第一篇:2014高考英語輔導:作文萬能公式
高考英語輔導:作文范文萬能公式
對比觀點題型
(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為...2.另一些人認為...3.我的看法...The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥
------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think ②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法).闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.The good old proverb----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that
----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that
---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).In my opinion,----------------(我的觀點).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1.問題現狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現狀).Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現狀)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1.說明事物現狀
2.事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)
3.你對現狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優點之一).Besides-------------------(A的優點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預測).)
議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一
_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, If irmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優點一______.And secondly ___優點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文
It is well known to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..圖表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the
table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily
rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show
________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.實用性寫作(申請信)
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest
convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,X X X
書面表達是主觀題中的個性題,它主要考核學生利用書面表述進行交際的能力。書面表達的應對策略可概括為三個步驟和八字方針。
三個步驟指:1.列―――排查信息要點,根據邏輯關系排列信息表述的次序;
2.述――根據信息特點,尋找最地道、自己最熟悉的英文表達結構方式;
3.連――用恰如其分的過渡連接詞語將語句連接起來,然后再寫到試卷上。
八字方針指:1.式(注重文章的格式,必要時需要特定的格式語言);
2.時(確定文章的主線時態,和輔助時態);
3.字(用自己最有把握的單詞,學會避開自己不會表達的單詞或轉換表達方式);
4.詞(固定短語、成語、習語表達必須準確到位,否則寧可簡單表述);
5.句(句子結構必須地道、清晰可辨、成分完備,切忌漢語式表達);
6.段(表述要層次分明,順承邏輯關系,切莫本末倒置,結構混亂);
7.章(文章應整體結構合理,過渡自然,前后呼應);
8.面(謄寫字跡規范工整,卷面清潔,具有美感)。
根據八字方針,三個步驟的時間分配可以為3分鐘、5分鐘、7分鐘來進行,當然,如果是英語基礎厚實且訓練有素的考生,可以在10分鐘內完成。此外,一篇成功的英語作文應該有一兩個亮點句子―――即恰如其分的復合結構或非謂語動詞結構,既不要為寫所謂的高級句子而把語言結構搞得混亂不堪,也不要把信息點以簡單句方式一一羅列,成了一種形似而神不似的大白話。
首先,可以把考生根據分數劃分為兩類:一類是英語平均分在90分左右,寫作基礎較差的,另一類是英語平均分在125分左右,寫作基礎較好的。
對于第一類考生,首先應該保證自己能夠拿到書面表達的平均分。這樣的考生在寫作的時候可以采用一些寫作的套路。每次寫作前問自己4個問題:這篇文章的體裁格式怎樣?主體時態用什么時態?人稱用第幾人稱?可以分幾段,之間用什么過渡詞、連接詞?帶著這4個問題去審題,搞清楚文章的主要內容,然后列出提綱??忌梢杂涀∠旅娴捻樋诹铮杭殞忣},巧構思,列要點,防遺漏;寫日記,同漢語;書信、通知格式要牢記;看清圖表細梳理,寫人記事按順序;完稿后查遺漏,整潔干凈莫忘記。對于第二類考生,要想拿到高分甚至是滿分,除了要表達正確以外還有一個很重要要求的就是要有能足夠展示你英語水平的句子,必須有意識去使用一些較高級地道的句型和詞匯。
進入考場之前,考生可先演練好自己總結的十大精品句型,如:定語從句,強調句型,so??that,??so that??,too??to??,neither??nor??,either??or??,the more??the more??,not??until??,not only??but also??同時準備好十大連接詞,如:what’s more,furthermore,moreover,however,nevertheless,whereas,therefore,on the other hand,afterwards,in a word等等。考場上有機會用到其中的一兩個閃光點,就可能有機會得到加分。
最后一段復習時間,考生可以按照寫、改、背的規律有計劃地練習英語書面表達。有針對性地寫10篇高考英語作文,然后自己或者請老師把這些作文改成滿分作文,然后背下來。最后,希望考生記住“優秀是一種習慣”。千萬不要認
為練習的時候可以隨便寫,等考試時再認真去做。練習10篇作文以后,自然可以很自信地迎接考試。
第二篇:高考英語作文開頭萬能公式[范文模版]
高考英語作文開頭萬能公式
1. 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言
有人問了,“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經典句型:
a proberb says, “ you are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)
更多經典句型:as everyone knows, no one can deny that… 2. 開頭萬能公式二:數字統計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
travel by bike
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
youth
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個大學,學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
five-day work week better than six-day work?
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。3.開頭萬能公式三:比較正統的語法句子
讓老師產生一種你英語學得很好的錯覺 這樣高分作文更不是問題。
As time goes by,.....隨著時間的流逝
There is no doubt that...毫無疑問...As far as I'm concerned, I think....就我而言,我認為...It is said that...據說...Two heads are better than one.三個臭皮匠,頂個諸葛亮。
It is...that...強調句
It is important for sb to do sth.there be句型
Compared with A, B is more...與A相比,B更...in my opinion 在我看來 It is high time that we did sth.是我們做..的時候了。
Only in this way, can wei solve this problem properly.只有這樣我們才能妥善解決這個問題。
sth is so...that...如此..以至于..not only...,but also...不僅...而且...To be honest To tell the truth 老實說來
too..to 太..以至于不能..On one hand,..on the other hand,..一方面..另一方面...
第三篇:高考英語難點整理 高考英語作文萬能公式
高考英語難點整理
高考英語作文萬能公式
難點1 不定代詞的固定表達
例:I’ve got another three books.I’ve got three more/other books.2.—Why don’t we take a little break?
—Didn’t we just have________?
A.it B.that C.one D.this
(NMET2000)
知識依托:one代替單數可數名詞,但泛指物。
錯解分析:A項選擇迷惑性較大。因人稱代詞it和不定代詞one都可以代替單數可數名詞,但it指特定事物。
解題方法與技巧:答語中用one泛指第一個對話者詢問的a little break。
答案:C
5.few,little;a few,a little的用法
①few和little表示沒有多少,含否定意義;而a few與a little表示有一些,有幾個,含肯定意義。另外,few與a few修飾可數名詞,而little與a little修飾不可數名詞,它們在句中常用作定語、主語和賓語。例如:He knows a little English.(定語)
He has many books.But few are interesting.(主語)
I know a little about Japanese(賓語)
②a few,a little可以用quite或only修飾,few和 little則不能。例如:
—How much water is left?
—Only a little./Qutie a little.—How many books are left?
—Only a few./Quite a few.難點2 亦有規律可循的介詞
解題方法與技巧:of在此表示“……中的部分/全部”,與名詞little連用。該句為一個含有感嘆式賓語從句的主從復合句,連接代詞what修飾的是在從句中作主語的名詞,little提到從句之首,little前無冠詞表示否定,意為“少到幾乎沒有”,如: I understand little of his speech.他的講話我幾乎沒有聽懂。
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介詞比較復雜,注意以下表示原因的介詞。
①because of表示引起結果的直接原因,意義與連詞because相同。例如:
He retired last month because of illness/because he was ill.上個月他因病退休了。
②for表示內在的、心理上的原因,常與表示喜、怒、哀、樂等情感名詞連用;還可表示某種動作或結果的起因。而連詞for則表示某種結果的補充理由或顯而易見的原因。
例如:He trembled for fear.他怕發抖。
Thank you for your help.謝謝你的幫助。
When he was still a young man,he was forced to leave his homeland for political reasons.他還是青年時就因為政治原因離開了他的祖國。
③by表示外部的,尤其是暴力的或無意中造成某種結果的原因。例如:
Her body was bent by age.歲月使得他的腰也彎了。
The general died by his own hand.將軍自殺了。
She took your umbrella by mistake.她錯拿了你的雨傘。
④at表示某種情緒或動作的起因,多與“喜,怒,哀,樂”等義的詞連用,常譯作“聽到……”,“看到……”。例如:
The whole nation was in deep sorrow at the news.聽到這個消息,全國人民極為悲痛。
He jumped at the news.聽到這個消息,他蹦了起來。
⑤on表示能作為依據或條件的原因,常譯為“依照……”。例如:
He has given up smoking on medical advice.他遵照醫生的勸告已經把煙戒了。
⑥of和from表原因時常與die或類似意義的詞連用。die of指因疾病、饑餓、寒冷,或害怕、羞愧等內因或外因造成的死亡結果;die from表示因傷、事故等外因或不明原因造成的死亡。與疾病名詞連用時,二者均可。from還可表示懶惰等造成某種后果的原因。例如:
His son having been killed in the war,the man died of a broken heart.兒子死于戰爭后,老人也因傷心過度而亡。
In big cities during cold winter months,many old people die from the polluted air.寒冷的冬天,大城市里的許多老人死于污染的空氣。
She died of /from cancer.她死于癌癥。
He wasn’t ill;he stayed in bed from laziness.他沒病,他躺在床上只是偷懶。(整理:胥桂苓)⑦with指生理上或情感上的外界到內心的原因,意為“隨著……?!崩纾篏essler turned red with anger.蓋斯勒氣得臉都紅了。
⑧owing to,相當于because of,多表示引起某種不良后果的原因。例如:
Owing to the rain they could not come.都是因為那場雨他們才沒能來。
Owing to his lacking of experience,John failed this time.因為經驗不足,這次約翰又失敗了。
注:owing to也可表示“欠……錢”之意。How much is he owing to you?他欠你多少錢?
⑨thanks to表示引起某種幸運結果的原因,常譯為“幸虧……,多虧……”。例如:
Thanks to the timely rain,the farmer had a good harvest.多虧那場及時雨,農民才有了個好收成。
⑩out of表示動機的起因,常譯為“出于……”。例如:
He asked the question out of curiosity.出于好奇,他提了這個問題。
He did it out of pity.他做那事是出于同情。
難點3 句子倒裝重在看其結構
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1.高考中對于倒裝的考查主要有以下幾個方面:
(1)否定詞位于句首時的倒裝,如:hardly…when…
(2)so 與neither ,nor位于句首時的倒裝及不倒裝時的含義。
(3)only位于句首時和as引導讓步狀語從句時的句子倒裝。
在處理這些有關倒裝的習題時,關鍵是要真正了解和掌握引起倒裝的結構,這樣才能運用自如。在此簡單總結一下引起倒裝的原因及相關句式結構:
(a)語法結構需要
There is nobody in the classroom.She is a teacher,so is her brother.Away ran the prisoner.(如主語為代詞則不倒裝:Away he went)
(b)強調性倒裝
Only by working hard can you succeed.Never can you change my mind.Nowhere else can you find such a beautiful place.(c)為了使句子平衡而使用倒裝
Gone are the days when they could do what they like to the Chinese people.Present are Mr Li,my best friend ,Dr.Wang,my boss and his wife.(d)表示祝愿的句子
May you succeed!
Long live the king!
2.做題時要抓住各種句式的不同結構要點,關鍵詞的利用,更好的判斷句式,選擇正確答案。
難點4 不可錯位的形容詞排序
熟記規則:多個形容詞修飾同一名詞時的順序是固定的,其順序為:
①冠詞、指示代詞、不定代詞、物主代詞+②序數詞+基數詞+③一般性描繪形容詞+④大小、長短、形狀+年齡、新舊+⑥顏色+⑦國籍、出處+⑧材料+⑨用途、類別+⑩最終修飾的名詞或動名詞。
例如:a beautiful little red flower
一朵美麗的小花。
those four old-looking,grey,wooden houses
那四間顯得很舊的灰色的木屋。
●錦囊妙計
1.記住規則。
2.多閱讀、多體會增強語感是關鍵。
3.實質上多個形容詞的語序是與被修飾的名詞關系越密切的詞越靠近名詞。(整理:胥桂苓)高考英語作文萬能公式
1.開頭萬能公式一:名人名言
有人問了,“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)
更多經典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2.開頭萬能公式二:數字統計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
Youth
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個大學,學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
結尾萬能公式:
1.結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2.結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話,那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫作的“七項基本原則”:
一、長短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
Asa creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
二、主題句原則
國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會平安無事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原則
領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!
四、短語優先原則
寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其
一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發現亮點—精彩的短語,那么你的文章定會得高分了。其
二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎么辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it.這樣字數明顯增加,表達也更準確。
五、多實少虛原則
原因很簡單,寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:(整理:胥桂苓)走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應該說:slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應該說:sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應該說:dance out of the room
老人走出房間應該說:stagger out of the room
所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯)
都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎么辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關系或者并列關系。比如說:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉折(拐彎抹角)
批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點,然后轉入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然后我主動搭訕,然后我們去咖啡廳,然后我們認識了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。
舉例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構成;定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(氣勢恢宏)
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑戰極限原則
既然十挑戰極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在學生的文章中,很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!
文章主體段落三大殺手锏:
一、舉實例
思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會發現二者的相同點(through comparison)和不同點(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
這個對 compare and contrast 題型很有用
三、換言之
沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。
實際就是重復重復再重復!下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
第四篇:高考英語作文的萬能公式
高考英語作文的萬能公式
為你收集
2006年高考英語作文,基本上都從實用的角度出發。其中,寫信和寫郵件還是考試的主流。下面是今年的高考英語作文題目。大家可以進行一下對比。
2006高考英語作文全國卷I
假定你是李華。應英國朋友Bob的要求,寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關信息。
注意:
1、字數100左右
2、可以適當增減細節,以使行文連貫
3、開頭語已為你寫好
Dear Bob,Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.______________________
_________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
(注:上面的小字是:借閱須知:每人每次5本,借期10天。下面的小字是:開放時間:周一至周五,早9:00至晚7:00,周末閉館。)
2006高考英語作文北京卷
第四部分:書面表達(共兩節,35分)
第一節:情景作文(20分)
國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學生參加的“和平,友誼”夏令營活動,要求報名者提前交英文個人簡歷。假設你是王珊,請根據下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。
姓名:王珊
性別:女
年齡:16歲
學校:北京陽光中學
其它:愛好音樂、攝影、善于與人交流,樂于助人,熱愛自然,熱愛和平
參加夏令營的目的:結交朋友,了解外國文化
注意:
1、詞數不少于60
2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫
第二節 開放作文(15分)
請根據下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數不少于50。
You and your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city in China where you see the street sculptures as shown below.You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say.Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so.提示詞:雕塑sculpture 筆記本電腦 laptop
2006高考英語作文廣東卷
Ⅵ.書面表達
根據以下,寫一篇英語短文,描述今昔通訊方式的變化,以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。
注意:1.詞數:100左右
2.生詞:通訊:communicatevi.communication n.互聯網:the Internet n.2006高考英語作文浙江卷
第三節:書面表達(滿分30分)
當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影,有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題,按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文:
1、看電影:省時、有趣、易懂
2、讀原著:細節更多、語言優美
3、我的看法及理由
注意:
1、詞數:100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出(不計入詞數)。
2、參考詞匯: original work 或 book in the original(原著)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally, I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas.In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
第五篇:上海高考英語作文萬能公式
開頭萬能公式
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那么多,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。
所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.看起來這個數字文縐縐的,其實都是編造出來的。
更多句型:
A recent survey shows / indicates that …
結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷:領導長篇大論,到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而易見”,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
? To sum up, ?
? In conclusion, ?
? In brief, ?
? In short, …
? In a word, / In a nutshell, …
? All in all, …
更多句型:
? Thus,it can be concluded that?
? Therefore,we can find that…
? So, we can conclude that…
寫作的“七項基本原則”
一、長短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精辟的句子卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
? As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.? Although the former is to meet the primary need of my body while the latter is to
satisfy the intellectual need of mind, yet they are in a way quite similar.? 如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強烈建議:
? 在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長后短;
? 在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用
先短后長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!
? 文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
二、主題句原則
國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(這樣做更保險)或者結尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會平安無事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully / wellprepared for the exam(主題句).Without sufficient preparations, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則
領導講話總是第一部分:第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分:第一點、第二點、第三點
雖然繁瑣,可畢竟還是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly/finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally…
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點的情況)
10)for one thing, for another(適用于兩點的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!
四、短語優先原則
寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其
一、用短
語會使文章增加亮點。如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自
己不認識的短語,必然會看低你的作文。相反,如果發現亮點------一個
精彩的短語,那么你的文章定會得高分了。其
二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎么辦?用短語是一個不錯的辦法!
比如:
? I cannot
可以用短語表達:I cannot
? I
可以用短語表達:Iit.I am badly in need /want of it.這樣字數明顯增加,表達也更準確。
文章主體段落三大殺手锏
一、舉實例
思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且這也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式。在任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have tried every possible means in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performances.For instance, to advertise a certain kind of food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.更多句型:
? Let’s take ? as an example.? Let’s take ?for example.? For example,?
? For instance,…
? One example is… and another example is…,二、做比較
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的。世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉。文章亦然。只有通過比較,你才會發現兩者的相同點(through comparison)和(through contrast)。
下面是一些短語:
相似的比較:
likewise, similarly, be similar to?,in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,nevertheless, by contrast, in contrast to/with?,in comparison to/with?,on the contrary, compared with ?
三、換言之
沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章再多一些字。
或者文縐縐地說,是讓讀者更充分地理解你的觀點。實際
就是重復、重復、再重復!下面的句子實際上就三個字
I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I have lost my heart to you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it.or I am fed up with/ am bored with / am sick of / am tired of / am weary of it.更多短語:in simpler words,/ put it more simply(簡單地說)
總之,如果我們經常按照上面的方法練習,加上多多模仿優秀范文,就一定能寫出比較好的英語文章。