第一篇:雅思小作文萬能小結(jié)
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從評分標準看提高雅思大作文
如何才能取得雅思寫作高分是很多同學苦苦思索的問題,卻一直不得其解。其實,要想獲取雅思寫作高分不僅要勤于動筆,善于思考還要認真修改自己寫過的文章。我們可以從雅思寫作的評分標準(大作文)入手,想一想怎樣才能獲得考官們的青睞。下面快來跟隨前程百利雅思小編一起看如何提高雅思大作文吧。
首先是Task Response(任務(wù)的完成情況):在這個方面最重要的是字數(shù)和審題。所以練習速度至關(guān)重要,考前一定要有限時寫作的體驗。審題方面,一定要看清題目的 問題(包括到底有幾個問題,問題是辯論式的還是論說式的,辯論焦點是什么),可以把歷年考題拿出來做專門的審題訓練。一定要注意,千萬不能跑題,字數(shù)一定 要超過250字,否則只有拿低分的命運了。
接下來是Coherence and Cohesion(文章的連貫性):段落劃分和連接詞訓練。在段落方面,一定要用符合英美寫作習慣的topic sentence + supporting details的方式來寫作,連接詞方面,以下給同學們例舉一些常用linkers:
開始:currently, at present, initially, to begin with
承接:besides, in addition, moreover, meanwhile
轉(zhuǎn)折:however, whereas, while, on the other hand
表示結(jié)論:in conclusion, to sum up, overall
表示原因:because(of), accordingly, due to, owing to, since
表達觀點:in my opinion, personally
舉例說明:for example, for instance, such as?
表示讓步:although, despite , regardless of
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最后是Lexical Resource(詞匯的多樣性)和Grammatical Range and Accuracy(語法句式的準確性和多樣性):這兩點都與考生的英語基本功有關(guān),短期內(nèi)很難有實質(zhì)性突破。很多考生采取背單詞和看語法書的方法,但因為 非常枯燥也堅持不了多久且沒有什么成效。這里給大家的建議是第一,通過作文習作并讓有經(jīng)驗的老師批改,找出屬于自己的在語法和詞匯方面的問題,發(fā)現(xiàn)一個問 題解決一個問題,并在老師的指導下配合相關(guān)的有針對性的語法和詞匯學習。第二,一定要擯棄用“大詞”、“難句”的強迫心態(tài)。
以上就是前程百利雅思小編為大家介紹的從評分標準看提高雅思大作文,希望給大家的雅思備考帶來幫助。
第二篇:雅思作文小結(jié)
task 1 You r going to London to take a training course for a month.Pls write a letter tothe local accomodation agency to prepare a flat for u.U should tell him ur information, ur requirement, when u would arrive.task 2 Today s parents spend too little time staying with their children and use television to make their children keep quiet.explain the reason and results by using ur relevant expierence.■Version 57
Task 1 is a reference letter for your friend to work with foreign teenagers.Describe his or her character and why you recommend her.I think, if you practice more writing before the test, especial those topics that are given by JIAHUA, writing will not be a big problem.Task 2 In most part of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate.In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.This one is among the 15 topics that JIAHUA has laid emphasis on(No 31)Acdemic.■Version 56
Task 1:兩個bar charts,關(guān)于美國一個主要航空公司從一月到二月的情況。第一個是percentage of flights on time;第二個是lost baggages complains。
Task 2:許多人說為了不斷提高教育質(zhì)量,就應(yīng)該鼓勵學生去評價和批評老師,另一些人說,這樣做將導致教室里的尊敬與紀律消失。討論這兩種觀點 Version 55
Task one: the pie charts below show the percentage of total music sale shared by different companies in the year 1990,1995 and 2000.Task two: recent statistics show that the crimes by the young people in the major city of the world are on the increase.Give your analysis of the reasons and the solutions.■Version 54
Task1)A bar chart shows the percentage of emploment of women in 3 sections in 4 diferrent countries.Task2)Modern technology has influenced people s entertaiment,makes people less creative.Agree&Disagree?
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第二部分:Many people believe that we have developed into a “throw-away society” which is filling with plastic bags and rubbish.TASK 1 You took your family had a good meal in a local restaurant.Write a letter to the newsper to tell about it, describ the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth for other people to visit.TASK 2.Choose an invertion, telephone or computer, and tell how it has changed our life.Are the changes all possitive or negative?
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tesk1 一個table給出關(guān)于澳洲生活在貧困中的家庭類型的數(shù)目與百分比。
一開始的時候下筆太快結(jié)果寫到一半發(fā)現(xiàn)會錯表格的意思,然后擦掉重寫,浪費了很多時間,結(jié)果tesk2的conclntion不夠時間寫!痛苦啊~~~)
tesk2 比較型的文章,給出幾種類型的media然后讓你選三種出來比較,并要求說出你認為哪一種media能在獲取信息方面有最大的effect。version 52
task 1 有兩個圖,一個曲線,一個餅狀圖,關(guān)于英國electricity在summer和winter的使用情況和用在一些電器上的比率。
task 2 的題目絕了。
happiness is considered important to peoplewhy are the definitions of happiness different?(大概是這樣,意思就是問為什么幸福的定義如此不同和難下這個定義)what is the factors in achieving happiness give some examples and relavent evidence.■Version 51
TASK 1是給你一個TABLE和一個CHART,分別說europe usa Canada的婦女受的高等教育的比例,其中歐洲中分丹麥瑞士等,第二個CHART說各個MAJOR 中女學生所占的比例,有HUMANITIES LAW MEDICINE ENGIEERING AND COMPUTER SCIENCE SOCIAL SCIENCE AND SO ON
task2: Most countries spend a large amount of money in weapons to defend themselves though they are not at war.To the countries it should spend money to help the citizens for whom in the countries are poor and disadvantaged.To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement.■Version 50
task1是三個公司的稅后贏利profits的曲線圖curve chart.task2是調(diào)查表明世界城市在變大,有個單詞要注意enomous,當時不知道這個單詞意思,還好,蒙對了。要求你find the causes和可能的consequence...,上過深圳環(huán)球?qū)O頭課的同學可以看孫頭課上發(fā)的講義,即causes and solutions類型的文章,背背模板套句。
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task1講英國人口從大城市中遷出和主要原因第一個bar chart 是3D的,是population decrease rate in manchester, birmingham, livepool and somewhere :P 四個城市,百分比中間兩個高40%上下吧,另外兩個低,第二個是households認為城市中最嚴重的問題 第一是crime超過60%,第二是rubbish 40%多 還有noise, neighbour等一共5個bar : waste disposal become increasing problem how do you think it is true and give some suggestion for goverment and individuals how to reduce the rubbish being producing.task2Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in urban areas.How true do you think? give some suggestion for the government and individuals how to reduce the amount of rubbish.VERSION 48
1、五個國家的失業(yè)率表格
2、有的家庭不買電視為了孩子有時間去創(chuàng)造發(fā)明,disagree or agree ?
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小作文是寫4個國家在工業(yè),農(nóng)業(yè)和家用用水的狀況是個BAR CHART。大作文是寫機器人是給人們帶來好處還是危險。今后intelligent machines象robots會越來越多的應(yīng)用,它將能做許多人類能做的事。請討論這種想法benefits和dagers。
第一篇是關(guān)于四個國家在家庭用水,農(nóng)業(yè)和工業(yè)的人均用水量,很好寫,也沒有什么困難看懂。第二篇是寫機器人的好處和壞處,還可以吧,也不是很難.task 1 is 4 column chart!showing the amount of water use in 4 countries in 3 categories(agriculture,household,industy).in agi.australia leads 1st, in household,industy, america is no.1 the U.K, no wonder a country full of gentleman, always the last one, japan strives for the 3rd place!task 2 is the wildly using of robots will bring our human beings danger,use ur own view tell sb ur thoughts on it: a blessing or a curse?
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Task 1,關(guān)于1970,1990,2010三個時代英國人在transport(Cars & Public transport)和 communications(Postal services & Tele-communication)花銷上的變化---柱狀圖.很直觀,很容易組織結(jié)構(gòu).20分鐘搞定200字.Task 2,是說現(xiàn)在有人用live animals進行research.有人覺得cruel and unnecessary;有人認為是可行的for the interests of human.Discuss the two views(注意,這很重要)題目很有代表性,如果比較愛看動物世界和探索類節(jié)目加上如果是半個動物保護主義者,肯定兩方面都有話說.結(jié)構(gòu)是典型的平衡型:開頭,觀點1,觀點2,最后陳述自己的傾向.37分鐘,400字.■Version 45
TASK1,講一個在KINGSTOWN里1996年到2001年外國學生的人數(shù)變化,分兩方面UNIVERSITY和SECONDARY SCHOOL。簡單。A bar chart shows the change in the number of international students in universities and secondary school from 1996 to 2001.TASK2,(大意)It is said that today people’s live are becoming increasingly stressful.What’s the reason of it occur and how to solve the problem? VERSION 1
一、英國25年間能源原料狀況,折線圖。當然是新的干凈能源上升,污染的下降啊
二、老人生活在養(yǎng)老院好還是在家好
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作文一:三個PIE CHARTS shows the changes in the consumption of energy from different energies in different time(1928,195?,1998).Energies was composed of OIL, NATURAL GAS, COAL, OTHER and in 1998 NUCLEAR ENERGY was introduced.作文二:Scientific and technology advances was benefit in our daily life today.However, most of scientists no longer be able to find the solutions of the problems they have created.To what extent do you agree or disagree.Tell reasons.詳細大作文題目:
1.new invention(computer phone etc)more and more change people live.2.will it bring some positve or negtive effect ?
3.answer your questions with your relevent example of your experenice
TASK2:作文是寫科學創(chuàng)造了現(xiàn)代社會,可有人認為科學家在今后不再可能有什么科技創(chuàng)造了,你認為如何?
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第一是英國四種能源的線狀圖.第二是寫現(xiàn)在對老人來說,到老人院里比和家里那些忙著工作的下一代在一起要好,說說你的看法。就這些。
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the one who do not know how to use computer become more and more disadvantage.show the disadvantages and what action should government take?
現(xiàn)在不懂電腦會落后于時代,說說你的看法,有人認為政府有責任解決這個問題,你認為有哪些方法
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Creative artists should be given weth freedom to express their ideas(words,pictures,musics and films.however some people think government should take some restriction with them.to what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion
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It is found by a survey that the crime rate of young women is increasing.Please state out the possible reasons and solutions.Version 91
Is it fair that some successful sports professionals earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions? Give both sides reasons and state your own opinion.Version 92
旅游業(yè)的發(fā)展和英語的廣泛應(yīng)用會不會損害其他國家的文化和語言。(xiaoyingzi提供)
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There are some serious problems in schools worldwide resulting from student’s attitude.Analyze the possible reasons for this phenomenon and give your solutions.Version 94
婦女外出工做,政府是否應(yīng)該為她們的孩子提供看管的人還有設(shè)施?(xiaoyingzi提供)
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People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount of holiday time.Should people have the same amount of leisure time? Give your opinion using some of your own experience.Version 96
Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement in the standard of living.What’s your idea?
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Some people regard animals as the source of food or clothes, and others think that they should be treated like pets.State your opinion from both sides.Version 98
Someone said the age of book has past;videos, computers, televisions and films will present the information.Others think that books and written words will still be necessary in spreading information and in completing education.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.Version 99
Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society.Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language.What’s your opinion?
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Some people think that it is a moral obligation for developed countries to provide international aid to developing countries, while others worry that the aid fund might possibly be misused by the government of the poor countries and could not actually help the poor people to improve their living standard.What is your opinion?
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Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies.Do you agree or disagree with the opinion? What should the government do?
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There are more and more vehicles in front of your houses, which is very dangerous for cyclists and pedestrians.Besides, many gardens have to make way to highways or expressways.How can we make everyone satisfied?
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Over the past fifty years, young people began to gain status and power lost by old people.What are the causes? Is it a good or bad development?
第三篇:雅思小作文
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As shown in the first chart, oil was the world’s main energy source, accounting for 37% of the energy consumption in 2005.Followed by coal and natural gas, constituting 28% and 23% respectively.By comparison, the proportion of nuclear power was small, 6%, equating that of hydro-electricity.Saudi Arabia accounts for the largest proportion of the world’s oil reserves, 20%, well ahead of Canada, the country with the second biggest reserve, 14%.Behind Canada are four Middle East countries, namely Iran(10%), Iraq(9%), Kuwait(8%)and United Arab(8%).By contrast, the reserves of Venezuela, Russia and the united states are relatively small, making up 6%, 5% and 2@ respectively.The remaining 18% is found in other countries.Pic
The three pie charts show how university students in three countries spent their money in the year 2003.In general, students in countries A spent slightly more than those in country B(US$5,000 and US$4,500 respectively).In comparison, student expenditure in country C was considerably lower, at only US$1,500 per year.Accommodation and food were the two biggest items of expenditure.Altogether they constituted around 60% of the total students’ expenditure in all the three countries.The difference is that in country A and B accommodation spending exceeded food spending while the reverse was true for country C.The rest of the students’ spending was divided among leisure, books and others.Leisure spending constituted a larger percentage(around 20%)of student expenditure in both country A and B, while in country C more money was spent on books(12%)than on leisure(12%).Overall, as wealth decreased, the percentage of students’ spending on non-essential items reduced.柱狀圖Bar
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This bar chart shows the changes in the amount of oil discovered worldwide every 5 years from 1950 to 2005 and the predicted figures from 2010 to 2020.In 1950, the world oil discovery stood at 20 billion barrels a year, which grew dramatically over the next 15 years to reach a peak at approximately 56 billion barrels in 1965.However, from this year onwards, the growth of oil discovery was suddenly replaced by a sharply downward trend, with some ups and downs, to approximately 6 billion barrels a year in 2005, about 1/10of its peak amount in 1965.It is predicted that 7 billion barrels of oil will be discovered worldwide in the year 2010, and this figure is forecast to decline steadily to an all-time low of only 3 billion barrels in 2020.In conclusion, this chart shows that world oil discovery peaked in the 1960s but has been declining for over 40 years, and this trend is expected to continue into the near future.The bar chat shows information about the areas of land damaged by human activities in four major continents of the world.The area of land damaged in Africa and Asia are similar, totalling approximately 1,200 million hectares for each, while in Australia and Europe the numbers are considerably lower, averaging between 300and 400 million.Looking at the causes behind land damages, it can be seen that in African, Europe and especially Australia, breeding is the leading cause of land loss, damaging approximately 500, 100 and 400 million hectares of land respectively.Next comes tree-cutting which takes away slightly larger areas of land than farming in all the three regions.Asia shows a slightly different picture, where tree-cutting activities have led to the largest amount of land loss(450 million hectares).Breeding and farming account for the remaining damage(380 and 420 million hectares respectively).Overall, breeding causes the most pervasive damage to land around the world.折線圖 line
Overall, the world population rose sharply from less than 500 million in the 1400s to 6 billion in 2000, a growth of 12 times over 600 years.The increase was more dramatic after 1800 and only in the 1700s was there an obvious decline(1.2 billion to 0.9 billion).The ozone hole was at its smallest size of about 400 thousand square km in 1980, but 20 years later, it was enlarged by 9 times to 3.6 million square km.The only period when there was a reduction in size was in the early 1990s(from 2 to 1.2 million square km).流程圖diagram
The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of south America, Africa and Indonesia.The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.Firstly when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry.They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry.After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed.This part is not needed for making chocolate.Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.(pic)
The chart describes how water is obtained outdoors.According to the figure, the first step of obtaining water outdoors is to find a hole with green plants on its bottom.Next, remove the green plants in the middle and put a container there.Then, cover the hole with a plastic sheet and place two stones on both ends of it to secure its position.A third stone is laid on the middle of the plastic sheet so that the middle part is also the lowest part.When the sun shines on the green plants in the hole, water evaporates from these plants.The vapour rises up and then cools down to form water drops on the plastic sheet.When there is more and more water, it flows along the sheet to accumulate on the lowest part.Finally, water falls down into the container directly under the middle stone.Thus, water is collected successfully through evaporation from green plants.Pic
In cool climate special attention is given to the use of building materials that have a high thermal mass.Insulation is used on the outside of heavy materials such as concrete, brick or adobe.This kind of material stores heat and slowly releases it while external insulation ensures that all heat absorbed by wall materials is released inside the building.Careful positioning of the building and large windows facing winter sunlight also assist to passively heat the house.The roof has an extreme angle to assist with snow runoff and roof overhang does not interfere with sunlight.Homes in warm climate require the opposite approach.Insulation and reflective roof material aim to keep heat from the sun out.Windows are placed under a wider roof overhang so that they are shaded form direct light in the day and so that cooler night air can move through the house when the windows are open.Map地圖
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The three diagrams illustrate what the village of Kelsbey looked like in 1780, 1860, and 2000.In 1780, Kelsbey had only 100 homes, but it had a large expense of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the middle.In the west there was a river running from north to south.The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes but the size of farmland and woods was reduced by half.In the same year, a bridge could be seen over the river and a road was constructed linking the river to the residences.140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared.Several school buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential area in the north by a newly-built road.Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.大作文
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It is first important to realise that art is the key part of cultural legacy;therefore, it is meaningful to conserve the art for the cultural diversity.For example, painting in different culture has a range of styles, genres, tools and materials.If we did not protect it, a form of art would be disappeared.Besides, some work of art such as graffiti, spark people’s imaginations and provide them a novel perspective to view the world.The arts can develop a culture which people pursue art as a hobby.Furthermore, arts also improved the environment attractive, which is reflected in architecture and gardening design.Body paragraph B
Although arts are very important, we observe public facilities should get more subsidy than arts from government.Citizens are more interested in the availability of public facilities, such as, water and electricity supply, schools, libraries and roads, these facilities have a direct impact on their daily lives.By contrast, for most people, sculptures, paintings or operas are luxury items, which cannot bring any tangible benefit to them.Another reason is that the arts can sometimes yield high returns and therefore succeed in receiving business sponsorship.This is particularly the cause when arts include music, movies, operas and creative arts.Therefore, it is pointless to support the use of public funds for this purpose, if basic facilities are underfunded.
第四篇:雅思小作文
IELTS套句式寫作大全
第一部分:TASK1圖表寫作套句精選
1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...該表格描述了在...年之...年間...數(shù)量的變化。
2.the bar chart illustrates that...該柱狀圖展示了...3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...該圖為我們提供了有關(guān)...有趣數(shù)據(jù)。
4.the diagram shows(that)...該圖向我們展示了...5.the pie graph depicts(that)....該圓形圖揭示了...6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...這個曲線圖描述了...的趨勢。
7.the figures/statistics show(that)...數(shù)據(jù)(字)表明...8.the tree diagram reveals how...該樹型圖向我們揭示了如何...9.the data/statistics show(that)...該數(shù)據(jù)(字)可以這樣理解...10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...這些數(shù)據(jù)資料令我們得出結(jié)論...11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...如圖所示...12.according to the chart/figures...根據(jù)這些表(數(shù)字)...13.as is shown in the table...如表格所示...14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in...從圖中可以看出,...發(fā)生了巨大變化。
15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...從圖表我們可以很清楚(明顯)看到...16.this is a graph which illustrates...這個圖表向我們展示了...17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...該表格描述了...年到...年間a與b的比例關(guān)系。
18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...該圖以圓形圖形式描述了...總的趨勢。
19.this is a column chart showing...這是個柱型圖,描述了...20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of...如圖所示,兩條曲線描述了...的波動情況。
21.over the period from...to...the...remained level.在...至...期間,...基本不變。
22.in the year between...and...在...年到...期間...23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...1995年至1998三年里...24.from then on/from this time onwards...從那時起...25.the number of...remained steady/stable from(month/year)to(month/year)....月(年)至...月(年)...的數(shù)量基本不變。
26.the number sharply went up to...數(shù)字急劇上升至...27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and......至...期間...的比率維持不變。
28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year)
...的數(shù)目在...月(年)達到頂點,為...29.the percentage remained steady at...比率維持在...30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of......的比例比...的比例略高(低)。
31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and......與...的區(qū)別不大。
32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...該圖表表明...的數(shù)目增長了三倍。
33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....逐年減少,而...逐步上升。
34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at)of[%]....的情況(局勢)到達頂(高)點,為...百分點。
35.the figures/situation bottomed out in...數(shù)字(情況)在...達到底部。
36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.數(shù)字(情況)達到底部(低谷)。
37.a is...times as much/many as b.a是b的...倍。
38.a increased by...a增長了...39.a increased to...a增長到...40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.比低高(低)
41.there is an upward trend in the number of......數(shù)字呈上升趨勢。
42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to......到...發(fā)生急劇上升。
43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down.從...到...,下降速率減慢。
44.from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the...,reaching a figure of...從這年起,...逐漸下降至...45.be similar to...與...相似
46.be the same as...與...相同
47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and......與...之間有許多相似(不同)之處
48.a has something in common with b
a于b有共同之處。
49.the difference between a and b lies in...a與b之間的差別在于...50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in......年...急劇上升。
第二部分:Task1 寫作常識
一、圖形種類及概述法:
泛指一份數(shù)據(jù)圖表:a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table
餅圖:pie chart
直方圖或柱形圖:bar chart / histogram
趨勢曲線圖:line chart / curve diagram
表格圖:table
流程圖或過程圖:flow chart / sequence diagram
程序圖:processing/procedures diagram
以下是一些較常用的描述用法
The table/chart diagram/graph shows(that)
According to the table/chart diagram/graph
As(is)shown in the table/chart diagram/graph
As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,figures/statistics shows(that)...It can be seen from the figures/statistics
We can see from the figures/statistics
It is clear from the figures/statistics
It is apparent from the figures/statistics
table/chart/diagram/graph figures(that)...table/chart/diagram/graph shows/describes/illustrates how
......閱卷考官經(jīng)常是不會看那些圖表的,因此文章必須邏輯清晰,如果描述得能令人在腦海里勾畫出那個data chart,這篇task1無疑會達到8分的水平。開篇的第一句話可以是一句高度概
括性的introduction(當然開門見山直接描述也是一種寫法);這樣做不僅使文章更趨于完美,而且可以達到湊字數(shù)的目的(但不要照抄題目,除非時間相當緊迫)。接下來另起一段開始進行描述(根據(jù)實際情況1-2段),這當中經(jīng)常要連續(xù)使用非限定性定于從句,從而使得描述過程流暢、清晰。最后也可再另起一段進行簡短的綜述(并非必須)。上述的任何一個步驟都要遵循依據(jù)現(xiàn)有data進行客觀描述的原則,任何推測性或議論性的內(nèi)容寫得再多、再精彩不僅不會加分,而且還會成為扣分的因素。
二、data的具體表達法
data在某一個時間段固定不變:fixed in time
在一系列的時間段中轉(zhuǎn)變:changes over time
持續(xù)變化的data在不同情況下:
增加:increase / raise / rise / go up...減少:decrease / grow down / drop / fall...波動:fluctuate / rebound / undulate / wave...穩(wěn)定:remain stable / stabilize / level off...最常用的兩種表達法:
動詞 + 副詞形式(Verb+Adverb form)
形容詞 + 名詞形式(Adjective+Noun form)
1.Verb+Adverb form
The number of XXX
+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuate...+insignificantly/significantly/slightly/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/steadily/gradually/slowly...+from(第一時間)to(第二時間)/ between(第一時間)and(第二時間)
2.Adjective+Noun form
There was a(very)sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuation(注意:上述很多詞不可用于修飾fluctuation)
+in the number of XXX from(第一時間)to(第二時間)/ between(第一時間)and(第二時間)
描述穩(wěn)定的data:
The number of XXX remained steady/stable from(第一時間)to(第二時間)/ between(第一時間)and(第二時間)
The number of XXX stayed the same from(第一時間)to(第二時間)/ between(第一時間)and(第二時間)
There was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of XXX from from(第一時間)to(第二時間)/ between(第一時間)and(第二時間)
描述不同狀態(tài)的data
Noun form:
steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp drop
Verbal form:
(to)bottom out /(to)reach the bottom /(to)increase gradually /(to)reach a plateau /(to)remain steady
描述the highest point以及the lowest point
高點極值:
The monthly profit / The figures / The situation...+peaked in(月份/年)<準確時間點用at XXX> at XXX% / XXX(極點data)
或者reached a peak / a high point at XXX% / XXX(極點data)
低點極值:
XXX bottomed out / reached
+rock / the bottom / a low point
或者hit a trough
此外,在描述過程中還有很多的conjunctional words/sentences,最常用的固定搭配如下:并列: as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what's more, apart from...舉例: for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially
事實: as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as...雷同/近似:similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally...轉(zhuǎn)折: however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, in stead(of), in spite of, despite of...原因與結(jié)果
1.cause-suggestion(幾乎不常用)
since / now that...;I hope that...because of/on account of/owing to/thanks to +(doing)sth, I hope that...2.cause-effect(較常用)
XXX lead to / bring about / result in/ account for...(一個句子), therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently /(and)so...3.effect-cause(較常用)
XXX be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of...(一個句子), because...it is adj.that...it is unimaginable that...it is undeniable that...it is interesting to discover that...三、其它相關(guān)常用詞(組)
1.主章開頭
圖表類型:table;chart;diagram;graph;column chart;pie graph
描述:show;describe;illustrate;can be seen from;clear;apparent;reveal;represent內(nèi)容:figure;statistic;number;percentage;proportion
2.表示數(shù)據(jù)
一般:have 10%;at 10%;over 10%
最高(低)點:peaked;reached a peak / high point
bottomed out;reached the bottom
變化:recover 略有回升; increase;jump;rise/rose;climb
decrease;fall/fell;drop;decline;reduce
fluctuate 浮動,搖擺不定
remained steady/stable;stay the same;little/hardly any /no change
變化程度:sudden/suddenly 突然的,意外的rapid/rapidly 迅速的,飛快的,險峻的dramatic/dramatically 戲劇性的,生動的significant/significantly 有意義的,重大的,重要的sharp/sharply 銳利的,明顯的,急劇的steep/steeply 急劇升降的steady/steadily 穩(wěn)固的,堅定不移的gradual/gradually 漸進的,逐漸的slow/slowly 緩慢的,不活躍的slight/slightly輕微的、略微地
stable/stably 穩(wěn)定的表示范圍:from XXX to XXX;between XXX and XXX;for XXX to XXX多長時間直到
表示程度:almost adv.幾乎,差不多
nearly adv.幾乎,密切地
approximately adv.近似的,大約
about adv.附近,大約,轉(zhuǎn)向,左右,周圍
just over 剛超過
over adv.結(jié)束,越過,從頭到尾
exactly adv.正確地,嚴密地
precisely adv.正好 精確地;清晰地
比例:20 per cent 20%
one in three 1/3
one out of every four 1/4
3.其它在描述中的常用到的詞
significant changes 圖中一些較大變化
noticeable trend 明顯趨勢
during the same period 在同一時期
grow/grew 增長
distribute 分布,區(qū)別
unequally 不相等地
pronounced 明顯的average平均
no doubt 無疑地
corresponding adj.相應(yīng)的,通訊的represent vt.闡述,表現(xiàn)
overall 總體上講
except 除外
in the case of adv.在...的情況下
in terms of / in respect of / regarding 在...方面in contrast 相反,大不相同
in conclusion adv.最后,總之
in comparison 相比之下
inversely adv.相反地,倒轉(zhuǎn)地
in general 通常,大體上,一般而言
range from
excessive adj.過多的,過分的,額外lower v.降低,跌落
elapse vi.(時間)過去,消逝
category n.種類
government policy 政府政策
market forces 市場規(guī)率
measure n.尺寸,方法,措施 v.估量,調(diào)節(jié)forecast n.先見,預(yù)見 v.預(yù)測
第五篇:雅思小作文
雅思小作文對很多人來講都是一個很復雜的任務(wù),所以掌握一些可以應(yīng)用在各種圖表中的萬能模板是十分必要的。現(xiàn)在天道小編就為大家總結(jié)了10個雅思小作文的萬能模板,希望會對大家有所幫助。
1、通過第一個曲線圖,我們可以知道____,也說明了結(jié)果是___
According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.2、一張有趣、有教育意義的、(內(nèi)容)的圖片(這句模板在雅思小作文中的應(yīng)用非常的廣泛。)
There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.3、當前有一張涉及______的增長曲線圖,許多人______,然而其他人傾向于___Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________.Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.4、目前,共同之處是_________,許多人喜歡______因為_______除此之外還由于_____
Nowadays, it is common to ______________.Many people like______________ because ______________.Besides, ______________.5、(圖表所示)_____,就像許多其他事物,被____更加喜愛,然而這一觀點正被________所抨擊,一些人認為_________,他們指出___________
______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________.They point that ______________.6、每種事物都有兩面性和________,是沒有異議的,包括利和弊
Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.7、_____作為_____被觀察了許多年,但是人們現(xiàn)在像發(fā)現(xiàn)新大陸一樣注視著它For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________.But people are taking a fresh look at it now.8、政府保證________,對于這份保證,大多數(shù)人做出了強烈地回應(yīng),因為_____It has stipulated by the government that ______________.To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.9、_______出現(xiàn)在我們?nèi)粘I钪惺呛芷匠5模瑹o論我們做什么,_______都是不可避免的______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life.Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.10、_____在人群中已經(jīng)成為熱門話題,特別是在年輕人中,激烈的爭論無休止______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.