第一篇:2014考研英語(yǔ):應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之道歉信
2014考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作:應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之道歉信
應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作不需要華麗的辭藻和多變的句式,只需要能夠用簡(jiǎn)潔概括的語(yǔ)言將事情敘述清楚就能夠取得不錯(cuò)的成績(jī)。應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作作為考研英語(yǔ)中性?xún)r(jià)比比較高的題目,考生必須重視對(duì)其復(fù)習(xí)。應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作可以充分借鑒模板,以達(dá)到更好的復(fù)習(xí)效果。下面,就為考生介紹一下道歉信的基本寫(xiě)作方法。
道歉信是寫(xiě)信人對(duì)未盡之事向收信人表示歉意,寫(xiě)作的基本要求是:解釋的理由要真實(shí)而詳細(xì),態(tài)度要誠(chéng)懇、語(yǔ)言要誠(chéng)摯,從而使收信人理解,并達(dá)到最終諒解。(詳細(xì)見(jiàn)寫(xiě)作160篇137頁(yè))
道歉信一般寫(xiě)作步驟如下: 1)表達(dá)歉意的事由;2)解釋原因,并提出可行的補(bǔ)救措施;3)再次致歉,企求對(duì)方的諒解。道歉信的寫(xiě)作要理由充分,態(tài)度誠(chéng)懇,感情真摯,言語(yǔ)謙遜。道歉信常用套語(yǔ)有:
1表達(dá)歉意:There's no excuse for … I forgot to ….I am indeed very sorry for …, but believe I had no intention to…
Here is my deepest apology for...Please forgive me for …
2解釋苦衷:The fact is that I had …/ Unfortunately I … / I had a small accident …/ I have some urgent business to deal with My behavior yesterday was inexcusable, and I must tell you how …
3請(qǐng)求原諒提出補(bǔ)救方法:I want you to know how badly feel about… and to assure you that it will not happen again.I realize that particular… is irreplaceable, but I hope you will use the enclosed check to purchase a similar one.I hope this situation can be mended to everyone's satisfaction.I can only hope you will forgive … on my part.范例
Directions:
You have received a complaint letter from your customer for the mix-up of order #: 26429782.Write a letter to him to 1)express your apology 2)explain the reason 3)provide the solution and offer the compensation.Dear Mr.Bicman:
I apologize for the mix-up of order #: 26429782.We have just implemented a new packaging system that still has a few bugs to be worked out, but we did fix your order and sent it out this morning.For your trouble, we have enclosed a $25 gift certificate which can be used at any of our stores.Once again I would like to apologize for the mix-up in your order and any inconveniences this may have caused you.最后,希望考生都能夠掌握道歉信的寫(xiě)作方法,進(jìn)入理想的學(xué)府。祝大家考研成功!
第二篇:考研英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文之道歉信寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)
考研英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文之道歉信寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) http://.cn2009年07月09日 09:58海天教育
A Letter of Apology(道歉信)是因?yàn)樽约旱倪^(guò)失或疏忽,給別人帶來(lái)了麻煩或損失,發(fā)覺(jué)后為了給對(duì)方賠禮道歉而寫(xiě)的信函。道歉信應(yīng)該反應(yīng)出自己具體的過(guò)失或疏忽,道歉的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)練誠(chéng)懇,并且希望收信人能夠原諒自己的過(guò)失或疏忽。
常用句型:
1.I cannot tell you how sorry I am。
2.I just do not know what to say。
3.It was my fault。
4.Please forgive my forgetfulness / negligence。
5.I am afraid I have brought you too much trouble。
6.It was really quite unintentional。
7.I did not mean to hurt your feelings。
8.I do beg your pardon for the mess I have made。
9.I must make an apology for(losing my temper)。
10.Please accept my sincere apologies for?
范文:
Directions:
You have made an appointment with Prof.Wang, but failed to keep it.Write a letter to your teacher to
1)apologize for your failure to keep the appointment,2)explain your reason to your teacher, and
3)express your wish to make another appointment。
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.You do not need to write the address。
Jan.30th, 2010
Dear Prof.Wang,First of all, please allow me to express my deep sorry for not being able to keep our appointment.I do know that this is very impolite and must have caused you much trouble。
I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile.However I do not want you to misunderstand me.On my
way to your office, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus.I stopped a taxi and sent her into a nearby hospital.I stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment。
I am aware that our appointment is of importance.I do hope that you would be kindenough to spare your valuable time to meet me。
I am looking forward to hearing from you。
Sincerely yours,Li Ming
(136 words)
第三篇:高三英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之道歉信
道歉信
道歉信是因?yàn)樽约旱倪^(guò)失或疏忽,給別人帶來(lái)了麻煩或損失,發(fā)覺(jué)后為了給對(duì)方賠禮道歉而寫(xiě)的信件。
道歉信應(yīng)該反映出自己具體的過(guò)失或疏忽,語(yǔ)言應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)練誠(chéng)懇,并且希望收信人能夠原諒自己的過(guò)失或疏忽。
道歉信通常在主段首句立即表示歉意,并解釋原因。在信結(jié)束前,可根據(jù)情況再次表達(dá)歉意。寫(xiě)作模板 Dear ____, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to ____.The reason is that ____.I am sorry that I cannot finish ____ in time, but is it possible that I make up the loss by ____? If so, I will put everything else aside to ____.I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours, Lihua
Dear ____, Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to ____.It is mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by ____ which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your ____.Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your ____.I sincerely hope that you will enjoy a good time.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? I hope to see you soon.I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.Yours, Lihua
必備詞語(yǔ)
短語(yǔ);
apologize v.道歉
forgive v.原諒
inconvenience n.不便
appointment n.約定
much to one’s regret 非常遺憾
apologize to sb.for sth./ make an apology to sb.for sth.因某事向某人道歉 say sorry to 向……說(shuō)對(duì)不起
accept my apology 接受我的道歉 forgive sb.for sth.為某事原諒某人
make up for 彌補(bǔ);賠償 have no intention to do sth.并非故意做某事 cause you much trouble 給你帶來(lái)許多麻煩 accept sb.’s sincere apology 接受某人真誠(chéng)的道歉 miss the opportunity 錯(cuò)過(guò)機(jī)會(huì) fix another time for 安排另外一個(gè)時(shí)間 consider my situation 考慮我的情況
必備句型 【閃亮篇首句】
1.I am writing to apologize for … / I am writing to say sorry for … 我寫(xiě)這封信是因?yàn)椤蚰愕狼浮?.I would like to give you my apology for … 對(duì)于……我向你道歉。
3.I express my regret at being unable to do … 對(duì)于未能做……,我表示遺憾。4.Much to my regret that I am unable to … 讓我感到極為遺憾的是自己不能……
5.I owe you an apology for the damage I have done to the flat.我為損壞房子這件事而向您道歉。
6.I am indeed very sorry for what I said / did, but believe I had no intention to … 對(duì)于我說(shuō)的/做的事,我確實(shí)感到很抱歉。但請(qǐng)相信,我并非故意要…… 7.I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time.十分抱歉我不能及時(shí)回復(fù)您的郵件。
8.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.我十分抱歉沒(méi)有及時(shí)回信。
9.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.錯(cuò)過(guò)了在一起的機(jī)會(huì),我感到很遺憾?!境霾手衅洹?/p>
1.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.請(qǐng)?jiān)徫艺f(shuō)話(huà)欠妥。
2.Please accept my apologies for my oversight.請(qǐng)?jiān)徫业氖韬觥?/p>
3.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.為此我感到非常內(nèi)疚,所以想告訴你實(shí)情。
4.I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally.我真心希望你能理解,我并非有意冒犯。5.And so I missed the appointed time.因此我錯(cuò)過(guò)了約定的時(shí)間。
6.I’m awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.對(duì)突然的改變我感到十分抱歉,對(duì)錯(cuò)過(guò)這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)感到很可惜。7.Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...無(wú)論如何,我真心希望我們可以再找一個(gè)時(shí)間…… 【精彩篇尾句】
1.I will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again in the future.我將接近全力避免將來(lái)再發(fā)生同樣的事故。2.I will try to make up for my fault.我將盡力彌補(bǔ)我的過(guò)錯(cuò)。
3.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.真誠(chéng)希望你能理解我的處境,并接受我的道歉。4.I hope that you will understand and forgive me.我希望您可以理解并原諒我。5.I shall be obliged if you … 如果您能……,我將非常感激。
6.I hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.我希望對(duì)此事的處理能滿(mǎn)足您的愿望。7.Please allow me to say sorry again.請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再次表示歉意。
8.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.我再次為我的錯(cuò)誤真誠(chéng)地道歉。
9.Once again, please accept my sincere apology.請(qǐng)?jiān)俅谓邮芪艺嬲\(chéng)的道歉。
高考真題 2016年全國(guó)Ⅲ卷
【真題再現(xiàn)】
假定你是李華,與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店,因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.說(shuō)明原因;
3.另約時(shí)間。【試題分析】
題目要求寫(xiě)一封道歉信,因不能如約一起去書(shū)向Bob道歉,使用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作?!镜梅忠c(diǎn)】
題目是常規(guī)的書(shū)信作文,要求寫(xiě)一封道歉信,是應(yīng)用文的一種。寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出,表達(dá)歉意的同時(shí),還要與對(duì)方另約時(shí)間。因此,不僅僅是一封道歉信。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意涵蓋所有要點(diǎn),還要兼顧上下文的連貫性?!緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not, let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua
Dear Bob, How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday.Unfortunately, I can’t make it.So, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.How I wish I could go with you!However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English.As a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to you.How about going to the bookshop this Sunday? Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the competition with you.Please.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua 2013山東卷 【真題再現(xiàn)】
假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件,詢(xún)問(wèn)你暑假里的打算,但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件:
1.未及時(shí)回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)。【經(jīng)典套路】
第一段:?jiǎn)柡?寫(xiě)信背景+寫(xiě)信目的 第二段:“道歉”部分(相當(dāng)于“寫(xiě)信背景”)第三段:“假期安排”部分 第四段:補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明+客套話(huà) 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?(問(wèn)候)You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(寫(xiě)信背景)I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(寫(xiě)信目的)How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me.As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study.I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段為道歉信常見(jiàn)套路)By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主題句)First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1)Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2)Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)These are my plan for the summer vacation.What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套話(huà)結(jié)尾)Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua
【滿(mǎn)分佳作】 Dear Tom, ①I(mǎi)’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.②I was so occupied with the final exams.As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant.③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest.Finally, I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer.⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them.Do you have anything for the summer? Please write to me and let me know.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【滿(mǎn)分賞析】
①先用I’m terribly sorry…對(duì)未能及時(shí)回信道歉,terribly加強(qiáng)了道歉的語(yǔ)氣。②接著簡(jiǎn)單講明原因;be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙于某事/做某事)的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)了作者的語(yǔ)言功底,不是用簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯busy,可給評(píng)卷老師留下好印象。
③Not only…but also… 連接并列句,屬于本書(shū)在“寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)”部分訓(xùn)練的句型。注意:not only在句首,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用倒裝形式;gain some social experience的運(yùn)用也體現(xiàn)了作者平時(shí)注意積累語(yǔ)言素材。
④運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾地點(diǎn),使句式避免簡(jiǎn)單化;places of interest(名勝古跡)也運(yùn)用得當(dāng)??忌枳⒁夥e累,否則只能生造出中式英語(yǔ)。
⑤運(yùn)用了There is no doubt that…(……毫無(wú)疑問(wèn))這樣的萬(wàn)能句型;be badly in need of help(急需幫助)這一短語(yǔ)也使評(píng)卷老師眼前一亮。
⑥make a difference(起作用、產(chǎn)生不同)這一短語(yǔ)也是增分點(diǎn)。本篇句句高級(jí)、詞詞地道,怎能不拿滿(mǎn)分? 【模擬題1】
假設(shè)你是李華,前天是你的外國(guó)朋友Anne的生日。你本答應(yīng)要參加她的生日聚會(huì),但你當(dāng)時(shí)正忙著準(zhǔn)備期末考試,忘了赴約。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封信向Anne表達(dá)你的歉意,說(shuō)明原因,并提出補(bǔ)救的方法?!緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Anne,I am indeed very sorry that I didn't attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party.I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you.But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment.I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.Once again, please accept my sincere apology.Yours truly, Li Hua 【模擬題2】
假如你是李華,好朋友Sarah邀請(qǐng)你去參加他的生日聚會(huì),但由于弟弟突然生病,醫(yī)生說(shuō)需要住院5天左右,請(qǐng)寫(xiě)信給Sarah表達(dá)未能和老朋友一起給他慶祝生日的歉意,并請(qǐng)Sarah幫忙轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)對(duì)朋友們的問(wèn)候?!緝?yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】 Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is owing to(因?yàn)椋﹖he fact that(同位語(yǔ)從句)my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.Cordially,(sincerely)Li Hua 【模擬題3】
假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口語(yǔ)課上使用手機(jī)被老師發(fā)現(xiàn),手機(jī)被收走。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給外教寫(xiě)一封道歉信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn):
1.表示歉意;2.解釋上課使用手機(jī)的原因;3.提出自己的請(qǐng)求并適當(dāng)表態(tài)?!緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Mr.Jackson, I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week.Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.I know any word might sound a made-up excuse.But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason.I was trying to find a part-time job last weekend that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately.Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.Anyway, using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher.I swear it will not happen again.But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.Will you be so kind to give it back to me? Thanks a million!Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【模擬題3】
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)同學(xué)Jim 寫(xiě)一封電子郵件,告知周末你不能參加他的生日聚會(huì),希望他諒解。郵件的內(nèi)容包括:
1.表達(dá)歉意;
2.說(shuō)明理由; 3.告知已準(zhǔn)備了生日禮物。【參考范文】 Dear Jim, I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go to your birthday party this Saturday.My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon.My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up.So it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you then.I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well.By the way, I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday.Best wishes, Li Hua
第四篇:2014考研英語(yǔ):應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之投訴信
2014考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作:應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之投訴信
大綱對(duì)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作的評(píng)價(jià)目標(biāo)是:考生應(yīng)能根據(jù)所設(shè)情景,寫(xiě)出不同類(lèi)型的應(yīng)用文,包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、摘要、報(bào)告等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)??忌鷳?yīng)能:
1)做到語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確、用詞恰當(dāng); 2)遵循文章的特定問(wèn)題格式;
3)合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu),使其內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫; 4)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作目的和特定讀者,選用恰當(dāng)語(yǔ)域。
投訴信是因?yàn)閷?duì)服務(wù)、商品等不滿(mǎn)而向諸如商店、廠(chǎng)家、消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)等相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)機(jī)構(gòu)寫(xiě)的信件。寫(xiě)此類(lèi)信件時(shí)候,應(yīng)注意寫(xiě)信的目的不僅僅是表示不滿(mǎn),更重要的是讓對(duì)方了解并解決你所遇到的問(wèn)題。因此投訴信的內(nèi)容可包括:(詳細(xì)見(jiàn)寫(xiě)作160篇132頁(yè))
1)反映問(wèn)題。比如應(yīng)具體說(shuō)明什么質(zhì)量問(wèn)題,并提供確切的發(fā)票,問(wèn)題的內(nèi)容要明確而具體。
2)說(shuō)明由此問(wèn)題所帶來(lái)的不便、比如時(shí)間或精神上的損失等,內(nèi)容要實(shí)事求是。
3)提出解決方案,賠償方法和方式等,所提出的要求要合理。
4)結(jié)尾既要提出希望,比如要求對(duì)方盡快解決問(wèn)題,同時(shí)又要為對(duì)方做出的努力表示感謝,這樣對(duì)方才可能以積極的態(tài)度處理并解決你的問(wèn)題。
投訴信的語(yǔ)氣要堅(jiān)決,但注意禮貌用詞,不宜過(guò)分尖銳,敘述問(wèn)題時(shí)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。其常用套語(yǔ)有:
引言:I am returning...which Ibought from your store in...(time).Imust complain about...發(fā)展:This has put us to great inconvenience.Therefore, Iam returning...and would greatly appreciate if you could replace it.結(jié)尾:We hope that you will understand our expectation of the compensation for our damaged goods.Iwould be grateful if this matter would have your immediate attention.Having been given your excellent reputation, Iam sure you will do everything possible to...范例:
Directions:
You bought a pair of tennis bats(item #6542951)from website.When you received them, you found they were used with dirt all over around and a small tear in the handle.Write a letter to the customer service manager of the store to
1)tell him about the used bats 2)ask for a refund
Dear Sir or Madam:
I have recently ordered a new pair of tennis bats(item #6542951)from your website on June 21.I received the order on June 26.Unfortunately, when I opened it I saw that the bats were used.They had dirt all over around and there was a small tear in the handle.My order number is AF26168156.To resolve the problem, I would like you to credit my account for the amount charged for my bats, I have already went out and bought a new pair at my local sporting goods store so sending another would result in me having two pairs of the same bats.Thank you for taking the time to read this letter.I have been a satisfied customer of your company for many years and this is the first time I have encountered a problem.If you need to contact me, you can reach me at(555)555-5555.Sincerely,Li Ming
最后,希望考生都能夠掌握投訴信的寫(xiě)作方法,進(jìn)入理想的學(xué)府。祝大家考研成功!
第五篇:考研英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之投訴信
考研英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之投訴信
在考研英語(yǔ)中一類(lèi)公認(rèn)的比較容易得分的題型大概非作文的
(2)我們深知你們并不經(jīng)常出錯(cuò),但我們希望能確保這類(lèi)差錯(cuò)不再發(fā)生。
We know that you are not generally careless, but we should like your assurance that this will not happen again.(3)我必須正告貴方,除非對(duì)目前狀況采取措施,否則我將被迫訴諸法律。I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will beforced to take legal action.(4)坦率地所,我不再準(zhǔn)備忍受這種狀況。
Frankly, I am not prepared to put up with the situation any more.(5)如果您能盡快調(diào)查此事,我將不勝感激。期待您盡快回復(fù)。
I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter as soon as possible.And I am looking forward to an early reply.分段及分句的寫(xiě)作講解過(guò)后,同學(xué)們可以嘗試練習(xí)整篇文章了,例如:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Library Service on Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
假設(shè)你是李強(qiáng),請(qǐng)你就本校圖書(shū)館的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及圖書(shū)館的藏書(shū)數(shù)量和更新?tīng)顩r、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等,可以是表?yè)P(yáng),可以是批評(píng)建議,也可以兼而有之。
【審題】本文可以從批評(píng)著手,成為一封批評(píng)信。題目要求中規(guī)定了要涉及藏書(shū)、環(huán)境等內(nèi)容,為作文提供了一些思路。同時(shí)注意,雖然是封批評(píng)信,但也要做到客觀,不能把圖書(shū)館說(shuō)得一無(wú)是處。
【寫(xiě)作思路】
Li Qiang