第一篇：考研英語高分作文經典背誦之道歉信

考研英語高分作文經典背誦之道歉信

寫作“三步走”：

表示歉意—>說明具體原因、提出補救辦法—>再次致歉、希望得到理解 范文：

Dear Anne,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Please allow me to say sorry again.閃光詞匯及詞組：

drop sb.a line: 給某人打一個電話

preferable: adj.更好的，更可取的long for sth: 渴望

萬能句型：

Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot?

I feel terribly sorry for missing the change of?

Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterwards?

If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a call about your preferable date.Please allow me to say sorry again.范文：

Dear Prof.Patent,I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago.For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic activity.I hereby submit the doctor’s note.I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours faithfully,Li Ming

閃光詞匯及詞組：

assign: v.分配，指派

fall upon sb: 降臨到某人身上

continuous: adj.持續的prevent sb from sth/doing sth: 使某人不能做某事

hereby: adv.因此，據此

submit: v.提交，遞交

obliged: adj.感激的grant: v.同意，準予

萬能句型：

I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete?due to? I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.

第二篇：考研小作文高分 道歉信

考研小作文高分模板——道歉信 Dear Sir or Madam 親愛的先生或者女士 , Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party tomorrow and I have been longing for giving my sincere wishes to you on that special day非常感謝你邀請我參加你明天的生日派對。我一直都渴望能在那個特殊的日子為你獻上我誠摯的祝福.(第一段一定得簡單說明下你做了什么對不

起主人公的事情，即為什么道歉，順帶為其損失表達下遺憾。到 了第二段，就是吹牛道歉，并送上祝福)However , I am terribly sorry that I cannot be there because of a matter of some urgency.然而，非常抱歉，由于有急事我無法到場。The afternoon I got a call from my parents telling me that my sister has been hospitalized 今天下午，我父母打電話告訴我，我妹妹生病了.(妹妹生病了，自行車

壞了，作業沒帶，路上遇見老奶奶，各種理由，各種用)Both of my parents are busy at work 我父母工作都很忙.So I have to go home in a harry to take care of her所以我不得不盡快回家照顧我妹妹.I am sure you can understand this我相信你會理解的.I would like to say sorry again and wish you a happy birthday as well as a successful party我想再次表達我的歉意，以及祝你生日快樂，生日party一切順利.Yours sincerely , Li Ming 補充：可以加上第三段內容，如下：

Please accept my heartfelt apology again.請再次接受我真誠的道歉 I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my carelessness.對于我的粗心，我希望能夠獲得你的諒解

PS : 根據樓主考研的經驗，小作文對于格式的要求并不是那么死 板，越靈活越好，比如 15 年英二考了一個 notice，70%的考生都沒注

意，開頭仍然是寫 dear student，但依據最后的分數來看，大家并沒有

質的區別，只要意思大體正確，單詞不拼錯，閱卷老師不會為難你，小作文不需要花太多時間。

第三篇：考研英語作文之2：道歉信

道歉信

Dear ___________, I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).The reason is that ______________________________________(介紹原因)Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.2 Yours sincerely Li Ming

第四篇：考研英語高分作文經典背誦100篇：人生價值類

考研英語高分作文經典背誦100篇：人生價值類

（1）2004年真題。Directions: Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1)describe the drawing, 2)interpret its meaning, and 3)support your view with examples.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析：

本題承襲了考研漫畫內容簡潔、寓意深刻的風格。一個滿頭大汗的運動員正沖破了一次長跑比賽的終點，而在終點的不遠處，赫然標著兩個大字“起點”。通過漫畫的題目“終點又是新起點”，考生很容易就可以抓住本題的中心論點：在人生道路上，我們不能僅僅滿足于一兩次的成功，而只有不斷地追求，我們才能取得進步和發展。這也符合哲學上事物是不斷發展的這一趨勢和真理。針對這類人生奮斗類的題型，一般提綱都會要求考生舉出事例，即使提綱沒有要求，考生最好也能夠寫出一兩個事例，以增強文章的說服力。一般來說，在這種情況下，舉殘疾人、先進人物等的例子會比較切題，有效地加強文章的力度。思路拓展：（見下題）范文：

The picture presents a young runner who just finishes a long run and arrives at the finish line, sweating and smiling.While he stand at the end, a sign stating “beginning” lies not far away from his position, indicating that “an end means a new beginning”.It is true that when a runner reaches the end of one race, he needs to realize that his immediate task is how to achieve the next goal, instead of indulging the past glory and accomplishment.The identical truth applies to every individual, organization, and nation, that setting new goals continuously is the source of advancement.The deaf and mute American girl Helen Keller is a typical example of our case, as she had spent her whole life struggling and striving for one goal after another.It is not surprising that she finally turned out to be an excellent writer.Equally, businesses and industries should keep setting new tasks in order to preserve their competitiveness.Microsoft, for instance, never ceases creating new products the company launched Vista, Office 2007 and Exchange Server recently though it is already being such a huge conglomerate.In short, it is non-stop efforts that lead to progress.譯文：

該圖展示了一個運動員剛完成一場賽跑、達到終點，他滿頭大汗但是卻非常滿意地微笑著。在他所站的終點標志附近，該圖標出了“起點”的標志，說明了“終點是新的起點”。

確實，當一個運動員跑到終點的時候，他必須馬上意識到他的下一個任務是達到新的目標，而不是沉湎于過去的榮耀和成就。同樣的道理也適用于每一個個人、組織、以及國家，即不斷地設立新的目標才能不斷地前進。

聾啞的美國女孩海倫.凱勒是這方面的一個典型例子，因為她一生都在為一個接一個的目標而努力和奮斗。因此，她最后變成了一個優秀的作家并不令人驚訝。同樣的，工商界如果想要保持它們的競爭力，就要不斷地為自己設立新任務。例如，微軟公司作為如此大型的一個集團，也從來沒有停止創造新產品的腳步，該公司在最近發布了Vista, Office 2007 和Exchange Server三大產品。總的來說，永不停止的努力才能引領進步和發展。閃光詞匯及詞組：

sweating and smiling: 這里我們要介紹英語中的一種特殊的修辭方法，叫做alliteration，即“頭韻”。一般在漢語以及英語中我們講究壓尾韻，而英語中經常可以把一些開頭的輔音相同的單詞組合在一起，讀起來也非常瑯瑯上口。考生如果能在平時有意識地收集這些頭韻組合，在考試中用上一兩個，會大大為文章添彩。類似的短語還有我們在“經典應用文背誦”部分中提到的safe and sound。“He has more brawn than brain”，他四肢發達頭腦簡單。achieve: v.達到，完成 glory: n.榮耀，光榮 accomplishment: n.成就 identical: adj.同一的，同樣的 advancement: n.前進，進步 turn out to be: 變成 conglomerate: n.大集團 launch: v.發行，投放市場 non-stop: adj.不停的 萬能句型：

The picture presents? It is true that?

?is a typical example of our case ? it is not surprising that? ? Equally? In short?（2）2007年真題。

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should: 1)describe the drawing briefly, 2)explain its intended meaning, and then 3)support your view with an example/examples.You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.真題分析：

在這道最新的考研題目中，出題漫畫較往年顯得更加生動有趣，寓意也十分明顯。在一位球員即將進球的瞬間，球員和守門員都顯得猶豫不決。球員認為守門員長得極其高大從而擋住了球門，使他的攻擊幾乎變成了“mission impossible”（不可能完成的任務）。同時，守門員卻覺得自己太渺小而球門太大，守門的任務十分艱巨，同樣也是“mission impossible”。對于有中文文化背景的學生來說，很容易就可以聯想到《孫子兵法》中說的“知己知彼，百戰不殆”，也就是說，只有充分了解自己和對手的所有優缺點，我們才能夠有足夠的信心取得最終的勝利。從這一點上我們可以繼續引申，說明無論是個人、組織甚至對于國家來說，無論遇到什么情況，都要正確的評估自己以及具體事例的特點，從而充滿信心地去取得應該取得的成就。思路拓展：

關于人生價值類的題目在短短幾年時間內竟然考了兩次，這必須引起我們的高度重視。出題者的思路也是可以理解的，正在參加考研的大學生們都風華正茂，處于人生揚帆的關鍵時刻。這個時候大學生們需要樹立正確的世界觀、人生觀和價值觀，從而有助于他們在將來的人生道路上取得成功。

人生價值的內容包羅萬象，有對成功的理解、對生活的態度、對知識和學習的定位等等，以及如何面對困境和挫折、如何正確認識金錢和人生的關系等等。這一類話題并不總是熱點話題，但又和許多領域緊密相連，特別是和教育領域的相關話題有關。同時，我們在許多社會現象中也可以發現人們不同的人生價值，媒體上也經常組織相關的大討論，考生應予以密切關注。范文：

This picture shows a critical moment that can occur in any soccer game—a players is about to kick the ball while the keeper is fully ready for the attack.Interestingly, the player and the keeper are experiencing quite opposite psychological processes: the player thinks the task is extremely difficult as the goal is quite small compared with the huge keeper, while the latter fears that the goal is too enormous for him to protect.It is conspicuously indicated that in order to gain confidence and achieve success, we not only need to attain a thorough understanding of ourown merits and disadvantages of ourselves, but also those aspects of our opponents.Both the player and the keeper merely focus on their own faults and their counterparts’ advantages, leading to their hesitation at the key time.In a recent interview of hurdler Liu Xiang, he revealed that his success is partly owed to his training team’s study of his strong competitors around the world, so that he can learn from the others and is more confident when facing any new race.Just as the ancient Chinese philosophical book The Art of War concludes, if you know yourself and your enemy, you’ll never lose a battle.譯文：

該圖展示的是一場足球比賽中的關鍵時刻——一個球員正準備要進球，而守門員正全力準備回擊這次進攻。有趣的是，球員和守門員正在經歷相反的心理歷程：球員認為這項任務非常艱巨，因為球門如此之小而守門員長得高達威猛；守門員卻害怕球門太大而他自己太渺小，很難保護球門。

這幅圖告訴我們，為了取得信心、達到勝利，我們不僅要對自己的優缺點有充分的了解，而且還要對對手的優缺點有充分了解。但是，圖中的球員和守門員只想到了自己的缺點和對手的優點，因此在關鍵時刻躊躇不前。

在對著名中國運動員劉翔的一個最近的采訪中，他透露了自己的成功部分歸功于他的訓練隊詳細研究了他在世界各國的對手們的特點，因此他可以學習他人的優點，于是面對比賽的時候更有信心。就像中國古代著名的兵書《孫子兵法》總結的那樣，知己知彼，百戰不殆。閃光詞匯及詞組： be about to: 將要, 正打算 psychological: adj.心理上的 enormous: adj.巨大的，龐大的 attain: v.獲得，達到 merely: adv.僅僅

counterpart: n.相對物或人 hesitation: n.猶豫，躊躇 glorious: adj.光榮的 race: n.賽跑

The Art of War: 《孫子兵法》 萬能句型：

This picture shows a ? moment that can occur in It is conspicuously indicated?

Just as the ancient Chinese philosophical book The Art of War concludes, if you know yourself and your enemy, you’ll never lose a battle.

第五篇：考研英語作文高分必備

考研英語作文高分必備

1． 開頭超強公式一：名人名言

有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語名言？”，很好辦：編！

原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢！對吧？

經典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（適用于已記住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（適用于自編名言）

更多經典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that? 2． 開頭超強公式二：數字統計

原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。

原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的，其實都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造：

Honesty：根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike：根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。

Youth：根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，在某個大學，學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?：根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that ? 結尾超強公式

1． 結尾超強公式一：如此結論

說完了，畢竟要歸納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經歷，領導長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領導說結束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that?, Therefore, we can find that? 2． 結尾超強公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典，因為考官本來經常考這個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recoMMend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫作的“七項基本原則”

一、長短句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主題句原則

國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原則

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點? 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點的情況）

10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚！

四、短語優先原則

寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其

一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發現亮點—精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其

二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎么辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達：I am looking forward to it.這樣字數明顯增加，表達也更準確。

五、多實少虛原則

原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候，不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如：

走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應該說：sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應該說：dance out of the room

老人走出房間應該說：stagger out of the room

所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！

六、多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關系或者并列關系。比如說：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個超級句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）轉折（拐彎抹角）

批評某人缺點的時候，我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點，然后轉入正題，再說缺點，這種方式雖然陰險了點，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時候，只要在要點之前先來點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然后我主動搭訕，然后我們去咖啡廳，然后我們認識了，然后我們成為了朋友?可見，講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關系！

The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。

舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分：

When to go, Why he goes away?

5）附加（多此一舉）

如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講某個人的時候，她會插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢恢宏）

要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑戰極限原則

既然是挑戰極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在學生的文章中，很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！文章主體段落三大殺手锏

一、舉實例

思維短路，舉實例！提出一個觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：

To take ? as an example, One example is?, Another example is?, for example

二、做比較

方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的；

世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會發現二者的相同點（through comparison）和不同點（through contrast）。下面是一些短語：

相似的比較：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比較：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with ?, ?

三、換言之

沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。

實際就是重復重復再重復！下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

領航名師墨東博：考研英語作文模板--國有企業

As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces.Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that the intact bowl, as a symbol of soly-invested companies , overwhelms the broken bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce companies, profoundly indicates that it is time that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO when facing soly-invested companies abroad.To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued,it is car industry that is meant.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out.For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly ?invested companies were sweeping into domestic market.For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above.Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture.It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned companies.On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process.On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform.Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.一、要求：考生根據所給情景寫出一篇約100詞（標點符號不計算在內）的應用性短文，包括私人和公務信函、備忘錄、摘要、報告等。考生在答題卡2上作答。滿分10分。

注意事項：

1）格式：稱呼，結尾，署名

2）簡明扼要，清楚明確。

3）遵照要求，內容齊全。

4）言語得體，真心誠意。

二、備忘錄

備忘錄是一種錄以備忘的公文。在公文函件中，它的等級是比較低的，主要用來提醒、督促對方，或就某個問題提出自己的意見或看法。在業務上，它一般用來補充正式文件的不足。它的內容可以分為以下幾項：

書端（Heading）

收文人的姓名、頭銜、地址（Addressee's Name, Title, Address）

稱呼(Salutation)

事因(Subject)

正文（Body）

結束語（Complimentary Close）

署名（Signature）

寫作注意事項

1、書端部分包括發文機關的名稱、地址、發文日期，有的還包括電報掛號、電傳號、電話號碼等。許多機關有自己特制的信箋，在寫書端時，其格式和標點符號的使用與一般信件的相同。

2、稱呼從左邊頂格寫起，對一般機關、團體的負責人一般用 Dear Sir，對政府官員可用Sir。

3、正文、結束語和署名等項與一般信件的格式相同。“事因”一項目前采用得較少。

范文

Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory.MEMO

August 16, 2005

To: The leader of student service department

From: Li Ming

Subject: Telephone

Dear Sir，I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each dormitory.As a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus.We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication.I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.Regards.Yours,Li Ming

三、摘要

文章摘要是對所寫文章主要內容的精煉概括。美國人稱摘要為“Abstract”，而英國人則喜歡稱其為“Summary”。

通常國際刊物要求所要刊登的文章字數，包括摘要部分不超過1萬字。而對文章摘要部分的字數要求則更少。因此寫摘要時，應用最為簡練的語言來表達論文之精華。論文摘要的重點應放在所研究的成果和結論上。

國際會議要求的論文摘要的字數不等，一般為200字-500字。而國際刊物要求所刊登的論文摘要的字數通常是100字-200字。摘要的位置一般放在一篇文章的最前面，內容上涵蓋全文，并直接點明全旨。語言上要求盡量簡煉。摘要通常多采用第三人稱撰寫。

科學書籍、論文和學術報告一般都附有內容摘要，這樣可以節省讀者的時間，使他們不必讀完整個文章就能夠了解它的主要內容。書籍摘要，一般放在封二或封三；論文和學術報告的摘要，一般放在正文前面。摘要應做到簡明扼要，切題，能獨立成文，使讀者能準確地了解書籍的要義。寫摘要時，最好用第三人稱的完整的陳述句，文長一般不超過200個詞。

英文摘要分類

摘要分陳述性的（Descriptive）和資料性的（Informational）兩類。陳述性摘要只陳述書籍或文章的主題，不介紹內容。資料性的摘要除了介紹主題外，還應介紹文章的要點和各個要點的主要內容。它可以包括三個組成部分：

①點明主題，解析文章或書籍的目的或意圖；

②介紹主要內容，使讀者迅速了解文章或書籍的概貌；

③提出結論或建議，以供讀者參考。

英文摘要常見句型

1）This paper deals with...2）This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3）This eassy presents knowledge that...4）This thesis discusses...5）This thesis analyzes...6）This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8）This article gives an overview of...9）This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10）This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents up to date information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This eassy represents the preceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...摘要題型寫作要點：

① 動筆之前，考生一定要認真仔細地閱讀所給原文，弄懂原文大意，掌握原文要點。

② 摘要的長度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一，考試時應遵守規定的字數限制。

③ 在做摘要時考生切忌照搬原文。

④ 摘要應與原文的觀點保持一致，并且仍按原文的邏輯順序排列。

⑤ 重點反映主要觀點，刪除細節。

⑥ 簡化從句，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。

⑦ 檢查與修改時，考生應重點檢查是否遺漏了原文的要點或包含了細節。

摘要題型寫作實例

① 試題題目

Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one’s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.② 原文要點：

1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors

2.avoid talking about death

③ 參考摘要：

People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)

開頭與結尾用語

開頭：Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear sir or Madam, Dear President, Dear Sales Manager, Dear Dean, Dear Professor, To whom it may concern, Dear Mr.Smith，結尾：Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours, Yours sincerely, Best regards, Best wishes, lovingly yours, sincerely yours，l 正文第一句

朋友：Hi!How are you?

Hello!I hope everything is fine.Hi!How is everything going?

如不認識：I was a guest at your hotel from June 25 to 28.I am a student at your college, enrolled in the computer course.致謝：Thank you for your invitation to the international medical conference on October 11.Thank you for your letter dated October 11.解釋寫信原因：I am writing to advise you for the loss of my credit card.I’d like to inquire about course details.I am writing to complain about/of the poor service at your restaurant.l 結尾段

發出請求：I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Please reply to us at your earliest convenience.表達歉意：once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies once again.提出投訴：I expect to hear from you very soon.Please give this matter your immediate attention.常用信件寫作介紹

1． 投訴信

開頭：自我介紹，交代投訴內容，表明本信的目的和要求

正文：說明情況，講清利害，分析利弊。告訴對方你因此受到的傷害或不便，提出解決問題的建議，表明希望如何處理。

結尾：表達希望問題得到迅速恰當解決的強烈愿望。希望盡快得到滿意的答復。

常用句型：

I am writing to you to complain about….I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at…

I beg to call your attention to the fact that…

I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred…, calling for some remedial action.I very much regret to have to inform you that…

I am totally/completely disappointed/upset to find…

I find it awful/quite distressing that…

My experience in…on…(date)shocked me.I can hardly put up with it.There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, there is….For another, …..I can hardly stand/bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.To improve the situation/solve the above problem, it is advisable for you to take the following measures:…

I look forward to a day when we could really enjoy a more efficient service.I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumer’s Association.I request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.應注意：

1）禮貌用詞，不能過激。

2）提出希望/要求，句型要多樣化。

3）反映問題集中，不要聯想其他。

Ex.1

Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem.2． 咨詢信、請求信、說明信

開頭：簡要告知身份，表明寫信原因或請求

正文：詳細闡明詢問、請求的具體內容、希望獲得的信息。說明信應寫明原因、實情及希望對方做些什么。強調所需信息/幫助的重要性。（按要求）

結尾：表達謝意，希望得到對方回復、幫助或合作。

常用句型：

I would like to inquire about some information concerning/regarding….I am writing in the hope that you can…

I am writing because I would like to…

Needless to say, your approval of my request will be beneficial not only to myself but to the company.Could you tell me what I have to do to…

It is sincerely requested that you…

My first question is that …

Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.If additional information is required, please advise me at your early convenience.Should I send you copies of my qualification in advance?

I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive to my final decision.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.應注意：

1）請求內容/信息一定要詳盡，具體。

2）語氣要客氣，委婉。

3）語言直接，具體，簡明。

Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to

1)describe the book you want to borrow，2)specify by when the book will be returned, and

3)express your gratitude.3． 道歉信。

開頭：簡單交代對何事進行道歉。

正文：解釋事情發生的原因，消除誤會或矛盾。

結尾：再次表示遺憾何歉意，表明愿意補救的愿望，提出建議或安排。

常用句型：

I must apologize to you for…

I am very sorry that..I regret to inform you that I will not be able to…

I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.I sincerely hope you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.I believe you can understand that I have not intended to hurt you.I owe you an apology.It is my fault.I am to blame for this unpleasant thing.Please pardon/excuse/forgive me.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.I will try my utmost not to make such a stupid mistake again.I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.I hope you will kindly forgive my lapse of attention.I am so sorry to have put you to/into so much trouble.應注意：

1）事情原委要解釋清楚。

2）說明情況與理由，實事求是，簡明扼要。

3）態度誠懇。

4）用詞委婉，語氣溫和，得體。

Ex.You have invited a friend over to have dinner with you one night, but just before the dinner you received an urgent phone call from your office and you had to leave immediately.Write a letter of apology to your friend.4． 感謝信

開頭：表達謝意，提及受到的幫助。

正文：回憶該幫助，高度評價/贊揚對方，表達當時的心情感受。

結尾：再次表達謝意，提出回報希望。

常用句型：

I am grateful/thankful to you for…

I am much obliged to you for your help.I shall always appreciate the assistance you have given me.I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.It was most thoughtful and generous of you to send me such a beautiful and fancy gift.Thoughtful considerate considerable

It’s very kind of you to help us.I hope you can know how much I appreciate your hospitality and your many kindnesses to me.Hostility

But for your help, I would not..If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that..Thanks from the bottom of my heart for…

With thanks from every one of us and best wishes to you.Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.應注意：

1）開頭要直截了當。

2）表明誠意，避免空洞。

3）態度熱情

Ex.You got sick just a week before the final examinations and were sent to a hospital.One nurse treated you very well and you recovered soon.Write a letter of appreciation to the nurse(Miss Smith).Dear Miss Smith，I was just at your hospital when I got sick before the final examinations.First, I thanks for you could treat me very well and let me recovered soon.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I’m afraid that I couldn’t pass the exam.Thank you for the bottom of my heart for your help and service.Dear Miss Smith，I hope you can know how much I appreciate your kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.I got sick just a week before the final examination.I was so worried that I couldn’t take part in the examination.It was just you that encouraged me to face the illness bravely.So I recovered soon, and I got good results in my final examination.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid I can’t have recovered so soon and achieved such good results.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you.Sincerely yours，Dear Miss Smith，I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that I would be still in hospital now.I got sick just a week before the exam.You treated me well and I recovered soon.Now I pass the exam.But for your kindness help, I would not have passed the exam.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.Yours sincerely，Dear Miss Smith，I was a patient of yours one week ago, and I write the letter to you to show my appreciation for your help.It was near the final exam then, and without your hospitable and generous help, I couldn’t have recovered so soon, let alone to get a high mark on the exam.I shall always appreciate the help you’d offered me and I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when opportunity arises.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.Best wishes，Sincerely yours，邀請信

開頭：開門見山，說明目的。

正文：邀請內容（活動性質，地點，時間，日期），有關要求與希望。

結尾：重申對方參加的重要性，希望盡快回復。

常用句型：

I should be much pleased if you would come to our party on Friday the 15th at 6.I am pleased to invite you to participate in …to be held from…to….in..I feel it a great honor if you could..It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…

We would be greatly honored if you could come…

I am writing to invite you to…

I am particularly anxious to have you join us.It’s a long time since I have had the pleasure of seeing you and I do hope you can come.We hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.I will cover all the expenses involved.應注意：

1）用詞清晰，簡明。

2）邀請內容清楚。

5． 求職信

開頭：說明信息來源，表明寫信目的 正文：提供個人資料，詢問相關問題。

結尾：表達愿望，提供聯系方式，表示感謝。

常用句型：

I have read your advertisement in…for a(position/post), and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position.I wish to apply for the post mentioned in your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper.I wish to apply for a position with your company.I myself like the job very much and I think my personality is well suited to working as a ….Honest, trust-worthy, reliable, enthusiastic, diligent, bright, smart, careful, patient, responsible, efficient, productive, versatile, open-minded, optimistic，I am confident that my experience and ability will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirement of your position.Born in…in.., I graduated from….University majoring in …..I have been working in…since my graduation, and I have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was ….And currently I am working for…

I intend to give up my present post in order to get a more challenging opportunity.With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than 4,000.I shall be very much obliged if you will offer me an opportunity for an interview.I am looking forward with great interest to hearing from you soon regarding my application.應注意：

1）適當展示自己（經歷，才能）

2）不要言他

3）語言明確清楚，流露自信。

6． 推薦信

開頭：開門見山，表明關系。

正文：稱贊被推薦人（舉例說明），客觀介紹其相關能力，突出表現、性格與人品

結尾：作出保證，提出希望，表示感謝。

常用句型：

I am very glad to recommend you a former student of mine, Mr./Miss… to be a candidate for…

I am writing to recommend…

I have great pleasure to provide a letter for recommendation for Mr./Miss…

With reference to your advertised position, I have the pleasure to say that he is the just person you are looking for.He has proved to be industrious, responsible and skillful in carrying out his assignment.Besides being thoroughly honest and reliable he showed an unusual quickness and ability in…

I hope the above information will help you to know…

If you need any further information about his qualification, please do not hesitate to contact me.If further information about him/her is required, please do not hesitate to let me know/contact me

In view of his/her previous achievements in…, I am firmly convinced that Mr./Miss.., will make a successful graduate student/staff member.I would be most grateful if you would consider my recommendation and kindly offer him a…

應注意：

1）開門見山，簡明扼要。

2）舉例說明，客觀敘述。

7． 表揚信

開頭：身份簡介，提及感謝的人，事。

正文：敘述經過，詳細介紹值得表揚之處，表達感受

結尾：提出祝愿與希望

常用句型：

I am writing to tell you how highly I think of…

I am writing because I appreciate very much what Mr./Miss…from your company has done.I am greatly impressed by….What he has done shows that…

He deserves praise for what he has done.I am greatly inspired by…

It is your good service as well as excellent food that help you set up a world reputation.For this reason, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks and hope that your company will have a brighter future.應注意：

1）敘述經過，明確具體。

2）上升到一個高度。

3）語言誠懇。

8． 祝賀信

開頭：開門見山，說明消息來源

正文：回憶過去，表明感受，展望未來，提出建議。

結尾：表達祝愿

常用句型：

What exciting/thrilling news!

It’s good/sensational news.I was delighted/thrilled to hear/to receive the news that ….It’s the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.I congratulate you on/upon your success.Congratulations and all good/best wishes.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on…

Permit me to congratulate you…

We want you to know how happy we were when…

It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…

Wish you all the happiness in the world.I hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life/career.All the luck in the world to you!

Best of luck to you!

范文：

Ex.1

Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem

Dear manager，I was a guest/customer at your restaurant last Saturday.I wish to refer you to the incident that happened that day, calling for your immediate attention to the matter.It shocked me when I found a fly in a dish in the middle of our meal.I could hardly bear it.I felt sick.If it happens again, I am convinced that no one will come to eat here any more.It is advisable for you to tidy up/ clean up your kitchen as soon as possible.Please give me your immediate attention to this matter.Sincerely yours，***

Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to

1）describe the book you want to borrow，2）specify by when the book will be returned, and

3）express your gratitude.Dear Jones，I am writing to ask for your help in lending me a book.Recently I’ve been busy preparing my graduate thesis, and therefore have been reading and researching numerous books and references.One of the books that my advisor believes to be particularly relevant to my thesis is called The Legal System in Society.Unfortunately I have been unable to find it at the library or in any bookstores.Do you happen to have this book? If so, may I borrow it? I promise to take good care of it and will return it to you within three days.Thank you very much.I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

練習題：

Ex.1

You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has friends visiting.They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You should prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Ex.2

Your classmate and close friend, Jack, has just passed the graduate entrance examination and is going to study at a famous university in another city.Write a letter of congratulation to him.Ex.3

You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in UK.You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop in the family.Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality.Describe the computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you.Ex.4

You are a college student who applies for a part-time job in a shop during the summer vacation.Write a letter to the shop owner explaining why you are a suitable person for the job.Remember to ask him or her about the rate of payment.Ex.5

You are a college student who applies to a university for an MA degree program of the major “Life Science”.Introduce yourself and state out the reasons.Ask them to send the necessary information concerning the course.1.審題要認真

短文的標題是對全文的高度概括。通過認真審題來確定標題的核心詞或者說關鍵詞,依此來整理思路。因此,考生看到試題后絕對不能提筆就寫,而是應該認真審題,看清題目的要求和提示,充分利用題目所提供的信息、關鍵詞所圈定的范圍,在確立主題后再動筆。

如 從標題 The Misery of Shyness 中得知,考生不但要解釋說明 Shyness ,更重要的是要突出由 Shyness 帶來的Misery。至此,短文要重點闡述帶來了什么Misery。

2.文體要統一

正式文體的文章不宜用非正式的語句。有些考生在一篇很正式的議論文中用以下的句子做結語 OK, this is what I want to say.或是That’s my opinion.Do you agree with me？等等,使文章顯得不倫不類。

3.主題要突出

標題如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution ,以下段落的闡述顯得有些贅述 1 Part of this problem is the world’s exploding population.2 A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.3 Besides, land and water pollution has also increased.4 Pollution is, in fact, threatening our health, our happiness, and our civilization.尤其是第三句,還有點跑題。

4.文字要連貫

一篇好文章要注重連貫性。連貫性主要體現在句子與句子、段落與段落的銜接上,這種銜接要通過過渡詞語來實現,以達到文章通順,語言流暢。例如 It is clear that television news can vividly bring into us dramatic events of importance, such as wars, games and soon, but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation.On the contrary, print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit, though it can not compete with television visually.Besides, television is essentially a passive medium.Such as, but, because of, on the contrary, though, besides 這些過渡詞把句子從語義上連接起來,形成一個有機的整體,讀起來猶如行云流水,自然酣暢。

5.內容要一致

要刪除多余的詞語,否則, 一是破壞了文章的一致性, 二是有湊字數之嫌。如 Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroyus.2 They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease and deformity in later generation.3 Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power.4 And any failure from a nuclear plant may cause enormous damage to the affected area5 What’s more, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes.本段中的第三句與主題不符, 也與第二和第四句不連貫, 應刪除。

6.表達方式要多樣化

詞、句型使用的多樣化不僅給文章增加了色彩和可讀性,與此同時也可反映考生的詞匯量和語言掌握的程度等。為避免文章平淡、呆板, 可使用不同的句式 強調句、倒裝句、否定句等等。長短句使用合理相間,用短句表達有力的結論,用長句體現嚴密的邏輯關系。考生在舉例說明的段落中尤其要注意詞語的多樣性。

7.考點要覆蓋全

無論是什么形式的寫作都有寫作內容上的要求,一般為三個方面。考生在動筆前一定要看清寫作內容上的要求,以確保文章覆蓋所有考點。

8.語言要流暢

評分標準已清楚地告訴考生 文章要語言流暢、字句通順、表達準確, 這是得高分的基礎。

Last year the public spent two hundred million pounds on pet food alone, to say nothing of animal care bills and furniture.1 It is difficult not to feel resentful about this when one considers what the same amount could do for victims of starvation and poverty,2 and it is not unusual for me to get hot under the collar when I read about another old person who has left all his ／her money to a dog or cat home.這兩句在表達意義上用詞十分到位,隨著兩個 when 引導的狀語從句內容的遞進,主句對表現氣憤程度的加強通過用詞的不同而表達得淋漓盡致；排比結構的運用使觀點更加明確 在1 中 It is difficult not 和 to feel resentful about this 與2 中的 it is not unusual 和 to get hot under the collar 詞語表達極其準確。這需要考生在平時大量閱讀文章時多注意積累好的語言表達。

9.首尾要呼應

上述幾項被閱卷者稱為閃光點 ,即加分的因素。除此而外, 更重要的一點是要注意文章的完整性,即首尾要呼應。

10.檢查要到位

這個重要環節往往被考生忽略不計,而因為少了這個環節所造成的后果真可謂是功虧一簣。在閱卷過程中,時不時會發現 ourself、thinked、the person who are… ,而這些會釀成不良后果的錯誤完全可在一兩分鐘的時間內檢查、修改完成。所以, 在寫完短文后, 要耐心地再讀一遍。