第一篇：六級(jí)寫作技巧

英語四六級(jí)寫作“旁門左道”技巧

四六級(jí)考試越來越使模板無用武之地，閱卷老師在閱卷的過程中最多的是關(guān)注同學(xué)們的用詞和句型的使用。

高分作文標(biāo)志

1、四級(jí)120-150字；六級(jí)150-180字；

2、是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉；

3、用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1、適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2、善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3、一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’’s

competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)

第二篇：六級(jí)寫作技巧

一、審題立意

大學(xué)英語六級(jí)作文的題型一般是標(biāo)題作文、主題句作文或情景、圖表作文等等，去年六級(jí)作文考試有書信和記敘文，但基本都屬于命題作文范疇。對(duì)于命題作文，審題立意是寫好作文至關(guān)重要的一步。所謂審題，就是要看清題意，確定文章的中心思想和主題，并圍繞中心思想組織材料。也就是通過分析作文題給出的標(biāo)題、主題旬或情景，找出關(guān)鍵詞或中心詞，明確寫作要求，是寫哪方面的內(nèi)容，既包括題材上的要求，也包括體裁上的要求。如果不審題就隨便下筆，想一句寫一句，內(nèi)容離題，即使再好的再華麗的再精心構(gòu)思的詞句表達(dá)也無濟(jì)于事。另一方面，六級(jí)寫作的目的是測(cè)試學(xué)生用英語書面表達(dá)思想的初步能力，并不是測(cè)試你母語創(chuàng)作能力，而且為了便于作文評(píng)卷有一盡量統(tǒng)一的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，出題方式無論怎樣變化，六級(jí)作文都可以歸納為三段式，有的甚至給出三段的段首句。其目的就是讓學(xué)生們?cè)诮y(tǒng)一主題下的寫作要點(diǎn)、思維和方式盡可能地同一化和統(tǒng)一化。鑒于此，我們應(yīng)清楚六級(jí)寫作沒有太大的自由發(fā)揮空間。在構(gòu)思段落之前一定要仔細(xì)斟酌標(biāo)題、主題句和段首字，找出關(guān)鍵詞從而確定寫作的方向和范圍，而且還應(yīng)記住要盡量縮小這個(gè)范圍，不能脫離要求任意展開，那樣屬于跑題。星火教育網(wǎng)

二、段落構(gòu)思

文章的段落，是文章的基本組成部分，一篇好的文章需要精心的段落構(gòu)思和合理的段落安排，根據(jù)不同的題材確定不同的段落寫作順序。六級(jí)作文從結(jié)構(gòu)上看，一般由三部分組成：引言部分（introductory part；展開部分（bodypart）；結(jié)尾部分（ending part），而且每段往往只有一個(gè)主題，段中各支持句圍繞明確的主題，層層展開論證并服務(wù)于主題句。整篇文章也是層層推進(jìn)，環(huán)環(huán)相扣，條理分明，完整統(tǒng)一。下面進(jìn)一步說明每一部分的具體寫作技巧與要求：

首先，引言部分introductory part

文章開頭很重要，關(guān)系到全篇文章，一定要認(rèn)真考慮好如何寫好第一句。一般緊扣主題，開門見山，直接入題。如果已給出段首句，則要考慮如何跟開頭連接好。在實(shí)際寫作中，主要有以下幾種開頭方式。

定義法。即用一句話或幾句話來解放說明題中的關(guān)鍵詞，給出關(guān)鍵詞的定義。多用于給出一簡(jiǎn)單題目的標(biāo)題作文。直接切入主題。也就是直截了當(dāng)?shù)亟沂疚恼碌闹黝}或?qū)懽髟桑缫呀o出每一段的中文提示，可直接翻譯提示中每一段的中心思想，作為開頭。星火教育網(wǎng)

提問法。用疑問句或設(shè)問句開頭，緊接著提出自己對(duì)這個(gè)問題的看法或直接點(diǎn)明主題，這種方法如果使用得當(dāng)，能夠激起讀者往下讀的興趣，以便找出答案。以故事背景開頭，交待時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物及背景，然后在這個(gè)背景下引出正文。這種方法多用于記敘文，使讀者一開始就產(chǎn)生鮮明視覺形象。引用法。即引用名人名言或諺語等作為文章的開頭，指出閱讀的內(nèi)容范圍。

其次，主題部分body part

篇章寫作不僅應(yīng)層次清楚，而且主次也要分明i任何文章都有主體部分，即文章的精華部分。學(xué)生在這部分的寫作錯(cuò)誤五花八門，或者段落內(nèi)容缺乏統(tǒng)一性，或者句與句之間缺少連貫性，層次混亂，信息的表達(dá)經(jīng)常是跳躍式的想到什么寫什么，內(nèi)容空洞，言之無物，缺乏嚴(yán)密的邏輯性。針對(duì)這些錯(cuò)誤，寫主體段應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)要求。要緊扣開頭段提出的主題思想，突出中心。圍繞主題句用一組意思連貫而且完整的句子展開文章，切記各展開句是能起到說明、支持或闡述主題的句子并服務(wù)于主題，全文保持統(tǒng)一性，也就是我們通常所說的“切題”。主體段取材必須精練典型，系統(tǒng)而完整。根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要和字?jǐn)?shù)的規(guī)定，確定要點(diǎn)的詳與略后，選擇正確的、典型的、具有說服力的事實(shí)、例子、數(shù)據(jù)和論據(jù)等說明解釋并擴(kuò)充主題。主體段要與開頭段和結(jié)尾段有內(nèi)在的必然歸宿，要順其自然地過渡，使用好承上啟下的連接詞或句子，防止突然轉(zhuǎn)折。另外，主體段的句與句之間也要逐步展開，通順連貫，符合一定的邏輯關(guān)系。星火教育網(wǎng)

最后，結(jié)尾部分ending part

文章如何結(jié)尾關(guān)系到寫作的成敗。好的結(jié)尾不僅在形式上起到面龍點(diǎn)睛的效果，而且在內(nèi)容上讀者明其宗旨，解其寓意。一般結(jié)尾段的寫法有以下幾種；總結(jié)式，即在上文所述事實(shí)和論據(jù)的基礎(chǔ)上，對(duì)全文進(jìn)行歸納、總結(jié)得出結(jié)論，使讀者對(duì)文章的主題或作者的觀點(diǎn)有個(gè)更完整而清晰的理解。首尾呼應(yīng)式，即對(duì)引言段所提出的同題給出解決方案，作到首尾呼應(yīng)，主題突出，結(jié)構(gòu)勻稱，使讀者對(duì)提出的問題有了明確的答案。提問式，這種結(jié)尾形式可以引起讀者的思考。并起到強(qiáng)調(diào)主題的作用。展望式，也就是要提出作者的希望、號(hào)召或表示信心和決-c-，使讀者受鼓舞。引語式，引用名人名言，諺語俗語做文章的結(jié)尾，使文章更具說服力

三、語言表達(dá)

六級(jí)作文評(píng)分的原則之一就是要從內(nèi)容和語言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。因此這項(xiàng)測(cè)試不僅考察學(xué)生所學(xué)的英語語言知識(shí)，更是考察學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)語言知識(shí)來正確地表達(dá)思想。許多學(xué)生詞匯、句型知道的確實(shí)不少，但卻不能熟練自如地運(yùn)用到寫作中，特別是讓其在規(guī)定的時(shí)間里寫出一篇象樣的文章，不是難以行筆，就是落筆錯(cuò)誤百出。分析其原因主要體現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面：

（一）詞法層次

英語詞匯一詞多義和同義詞現(xiàn)象非常普遍，外延相同而內(nèi)涵不同的詞數(shù)量很多。許多學(xué)生只知其表面意思，不了解詞語的深層的文化以及感情色彩等，出現(xiàn)用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。

（二）句法層次

句子中語法錯(cuò)誤太多，包括時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣以及主謂一致等，如果這些成份的一致關(guān)系弄錯(cuò)會(huì)使句子邏輯混亂，意義含糊不清。

（三）語言的連貫性

文字連貫，語言流暢是寫好作文的基本要求，會(huì)給人以美的享受。而內(nèi)容充實(shí)，意思完整是文章連貫流暢的基礎(chǔ)，達(dá)到這一目標(biāo)要求學(xué)生有較強(qiáng)的語感和語言功底，需要一個(gè)長(zhǎng)期積累和大量實(shí)踐的過程。通過對(duì)以上寫作方法與技巧的探討，我們不僅了解到其重要性，更應(yīng)付諸實(shí)踐。尤其是教師在實(shí)際教學(xué)中，要加強(qiáng)學(xué)生的語言基本功的訓(xùn)練，將閱讀教學(xué)與寫作培養(yǎng)相結(jié)合。因?yàn)閷懽魇且环N語言的輸出，閱讀是一種輸入，只有大量的輸入才會(huì)有輸出。同時(shí)也要強(qiáng)調(diào)寫作技能的訓(xùn)練和實(shí)踐，采用多種方法調(diào)動(dòng)學(xué)生的寫作積極性。

第三篇：冰果英語介紹的六級(jí)寫作技巧

對(duì)立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，適用于有爭(zhēng)議性的主題。

例如(e.g.)

[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to...., some people believe that.......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but(I tend to the former/latter...)

[3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that....They claim/ believe/argue that...But I wonder/doubt whether.....1-2 現(xiàn)象法 引出要剖析的現(xiàn)象或者問題，然后評(píng)論。

e.g.[1].Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of)...has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.[2].Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus.(has been brought to public attention)

[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality...is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.1-3 觀點(diǎn)法----開門見山，直接了當(dāng)?shù)靥岢鲎约簩?duì)要討論的問題的看法。

e.g.[1].Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware)that...[2].Now there is a growing awareness/recognation of the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of......[3].Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......1-4 引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，來引出文章要展開論述的觀點(diǎn)。e.g.[1].“Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“Education is not complete with graduation.” such is the opinion of a great American philosopher.Now more and more people share his opinion.[2].How often do we hear statements like“.........”.In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this “......”.1-5 比較法------通過對(duì)過去、現(xiàn)在兩種不同的傾向、觀點(diǎn)的比較，引出文章要討論的觀點(diǎn)。e.g.[1].For years,...had been viewed as...But people are taking a fresh look now.With the growing..., people........[2].People used to think that...(In the past,....)But people now share this new...1-6 故事法----先講一個(gè)較短的故事來引發(fā)讀者的興趣，引出文章的主題。

[1].Once in(a newspaper), I read of/learnt....The phenemenon of...has aroused public concern.[2].I have a friend who...Should he....? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.[3].Once upon a time , there lived a man who...This story may be(unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now.1-7 問題法-----先用討論或解答的設(shè)問，引出自己觀點(diǎn)，適用于有爭(zhēng)議性的話題。e.g.Should/What......? Options of...vary greatly , some..., others...But in my opinion ,.......二、文章中間主體內(nèi)容句型

原因結(jié)果分析

2-1.基本原因---分析某事物時(shí), 用此句型說明其基本的或者多方面的原因.e.g.[1].Why...? For one thing..For another...[2].The answer to this problem invovles many factors.For one thing...For another......Still another...[3].A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect..../both individual and social contribute to....2-2 另一原因--------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再補(bǔ)充一個(gè)次要的或者更重要時(shí)用!e.g.[1].Another important factor is....[2]....is also responsible for the change/problem.[3].Certainly , the...is not the sole reason for.....2-3 后果影響---------分析某事物可能造成的后果或者帶來的影響.e.g.[1].It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....[2].It involves some serious consequence for........2-4比較對(duì)照句型

2-4-1.兩者比較---> 比較兩事物, 要說出其一超過另一個(gè), 或肯定一事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn), 也肯定其缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候用!

e.g:

[1].The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.[2].Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.[3].There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.2-4-2.兩者相同/相似------> 比較兩事物共同都有或者共同都沒有的特點(diǎn)時(shí)用!

e.g:

[1].A and B have several things in common.They are similar in that.....[2].A bears some striking resemblance(s)to B.三、文章結(jié)尾形式

3-1 結(jié)論性---------通過對(duì)文章前面的討論 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點(diǎn).e.g.[1].From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....[2].In summary/In a word , it is more valuable.......3-2 后果性------揭示所討論的問題若不解決, 將產(chǎn)生的嚴(yán)重后果.e.g.[1].We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of..., if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of.......[2].Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that..will be put in danger.3-3 號(hào)召性--------呼吁讀者行動(dòng)起來, 采取行動(dòng)或提請(qǐng)注意.e.g.[1].It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of......[2].It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.3-4 建議性--------對(duì)所討論的問題提出建議性的意見, 包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.e.g.[1].While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways.The most popular is....Another method is...Still another one is.....[2].Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.3-5 方向性的結(jié)尾方式----其與建議性的唯一差別就是對(duì)問題解決提出總的, 大體的方向或者指明前景.e.g.[1].Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be recognized in a wide way.[2].There is no quick method to the issue of.., but..might be helpful/benefical.[3].The great challenge today is......There is much difficulty , but........3-6 意義性的結(jié)尾方式--------> 文章結(jié)尾的時(shí)候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠(yuǎn)的意義!

e.g.[1].Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the payoff might be worth the effort.It will not only benefit but also benefit.....[2].In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly..二、如何寫主題句

１．建議放在第一句

２．多用肯定句

３．語意明確，是段落軸心（段落中的每一句都與其相關(guān)）

One day, I was flying from Shanghai to Yunnan.When the plane took off, the wind was blowing, and it was raining hard.I was a little nervous....直接寫出

My worst experience happened on an airplane in August 1995.三、如何發(fā)展段落

１．引用例子或個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)／感受

２．定義某一個(gè)原則或概念

３．詳細(xì)說明主題句

范例一（詳細(xì)說明two cities, taste）

A visitor to my country should visit two cities to get a taste of the country.From north to south, the traveler should stop at _______ which is mainly an industrial city with many tall buildings and stores.After he has seen _______, the traveler should drive south toward _________.He will see(the sea)as he drives along the coast.When he arrives in _______, he will find a friendly city, with many fruit trees and plants.范例二（定義kind）

My mother was one of the kindest people on earth.When I was young, she would overlook almost all my mistakes and gently correct me.My mother would often be nice to other children in the neighborhood by sharing my food, toys, and even clothes with them.范例三（詳細(xì)說明主題句serious problem）

For most people nowadays, the need of energy is a serious problem.In industrialized countries, people need a lot of gas and electricity.Economists and political leaders continually warn us about the problem.They encourage us to save energy by driving less, turning down heaters, and turning off lights.范例四（詳細(xì)說明several important qualities＋舉例）

My ideal husband would have to have several important qualities.First he would be kind and loving.For example, he would never stay angry for long and he would always find little ways to make life more fun for his family.Second he would be willing to share with me the responsibilities of the household.He would, for instance, do some of the cooking, laundry, and cleaning.He would also share in the raising of our children.Finally, he would be tall and thin with dark eyes.常用于引言的字句-「起」

1.As an old English saying goes, “………” 有句英文諺語是這么說的，…

2.There is no denying(doubt)that S+ V… 不可否認(rèn)的是…

3.Generally speaking, S + V…..一般說來…

4.According to my personal experience, S + V…In my opinion, Personally, I like/think, 根據(jù)我個(gè)人的經(jīng)驗(yàn)…

5.Nothing in the world can delight me so much as +Ving…..世界上沒有什麼比做…讓我更高興了。

6.As far as I know… 就我所知…

7.As far as I can recall, S + V… 就我印象所及…

常用于延展的字句-「承」

1.Indeed;It is true that + S + V…;Quite true;Rightly so, 的確…

2.To be honest, Frankly speaking;事實(shí)上

3.It is widely believed that + S + V…;Belief has it that + S + V… 誠(chéng)如所信

4.For example;For instance;To take + N+ for an example, S + V… 以…為例子…

5.We have reasons to believe that + S + V…..我們有理由相信…

6.In fact;As a matter of fact, S + V…..事實(shí)上…

7.Likewise, In a similar fashion, Similarly 同樣地

8.In other words;To be specific;換句話說;詳細(xì)地說

9.As mentioned from above, 如前所述

常用于語氣轉(zhuǎn)換的字句-「轉(zhuǎn)」

1.However, Nevertheless, Granted that 然而…

2.Despite +N;Despite the fact that + S + V, … 盡管….3.On the other hand, S + V..… 另一方面…

4.On the contrary, On the opposite, In contrast 相反的是…

5.When compared to A, B + V, 與A相比, B….常用于結(jié)論的字句--「合」

1.From this point of view, S + V….從這觀點(diǎn)來看…

2.In a word, S + V….總而言之…

3.To sum up, S + V;To conclude;In conclusion 總之…

4.If we can really put + N + into action, S + V…… 如果我們能付諸實(shí)行…

5.Last but not least, S + V….最后…

常用轉(zhuǎn)折詞

（1）因此；結(jié)果︰as a result, consequently, as a consequence, in consequence, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, on this ground, because of this

（2）順序: first/firstly, in the first place, second/secondly, next, finally

（3）此外︰in addition, additionally, besides, furthermore, moreover, also, what's more

（4）然而︰however, nevertheless

（5）換言之︰that is, that is to say, namely, in other words, to put it differently

（6）同樣地︰likewise, similarly, in the similar way

（7）相反地︰instead, on the contrary, by contrast, conversely

四、頭尾呼應(yīng)

１．首句及末句不能相互矛盾

２．末句不要重復(fù)首句

范例一

首句：You can learn many things from traveling that you cannot learn any other way.末句：I learned a lot more about Australia from that experience than a book or TV show could

have taught me.首句：For the class reunion, I have decided that we should have a beach party.末句：This reunion will be a way of fulfilling our promise to each other, as well as reminding ourselves of the value of our friendship.

第四篇：精選六級(jí)作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以這樣理解：城市史人創(chuàng)造的，它不斷地演進(jìn)、演化和成長(zhǎng)為一個(gè)有機(jī)系統(tǒng)。人是這個(gè)有機(jī)系統(tǒng)中最具活力和最富有創(chuàng)新能力的細(xì)胞。人的生活與城市的形態(tài)和發(fā)展密切互動(dòng)。隨著城市化進(jìn)程的加速，城市的有機(jī)系統(tǒng)與地球大生物圈和資源體系之間相互作用也日益加深和擴(kuò)大。人、城市和地球三個(gè)有機(jī)系統(tǒng)環(huán)環(huán)相扣，這種關(guān)系貫穿了城市發(fā)展的歷程，三者也將日益融合成為一個(gè)不可分割的整體。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.為了更好地理解“城市，讓生活更美好”，上海世博會(huì)還設(shè)有五個(gè)副主題分別是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮”、“城市科技的創(chuàng)新”、“城市社區(qū)的重塑”、“城市和鄉(xiāng)村的互動(dòng)”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避錯(cuò)指導(dǎo)

本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉的校園類話題，但與社會(huì)背景有很大關(guān)系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會(huì)使環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題成為焦點(diǎn)，在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時(shí)也是一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，這是我們審題時(shí)所必須考慮的。另外開篇時(shí)，切忌拖泥帶水，應(yīng)直截了當(dāng)，使閱卷老師對(duì)文章主題一目了然。

【生動(dòng)的用詞】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的;sustainable可持續(xù)的;recyclable可循環(huán)的。

【豐富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益;play a crucial role in發(fā)揮關(guān)鍵作用;under the burden of在??重負(fù)下;come true實(shí)現(xiàn);call for要求。

【同義詞轉(zhuǎn)換】

作文表達(dá)除了準(zhǔn)確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。

1.realize → be aware of 意識(shí)到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我們最好意識(shí)到周圍污染的嚴(yán)峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育學(xué)生意識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引導(dǎo)

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.這有助于引導(dǎo)大學(xué)生的行為。

【話題備考錦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個(gè)綠色環(huán)境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建設(shè)“綠色校園”將會(huì)極大激勵(lì)學(xué)生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.為全面實(shí)施“綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校園建設(shè)不僅對(duì)學(xué)生的身體發(fā)展很重要，而且對(duì)他們的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫無疑問，對(duì)于綠色校園應(yīng)該給與更多的思考。

【話題詞匯拓展】

devastation n.毀壞

disastrous a.損失慘重的 doom v.厄運(yùn)，毀滅

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.骯臟的，凌亂的 participation n.分享，參與

preserve v.保存，保護(hù)

preventive a.預(yù)防性的 purify v.澄清，凈化

stimulation n.激勵(lì)，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 喚起意識(shí) 1.上圖所示為某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年參加成人教育(或繼續(xù)教育)的人數(shù)情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化;

2.請(qǐng)說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因(可從社會(huì)發(fā)展及競(jìng)爭(zhēng)能力方面加以說明)

3.請(qǐng)預(yù)測(cè)我國(guó)成人教育(繼續(xù)教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日受到冷遇，西方節(jié)日日益升溫已成為趨勢(shì)

2.形成這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的態(tài)度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，在網(wǎng)上聊天交友、玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲是目前我國(guó)大學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的主要活動(dòng)內(nèi)容

2.專家認(rèn)為，那些沉迷于聊天和游戲的大學(xué)生，不僅耗費(fèi)了金錢、時(shí)間和精力，還影響了正常的學(xué)業(yè)和人際交往

3.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)如何看待大學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的問題

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的選擇

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校園“考證族”的隊(duì)伍不斷壯大，很多學(xué)生忙于考區(qū)各種資格證書 大學(xué)生忙考證的利弊 你的觀點(diǎn)

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好詞佳句]

好詞佳句總結(jié)：

fever 狂熱可用指某種現(xiàn)象

vocational qualification 職業(yè)證照

work-related 與工作有關(guān)

credentials 學(xué)歷資歷等的資格

at the expense of以??為犧牲

同學(xué)們注意下范文最后一句，使用該句式又穩(wěn)妥，又能拿個(gè)不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)。

From my point of view, what matters most is? not?

1)道路事故會(huì)給人們的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)帶來很大的損 2)分析道路事故發(fā)生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故發(fā)生率

行文思路：

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴(yán)重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英語六級(jí)作文預(yù)測(cè)范文第二篇

1)隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及和應(yīng)用，網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪開始擺在世人面前

2)應(yīng)該如何來打擊和預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪越來越成為人們必須要解決的一個(gè)難題

3)作為大學(xué)生，你應(yīng)該怎么做？

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問題，提綱第2點(diǎn)指出解決該問題的緊迫性，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劥髮W(xué)生應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)該問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪出現(xiàn)的背景及問題現(xiàn)狀；指出解決網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪問題的緊迫型，說明解決辦法；從大學(xué)生的角度談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪。

【參考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人會(huì)選擇收入高但工作時(shí)間長(zhǎng)的工作；有些人則寧愿選擇收入低但工作時(shí)間卻相對(duì)較短的工作

2)如果讓你選擇，你會(huì)選擇哪種工作？理由是?

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出兩種不同的工作選擇，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求表明“我”的傾向，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出人們對(duì)工作的兩種不同選擇傾向：一些人即使需要工作更長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間也會(huì)選擇收入高的工作，一些人則寧愿拿低工資也會(huì)選擇工作時(shí)間較短的工作；表明“我”會(huì)選擇什么類型的工作，說明“我”這樣選擇的理由。

【參考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)現(xiàn)在各種各樣的電視選秀節(jié)目吸引了許多年輕人

2)為了實(shí)現(xiàn)明星夢(mèng)，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學(xué)業(yè)，這種現(xiàn)象引起了許多關(guān)注

3)你怎么看？為什么？

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)和第2點(diǎn)指出一種有爭(zhēng)議的現(xiàn)象，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求表明“我”對(duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述年輕人熱衷選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)象，引出對(duì)其的爭(zhēng)議；表明“我”對(duì)年輕人熱衷選秀節(jié)目的看法，并說明“我”的理由。

【參考范文】

Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年來出現(xiàn)大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象

2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3)如何解決這一問題

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)要求指出目前大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)則要求闡述應(yīng)該如何解決這一問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：提出大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，指出現(xiàn)象的表現(xiàn)；說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，如大學(xué)生追求目標(biāo)過高等；從幾個(gè)方面提出解決方法。

【參考范文】

College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠遠(yuǎn)的汽笛聲中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和淚水交匯。這是揮別的一刻：向母親、父親、兒子、女兒、妻子、丈夫、戀人、老師、學(xué)生、朋友、同事、鄰居??；向5月12日14時(shí)28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、憂愁、歡喜??那些美麗的溫馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暫的告別。生命，并非僅僅是呼吸和心跳。生離死別，不是生命的邊界。親人們沒有離去，一切都將延續(xù)。在廢墟上嘹亮的嬰兒啼哭聲里，一個(gè)叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，讓我們所有中華兒女永遠(yuǎn)記住這一天吧，我們的“國(guó)難日”，中華民族的歷史本上，銘刻了太多的災(zāi)難，但這永遠(yuǎn)也難掩我們民族的輝煌，一次次的災(zāi)難，一次次的負(fù)重前行，那么就讓我們掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干凈所有的廢墟，在曾經(jīng)是家園的土地上，重建我們的家園，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往會(huì)變得相當(dāng)脆弱，災(zāi)后重建，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)就變得尤其重要，三分鐘過后，我們要擦干眼淚，我們不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因?yàn)橛H人會(huì)在天堂看著我們，痛不欲生、傷心欲絕不是他們想看到的，好地地活下去，是他們對(duì)我們的期望，想一想，那廢墟中以已命換子命的母親，“親愛的寶貝，如果你能活下去，要記住，媽媽愛你”；想一想那為了救四個(gè)孩子而犧牲了的老師，我們的走了的這些親人，用自己的生命給我們爭(zhēng)來了活的機(jī)會(huì)，為了他們，我們也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

對(duì)于我們所有中國(guó)人來說，都是一個(gè)終生難忘記的日子，因?yàn)榻裉欤俏覀兊摹皣?guó)難日”，悲情汶川，舉國(guó)志哀，我們用這樣一種方式，來紀(jì)念那些在地震中逝去的親人，我們用這樣的一種方式，為他們招魂，在奔向天國(guó)的路上，希望他們能夠一路走好，當(dāng)他們回頭遙望故土大地時(shí)，會(huì)看見成千上萬的他們的同胞手足，在仰望蒼穹為他們祈禱，所以他們不會(huì)孤獨(dú)、不會(huì)寂寞。

1)有的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時(shí)主要看重高工資，而有的則認(rèn)為良好的職業(yè)發(fā)展空間才是更重要的

2)闡述他們各自的考慮

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)或傾向。

[2]用于對(duì)比分析兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的理由。

[3]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)充當(dāng)狀語。

[4]“因?yàn)槿卞X”。

[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的主語。

[6]while引導(dǎo)比較狀語從句，意為“然而”。

[7]“一般來說”。

[8]“選擇”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.臨摹：近些年來，越來越多的人開始喜歡洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.臨摹：然而，持第二種觀點(diǎn)的人認(rèn)為體育明星們?yōu)樯鐣?huì)做出了杰出的貢獻(xiàn)，因此應(yīng)該得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.臨摹：我們之間的共同之處使我們的關(guān)系牢固，而不同之處則都會(huì)我們?nèi)绾蜗嗷ダ斫狻?/p>

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1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大學(xué)生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)已經(jīng)很普遍

2.大學(xué)生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)的好處

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)

第五篇：六級(jí)作文

話題：Open Courses

1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)公開課很盛行;2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)公開課有不少好處，也存在一些問題;3.我對(duì)此的建議。

范文：

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.題目：On Blind-date Show

1、目前電視相親節(jié)目很流行

2、出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是：

3、我對(duì)此的看法

范文：

Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.題目：Self-help Traveling

1、越來越多的大學(xué)生選擇“自助游”

2、也會(huì)帶來一些問題

3、我的看法

范文：

Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.題目：On Adversity

1、每個(gè)人都會(huì)碰到逆境

2、人們對(duì)逆境的看法不一

3、我的看法

范文：

Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad

In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.話題：樹立目標(biāo)

1.樹立目標(biāo)很重要2.原因是??3.如何設(shè)立和達(dá)到目標(biāo)

The Importance of Goal

There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi話題：How to Enhance

the Sense of Happiness

1.人們對(duì)于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不僅包含物質(zhì)層面，也指??

范文：

The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.當(dāng)今社會(huì)，社交網(wǎng)站很流行 2.各人對(duì)此看法不同 3.我的看法

話題：Social Network Sites

【參考范文一】

Social Network Sites

In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知識(shí)能改變命運(yùn)2.有人則認(rèn)為當(dāng)今社會(huì)光靠知識(shí)已經(jīng)很難改變命運(yùn)3.我認(rèn)為??

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

【參考范文一】

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.