第一篇：托福寫作：總結(jié)性陳詞該怎么寫

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托福寫作：總結(jié)性陳詞該怎么寫

中學(xué)語文那句經(jīng)典的“龍頭、鳳尾、豬肚子”。首先*段陳述問題，并且在*段最后一句話亮出自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后第二三四段分別給出自己的論點(diǎn)，并且舉出具體的例子進(jìn)行支持，最后一段總結(jié)性陳詞即可，這都是很簡單的。但是這就夠了么？比如說2012年9月2日獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Competition with friends usually have negative effect on friendship？我是該支持還是反對？

2012年8月26日獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree？Parents shoud let their children make mistakes and learn from their own mistake.我的觀點(diǎn)

該怎么寫呢？

2012年8月25日獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree with that The pinions of celebrities, such as entertainer, athlete, are more important to younger people than they are to the older people.舉一個(gè)中立觀點(diǎn)行不行呢？ 當(dāng)看到這些的時(shí)候，我們又不禁看看水中的自己，投下一枚石子掃破那滿月的影

子，告訴自己，別在這拿竹籃打水了。

很多考友其實(shí)面臨的最為頭痛的問題，就是沒有一個(gè)具體的寫作方向，寫出來的內(nèi)容都是從國家、人民、隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，社會進(jìn)步的陳詞濫調(diào)來寫的。但是反過來，考友馬上會問，如果不這么寫，那么到底該怎么寫呢？

其實(shí)我們不妨想一想好萊塢的電影，我們喜歡看蝙蝠俠，一方面是因?yàn)樗邘浉唬橇硗庖环矫嬉彩且驗(yàn)樗锓稣x，不是么？！請注意，我們這里的用詞“高帥富”和“匡扶正義”，其實(shí)都是很抽象的詞，但是很顯然，《蝙蝠俠》這部電三立教育www.tmdps.cn

影并沒有不停在屏幕上飄著字幕“蝙蝠俠是高帥富，蝙蝠俠在匡扶正義”，在電影里，他們是依靠很多的細(xì)節(jié)來支撐的“高帥富”和“匡扶正義”這幾個(gè)字的。怎么能顯示出蝙蝠俠的高帥富呢？顯然他的摩托車，車前加裝了2管加農(nóng)炮、2管重機(jī)槍與2支鉤索槍就是一個(gè)很好的例子。再比如蝙蝠俠在歌譚市市中心，最奢華地區(qū)的，占地10英畝的4層城堡，也是一個(gè)很好的例子。當(dāng)然，這里細(xì)節(jié)性信息“歌譚市市中心，最奢華地區(qū)的，占地10英畝的4層”雖然都是無老師編的，但是這些細(xì)節(jié)性信息都會讓人覺得蝙蝠俠是一位純正的高帥富，不是么？托福作文要往哪個(gè)方向?qū)懀烤褪且蜻@些自圓其說的方向來寫！

那么再來想怎么表現(xiàn)“匡扶正義”呢？*個(gè)就是為了不禍及歌譚市市民，因此重金建造的核聚變反應(yīng)堆，堅(jiān)決不啟動，使得自己整個(gè)公司的利潤從50%降低到了2%。然后第二點(diǎn)，最后為了把已經(jīng)變成中子彈的反應(yīng)堆銷毀，因此冒著使自己從此灰飛煙滅的危險(xiǎn)，駕駛著飛行器，飛到了30公里之外的海面讓中子彈爆炸，這都是很具體的例子，換句話說，其實(shí)就是要大處落筆，小處著手，亮出自己的觀點(diǎn)之

后，馬上用具體的例子進(jìn)行支撐。

但是實(shí)際上在寫的時(shí)候，先想出觀點(diǎn)是很難的，那么我們完全可以反其道而行之，先想例子，然后再提煉出自己的觀點(diǎn)。比如說2012年9月2日獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Competition with friends usually have negative effect on friendship？林丹與李宗韋兩大頂尖高手的爭鋒，絲毫沒有影響他們的友情，只會令他們惺惺相惜。喬布斯與比爾蓋茨一直在競爭，比爾蓋茨在個(gè)人PC獨(dú)領(lǐng)風(fēng)騷，但是喬布斯的蘋果手機(jī)有了自己的天下，這就是開創(chuàng)了新的領(lǐng)域。

顯然這里，我們就會給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，不會損害友情，*，可以令他們惺惺相惜，三立教育www.tmdps.cn

第二互相促進(jìn)，打下自己的天下。然后給出兩個(gè)完美的例子。

2012年8月26日獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree？Parents shoud let their children make mistakes and learn from their own mistake.我的觀點(diǎn)該怎么寫呢？首先想林丹在小時(shí)候練習(xí)的時(shí)候，一定無數(shù)次的犯錯，長大之后甚至因?yàn)橥速惐涣P，但是仍然得到世界冠軍。喬布斯，選擇大學(xué)退學(xué)，但是卻因?yàn)橥瑫r(shí)劍修美術(shù)，因此有了蘋果電腦上漂亮的serif字體。

這里我們就可以寫：1 從自己的錯誤之中，會慢慢知道正確的路是怎樣的，最后取得了成功。2 雖然犯了錯誤，但是得到了其他，別人學(xué)不到的東西，因此創(chuàng)造

了非凡的成就。

再比如2012年8月25日獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree with that The opinions of celebrities, such as entertainer, athlete, are more important to younger people than they are to the older people.1 因?yàn)轳R丁路德金的演講，我相信人人平等，我與家人是平等的，我尊重路人，那么我也應(yīng)該尊重我的父母。2 因?yàn)殁壮螒c在《中國好聲音》上告訴王韻壹要相信自己，因

此我看到了王韻壹從此一路高歌。

這里我們就可以寫：1 名人會給我們更多地觸動，雖然我的父母要求我聽話，但是我很任性的，馬丁路德金使我注意到我們有時(shí)對待路人太熱情，對待家人太冷漠。2 名人的肯定會給人更大的信心，尤其是**的意見更有專業(yè)性，因此會影響

力更大。

這其實(shí)都是占據(jù)我們眼球的新聞，以及我們耳熟能詳里的故事，這里的一個(gè)很重要的訣竅就是，先去想例子，從例子提煉觀點(diǎn)，如果我們單獨(dú)的想觀點(diǎn)，就只能陷在假大空的深淵中越陷越深。這時(shí)候，退一步，海闊天空，想想我們每天看什三立教育www.tmdps.cn

么新聞，聽什么故事，其實(shí)我們的理由很多很多。不是我們想不到例子，想不到觀點(diǎn)，而是我們沒有真的挖掘自己的腦子，我們十幾年來沒有真的思考過。

第二篇：托福寫作

Agree or disagree A university should focus more on its facilities, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers

Nowadays, highly education has been attached more important than before.A argue that school facilities should pay more attention than professor lecture.From my perspective, although such hardware like computer centers and science lab provide some benefits to university students, university depends on quality of stuff.Admittedly, a school equipped with great facilities is more appealing the applicants.The reason is that it can make study easier.A bright library offers such a quiet condition for knowledge absorption;a computer center provides a self-govern ways to study;a science lab make student get more practice about miracles.However, this factors become less considerate when it comes to the quality of the professors.For one thing, not only do famous teachers can impart the knowledge, but instill the angle that to solve the problem.To pass on knowledge, a human is no better than a machine or a high-tech tool.The difference lies in the

special ways to get the solutions and the potential inspiration by the former.Take my favorite teacher for example, she often shows us some different way to solve the difficulties.And then she tells us the angle to work out the problem.As for me, it was not until her explanation, that I know about the easier way to work the problem.That is something that high-tech can barely achieve.For another, universities with qualified teachers tend to have higher graduate employment.It is not hard to imagine that a teacher with connections can bring more opportunity to get internship.As an old saying goes, knowledge starts with practice.It is still true now.Students who swamped in labs, would never face the brutal fact that you need a window for people to see what you’ve got.In this way, a well-connect professor can open that for you, instead of lifeless labs.In conclusion, though facilities could promote learning, but it fail to generate more practical merits to students.Recruit more qualified teacher should be paid more attention and stress.

第三篇：托福寫作欣賞

托福寫作范文欣賞：a new university in your community

摘要：新托福考試寫作如果考生想拿高分，腦子里一定要有幾篇文章，背上幾篇范文，能以備不時(shí)只需。托福寫作是中國考生的弱項(xiàng)，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中的邏輯思

新托福考試寫作如果考生想拿高分，腦子里一定要有幾篇文章，背上幾篇范文，能以備不時(shí)只需。托福寫作是中國考生的弱項(xiàng)，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中的邏輯思維，才可更好的進(jìn)行鍛煉。下面我們一起欣賞這篇托福寫作范文。

這篇托福獨(dú)立寫作滿分范文的主要內(nèi)容是討論了如果政府宣布計(jì)劃興建一所新的大學(xué)，而有些人認(rèn)為你所在的社區(qū)是個(gè)建大學(xué)的好地方，那么請你也對比一下在你所在的社區(qū)建新大學(xué)的好處和壞處。The government has announced that it plans to build a new university.Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.Use specific details in your discussion.①優(yōu)點(diǎn)：學(xué)生上學(xué)方便;促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)氐慕逃l(fā)展

②優(yōu)點(diǎn)：促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)禺a(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)展，提供就業(yè)崗位

③缺點(diǎn)：本區(qū)很多老人，將極大影響他們的生活，其他人的生活也不再安寧

④缺點(diǎn)：交通、環(huán)境問題轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng)-[Examw.Com]

My community is located in a quiet and small town with very

beautiful natural sceneries.The environment is very suitable for a new university.Everyone in my community would without doubt enjoy a sense of pride when informed that a new university will be built here.However, just as any other constructions, this action will bring many advantages as well as disadvantages to my community.The most essential and exciting advantage is that a new university will definitely enhance the education on all levels in my community.Usually, children living nearby a university would frequently visit or play in the university, and thus they can be unconsciously influenced by the academic environment.This influence might be more effective to them than any preach from their parents about the importance of studying.By building a new university, children in my community will develop a greater motivation for studying hard.Moreover, with a university located nearby, all the primary schools, middle schools will have a greater sense of competition.The teachers may encourage the students to work harder to get a university degree, since it would be very embarrassing that the students of their own community could not be admitted by the new university.Besides, a new university in my community will boom the local economy.As we all know, universities are always surrounded by a wide range of stores, restaurants and markets which provide services to the students and faculty.Thus it is very likely that the new university will

encourage the local residents to offer their services around the school.As a result, more people will be employed and the employment rate which bothers the government for years might eventually drop.However, with closer examination, the disadvantages of building a new university in my community could also be formidable.Since my community is far from the city, most of its residents are seniors.Even for the younger people living here, they prefer a quiet environment and are afraid of any major changes made to their lives.Therefore, the attention brought by a new university might be unbearable to these local people.To be specific, traffic will no doubt increase in the near future.With more cars and people on the roads, it is possible that the local environmental quality will decrease.If the air is no more clean, our community might lose its strongest attraction.Then current residents might feel quite reluctant to live here in the future.In sum, the advantages of building a new university in my community seems very promising, yet we have to consider the undesirable consequences it might bring about.The government should really be cautious and take all the possible factors into consideration before making such a decision.'

我們并不主張考生死記范文，考試時(shí)如果遇到類似題目照搬上去，這并不能考察考生的寫作能力。新托福考試寫作多背一些范文，可以積累一些素材，像好的短語、詞、句等，靈活運(yùn)用。

第四篇：托福寫作

Do you agree or disagree that university should spend money on improving facilities(labs and general requirements)rather than hiring famous teachers?

Nowadays it rarely surprises us any more that there are relatively large numbers of facilities such as labs and libraries in the campus of universities.However, hordes of people are likely to go to extremes to hold that the university should not spend that much money on improving facilities on account of the lack of fund.Perhaps there is a slice of credibility in their argument, but I, without hesitation, advocate that it’s really essential for the universities to improve facilities

Granted, it is true that by saving money from the investment of facilities, the universities may concentrate more on the development of curriculum and the welfare which is provided for the teachers and professors.The statistics from the Harvard University reveal, astonishingly, that 62.7% people suggest that the universities should not be too eager to develop the general requirements.However, they ignore the fact that these facilities provided by the universities will definitely benefit the students in more ways than one.First and foremost, what never seizes to enthrall me is that the facilities will build a great atmosphere for the people(mainly college students)to study and relax.If the university constructs a great library which stores up millions of books or more, it will surely appeal to lots of studious students and those who don’t have the opportunity to attend the university.So actually this kind of facilities benefits the whole society, so do labs and other general requirements.Also, facilities like a natatorium or a gym can provide the basic facilities for students to relax.As we all know, students suffer both from studying burden and everyday lives.They need a way to relax, and these facilities just happen to provide great opportunities to relieve and extenuate their pressure.Therefore, there is no denying that by spending money on improving facilities a university will, to a great extent, enrich the students’ knowledge and broaden their horizon and give them the chance to relax at the same time.Moreover, the reputation gained from various facilities exerts a considerable fascination on me.If a university has more facilities which can provide students with more privilege, it can surely attract more top students who want the best education.Also, a famous university with variety numbers of facilities can add to the prestige of the city, the province, even the country which it belongs to.A case concerns MIT, which is one of the most celebrated universities all over the world.It has gained a high reputation for its prominent labs and stat-of-the-art equipments which provide students with the remarkable experimental qualification.Also, it makes its city, Cambridge, better known by the people as a cosmopolitan, international and civilized conurbation.Accordingly, it is apparent that the variety of the universities will make itself more eminent, therefore making significant contribution to the prosperity of the region.In conclusion, it is true that the limitation on funding facilities will economize some manpower and material resources for a university, but in order to provide both the students andthe universities with a bright future, spending money on these general equipments should never be off the table by a university.

第五篇：大學(xué)生該 不該上早晚自習(xí)總結(jié)陳詞

尊敬的主席、評委及在坐的各位：

晚上好！

很高興今天在這與大家在此討論這頗具現(xiàn)實(shí)意義，而又與我們密切相關(guān)的話題。對此，我方觀點(diǎn)是：大學(xué)生應(yīng)該自覺上早晚自習(xí)。

首先讓我們來明確幾個(gè)概念。

1，大學(xué)生：在高等學(xué)校讀書的學(xué)生。其最基本的身份還是學(xué)生，學(xué)生最基本的任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)。

2，早晚自習(xí)：根據(jù)拆詞析意法：指早上或晚上自己進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)。

下面由我來陳述我方理由：

一，從大學(xué)生這一群體的特殊性來考慮：這群人，主要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)本領(lǐng)為以后就業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備.而早晚自習(xí)就是充分利用時(shí)間培養(yǎng)學(xué)生良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，提高專業(yè)技能與自學(xué)能力。學(xué)習(xí)，只是大學(xué)生活一部分，但如果連這一部分都征服不了，又何談其他。在這我們必須認(rèn)識到的是早晚自習(xí)，并不是一種束縛，自由和束縛是相對的，沒有一定的束縛和壓力你怎么知道自由，就是因?yàn)榻o了太多的自由，使現(xiàn)在的一部分大學(xué)生越來越頹廢！唐代著名書法家就曾說過：三更燈火五更雞,正是男兒發(fā)憤時(shí)。黑發(fā)不知勤學(xué)早,白首方悔讀書遲。

二，從早晚自習(xí)本身來說。它并不是單指聚在教師集體學(xué)習(xí)，更是包括寢室，圖書館，或是廣場的一角，這里都是學(xué)子汲取知識的課堂。“一年之計(jì)在于春，一天之計(jì)在于晨”利用早上黃金時(shí)間朗讀英語、預(yù)習(xí)課文，保證上課精神抖擻，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。而晚自習(xí)，消化鞏固知識，完善知識結(jié)構(gòu)。我們的計(jì)算機(jī)考試、普通話考試，英語考試，期末考試等諸多考試才能取得優(yōu)秀的成績。

三，上自習(xí)可以增加知識，鞏固知識，交流學(xué)習(xí)體會，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，正常而言經(jīng)常上晚自習(xí)的話考試不容易掛科。并且自習(xí)時(shí)間是一個(gè)很好的完成老師布置作業(yè)的地方，還能互相交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，不懂得題目互相請教，究竟有什么不好呢？對學(xué)生最重要的任務(wù)“學(xué)習(xí)”來說，當(dāng)然是百利無害的，對方辯友誰聽說過越上自習(xí)學(xué)習(xí)越差的情況呢？（稍微停頓）天降大任于斯人，必先苦其心志，勞其體膚,餓其體膚。曾益其所不能。何況區(qū)區(qū)早晚自習(xí)哉？

綜上所述：我方堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為，大學(xué)生應(yīng)該自覺早晚自習(xí)。我的陳述完畢。

謝謝。（彎腰鞠躬）