第一篇：批改網90分作文-students humiliate their teacher at school

The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that students humiliate their teacher at school sometimes.Especially the adolescents, even abuse their teacher in public, ignoring the fact that this behavior may be detrimental to the development of their personality and cause moral or legal consequence.Three reasons, to my knowledge, account for this social issue.The most important factors should be the lacking of moral education, which is indispensable to students.Nowadays, we put more emphasis on cultural education than moral education.Then student should perform something disallowed by morality.From another perspective, parents also have inescapable responsibilities for the problem.It is unshakable duty for parents to raise and protect their child.However, some parents dote on them, not letting any mistreating occur on their baby.Thus, they may humiliate their teacher once they think they are mistreated by their teacher.In addition, teachers’ inappropriate communication methods may give rise to the conflict more or less.The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it.Parents, together with teachers should make joint efforts to teach students rationally.And teachers should enhance mutual understanding with students.

第二篇：批改網高分作文

批改網高分作文

Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?

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Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?

Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures.Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school.As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age.While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls.In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time.Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school.The most

reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on.under that circumstance, teachers is shown to call on male in class far more than female students.While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness

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It is obviously that the answer of such question changes frequently as students growing up and here is my analyze according to the chart.First of all, girls, in my opinion, are much more welcomed in primary school.Over two-thirds of students believe that female students are teacher's pet in primary school.Second,however, conclusion in senior middle school is quite different because half of students hold the view that it was boys that are teacher's pet.Thirdly, the circumstance in junior middle school as well as In college is between two extremes which means neither boys nor girls have advantage to be pets of teachers.What conclusion can I draw is that the chart indicates us girls are more welcomed by teacher at low grades because they are not only quite gentle and quiet but also boys are naughty at the same time.As time goes by, though, such difference gradually disappear which lead to

such result.Last but not least, I hold the view that there is no sex, including boys and girls, can hold teachers' love forever

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Rencently, a survey on“who are teachers' pets”has developed among students.According to the chart, we can easily find that the majority of pupil's answers are girls, the junior students said that all of them were favored, a lot of middle school students replied: “girls!”, while college students thought neither of them is teachers' pet.So, why did the phenomenon occurred? I suppose the following reasons can account for it.In primary school, girls are generally obedient, while boys may be more naughty.Girls are good at reading and writing, but boys show nothing superior.Of course , teachers think more of girls.In junior school , boys perform as well as girls , so the teacher will think all of them are great.When go to the senior school , boys become more initiative and are more interested in mathematics, which can ignite teachers' enthusiasm of teaching.On the university , boys and girls have to rely on their own efforts to learn more, thus, the teachers can pay less attention.As far as I'm concerned, teachers shouldn't hold different attitudes to students'gender.Both girls and boys should be treated equally to have a better prospect.4）

Reading this chart, we can discover that most of the primary school students think girls are teachers' pets.In contrast, most of the high school students think boys are teachers' pets.While in junior middle schools and in colleges, the numbers of students who think boys or girls are teacher's pets are almost equally, more that they think it depends on teachers' mind.For this, its reasons are obviously.First, primary school teachers have to pay more attention to girls.In that not only girls are timid, but also boys may bully them.Second, high school teachers believe boys have more advantage to pay off and more likely to be rolled in

world-famous universities than girls meeting the challenge of college entrance examinations.Third, in junior middle schools and in colleges, teachers feel boys and girls have similar

capabilities, alternatives and so on.Moreover, university teachers know seldom students, not to mention who are their pets.Nowadays, gender is not crucial.It is urgent to persuade teachers to care about gender in a reasonable way, especially elementary school teachers and high school teachers.

第三篇：愛國主義調查報告(批改網作文2)

A Survey Report on patriotism among College Students Recently our team conducted a survey among college students about the citizenship awareness.The subject of our investigation is the understanding of the patriotism of College students.We designed 10 questions, and we made the investigation on the Internet.Here are the results.Now we will start the first part.We asked college students one question: do you think you are patriotic? As expected, all of their answers are “yes”.All college students think they are patriotic and most of them agree that patriotism is of great importance.So we can come to the conclusion that most college students know the concept of the motherland in their hearts.But what is patriotism do they think abd how they express their love for the motherland, we can't learn clearly from this part.So we can continue to look at the second part.In this part, we asked college students two questions.The first one is that do they think if raising the national flag is important.And eighty percent of them think it is beneficial to the cultivation of patriotism.From this result, we can speculate that the majority of people believe that small actions can show their love for our country.Also, twenty percent of them think raising the national flag is meaningless.Perhaps they think it is just a kind of form.And it can't show our true feelings.The second one is that which actions of patriotism do they think is rational.Most students choose learning hard to make contributions to our country in the future, caring about the development of our country and supporting the purchase of Chinese products.But about ten percent of college students do not think it is patriotic to buy foreign products.And they also choose we should not have economic and cultural exchanges with some countries such as Japan and Philippines.I think they are irrational.Maybe they think they are patriotic.But I think they don't take the right approach.Perhaps we should learn how to express our patriotism rightly.In the last part, we mainly focus on the attitude of college students towards Chinese traditional culture.The first question is about college students' understanding of Chinese history and culture.Most students don't have a deep understanding of Chinese history and they don't like to understand Chinese culture.Perhaps because they think it is so difficult and boring.And a few students believe that Chinese traditional culture is out of date.And we don't need to learn it.The second one is about attitudes towards cultural relics.Most people think that they are the symbol of traditional culture and should be preserved.But some people think rebuilding the sites is a better way.They think that only by this way can we see the original features of the places of interest.And few people don't care about this question.From the results of the questionnaire, we can draw the following conclusions.The vast majority of college students understand the significance of patriotism, and strive to embody the spirit.This is a very good performance.Of course, most college students can be rational and patriotic, and be able to objectively look at the differences between Chinese and foreign cultures and the significance of the economic and cultural exchanges between China and foreign countries.However, a very small number of college students do not care about the development of the country as well as the traditional culture.Also, a few students are not rational.They should learn how to express their patriotism rightly.

第四篇：英語批改網作文My Definition of Success

My Definition of Success

There are many traditionally thought successful men surrounding us, they are usually rich and powerful.In my opinion, however, success refers to serving to the public in your own way regardless others' responses.Xu Song, a famous lyrics man, composer, record producer and singer, plays an important and active part in introducing music of Chinese style to us Chinese and people in other countries as well.He has a lot of fans, me included, and we all like him very much.He is my winner!I think he has a extraordinary gift in writing songs and his voice sounds very good.I think he is a successful singer not only because of his achievement in selling albums but also his uniqueness and genuineness in his career.The style he writes and sings is according to the idea in his mind and regardless of other's opinions.Han Han, a famous author whose novel is very popular in junior and senior high school

students, conveys his voice to the world and through his blog.He is also my winner because he is always struggling against the unfair events and corruptions in government.His opinions are unique, which often make our eyes bright.He is also my winner, he is a successful man both as an author and as an opinion leader.

第五篇：作文批改

作文批改

聽完張老師的課，我感觸良深。老師說：“作文是寫出來的，好作文是改出來的。”剛開始我還有些疑惑，不明白其中的奧秘。聽完講座，我才知道，我們應該放手讓學生去自己評改作文，可以先自評，然后再與其他同學交換評改，最后老師再評。這樣，學生的作文水平就可以得到提高，而我們老師也可以輕松一些，把松出來的時間用來輔導學習有困難的同學。真是一舉多得！想想自己一直以來都是親力親為的改作文，五十九個同學五十九個作文本，我常常得拿回家里面去改，這真是費時費力。現在我決定像老師說的那樣，放手給學生。期盼著孩子們的習作水平能快速提高。