第一篇：批改網高分表達總結

批改網高分表達

一、短語，高分詞組

1.creating a green campus創建綠色校園 2.enjoy great prestige in the world享譽世界 2.is the essence of 是…的精華

3.Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公眾關注。

4.Undoubtedly毫無疑問

5.Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.對個人和社會有極深影響。

6.Needless to say, a green campus includes...不必說 7.Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。8.make efforts to Meanwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.9.Work out 解決，實現

10.Increase the awareness of the importance of...增強對...的認識的重要性 11.Rewind the clock 時光倒流 12.In addition to this除此之外

13.Go all out全力以赴(屬于四六級經典高分短語)14.what's more意思是另外，而且…，是四六級經典補充類詞組。What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure.而且，大銀行可以使他們的收入多樣化，這可以防止經營失敗。15.whereas意思是然而…，是四六級經典轉換話題類詞匯。

16.nothing but意為：只有,只不過，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才只不過是勞動加勤奮。17.take advantage of利用，是四六級經典短語

18.attach importance to意為：重視，屬于四六級經典高分短語 19.take pride in意為：以…自豪，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒

20.take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六級經典短語。21.on account of意為：由于，屬于四六級經典高分短語

22.far beyond的意思是遠遠超過，大量超出，遠在天邊，是四六級經典詞組。23.may as well意為：最好，不妨，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！We may as well cut across the playground.我們不妨從運動場上橫穿過去。24.it pays to 意為：...是值得的。屬于四六級經典高分句型，用得很棒！Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.25.not to mention意為“更不用說/別提??”，同意表達有to say nothing of、not to speak of It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studying abroad become more significant.A case in point, we can have it.On account of an accident, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.What's more , it is universally acknowledged that studying abroad is of consequence.For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge.That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence.For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well.For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals.What,more 提高文章連接性 studying 4.1 When there is love, there comes hope.[修改] [學習提示] 易混詞匯: affection, love, attachment 均含“愛，熱愛”之意。

4.2 The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightening the darkness, telling a philosophy to us as to love.[修改] [學習提示] 易混詞匯: lamp, light 均有“燈”之意。

4.3 As we can see, evidently, love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrounding is, the brighter it will be.[修改] [學習提示] 易混詞匯: enclose, encircle, envelop, fence, surround 均有“包圍”之意。4.4 The drawing is undoubtedly meaningful and pays to think that has we ever attach importance to love surrounding us.[修改] [學習提示] 易混詞匯: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“認為”之意。第4段

5.1 It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the love become more significant.[修改] [優秀詞匯] whereas意思是然而…，是經典轉換話題類詞匯。

[學習提示] 易混詞匯: significant, important, momentous 均含“重要的，重大的”之意。

[精彩句型] it goes without saying that 意為：不用說...，很明顯...。類似的表達有：屬于經典高分句型，(It is)needless to say(that)，It is obvious that，Obviously,...。用得很棒！

5.2 A case in point, we can have it.[修改] [閃光短語] a case in point 意為：一個恰當的例子，屬于經典高分短語，用得很棒！[拓展辨析] 動名搭配 have...it 在語料庫中出現過 34 次

5.3 On account of an accident, he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyzed.[修改] [學習提示] accident表示“意外事故”。注意與incident的區別。詳情點擊 [閃光短語] on account of 意為：由于，屬于經典高分短語。

5.4 Without her help and affection, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.[修改] [閃光短語] 高分詞組，not to mention意為“更不用說/別提……”，同意表達有to say nothing of、not to speak of。

[學習提示] 易混詞匯: plan, design, plot, scheme, project, blueprint, programme 均含“計劃”之意。

[閃光短語] take pride in意為：以…自豪，屬于經典高分短語，用得很棒！5.5 What's more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the world, so do their love.[修改] [閃光短語] what's more有助于提高文章銜接 [閃光短語] what's more意思是另外，而且…，是經典補充類詞組。[學習提示] 易混詞匯: earth, world, globe 均可表示“地球”之意。第5段

6.1 As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequence, while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege.[修改] [學習提示] 易混詞匯: acknowledge, admit, confess, recognize, concede 均含“承認”之意。

[精彩句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都認為，是經典句型。[閃光短語] 高分詞組，be of接名詞用來說明句子的主語所具有的性質或特征。6.2 For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge.[修改] [精彩句型] On no account can意思是...絕對不能...，是經典句型。

[學習提示] 易混詞匯: energy, force, power, might, strength, vigour 均有“力”之意。[閃光短語] on no account 意為：決不，屬于經典高分短語，用得很棒！[精彩句型] on no account can we 意為：我們絕對不能...，屬于經典高分句型，用得很棒！

6.3 That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence.[修改] [精彩句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是經典句型。[學習提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意與cause的區別。詳情點擊 [精彩句型] the reason why 意為：...的原因是...，屬于經典高分句型。6.4 For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well.[修改] [閃光短語] may as well意為：最好，不妨，屬于經典高分短語，用得很棒！[閃光短語] take advantage of的意思是利用，是經典短語。

[閃光短語] go all out意為：全力以趕；鼓足干勁，屬于經典高分短語，用得很棒！[拓展辨析] 動名搭配 lend...hand 在語料庫中出現過 559 次

6.5 To conclude, only when we fall into the darkest place, will we truly understand how precious love is.[修改] [拓展辨析] 注意conclude和deduce區別。

6.6 For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals.[修改] [學習提示] 易混詞匯: battle, war, campaign, struggle, warfare, fight, combat, engagement 均有“戰斗，戰爭”之意。

is the essence of 是。。的精華

Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公眾關注。Undoubtedly毫無疑問

Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.對個人和社會有極深影響。Needless to say,a green campus includes...不必說 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。

Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.過渡句：In the first place,it is essential that...,furthermore,it is high time for us to...,last but not least...Work out 解決，實現

Increase the awareness of the importance of...增強對...的認識的重要性 Rewind the clock 時光倒流 In addition to this除此之外 Go all out全力以赴屬于四六級經典高分短語 What’s more [高分詞匯] whereas意思是然而…，是四六級經典轉換話題類詞匯。

nothing but意為：只有,只不過，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才只不過是勞動加勤奮。

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六級經典補充類詞組。What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure.而且，大銀行可以使他們的收入多樣化，這可以防止經營失敗。take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六級經典短語 attach importance to意為：重視，屬于四六級經典高分短語

[高分短語] take pride in意為：以?自豪，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒 高分短語] take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六級經典短語。on account of意為：由于，屬于四六級經典高分短語

it goes without saying that意為：不用說...，很明顯...。類似的表達有：屬于四六級經典

高分句型，(It is)needless to say(that)，It is obvious that，Obviously,...。用得很棒！

[高分詞組] far beyond的意思是遠遠超過，大量超出，遠在天邊，是四六級經典詞組。

It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours.不用說早睡早起是值得的。[高分短語] may as well意為：最好，不妨，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！

We may as well cut across the playground.我們不妨從運動場上橫穿過去。

[高分句型] it pays to 意為：...是值得的。屬于四六級經典高分句型，用得很棒！It pays tohelp others.幫助別人是值得的。

[高分表達] 高分詞組，not to mention意為“更不用說/別提??”，同意表達有to say nothing of、not to speak of。[高分表達] 高分詞組，be of接名詞用來說明句子的主語所具有的性質或特征。Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.高分短語] contribute to意思是對某事有幫助，有貢獻；有助于做某事…，是四六級經典短語。[高分短語] stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六級經典短語。Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience.許多退休的老人還能用他們豐富的經驗為社會作貢獻。好評報錯

[高分短語] on no account 意為：決不，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises.青年人決不應疏忽每天的體育鍛煉。好評報錯

[高分句型] On no account can意思是...絕對不能...，是四六級經典句型。On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。好評報錯 ?

There is no denying that意思是不可否認的，是四六級經典句型。

There is no denying thatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否認的，我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。

[高分句型] the reason why 意為：...的原因是...，屬于四六級經典高分句型。The reason whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。好評報錯 [高分表達] 高分詞組，look forward to意為“期望/等待??”。好評報錯

[高分表達] 高分詞組，look forward to意為“期盼/期待”。

[高分句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都認為，是四六級經典句型。

whereas意思是然而…，是四六級經典轉換話題類詞匯

take into account意為把?考慮進去，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！A case in point is[高分短語] 意為：一個恰當的例子，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！[高分短語] cope with 意為：對付?，妥善處理，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！[高分短語] once for all意為：一勞永逸地，屬于四六級經典高分短語，用得很棒！

比如take into account（我不覺得它很牛的樣子）、heart and soul，play an role in等等。

[高分句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六級經典句型。referring to not hesitate to Give priority to給===優先權

Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the “Chinese style of crossing the road”, a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of people to cross roads in disobedience of red lights.Puzzle out苦思，puzzle over Be short of 缺乏。。

attach great importance to 高度重視

七、An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的優點是...)例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(produce)any pollution.三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么強調...的重要性也不為過。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我們再怎么強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。

It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible possible.To make a long story short enrich one's experience增長見識 in defiance of 不顧，無視

It’s highly desirable for sb to do something.很希望某人做。。Submit oneself to...遵守 Interpret...as...把什么理解為 Whereas 然而

Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that /There are many ways which can be adopted to 解決問題

第二篇：批改網高分作文

批改網高分作文

Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?

1）

Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?

Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures.Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school.As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age.While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls.In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time.Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school.The most

reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on.under that circumstance, teachers is shown to call on male in class far more than female students.While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness

2）

It is obviously that the answer of such question changes frequently as students growing up and here is my analyze according to the chart.First of all, girls, in my opinion, are much more welcomed in primary school.Over two-thirds of students believe that female students are teacher's pet in primary school.Second,however, conclusion in senior middle school is quite different because half of students hold the view that it was boys that are teacher's pet.Thirdly, the circumstance in junior middle school as well as In college is between two extremes which means neither boys nor girls have advantage to be pets of teachers.What conclusion can I draw is that the chart indicates us girls are more welcomed by teacher at low grades because they are not only quite gentle and quiet but also boys are naughty at the same time.As time goes by, though, such difference gradually disappear which lead to

such result.Last but not least, I hold the view that there is no sex, including boys and girls, can hold teachers' love forever

3）

Rencently, a survey on“who are teachers' pets”has developed among students.According to the chart, we can easily find that the majority of pupil's answers are girls, the junior students said that all of them were favored, a lot of middle school students replied: “girls!”, while college students thought neither of them is teachers' pet.So, why did the phenomenon occurred? I suppose the following reasons can account for it.In primary school, girls are generally obedient, while boys may be more naughty.Girls are good at reading and writing, but boys show nothing superior.Of course , teachers think more of girls.In junior school , boys perform as well as girls , so the teacher will think all of them are great.When go to the senior school , boys become more initiative and are more interested in mathematics, which can ignite teachers' enthusiasm of teaching.On the university , boys and girls have to rely on their own efforts to learn more, thus, the teachers can pay less attention.As far as I'm concerned, teachers shouldn't hold different attitudes to students'gender.Both girls and boys should be treated equally to have a better prospect.4）

Reading this chart, we can discover that most of the primary school students think girls are teachers' pets.In contrast, most of the high school students think boys are teachers' pets.While in junior middle schools and in colleges, the numbers of students who think boys or girls are teacher's pets are almost equally, more that they think it depends on teachers' mind.For this, its reasons are obviously.First, primary school teachers have to pay more attention to girls.In that not only girls are timid, but also boys may bully them.Second, high school teachers believe boys have more advantage to pay off and more likely to be rolled in

world-famous universities than girls meeting the challenge of college entrance examinations.Third, in junior middle schools and in colleges, teachers feel boys and girls have similar

capabilities, alternatives and so on.Moreover, university teachers know seldom students, not to mention who are their pets.Nowadays, gender is not crucial.It is urgent to persuade teachers to care about gender in a reasonable way, especially elementary school teachers and high school teachers.

第三篇：雅思寫作高分表達50句總結

雅思寫作精選50句單句練習，10詞內單句，雅思歷年來考試中的高分句子!資料中對句子高分的核心結構做了簡單的解析!絕對有用的一份資料哦!趕緊學起來吧~

1.Some students earn some extra cash from part-time jobs.學生們可以通過兼職工作賺到一些零用錢。

核心結構：A earn some extra money from B

A從B處賺得零用錢

注：extra cash=pocket-money

2.Industrial particulates are mortally detrimental to one’s physique.工業懸浮顆粒對人的身體有致命傷害。

核心結：A be mortally detrimental to B

A對B有致命危害

3.Some parents feel hemmed-in by their daily routines.很多父母感覺他們被工作束縛住了。

核心結構：A feel hemmed-in by B

A感覺受到B的牽制(束縛)

4.Give-and-take is common in any relationship.付出與給予是人類社會中的一種普遍關系。

核心結構：A be common in any relationship

A是人類社會中的一種普遍關系

5.Youngsters are given to making mistakes.年輕人一定會犯錯誤。

核心結構：A be given to doing A一定會(做)。

6.Scientific developments have been fast and furious.科技發展業已一日千里。

核心結構：A be fast and furious A一日千里。

7.In the abstract, women are more easy-going.從理論上來說，女性更加和藹。

核心結構：in the abstract 從理論上來說

8.A violent area is always the locus of poverty.一個充斥著暴力的地區總是貧困地區。

核心結構：locus 地點

9.It is too moralistic to condemn new lifestyles.譴責新的生活方式未免有些上綱上線。

核心結構：

1.it is moralistic to do(做某事)顯得上綱上線。

2.condemn 譴責

10.The paranormal can be rarely explained.超自然現象很難得到解釋。

核心結構：

1.A can be rarely explained A很難得到解釋。

2.paranormal 超自然的/ 超自然事物

11.Retirees are always unprepared for the oncoming boredom.核心結構：退休者對于即將到來的枯燥生活總是毫無準備。

（1.A be unprepared for B A對于B毫無準備。

（2.oncoming 即將到來的

12.Massacres are often done by those unprepossessing loners.大屠殺的實行者總是那些不為人所注意的孤獨者。

核心結構：unprepossessing 不為人所注意(關注)的

13.The suggestion is weighted against average students.這個建議不利于一般學生。

核心結構：A be weighted against B A不利于B

注：A be weighted against B

所表示的“不利結果”是深思熟慮后得出來的。

14.Conservative people are rather wedded to traditions.保守的人總是遵循傳統。

核心結構：A be wedded to B A遵循B

“遵循”的其它表達方式：follow/ observe/ adhere to/ stick to/ abide by

15.The reason is not valid.這個理由站不住腳。

核心結構：valid 站得住腳的

16.The upshot would be win-win.結果將是雙贏的。

核心結構：

1.upshot 結果

2.win-win 雙贏的

17.The criticism is trenchant indeed.這個批評的確是一針見血.核心結構：trenchant 一針見血的

18.Trials and tribulations always lead us to success.歷練與苦難總是會引導我們走向成功。

核心結構：trials and tribulations 歷練與苦難

19.It is nothing but a piece of excuse.這不過是一個借口。

核心結構：A be nothing but B A不過是B而已。

20.Fairness is the keystone of legislation.公平是立法的基礎。

核心結構：keystone 基礎

21.Dying patients are not loath to end their lives.垂死的病人情愿結束他們的生命。

核心結構：A be not loath to do A情愿(做某事)

注：A be loath to do A勉強(做某事)

22.I obsess over those disabled children.我非常關注那些殘疾兒童。

核心結構：A obsess over B A關注B

“關注”的其它結構：A be preoccupied with B/ A concentrate on B/ A be engrossed in B(通常指對于工作與學業的關注)/ A be dedicated to B(通常翻譯為A致力于B)

23.We must bring perpetrators to justice.我們必須將違法者繩之以法。

核心結構：A bring B to justice A將B繩之以法。

24.I cannot tolerate the permissiveness in education.我無法容忍在教育當中出現的縱容行為。

核心結構：permissiveness 縱容行為

25.In the face of a plurality of cultures, I feel befuddled.面對各種各樣的文化概念，我感覺頭暈目眩。

核心結構：

1.in the face of 面對

2.a plurality of 各種各樣的

3.befuddled 頭暈目眩(文氣用法，通常指對概念與觀點的茫然、不知所措)

26.Torrents of youngsters flood into universities in frenzy.如潮水一般的年輕人瘋狂的涌入大學。

核心結構：

1.A flood into B A涌入B

2.in frenzy 瘋狂的(副詞結構)

27.Teachers tend to be magisterial.教師們總會有些專橫跋扈。

核心結構：

1.A tend to do A傾向于(做)

2.magisterial 專橫跋扈的、權威的(反語或幽默說法)

28.When put in public eyes, the problem is magnified.在公眾的眼中，問題總會被放大。

核心結構：

1.A put B in public eyes A將B置于公眾視線當中。

2.magnify 放大(動詞)

29.Offstage, celebrities do not behave differently from commoners.在日常生活中，名人與普通人的表現并無不同。

核心結構：offstage 在臺下、在日常生活中(副詞結構)

注：offstage的原意是演員為上場前的狀態。

其實，人生也是一場戲。在臺上、在公眾面前，人總是會盡量表示出自己優雅、博學、幽默的一面(社會屬性)，雖然很少有人真正具備這些素質。在臺下，我們總是會回歸自己的真實屬性(自然屬性)。難怪先古哲學家蘇格拉底講“人類的全部知識都是隱藏人類自身局限性與愚蠢的知識，我們很少能夠解釋真實的生活。”多么cynical(犬儒主義的、秉持懷疑論的)的一個哲人啊!

30.The rupture between two generations is caused by communication failure.兩代人之間的隔閡是有溝通不暢造成的。

核心結構：rupture 隔閡

注：rupture的原意是“斷裂”。

它最早被借用表示抽象關系還是在哲學專著《論道德的譜系》中。記得在4年前，北大的一些文學博士曾經拿周星馳的電影風格說事，講他的電影是后現代主義風格。他們英文論文中曾有一個句子“His works mark the rupture between industrial and surrealistic works.”(他的作品標志著工業電影與超現實主義電影的斷裂)。后來據星星自己講“我就是想拍電影，沒想成什么后現代主義大師。”

31.Much of pressure is self-inflicted.很多的壓力都是自己強加的。

核心結構：self-inflicted自己強加的

32.Many of trendsetters were not pioneers in their childhood.很多先驅者在他們的童年期并不是領袖。

核心結構：trendsetter先驅者

注：trend本意為趨勢，setter可理解為創造者。可謂“時勢造英雄、英雄造時勢”。

33.Trepidation is usually caused by inferiority complex.恐慌感總是由自卑造成的。

核心結構：

1.trepidation 恐慌

2.inferiority complex 自卑感(情結)

注：complex的形容詞意為復雜的，名詞為情結(心理學詞匯)。復雜就是糾結、情結也是糾結。就是沒事和自己較勁!

34.It is hard for us to figure out the definition on an infant prodigy.我們很難得出天才兒童的定義。

核心結構：

1.figure out 得出

2.infant prodigy 天才兒童

注：中國古代有個名篇叫《傷仲永》，不知大家看過沒有?文中的protagonist(主人公)小小年紀就可以寫poem(詩)，也許還能寫acrostics(藏頭、尾詩)。我小的時候只勉強寫過幾首doggerel(打油詩、歪詩)。

35.No measures are infallible.方法沒有絕對無誤的。

核心結構：infallible 絕對無誤的。

36.One’s childhood and adulthood are inextricable.一個人的童年期與成年期是不能分割的。

核心結構：inextricable 不能分割的

37.Some youngsters may commit crimes without rhyme or reason.一些年輕人會無緣無故的犯罪。

核心結構：without rhyme or reason無緣無故地(副詞結構)

38.Human society develops invariably to a better state.人類社會總是向好的方向發展。

核心結構：

1.invariably總是

2.a better state 一個好的狀態

注：大家看過The Day After Tomorrow嗎?最近幾年氣候怪異，地球總發脾氣。希望大家能夠熱愛地球，少用紙巾(facial tissue)、多用手絹(handkerchief)。注意環境保護(environmental protection)。否則說不定世界末日(Armageddon)很快就來了。

39.Rampant hackers are proud of attacking PCs skillfully.猖獗的黑客以能夠嫻熟的攻擊個人電腦為驕傲。

核心結構：

1.rampant hacker猖獗的黑客

2.A be proud of B A以B為榮

注：很多的網絡犯罪(cyber-crimes)不以為恥、反以為榮(see a crime as a pride)。不過，大家還是要小心被“燒香”。

40.In an extended family, sibling rivalry is rather obvious.在一個大家庭中，兄弟姐妹間的對立是很明顯的。

核心結構：

1.extended family大家庭

2.sibling rivalry 兄弟姐妹間的對立

注：不知大家是生長在大家庭(extended families由三代或三代以上的人所組成的家庭。看過《我愛我家》沒有?對!就是這種!太準確了!)還是小家庭(nuclear families由兩代人組成的家庭)中?不過肯定不是丁克家庭(Dink，由兩個冷酷的上班族所組成的無小孩家庭。)就對了。

41.Many of traditional beliefs are erased by new ones.很多的傳統觀念因新觀念的出現而消失了。

核心結構：erase擦除

42.While inveighing against the phenomenon, we must figure out solutions.在抱怨這種現象的時候，我們必須得出解決方法。

核心結構：inveigh against 抱怨、批評(有褻瀆意味)

43.Some inveterate liars are born and brought up in violent families.很多有撒謊習慣的人都生長在暴力家庭中。

核心結構：inveterate liar習慣撒謊的人

注：大家看過皮諾曹(Pinocchio)的故事嗎?

44.Modern buildings are always pale in comparison to ancient ones.與傳統建筑相比，現代建筑顯得那么蒼白。

核心結構：in comparison to A 與A相比

45.Large rambling buildings are piled in cities.高大的、雜亂的建筑被堆砌在城市當中。

核心結構：rambling雜亂的

注：東京和上海沒有什么區別。京都和北京有很大區別。小日本對于傳統建筑的保護還是很有一套的。

46.A series of ramifications are bound to be found.核心結構：一系列的后果定會接踵而來。

1.a series of 一系列的 2.ramification 后果

3.be bound to do 一定會

47.One’s idiosyncrasies always developed from his childhood.一個人的嗜好總是從他的童年期發展而來的。

核心結構：idiosyncrasy 嗜好

注：朱軍的童年嗜好一定是看悲劇片。他的《藝術人生》就是一個典型。非把嘉賓、觀眾(電視里、電視外)弄哭。非把美好的回憶弄成悲劇、賺足眼淚!太沒教養!導演、策劃、主持人一起沒教養!

48.One’s socialization may be encumbered by a multitude of factors.一個人融入社會的過程可能會受到很多因素的制約。

核心結構：

1.encumber 阻礙

2.a multitude of 很多的 “很多的”其它結構：

multifarious/ various/ a variety of / multifarious

49.Violent crimes are especially rambunctious in under-developed areas.在貧困地區，暴力犯罪尤其猖獗。

核心結構：rambunctious 猖獗的

注：美國有個紐約(又叫Big Apple)，它由曼哈頓(Manhattan)、布魯克林(Brooklyn)、皇后區(Queens)、布郎克斯(Bronx)和斯塔滕島(Staten Island)五個區(Five Boroughs)組成。其中的布魯克林就曾經是一個暴力犯罪rambunctious地區。

50.One’s savoir-faire is of vital importance to his success.對于一個人的成功而言，社會能力至關重要。

核心結構：

1.savoir-fair 社會能力

2.A be of vital importance to B A對B至關重要。

第四篇：書面表達高分技巧

書面表達高分技巧：

1.語言簡潔，層次清晰

主題句：點出段落的主旨

拓展句：說明或展開支持主旨

結尾句：點題

2.用詞準確，句式多變，多用簡單句，少用復雜句

選好詞，造好句，分好段

3.巧用連接詞，內容連貫，過渡要自然，表達地道，無明顯錯誤

4.書寫規范，卷面整潔

Dear Cindy,Time goes by, but the friendship between us become stronger.I was not good at math at first.I can’t pass the exam.As my best friend, you are worried about me.So you decided to help me with my math.I felt warm because I know there was still someone who didn’t give me up.Then I tried my best to learn English.Finally, I gave my parents, teachers and classmates a big surprise.I still remembered that you looked at me with a smile that day.Because of your help, I can make such great progress.The most important exam is coming soon, I wish you can getgood grades.At last, I want to say thank you, and I hope our friendship can be longer and stronger.Best wishes!

Yours

Dear Cindy,We know that we’ll leave school in several months.Now I’m writing a thank-you letter to you.In the past,you really helped me a lot.I still remember when I came to this school for the first time.I was so shy that I didn’t have a friend.When you come to my world.You let me know what a real friend is.When I have trouble with my study.You always help me work out the problems and I found you teach me carefully than anyone else.When I’m in trouble,you are always the first listener to listen to my complaints.After talking with you,I feel much better.My friend,I think without you I have nothing.Also I can hardly imagine the days I don’t have you.Thanks for your help.You are my best friend forever.Is it a proper way to study in the 10-minute break?

Is it proper way to study in the 10-minute break?

Students are under much more pressure while we are entering into Grade Nine.More and more students begin studying in the 10-minute break to save time.Some of them think they can do more exercises in this way.However,in my eyes,we’dbetter not.Relaxing yourself in the 10-minute break is a proper way.After 40-minute class,having a rest is a helpful way to keep away from getting tired in the next class.Also,too much noise can stop you from thinking hard.On the other hand,it isn’t healthy to use your eyes for a long time.Put the 10-minute break to good use,only then will you be active to learn more in the next class.假設你叫Kimi，初中生活即將結束。三年里，你和你的同學們在一起學習，參加各種活動，互相幫助，互相照顧，彼此之間建立了深厚的同學情誼。近日，我校校園網的英語論壇專門開辟了“Thank you letter”專欄。請根據提示內容給你的同學Cindy寫一封感謝信。

要點提示：

1.表達感謝并說明原因；

2.列舉具體事情；

3.你的感受和想法。

Dear Cindy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursKimi

九年級學生面臨著升學的壓力。因此，許多學生課間休息時依然在教室里做作業。這樣的行為會給學生帶來幫助嗎？初三的學生們就這個問題進行了熱烈的討論。現在請你以“Is it a proper(適當的)way to study in the 10-minute break?”為題，根據同學們的討論結果寫一篇短文，并談談你的看法。討論結果如下：

Some students’ ideasYour ideas

1.save time1…

2.do more exercises2…

3.get rapid(飛快的)progress3…

注意：

所寫內容必須包括表格中一些同學的想法和你的至少三個想法。

詞數：80左右。

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第五篇：英語六級寫作高分表達短語

大學英語六級

高分積累

2011六級寫作高分積累

萬能詞匯(Omnipotence)：

1、方便：convenient/convenience2、效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency3、節省和浪費：save time/money/space;economical, thrift waste time/money/space;costly, lavish

4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance;selfish, isolated, conservative5、人的身體健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic6、娛樂：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax tired, boring, lonely7、環境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty8、安全和危險：safe, danger, risk

9：經驗：experience, social experience, enter the society10、人際：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely

基本表達(Basic Elements of English Writing)：

越來越：be increasingly + adj.,be on the rise,the growing number of

人們認為：it isgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat

許多問題：a host of/a number ofproblems

引起人們注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意識到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that,awaken sb.to the fact/danger 適應新的形勢/變化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change

接觸各種思想/經歷：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems

接觸社會：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society

獲得成功：achieve/accomplish success

提出觀點/建議：advance / put forward / come up withthe arguments/ideas/suggestions

作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)

影響學習/工作：interfere with studies/work

產生影響：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on

較好地駕馭生活：be a better pilot of one's life

剝奪機會/權力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity

取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way

采取措施：take effective steps/measures to

控制我們的環境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment

躲避危險/挑戰：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge

滿足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of

補償損失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage

解釋某現象：account for/explain the phenomenon

對……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into

把某因素考慮進去：take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to

品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth

培養對……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in

經歷變化/困難/艱險：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience

表現出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image

補償損失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage

解釋某現象：account for/explain the phenomenon

對……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into

把某因素考慮進去：take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to

品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth

培養對……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in

經歷變化/困難/艱險：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience

表現出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image

生活充滿不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice

追求學習/職業：pursue one's academic interest/professional career

學習知識/技術：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill

被看作學習的……榜樣：be held up as a good example

交流經驗/知識：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge

發揮/起到重要作用：play an(important/active/great)role/part

逃學/缺課：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture

知識/經驗豐富：rich in knowledge/experience

確立/追求目標：set/pursue a goal/higher standard

到達目標：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective

克服困難：overcome obstacles/difficulty

面臨危險/困難：be confronted/facedwith/in the face of danger/difficulty

阻礙了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth

阻礙了發展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of

持傳統的看法：hold conventional wisdom

發表看法：voice/express one's opinion

持相反/合理的觀點：take the opposite/fresh view

揭穿某種一貫的說法：shatter the myth of

求得幫助：enlist one's support/help

縮小差別：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf(between city and country)

把成功/錯誤歸咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to

對……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to

施加壓力：put/exert a academic pressure on

重視：assign/attach much importance/significance to

強調：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on

把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon

提供機會/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住機會：grab/seize/take the opportunity

得到機會：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information

有可能：there is(little/much)possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that

展開競爭：compete against/with sb.for the prize/position/control/the mastery of

開展運動：conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a

(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)

對我很有/沒有什么意義：make much/little sense to me

帶來無窮的幸福/滿足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint 獻身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career

大不（沒什么）兩樣：make much(little/no)difference

真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …

改變生活旅程：change/alter the course of life

建立在大量的學習/實踐上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice

進行調查/執行任務：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment

辭去工作/學習：leave/quit one's job/work/school

參加考試/競賽等：enter(for)the examination/contest, race

參加活動/討論：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion

影響思想/態度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude

進入大學/社會/家庭/勞力市場/職業：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals 實現自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)

減輕壓力/緊張：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension

提高社會地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership

提高技術/能力：sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one's skill/ability

加快/促進發展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boostthe development of

隨著生活節奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society

開闊眼界/興趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge)one's mental horizons 有助于了解/發展/宣傳/解決：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of

有助于解決問題：go a long way to(towards)solving the problem

迷戀名利/分數：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune

把時間花/浪費在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用機會/技術：make(full/better)use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent

把知識/經驗運用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use

取得進步：make much progress/strides/gains in

充分發揮潛力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability 充滿激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion for