第一篇：好托福寫作的步驟

谷天田外語給大家分享一下寫好托福作文的五個步驟。

1.仔細審題，分析提示句，明確三方面問題

切題是寫好文章最重要的前提。有的考生抱怨，自己感覺文章內容豐富、語言生動流暢，得分卻不高。其實，文章跑題是分數偏低的主要原因。因此，審好題、審清題在很大程度上關系到整篇文章的成敗，絕不可以掉以輕心。審題，不僅要仔細研究題目，還要結合給出的提示句加以分析。首先要明確文章要寫的內容，即文章要圍繞什么主題來寫，這是保證整篇文章切題的關鍵;其次，確定文章所需的主語人稱，人稱混亂是中國學生常犯的一個毛病，而在審題階段確定人稱是避免文章人稱混亂的有效途徑;第三，注意文章對動詞的時態、語氣有無特殊要求。

2.圍繞提示句，構建文章框架

草擬提綱時，要緊緊圍繞提示句，尤其是提示句的關鍵詞，盡量多地擴展提示句所提供的信息，從而基本構筑出文章的框架。谷天田外語提醒，在擴展提示句時，要注意，可以原封不動地照抄提示句中的關鍵詞，但是絕對不要照搬提示句中的詞組和句子，一定要變換意思相同的表達進行替換，這是顯示考生語言應用能力的重要一環。為了避免段落內容跑題，要從提示句中的關鍵詞出發，圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路，發揮聯想，記錄下所聯想到的東西：可以是句子，也可以是詞組;可以是英語，也可以是漢語。然后對所記錄的內容進行篩選，選擇最有代表性的內容草擬出文章的提綱。

3.依據所擬提綱，寫出全文主旨句及段落主題句

全文主旨句(thesis statement)涵蓋全文的核心內容，而段落主題句(topic sentence)則是統領段落中心內容的。段落主題句是為全文主旨句服務的。很多同學對全文主旨句缺乏了解，甚至無法區分全文主旨句和段落主題句。提出全文主旨時，應注意下面的問題：

1)主旨通常是一個包含所寫的主旨要義，即中心思想的單一的陳述句;

2)主旨對文章的展開加以限制;

3)主旨不能用短語、從句、或疑問句;

4)主旨應該明確具體，但主旨如果過于具體化就無法展開文章的寫作;

5)同一個標題可以有不同的主旨，所選主旨必須側重標題的某一不同方面的內容;

6)主旨必須揭示作者的觀點和態度。

為使大家更透徹地了解全文主旨句，谷天田外語建議，請大家先仔細閱讀下列句子，判斷哪些句子是有效的主旨句，并說明理由：

1.Our classroom is clean，bright and cozy.主旨過窄，無法展開來寫，是無效的主旨。

2.Though facing many serious difficulties，our reform is still a successful one.有效主旨，既不過于寬泛也不過于細節，留有繼續拓展的余地。

3.The sun is very important.這句話話題過大，無法把握，用幾十萬字的篇幅來敘述也未必說得夠詳盡。作為主旨顯得過寬，比較含糊，不能讓讀者明白作者想寫什么，因而是無效主旨。

根據英美人的寫作習慣，全文主旨句在文章首段的最后一句出現為宜。全文主旨句和段落主題句是作者思維的起點，切題的準繩。好的段落主題句，不但切題，便于圍繞主旨句進行擴展，而又常常給讀者一種一針見血的感受。看到段落主題句，讀者應大致了解段落要闡述的內容，因而段落主題句通常是一個語法結構完整、內容概括、用詞簡潔、明了的單句。通常將段落主題句置于段落的開頭，可使文章結構更清晰，說服力更強。

4.參照提綱，緊扣主題句，完成段落。

有了段落主題句后，還需要順著段落主題句的方向，參照提綱中的思路，從而完成各個段落。寫作段落時，要盡可能多地搜集細節來支持主題。下面谷天田外語給考生呈上有關“電視對孩子不良影響”的引言段、各段主題句及結論部分，供大家欣賞參考：

Introduction： Television contributions to society，positive and negative，have been debated continually since this piece of technology invaded the average American household in the 1950s.Topic sentences：

1.TV distorts reality by selecting certain kinds of images and omitting others and by portraying people in a stereotyped way.2.TV affects human relationships as well as behavior by influencing our feelings about ourselves and our expectations for ourselves and others.3.Exposure to stereotyped presentations can easily influence viewers' behavior toward unfamiliar people.4.Perhaps most serious are the effects of information distortions on the child's self-image.Conclusion：

TV programs should demonstrate a realistic lifestyle and a responsible sense of behavior.The

many hours children spend in front of the television can obviously influence their view of the world.According to TV，how does the world in fact work ? As a society，we cannot afford the consequences resulting from the distortions of reality portrayed every day in these shows.5.檢查和修改

托福考試時間緊張，匆匆完稿之后，疏漏在所難免，因而有必要復查，修改，及時糾正偏差，堵塞漏洞，從而將作文質量再提高一步。建議大家主要針對以下五個重點部位仔細核查：

A 文章是否切題

將文章與提綱對比，看看是否已清楚地表達了想要寫的內容。谷天田外語提醒，可以從三方面進行考查：一是整篇文章內容是否切合文章標題要求;二是段落主題句的內容是否與各段落提示句內容相一致;三是段落內部的內容是否與段落主題句的表達相一致。如果發現任何一個層面不切題，應盡可能彌補，刪除那些多余的或不切題的地方;增添殘缺的、語義表達不足的地方。由于時間所限，刪的內容一定要精，要切中要害，切忌動“大手術”。

B 句子是否相互連貫

檢查上下文是否連貫，句子銜接是否自然流暢，檢驗的標準主要是句子是否通順，該用過渡詞的地方用了沒有，以及所用的過渡詞是否合適。

C 是否使用了一些錯誤的或不恰當的詞語

檢查文章中是否有用詞不當的情況，要選擇自己最有把握的詞來表達思想，忌用生詞、大詞，避免中文式英語。

D 是否有語法錯誤

主謂是否一致，動詞的時態、語態、語氣的使用是否正確，詞組的搭配是否合乎習慣。為避免不必要的語法錯誤，對把握性不大的詞組、句型絕不要用。而應使用那些自己熟悉的詞組、句型來表達相同或相近的意思。

E 是否有大小寫、拼寫、標點錯誤，寫作格式是否符合要求

寫作格式規范容易贏得閱卷老師的印象分。留意下面一些常見格式要求：

文章標題用引號，書名用斜體，每段的第一行要空格，即留出4至5個字母的空格。

第二篇：托福寫作

Agree or disagree A university should focus more on its facilities, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers

Nowadays, highly education has been attached more important than before.A argue that school facilities should pay more attention than professor lecture.From my perspective, although such hardware like computer centers and science lab provide some benefits to university students, university depends on quality of stuff.Admittedly, a school equipped with great facilities is more appealing the applicants.The reason is that it can make study easier.A bright library offers such a quiet condition for knowledge absorption;a computer center provides a self-govern ways to study;a science lab make student get more practice about miracles.However, this factors become less considerate when it comes to the quality of the professors.For one thing, not only do famous teachers can impart the knowledge, but instill the angle that to solve the problem.To pass on knowledge, a human is no better than a machine or a high-tech tool.The difference lies in the

special ways to get the solutions and the potential inspiration by the former.Take my favorite teacher for example, she often shows us some different way to solve the difficulties.And then she tells us the angle to work out the problem.As for me, it was not until her explanation, that I know about the easier way to work the problem.That is something that high-tech can barely achieve.For another, universities with qualified teachers tend to have higher graduate employment.It is not hard to imagine that a teacher with connections can bring more opportunity to get internship.As an old saying goes, knowledge starts with practice.It is still true now.Students who swamped in labs, would never face the brutal fact that you need a window for people to see what you’ve got.In this way, a well-connect professor can open that for you, instead of lifeless labs.In conclusion, though facilities could promote learning, but it fail to generate more practical merits to students.Recruit more qualified teacher should be paid more attention and stress.

第三篇：托福獨立寫作有哪些好方法

托福獨立寫作有哪些好方法

托福獨立寫作能取得高分都有哪些好方法呢？本文環球北美考試院為大家介紹托福寫作的備考方法，供大家參考閱讀。

把握好獨立作文重要的因素

托福獨立作文最重要的因素是什么？當然是論點和論證。一篇好的作文，論點可以提綱挈領，論證可以豐富文章內容。

由于考試時間的限制，很多英語程度好的學生也會出現一些問題。比如說一個學生對作文的論點言之鑿鑿，但就是寫不出東西，或是寫不出令自己滿意的句子。所以，上考場前，腦中一定要裝一些東西，好的例子，好的句子等。

這里強調論據的重要性，不是忽視邏輯和論點的重要性。相反，只要你能夠掌握一些萬能的論據，對你謀劃全篇的結構，以及段落發展，是有好處的。

論據的準備也可以稱為素材，這種素材可以是一個短語，一個人名，或是一個完整的例子。這種例子能夠輔佐你的亂點，能夠畫龍點睛。

把握好文章寫作思路

怎樣發展成為一篇邏輯性很強的文章呢？下面為大家介紹一些實戰做法。

1.首先應該審題，尤其關注作文題目中的絕對性詞匯。

比如：Improving school is most important factor to sucessful development of country.看到most，我們自然想到用他因法。

2.其次用20秒的時間，整理腦中所有能用的素材，讓這些素材稱為支持你段落的骨架，然后開始確定段落的論點。

3.盡量使你的語言句式豐富一些。

形式主語，主動，被動，動名詞To do作主語，倒裝句，there be，以及強調句等等。特別強調一點，為了使你文章的邏輯清晰可見，要使用邏輯連接詞。

4.把握好過渡詞的使用，和適當的論述方法完善你的作文，使之成為一個邏輯整體。論述方法：條件(假設)法，比如：if 我按照論點那樣做，就能cause siginificant effects，除了用if，還能有with, when, only through + 方式+倒裝等。

新托福獨立作文的寫作是有技巧可以講究的，只要我們把作文的條理理順，再用自己的語言組織論點和論據，豐富文章內容，然后再稍加注意一下措辭就可以了。

以上就是環球北美考試院為大家介紹的托福獨立寫作的相關知識，希望考生們可以仔細閱讀，考出理想的成績！

第四篇：托福寫作高分：我們的好鄰居

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Neighbors are the people who live near us.In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.In our daily life, the relationship between neighbors is so important that it would affect their spirit and mood for studying and working.Good neighbors could create and maintain mild relationship in the neighborhood.When facing the question that what are good characteristics of a popular neighbor, different people hold diverse opinions due to their respective angles and emotional concerns.In my point of view, I am glad to live with the people together who are considerate, warm-hearted and respectful.To begin with, the essential characteristic of a good neighbor is consideration, which would greatly benefit the relationship among neighbors.As we all know, everybody wants to live in a quiet and agreeable environment.However, some people always play music loudly, no matter at daytime or in evening.In such noisy circumstance, how could you concentrate on your study and finish your paper on time? This deed would disturb your normal life even affect your relationship.By contrary, considerate neighbors will not do such activities, moreover, they will tell their children not to pick the flowers of their neighbors and not to litter on other's drive way.Therefore, concerning others when you are enjoying life is a basic standard for a harmonious atmosphere in neighborhoods.Next one of the most important characteristics of a good neighbor is warm heart.Warm-hearted neighbors will give you a hand whenever you need help.People always encounter some unpredictable situations that they are unable to deal with.For example, good neighbors would glad to take care of your kids while you are not at home for a few days.They would provide the children with food and play games with kids until you come back.Suppose that your parent unfortunately get an acute sickness and need some medicine immediately.Good neighbors would offer you a ride to the pharmacy, even though it is pouring or snowing outside.Nobody will be unhappy when they have such warm-hearted neighbors like their brothers and sisters.Another feature of a good neighbor is respect.They know how to respect each other and not spread a rumor.In our real life, everybody may make some mistakes.However some people like to criticize the person who did the fault.This kind of deed will definitely harm their emotion and destroy the relationship between people.In contrast, a good neighbor would help him or her to correct the mistake and pass the hard time, not just watch and talk around.Admittedly, some people may think that other characteristics are indispensable, such as humor and honest.In fact, these merits could also improve the relationship and tighten the connection of neighbors to some extent.However, when all the values of those personalities are carefully compared, I think that the three characteristics mentioned above, consideration, warm heart and respect, outweigh any other qualities and greatly contribute to the relationship in our neighborhood and make our community more pleasurable.官方網站：www.tmdps.cn

第五篇：托福寫作

Do you agree or disagree that university should spend money on improving facilities(labs and general requirements)rather than hiring famous teachers?

Nowadays it rarely surprises us any more that there are relatively large numbers of facilities such as labs and libraries in the campus of universities.However, hordes of people are likely to go to extremes to hold that the university should not spend that much money on improving facilities on account of the lack of fund.Perhaps there is a slice of credibility in their argument, but I, without hesitation, advocate that it’s really essential for the universities to improve facilities

Granted, it is true that by saving money from the investment of facilities, the universities may concentrate more on the development of curriculum and the welfare which is provided for the teachers and professors.The statistics from the Harvard University reveal, astonishingly, that 62.7% people suggest that the universities should not be too eager to develop the general requirements.However, they ignore the fact that these facilities provided by the universities will definitely benefit the students in more ways than one.First and foremost, what never seizes to enthrall me is that the facilities will build a great atmosphere for the people(mainly college students)to study and relax.If the university constructs a great library which stores up millions of books or more, it will surely appeal to lots of studious students and those who don’t have the opportunity to attend the university.So actually this kind of facilities benefits the whole society, so do labs and other general requirements.Also, facilities like a natatorium or a gym can provide the basic facilities for students to relax.As we all know, students suffer both from studying burden and everyday lives.They need a way to relax, and these facilities just happen to provide great opportunities to relieve and extenuate their pressure.Therefore, there is no denying that by spending money on improving facilities a university will, to a great extent, enrich the students’ knowledge and broaden their horizon and give them the chance to relax at the same time.Moreover, the reputation gained from various facilities exerts a considerable fascination on me.If a university has more facilities which can provide students with more privilege, it can surely attract more top students who want the best education.Also, a famous university with variety numbers of facilities can add to the prestige of the city, the province, even the country which it belongs to.A case concerns MIT, which is one of the most celebrated universities all over the world.It has gained a high reputation for its prominent labs and stat-of-the-art equipments which provide students with the remarkable experimental qualification.Also, it makes its city, Cambridge, better known by the people as a cosmopolitan, international and civilized conurbation.Accordingly, it is apparent that the variety of the universities will make itself more eminent, therefore making significant contribution to the prosperity of the region.In conclusion, it is true that the limitation on funding facilities will economize some manpower and material resources for a university, but in order to provide both the students andthe universities with a bright future, spending money on these general equipments should never be off the table by a university.