第一篇：英語專業四級作文評分標準

四級作文一、四級作文的要求、評分標準及評卷實例

(一)四級考試對作文的要求

《大學英語考試大綱》明確規定：四級大學英語寫作考試時間為30分鐘。要求應試者寫出一篇不少于120個的短文：寫作命題源于日常生活和有關科技、社會文化等方面的一般常識，不涉及知識面過廣、專業性太強的內容。其命題方式有：給出題目、或規定隋景，或給段首句續寫；或給出關鍵詞寫短文、或看圖作文。要求內容切題，文理通順，表達正確，語義連貫，無重大語言錯誤。

(二)四級考試作文評分原則。評分標準和評卷實例

1．評分原則．

四級考試作文采用總體評分(GLOBAL SCORING)的方法，即把內容和語言作為一個統一體進行綜合評判。主要是看內容是否切題，表達是否充分，所用語言是否能清楚而明確地表達思想。評卷人員根據思想內容和語言表達的總體印象給出獎勵分（REWARD SCORES），并不是按語言點錯誤的多少扣分。

2．評分標準

作文題滿分為15分。

閱卷標準共分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。

2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數為嚴重錯誤。

5分——基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴重錯誤。

8分——基本切題，表達思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多。

11分——切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。

14分——切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤。

0分——白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想。

閱卷人員根據閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數檔次(如8分)相似，即定為(8分)，若認為稍優或劣于該檔次，則可加一分(9分)或減一分(7分)，但不得加減半分。字數不足應酌情扣分：

110--119詞：扣1分； 100--109詞：扣2分；90--99詞：扣3分；80--89分：扣5分： 50以下詞：扣9分

*作文最低分： 6分

題目： Bicycles: An Important Means of Transport in China

提綱：（1）為什么自行車在中國這樣普及

（2）和汽車的比較

（3）自行車在中國的前途 Score: 14

Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour,you can see that thousands of people--man and woman, old and young--ride theft bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles.”

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride.Second,riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country, and has a large population,I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.Score: 11

There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of transport in people' s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider' s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in

China.Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a developing country.And a bicycle

has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the countary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China' s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of

bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it' s quality will be improved.Score: 8

Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no

money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of

putting it.It doesn't ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn' t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn' t need any oil, and it can' t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modem

bicycles.Score: 5

Perhaps the amount of bicycle in China is the largest in the world.Why was it so widely used in China? I thought the answer was: the population in China is too large and the price of bicycle is much cheaper.The third answer is that the

bicycle is easier in using than other transportations.Comparing with the car, the bicycle is cheaper and it is easier in using than the car, but its speed is lower than that of

the car.The bicycle will be remained for a long time in China but in the end it will be disappeared with the improval of people' s living level.Scoer: 2

As every body know, China a big developing country.So, the living standard of people not very high at present people' s income is not enough for they to buy cars motorcycles.And bike is easy to ride.Bicycle is cheaper be made.And I think

bicycle the useful tool of tsansport in China now.So, it is quite porpular and wildly used in China's cities and country sides than the personal transportation-tool.Bike is a kind of clean tools of transport.It not use gas and other energers.For this reason it not creat polution.But in

fact in any way Bicycle is not advanced than car.If it is raining, the rider will suffer from wet, on the other hand, bike can not carry much goods.According to the our country' s developing rate.I firmly believe that Bicycle will replaced by car or motorcycle in that

nearly future.But undoubtfully it continue the important means of transport in China for a long time.Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Outline:1.有人認為讀書要有選擇2.有人認為應當博覽群書3.我的看法

Score: 11

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree

with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books.Those

good books can give us pleasure and knowledge while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one

aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.By this way, we can

increase the quality and quantity of reading.Score:5

I think reading not only selectively but also extensively.Because the two sides arenot contradict．Our time is

limited．So we can not read every book in the world．However, we will not be interested in every book．We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like．But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge，news and so on，it also make ours become a wise man．0n the one hand

reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted．Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read．On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life．They are all useful to ours．

Score: 2

Most people thought that read books should have been selectived.But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?

Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for us.We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for

us.on another hand, Someone' s intresting was wide.Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn' t reading at

only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and

helpful for us.Don' t treat these books with rackless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.Score: 14

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively? They argue that with the development of modern science and

technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them.Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't

read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree.They emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of

knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who's right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we shouldread extensively first.We should read

books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.Score: 8

Some people think reading shall be choosed.Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are

harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely.Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge.And

man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively.Because reading is important to man.Some books can help man but

some books can lead some people to crime.It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV.We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge.It can make our life more beautiful.We must give up those unhelpful

books.They are not good to us.Reading them is wasting time and money.Soreading selectively is an important part in

reading.寫作單項練習

1．刪除與主題句無關的句子并使句子按邏輯順序排列，然后再把句子寫成段落：

TS: There are three kinds of book owners.a.those who have many books but have read through a few, dipped into most and marked none

b.those who have all the standard sets and best-sellers but have read none

c.those who have written many books

d.those who have a few books or many and have read and marked them all

TS: You should read a good newspaper every day

a.everyone reads a good newspaper every day

b.it is important to know what is happening in the world

c.papers give information about sales

d.newspapers have good sports coverage

TS: There are many reasons why language change, but three major causes help illustrate the concept.a.rapidly expanding technology and new system of communication bring all cultures and languages into closer contactb.groups of languages speakers drifted away to establish isolated, independent communities

c.all languages change with the experience of their speakers

d.the influence of and interaction with foreign cultures

2．選擇適當的過渡性詞語填空：

a.I suppose the first day of our vacation will be very enjoyable __________.we are going to play a game of tennis.______________ we shall take a shower because we usually put a lot of efforts into the game and will be wet with sweat.___________ we will do some sunbathing on the beach._______________ we will take a walk into town.b.During holidays, the traffic in big cities is always particularly busy.This is mainly ______________ most citizens do not have to work in these days and they ride their bicycles to the streets to do shopping.Farmers in the country ________ flood into the cities by bus or by their own motorcycles.The streets are full of buses, taxicabs, minibuses and pedestrains ____________, traffic jams often occur.c.There is a modern Chinese proverb: “I work for all and all for me.” I think this is quite right.__________, if I am a salesman, I go to work and sell goods to customers.I am serving the people.__________I need the service of other people almost every minute.d.The one-child family is much better than the family with more children._______, to have one child benefits the family.It can reduce the economic burden of the family and the child can be taken good care of and be well educated._________, to have one child is advantageous to the country.Overpopulation has become a serious problem, especially in developing countries.It is certain that the one-child family tends to control population growth, thus promoting the economic development of the nation.__________ the importance of having one child has generally been realized by many people.e.Children should decide for themselves what job they prefer to do in the future._________, children know themselves much better than their parents.They can choose a job they really like._________, children seldom make the best of what have learned in the career decided by their parents.___________, growing to be independent is the natural way for everybody.Following their parents' words at all times, children may well bury their own advantages.3.將下列主題句發展成段落：

a.Everyone pursues happiness in life.b.The struggle between man and disease is hard and endless.c.Science affects human life in at least three ways.4.寫作練習

1． Jobs for Graduates

1)大學生難找工作

2)原因很多

3)解決的辦法

2． How to face up to your difficulties

1)Every person may meet difficulties in life

2)Some people adopt negative attitudes toward difficulties

3)There exist the positive attitude toward difficulties

第二篇：英語專業四級評分標準

英語專業四級評分標準

總括

聽寫15分

聽力30題15分,0.5分一個

完型20題10分,0.5分一個

單選30題15分,0.5分一個

閱讀20題20分，1分一個

作文15分

第三篇：英語專業四級聽寫評分標準

聽寫評分標準

1.聽寫共分15小節；每節1分。

2．每節最多扣1分。

3．重復錯誤，僅扣一次。4．錯誤共分兩類：小錯誤(minor mistakes)和大錯誤(major mistakes)。

A.小錯誤：

1)單詞拼寫錯一到二個字母。例：inconvenient—unconvenient，inconvient；originally--origionally, originally； knives———nives。

2)標點符號錯誤：一when When；To solve this problem，the—To solve this problem the?。

3)冠詞，單復數錯誤：shells—shell；with a solution—with the solution。

4)小錯誤扣分標準：小錯誤在一節中出現一次，留作總計；出現兩次，扣0．5分；出現三次，扣0．5分后留一小錯做總計；出現四次(以上)，扣1分。

5)未扣分小錯誤的扣分標準： 累計2---4個：扣0．5分。累計5---8個：扣1分。

B.大錯誤：漏寫、加詞、造詞、換詞(冠詞作小錯計)，大移位，時態錯誤，原文一個詞變兩個詞。每個錯誤扣0．5分。

例： are still paid—is still paid，still paid，still pay；were used—we used；coins were—coin was；began—begun；goods—good；cloth—ciof，cloths；salt—soit；paid—payed； throughout--allthrough，through of;accepted——an acception；as payment——for payment；for goods——to goods；they——these，there．

5．一些特例的扣分標準：

1)下列情況不扣分： in the past—in the past,；“now”后加逗號。

2)下列情況扣分： throughout--through out(小錯誤)；a piece of—pieces of(兩個小錯，扣0．5分)

6．總分為0．5分時，以1分計算：其余總分中如含分數的，分數舍去，留整數。如：12．5分一12分，7．5分---7分。空白卷—律打0分。

第四篇：英語專業四級寫作評分標準

專業四級寫作評分標準

滿分15分，分項可以打0.5分。

A.思想與表達(ideas and argument)7分

滿分7分，其中6-7分為優秀，4-5分良好，3分一般，1-2分較差。

1.思想內容（idea content）

a.內容切題

b.內容充實

c.觀點明確

d.論據支持論點

e.有獨到見解

2.表達效果（effectiveness）

a.表達清晰

b.有說服力

3.篇章組織結構（rhetorical organization）

a.每段有主題句

b.句間銜接自然

c.段間過渡自然

d.第一部分明確提出觀點

e.最后一部分自然得出結論

f.段落排列合理

B.語言運用能力(language use)6分

滿分6分，其中6分為優秀，4-5分良好，3分一般，1-2分較差。

1.準確性（correctness）

a.語法正確

b.句子結構正確

c.固定搭配正確

d.用詞準確

2.豐富性（richness）

a.詞匯豐富

b.句子形式多樣

3.得體性（approprateness)

a.語氣恰當

b.語言地道

4.流利度（fluency）

完成規定詞數

超出200詞過多扣一分；完成規定內容，字數少于170詞扣一分；未完成任務的不僅扣字數分，也要從內容上扣分。

只有topic sentence, 沒有supporting points，一般只能得3-5分

C.寫作規范(mechanics)2分

滿分2分，其中2分優秀，1.5分良好，1分一般，0.5分較差

a.單詞拼寫正確

b.標點符號正確

c.大小寫正確

d.書寫美觀

e.卷面整潔

第五篇：英語專業四級作文

英語專業四級作文范文

1.How to Keep Fit

A healthy body is very important to every one of us.When you are sick, you feel painful all over your body, have no energy to work;and the only thing you want to do is lying on the bed.When you are healthy, you can eat well, sleep well, sing and jump happily, do all the things you like to enjoy life.The methods to keep us fit vary.In the morning, you can get up early, go outdoors, breathe the fresh air, and do physical exercises.Running and swimming are extremely helpful to keep one fit.If you are a busy person and have no special time allocated to do these things, there are still some ways useful for to keep fit.The easiest way is to walk to your office instead of riding a bike or taking a bus.You also have to take a routine physical checkordinate the different parts of our bodies when we have sports.For example, we must try our best to co-ordinate the movements of the arms and legs when we play basketball, or we won't be able to shoot the basket.Exercise also benefits our organs.It lets the heart beat faster than usual, and then helps enlarge the blood vessels to protect us from heart attacks.Exercise can also contribute to the development of our ability to response agilely.For instance, when you play table-tennis, you must try to reflect as quickly as you can so

that you may fight back at the right position at the fight moment.Exercise can also contribute to improving our mood.When you do exercise, you move a lot, and you have to be more active.It helps you become more optimistic.Exercise will fill your life with various contents and make it more colorful.What's more, exercise will help you get rid of your inertia.If you keep doing exercise regularly, you will never be a lazy person.Therefore, exercise has great effect on one's character.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.16.Crisis

Crisis is to our life what illness is to our body.Just as fatal disease can destroy our body and sometimes even put an end to our lives, so does smashing crisis knock us down so hopelessly that we might never have chance of standing up again.However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category.They, like occasional ailments which sometimes can bolster our body's immune system, are mostly minor and surmountable and therefore making us hardy enough to survive whatever adversities in our later life.Even those serious crises, if handled properly, can be turned to a blessing to us, too.As far as a nation is concerned, crisis can be rendered beneficial.Take Wenchuan earthquake which shook most of Sichuan recently for example.The crisis has cost us Chinese a lot.Houses collapsed, bridges broke down and many affected areas were cut off from the outside world.Nearly a million people lost their homes, ten thousands of people were injured and another ten thousands of people were killed.But our sufferings won't go in vain.Scientists are more determined to improve the means by which we forecast earthquakes with more accuracy.We should build houses which can survive the destructive earthquakes.And we also should better the mechanism to face the emergencies and crisis.As for economic life, crises are not always rendered bad.During these times, we can stop the race of fast economy to speculate about some fundamental issues of humanity such as how much high-speed development in this way can contribute to the well-being of human life.Just take my own country for instance.Of course, in the past two decades or so, our economy has gained the highest speed man has experienced.But haven't we paid too much? Our rivers are polluted.Our natural resources are shrinking.Our national power of creation is drained.Is it worthy of it? Isn't it high time we gave it a serious thought? Shouldn't we stop making ourselves long in quantity and short in quality? And chance of deep thought has come with this crisis, which is now deepening in most parts of the world.Crisis sometimes contributes to our life treasure in a way that few can imagine.It can weather us and make us strong enough to face ourselves when we feel weak.Eric, my uncle is a case in point.He had hard time in his childhood going through such a fatal disease that he had never thought he could survive.He was in due course saved by doctors.Ever since then he regarded his life as a second given by God and has been so grateful to the world that he has been doing whatever he can to give back in the same measure to other fellows.And now he is living a happy and successful life.As a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not forgotten can be good teachers for us all.If we can bear in mind the various sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then our sufferings will not go unrewarded and those of our compatriots who was killed in the earthquake did not die in vain.We should take the lessons from crisis and regard them as a chance for new growth.17.Buying or Borrowing Books?

Books are close friends of humanity.They can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life.Through books we can obtain skills and techniques for survival and development.Through books we can enlighten our spirits and live a fuller life.There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying.While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest enjoyment.Admittedly, there are a few merits for borrowing books.For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money.And of course, with the money saved we can do other more worthy things.And also, as we borrow books from the library and friends, we normally have deadline to finish them, and consequently we can read more books in a limited time.And we can, above all, better our efficiency of our reading, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”

However, some advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling.One of them, definitely not shared by the choice of borrowing books, is the abundance of freedom that buying books can offer us.Since we can keep the books as long as we wish, we can read as much as we want.Another strength of owing books is that we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books.And finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun that borrowing books can by no means offer.While borrowing books can, to some extent, quench our thirst for knowledge, buying books gives us greater pleasure of selecting and keeping the best of the world treasure.Can we think of any thing else more delightful and rewarding?

18.TV—Blessing or Curse?

Few things in the modern world have so much influence on people as the television does.Being besieged with TV news, absorbing teleplays, well-masterminded programmes, one can easily conclude that TV is a real blessing to the human society, offering affluent entertainment and information.Yet, convenient and helpful as it is, the television also brings negative effects.To begin with, TV makes people more passive than before: since everything on TV is ready-made, there is no space for audience’s initiatives.The news has been carefully edited, teleplays well shot, programmes rehearsed, so all you need to do—and all you can do is to sit on a comfortable sofa and look at the screen.Though a lot of people enjoy doing this, the undoubted truth is that people are becoming more passive simply because there is no interaction and no efforts on them.Television also contributes to the fact that people nowadays are more distant to each other.Since most of our free time is taken away by the act of watching TV, we can no longer find enough time to visit friends, call on relatives or go to interesting places.This is also true within a family, parents and children and other members are less close to each other, because family get-togethers and conversations are disturbed by TV—when one member is watching TV, he would like others to keep quiet.Of course I am not denying the great conveniences and huge benefits the TV brings us, but to make it a really blessing to us, we should try to avoid its negative effects.