第一篇:英語作文輔導(dǎo)獎(jiǎng)
題目:My best Friend
扶溝縣秋實(shí)高級(jí)中學(xué)
三.3班陳軍宇輔導(dǎo)老師:王倩楠
My best Friend
Li Yan, my best friend, is my classmate.She has big eyes.Her long hair is often plained.Sweet smile is often on her face, makes her more lively.Li Yan is very clever.She is good at her school subjects.She has wonthe school scholarship twice, I always take her as my model in study.She tells me that we should make good use of time.Li Yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to helping others.Any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help.she doesn't like others to praise her, because she thinks what she did is ordinary.I feel proud to have such a friend.評(píng)語:本文第一段第二行中that改為which, 因?yàn)樵诖擞脀hich引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。
第二段第一行中has改為had, 因?yàn)閮纱潍@得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金應(yīng)該用過去完成時(shí)態(tài)。
第三段中helping 改為help, 因?yàn)橹暗膖o為動(dòng)詞不定式后應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞原形。
第三段第二行中so改為but, 因?yàn)槁?lián)系上下文句意在此應(yīng)表轉(zhuǎn)折。
本文簡(jiǎn)述我的一位最好的朋友李燕,從她的外貌,學(xué)習(xí)和人際交往方面展開描述。李燕不但長(zhǎng)的漂亮,而且學(xué)習(xí)優(yōu)秀,兩次獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金,是我學(xué)習(xí)的典范。另外她心地善良,非常樂于助人,為人謙虛謹(jǐn)慎。本文語句結(jié)構(gòu)精確且用詞精煉優(yōu)美,主題突出,不失一篇經(jīng)典之作。
第二篇:英語作文輔導(dǎo)
英語作文輔導(dǎo)
Planting Trees
It was fine on March 12,2001.I got up early that day.All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees.We arrived at the hill at eight o'clock.The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees.Then we started digging,planting and watering.We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e.Among us,Wang Lin,our monitor set a good example for us.Though he was ill,he worked harder.When he finished his task,he went on to help others without even a little rest.He was wet all over after work.“ I must learn from him,” I said to myself.Looking at the lines of the young trees,we smiled happily,forgetting our tiredness.2005年北京)根據(jù)中文大意,寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。
假設(shè)你叫王明,昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京來學(xué)習(xí)中文。他想了解如何學(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)一封e-mail,介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的體會(huì)和方法,提出你的建議,以及表達(dá)你幫助他學(xué)好中文的愿望。
Dear David,I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese.Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now.It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English.You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible.It's also important to do some reading and writing.You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening.Do your best to talk with people in Chinese.You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.If you have any questions, please ask me.I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Beijing.Yours,Wang Ming
根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語,寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給的英文提示詞語必須都用上;中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯;根據(jù)英文提示,每組所寫出的句數(shù)不限。(共12分)
幾年以前我家只有一間小屋。三個(gè)人住一間屋真是艱難。現(xiàn)在我們已經(jīng)搬進(jìn)了一套兩室一廳 的單元房。我非常高興。當(dāng)我父母做..., 我能...。我愛我的家。
1.a few years ago, family, have one small room
2.it, be, three people, in the same room
3.now, a new flat(單元房), one living room, two bedrooms
4.be happy, my homework, quietly, my own room, my parents
A few years ago, my family had only one small room.It was very hard for three people to live in the same room.Now we have moved into a new flat with one living room and two bedrooms.I'm very happy.I can do my homework quietly in my own room when my parents do the housework or other things.I love my home.中考英語作文:A Trip
I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way.One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn't move any further.Nobody knew what to do.One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area.Luckily we brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rest in it.He took some medicine.Then he drank some water, and ate some food.After a while, he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.中國(guó)加入 WTO 后,有一大批外國(guó)人來我市——河源參觀。假設(shè)你是導(dǎo)游,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,向外賓簡(jiǎn)單介紹我市的情況。
要求: 1.100 詞左右; 2.要點(diǎn)包括: a.有悠久的歷史,位于廣東的東北部,離廣州 198 公里,人口約 324 萬。b.有許多名勝古跡,如蘇家圍(Sujiawei);萬綠湖(WanluLake)等等;萬綠湖是一個(gè)很美麗的地方,湖水清澈,無污染;湖中有各種各樣的魚;你可以到那里劃船,野餐,釣魚,是度假的好去處。你也可以去參觀河源市博物館,在那里你可以看到許多恐龍化石(fossil)。c.祝大家在河源玩得愉快。Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you.Heyuan is a city with a long history.It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou.It has a population of 3,240,000.There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on.Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place.The water is clean and not polluted.There are all kinds of fish in it.You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there.It is really a good place to spend your holiday.Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum.There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.Thank you.中考英語作文素材:海報(bào)
時(shí)間:2008年04月21日作者:來源:
海報(bào)是一種帶有裝飾性的宣傳廣告。有時(shí)配以繪畫圖案。內(nèi)容以影訊、展覽、演出信息、友誼賽等為主。為了盡可能使更多的人知道,海報(bào)往往貼在醒目之處。
看例文:
請(qǐng)以學(xué)生會(huì)文體部的名義為一場(chǎng)籃球友誼賽寫一份海報(bào),內(nèi)容如下:
1.參加者:美國(guó)北地中學(xué)校隊(duì)和我校校隊(duì)
2.地點(diǎn):水泥球場(chǎng)
3.時(shí)間:2005年11月20日(星期天)下午4點(diǎn)
4.組織者:我院學(xué)生會(huì)文體部
5.海報(bào)發(fā)出時(shí)間:2005年11月14日
POSTER
Friendly Basketball Match
Under the auspices of the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students' Union of our school,a friendly basketball watch will be held between the visiting U.S.Northfield Team and ours on the cement basketball count on Sunday, November20th 2005 at 4:00 p.m.the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students' Union
November14th 2005
初中英語范文 Computers-電腦
時(shí)間:2008年10月27日作者:來源:英語作文網(wǎng)
電腦每天都在改變著我們的生活。我們可以在電腦上做很多事情。例如,我們可以寫文章,辦公,還可以玩游戲。但是最重要的是通過計(jì)算機(jī)上網(wǎng),我們?cè)诰W(wǎng)上可以做更多事情。我們可以網(wǎng)上購物,查材料,還可以與世界各地的人們交流。總之,電腦和網(wǎng)絡(luò)使我們的生活越采越方便了。
Computers are changing our life day by day.We can do many things on computers.For example, we can write articles, do office work and play games.But the most important usage of computers is to get on the Internet.We can do more things on the Intemet.We may do shopping, search information and communicate with people all around the world.In short,computers and Internet are making our life more and more convenient.
第三篇:英語作文輔導(dǎo)
英語作文輔導(dǎo)
How to get on well with others
固始縣實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)九年級(jí)三班方航指導(dǎo)教師:胡洪艷
How to get on well with others
As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others.There is some advice which we can follow to make friends.First, we should learn to share our things with others.It can help develop a closer friendship with our friends.Second, everyone is happy to be respected by others, so we should respect others.Third, the communication between you and your friends is also very important.It’s better for us to communicate with others face to face to show our feelings.I also think that we should learn to care for others.They will think you are helpful and kind so they will be glad to get along with you.教師評(píng)語(指導(dǎo)教師:胡洪艷): 這是一篇很成功的作文。小作者思路清晰,語言簡(jiǎn)明地概述了幾條關(guān)于友誼互動(dòng)的小竅門。而且小作者還成功地運(yùn)用了定語從句,賓語從句和被動(dòng)語態(tài),這些語法大多數(shù)學(xué)生是不敢隨便在作文中體現(xiàn)出來的。本篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),實(shí)屬一篇考場(chǎng)佳作。
第四篇:英語輔導(dǎo)
資深教授---英語家教輔導(dǎo)
資深英語教授數(shù)十年參與英語實(shí)際教學(xué)及高招英語評(píng)卷工作,愿不惜其豐富的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)及閱歷補(bǔ)習(xí)你的英語知識(shí),而不讓天才付水流,給我以魚,授您予漁!
分類輔導(dǎo):輔導(dǎo)前,將對(duì)每一位參加輔導(dǎo)的學(xué)生進(jìn)行測(cè)試,根據(jù)其測(cè)試結(jié)果,并結(jié)合中、高考英語的特征及學(xué)生自身特點(diǎn)、學(xué)習(xí)情況、以及接受程度等多方面因素,專為學(xué)生量身制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃,在規(guī)定的課時(shí)范圍內(nèi)最大限度地提升學(xué)生英語成績(jī)上浮空間。
授課特色:提煉,歸納,比較中、高考英語考點(diǎn);以最短的時(shí)間將語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)、各題型解題思路與答題方式傳授給學(xué)生,使其準(zhǔn)確對(duì)應(yīng)命題意圖,提高答題準(zhǔn)確率。
授課老師為多年參加高考英評(píng)卷語的教師,有著一整套的應(yīng)對(duì)措施,教學(xué)方法獨(dú)到,能幫助你在有效時(shí)間內(nèi)把握中、高考考點(diǎn),有效訓(xùn)練中、高考各類題型。
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第五篇:教師輔導(dǎo)獎(jiǎng)實(shí)施細(xì)則
江蘇省高郵實(shí)驗(yàn)小學(xué)教師輔導(dǎo)獎(jiǎng)實(shí)施細(xì)則(試行)
實(shí)施目的:
為全面實(shí)施素質(zhì)教育,全面提高教育質(zhì)量;為激勵(lì)全體教師更好地為學(xué)生服務(wù) ,發(fā)展學(xué)生的個(gè)性特長(zhǎng);為創(chuàng)辦品牌學(xué)校,彰顯辦學(xué)特色和成果,特制定本實(shí)施細(xì)則。
實(shí)施細(xì)則:
1、本細(xì)則適用于獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)那些親自輔導(dǎo)本校學(xué)生發(fā)表作品或參賽獲獎(jiǎng)的老師。學(xué)校將以事實(shí)為根據(jù),認(rèn)定相關(guān)老師是否真正參與輔導(dǎo),以及輔導(dǎo)時(shí)所占的比重。
2、教師輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生在正規(guī)部門舉辦的經(jīng)學(xué)校認(rèn)可的征文比賽或其它比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)的,按級(jí)別和等第獎(jiǎng)勵(lì):
高郵市一、二、三等獎(jiǎng)的,每篇分別按10、8、5元計(jì)算;
揚(yáng)州市一、二、三等獎(jiǎng)的,每篇分別按20、15、8元計(jì)算;
江蘇省及以上一、二、三等獎(jiǎng)的,每篇分別按30、20、10元計(jì)算;
3、教師輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生在正規(guī)報(bào)刊雜志上發(fā)表作品的,在高郵市、揚(yáng)州市、江蘇省及以上發(fā)表的文章,每篇分別等同于對(duì)應(yīng)級(jí)別學(xué)生獲獎(jiǎng)的二等獎(jiǎng)。在《繁花》上輔導(dǎo)發(fā)表作品的,按高郵市獲獎(jiǎng)的三等獎(jiǎng)計(jì)算。(注:若組織參加一次比賽,學(xué)生多人次獲獎(jiǎng),該輔導(dǎo)獎(jiǎng)由學(xué)校視情況來認(rèn)定。)
4、輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生參加集體項(xiàng)目比賽或表演獲獎(jiǎng)的(學(xué)生未獲單項(xiàng)獎(jiǎng)),按級(jí)別和等第計(jì)算,可參照細(xì)則2的方法計(jì)算,再乘3倍。(注:如指導(dǎo)學(xué)生參加舞蹈集體比賽、指導(dǎo)學(xué)生鼓號(hào)隊(duì)比賽等;體育獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)除外)
5、同一件作品多次獲獎(jiǎng),按最高獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)計(jì)算,不重復(fù)計(jì)分。同一個(gè)節(jié)目或同一個(gè)學(xué)生由多人輔導(dǎo)的,按此節(jié)目的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)金額,平均分給每位輔導(dǎo)老師。
6、每學(xué)期結(jié)束前,每位老師需將相關(guān)獲獎(jiǎng)證件或發(fā)表的復(fù)印件收齊并提供給學(xué)校教科室驗(yàn)核、匯總。學(xué)校實(shí)行一次性獎(jiǎng)勵(lì),每學(xué)期獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)一次。
7、本實(shí)施細(xì)則的解釋權(quán)在學(xué)校,學(xué)校將根據(jù)實(shí)際運(yùn)作情況不斷進(jìn)行完善。
8、本實(shí)施細(xì)則自學(xué)校通過之日起試行。
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