第一篇：中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)

中考英語作文常用寫作句式句型匯總

I.常用詞組和句型

1.look forward to n/doing 盼望做…

2.hold on to n/doing 堅持做…

3.dream of doing 夢想做…

4.can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…

5.stop / keep sb(from)doing 阻止某人做…

6.be busy(in)doing / be busy with + n 忙于做…

7.spend time / money(in)doing

spend time / money on + n 花費錢/時間做…

8.have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself(in)doing 玩得開心

have trouble / have a problem / have difficulties(in)doing

have trouble / have a problem / have difficulties with + n 做…有困難

9.It’s + adj + for sb to do 做…對某人來說…

10.so + adj/adv + that … 如此… 以至于…Time is so precious that we can't waste it.too … to do 太… 而不能…Time is too precious to waste.11.not … until … 直到…才…

I didn’t go home until I finished picking up all the litter.12.be good / bad for…

Reading is good for our mind.讀書對心靈有益。Overwork is bad for health.13.see/hear/watch/find/notice sb do/doing sth.I saw a little boy dropping litter.14.One … the other … / Some… others …

15.By +Ving, … can …

By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.16.It is time + for sb to do sth

It is time for the government to solve the traffic problems

17.The + 比較級 + S + V, the +比較級+ S + V

The harder you work, the more progress you make.The more books we read, the more learned we become.18.An advantage of … is that + 句子

An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't produce any pollution.19.… is the + 最高級 + 名詞 +（that）+ 主語 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read).Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.Mr Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.20.Nothing is + 比較級 + than + n./to do

Nothing is more important than honesty/ to be honest.21.There is no doubt that + 句子毫無疑問…

There is no doubt that our environment is very important.22.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子… 的原因是…

The reason why we have to grow trees is that they provide us with fresh air.23.That is why + 句子那是…的原因

24.That is because + 句子那是因為…

25.The reason why + 句子is that + 句子

26.That is the reason why …/ 4

Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it.27.It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說…

It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報道…

28.There is no need/time to do 沒必要做…

29.Those who… should …

Those who break the traffic rules should be punished.30.get into the habit of + Ving

We should get into the habit of helping others.31.Thanks to +n/Ving

Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.32.What(a/an)+ adj + n.+ S + V!= How + adj + S(the + n.)+ V!

What an exciting match!/ How exciting the match is!

33.have a great influence on sb/sth

Smoking has a great influence on our health.My mother has a great influence on me.II.提建議

1.had better(not)do 最好(不)做

2.how about / what about doing …怎么樣?

3.I think you should/are supposed to do 我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該…

4.I suggest that he(should)+do我建議你做…

5.If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的話，我會做…

6.It’s best to do最好做…

7.Why not do/ why don’t you do…? 為什么不…

III.表示喜歡和感興趣

1.like / love doing

2.enjoy doing

3.prefer to do A rather than do B 寧愿做A也不愿做B

4.be interested in/take a great interest in + n./ doing

IV.表示努力做…

1.try to do努力做…

2.try one’s best to do = do one’s best to do 竭盡全力做…

3.do what sb can(to do)盡力做…

do everything sb can(to do)盡某人全力做…

V.打算做… / 計劃做…

1.plan to do 打算做…

2.be going to do 打算做…

3.decide to do 決定做…

4.make up one’s mind to do 下定決心做…

VI.表示想/希望

1.want to do = would like to do 想做…

2.hope to do 希望做…

3.expect to do 期待著做…

4.wish to do 希望做…

5.think about/ consider doing 考慮做…

VII.表達(dá)看法或觀點

一．開頭用語：

1.Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages.2.As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.3.Different people have different points of view.二．并列用語：as well as,not only…but also,1.Not only do computers play an important part in science, but also play an important role in ourdaily life.2.E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.三．對比用語：on the one hand, on the other hand

On the one hand, I helped people who need help, on the other hand, I spent time doing what Ilike to do.四.遞進(jìn)用語：even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…

The community is too small for a family of four, and besides/what’s more, it is in a bad location.五.例證用語：in one’s opinion, that is(to say), for example, in fact

There is one more topic to discuss, that is(to say), the question of education.六.時序用語：first/firstly, ever since, while, at the same time

七.強調(diào)用語：especially, at least, not at all ,Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.八.因果用語：because, as a result, because of, with(out)the help of...,As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the Senior High School Entrance Examinations.九.總結(jié)用語：in general, in a word, as you know,In general, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.十.結(jié)尾句

1.But I don't think it is a very good way to solve …For example，… Worst of all，…但是，我認(rèn)為這不是解決……的好方法，比如……, 最糟糕的是……。

2.There are several ways for us to solve the problems.First, we can…有幾個解決問題的方法。

3.Why…？The first reason is that … The second reason is …The third is …

4.I fully agree with the idea that … because… 完全同意……，因為……。

5.In my opinion, I think it necessary to… The reasons are as followings.First …second …Last but not least,對我來說，我認(rèn)為有必要……。原因如下：第一，……；第二，……；

最后……但同樣重要的是……

中考作文常用諺語

1.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。

2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

3.Every coin has two sides.任何事物都有兩面性。

4.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。

5.Haste makes waste.欲速則不達(dá)。

6.All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.只工作不休息，聰明孩子也變傻。

7.Pleasant hours fly past.快樂時光去如飛。

8.No one can call back yesterday./ Yesterday will not be called again.昨日不復(fù)來。

9.Action speaks louder than words.行動勝過語言。

10.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情。

11.Rome was not built in a day.偉業(yè)非一日之功。

12.Tomorrow comes never.切莫依賴明天。

13.A bad thing never dies.壞事傳千年。

14.A bad beginning makes a bad ending.惡其始者必惡其終。

15.A good beginning is half done.16.Well begun is half done.好的開始是成功的一半。

17.Little by little and bit by bit.堅持就是勝利。

18.If winter comes, can spring be far behind? 冬天來了,春天還會遠(yuǎn)嗎?

19.A mother’s love never changes.母愛永恒不變。

20.Brothers are like hands and feet.兄弟如手足.21.Reading makes a full man.閱讀使人充實。

22.To live is to learn.生活就是學(xué)習(xí)。

23.To be good is to be happy.從善是樂.24.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上無難事，只要人肯試。

25.Great hopes make great man.遠(yuǎn)大的希望造就偉大的人物。

第二篇：2010英語中考作文輔導(dǎo)

2010英語中考作文輔導(dǎo)

1、手機(jī)利與弊

Recently,short messages become more and more popular with both the young and the old.People accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them.As to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messages,in my opinion,there're three points.First, it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.By comparison with letters or email,short messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with them.Second,short messages cost less than making a phone call.Third,people who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easily,through which more and more people can know of others and become friends.joozone.com

However,nothing that is perfect exists in the world.Short messages also have some disadvantages with them.Some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messages.Also,taking advantage of people's ignorance,some websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messages.Above all,short message is product of the hitech nowadays.It will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it.2、關(guān)于電動車

A lot of “family of electric vehicles students” have no knowledge of the relevant transport training, do not look at traffic signs on the road marking, like the electric car when the motorcycle opened, often in disregard of the risk into the fast lane, or speeding along in the slow.As a result, the road can often be seenchaos, reverse, cut-away line of electric vehicles, the bad behavior of the traffic awareness and timely, if not corrected, would have an adverse impact on children.At the same time, each value of electric vehicles as a result of two or three thousand dollars, the driver is a student, easily become the target of criminals and crime, easy to bring the personal safety of the students potential.Not long ago, a student in a City electric car ride through mountain tunnels tung oil, were taken away from electric cars3、關(guān)于低碳

We have only one earth,it’s our duty to protect our enviroment.Now there is a new lifestyle called low carbow ,have you ever heard of it ? what does it mean? It means Low energy and no waste.as a student,what can we do for it? It’s easy,you can walk or ride to school instead of driving to school.in order to save paper , you can write on both sides of paper, Before we left the classroom, we should turn off lights and the computer ….Do you have any other good ideas? Please tell me, We should also call on the people around us to do something for low – carbon living.Only in this way will the earth he a good place to live on.If we don’t do anything,Do remember ,the last drop of water on the earth may be a tear-drop of us.4、玉樹地震

1）On April 12th, a big earthquake happened in Yushu, Qinhai.Many people lost their family and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sad.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I’m deeply moved by these people.SoI’ll use my pocket money to buy some

food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2）學(xué)生會地震后的倡議書

Dear students，After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school.Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed.They can just live in the open air.They don’t have enough school things or clothes.As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble.As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can.We can raise some money and things for them.And we can also write to them to encourage them.I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.Students’

Union5、申請成為世博會志愿者

I read your ad.in the newspaper yesterday.I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to work as a volunteer for the World Expo..My name is Li Hua.I’m sixteen.I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English.I am proud that I won the first prize in our city’s English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact I’m healthy and strong.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well.Please reply to me soon.My telephone number is 0594—1356666.Yours sincerely6、回顧初中三年成長過程，你一定有很多感受，從學(xué)習(xí)，生活，愛好等方面作出自我評價(畢業(yè) 回顧評價)

I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math and physics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School.7、夢想和未來

1）.我的夢想是當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生(my dream is doctor)

I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.May let the human change the health.At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully.Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.2.）以后十年內(nèi)我的生活(MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS)

In ten years,I think I 'll be a reporter.I wiil live in an apartement with my sister.Because I don't like living alone.And I can play with her inth aparement.So in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and I willgo to another places on business.In ten years,i will have many different pets.Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time.And I will go to london on my vacation.So,my life in ten years will be better and better

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第三篇：中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)與

初中英語寫作：

10字原則：結(jié)構(gòu)+要點+邏輯+語法+亮點

初中英語作文分為四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分

結(jié)構(gòu)：中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰：“觀點——要點——總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山。第二段：分2-3點說明論點，各論點里舉出詳細(xì)例子。第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等要點：因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點，要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容，要做到全，圍繞中心。邏輯：這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進(jìn)的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。遞進(jìn)：除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示總結(jié)的）。轉(zhuǎn)折：but, yet, however等。真正有經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這些詞體現(xiàn)了這個文章的思路。

語法：其他幾點都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬性的。如，單詞的使用，時態(tài)等。

亮點：當(dāng)我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后兩個字，亮點至關(guān)重要。高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以，以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。

開頭經(jīng)典句子

1.不用說…… It goes without saying that …

= It is obvious that ….2.在各種……之中，…… Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …

3.就我的看法……；我認(rèn)為……In my opinion, …

= To my mind, ….= As far as I am concerned, …

= I am of the opinion that ….4.隨著人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …

隨著科技的進(jìn)步…… With the advance of science and technology, …

5.……是必要的 It is necessary(for sb.)to do / that …

…… 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb.)to do / that …

…… 是適當(dāng)?shù)?It is proper(for sb.)to do / that …

……是緊急的 It is urgent(for sb.)to do / that …

6.狀語從句

A)如果你不……，你就會…… If you don’t..., you’ll...B)如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

C)每當(dāng)我聽到……我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.每當(dāng)我做……我就忍不住感到悲傷。Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.每當(dāng)我想到……我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.每當(dāng)我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.每當(dāng)我看到……我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.7.賓語從句

我認(rèn)為，…… / 我認(rèn)為……不 I think / I don’t think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

8.Since +過去式, 現(xiàn)在完成式.9.It’s adj for sb to do 做…對某人來說…

10..… so … that … 如此… 以至于…

… too … to do 太… 而不能…

such … that … 如此… 以至于…

11.not…until… 直到…才…

12.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…

13.It is said that + 句子據(jù)說…

It is reported that + 句子據(jù)報道…

14.There is no doubt that + 句子毫無疑問…

15.There is no need to do沒必要做…

16.There is no point in doing 做某事毫無意義

17.It is my great pleasure to hear from you 很榮幸接到你的來信(回信開頭句)

18.It is highly suggested that you should(not)… 我覺得你應(yīng)該…..19.some people(think, believe)……while others(think, believe)一些人（認(rèn)為）…而另一些人（認(rèn)為）

20.…draw public attention/arouse wide public concern 引起廣泛關(guān)注

(Aroused)a heated discussion 引起熱烈的討論

21.As an old saying goes 正如一句老話說的…

As the proverb goes 正如諺語所說…

22.Views on …vary from person to person 對于…的觀點因人而異

23.We ' re often told that......But is this really the case ?

24.People used to......however , things are quite different today.過去，人們習(xí)慣......但,今天的情況有很大的不同。

25.some people think that......Others believe that the opposite is true.There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that......一些人認(rèn)為......另一些人持相反意見。也許雙方的觀點都有一定道理。但是我們必須認(rèn)識到......26.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.認(rèn)識到問題是找到解決辦法的第一步。

27.關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認(rèn)為……

There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.28.俗話說（常言道）……，它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。

There is an old saying______.Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.29.現(xiàn)在，……，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更為

糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.30.現(xiàn)在，……很普遍，許多人喜歡……，因為……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides，______.31.任何事物都是有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.32.關(guān)于……人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認(rèn)為（說）……，在他們看來，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.33.…已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當(dāng)中，將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young andheated debates are right on their way.34…在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發(fā)一些嚴(yán)重的問題。

______has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it hasbrought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well

35.人類正面臨著一個嚴(yán)重的問題…，這個問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.36.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出…。很顯然…，但是為什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that()while.Obviously，______，but why?

37.“如今，人們普遍認(rèn)為...,但是我懷疑...。

Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...38.“如同硬幣的正反面，...也有積極的一面和消極的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...39.“近來，...的問題已經(jīng)成為人們注目的焦點。”

Currently, the issue of...has been brought to public attention.40.“隨著...的快速增長，...在日常生活中已經(jīng)變得越來越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.41.“由汽車(或xx）引起的空氣和噪音污染對我們的健康造成了危害。”

Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.42.We ' re often told that......But is this really the case ?

我們經(jīng)常被告知......但事實真是這樣嗎？

43..People used to......however , things are quite different today.過去，人們習(xí)慣......但,今天的情況有很大的不同。

第四篇：中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)七

中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)七

杰克遜一家的周末

根據(jù)提示，以The Jacksons’ Sunday為題，寫一篇英語短文。

1.星期天，杰克遜一家起得很早，吃早飯；

2.飯后去教堂，公園；

3.在公園里劃船，吃野餐；

4.野餐后孩子們放風(fēng)箏，杰克遜夫婦散步。

要求：1.字跡工整，語言規(guī)范；

2.鼓勵寫出真情實感，對緊扣議題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分；

The Jacksons’ Sunday

The Jacksons get up very early on Sunday.Usually they don’t eat much breakfast in the morning.But on Sunday they often have a big breakfast.After breakfast they go to church first.They meet a lot of people there.Then, they go to the park.They spend almost the whole day there.First they go boating on the lake.After lunch the children fly their kites and Mr and Mrs Jackson take a walk around the lake.They all have a wonderful time on Sunday.

第五篇：沖刺2011年中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)

沖刺2011年中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)

中考英語作文在整個英語考試中有著舉足輕重的地位，作文質(zhì)量的好與差，得分懸殊很大如何寫好英語作文給考生帶來了很大的困擾。

思路：

審好題

仔細(xì)審查所給的內(nèi)容提示（包括文字和圖表等），明確要求寫的內(nèi)容，確定文章的體裁、人稱、時態(tài)等，理順?biāo)悸罚_定主旨。

看要點，寫片段

對于易于表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，一次成句；對于一時難于表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，寫出詞組。此時，既注意不遺漏內(nèi)容要點，也不要隨意添加任何內(nèi)容。

步驟：

定句型，連詞成句

這個環(huán)節(jié)是成文的關(guān)鍵，一定要注意做到：

（1）選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。在熟悉的基礎(chǔ)上，鼓勵多用高級詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的復(fù)雜句。如表達(dá)“為了??”時，可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句。

（2）寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式、謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)。

（3）表達(dá)限定的內(nèi)容有困難時，就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”這句話，用變通的方法，以達(dá)到“曲徑通幽”。如要譯“他表哥外強中干”這樣一句話，表達(dá)起來似乎很難，但我們完全可以通過學(xué)過的東西將這句話明白貼切地表達(dá)出來：Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.（4）盡量避免使用漢語式的英語。例如要表達(dá)“她睡得很遲”，不可寫成：Shesleptvery late.應(yīng)該寫成：Shewent tobed verylate.因為“sleeplate”表示“睡懶覺”。又如要表達(dá)“他一點都不擔(dān)心他的英語”，不可寫成：Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.實際上意思完全相反，表達(dá)成“他非常擔(dān)心他的英語”了。應(yīng)該是：Heisnot a bit worried about his English.或：He isnotworried about his English at all.連詞成句，添減相宜

單句寫出后，根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的句子，劃分必要的段落，一般分成三段。

即：文章的開頭（Introduction）、文章的主體(Mainbody)和文章的結(jié)尾(Conclusion).這樣寫成文章的初稿。在連詞成句的過程中，還要注意以下幾點：

（1）句子或段落間的連接不僅僅是個語言問題，也是個邏輯思維方面的問題，這兩者是不能分開的。能注意到這一點，你的文章就能達(dá)到條理清楚、層次分明的境界。

（2）為了使句子或段落語義連貫，表達(dá)合理準(zhǔn)確，可以適當(dāng)加入一些連接詞語。如表達(dá)轉(zhuǎn)折可用but,however,otherwise等，表達(dá)遞進(jìn)可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等，表達(dá)因果so,therefore,asaresult等，表達(dá)對比可用atthesametime,meanwhile，while等，表達(dá)讓步可用though,although,evenif等。有時還需要加入一些必要的過渡句子以達(dá)到承上啟下的效果。>

（3）仔細(xì)推敲在文章的哪些地方可用復(fù)雜句。切忌生搬硬套，給人一種為了用復(fù)雜句而用復(fù)雜句的感覺。要用得自然、得體。要順應(yīng)行文的需要，與整個文章渾然一體。

盡量使用我們熟悉的賓語從句、狀語從句和定語從句。

檢查，修改，定稿，謄寫

檢查修改是進(jìn)一步減少疏漏提高質(zhì)量的最后程序，這時要對照題目要求，認(rèn)真檢查以下幾點：

（1）內(nèi)容有無遺漏或誤詞，最好一一對應(yīng)檢查。

（2）體裁格式對不對。

（3）句子是否有語法結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤，特別要檢查句子中的冠詞、代詞、名詞復(fù)數(shù)、動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等方面是否有錯誤。

（4）句子是否合乎英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，是否達(dá)意。

（5）書寫字跡和標(biāo)點符號是否規(guī)范清晰，詞數(shù)是否基本上符合要求。經(jīng)過認(rèn)真修改潤色的短文，即可認(rèn)真工整地謄寫在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速讀一遍，力求完美。

經(jīng)典題例

下面以今年3月中考一模試卷的作文為例，談?wù)剬懼锌加⒄Z作文的具體步驟和應(yīng)注意的事項。

原題介紹

目前，揚州正在創(chuàng)建()全國文明城市（NationalCivilizationCity）。作為一個中學(xué)生，我們在學(xué)校、在家里、在公共場合等等應(yīng)該做到哪些才能稱得上是一個文明的(civilized)人呢？我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻(xiàn)（makecontributionto）呢？請你就此寫一篇100字左右的短文。2011年新經(jīng)典中考英語作文 關(guān)注時事

H1N1流感

★ 范文01.根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞語供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

世界上已有許多國家發(fā)現(xiàn)了新型H1N1流感病毒（H1N1 flu virus）病例。據(jù)了解，人感染該病毒后會出現(xiàn)咳嗽、發(fā)燒、疲勞等癥狀。為了加強同學(xué)們的預(yù)防意識，（21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英語報》正在舉辦征文活動，請你給該報投稿，描述感染該病毒的癥狀并談一談為了預(yù)防該病毒我們該怎么做，最后表達(dá)我們能戰(zhàn)勝病毒的信心。提示詞：cough，have a fever，feel tired，prevent，wash，exercise，sleep，believe

Nowadays，many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus.It’s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough，have a fever and feel tired.To prevent the virus，we can do many things.Firstly，we’d better not go to places where there are many people.Secondly，we need to wash our hands often with soap and water，especially after we cough or sneeze.It‘s also a good habit for us to exercise regularly.It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.And having a good sleep is important，too.People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily.And then，eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong.Last but not least，open the window and keep the air in the room fresh.If we all do these things，we will prevent the virus.So there is no need to be worried.I believe we will win through in the end.上海世博會

★ 范文02.上海世博會對中國的影響

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai，this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held

該文章轉(zhuǎn)載自無憂考網(wǎng)：http://www.tmdps.cne more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest.Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend，at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo.It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.玉樹地震

★ 范文03.玉樹地震

The earthquake in Yushu

An earthquake happened on April 14th in the Yushu county of Qinghai province.There are many people died in this earthquake.When we heard the news，we were all shocked and sad.But when I think of Wenchuan，I believe that people in Yushu are not alone，because we，all the Chinese，will be with them.We should try our best to help people in Yushu.I will take actions to help the people，such as donating money and things they need for them.And we should make friends with homeless children and cheer them up.If possible，I want to be a volunteer in Yushu and help them build the new house！I hope that they can overcome the disaster and lead happy lives in their rebuilt home soon.★ 范文04.How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened，firstly，don’t panic and calm down.Secondly，find some safe place to stay and don‘t run in s uch a hurry.If in the room，one should hide himself/herself under something hard，such as desk，table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard，and never take a lift to go downstairs.If in the open air，find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.Thirdly，we should help each other when we meet trouble.At last，no matter how strong the earthquake is，if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up，we must be able to overcome any difficulties.2011年中考英語作文預(yù)測及范文 保護(hù)環(huán)境

從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費提供塑料袋，掀起全國“拒塑”的環(huán)保運動。假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 為題，寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語演講稿。

內(nèi)容包含：

1.在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋;

2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本;

3.離開教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈;

4.最好走路或騎自行車上學(xué);

5.簡述理由：保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少污染，節(jié)約能源等

注意：

1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);

2.可根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫;

3.文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名，否則以零分處理。

4.參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保護(hù)protect能源energy污染pollution課本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.___________________________________________________

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

參考作文：

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse(再利用)the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What?s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities(日常活動)can make a real difference to(對?有影響)the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

5、.環(huán)境問題：

今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕,環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作,學(xué)習(xí),生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重..........,如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。

提示：存在問題: 1.水污染越來越嚴(yán)重 2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重 3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重 4.白色垃圾等。

要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境? 至少:3---4個方面，80字左右的。

范文：

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is pouring(排出)dirty air into the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster , resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People?s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle(回收), reduce(減少), reuse(再利用)things.Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world will be more an d more beautiful.6、為了保護(hù)地球有限的資源，我們應(yīng)該采取什么措施呢?請根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇約80詞的短文，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出。

提示詞：

1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;

2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;

3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;

4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources

參考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.(水是生命之源)No water, no life.(沒有水，就沒有生命)So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we(我們不僅應(yīng)該?)protect drinking-water(飲用水)and stop polluting it, but also make full use of(充分利用)it.Save electricity.It is crucial(關(guān)鍵的，至關(guān)重要的).We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines(電器)when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.突發(fā)事件問題是中考書面表達(dá)的熱點話題，從非典到雪災(zāi)，從地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都頻頻出現(xiàn)在各地中考試卷中，因此必須重視。但這類文章的寫作有一定的難度，掌握基本句式和寫作技巧非常必要。

典型例句：

1.one +of + 形容詞最高級+ 名詞復(fù)數(shù)

One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in

WenChuan.2.It“s our duty to do sth

It?s our duty to help them.3.As….as possible

We shoud help them as much as possible.4.here be?。.Here are lots of things we can do.5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.我們要保持冷靜而不能害怕。

6.make +sb+ 形容詞

It makes many people homeless.7.too … to= so … that

They are too young to look after themselves

例文：

1、汶川大地震

2008年5月12日，四川省汶川地區(qū)發(fā)生了罕見的大地震，那里的人們痛失親人和家園。全國人民眾志成城，抗震救災(zāi)。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你談?wù)勀愕淖龇ê透惺堋?/p>

要求：文章語言流暢，邏輯清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確，80—100字左右;

詞匯參考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感動be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth

參考范文：

On May 12th，a big earthquake happened in Wenchun，Sichuan.Many people lost

their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of

people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them，some people buy

something for them，some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of

soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign

friends also give them a hand.I?m deeply moved by these people.So I?ll use my pocket money to buy some

f food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best

to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪災(zāi)

2008年春節(jié)期間，我國大部分地區(qū)遭受雪災(zāi)，特別是南方，室?guī)资晡从觥９贰㈣F路、機(jī)場都被迫關(guān)閉，電網(wǎng)癱瘓，數(shù)百萬人不能回家過年。部分山區(qū)人民生活異常困難，在各級政府的帶領(lǐng)下，人民群眾、解放軍戰(zhàn)士英勇抗擊雪災(zāi)，涌現(xiàn)出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中學(xué)生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改變這種狀態(tài)？

As we know，our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything

was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses，trains and planes stop.Millions

of people couldn”t go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food，water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against

heavy snow.As a student，I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study

hard at school.We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland

stronger，better and richer.3.甲型HINI流感

從電視上看到美國正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu），部分學(xué)校停課你為你正在美國上學(xué)的筆友Mike的健康與安全擔(dān)心。請立即給他寫一封email詢問他的情況，并給他提出防護(hù)建議。

要點：

一。詢問

1.他的健康狀況;

2.他們學(xué)校有無甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）;

3.他們是否還上學(xué)。

二。建議

1.盡量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;

2.勤洗手;講衛(wèi)生

3.多開窗，保持空氣新鮮;

4.多吃水果蔬菜。

Dear Mike，F(xiàn)rom the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result.I?m so worried about you.Are you

alright？ Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school？ Do you still have to school

everyday？

To stay away fr om the disease，you’d better stay at home as much as possible

and not go to places where there are many people.Wash your hands more often to

keep them clean;Open the window to have more fresh air in the room;And eat

more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease！Take care

and you?ll be OK.Yours truly，Li Hua

中考英語作文范文：健康問題，健康問題是中考常考的話題，出題形式多樣，有必要下苦功掌握。

健康問題是中考常考的話題，出題形式多樣，有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句：

1.It is very important to keep healthy。

2.How can we keep healthy?

3.We can“t go to sleep too late.We can”t get up too late。

4.We should eat the food healthily。

5.We should do more exercise。

6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7.I didn“t feel like eating anything。

8.I decided to see the doctor。

9.In the doctor”s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。

10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。

11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。

12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。

13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。

例文：

1、根據(jù)圖示，簡要介紹一下如何才能保持健康，并展開想象，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要求：詞數(shù)80左右。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考答案：

All of us want to be healthy.First，we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don?t feel well, we should d go to see the doctor at once.2、衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶?寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。

(1)保持健康的重要性

(2)保持健康的方法

(3)保持健康的結(jié)論

(4)(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強體;3.鄙棄不良習(xí)慣

范文1:

Dear boys and grils :

Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.As a middle shool student , first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals.Don?t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn?t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you,bye!

范文2:

Dear boys and girls:

I’m talking about how to keep health/fit.Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep.If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:

Firstly, we must keep taking exercises every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Secondly, try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”.Finally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking/ drugs毒品.Besides(除此之外), don’t forget to breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3、根據(jù)中英文提示，寫出內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯的稿件。(字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞，英文提示詞供選用)

有寫學(xué)生不愛吃學(xué)校的午飯，常到校外去吃他們所喜歡吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他們的身體健康。“英語角”打算針對這個問題展開討論。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇討論稿，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。

參考詞匯：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

范文：

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn?t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy

something which they like to eat.But I?m afraid that it?s bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isn?t healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.多彩校園

學(xué)校簡介

★ 范文13.在一次英語班會上，老師請同學(xué)們以Proud of My School 請根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括學(xué)校面貌，你在校的活動，以及你喜歡學(xué)校的原因。

提示詞：bigsmall，trees，play games，family，be kind to，befeel proud of

Proud of my school

My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of classes，but also take part in colorful activities after classes.I play games and do lots of sports，like playing basketball，football and table tennis.I love my school because it?s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I?m leaving my school.I?ll never forget the days I?ve spent here.友情至上

★ 范文14.假設(shè)你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你與同學(xué)們在一起學(xué)習(xí)、參加各種活動，相互幫助，彼此之間建立了深厚的友誼。校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇開辟了 “Thank you letter” 專欄。請按下面的要求給你的同學(xué)Ling Feng寫一封感謝信。注意：1.這封信要表達(dá)你對Ling Feng的感謝；2.信中要簡述感謝Ling Feng的原因，適當(dāng)舉例，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺埽惶崾驹~語：thank you，at the end of，kind，forget，help? with，stay in touch

Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term，I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a w week.When I was worrying about the lessons，you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help，I didn’t fall behind others.Since then，we have become very close friends.I think I’ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools，I’ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.Yours，Liu Yan

課余活動

★ 范文15.體育鍛煉與參加夏令營

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week，some do less than one hour.As for me，most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it’s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it’s good for our health and study.And I’d love to take part in the summer camp.First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums，places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it’s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world.At the same time，the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.運動會

★ 范文16.一家英文報社正在舉辦征文活動，請你積極參加。題目是“一次難忘的運動會”。內(nèi)容要求：你或你的朋友參加了什么項目，結(jié)果怎樣，感覺如何？提示詞語：year，take part in，field event（relay race，high jump，long jump，shot put，excited，take the first prize.This year，I took part in the relay race，I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began，everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn，I could feel the Class 4’s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster，finally，our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my class.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.畢業(yè)感想

★ 范文17.初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想（請不要寫出真實的學(xué)校名稱以及真實姓名）。

提示詞供參考。three years，memories，one of，one day，think，happy/ sorry

How time flies！I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years’ life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then，she has kept helping me.Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.