第一篇:作文例子
以下例子適合在議論文中用到,知道這幾個人就好,不會用的話就先不用了。
● 莫言:一個小學輟學的放牛娃,胸懷一書,手執一筆,走進山東高密鄉的紅高粱,注寫了中國當代文學的一個符號,魔幻現實主義的寫法讓莫言成為2012年諾貝爾文學獎的得主,可見(后面加上作文的主題,比如堅持讀書,愛好,奮斗,攀登,小人物大作為等等,必須用自己的話寫上這句話,否則這個例子就沒有價值了)
● 霍金:霍金在正值壯年的時候得了盧伽雷氏癥,在輪椅上禁錮了40多年,但他并沒有因此而放棄生命的突破,他超越相對論、量子力學、大爆炸等理論,邁入了創造宇宙的“幾何之舞”的進程,給物理學的版布上畫上了濃重的一筆,的確,(后面加上作文主題的話,用自己的話說即可)
● 希特勒:希特勒宣揚人性泯滅論,作為德國納粹黨的元首,他直接導致第二次世界大戰的爆發,阻礙了人類歷史進程的發展,不得不說,(加上作文的主題)
● 馬諾:因為“非誠勿擾”欄目而走紅的拜金女馬諾,讓我們知道有一種人寧愿在寶馬車里哭也不愿在自行車上笑,我們并非不去鼓勵人們要設定遠大的目標,但如果為了一個浮躁的“向上”理念而丟失自己,人生又又何意義呢,我相信,我們的生活里,蘇紫紫們、郭美美們、獸獸們僅僅是小眾的一部分,我們的大眾正用自己的勤勞和心靈為自己的未來鑄就美好的天空,(加作文主題)
______以上材料名字事例記住就可以,到時候自由發揮,如果有自己喜歡的材料,也可以加進去。
以下是幾篇滿分記敘文:
●與你為鄰(890字)(高考滿分)
與你為鄰,我很幸運。同桌的你,水靈的像一朵帶著露水的睡蓮。
課堂上,你像我的戰友,一絲不茍地聆聽老師的教誨,埋頭做筆記,抬頭回答問題。我們收獲知識碩果時,會相視而笑。多才多藝的你站在舞臺上時,會用火紅的綢緞和優美的舞姿演繹我們絢麗的年華。當我犯錯誤時,你嚴厲的目光灑下來,我便垂下眼簾,委屈的滿眼含淚。現在我知道這是朋友真情的流露,朋友,請原諒我當時的任性與乖戾。
與你為鄰,我很幸運。同桌的你,豁達得像一片掛著燦星的天際。
你是男生的理性與感性完美的結合,你把這種天賦融匯到你所衷愛的數學課中,面對難題屢戰屢勝,在我們班的數學領域撐起了一片天。你的五官總是那樣靈動,隨便地一挑眉,惟妙惟肖地模仿某個大牌明星的經典動作,就為自己的個人秀拉開了帷幕,為同學們帶來陣陣歡笑,驅散畢業沖刺帶來的緊張壓抑的氣氛。
與你為鄰,我很幸運。同桌的你,可愛的像墜入凡間的天使。
六月的天氣格外的沉悶,熱空氣在風扇的抽動下慵懶的游弋在教室中,是你貼心的話語鼓勵我繼續學習;老師劈頭蓋臉的批評讓我無地自容,眼淚不聽話地直往下掉,是你明亮的眼眸安慰我不要在意;面對激烈的競爭與考試的壓力,是你手心的溫度伴我前行,以積極樂觀的心態應對一切。
耳畔回蕩起風鈴清脆的聲音,閉上眼睛,同學間的往事還歷歷在目:體育訓練時,早晨5點鐘爬起來跑步那汗流浹背的樣子;晚自習后,為了爭分奪秒地學習,不去餐廳吃飯,而啃方便面的樣子;同學們一起外出踏青游玩的樣子;老師提問時,由于緊張手足無措的樣子……那一切,宛如發生在昨天一樣,帶著時間的溫度,流逝了。
畢業了,我們帶著低年級的懵懂,中年級的歡笑,高年級的勤奮畢業了。六月是離別的季節,是花兒的海洋。我們無須傷感,因為人生的下一個顛峰還在等待我們去征服,我們要用張揚的青春去譜寫生命的傳奇,我們要用奮斗闖出屬于自己的天空,我們在期待多年后那個同學重逢的約定。
與你為鄰,我很幸運。同桌的你,是同學友誼的剪影,是一筆珍貴的記憶財富,是一個值得感謝、陪伴你走過小學全部日子的人。讓我們靜靜的珍藏這份感動吧。
那時候,天總是很藍,日子總過得太慢,你總說畢業遙遙無期,可一轉眼我們就要各奔東西了,與你為鄰,我的幸運……
======這篇作文的格式可以借用,但是每段開頭的第一句總感覺不舒服,建議學習它的結尾(是同桌的你的歌詞),和里面對你有啟發的句子。
● 與你為鄰(810字)(高考滿分)
城市里,有匆匆忙忙的腳步聲,有一閃而過的臉龐,也有憂愁抑郁的目光。生活中的快節奏在機器的喧囂中沉積,人的精神也在疾馳而過的汽車中變得空虛。但倘若能夠在紛繁中建造一間自己的精神小屋,便能吟嘆“心遠地自偏”了。
我有一間屬于自己的精神小屋,與其真善美的人為鄰。與他們為鄰,我受益匪淺。借此機會,我想向他們表達我的感情。
透過左邊的窗子,我看到了與清茶為伴,與書籍為伴的季老。季老,您是一代“國學大師”,是“學術泰斗”,是“國寶”。可是您把這三頂帽子都辭掉了,您說“環顧周遭學問之深者大有人在,國學大師豈不折煞老身?”作為您的鄰居,我了解您的淡薄,明白您睿智的目光背后所經歷的滄桑。不過是想專心致志地翻譯《羅摩衍那》,不過是想盡心盡力地保護一些經典的文化,您卻在文革中屢遭打擊。是天欲摧人嗎?我抱著疑問,卻從您巍然的笑中找到了答案。是啊!當上天賜給你荒野時,意味著他要你成為高飛的鷹。季老,您知道嗎?以您為鄰,我受益匪淺。您是我精神的鄰居,用您一生的淡然與執著告訴了我什么是淡泊,又告訴了我“寧靜致遠,淡泊明志”。真的,我想謝謝您!
透過右邊的窗子,我看見了躺在病床上打點滴的您--莫里老人。莫里老人,請容我像您的學生一樣喊您一聲“師傅”。您雖患重病,但作為您的鄰居,我知道您并不會自怨自艾,也不會自我放縱自我絕望。您在昔日那般瘋狂地隨歌舞蹈,舞出您的生命奇跡;您在得知病癥消息時仍那么珍惜生命,堅持以樂觀曠達的情緒感染身邊每個人,其中包括我。您知道嗎?曾經讓綠葉嘲笑頹廢的我因與您為鄰,受您的樂觀熏染,我也勇敢面對陽光了。謝謝您!
在我心里,還銘記著泰戈爾的哲言:“天空不留下鳥的痕跡,而我已飛過”與您為鄰,我學會了很多;與您為鄰,我的精神世界得到了充實。終于,在喧囂的城市中,我找到了屬于我的藍天!
與你為鄰,與真善美的人為鄰!
======這篇作文的高分之處,在于他選擇的例子很新穎,很多同學沒有用過,甚至沒有聽說過季羨林這些人物,能夠看出的是他課下的功夫用的很深,特別是對中國當代文學很感興趣。
● 與你為鄰(807字)(高考滿分)
你,我的同桌,我最好的朋友。
此前,我從來沒覺得我們之間有什么不同。
我們一起生活在這個高樓林立的繁華城市里,一起在公交站臺等車,一起在綠茵場上馳騁,一起傾聽啦啦隊女生的尖叫,一起討論巴薩vs國米;一起研究編程算法,一起約好報考深大計算機專業,一起夢想著有一天我們共同開發的網站像youtube那樣在納斯達克掛牌上市??
你高大健碩,眉宇間透出一股俊秀,班上的女生悄悄給你取了個外號――“小柏原崇”,而我卻只得了個“許三多”的美稱,說實在的,我還真有點嫉妒。你的學習成績雖然在班上不是最好的,但在球隊,你是最好的,教練經常拿你當作榜樣來訓斥其他隊員,用他帶著方言的普通話說:“要想踢比賽,首先學習成績要好,進入大學里,會有更多的比賽機會。”末了總不忘補上一句:“像某某同學那樣,踢球學習兩不誤。”
我最忘不了的是去年那件讓我煩惱的事,我生病了,尿血,是你曠課把我送到深圳友誼醫院的結石科去。當時數學課正上到復數這一章節,是期末考試的重點和難點。每天下課之后你都會來到醫院看我,把你做好的課堂筆記給我看,第一次翻開筆記的時候我很感動,從沒見你這么認真的做過筆記,幾乎是把一節課上老師所說的每個字都記錄了下來??
直到高考前那最緊張的一個月,你卻忽然說你要回安徽老家。按規定,考生必須回原籍地參加高考,你說會放棄報考深大,因為深大在老家的招生人數較少,另外安徽的學習環境,使用教材與深圳不同,猶豫再三,還是決定放棄。
今天,我們會同時走進考場,為自己的明天書寫一份答卷,不同的是,我在深圳,而你在陌生的老家。
我知道,在深圳還有很多很多像你一樣的同學,他們的父母,和所有深圳人一樣,用自己辛勤的汗水推動著城市發展,他們同樣擁有這個城市的光榮與夢想,彼此為鄰,相互依存。然而他們卻要比我們承受的更多,不情愿卻又不得不成為“高考移民”的一員,并為此放棄心儀的學校,使夢想走得更遠??
我祝福你,我的朋友,我們的鄰居,那些千千萬萬的農民工和他們的孩子們。
======這篇作文是當之無愧的第一名,也是當年廣東省的首篇滿分,閱卷的三名老師不約而同都給了滿分,有一個老師當場留下淚水,沒有華麗的字眼,但運用了排比,沒有太多的抒情,但段段之間很緊密,有些句子你是可以借用的。
● 柚子中母愛的味道(47分)
推開窗,天邊的那抹云霞淡了。渲染出淡淡的柚子香,包含著母愛的味道。
夕陽淡漠了云霞,化去了心中的寒冷。我依賴在媽媽身邊,在夕陽下抓一束陽光,留在心間,吮吸這在寒冷中散著的柚子香。
秋天的夜晚,狂風咆哮著大樹與窗戶,樹葉被吹的漫天飛舞,懵然不懂的我竟不知去呵護。燈光下,看著母親。平日里那任勞任怨的手上有了橫橫豎豎的口子。母親拿來柚子,放到桌上,開始剝柚子皮。
那手上的溝壑便會兇狠地張開,露出點點紅色,那紅色刺痛了我的心。母親忍著疼痛,身體努力前傾。依然微笑著。
母親用力剝著柚子皮,手指從其中穿梭,手掌緊握著柚子。燈光下,母親是那么地蒼老,母親總對我笑著,像是再說‘沒事,真的沒事’。仰頭,望一望星空,月亮沖我微笑,窗外一切都靜悄悄的,似乎被母親感動了。無言。
母親剝好后,把柚子放到我手中,指與指間的相碰,我竟觸到一絲溫暖,如陽光般,我選了一瓣放到母親嘴里,四目無意識相對,無言。
窗外的樹葉又開始沙沙作響,仿佛為我和母親伴奏,空氣中彌漫著柚子的香氣散發出一種淡淡的母愛。不覺中,眼前有一層霧靄彌漫了視線。母愛如雨天的傘,為我擋雨;母愛如初生的太陽給我溫暖與力量;母愛如一本書,一本值得我一生去發現的書。不覺嘆一聲,何時我才能為您遮風擋雨呢?
夜的星空被點亮了,一點一點的星星勾勒出母愛的味道,伴著淡淡的柚子香,我睡著了。
● 青春需要雕琢(中考滿分)
曾親見有一位學姐用“明媚“修飾青春的日子。青春--應該是人生中最濃艷的一筆吧!
我常在想,該用什么修飾青春。是拼搏?是冷靜?是羞澀?沒有答案。
人生不過一瞬,混沌間,身邊的一切已然在發生!
突然覺著自己長大了,有了些許的不諳。社會上的爾虞我詐,校園里的明爭暗斗??就這樣周圍都慢慢熟悉。也許這就是青春,一絲懵懂。
在櫻花綻開的那天,我清晰地聽到了時間奔走的聲音,我試著去追逐,卻只感受到了眼淚灑落在身后的四分五裂。落拓的我決定躲在角落一遍一遍數我的寂寞!青春,一些漫漶。
青春,應該是最圓滿的吧,有中、高考。因為曾有人說過不經歷高考的人生是不完美的。或許真是這樣的!
“鏡花水月幾年間多少春逝過??”
也許,再回首時,我會發現原來風雨中也會滲透陽光的燦爛,苦澀后也會流露甜蜜的曼妙。
青春,令我有些搞不懂。于是我坐下來發呆,偶爾抬頭看看天。阿蔡卻對我說:“這么好的時光就這樣浪費了!”我想說:“你看天多自在,可以隨心所欲,可以哭,可以笑,旁若無人,肆無忌憚。”卻終究沒說,因為她不像我一樣喜歡看天。
青春的我們把自己包裹得像繭一樣,害怕在現實中受到傷害,卻也最終沒能逃脫。所以,努力掙破自己的網,幻化成蝴蝶,為自己的夢想飛翔!
這就是青春吧,卻依然不知該怎樣修飾!● 告別(青島中考滿分)
現在已經是盛夏了。每天不是烏云密布就是晴空萬里,在這種情況下,我的心也跟著時陰時晴。
上完最后一堂課,只是和老師告別。收拾一下自己雜亂的課桌,把該帶走的帶走,背著大包小包的和同學告別,最后在關上教室門之前,環視了一下空蕩蕩的教室。我的心也不禁茫然起來,似乎有太多東西留在這里了。想帶也帶不走。
我關上了教室門,隨著“吱呀“的幾聲,在那一剎那間,我的心突然有一股尖銳的痛,忽然想起了四字“青春散場‘。
慢慢地走下樓梯,我似乎想起可剛剛來到這里時,數著樓梯走進教室的樣子,無知,單純,甚至幼稚。但隨著一年又一年的過去,現在我已經在四樓讀初三了,那樓梯也越數越長。但兒時的心情已儼然不在了。童年的心也一去不復返了。而這一切的一切都變成我腦海里那泛黃的一頁了。我知道,我該和它們告別了。
最后的一堂課,是和老師告別。
最后一次考試,是和學業告別。
最后一個人離開,是和同學告別。
最后一個腳步,是和301告別。
走在通往校門的小路上,我忘不了,昔日在這里埋頭苦讀的身影;忘不了,昔日在這里傾心暢談的快樂;忘不了,昔日在這片綠茵場馳聘的快感。
在這離別之際,我們依然別情依依,走一回校園的小路,數一回教室的樓梯,心中蕩起了甜蜜的回憶。
在這離別之際,我們依然有千言萬語,看一眼校長的白發,摸一把老師的坐椅,腮邊掛滿了滾燙的淚珠。
當我的腳跨出校門的一瞬間,我忽而明白我已經不是這里的一員了。但也許不是永久,但也不是瞬間。
雖然這初中三年跟高中三年和大學四年相比,是多么的微不足道,但對于我們小孩來說是多么的珍貴和滿足啊啊!
再見了,我的朋友!
再見了,我的老師!
再見了,我的學校!
再見了,我的初三!
第二篇:萬能作文例子
1.The Last Leaf by O.Henry
Johnsy is an inhabitant of an art colony in Greenwich Village, where pneumonia is taking its toll.Eventually, Johnsy is stricken with the disease and gives up all desire to live.Outside her window resides an old ivy vine on which only a few leaves remain.Convinced that she will die when the last leaf falls, Johnsy watches the vine incessantly.This morbid fascination distresses her big hearted neighbor Mr.Berhman, an old painter scraping by as an artist’s model and still dreaming of painting his masterpiece.Time passes, Johnsy remains fascinated by the withering vine.Toher growing astonishment, a single last leaf attaches itself firmly to the vine.Taking this as an embodiment of hope, Johnsy’s condition ameliorated.In the meantime, her neighbor has been taken to hospital with pneumonia, where he later dies.It is later discovered that he had contracted the disease after staying up all night to paint the perfect image of a single leaf on the brick wall outside Johnsy’s window.(167字)
2.Charles Schulz
Charles Monroe Schulz is an Americancartoonist, whose comic strip Peanuts is considered to be one of the most popularand influential in the history of the medium.Although Charles was a shy, timidteenager, he was steadfast and persistent.It is his self-defeatingstubbornness and admirable perseverance in trying his best against all oddsthat made him a popular figure.He can never win a ballgame but continues toplay baseball;he can never fly a kite successfully but continues to do so.Although his drawings were first rejected by his high school yearbook and thenrefused by Disney, he persevered and created the world renowned Charlie Brownand Snoopy, known as Peanut comic, which reflects his own life.Peanuts ran for50 years, and, at its peak, appeared in more than 2,600 newspapers in 75countries.(138字)
3.Thomas Edison
Thomas Edison is considered to be one ofthe most prolific inventors in history, holding 1,093 US patents under hisname.He is one of the first inventors to apply the principles of massproduction and large teamwork to the process of invention, and therefore isoften credited with the creation of the first industrial research laboratory.To find a long lasting material for the light bulb, Edison and his team workedfor many years and experienced more than 1,500 failures through the
process.However, their research was not hampered by setbacks and their hard work wasfinally paid off in 1879.Using a small carbonized bamboo filament, Edison andhis team were able to produce a light bulb that was able to last over 40 hours.After soughting further improvements, Edison finally filed for US patent 223898in
November4, 1879.His invention of the light bulb not only revolutionized thenascent electric industry, but also made electricity viable to mankind.(161字)
4.Henry Ford
Henry Ford, the American founder of theFord Motor Company, had been stimulated by Thomas Edison in his youth andfollowed Thomas Edison’s career then.In 1896, while attending acompany-sponsored convention in Manhattan Beach, New York, Henry Ford was introducedto the great inventor Thomas Edison.During their conversation, Edison askedthe young Henry Ford a host of questions and when the conversation was
over,Edison emphasized his satisfaction by banging his fist down on the table.“Young man,” he said, "that's the thing!You have it!” To HenryFord, as he later indicated, that bang on the table was worth worlds.After receiving the complete approval fromThomas Edison, Henry Ford strived to accomplish his invention of the cheap andconvenient Model T.After further improvements, the price of Model T decreasedfrom $850 to $225, a price that is affordable to most social classes.Thedesign later revolutionized the
transportation industry in America becauseprior to its introduction, cars were a
form of luxury that is only affordableto the upper echelons.And in just 19 years after the first introduction, thesales of the Model T had reached an astounding 15,007,034, a record which stoodfor the next 45 years.(204字)
5.Jack Welch
Jack Welch was the former CEO of GeneralElectric.He joined the company in 1960 and worked as a junior engineer.Aftera year at GE, he was displeased with the strict bureaucracy regarding pay risewhich led to a mere $1000 increase in his salary after his first year.Welch,who then harbored thoughts of leaving the company, was convinced by ReubenGutoff to stay.He then started questioning the decisions made by theauthorities and moved up the ranks quickly.When he became the CEO of GE in1981, he worked to streamline the company by trimming inventories anddismantling the bureaucracy that almost led him to leave the company.Eachyear, he would fire the bottom 10% of his managers, while rewarding the top 20%with bonuses and stock options.By pushing his managers to perform, theperennial problem with regards to perceived inefficiency was effectivelyeradicated.When Welch left GE, the company had gone from a market value of $14billion to more than $410 billion at the end of 2004, making it the most valuableand largest company in the world.(186字)
6.Christopher Reeve
Christopher Reeve was an American actor whois best known for his portrayal of the superhero Superman.However, unlike theman of steel he was in his movies, Reeve became quadriplegic after being thrownfrom a horse in an equestrian competition in 1995.As a result, he required awheelchair and breathing apparatus for the rest of his life.Despite thesetbacks, Reeve was reinvented by that experience and brought
the kind ofenergy and enthusiasm that made him successful as a film star to an entirelydifferent issue, with huge effect.He lobbied on behalf of people with spinalcord injuries for human embryonic stem cell research and established
theChristopher Reeve Paralysis Foundation, a non-profit research organizationwhich raises money for research in spinal cord injuries.Also, he lobbied forscientists to be allowed to conduct stem cell research in the hopes ofeventually curing
paralysis and other current incurable diseases such as Alzheimer’sand Parkinson’s.Through this, Reeve will be remembered as “Superman” not only inthe movies, but also in reality.(175字)
7.Franklin Roosevelt
Franklin Roosevelt was the 32nd presidentof the United States who rose to prominence during the Great Depression.Duringthat time, President Hebert Hoover’s economic program was unsatisfactory andineffective and kept millions of people under poverty and hunger.In the midstof despair, Franklin Roosevelt, who had long been questioning Hoover’s economicprogram, was elected as the President to combat the economic crisis.Heassembled a group of elites and constructed a more effective economic programcalled New Deal.The new program provided money and supplies to needy familiesand created jobs for the unemployed.As a result, President
Roosevelteffectively rekindled hope to millions of despondent Americans.New Deal provedto be an important turning point in the history of America.It made a powerfulstart of a strong government role in the nation’s economic affairs thatremained and developed to the present day.(146字)
第三篇:GRE作文例子
伽利略的所有試驗中,最著名的該算是“質量相異者同時落地”,這個試驗推翻了亞里士多德的關于落體速度與其質量成正比的理論。但事實上,并沒有紀錄表明伽利略真的做了這個著名試驗。
Galileo was an Italian physicist, mathematician, astronomer and philosopher who played a major role in the Scientific Revolution.A biography by Galileo's pupil Vincenzo Viviani stated that Galileo had dropped balls of the same material, but different masses, from the Leaning Tower of Pisa to demonstrate that their time of descent was independent of their mass.This was contrary to what Aristotle had taught: that heavy objects fall faster than lighter ones, in direct proportion to weight.While this story has been retold in popular accounts, there is no account by Galileo himself of such an experiment, and it is generally accepted by historians that it was at most a thought experiment which did not actually take place.Charles Robert Darwin was an English naturalist who established that all species of life have descended over time from common ancestors, and proposed the scientific theory that this branching pattern of evolution resulted from a process that he called natural selection.He published his theory with compelling evidence for evolution in his 1859 book On the Origin of Species.Journey of the Beagle貝格爾號旅程
Movements
The term labor movement or labor movement is a broad term for the development of a collective organization of working people, to campaign in their own interest for better treatment from their employers and governments, in particular through the implementation of specific laws governing labour relations.Martin Luther King, Jr.(January 15, 1929 – April 4, 1968)was an American clergyman, activist, and prominent leader in the African American civil rights movement.His main legacy is securing progress on civil rights in the United States.Because of this work, he has become a human rights icon.In 1964, King became the youngest person to receive the Nobel Peace Prize for his work to end racial segregation and racial discrimination through civil disobedience and other non-violent means.“I Have a Dream” is the famous name given to the sixteen minute public speech by Martin Luther King, Jr., in which he called for racial equality and an end to discrimination.伊斯蘭教婦女The study of women in Islam investigates the role status of women within the religion of Islam.The complex relationship between women and Islam is defined by both Islamic texts and the history and culture of the Muslim world.Sharia(Islamic law)provides for differences between women's and men's roles, rights, and obligations.Majority Muslim countries give women varying degrees of rights with regards to marriage, divorce, civil rights, legal status, dress code, and education based on different
interpretations.Scholars and other commentators vary as to whether they are just and whether they are a correct interpretation of religious imperatives.Conservatives argue that differences between men and women are due to different status and), p.278 while liberal Muslims, Muslim
feminists, and others argue in favor of other interpretations.Some women have achieved high political office in Muslim majority states.Sartorial hijab(頭蓋), and the veil(面紗)in particular, has often been viewed by Westerners as a sign of oppression of Muslim women.婚禮Wedding traditions and customs vary greatly between cultures, ethnic groups, religions, countries, and social classes.Most wedding ceremonies involve an exchange of wedding vows by the couple, presentation of a gift(offering, ring(s), symbolic item, flowers, money), and a public proclamation of marriage by an authority figure or leader.Special wedding garments are often worn, and the ceremony is followed by a wedding reception.Chinese wedding customs
Main articles: Chinese marriage and Southern Chinese wedding
Traditional Chinese marriage is a ceremonial ritual within Chinese societies that involve a
marriage established by pre-arrangement between families.Within Chinese culture, romantic love was allowed, and monogamy was the norm for most ordinary citizens.A band of musicians with gongs and flute-like instruments accompanies the bride parade to groom's home.Similar music is also played at the wedding banquet.Depending on the region that the bride hails from, Chinese weddings will have different traditions such as Tea Ceremony or the use of a wedding emcee.Also in modern times, Chinese couples will often go to photo studios to take “glamour shots” posing in multiple gowns and various backgrounds.Most regional Chinese wedding rituals follow the main Chinese wedding traditions, although some rituals are particular to the peoples of the southern China region.In most southern Chinese wedding, the bride price is based on the groom's economic status.The idea of “selling the daughter” or bride isn't a phrase that is used often therefore the price of the bride isn't too
demanding.Most of the time the bride price is in the form of gold jewelry, fine fabric, or money, even a roast pig which symbolizes the bride to be a virgin.Wedding presents are given by the elderly couples or couples that are older than the newlyweds and tea is served by the younger family members.A number of cultures have adopted the traditional Western custom of the white wedding, in which a bride wears a white dress and veil.This tradition was popularized through the wedding of Queen Victoria.Some say Victoria's choice of a white gown may have simply been a sign of
extravagance, but may have also been influenced by the values she held which emphasized sexual purity.Within the modern 'white wedding' tradition, a white dress and veil are unusual choices for a woman's second or subsequent wedding.The notion that a white gown might symbolize sexual purity has been long abandoned, and is criticized by etiquette writers like Judith Martin as distasteful.The use of a wedding ring has long been part of religious weddings in Europe and America, but the origin of the tradition is unclear.Historians like Vicky Howard point out that belief in the
“ancient” quality of the practice are most likely a modern invention.“Double ring” ceremonies are also a modern practice, a groom's wedding band not appearing in the United States until the early 20th Century.The wedding is often followed by a reception, in which the rituals may include toasting the newlyweds, their first dance as spouses, and the cutting of a wedding cake.
第四篇:作文提綱格式+例子
如何制定作文提綱呢?作文提綱一般包含三部分內容:
(1)題目。要把題目(或補充完整的題目)寫在第一行正中間。
(2)主要內容和中心。要在題目下面,簡要地寫出這篇作文的主要內容及要表達的中心思想。
(3)結構安排。這是作文提綱最主要的部分,設計時需要注意做到以下五點:
①安排好材料的組織順序。先寫什么、后寫什么,全文一共準備分為幾大段,每段寫什么,要以小標題的形式、按照一定的順序把材料組織起來。
②確定好重點寫的內容。要依據表達中心的需要,確定出哪些內容是主要的,哪些內容是次要的,標明“詳”、“次詳”、“略”的字樣;重點段又打算分幾層來寫,先寫哪層、后寫哪層,具體列出準備重點寫的步驟、次序。
③依據文章選用的材料及要表達的中心思想,確定好開頭、結尾的方法,并在提綱中簡單注明。
④設計好點題的時機及具體的方式、方法。
⑤考慮好層次之間、段落之間該如何銜接過渡,哪些內容需要照應,如何照應,也簡單標注一下。
同學們看一看,下面就是一則比較優秀、實用的作文提綱:
題目:美好一瞬間
主要內容:體育課時,同學小時在跑步過程中暈倒了,同學紛紛上前探看。
中心思想:關心同學、急人所急。
結構安排:
一、同學小時在體育課上,跑步時暈倒。(略)
二、同學熱心上前探看。(重點段)
1.同學把我扶到小時扶到樹蔭下。(次詳)
2.幾位同學幫她倒水。(詳)
3.同學們小老師報告情況,情緒焦急。(次詳)
三、對同學們的行為我十分感動,至今記憶猶新。(略,點題)
制定作文提綱時,要注意哪些問題呢?
第一,形式可以靈活。總的來說,作文提綱沒有固定的格式和統一的要求,項目和詳略的程度可依材料的特點、表達的需要和自己的水平而定。一般地講:初學作文時,作文提綱宜細不宜粗;隨著構思、布局水平的不斷提高,作文提綱就可以寫得簡單些。
第二,要認真推敲、修改。列出提綱后,要對整個構思做全面的推敲:選材是否切題?立意是否明確、深刻?對選擇的材料還需要進一步做哪些取舍?材料的組織安排是否嚴密、合理,能否突出中心?推敲后,做出必要的修改。自己滿意了,才可以動筆行文。
第三,一定要先列提綱后作文。制定作文提綱完全是寫給自己看的,是為自己寫好這篇文章服務的。它具有很強的實用性。有的同學對列提綱的目的認識不清,認為提綱可有可無,甚至覺得老師要求列提綱是“多事”,于是,為了應付老師,竟然先寫作文后“補寫”作文提綱。這實在是本末倒置、自欺欺人之舉。
第四,務必要養成“不列提綱不作文”的習慣。常見一些同學作文之前不列提綱,見到題目思考片刻便提筆行文,寫寫想想,想想寫寫,腳踏西瓜皮,滑到哪里是哪里,有的甚至都已寫了一半又撕掉重寫。結果,既浪費了寶貴的時間,又嚴重影響了作文的質量。這其中的主要緣故就是沒有養成認真構思、布局的習慣,尤其沒有養成“不列提綱不作文”的習慣。
作文時,有了提綱的約束,按“計劃”行事,寫起文章就容易做到一氣呵成,寫出的文章就容易達到“有中心、有條理、有重點”等要求;反之就會層次不清,詳略不當,丟三落四。因此,列提綱是提高作文效率和質量的一種重要方法。
這就提示同學們:要作文,先列提綱;不列提綱不作文。平時要這樣,考試或參加作文競賽更要這樣。要重視從五年級第二學期開始,練習不打草稿、依照作文提綱直接成文。
第五篇:語文作文例子
記取小人物帶來的“正能量”
湯嘉琛
身邊平凡小人物,帶給我們大感動。近日,由新華社發起的“中國網事·感動2012”第三季度網絡人物評選結果揭曉,網民們選出了他們心目的“草根英雄”。這其中,既有北京“7·21”特大暴雨中冒險救人的農民工群體,也有新疆和“私車公用”接送老弱病殘乘客的艾尼瓦爾·芒素??
這些真實地生活在我們身邊的小人物,盡管沒有太多傳奇故事和豪言壯語,卻能觸動我們的內心。所有這些“草根英雄”能夠做到的是,都是我們每個普通人也能做到的,正因如此,他們更能自然地引導我們與人為善,做更好的自己。這種足以激發每個人良善潛質的“正能量”,或許比任何說教和宣傳更有說服力。
媒體應該多關注這樣的小人物,新民晚報前不久報道了兩位知青重返黑龍江幫助百姓致富的故事,也引發讀者熱烈反響。當然,肯定這些小人物帶給我們的“正能量”,不能忘記網絡和網友的功勞。正是千千萬萬的網友用跟帖、轉發和評論,將這些曾經默默無聞的小人物變成了家喻戶曉的時代英雄,也正是網絡讓這股“正能量”效應實現了最大化。這些“草根英雄”在網上走紅,在某種程度上能夠讓我們更客觀地認識到,無論是在網絡上還是現實中,我們身邊其實也不缺好人。
很多時候,當我們身處喧囂的網絡輿論場,一些有爭議的、噱頭性的負面信息,其實是有意無意地被放大了。在網絡上,“好消息”無人問津,“壞消息”日行千里;在網絡上,“好人”難被聚焦,“壞人”聲名遠播。這種復雜因素所致的傳播偏好,讓網絡世界的“負能量”似乎要比“正能量”多得多,仿佛網絡上的那個中國,每天都充斥著各種壞人壞事壞消息。
因此,記取這些小人物帶給我們的“正能量”,一個很重要的現實意義,在于對我們看待世界的視角進行某種糾偏,讓我們更客觀理性地審視腳下的這片土地。平心而論,對絕大多數公眾來說,我們既不生活在電視新聞呈現的那個“好中國”,也不生活在網絡呈現的那個“壞中國”,而是生活在“現實的中國”里。這樣一個中國,有壞人也有好人,有危機也有希望,大家每天都正常地工作和生活,現實雖然不那么好,但也不如網絡中說的那么壞。
有位學者曾說過一句廣為大家所引用的話——“你所在的地方,就是你的中國。你怎么樣,中國便怎么樣。你有光明,中國便不黑暗。”確實,中國是由你我他這樣的小人物所組成的,中國社會面對的現實正是我們需要解決的問題。如果我們在揭露“表哥”、圍觀“郭美美”、批判“小悅悅事件”的同時,也能從身邊的“草根英雄”身上汲取力量,甚至像他們一樣盡可能地為社會貢獻自己的“正能量”,“現實的中國”自然會變得更好、更有希望。