第一篇：考研英語寫作應用文之便條寫法

考研英語寫作資料-應用文寫作之便條寫法

便條是一種簡單的書信。雖然內容簡單，但卻有其獨特的風格。主要目的是為了盡快的吧最新的信息、通知、要求或者活動的時間、地點轉告給對方。常見的便條有收條、欠條、留言和請假條等。

便條可以有題目，也可以省略題目。

便條開篇須有稱呼語，但稱呼可以比較隨便。

日期部分可寫在便條的右上角。

日期的簽署通常只需寫星期幾或星期幾的上午、下午，也可只寫上午或下午和具體時間。只寫日期也可以。便條結尾須署上留條人的姓名，位置在正文的右下角。

便條的形式和內容簡潔，故可以用幾句話概括。

文內語言盡量通俗口語化，簡單扼要，直截了當，無需使用客套語言。

便條雖簡單，但中心務必突出，更要注明活動的時間及地點。

便條不需郵寄，不用信封。通常請人代為轉交。有時可寫在留言板和留言簿上。

基本寫作格式

便條內容和類型不盡相同，可以靈活變通。但各類便條必須包括以下幾個基本要素；

1）Date：便條日期

2）Salutation：稱呼

3）Body：正文 4）Signature：署名

樣例

收條：即收到錢物之后，給交錢或送物人寫張字據，說明已經收到某物，可留作證據。條據上需寫明錢物名稱和數量、立據人及日期。不得涂改。

Jan.23rd,2003 Received from Student, Wang Zihao one hundred yuan only for this month''s tuition fee.Li Man

For the Finance Office of Foreign Language Institute

欠條；留下字據，表示欠某人某物。條據上需寫明錢物名稱和數量、立據人及日期。不得涂改。

Sept.16th, 2002

Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows:

A copy of History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu Weiren

A copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang Yaoxin A copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen

Wu Zhuo

For the Office ofSocial Science Department

留言；用書面留下要說的話。留言涉及的方面很多，包括約會，通知，請求等任何可用便條留下的口信。

Tuesday

Dear Li,As the Spring Festival is drawing near, I''m very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours.I''m sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly.Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m.today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel?

Yours always,Jiayang

請假條：往往指由于生病或特殊情況不能親自當面請假，用假條的形式告假。所以，請假條大多是病假條。可以自寫，也可請他人代寫。寫假條最重要的是說明原因和請假的期限。

Jan.10th

Dear Ms.Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning''s two periods of English Class due to a bad cold and high fever.Enclosed is a certificate from the doctor who said I must stay in bed for a few days.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.Yours respectfully, Tian Ye

常用句子

I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience.如您方便，請早日來電，我將不勝感激。

Delighted!Will call at 2 p.m.tomorrow.來條收悉，定于明天下午兩點拜訪。

Encl.: Doctor''s Certificate of Advice.附；醫生證明

I shall be bery happy to call at your house at 6:30 this everying.Until then,...我定于今晚6：30去你家，望等候。

Upon receiving this note, please come to my office.見條后，請立即來我辦公室。

Mr.Li stands in urgent need of your service.李先生急需你的幫助。

I happen to be in urgent need of 200 yuan.我因有急事，需要200元。

Yours note with an admission ticket enclosed is much appreciated.留言和一張入場券均已收到，不勝感激。

I''m very grateful to you for your kind invitation, and I''m sure to come to see your concert.承蒙邀請觀看你們的音樂會，我一定按時到場。

Please accept this little figt as a small token of my esteen for you.奉上這小小的禮物，以表達我對您的崇高敬意。

結束語

I trust my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience.望我的缺席不會給你帶來太大的不便。

Please favor me with an early reply.敬請早復。

Hoping that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.希望能及早處理此事。

Please give an extension of leave for three days.請準予續假三天為盼。

考研英語便箋寫作(Note Writing)重點

2006年考研英語寫作分成兩部分：第一部分是應用文寫作，包括書信、便箋、備忘錄等，要求寫100字左右；第二部分是短文寫作，這部分字數要求跟以往不一樣，以往要求寫200多字，現在要求寫160字到200字之間。本文給大家講講便箋寫作（Note Writing）寫作要點。便箋寫作（Note Writing）實際上與書信寫作（Letter Writing）大致相似，但有三點主要不同：

1.便箋較隨便，因此語氣通常更輕松，格式和語言都是如此。

2.通常便箋較短，應言簡意賅，這意味著你必須略去冗余信息。3.便箋寫起來往往更具個性化，通常語言更接近口語，更直接。

一、樣 題：

Directions:

You are late for an appointment with a professor.You also have books that are due at the library in a few hours.Write a note to your roommate asking if she could return the books for you.In return for the favor, offer to buy her lunch.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

范文：

Dear Jane,I have a big favor to ask you.I am late for my appointment with Professor Jones, and need to go directly to his office.I also have two books that are due back at the library this evening.As I will not be able to get to the library before it closes, I was wondering if you would possibly have the time to return the books for me.

I realize this is a big favor to ask of you, as you are also very busy.In return for help, I would like to buy you lunch tomorrow.Thanks in advance!

譯文：

親愛的簡，

我要請你幫個大忙。我與瓊斯教授有個約會，現在已經晚了，我得直接去他的辦公室。可我還有兩本書要還圖書館，今晚就到期了。我可能在圖書館關門之前趕不到那里，所以我想知道你能否有時間幫我還。

我知道你也很忙，這可真太麻煩你了。為了感謝你幫忙，我明天請你吃午飯吧。謝謝！

二、模擬練習

模擬題一：

Your roommate has been very busy and has neglected to clean his part of the dormitory in an appropriate length of time.Write a note asking him to rectify the situation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.模擬題二：

An acquaintance of yours is selling textbooks that you require for a course you are taking next semester.Write him a note enquiring about the books'' conditions and prices.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

第二篇：考研英語應用文寫作便條寫法

便條是一種簡單的書信。雖然內容簡單，但卻有其獨特的風格。主要目的是為了盡快的吧最新的信息、通知、要求或者活動的時間、地點轉告給對方。常見的便條有收條、欠條、留言和請假條等。便條可以有題目，也可以省略題目。便條開篇須有稱呼語，但稱呼可以比較隨便。日期部分可寫在便條的右上角。日期的簽署通常只需寫星期幾或星期幾的上午、下午，也可只寫上午或下午和具體時間。只寫日期也可以。便條結尾須署上留條人的姓名，位置在正文的右下角。便條的形式和內容簡潔，故可以用幾句話概括。文內語言盡量通俗口語化，簡單扼要，直截了當，無需使用客套語言。便條雖簡單，但中心務必突出，更要注明活動的時間及地點。便條不需郵寄，不用信封。通常請人代為轉交。有時可寫在留言板和留言簿上。基本寫作格式便條內容和類型不盡相同，可以靈活變通。但各類便條必須包括以下幾個基本要素；1）Date：便條日期2）Salutation：稱呼3）Body：正文4）Signature：署名樣例收條：即收到錢物之后，給交錢或送物人寫張字據，說明已經收到某物，可留作證據。條據上需寫明錢物名稱和數量、立據人及日期。不得涂改。Jan.23rd,2003Received from Student, Wang Zihao one hundred yuan only for this months tuition fee.Li ManFor the Finance Office ofForeign Language Institute欠條；留下字據，表示欠某人某物。條據上需寫明錢物名稱和數量、立據人及日期。不得涂改。Sept.16th, 2002Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows:A copy of History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu WeirenA copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang YaoxinA copy of World Literature by Jiang ChengenWu ZhuoFor the Office ofSocial Science Department留言；用書面留下要說的話。留言涉及的方面很多，包括約會，通知，請求等任何可用便條留下的口信。TuesdayDear Li,As the Spring Festival is drawing near, Im very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours.Im sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly.Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m.today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel?Yours always, Jiayang請假條：往往指由于生病或特殊情況不能親自當面請假，用假條的形式告假。所以，請假條大多是病假條。可以自寫，也可請他人代寫。寫假條最重要的是說明原因和請假的期限。Jan.10thDear Ms.Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this mornings two periods of English Class due to a bad cold and high fever.Enclosed is a certificate from the doctor who said I must stay in bed for a few days.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.Yours respectfully,Tian Ye常用句子I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience.如您方便，請早日來電，我將不勝感激。Delighted!Will call at 2 p.m.tomorrow.來條收悉，定于明天下午兩點拜訪。Encl.: Doctors Certificate of Advice.附；醫生證明I shall be bery happy to call at your house at 6:30 this everying.Until then,...我定于今晚6：30去你家，望等候。Upon receiving this note, please come to my office.見條后，請立即來我辦公室。Mr.Li stands in urgent need of your service.李先生急需你的幫助。I happen to be in urgent need of 200 yuan.我因有急事，需要200元。Yours note with an admission ticket enclosed is much appreciated.留言和一張入場券均已收到，不勝感激。Im very grateful to you for your kind invitation, and Im sure to come to see your concert.承蒙邀請觀看你們的音樂會，我一定按時到場。please accept this little figt as a small token of my esteen for you.奉上這小小的禮物，以表達我對您的崇高敬意。結束語I trust my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience.望我的缺席不會給你帶來太大的不便。please favor me with an early reply.敬請早復。Hoping that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.希望能及早處理此事。please give an extension of leave for three days.請準予續假三天為盼。來源：中國MBA

第三篇：考研英語 應用文寫作

考研應用文寫作(A節作文)一.應用文寫作要求: 1 內容全面(覆蓋面)2 語言自然(詞匯豐富,銜接手段的應用)3 語法正確 語域得體(正式與非正式)5 格式正確

二.寫作類型:1信件(私人及公務)備忘錄摘要報告

三.寫作總體把握:確定文章格式 與語域,抓住關鍵詞,合理想象, 確定文章內容與結構

應用文分類破解 信件寫作

(A)信件格式:稱呼 正文 結束語

簽名 第一段自我介紹句型: I am

(a staff member of)_____________.寫作目的句型: I am writing the letter in purpose of _____________.感謝對方來信的句型: It is really a surprise to receive your letter of June 18.Your letter of June 18th has arrived.What a pleasing surprise!

thThank you for your letter of June 18.2 結尾段句型: 1)表示感謝:My thanks to you for your general help are beyond words.I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me.I apologize for all the inconvenienced I have Caused

2)期待回信

I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.I look forward to hearing from you soon.B 求學信寫作

1首段: 自我介紹,申請原因, 說明寫信目的 2 主體:自己的背景資料,詢問對方學校的資料結尾: 希望盡快收到答復,表示感謝與期待

常用句型:

th1)I am writing to inquire about the entrance to your university.2)I wish to apply to your esteemed department as a postgraduate student.3)Your university is a well-staffed and well-equipped institute with a long history and a fine tradition of scholarship.4)Would you please be kind to furnish me with some related information?(P27)

C 投訴信 自我介紹,引出投訴內容 2 描述個人經歷

時間、地點。First, …..then…..Later,….Next,….Soon,…..Eventually,….引起有關人員或公眾注意,避免再次發生 4 希望能盡快得到滿意答復 常用句型: 1 I’m writing to put forward some opinions about I’m writing to complain about I’m writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with 4 I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.D 求職信 說明信息來源,表明寫作目的和應聘職位.2 詳述個人經歷和能力:教育程度,所學專業(或詢問薪水待遇)3 希望獲得面試機會,提供聯系方式,感謝對方關心 常用句型: I have read your advertisement in _____, and I should be grateful if you could consider me favorable for this position.2 I am writing to apply for the position of __________ which you advertised in ____.3 I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of ___ you have advertised in I graduated from the ________ university majoring in ______.I have been working in ______ since my graduation, and therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details.6 With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than ___ 7 If you want to know more about me, please contact me at ________.求職信范文

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress.Enclosed with the letter is my resume, which further details my qualifications and previous work experience.Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a waitress.I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant.Thank you for your consideration of my application.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.Your sincerely Li Ming The principle of hard work applies to 應用文寫作(二)推薦信寫作

第一段:介紹自己背景,與被推薦人的關系以及為何事推薦

常用句型: As________(自己的背景或者與被推薦者的關系), I take great pleasure in recommending _________for acceptance into(for the position of)________.I am_________.I am writing with pleasure to recommend _____, one of my favorite students, as far as all that I know, for the position in your company.第二段:具體說明被推薦者的細節 常用句型: With good educational background and excellent character, ______ is qualified to apply for an appropriate position in your company.第三段:表示期待以及愿意進一步提供信息 常用句型: A long journey begins with the first step.As far as I know of him, I am very pleased to write this letter of reference to support ______, a very promising young man to apply for ________.If you want to know more information about him, please don’t hesitate to contact me at _____.According to my knowledge of him in the past three years, I believe _____is qualified for this position.Should you need any further information about this student, please feel free to contact me ______.感謝信句型

Please accept my belated thanks for__________.I really appreciated your ___________.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for _________.備忘錄寫作 Date: To: From: Subject: 正文:

通知的寫作

Notice /announcement All students are requested to be present at the meeting to be held in the school auditorium on Saturday , January 14, 2005 at 3:00 pm.The meeting scheduled to take place this Tuesday is postponed until further notice.寫作病句回顧 There are many ways to know the society.For example, by TV, radio and newspapers.2 When he made the decision.He found he began to regret.English is a compulsory course in many colleges, and a student must pass it before he earns his degree.4 The problem is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.However, there are still many students applying for teaching positions, teachers are very popular in our society.6 Take photos is my habit during travel.7 Our class has more than 200 students, often forcing me to sit on the floor.8 Because I want to be a scientist, so I worked very hard.9 I want to buy something that you will like it.Knowledge, it is the most important things of our world.To make progress, many factors have to be taken into account.12 In Nanjing, the weather is fine, you can enjoy your life here.Getting married is easy, staying married is a difficult matter.To learn English well is not an easy work.15 But it may occur many problems.16 Being a professor needs knowledge, patience and your virtue.Seeing this, many thoughts came into his mind.However people who hold the view :global shortage of fresh water On the top of that, with the increasing of the factory.(前面句號改成逗號,前面不是一個完整的句子)There will need fresh water For example , a child lives with his parent for 18 years, when he go to university , he even don’t know what clothes to wear in every seasons.there is（刪除）the flower fades in the same situation without the green house.Face(facing)this situation, drastic measure have be taken to and this unhealthy trend This picture vividly depicts that the athlete rushing to the end of line that is marked “start” in front and “end” in behind.But others do not agree with it, and believe there is several opportunity in everyone.more and more people come to realize that(刪除)the important of kownledge.

第四篇：考研英語應用文寫作

隨著2011考研報名工作的正式啟動，1月份的考試離我們越來越近了，要參加2011考研的考生神經又要繃緊一些了。這里，與大家分享一下有關考研英語寫作中書信寫作的方法常用技巧等，掌握了這些，相信此類題型的提分會有很大幫助。

書信題型寫作是應用文寫作中常見的功能性寫作形式，書信寫作的準備一是宏觀，就是要掌握它的格式，基本框架，就是先寫什么，后寫什么；二是微觀，具體到語言如何使用。

一、書信寫作考察的結構

① 日期，寫信人應將寫信日期(年，月，日)放在書信正文的右上角，如Jan.30th, 2010。提醒：考研書信寫作沒有要求考生必須寫時間，如果沒有把握自己的時間書寫格式是正確的，建議考生不要寫，以免出錯反而扣分。

② 稱呼，稱呼是寫信人對收信人的稱謂，稱呼可以根據收信人的性別，職務，婚姻狀況，姓名等個人信息來寫，如：Mr.Williams, Mrs.Bush, Professor Li, Dr.Smith, Dear Mum and Dad

如果寫信人不清楚收信人的具體姓名，職務等情況，可以寫：Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern。

③ 正文，正文是書信的主要部分，在稱呼下方隔一或兩行處開始。考生寫正文時，要分層次進行。書信正文通常由引言，展開段和結尾三個層次組成。

· 引言，引言表明寫信人的寫信目的和寫信背景，一般僅限于一段，一兩句話即可。

提醒：此處考生容易犯一個錯誤：照抄題目的表達，甚至原句，這是一個嚴重的錯誤，在閱卷過程至少會扣到2分，希望廣大考生要注意。

· 展開段，展開段內容應詳實，具體。可以分為若干段來寫，每一段圍繞一個主題展開。提醒：提醒廣大考生，題干中的要點必須全部包含，考生若是在漏掉一個要點（一般小作文有3個要點）會至少扣掉3分。

· 結尾，結尾部分通常比引言部分短，使用一兩句話表達一下希望或祝愿。

④ 結束語，結束語是寫信人對收信人的謙稱，寫在正文下面二至三行處。公務等較正式的信件多采用Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully, Yours truly 等；私人信件，多采用Yours, With love, Yours affectionately 等。

⑤ 簽名，簽名應寫在結束語的下面。

二、主體段語言的操作

書信按照指令邊想邊寫。主體第一段一句話，開門見山，提出寫信的目的，表明信的性質：是投訴信還是申請信還是請求信？我為什么要寫這封信？常用句式包括：

I am writing to complain about...I am writing to thank...for.../express my gratitude for...I am writing to ask for...I am writing to apply for...正文第二段，100個字左右，8、9句話。

此段寫作的中心任務是把題目中的提綱進行擴展。如果有3條提綱，可以每一條提綱擴充3句。怎么樣擴充，主要是發揮點小小的想象力，有兩種思路，一是將上義拆分成為若干下義，二是把一件事情說得更為形象具體。比如第一條指令，題目里面說是books，可以細化為各種各樣的書，這就是下義拆分法。還可以具體描寫一下這些書是什么樣子的。同樣第二個指令里面的methods of payment,和第三個指令里面的time and way of delivery都可以采用這兩種方法進行擴展。

結尾，一般為禮貌性的套話，一般都是焦急等待著您的回信I am looking forward to your reply足以，或者I would appreciate it if you could send a replay at your earliest convenience也行。

以下為書信寫作中常用的經典句型參考，希望大家在寫作中活學活用。

常用起首語

1)I am much pleased to inform you that.......2)I wish to apply for the teaching position you are offering.3)Your kind letter of November 22th arrived this morning.4)In reply to your letter dated July 4, I want to say...5)Thank you for your letter dated Dec.22, 2000.6)Many thanks for your letter of Sept.5，1997.7)A thousand thanks for your kind letter of June 5,1997.8)Your letter which arrived this morning gave me great comfort.9)Thank you very much for your letter of August 2 and the gift you sent me on Christmas Eve.10)First of all,I must thank you for your kind assistance and high attention to me.11)With great delight I learn from your letter of this Sunday that...12)I am too excited and delighted at your good news.13)I am very obliged to you for your warm congratulations....常用結束語

1)Looking forward to your early reply

2)Hoping to hear from you soon

3)I hope to hear from you very soon.4)We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.5)Your early reply will be highly appreciated.6)I hope everything will be well with you.7)Please let us know if you want more information.8)I wish you very success in the coming year.9)Please remember me to your family.10)With best regards to your family.11)All the best.12)With love and good wishes.求職申請信常用句型

1.In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.2.With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offer myself for the post.3.Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in ~.4.Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ~,I wish to apply for the position referred to.5.In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender my services.6.Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me.I feel I can fill that position.7.Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ next SUMMER?

8.I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~ company

9.I have been in the business for the last ~ years, and worked as the director of the...department.10.I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.11.For the last ~ years, I have been and still am a / an ~.12.I'm ~ years of age, female / male, and have had ~ years' experience in a limited company's ~ office

13.I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.14.If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call in person, on any day and at any time you may appoint.15.Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.16.I trust that you'll give this application your favorable consideration.17.Should you give me a trial, I'll do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.申訴信常用句型

1.I am sorry to say that we are greatly inconvenienced by the fact that ~.2.I am writing this letter to complain about ~.3.I really must complain about the quality of the ~ I recently got from your company.4.You seem to have supplied us with a product that falls far below the standard we expect.5.The ~ I ordered from your store arrived broken.Obviously, no packing had been placed in the box before it was sent from the warehouse.6.It is now over ~ since we made the above order with you, but the ~ we need badly now haven't arrived yet.7.The product I purchased from you ~ proved to be quite a disappointment.Although it looks exactly the same as the one I saw in your commercial, it actually does not perform the same way.8.As I have no interest in receiving a replacement, I am returning the product to you and demand that a full refund be made to me.9.I'd appreciate it very much if you refund the money I have paid for it.10.We would appreciate it if you would arrange for the replacement of the damaged items.感謝信常用句型

1.Let me tell you how much I liked / appreciated / enjoyed...2.I want you to know how much we / I appreciate...3.We appreciate your taking time to...4.I don't know how I would have managed without your help

5.I hope I can return the favor someday

6.Do let me know if I can ever return the favor

第五篇：考研英語應用文寫作攻略

考研英語應用文寫作攻略

雖然大綱中羅列了多種應用文類型，包括：投訴信，建議信，申請信，求職信，辭職信，求學信，求助信，感謝信，號召信，邀請信，道歉信，摘要，簡歷，備忘錄，尋物啟事，招領啟事等，但是在具體的實踐中，常常考到的是書信和摘要。尤其在近幾年的考研中，應用文寫作考的最多的就是書信體應用文。因此本章將詳細講解各類書信以及摘要的寫作方法。

投訴信又可稱為抱怨信，其主要目的是表達寫信人對于某一情況的不滿。人們在生活中經常會遇到一些不愉快的事情，比如消費利益受損、正常生活和工作受到干擾等等，有時寫封投訴信不失為一個解決辦法。

投訴信通常包括以下幾個方面的內容：說明投訴的原因并表示遺憾;實事求是地闡述問題發生的經過，切忌夸大其詞;指出問題引起的后果;提出批評及處理意見，或敦促對方采取措施，或提出所希望的賠償以及補救方式。

投訴信的寫作策略：說明投訴問題——描述具體情況——期待解決方案。

注意事項：寫投訴信時語氣要冷靜、鄭重、克制，不必過于禮貌。但也要就事論事，不能進行人身攻擊。同時，在描述問題時盡量采用被動句式，使描述更加客觀合理。

例題一

Directions:

You bought an iPhone in a store last week, and you have found that there is something wrong with it.Write a letter to the store manager to explain the problem, express your complaints and suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)

范文：

Dear Manager，I venture to write to complain about the quality of the iPhone I bought last Friday at your store.I hope I can have a good solution to the problem facing me.During the five days when the iPhone has been in my possession, problems of software have emerged one after another.For one thing, the screen is always black, making the iPhone no difference from a traditional one.For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the iPhone’s operation for only two hours.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another one or declare a refund.I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.Yours，Li Ming

尊敬的經理：

我很冒昧給您寫這封信，投訴我上周五在您商店里購買的iPhone手機的質量問題。我也希望我的問題能有很好的解決。

購買至今的五天中，各種軟件問題一個接一個地出現。一方面，手機屏幕總是黑屏，我使用起來仿佛和傳統手機沒有區別。另一方面，電池的狀況也不盡如人意，只能讓手機工作兩個小時。因此，我希望可以換一個新機，否則我要求退款。

我希望這個問題能夠得到足夠的重視。

李明

謹上

例題二

Directions：

You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.He/She has parties in the room

and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college:

1)asking for a new room next term，2)stating that you would prefer a single room and

3)explaining your reasons.You should write with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)

范文

Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me.In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

尊敬的女士或先生：

我寫此信的目的是要告訴您我希望下學期換個房間，我想要一間單人房，因為我目前合住的住所很不方便。

我提出這一要求是因為我室友做事從不考慮別人。他總有朋友來拜訪，還常舉行喧鬧的聚會。并且，有時他還不經我同意就借走了我的東西。在這種情況下，我覺得沒法專心學習，我現在功課就落后了。

我相信您也會覺得解決的辦法是換個單間，那樣我就不會受到這些干擾了。如果您能幫我找到一間單人房我將不勝感激。我還希望新宿舍不要和現在的宿舍在同一幢樓內，而是離學校越近越好。