱

2006

I have a dream

我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)

2007 A Story about My Parent(s)

一個(gè)關(guān)于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me

愛在我身邊

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想為我的學(xué)校做點(diǎn)什么

2010 I'm proud of myself

我為我自己感到自豪

2011 My Favourite Thing（s）

我的心愛之物

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result.寫給一個(gè)考試焦慮考生的一封信，并給予建議。

2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文)

六．近5年上海中考英語(yǔ)真題范文分享

2009命題作文

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”.(以“我想為學(xué)校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)l What do you want to do for your school? 2 Why do you want to do it? 3 How are you going to do it? 例文1：

I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think so.Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean.” But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean.Of course, I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now, do you think it is simple? 2 One possible version I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school.I want to plant a tree in my school garden.I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful.If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me.In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命題作文

上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:I'm proud of myself

1、What kind of person are you?

2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)

3、Why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文：1

I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment, I just wanted to give up.But my parents encouraged me: “impossible is nothing,” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2.I am proud of myself The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years.By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person.It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone.At first, I felt my body was filled with energy.As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down.For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind.But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on.Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top.When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life.How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.3.I am proud of myself I used to be a girl with few words.Last month I failed in the exam.I felt so depressed that I couldn’t help crying.However, my mother told me, “The life is a tough road full of ups and downs.Everyone has to experience the low times.” Her encouraging words lifted me up.I made up my mind to prepare for the next exam.I always listened to the teacher carefully and did my homework attentively.To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam.At that time, I actually felt proud of myself.I’m proud because I achieved success as well as courage.Now I’m more active than before, and I always believe as long as you keep your heart facing the sun, the world will always bring you new hopes.2011話題補(bǔ)全式作文

Writing(作文)共18分

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of “

(以“我是??的一員”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格子” 提示： 你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團(tuán)的一員，或者作為家庭，班級(jí)，社區(qū)額的一員，寫出你的經(jīng)歷，感受等。

Use the following points as a reference Are you glad to be a member of ??？ What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member? 例文：1 I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone!I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club.I have been in this club for 2 years.I’m an actor in the club.I like singing and dancing very much.I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends.Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.It makes me feel very happy.2 In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son.For plenty of people, families are very important.when you are very said, you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is you family.I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother.When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook;she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brother and I are healthy.As a daughter，I shouldn't make my parents worry.As a sister ,l should look after my brother.l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family 2012書信類作文

Writing(作文):(共20分)

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信)Suppose you are Joe.Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result.What do you think? Try to offer her some advice.(假設(shè)你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因?yàn)檫^(guò)于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請(qǐng)給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ⒔o她一些建議。)例文：1 Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried.Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result.There are some effective ways to calm down.Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful.Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports.Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you.As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.2.Dear Betty，How time flies!The exam is finally near at hand.Important as it is to you, you really shouldn't care too much about the result and get yourself overly upset.Remember all the hard work you have put in!As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, I'm sure there will be nothing difficult for you and the exam will be smooth sailing.I suggest you talk more to parents and teachers about your anxiety and take better care of your health such as getting enough sleep and doing more exercise.Above all, no matter what the result, all you need to do is to act more and think less because action is worry's worst enemy.Keep faith and calm down, and you are sure to come out with flying colors.All the best of luck.Yours, Joe

2013自由命題類作文

Writing(作文)(共20分)99．Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)提示： 自我保護(hù)是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀阍谏钪性鯓舆M(jìn)行自我保護(hù)(可

結(jié)合生活中的某一個(gè)情景或具體事例，如：面對(duì)災(zāi)難如何自救，如何預(yù)防受騙或侵

害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。Phrases for reference(以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考)： Ask…for help

in danger

calm down prevent．．．from

(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分)范文1 As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations.First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help.Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself.As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators.IN conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.2：How to protect myself

Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking.The first word that came to my mind was earthquake.When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors.Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake.I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building.I couldn’t take the lift but walk downstairs.No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help.And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead.Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake.I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.3： A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families.So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself.First, I would stay calm.A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time.Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then.Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows.With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.七．熱點(diǎn)話題背誦篇目

關(guān)于上海的變化

1.Great changes in Shanghai

With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in Shanghai.Many years ago, there used to be narrow bridges, roads and houses in Shanghai.But now, we can find big bridges, wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere.People live in Shanghai used to live in small houses in narrow streets, but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments.What’s more, we can see grass, lakes and parks here and there.To our great joy , the 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai as well.As a shanghainese, I am pound of all these changes.We are sure Shanghai will have a bright future.關(guān)于學(xué)校生活

2.Our school life

Our school life is very colorful.They are many hobby groups in our school, such as singing group, dancing group, science group and so on.We can learn a lot by joining these groups.For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May.We can enjoy ourselves by singing.It’s so interesting that everyone likes it very much.We also have a sports meeting in October.It always makes us excited.Sometimes we even have friendly matches with other schools.What an enjoyable school life we have!關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物

3.Shoppign on the internet

Nowadays，shopping on the internet has become a new way of shopping.Indeed，it offers people a lot of advantages.So I prefer to do some shopping on the internet.For one thing, it is convenient because the online shops are open 24 hours a day and we don’t have to queue.For the other thing, it is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet and it is also easy to find out what we want.Additionally，we can save a lot of time.Isn’t it great to do shopping on the Internet? 關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)4.My way of Learning English

As we all know, English is one of the most important language in the world.So it’s important for us to learn it.Then how can we it well？In my opinion, the best way to learn English is to do more listening, speaking, reading and writing.What’s more, we should practice these skills every day.Of course, interest is the best teacher.The more we learn, the more interesting and helpful we’ll find English.As the saying goes,”Practice makes perfect.’’

關(guān)于節(jié)日

5.The Spring Festival As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.On the New Year’s Eve, families always get together and have a big dinner.Many people like to set off firecracker.People also eat dumping---a kind of traditional Chinese food.Especially, children like the festival very much because they can nit only have delicious food, wear new clothes but also receive red packets from their parents or their elders.It is said that the money in the red packets will bring children good luck.Chinese people have a good time during the festival.關(guān)于保護(hù)環(huán)境

6.Environment around us

The environment is very important to us.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now, people cut down too many trees and the environment around us becomes worse and worse.So as students, we should try to protect our environment.First of all, we should plant as many trees as possible.Second, we should ride bikes or walk to school instead of taking buses or cars.Third, we shouldn’t’t use plastic bags.In a word, if everyone knows the importance of environment protection, we’ll have a green world.關(guān)于電腦7.My view on computer

With the development of science and technology, computers are playing more and more important roles in our daily life.They can do most of the things people can do.By using computers, we can gain huge amount of knowledge and information, especially, computers have made the communication with our friends and relatives more convenient and easier.But some students are so keen on playing games online that they even don’t want to go to school.I don't think it is right.In my opinion, we should make good use ot computers.關(guān)于出國(guó)8.Is it helping to study abroad

In recent years, more and more students in China go abroad for their further studies.Most Chinese people think it is helpful to story abroad.But I don’t think so.For one TOEFL or GRE, and this will surely waste us plenty of money and time.In addition, if we study home, we can stay with our family and friends, and we can study in a more friendly environment In a word, I prefer to study home.關(guān)注時(shí)事

H1N1流感

★ 范文01.根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文.所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)供選用.請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名.世界上已有許多國(guó)家發(fā)現(xiàn)了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1 flu virus)病例.據(jù)了解，人感染該病毒后會(huì)出現(xiàn)咳嗽、發(fā)燒、疲勞等癥狀.為了加強(qiáng)同學(xué)們的預(yù)防意識(shí)，(21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)>正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)投稿，描述感染該病毒的癥狀并談一談為了預(yù)防該病毒我們?cè)撛趺醋觯詈蟊磉_(dá)我們能戰(zhàn)勝病毒的信心.提示詞：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus.It?s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired.To prevent the virus, we can do many things.Firstly, we?d better not go to places where there are many people.Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze.It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly.It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.And having a good sleep is important, too.People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily.And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong.Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh.If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus.So there is no need to be worried.I believe we will win through in the end.★ 范文02.★ 上海世博會(huì)對(duì)中國(guó)的影響

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai, this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So it is a great honor for our country.It is also a great honor for all the Asians.As a host city, Shanghai will have more chances to develop quickly.The theme of the Expo is “Better City, Better Life”.We all really hope that Shanghai will become more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest.Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend, at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo.It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.★ 范文04.How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened, firstly, don't panic and calm down.Secondly, find some safe place to stay and don't run in such a hurry.If in the room, one should hide himself/herself under something hard, such as desk, table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard, and never take a lift to go downstairs.If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.Thirdly, we should help each other when we meet trouble.At last, no matter how strong the earthquake is, if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up, we must be able to overcome any difficulties.二、環(huán)保問(wèn)題

★ 范文05.環(huán)境問(wèn)題今天環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕,環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作,學(xué)習(xí),生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重??,如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect our environment? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問(wèn)題:1.水污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重；2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重；3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重；4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境?至少：3至4個(gè)方面。How to protect/save our environment/world? As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted;we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down;some animals are getting less and less.Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky.The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People?s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution.It?s our duty to protect our environment.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.Trees are very helpful and important for us.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.限塑令

★ 范文06.有關(guān)限塑令問(wèn)題

根據(jù)國(guó)務(wù)院發(fā)布的“限塑令”，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商場(chǎng)實(shí)行塑料購(gòu)物袋有償使用制度，超市、商場(chǎng)一律不得免費(fèi)提供塑料購(gòu)物袋。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

現(xiàn)狀：目前中國(guó)每天消費(fèi)近30億個(gè)塑料袋，造成了嚴(yán)重的資源浪費(fèi)和環(huán)境污染；

限塑令的意義：減少塑料袋使用量，提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)；

提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜籃子。

參考詞匯：禁令 ban 意識(shí) awareness 提倡 advocate The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role.In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1.I agree with the rule, which people can?t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets.It advocates people to use their cloth bags and baskets.It?s good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop using the plastic bags, and to use our own cloth bags.I hope we can take care of our environment.Let?s make our world more and more beautiful.★ 范文07.節(jié)約水是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任

As we know, water is very important to man, we can?t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.But some people don?t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And I think it?s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It?s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!Only in this way can we live happily.If we don?t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.低碳生活

★ 范文08.現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。

提示詞語(yǔ)：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it?s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we?d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.提出建議

學(xué)習(xí)★ 范文09.根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。

假如你叫Zhang Fang，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生Lucy的筆友，你收到了她的電子郵件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)她來(lái)信的內(nèi)

容寫一封回信。針對(duì)她的困惑，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑫r(shí)提出一些建議，并表達(dá)對(duì)她的祝愿。

Dear Zhang Fang，I have been in this school for two years.My school?s not too bad.But I haven’t got used to it.Some of the teachers are very good, especially my science teachers.They try to make lessons interesting.I like to have their classes and spend much time on it.So I usually get A in science exams.But I don?t like having English and history classes.There are too many things to memorize and they’re so boring.Besides, it seems that the teachers can only read again and again.They don?t try to make lessons interesting.Whenever the lessons start, I feel sleepy.I often get C in the exams, sometimes D.The final exam of this term is coming.What shall I do? Could you give me some advice? Yours，Lucy Dear Lucy，I’m very happy to hear from you.Don’t worry too much.Many students have the same problem like you.I think it?s very common for students to dislike memorizing.Here’s my advice.But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think.If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons.It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class.Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers? questions.It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly.What?s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class.If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help.I really hope my advice can help you out and get A in English and history exams.Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.Yours, Zhang Fang.生活 ★ 范文10.假如你是韓梅，下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發(fā)來(lái)的e-mail, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信。與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。

提示詞語(yǔ)：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

Dear Han Mei , I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” And so on.I’m annoyed(煩惱).What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?

Alice Dear Alice，as a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get on/ along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.I'm sure your mum loves you very much.Maybe it shows your mother?s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother?s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you?re thinking about.If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Han Mei

娛樂(lè) ★ 范文11.根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)）。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

75.中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)、大力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约骸榇耍煌耐瑢W(xué)有不同的放松方式，有的愛看電視，有的聽音樂(lè)，有的做運(yùn)動(dòng)?請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀阃ㄟ^(guò)哪些方式放松自己并說(shuō)說(shuō)原因，談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｌ崾驹~語(yǔ)：relax, TV, music, think The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming.In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little.Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways---Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me I enjoy taking exercise most.Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour(in)walking or jogging in the park.Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class.In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies.I think it?s really helpful to both my health and my study.I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed.I wish you all every success in the coming examination！

運(yùn)動(dòng) ★ 范文12.假如你叫李飛，是學(xué)校“校園英語(yǔ)報(bào)”的編輯。你收到你同學(xué)張麗的姐姐的來(lái)信。請(qǐng)根據(jù)這位姐姐的要求，給張麗寫一封回信。

Dear Editor，I am really worried about my sister, Zhang Li.She always watches TV or reads books in her free time.She doesn?t like going out to exercise.I?m afraid that she will be not strong enough.Could you write to her to tell her the importance of doing exercise and give her some advice?

A worried sister Dear Zhang Li，Your sister is worried about you very much.Because you don?t take any exercise in spare time.I think health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body.Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic.If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily.So you should go out instead of staying at home.There are many kinds of sports you can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.Just remember “Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.” Good luck!

Yours，Li Fei

多彩校園

學(xué)校簡(jiǎn)介

★ 范文13.在一次英語(yǔ)班會(huì)上，老師請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以Proud of My School 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括學(xué)校面貌，你在校的活動(dòng)，以及你喜歡學(xué)校的原因。提示詞：bigsmall, trees, play games, family, be kind to, befeel proud of Proud of my school My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.8 My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes.I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis.I love my school because it?s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I'm leaving my school.I'll never forget the days I've spent here.友情至上

★ 范文14.假設(shè)你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你與同學(xué)們?cè)谝黄饘W(xué)習(xí)、參加各種活動(dòng)，相互幫助，彼此之間建立了深厚的友誼.校園網(wǎng)的英語(yǔ)論壇開辟了 “Thank you letter” 專欄.請(qǐng)按下面的要求給你的同學(xué)Ling Feng寫一封感謝信.注意：1.這封信要表達(dá)你對(duì)Ling Feng的感謝；2.信中要簡(jiǎn)述感謝Ling Feng的原因，適當(dāng)舉例，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺埽惶崾驹~語(yǔ)：thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help? with, stay in touch Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week.When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help, I didn?t fall behind others.Since then, we have become very close friends.I think I?ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools, I?ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.Yours, Liu Yan

課余活動(dòng) ★ 范文15.體育鍛煉與參加夏令營(yíng)

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week, some do less than one hour.As for me, most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it?s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it?s good for our health and study.And I?d

love to take part in the summer camp.First we?d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums, places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it?s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we?re in the same world.At the same time, the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì) ★ 范文16.一家英文報(bào)社正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你積極參加.題目是“一次難忘的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)”.內(nèi)容要求：你或你的朋友參加了什么項(xiàng)目，結(jié)果怎樣，感覺如何？提示詞語(yǔ)：year, take part in, field event(relay race, high jump, long jump, shot put, excited, take the first prize.This year, I took part in the relay race, I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began, everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn, I could feel the Class 4?s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster, finally, our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my class.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.畢業(yè)感想 ★ 范文17.初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過(guò)和事后你的感想（請(qǐng)不要寫出真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱以及真實(shí)姓名）。

提示詞供參考。three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years? life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I?m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.★ 范文18.2008年政府取消了“五一”黃金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢復(fù)7天的長(zhǎng)假.同學(xué)們也在校園網(wǎng)的“自由論壇”上展開了激烈的討論.請(qǐng)你選用下面表格所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談?wù)劵謴?fù)長(zhǎng)假的利與弊，并簡(jiǎn)述你的觀點(diǎn)，給出一至兩條理由.Advantages Disadvantages have a good rest spend more time …with … … cause a lot of trouble… be crowded everywhere… … In 2008, May golden week was canceled, but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew May golden week or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important.Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family.Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However, other people hold the opposite view.They think it causes a lot of problems.It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student, I prefer a 7-day holiday.Not only can I sleep well and do exercise, but also I can read some interesting books.How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then!

公共規(guī)則 ★ 范文19.It?s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places.Everyone should obey the rules.Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude.Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable.We should stand in line when we are waiting for the bus.Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones.We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely.Especially, we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus.I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life.Please cherish the public property.使用手機(jī) ★ 范文20.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)

贊成意見：1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì)，手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)。如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。3.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。4.只要正確使用好手機(jī)，緊跟時(shí)間并無(wú)過(guò)錯(cuò)，追求時(shí)尚可以理解，但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。反對(duì)意見：1.學(xué)校已提供了公共電話，因此手機(jī)并不能帶來(lái)更多的方便，而且花費(fèi)較多。2.若課堂接聽手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課。3.學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone.But some people do not think so.They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study.And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed.In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there?s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There?re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we?re tired of our studies.In my opinion, it?s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲 ★ 范文21.沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲

題目：李小虎沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢？ 請(qǐng)用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇短文。

提示詞：

give up

concentrate on

be(become)interested in Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.First, I think it?s very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.電視節(jié)目 ★ 范文22.As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life.It's quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers.It is an important tool to spread culture and information, including foreign languages.And we can learn much knowledge from TV which we can?t get from books.What?s more, good TV programs can keep us wise and healthy.With TV, children can grow up happily.So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV.But watching TV too long is not good.Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study.So we should take a correct attitude to students watching TV.六、飲食與健康

飲食安全 ★ 范文23.假如你是一所國(guó)際學(xué)校校辦英文雜志的學(xué)生編輯.你看了下面這封信后，也想寫一篇關(guān)于該信的讀后感，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你對(duì)此事件的看法；解釋你的理由并提出你的建議；向受害者表達(dá)盡快康復(fù)的祝愿.Today, I received the reader's letter.I was shocked at it.Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety.The government must make some necessary laws.What's more, some businessmen shouldn't be only interested in making money.They must care about people's health.We'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.減肥問(wèn)題 ★ 范文24.假設(shè)你是《21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)》“heart to heart”專欄的編輯.下面是你收到的一位中學(xué)生的來(lái)信.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他來(lái)信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信.針對(duì)他的問(wèn)題 Dear Xiaowei，Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere.So I don?t think you have much to worry about.Here are my suggestions.Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.Also, when you are free, you?d better do more exercise.Running is great.You don?t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball.I?m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight.I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies.“Believe myself, and I will win.” It?s really important for us when we meet difficulties.Don?t lose heart;I?m sure you will succeed one day.Good luck.Editor

中國(guó)城市與傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日

介紹首都北京 ★ 范文25.請(qǐng)你閱讀你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Tommy的e-mail，根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信.Dear Li Lei，I haven't heard from you for a long time.I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation.It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games.I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Tommy

Dear Tommy, I’m glad to know you will come to Beijing.Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world.There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall.All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world.Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.Now, people pay more attention to the environment.More trees and flowers have been planted.For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built.If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful.What's more, a lot of people can speak English.Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.I'm looking

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon.Yours, Li Lei

中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日 ★ 范文26.根據(jù)中文大意和英語(yǔ)提示詞語(yǔ)，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞供選用。注意：不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。

假設(shè)你是劉偉，你的美國(guó)朋友MIKE 想通過(guò)你了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，給Mike 寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日春節(jié)的情況。

內(nèi)容提示：1.春節(jié)是中國(guó)最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；2.春節(jié)期間人們的主要活動(dòng)（節(jié)前、除夕、節(jié)日期間）Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money Dear Mike, How are you? I?m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on.I?d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses.They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.They decorate their houses with paper cuts.On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals.Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the new year.During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people.People visit their relatives and friends.They wish each a happy year and good luck.How happy we are.Best wishes!Yours, Liu Wei

名言警句

01.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧.02.Time is money.時(shí)間就是金錢 03.Easier said than done.說(shuō)來(lái)容易做來(lái)難 04.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成.05.Look before you leap.三思而后行.06.Knowledge is power.知識(shí)就是力量 07.God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助.08.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿，無(wú)事不成 09.It?s never too old to learn.活到老，學(xué)到老 10.No pains, no gains.不勞無(wú)獲 11.Once in a blue moon.千載難逢 12.To make the impossible possible.將不可能變?yōu)榭赡?13.Failure is the mother of success.失敗乃成功之母 14.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情 15.First things first.先做重要之事 16.Great minds think alike.英雄所見略同 17.Rome was not built in a day.成功并非一朝一夕的事 18.All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子 19.East or west, home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩 20.Time and tide wait for no man.時(shí)間不等人

21.There is but a secret to success—Never give up!成功只有一個(gè)秘訣—永不放棄！22.Where there is life, there is hope.有生命必有希望 23.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃 24.Better late than never.遲做總比不做好 25.Every little helps.點(diǎn)滴都有用；積少成多 26.The shortest answer is doing.最簡(jiǎn)短的回答就是行動(dòng) 27.No news is good news.沒(méi)消息，就是好消息 28.Well begun, half done.好的開始是成功的一半 29.All for one, one for all.人人為我，我為人人 30.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，謬以千里 31.Facts speak louder than words.事實(shí)勝于雄辯 32.As the tree, so the fruit.種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆

33.To live is to learn;to learn is to better live.活著為了學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)為了更好的活著 34.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投

35.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只學(xué)習(xí)不玩耍聰明的孩子也變傻.八、書面表達(dá)的考點(diǎn)講解和訓(xùn)練

【考點(diǎn)掃描】

書面表達(dá)是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個(gè)重要組成部分。書面表達(dá)通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示作文。

無(wú)論是那一種書面表達(dá)形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無(wú)大、小寫和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，能達(dá)到交際目的。【名師解難】 一.訓(xùn)練方法

1.記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國(guó)有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩(shī)三百首，不會(huì)吟詩(shī)也會(huì)作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強(qiáng)的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來(lái)的語(yǔ)言根本不符合英語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對(duì)照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會(huì)中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語(yǔ)言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來(lái)，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。2.練。每練一篇書面表達(dá)題，都要真正學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時(shí)可以采用循序漸進(jìn)、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說(shuō)明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個(gè)詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時(shí)就能得心應(yīng)手。

二.應(yīng)試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意。《中考考試說(shuō)明》指出，書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？

就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：防止遺漏要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時(shí)要做到以下六個(gè)方面：

(1)避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1）語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。

2）主謂語(yǔ)要一致，主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動(dòng)作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法：

1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or? 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however? 3）表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that? 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result? 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that? 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as? 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking?

(6)不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

6.改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。3）語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。4）時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。5）標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。6）人稱是否用錯(cuò)。三.注意事項(xiàng)

書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來(lái)天的時(shí)間里要看十幾萬(wàn)考生的作文，工作量之大，時(shí)間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。【中考范例】 VII.書面表達(dá)

假如你叫張強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面美國(guó)朋友Bob的來(lái)信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫一篇語(yǔ)言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。 2.詞數(shù)：80左右。回信的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)地址和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Dear friend, I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I?m fifteen.I?m American.I live in New York. I am a middle school student.I?m good at math.It is very interesting.My favorite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs together.After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I?m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I?m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, Bob

Dear

Bob，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，Zhang Qiang

【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個(gè)步驟，我們來(lái)寫一下這篇書面表達(dá)。

1.審題目：通過(guò)審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強(qiáng)，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強(qiáng)自己的情況。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：根據(jù)來(lái)信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1、收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信；

2、愿意和對(duì)方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長(zhǎng)和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we?ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時(shí)態(tài)：收到來(lái)信用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，希望用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來(lái)寫。4.開頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob，I got your letter yesterday.I?m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I?m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I?m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I?m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang

6、改病句：認(rèn)真復(fù)查一邊，如有錯(cuò)誤，加以改正。

第三篇：中考英語(yǔ)作文注意事項(xiàng)

一、縱觀近年各地中考英語(yǔ)寫作題，題材一般是寫人、寫事、寫物、寫景、日記、書信、通知、便條等文體。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，不同的寫作題材，它的人物，時(shí)間，寫作的重點(diǎn)也是不盡相同的。下面結(jié)合一些常見的題型介紹一下寫作的注意事項(xiàng)以及寫作技巧。

1、以圖表提供情景的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要讀懂圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)、時(shí)間、編碼、序號(hào)以及相互間的變化關(guān)系，對(duì)所給的信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括、去粗取精；在寫作時(shí)目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性，尤其是圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)、時(shí)間等不得有誤。

2、以圖畫提供情景的作文應(yīng)以“看”為主，通過(guò)細(xì)心觀察圖中的人物、景物、文字、環(huán)境、數(shù)字等，弄清寫作的意圖，通過(guò)分析思考把握邏輯聯(lián)系，找出主題并借助所給的文字，把圖中的信息轉(zhuǎn)化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在圖畫的淺表，而要表達(dá)出提供情景的意圖和內(nèi)涵。

3、以提綱提供情景的作文。這種形式本身的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，重點(diǎn)也很突出，只要把各個(gè)提綱加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)。

4、以書信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解書信的格式，英文書信格式與中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信紙的右上角寫上寫信人的地址和日期，地址應(yīng)按從小到大的順序排列；

(2)、左邊頂格寫上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的話；(5)、寫信人簽名。信的內(nèi)容一定要按所給的要求寫，不要漏寫。

二、各地的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)略有差異，但是都包括以下幾個(gè)方面：整體印象、語(yǔ)言表達(dá)、詞數(shù)規(guī)定等幾方面內(nèi)容。我們?cè)趯懽髦幸M量避免扣分，爭(zhēng)取有加分點(diǎn)。當(dāng)然用英文寫作不同于用母語(yǔ)那樣得心應(yīng)手，常常會(huì)受到生詞、語(yǔ)法、慣用法的限制，只要同學(xué)們平時(shí)注意兩種語(yǔ)言的異同性，抓住寫作要點(diǎn)，也可妙筆生花。

1、為了保證文章層次分明、條理清楚，要把時(shí)間固定下來(lái)，如：記敘一件事要用過(guò)去時(shí)；寫經(jīng)常發(fā)生的事或?qū)θ宋锏拿鑼懀靡话悻F(xiàn)在時(shí)。整個(gè)文章中的人稱要一致，首尾呼應(yīng)，不要隨意改動(dòng)，以免造成誤解。

2、不要為了追求“一鳴驚人”而去找一些生冷的詞匯，對(duì)這些一知半解的詞你不會(huì)用，不知道如何搭配，結(jié)果可能適得其反，使文章顯的生硬、不協(xié)調(diào)，甚至錯(cuò)誤百出，所以要使用有把握的詞，避免不必要的失分。比如說(shuō)發(fā)生了一起意外事件，我們通常用“have an accident ”來(lái)表示，不要錯(cuò)誤的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，也是寫好英語(yǔ)作文的重要環(huán)節(jié)，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同學(xué)寫成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，” “to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”則表示“成為一名歌手”應(yīng)該用“be/become a singer”；又如“看書、看報(bào)”應(yīng)用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平時(shí)應(yīng)該注意不同語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，切忌望文生義或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同學(xué)因怕出錯(cuò)而只寫短句或簡(jiǎn)單句，寫出的文章過(guò)于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平時(shí)學(xué)的知識(shí)用進(jìn)去，如：定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和比較等句型，關(guān)鍵時(shí)用上一、二個(gè)，就能使文章不同凡響，更有文采，特別是對(duì)關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，如“so that”、“not?but ”“not only...but also”等，會(huì)使你的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)緊密、層次鮮明、條理清楚，更能顯示出你的英文功底，但要做到這些并非一日之功，要靠平時(shí)的不斷訓(xùn)練和積累。

5、最簡(jiǎn)單的增分點(diǎn)就是認(rèn)真的書寫。工整漂亮的書寫會(huì)給評(píng)卷老師留下美好的第一印象，在扣分時(shí)自然會(huì)“手下留情”，而且很多地區(qū)都在寫作上有1分的書寫分。只要平時(shí)多下點(diǎn)功夫，得到這一分并不難。

三、最后將中考寫作的基本步驟和技巧歸納為以下幾個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)：

1、細(xì)心審題細(xì)讀題目中每一項(xiàng)提示或觀察所給的每一幅畫，明確文章的中心思想，弄清題意，確定寫作體裁，掌握所要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，做到心中有數(shù)，避免隨心所欲，文不對(duì)題。

2、理順要點(diǎn)在所給提示或圖上標(biāo)出要點(diǎn)，然后按事件先后的順序或各要點(diǎn)之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系排序，分出層次。如果是看圖作文，則要按圖構(gòu)思，這樣做既可避免要點(diǎn)遺漏，又可使表達(dá)內(nèi)容條理清楚。

3、構(gòu)成框架將理順的要點(diǎn)或每幅圖畫的含義加以連貫，構(gòu)成寫作的整體框架，進(jìn)一步定人稱、定時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)、定順序、定段落、定開頭結(jié)尾。基本框架構(gòu)成后，寫作就有了把握。

4、組織句子用自己最熟悉的短語(yǔ)或句型將理順的要點(diǎn)逐句表達(dá)出來(lái)，多用簡(jiǎn)單句，用有把握的復(fù)合句。要揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，避難就易。若遇到表達(dá)障礙，可換一種說(shuō)法，將一句變成兩、三句，只求達(dá)意。

5、串句成篇將寫好的句子連貫地組織起來(lái)，注意上下句的邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)采用遞進(jìn)、讓步、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，使短文渾然一體，層次分明，過(guò)渡自然。

6、檢查修改文章草成后，默讀1～2遍，檢查修改，尤其要注意人稱、大小寫、拼寫、習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)、格式有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，要點(diǎn)有無(wú)遺漏，文句有無(wú)語(yǔ)病，詞數(shù)是否恰當(dāng)，行文是否連貫。

英語(yǔ)寫作水平的提高是一個(gè)漸進(jìn)的過(guò)程，只要同學(xué)們?cè)谄綍r(shí)多加訓(xùn)練，多讀文章，做一個(gè)有心人，就能在中考作文中取得理想的成績(jī)。

第四篇：中考英語(yǔ)注意事項(xiàng)

中考英語(yǔ)注意事項(xiàng)

一、書面表達(dá)（英語(yǔ)寫作）書面表達(dá)現(xiàn)在是英語(yǔ)考試中的一個(gè)重要題目，用英文寫作不同于用母語(yǔ)那樣得心應(yīng)手，常常會(huì)受到生詞、語(yǔ)法、慣用法的限制，但只要同學(xué)們平時(shí)注意兩種語(yǔ)言的異同性，抓住寫作要點(diǎn)，也可妙筆生花。

英語(yǔ)寫作的通常有三種類型：看圖，書信和提綱作文。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該注意以

下幾點(diǎn)：

1、為了保證文章層次分明、條理清楚，要把時(shí)間固定下來(lái)。記敘一件事要用過(guò)去時(shí)；寫經(jīng)常發(fā)生的事或?qū)θ宋锏拿鑼懀靡话悻F(xiàn)在時(shí)。整個(gè)文章中的人稱要一致，首尾呼應(yīng)。

2、不要為了追求“一鳴驚人”而不愿使用熟悉的常用詞，去找一些生冷的詞匯，對(duì)這些一知半解的詞你不會(huì)用，不知道如何搭配，結(jié)果適得其反，使文章

顯的生硬、不協(xié)調(diào)，甚至錯(cuò)誤百出。

3、注意不同語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，也是寫好英語(yǔ)作文的重要環(huán)節(jié)，不要望文生義

或一味生搬硬套，只會(huì)鬧出笑話。

4、特別要注意書寫、字?jǐn)?shù)。在有把握的情況下，學(xué)會(huì)用一些優(yōu)美的句子。不一定多用，少用有時(shí)也能起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用，不要因噎廢食，因怕出錯(cuò)而只寫短句或簡(jiǎn)單句，寫出的文章過(guò)于幼稚、空洞貧泛、言之無(wú)物，要使文章有血有肉就要把平時(shí)學(xué)的知識(shí)用進(jìn)去，關(guān)鍵時(shí)用上一、二個(gè)，就能使文章不同凡響，更有文采，特別是對(duì)關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，會(huì)使你的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)緊密、層次鮮明、條理清楚，更能顯示出你的英文功底。

二、聽力 聽力題一般包括五個(gè)題型，即聽句選圖；聽錄音選擇正確答語(yǔ)；根據(jù)對(duì)話內(nèi)容，選擇最佳答案；根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，判斷正誤或選擇正確答案； 聽

短文填空。

做聽力題時(shí)歸納起來(lái)應(yīng)該注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1、要有良好的心理準(zhǔn)備，克服焦慮情緒，注意力集中，沉著鎮(zhèn)定。

2、要會(huì)利用試題間隔的時(shí)間，迅速瀏覽各題的供選項(xiàng)，抓住細(xì)節(jié)，排除干

擾，強(qiáng)化記憶，積極預(yù)測(cè)，大膽推理。

3、要養(yǎng)成邊聽邊記的習(xí)慣，尤其是一些細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題，如：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、起因，結(jié)果，年齡、價(jià)格和一些數(shù)據(jù)等等。

4、注重對(duì)話或短文的整體理解。不要因?yàn)閭€(gè)別單詞沒(méi)有聽清楚而糾纏，影

響進(jìn)度、影響情緒。

5、大多數(shù)聽力材料均聽兩遍，聽第一遍時(shí)側(cè)重整體理解；聽第二遍后才選

擇答案也不遲。不要匆忙下筆。

6、在修改答案時(shí)，要慎之又慎，沒(méi)有絕對(duì)的把握不要修改，最初的選擇往

往是正確的三、完型填空 英語(yǔ)完型填空題一般有兩種，一是考詞法，二是考句法。

做完型填空應(yīng)該注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1、適用是做好填詞的前提，要從全文的內(nèi)容出發(fā)，前后上下聯(lián)系起來(lái)考慮，避免只見樹木不見森林的錯(cuò)誤。

2、要善于從中同樣結(jié)構(gòu)或類似結(jié)構(gòu)中尋找線索，從中得到提示或啟發(fā)，幫

助確定應(yīng)填的詞形或詞性，避免想當(dāng)然地隨意亂填。

3、填詞一定要注意，給你名詞時(shí)，有可能是名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；給你的形容詞或副詞，應(yīng)考慮比較等級(jí)；若填動(dòng)詞，要注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)；如果是介詞或連詞，除考慮上下文內(nèi)容外，還要注意和其他 固定搭配和習(xí)慣用法；開

頭時(shí)還要注意大寫。

四、閱讀理解

(一)直接理解性題目：這種題目比較簡(jiǎn)單，只要通讀全文，理解大意，即可

答題

(二)語(yǔ)義理解性題目：題目要求對(duì)文中個(gè)別難詞、關(guān)鍵詞、詞組或句子作出解釋。解答這類題目時(shí)需要對(duì)有關(guān)的上下文，甚至整篇文章的內(nèi)容建立準(zhǔn)確、立體的理解才能做出正確答案。

(三)邏輯推理性題目：這種題目有一定難度，往往不能直接從文中找到答案，而必須根據(jù)上下文及其相互間的關(guān)系或?qū)φ恼逻M(jìn)行深層理解后，才能找到答案。有時(shí)甚至還得聯(lián)系作者的意圖、態(tài)度等弦外之音、文外之意加以推

理，才能獲得正確答案。

(四)歸納概括性題目：要求在閱讀和理解全文的基礎(chǔ)上對(duì)文章作出歸納、概括或評(píng)價(jià)。解這種題目時(shí)，不能只憑文中的只言片語(yǔ)而斷章取義，比如涉及文章的標(biāo)題(title)、主題(mainidea)、結(jié)論(conclusion)、結(jié)局(end)等有關(guān)問(wèn)題，都需要在細(xì)讀全文的基礎(chǔ)上，結(jié)合所學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)、背景知識(shí)、生活常識(shí)、專業(yè)

知識(shí)進(jìn)行邏輯思維推理判斷，從而獲取文章中內(nèi)隱的信息

五、單項(xiàng)選擇 單項(xiàng)選擇是一種容量大、考查面廣的題型。它可集中考查詞法、句法、語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。因此在各級(jí)各類考試中，單項(xiàng)選擇是必不可少的題型。

要做好單項(xiàng)選擇題，首先必須熟練掌握句型、固定搭配、習(xí)慣用法、語(yǔ)法等方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。還應(yīng)該了解一些解題技巧，提高解題的綜合能力。解答單項(xiàng)選擇題，一般要經(jīng)過(guò)四個(gè)階段 :閱讀審題——觀察分析——選擇判

斷——復(fù)查驗(yàn)證。

做選擇這樣的題一般都會(huì)提到六種方法：直接法，關(guān)鍵詞法，類推法，前后照應(yīng)法，排除法和交際法。而在這我說(shuō)一說(shuō)特別情況的答題方法。

1、暗示。有的題目，我們從中就可以找到其暗示的答語(yǔ)。如：

---_______ do you go to cinema?

---Twice a month.2、思維定式。英語(yǔ)中有些看似固定的搭配，但不能有時(shí)候我們?cè)谧?/p>

題時(shí)不能老用這種思維定式。

1）There are a lot ________ people today than yesterday.A.ofB.mostC./D.more

2)Shanghai if larger than _______ city in France.(China)

A.anyB.any other

3)______ of the twins is in my class.A.TallerB.The taller3、習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)，排除母語(yǔ)干擾

---Your coat is very beautiful.---_______.A.Yes.B.No.C.Thank you.4、特殊語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象

1)He will ring you up as soon as he ______there tomorrow.A.will getB.getC.getsD.got

2)He told us that the sun ______ in the east.A.roseB.riseC.risesD.will rise5、其它學(xué)科的影響

The PLA was founded ______.A.on Aug.1,1927B.1927,Aug.1C.in Aug.1,19276、方位

in ,on ,to7、年和錢做主語(yǔ)，按單數(shù)

Ten years is a short time, so you have to study hard.8、there be

明天有一個(gè)會(huì)議。

There is going go have a meeting tomorrow.9、習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)

be busy doing(finish, practice,feel like,be used to …..)

look forward to doing

make a contribution to doing

第五篇：中考上海英語(yǔ)作文總結(jié)

上海中考英語(yǔ)作文總結(jié)

縱觀2001—2010年上海中考英語(yǔ)試卷，書面表達(dá)試題的樣式大體可以分為兩種類型：

一、主觀性命題；

二、半主觀性命題。字?jǐn)?shù)要求方面從03年開始由原來(lái)的50個(gè)單詞變成60個(gè)單詞左右。

一、主觀性命題

主觀性命題是指試題的要求中有簡(jiǎn)單的寫作要求但是沒(méi)有詳細(xì)的寫作提示，要求考生根據(jù)要求自己確定寫作中心和內(nèi)容的書面表達(dá)形式。

主觀性命題的書面表達(dá)特點(diǎn)：1.試題中有簡(jiǎn)單的寫作要求；2.沒(méi)有具體的中文或英文提示，文章的中心內(nèi)容的確定帶有主觀性。比如說(shuō)上海2007年的中考英語(yǔ)作文題目是：以“爸爸/媽媽的故事”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。

本試題中只有簡(jiǎn)單的寫作要求：以“爸爸/媽媽的故事”為題，只給出了作文題目，沒(méi)有相關(guān)的內(nèi)容提示，屬于典型的主觀類書面表達(dá)。做這類題的時(shí)候一定要從題目要求出發(fā)，通過(guò)主觀想象寫出符合題目要求的內(nèi)容，對(duì)于英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)薄弱的學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，可以先用漢語(yǔ)構(gòu)思。比如上面的書面表達(dá)就可以根據(jù)題目要求從以下幾個(gè)方面構(gòu)思：

1）寫媽媽的故事，確定文章的主人公；

2）媽媽的家庭：有5個(gè)兄弟姐妹，爸爸是農(nóng)村的醫(yī)生，媽媽只是一個(gè)普通的工人；

3）媽媽的童年：由于當(dāng)時(shí)的時(shí)代跟現(xiàn)在不同，家里沒(méi)有電視，沒(méi)有電腦，媽媽每天下午放學(xué)都要跟姐姐弟弟幫他們的媽媽做家務(wù)，比如洗衣服，做飯；雖然艱苦，但是很快樂(lè)。

用漢語(yǔ)構(gòu)思完文章大致內(nèi)容后就把自己的漢語(yǔ)翻譯成英語(yǔ)：

1）A Story about My Parent;2)In mum’s family, there were seven people: mum’s parents, mum’s two brothers and two sisters and mum.When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker;3)At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to help their mother with the housework.For example, they helped to make supper or wash clothes.Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.完成翻譯工作后用一定的連接詞將以上內(nèi)容連接起來(lái),最終成文：

A Story about My Parent My mum was born in a small village.In her family, there were seven people: mum’s parents, mum’s two brothers and two sisters and mum.When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker.At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework.For example, they help to make supper or wash clothes.Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.二、半主觀性命題

半主觀性命題是指試題的要求中有詳細(xì)的寫作要求和寫作提示，提示包括中英文兩種，而這些寫作提示其實(shí)就是該書面表達(dá)的核心內(nèi)容即該書面表達(dá)的核心得分點(diǎn)。但是這些提示內(nèi)容往往都比較零散，需要學(xué)生加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡句或承接詞，經(jīng)過(guò)整理后才能成為完整的書面表達(dá)形式。

半主觀性，命題的書面表達(dá)特點(diǎn)：1）文章的內(nèi)容或者結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的限制，這些是客觀規(guī)定的；2）學(xué)生在組織文章的過(guò)程中需要加入一些必要的過(guò)渡句或承接詞，這些是主觀的。縱觀近十年的中考英語(yǔ)真題，上海中考英語(yǔ)作文試題大部分都是半主觀性命題，只有01和07年時(shí)主觀性命題，其他都是半主觀性命題。相對(duì)于主觀性命題而言，半主觀性命題會(huì)稍顯有點(diǎn)難度，因?yàn)槲恼碌母袷交蛘邇?nèi)容都是固定的，學(xué)生只需將中文轉(zhuǎn)換成英文，再加以必要的過(guò)渡詞或承接詞，倘若學(xué)生在審題的時(shí)候沒(méi)注意到這一點(diǎn)的話很有可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)跑題的現(xiàn)象。因此做這類題的時(shí)候一定要審好題再做題。比如說(shuō)上海2002年的中考英語(yǔ)作文題目是：根據(jù)英文提示，以“我的心愛之物”為題寫作，不少于50個(gè)詞。內(nèi)容必須包括英文提示中的3項(xiàng)要求，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格：

Make sure you 1.Introduce what the thing(s)is(are).2.Say when and / or where, and how you got it(them)3.Explain why you like it(them)and why it is(they are)special to you.這是一道典型的半主觀性命題，此題的要求中對(duì)該書面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)做了詳細(xì)的客觀規(guī)定主要包括：

1． 題目：My Favorite Thing(s)2． 文章必須包括一下三點(diǎn)：

What the thing(s)is(are)When and / or where, and how you got if(them)Why you like it(them)and why it is(they are)special to you 3． 字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求

以上這些客觀規(guī)定的內(nèi)容即文章的核心得分點(diǎn)，接下來(lái)的任務(wù)就是要將這些核心得分點(diǎn)寫入到文章中并加之必要的過(guò)度句或承接詞,最終成正文：

My Favorite Thing

I have many small things in my home such as stamps, toys.But among those things, my favorite thing is a green watch.It is a digital watch with a duck on the bottom of it.And it is my birthday present given by my best friend.I got it on my 12th birthday.I like it very much because I can read time since then.Because it was the present given by my best friend, it is very special to me.在做中考英語(yǔ)作文的時(shí)候一定要謹(jǐn)記，文章寫完后要檢查有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法上的錯(cuò)誤，注意單三變化，主謂一致。中考作文并不難，只要平時(shí)多注意積累，多做練習(xí)，相信同學(xué)們一定會(huì)有所收獲。