第一篇：初中英語寫作

初中英語作文高分秘訣

1.動筆之前，認真審題

《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。

2.圍繞中心，擬定提綱

書面表達評分原則有四條：

（1）內容要點；

（2）運用詞匯和結構的數量；

（3）運用語法結構和詞匯的準確性；

（4）上下文的連貫性。

由此可見，要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，設想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結構分散，廢話連篇，嚴重跑題。書面表達，內容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記，要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書信，則要注意書信的格式，注意短文字數不要低于或超過規定的字數太多。

3.語言通順，表達準確

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。

(3)．注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。

1)語態、時態要準確無誤。

2)主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。

3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4)注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5)注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。標點符號特別注意漢英的不同，例如：

漢語英語

A.句號。.B.省略號???

C.頓號、無

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1)外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。

2)服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。

3)內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。

4)感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。

5)動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行

加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法：

1)表示并列關系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or ?

2)表示轉折關系的過渡詞：but, yet, however ?

3)表示時間關系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that ?

4)表示空間關系的過渡詞：near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside ?

5)表示比較關系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as ?

6)表示對照關系的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though ?

7)表示遞進關系的過渡詞： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again ?

8)表示因果關系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result?

9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually ?

10)表示強調的過渡詞：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important ?

11)表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, ?

12)表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as ?

13)表示總結性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking ?

4.不會表達，另辟蹊徑

中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。

(1)迂回而行

當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時，可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路，然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。

(2)小詞大用

漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很文雅，但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。

(3)借花獻佛

有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現。因為剛剛做過題，記憶猶新，那么就可信手拈來，為我所用。

5.錦上添花，量力而行

如果你還有時間和精力，想把書面表達寫得更好，那么，請注意以下幾點：

(1)句型多樣化，不要I（We）??到底，使人覺得乏味。

(2)適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句。

(3)進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句。

(4)適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞。

(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。

(6)適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。

(7)上下句子緊接時，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節省篇幅。

6.書寫工整，卷面整潔

字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認，要保持卷面的整潔。

7.寫完之后，勿忘檢查

中考作文時，由于時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手：

(1)格式是否有錯。

(2)拼寫有無錯誤。

(3)語言是否用錯。

(4)時態、語態錯誤。

(5)標點錯誤。

(6)人稱是否用錯。

【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動，以免顧此失彼，影響全局。

總之，只要平時同學們多練習寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時間，在中考時一定能寫出高質量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。

初中英語寫作技巧

書面表達，首先要抓住所給的提示，然后運用所學詞匯、語法及句型，避繁就簡，簡明表達要講的內容。

那么，如何才能做好英語寫作題呢?這里介紹五個要訣以供參考。

1.緊扣中心;2.意思連貫;3.富于變化;4.注意時態;

5.不“生造”句子。

書面表達是一項能夠充分考查學生語言綜合運用能力的題型，一般來說，書面表達采取情景作文和控制作文兩種形式。情景作文多為看圖填詞、看圖寫話、看圖作文等形式，后者指根據所給條件進行寫作的形式。

以上兩種書面表達形式，都不同于自由寫作，都不允許同學們隨意發揮，更不許逐詞逐句地翻譯提示，而是要求考生抓住信息大意，用自己所學的、熟悉的語言進行表達。所以，無論哪一種書面表達形式，都要求做到以下幾點：

1.緊扣題目，準確、全面地表達出要點中規定的全部信息和內容，不得遺漏;

2.表達正確，意思連貫，過渡自然;

3.格式正確，書寫規范，標點正確，字數符合要求。

做好“書面表達”這道題，應該從以下幾方面入手：

一、充分準備，打好基礎

為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，應背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文。此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法。其實，用英文寫信、記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法。

二、仔細審題，明確要求

對題目所提供的信息要認真分析，明確要求，做到心中有數。要對所提供的信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具體化、條理化，為開始動筆做好準備工作，還要搞清題目的要求，以

便根據不同的題材、體裁，寫出不同格式，風格各異的文章。此外，還要注意人稱、時態、地點等信息，避免出錯。

三、抓住重點，尋求思路

根據題目所提供的信息，草擬提綱，尋求邏輯次序，確定如何下手。否則，語無倫次的文章將不會被人接受，也不可能得到高分。

四、遣詞造句，表達規范

用詞要適當，不可逐句把提示漢譯英，亦不可生拼硬湊，不要硬拿英語單詞到中文句子里去對號，否則寫出中文式英語，鬧出笑話。一般來講，寫作時，應盡量選出你有把握的詞，盡量使用短句(簡單句)。如果有的單詞不會寫，有的思想不會用英語表達，你可以設法繞開，最好找一個同義詞、同義句，或近義詞、詞組短語來代替。要正確使用關聯詞，如 and，or，but，so，because，since 等，以便行文自然流暢。除此之外，寫作時還要注意時態、語態的各種句式的交替作用，使文章顯得得體，表達流暢。

五、修改潤色，錦上添花

作文寫完之后，應注意檢查修改，修改時先從全局修改。首先要檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當，接下來檢查所寫內容是否切題，該交待的內容是否交待了，最后檢查所用時態、人稱是否符合要求，最后是否一致。

局部修改，也就是段落、句子水平上的修改。作局部修改時，要檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準確，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。

另外，值得一提的是，考生修改時，一定要注意文章長短(詞數)是否達到了要求。為了便于辨認，修改好后，還要認真謄寫一遍，英語謄寫的基本要點如下:

1.四周應留空。

2.標題應寫在第一行的中央。文章與標題間空 2-3 行，除介詞、連詞、冠詞外，標題中每一個實詞的第一個字母均應大寫，但如果第一個單詞是介詞、連詞等，這個詞的第一個字母仍應大寫。

3.段與段之間一般不空行，但每段第一行應縮進 4-5 個字母所占的位置。

4.書寫工整、規范，卷面整潔，詞間距要一致，盡量避免移行。

5.要刪掉一個詞時，用一條粗橫線劃掉，不要用括號括起來。

謄寫完后，還應仔細校閱 1-2 遍。校閱要逐詞逐句進行，注意檢查語法、拼寫、標點、大小寫等方面的錯誤。校閱是自檢的最后一關，應嚴肅認真的進行，盡可能地消滅一切差錯，增強文章的效果。

經過以上工作，最后呈現在評卷老師面前的應該是一份干干凈凈、整整齊齊、主題突出、語言流暢、用詞恰當的作文。

范文：一次體育課 A PE Lesson

下面是某節體育課的有關情況，請你據此寫一篇日記。

1．時間：5月28日，星期一，下午。

2．天氣：陰。

3．項目：跳遠（jump）。

4．過程：

（1）打上課鈴時就在操場集合；

（2）做準備活動（warming—upexercises）；

（3）聽老師講解并示范；

（4）我因心情緊張而失敗；

（5）不灰心，反復練習；

（6）終于跳過了3米。

5．體會：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。

注意：

1．內容必須包括所有要點，但不能逐點翻譯。

2．日記格式要正確。

3．詞數100左右。

A PE Lesson

May 28th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.范文：寫給母親的感謝信

My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son

Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that

the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.Mum：

Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！

范文：介紹校內配套設施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.

第二篇：初中英語寫作

中學英語寫作教學：寫作時應思考的是 What do you want to write ? What do you want to say to readers ?

將學生的現實需要與寫作聯系起來讓學生產生寫作的愿望。所謂現實需要就是指幫學生運用寫作解決生活中的實際問題，例如老師在學期之初明確規定：學生生病必須用英文寫請假條。逐漸地，這種需要就會轉換成對寫作的一種自覺愿望。初中英語寫作教學指導重點應放在“模仿性寫作”，在初三的后期可指導學生進行“創造性寫作”，所謂創造性寫作就是在老師的啟發之下，讓學生運用發散思維、批判性思維寫出有新意的短文。模仿性寫作注重幫助學生掌握寫作的題材和內容，創造性寫作要求作者在寫作中表達自己的新思維。嚴格來講，初中英語寫作不是真正意義上的寫作，是“準寫作”，尤其在初中和高中的早期階段，這種寫作應該以模仿為主，在模仿的基礎上，訓練學生遣詞組句、組句成篇的能力，以及訓練學生寫作的思維能力。

1.初一寫作

初一寫作是通過范文閱讀仿寫的形式來體現，即讀格式化范文，如海報、問候卡、邀請卡等來參照寫作。而描述性指讓學生使用片語、單句去描述規定的圖片，并通過圖片的系列性來實現單句間的組合排列。但初一寫作還不是語篇寫作，寫作的基本目的是斟詞酌句，為接近意義上的寫作進行前期的基本訓練。這種訓練不是機械的，而是納入一定的圖片設定的語境中來進行。

2.初二寫作：

初二寫作是老師引導下寫簡單話題作文，通過小組內討論決定寫作提綱，共同進行接力式寫作并共同修改訂正。初二寫作只是初步培養學生簡單的語篇寫作能力，此時的寫作不具有創作性，而是以模仿為主，因此讀與寫、聽與寫技能之間的配合轉換尤為重要。

3.初三寫作：

初三英語寫作應讓學生獨立地去經歷一個較為完整的寫作過程，從素材的收集到獨立的起草，老師的指導只是在體現在短文的修改階段。此時，寫作的流暢性還不能完全通過“意連”來實現，因此指導學生在寫作中運用連接詞(如 but，however，therefore，furthermore，so，still 等)來體現語篇寫作中的“形連”應該予以重視。初三語篇寫作的創作性體現在以下三方面：(1)以應用文體為中心的練筆創作，如書信文體、日記文體、海報通知等招貼文體；(2)表示邏輯關系的簡單說明文體和表示時空人物關系的記敘文體的寫作練習；

(3)以圖示和表格為中心的描述性語段寫作練習，如用語言解釋一則廣告，用語言解釋一幅圖，用語言解釋一則用藥須知等。通過初三學段的寫作來訓練學生的獨立思考能力、集合思維和發散思維能力、創新思維能力、筆頭語言的運用表達能力和對自己及他人寫作成果的欣賞能力

第三篇：初中英語寫作

英語寫作25個經典句型

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen

(known/heard/had/read, etc)

~~~ the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。

Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.張老師是我曾經遇到最仁慈的教師。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.沒有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、There is no denying that + S + V...（不可否認的...）

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad toworse.不可否認的，我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。

四、There is no doubt that + 句子~~（毫無疑問的...）

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。

五、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的優點是...）

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create(produce)any pollution.使用太陽能的優點是它不會制造任何污染。

六、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。

七、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子（如此...以致于...）

例句：So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，我們經不起浪費它。

八、Adj + as + Subject（主詞）+ be, S + V~~~（雖然...）

例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一點也不}

雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質絕對令人不滿意。

九、The + ~er + S + V,~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V,~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈...愈...）

例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈進步。

The more books we read, the more learned we become.我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學問。

十、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~（借著...，..能夠..）

例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。

十一、It is time +to do sth.（該是...的時候了）

例句：It is timeto solve the traffic problems.該是解決交通問題的時候了。

十二、That is the reason why ~~~（那就是...的原因）

例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don’t like it.夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。

十三、For the past+ 時間，S + 現在完成式...（過去...年來，...一直...）

例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.過去兩年來，我一直忙著準備考試。

十四、Since + S + 過去式，S + 現在完成式。

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自從他上高中，他一直很用功。

十五、It pays to + V ~~~（...是值得的。）

例句：It pays to help others.幫助別人是值得的。

十六、be based on（以...為基礎）

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。

十七、Spare no effort to + V（不遺余力的）

例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我們應該不遺余力的美化我們的環境。

初中英語重要句型：初中英語寫作中常見的十二種句型

句型1：There＋be ＋主語＋地點狀語／時間狀語

There's a boat in the river．河里有條船。

There are seven days in a week．一周有七天。

句型2：What's wrong with＋sb．／sth．？

What's wrong with you？你怎么啦？

What's wrong with your watch？你的手表有什么毛病？

句型3：How do you like．．．？

How do you like China？你覺得中國怎么樣？

句型4：What do you lit．．．？

What do you lit China？你喜歡中國的什么？

句型5：had better（not）＋動詞原形

You'd better ask that policeman over there．你最好去問問那邊的那個警察。

句型6：How＋adj．／adv．＋主語＋謂語！

What a／an＋adj．＋n．＋主語＋謂語！

How cold it is today！今天多冷啊！

What a fine picture it is！多美的一幅圖畫呀！

句型7：Thank＋sb．＋for（doing）sth．

Than for coming to see me．感謝你來看我。

句型8：So＋be／情態動詞／助動詞＋主語

He is a student．So am I．他是一個學生，我也是。

句型9：．．．not．．．until．．．

He didn't have supper until his parents came back．直到他的父母回來他才吃飯。句型10：比較級＋and＋比較級

The baby cried harder and harder．那孩子哭得越來越厲害。

句型11：the ＋比較級，the ＋比較級

The more one has，the more one wants．越有越貪。

句型12：．．．as＋adj．／adv．＋as．．．

．．not as（so）＋adj．／adv．＋as．．．

Do you think that art is as important as music？你認為藝術和音樂一樣重要嗎？

Last Sunday the weather was not so wet as it is today．上個星期天的天氣不如今天的天氣潮濕。

句型13：more／less＋adj．＋than．．．

I think English is more useful than Japanese．我認為英語比日語有用。

I think art is less important than music．我認為藝術不如音樂重要。

句型14：stop．．．from doing sth．

The Great Green Wall will stop the wind from blowing the earth away．綠色長城將阻擋風吹走土壤。

句型15：both．．．and．．．

Both you and I are students．我和你都是學生。

中考英語作文常用過渡詞

1? by this time 此時at the same time同時after a while過了一會兒

in addition/besides/what’s more此外

by the way順便提一句for example/for instance例如such as正如

in fact 事實上in other words 換句話說

at last/ finally最后as a result結果in a word總之

2?（1）表示選擇or；either…or；otherwise否則；rather than；whether…or not；not…but

（2）表示轉折but但 是；although雖然；yet然而；however然而；

（3）表示過渡by the way順便提一下

（4）表示順序at first/ first（of all）/ firstly/above all to start/begin with 首先；second / secondly第二；next接著；later后來；soon(shortly)after之后不久，在……之后不久；since then從那時起；at last / finally/in the end最后,from now on從現在起；in the meanwhile(meantime)在此期間，與此同時

（5）表示因果關系

because / as / since / for因為； because of this由于這一原因； thanks to多虧；as a result of由于……的結果；if so倘若如此；then那么；therefore因此；so所以；

（6）表示結論或摘要

in short 總之,in a word簡言之，總之；

周知

as a result結果it is well-known that / as we all know眾所

第四篇：初中英語寫作

1． 開頭萬能公式一：名人名言

有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語名言？”，很好辦：編！

原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢！對吧？

經典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（適用于已記住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（適用于自編名言）更多經典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that?

2． 開頭萬能公式二：數字統計

原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。

原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的，其實都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造： Honesty

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。Youth

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，在某個大學，學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that ?

寫作絕招結尾萬能公式：

1． 結尾萬能公式一：如此結論

說完了，畢竟要歸納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經歷，領導長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領導說結束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that?, Therefore, we can find that?

2． 結尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典，因為考官本來經常考這個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？

更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫作絕招 寫作的“七項基本原則”：

一、長 短 句原則工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

Asa creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet theprimary need

of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主 題 句原則國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點? 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點的情況）

10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚！

四、短語優先原則寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其

一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發現亮點—精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其

二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎么辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達：I am looking forward to it.這樣字數明顯增加，表達也更準確。

五、多實少虛原則原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候，不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如： 走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應該說：sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應該說：dance out of the room

老人走出房間應該說：stagger out of the room

所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！

六、多變句式原則1）加法（串聯）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就

是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關系或者并列關系。比如說：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個超級句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）轉折（拐彎抹角）批評某人缺點的時候，我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點，然后轉入正題，再說缺點，這種方式雖然陰險了點，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時候，只要在要點之前先來點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然后我主動搭訕，然后我們去咖啡廳，然后我們認識了，然后我們成為了朋友?可見，講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關系！The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。

舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分：

When to go, Why he goes away?

5）附加（多此一舉）如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講某個人的時候，她會插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢恢宏）

要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑戰極限原則既然十挑戰極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在學生的文章中，很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！

寫作絕招文章主體段落三大殺手锏：

一、舉實例思維短路，舉實例！提出一個觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！

Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast

更多句型：To take ? as an example, One example is?, Another example is?, for example

二、做比較方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的； 世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會發現二者的相同點（through comparison）和不同點（through contrast）。下面是一些短語： 相似的比較： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比較： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with ?, ?

這個對 compare and contrast 題型很有用

三、換言之沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。實際就是重復重復再重復！下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語：in more difficult language, in simpler

初中英語提示性作文“六步走”

提示性作文，即題干統一要求學生根據漢語意思和英語提示詞寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。在分析2005-2011年中考試卷寫作部分時不難發現，除2010年考的不是提示性作文，其它的均為關鍵字造句→成文型作文。2011年各城區的模擬題，包括海淀、東城、崇文、朝陽一模都考到了“關鍵字造句→成文型”的作文，所以需要引起廣大考生的足夠重視。

然而，學生在面對這種類型的作文時通常感覺摸不著頭腦，不知如何下筆。但事實上只要大家記住我給提示性作文新的稱謂，即“關鍵字造句→成文型作文”，這種類型的作文還是非常具有可操作性的。

首先我先來解釋下這個新名詞：“關鍵字造句”是指就作文題干所提供的一系列單詞并參考給出的中文提示句子逐個進行造句；“→”是表示在已經造好的句子的情況下適當增加和擴充跟主題相近的句子使文章脈絡更加清晰；“成文”是指在結束上兩步造句和擴充句子的情況下適當補充些連詞和過渡句使文章結構和內容更加豐富和完整。

下面我們就來見招拆招，再現“關鍵字造句→成文型”作文寫作的“六步走”戰略吧！

1.審題+立意。

考生需要花一定的時間充分了解題目的要求，同時在立意的過程中一定要確立寫作的時

態和基調。

2.分段。

初中階段的寫作可以采用兩段或者三段式，客觀描述占一到兩段，主觀表達占一段。

3.關鍵字造句。

就是根據作文題干所提供的一系列單詞并參考給出的中文提示句子逐個進行組詞成句。在造好句子的情況下，擴寫跟主題相近的句子。

4.連句成文。

就是在完成前一步驟的情況下，補充些連詞和過渡句，使之通暢有邏

5.主觀表達。

在這里要跟廣大考生呼吁主觀表達的重要性。05-09年北京市中考題中關鍵字造句→成文型作文的題干都明確提出“給出自己的建議、談談自己的感受、你對此事的看法、你有什么體會”之類的字樣，所以切莫在自己的寫作中忽略了自己的主觀表達。通常情況下可以寫3-4句話即可。

6.檢查。

這是非常關鍵的一步，應該及時修正語言錯誤，看看文章是否符合題目要求。

接下來我們以中考作文的評分標準對初中英語關鍵字造句→成文型作文“六步走”進行一個可行性的分析。以第一檔作文為例，完全符合題目要求（審題），內容完整、豐富（立意），思想健康、積極向上（主觀表達）。能夠使用多種句型結構和豐富的詞匯（關鍵字造句），語言通順，語意連貫（連句成文），表達清楚，具有邏輯性（更高層次的要求）。所以只要考生根據這六步走戰略一以貫之地練習，必定能攻克提示性作文。

第五篇：初中英語寫作

初中英語寫作范文集錦

1范文：孩子的獨立教育

圍繞：學校讓學生打掃廁所和學校不讓學生打掃廁所兩種情況。寫一不少于80個詞的主題為“孩子的獨立教育”英語作文。

給出詞：only child，moral education

nowadays in china，many students are the only child in their family.they are the apple of their parents’ eyes or even their grandparents’，so they are free of any house work or menial labor.and moral education is no more than some bookish thing.Students are largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent，the most effective way is to let them experience on their own.therefore，they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.2范文：關于國慶節的英語作文

例1

National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It’s a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week.We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We’re visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we’ll have a good time there.國慶節來了，我有七天的假期。我們一家去海南。那是一個美麗的海濱城市。我們在那里待上一個星期。我們去沙灘，還在海里游泳。我們游覽“天涯海角”，菀泉河還有別的許多好地方。我想我們在那里會玩得很開心。

例2 National Day Holidays

I went to my cousin’s house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said she’s worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that he’ll educate his child in a severe way，with a future father’s matureness.I’m happy for them.：）

Yesterday，our research school’s soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the game.Half of the National Day holidays have passed by……life still goes with good and bad times.3范文：中學生該不該上網

最近你們學校要舉行一次“中學生該不該上網”的討論。你是贊成者之一，認為我們不應該因噎廢食。請根據下表內容寫一篇發言篇。

要求：字數100詞左右注意：不要逐句翻譯。益處

1.看國內外新聞，獲取信息。2.發e-mail，打電話。

3.上網絡學校，閱讀各種書籍，自學外語。

4.欣賞音樂，觀看體育比賽，玩棋牌等游戲，網上購物，豐富我們的生活。

5.提高我們操作電腦的能力

注意事項

1．不要沉湎于（be given to）上網以免影響生活和學習。2．不要上不健康的網站。

參考范文：

In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks.As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends.We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet.We can even do shopping on line.Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or we'll get our life and study destroyed.Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites.Anyhow，this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend.We can't throw away the apple because of the core，can we？

4范文：我的同學 My Classmate

請以“My Classmate”為標題寫一篇記敘文

要求：

1、主題明確，語言流暢，思路清晰。

2、字數在100字以內。

思路點撥：

寫記敘文要按照事物發展的客觀規律敘述，所敘述的內容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點突出，主次分明，詳略得當。

這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應該用第三人稱，時態以一般過去時為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以

一、兩件事件為重點內容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個內容情節要合情合理，有真實感，敘述時可按事情發展的順序進行，同時加以點評。

參考范文 My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived，and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.5范文：介紹學生學習情況

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano player

What do I want to do when I’m older？ Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when I’m ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old，I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream place

The winter vacation passed quickly.In those days，I have done some things.Playing，doing homework and so on.Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework.She thanked to me.Though，I was proud of myself.I also went over my English learning.I think I have known more than before.In the new term，I will study hard.范文：The thing that I'll never forget

How time flies！I’m fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents’ to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” I’m very ashamed.Why could’t I do the same thing as the little boy did？

From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！

6范文：怎樣學習英語 How to study English？

作文一：

Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English.This isn't easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue.Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership（where English is in use at least some of the time）is，for many people，even better.If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英語教師以外的人士用英語交談。這當然很不容易，因為與母語相同的人自由交談時，彼此若用英語交談總會覺得很不自在。亦可參加英語俱樂部或國際會員的俱樂部（至少有時使用英語溝通），這樣對很多人而言更有益。如果沒有合適的社團可加入，也不妨考慮任何足以提高英語能力的機會。

作文二：

There are four key points to study English：listening，speaking，reading and writing.Firstly，we should be brave to talk with others in English.By doing this，we can improve ore talking and listening skill.Secondly，we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible.In this way，we can gradually improve our pronunciation.Thirdly，we should often read English books.When we come across a new word.We should guess its meaning through the contest first.then look it up in the dictionary to have a check.I thin，it is a good way of reading.Fourthly，we should practice our writing skills.Whenever we have any idea，we should get the pen and write it down at once.It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar.As long as we listen，speak，read and write more，we are sure to make remarkable progress！

7范文：介紹學生學習情況

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：風 Wind

Each season has wind.The warm wind in spring，the hot wind in summer，the gold wind in autumn and cold wind in winter are all called wind，but their tempers are quite different.When spring comes，warm wind wakes up everything；many flowers come out.It can bring us joy.In hot summer，the sweats roll down from our checks.Everything needs wind，but wind often hide and seek with us.Autumn comes.Cool wind blows yellow leaves down.The corn is ripe and all the fields become yellow.The farmers are busy getting in crops.It can bring us the happiness of harvest.In cold winter，cold wind blows so hard that everyone can hardly open his eyes

Wind，we welcome you，need you，but sometimes hate you.Will you please obey us and do good things for us.8范文：找媽媽 Looking for Mum

One day Li Ming caught a little bird.He tied it with a piece of thread and played with it happily.At that time，he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.A policeman saw her，came over and asked her why she was crying and where her house is.When he learned that girl had got lost and she was then looking for her mother，he decided to lead the girl to be back home.Seeing this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird free so that it could be with its mother again.Then Li Ming untied the thread and returned the little bird to the blue sky.9范文：能源 Energy

As we all know we need energy in our daily life.There are many kinds of energy.We can get our energy from food.The energy in food comes from sunlight which helps plants grow.Plants store up energy from the sun，much of our food comes from plants.Some of our food comes from animals，but animals depend on plants for food too.10范文：英語作文自我介紹 To introduce myself

Hello，everyone！

My name is Winnie.I'm a 15 years old girl.I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.I'm an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.I also like sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.I'm kind-hearted.If you need help，please come to me.I hope we can be good friends！

OK.This is me.A sunny girl.11范文：給父親的信

Directions：you have decided to start jogging next month，but you haven't got any suitable shoes to wear.Now you are writing a letter to your father asking him to send you some extra money so that you can but the shoes.in you letter，you will include：

* your hard work；

* How you read about jogging in your English textbook；

* The advantages ofjogging；

* THe need for a pair fo quality shoes；

* The price of the shoes you plan to buy；

* THe time you need the money；

* Your appreciation for his help Dear dad，I am writing to you for help which I have come to a desperate need.You know I always want to be healthy and in geat shape，so I can pay more attention to teacher's instruction.Yesterday，I went to library and read some books about jogging.I think I need a good jogging shoes for my exercise.I believe a strong body can enhance my study as described by our textbook.I have found a cheap price of a pair of jogging shoes which cost only $500 nearby school.Daddy，you will help me buy this pair，wont' you？ The on sale may not last for long.Please send money as soon as possible，so I can start my jogging right away.I know you will fulfill my dream and expect my endeavor.I promise I will do my best on my study and exercise.Thank you for your consideration.Take care and wish you happiness.Yours beloved son.12范文：考試 Examination

Someone says examination can help us go over our lessons in time and after the examination we can find how we are getting on with our studies.But we are always having too many examinations and they are also too difficult for us to get through.I find some of us have lost interest in learning lessons.Besides，it is harmful to our health as we hardly have any time to go in for sports.I think the present system of measurement should be improved.13范文：什么是成功的秘訣 What Is the Secret of Success

My father is an engineer.He works very hard.Once I asked my father what the secret of success was.He didn't say a word，but wrote a few words on a piece of paper and handed it to me.I looked at the paper，it was written：A=X+Y+Z.“What does it mean？”I asked.“A means success，”explained my father.“X means hard，Y means good ways，and Z means you must stop talking and start to work.”

That's right.From then on，I tried my best to be better.14范文：通知 Notice

The sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rairi these days.All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual，but there will be no class that afternoon.Weather permitting，the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.Members of the school ping-pong team must come to the Ping-pong Hall at 4：30 this Saturday afternoon.Ping-pong stars from Wuhan will come and give special training and coaching then.Office of Physical Education 10th April，2005

15范文：一次體育課 A PE Lesson

下面是某節體育課的有關情況，請你據此寫一篇日記。

1．時間：5月28日，星期一，下午。

2．天氣：陰。

3．項目：跳遠（jump）。

4．過程：

（1）打上課鈴時就在操場集合；

（2）做準備活動（warming—upexercises）；

（3）聽老師講解并示范；

（4）我因心情緊張而失敗；

（5）不灰心，反復練習；

（6）終于跳過了3米。

5．體會：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。

注意：

1．內容必須包括所有要點，但不能逐點翻譯。

2．日記格式要正確。

3．詞數100左右。A PE Lesson

May 28th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.16范文：寫給母親的感謝信 My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Mum：

Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！

17范文：介紹校內配套設施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.18范文：少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲 A young idler,an old beggar

“少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲”，請你談談對此的想法并如何行動。

Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying：A young idler，an old beggar.Throughout history，we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life，during which one's mental and physical states are at their peaks.It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments.In addition，one is less likely to be under great pressure from career，family and health problems when young.Therefore，a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.Of course，we all know：no pains，no gains.If we don't make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us，it is impossible to achieve any goals.As students，we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.19范文：寒假生活 Wonderful life in winter holiday

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday.I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday.But I didn't.Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.I spend a lot of time on the homework… Every day in my Winter Holiday，I always got up late.Then I listened to the tape，it was nine o'clock.Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime！I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy！

I'm unlucky on the playing too.I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire.I'm careless to kindle the firecracker，so I'm very unlucky.I still unlucky on my friend's party.In the morning，I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10：50.After ten minutes，the party would start！So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home！And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home.My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me！

I'm worried and feel unlucky on my weigh.Last term，I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram！I must to do banting！

But most important，I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium，I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse，the monkey…in the sea.Now I've done it.It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.20范文：我家的小狗 My Little Dog

Last year，my friend gave me a little dog.I was fond of him very much.I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went.I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me.When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me.It seemed that he was calling me.My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home.When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them.What a lovely dog he is！

21范文：我的儲蓄罐 My Collecting-tin

I have a lot of little handiwork，but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.It is a little man made of china.He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses.His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face.His big and round body is very funny.Because of this collecting-fin，I have learned how to savemoney.When I was a little boy，I always put coins away，then I dropped them into his round body.Sometimes he can “eat” plenty of coins at a time，He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.22范文：我的外籍老師 Our Foreign Teacher

Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher.She comes from America.She is thirty-one years old.She has fair hair，white skin and gray eyes.She is tall and slim.She looks very kind.And in fact，she is kind indeed.Ms Jerry is a good teacher.Although she only comes to our school twice a week，she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students.Once，she was ill，but she went on giving us lessons.When we learned this，we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm：“Each lesson she will bring us new pictures，new stories，new games and new songs.Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.23范文：參觀博物館 Going to the Museums

During a long vacation，I usually like to go to see the exhibits in one of a great many museums.Such as the art museum，the history museum，the museum of natural history，and the museum of science and technology.Many wonderful things are cared for in museums.There are paintings，potteries，sculptures，costumes，swords，ancient animal bones and plants，stuffed animals，antique steam locomotives，and many others.It is always a good review of history to visit those museums.24范文：寄信 Mailing a Letter

All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city，and even the smallest village has at least one postal station.You may go to a post office to mail a letter.However，there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes.If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address，he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.25范文：神奇的貝殼 The Magic Shell

At the beach I found a magic shell，so I brought it home in my pail；and I kept it up on my top bookshelf right under the picture whale.And now，whenever I wish I were back there by the shining sea，I hold the shell up close to my ear，till it brings the beach to me：all the hushing sound and the rushing sound of the seashore winds and waves are caught in my shell that I brought home.26范文：旅游事業 Ways to Improve china's tourism

【要求】

要求：旅游事業對我國具有舉足輕重的作用。請以Ways to Improve China＇s Tourism為題為我國旅游事業的發展提幾點建議。（提示：擴大宣傳，改善旅游設施，提高服務質量……）

【范文】

Ways to Improve china＇s tourism

Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world.However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be.If the following is done，China＇s tourism will definitely be improved.First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists.Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip.Finally，the quality of service should be improved.Don＇t tell people their ideas are bad unless you＇ve got a good one.27范文：模范學生 A Model Student

Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not.So far as I know，everybody intends to be（become）a model student.However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing.First，he must do his best to obtain knowledge.A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed.Secondly，he must remember to improve his health.Only a strong man can do great tasks.Thirdly，he should receive moral education.If his conduct is not good，no one will consider making friends with him.28范文：通電話 A Phone Call

I was tired with preparing for the Joint College Entrance Examination the other evening.And having been alone for several hours，I was eager to have someone to chat with me about anything but examinations.So I telephoned my best friend Mary，who was also busy preparing for the joint entrance examination.On the telephone，I told her that I missed her very much.And I invited her to have a cup of coffee with me in a coffeehouse near her home.But to my surprise，she declined and said that she had to devote all her time to her studies.Hearing this，I could do nothing but hang up after saying “Sorry” to her.Disappointed and discouraged，I turned back to my desk and reluctantly buried myself again in my books.29范文：春天來了 Spring is coming on

Winter has gone，and spring is coming on.Watching the ice melting，I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter.A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance.It is a feast for our eyes and souls.The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring.Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine，enjoying the beautiful scenery，listening to the wonderful music，drinking the new tea，my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire.Spring is the most fantastic season in the year.It means so much to the other three seasons.30范文：一個特殊的女孩 A special girl

There is a special girl.Why is she special？Firstly she looks like a boy so her classmates always call her a “hoyden”.Maybe they’re right because she also has the same hobbies as the boys.She likes playing soccer，basketball，table tennis，badminton，computer games and so on.If someone bothers her she will feel annoyed and even fight against him.Secondly she is a lovely girl.She loves life very much.You may see her smiling all the time.She likes making friends with others.She likes making jokes with them，too.She likes singing but she is not good at it.She likes dancing，but she is not good at it，either.Thirdly，she is a sentimental girl.She likes talking to birds and flowers.She likes talking to herself，too.When she’s watching TV，she will cry over a touching scene.Sometimes she is moved to cry all day and all night.Lastly she’s a fantastic girl.She has lots of dreams.She always dreams of her future such as her job when she grows up.She wants to be a scientist because scientists invent things that are helpful for our lives.She wants to be a TV hostess because she has beautiful voice and she also wants to be…

That’s why I said she’s special.Do you want to know her？If you can keep the secret I can tell you who she is.The special girl is me.31范文：我的生日 My birthday

My birthday is on March 23th，I celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.Every year，I hold a little birthday party and invite my friends.We chat and play a lot of games together.The best part of it is that I love the birthday cake and the gifts I get from my parents and my friends.I also get some money on my birthday.I can buy what I want with the money.I have great fun on my birthdays，but on the other hand，I also understand that I am one year older after each birthday and that means I should be more responsible for myself and I should also my self-aware.I should understand more things and be less ignorant！

Fianlly，I should be thankful for my parents，I know they have done their best in raising me up.32范文：成人教育的發展 A Boom in Adult education

Directions：For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Adult Education.You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：

1.現在許多成年人都利用業余時間去大學或夜校讀書

2.出現這種成人教育熱的原因是……

范文：

A Boom in Adult Education

Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li，my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work，gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class.Miss Li’s case is not unique，and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education.Some people，like Miss Li，are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society.To them more knowledge，or rather，more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.Other people，especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market.They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade，administration，education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine，painting，calligraphy and photography.As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their heart’s desire.Out of necessity or out of interest，people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves，and this boom in adult education，in turn，helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.33范文：你喜歡哪種方式的旅行？ Which Mode of Travel Do You like?

Directions：For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like？ You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：

1.有的人喜歡參加旅行社旅游（package tours）

2.有的人喜歡自己獨立行動（travelling on one’s own）

3.比較這兩種旅游方式，我喜歡的是……

范文：

With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter，more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest.While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience，I prefer to traveln my own.I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss；and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.34范文：快樂的家 A Happy Family

I have a happy family.Although it’s small，it’s full of love.There are four people in my family，my father，my mother，my elder sister and myself——we all love each other.My father is a doctor.He loves his work.Every day he works from dawn to dark.In his spare time，he likes reading and writing books.My mother is a teacher.She is very strict with her students but kind to them.Every day she goes to work early.She is not only a teacher but also a fiend of the students.My sister is a shopkeeper and she has been married for several years.I’m a middle school students.My wish is to be a university student.And my parents often encourage me to work hard.I will try my best to realize my dream.35范文：全家福 A Photo of My Family

Look at this photograph of my family.There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is forty-eight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not as my father.She is three years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.I’m sitting between them.All of us love one anther.I have a happy family.36范文：快樂的一天 A Happy Day

Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday.Now she is 56.I am very happy.Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy.Someone is doing exercise，someone is singing the nation song.A little girl comes to me and says to me，happy National Day.I know she loves the country，but I love her，too.Today is a happy day.37范文：最好的朋友 My Best Friend

I have a best friend.She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too.Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice-cream.She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name，too——Angle.38范文講評：周末

「要求」

周末兩天的休息對于平時忙于工作學習的人們來說是非常寶貴的。請你根據下列提綱寫一篇短文。

周末對于人們來說意味著什么。

每個人都有自己度周末的方式。

我是怎樣度周末的。

「范文」

Weekends

Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest.For example，people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way.Within two days，some people can relax themselves by listening to music，reading novels，or watching films.Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball，wimming or dancing.Different people have different relaxations.I often spend weekends with my family or my friends.Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends.Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge.I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision.An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends.Weekends are always enjoyable for me.「評語」

全文思路清晰，論述充分，語言流暢易懂。用詞講究，注意了詞語搭配，沒有重復、堆砌之感。

39范文講評：節日出行

「要求」

和外國朋友交談是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是談什么話題卻要慎重考慮，因為各國風俗習慣不同，談的東西要關涉到禁忌、興趣。學校的英語角將要組織一次對外交流活動。請你以書面形式寫一些可以作為談話的材料。

「范文」

Holidays and Outings

It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place，then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over，then where they went，whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel，either at weekends or during their holiday periods，so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why，especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.「評語」

看完上文，可知這實際上是一篇討論英語話題的文章。從這個角度來寫“Holidays and Outings”這個題目可謂不無新義。但是在與外國人交往時談些什么都是一個很現實的問題。本文提供了這一范例。全篇也圍這個問題來寫，幾乎每句話都是緊扣中心的。比如它始終突出了這是一個話題，就反復用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等詞。

40范文講評：介紹你的學校

「要求」

下周將有一批外賓來校參觀，請你給外賓簡要介紹你校的情況。內容包括三方面：

校史和成績。

學校規模和主要設施。

師生狀況（詞數100—120）。

「范文」

An Introduction

Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it.Now many of them have become scientists，professors and engineers.Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation.They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture.Our school is a key middle school in our province.It has thirty classes with over 130students.Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building，several laboratories and a large playground.Last year，a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books.All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well.Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student.「評語」

文章簡潔得體，結構鮮明，語言流暢，介紹具體。讀后讓人對學校概貌了然于胸。

school 還有學派的意思，另外“一群魚”叫做a school of fish.