第一篇：托福寫作

Do you agree or disagree that university should spend money on improving facilities(labs and general requirements)rather than hiring famous teachers?

Nowadays it rarely surprises us any more that there are relatively large numbers of facilities such as labs and libraries in the campus of universities.However, hordes of people are likely to go to extremes to hold that the university should not spend that much money on improving facilities on account of the lack of fund.Perhaps there is a slice of credibility in their argument, but I, without hesitation, advocate that it’s really essential for the universities to improve facilities

Granted, it is true that by saving money from the investment of facilities, the universities may concentrate more on the development of curriculum and the welfare which is provided for the teachers and professors.The statistics from the Harvard University reveal, astonishingly, that 62.7% people suggest that the universities should not be too eager to develop the general requirements.However, they ignore the fact that these facilities provided by the universities will definitely benefit the students in more ways than one.First and foremost, what never seizes to enthrall me is that the facilities will build a great atmosphere for the people(mainly college students)to study and relax.If the university constructs a great library which stores up millions of books or more, it will surely appeal to lots of studious students and those who don’t have the opportunity to attend the university.So actually this kind of facilities benefits the whole society, so do labs and other general requirements.Also, facilities like a natatorium or a gym can provide the basic facilities for students to relax.As we all know, students suffer both from studying burden and everyday lives.They need a way to relax, and these facilities just happen to provide great opportunities to relieve and extenuate their pressure.Therefore, there is no denying that by spending money on improving facilities a university will, to a great extent, enrich the students’ knowledge and broaden their horizon and give them the chance to relax at the same time.Moreover, the reputation gained from various facilities exerts a considerable fascination on me.If a university has more facilities which can provide students with more privilege, it can surely attract more top students who want the best education.Also, a famous university with variety numbers of facilities can add to the prestige of the city, the province, even the country which it belongs to.A case concerns MIT, which is one of the most celebrated universities all over the world.It has gained a high reputation for its prominent labs and stat-of-the-art equipments which provide students with the remarkable experimental qualification.Also, it makes its city, Cambridge, better known by the people as a cosmopolitan, international and civilized conurbation.Accordingly, it is apparent that the variety of the universities will make itself more eminent, therefore making significant contribution to the prosperity of the region.In conclusion, it is true that the limitation on funding facilities will economize some manpower and material resources for a university, but in order to provide both the students andthe universities with a bright future, spending money on these general equipments should never be off the table by a university.

第二篇：托福寫作

Agree or disagree A university should focus more on its facilities, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers

Nowadays, highly education has been attached more important than before.A argue that school facilities should pay more attention than professor lecture.From my perspective, although such hardware like computer centers and science lab provide some benefits to university students, university depends on quality of stuff.Admittedly, a school equipped with great facilities is more appealing the applicants.The reason is that it can make study easier.A bright library offers such a quiet condition for knowledge absorption;a computer center provides a self-govern ways to study;a science lab make student get more practice about miracles.However, this factors become less considerate when it comes to the quality of the professors.For one thing, not only do famous teachers can impart the knowledge, but instill the angle that to solve the problem.To pass on knowledge, a human is no better than a machine or a high-tech tool.The difference lies in the

special ways to get the solutions and the potential inspiration by the former.Take my favorite teacher for example, she often shows us some different way to solve the difficulties.And then she tells us the angle to work out the problem.As for me, it was not until her explanation, that I know about the easier way to work the problem.That is something that high-tech can barely achieve.For another, universities with qualified teachers tend to have higher graduate employment.It is not hard to imagine that a teacher with connections can bring more opportunity to get internship.As an old saying goes, knowledge starts with practice.It is still true now.Students who swamped in labs, would never face the brutal fact that you need a window for people to see what you’ve got.In this way, a well-connect professor can open that for you, instead of lifeless labs.In conclusion, though facilities could promote learning, but it fail to generate more practical merits to students.Recruit more qualified teacher should be paid more attention and stress.

第三篇：托福寫作欣賞

托福寫作范文欣賞：a new university in your community

摘要：新托福考試寫作如果考生想拿高分，腦子里一定要有幾篇文章，背上幾篇范文，能以備不時只需。托福寫作是中國考生的弱項，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中的邏輯思

新托福考試寫作如果考生想拿高分，腦子里一定要有幾篇文章，背上幾篇范文，能以備不時只需。托福寫作是中國考生的弱項，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中的邏輯思維，才可更好的進行鍛煉。下面我們一起欣賞這篇托福寫作范文。

這篇托福獨立寫作滿分范文的主要內(nèi)容是討論了如果政府宣布計劃興建一所新的大學(xué)，而有些人認(rèn)為你所在的社區(qū)是個建大學(xué)的好地方，那么請你也對比一下在你所在的社區(qū)建新大學(xué)的好處和壞處。The government has announced that it plans to build a new university.Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.Use specific details in your discussion.①優(yōu)點：學(xué)生上學(xué)方便;促進當(dāng)?shù)氐慕逃l(fā)展

②優(yōu)點：促進當(dāng)?shù)禺a(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)展，提供就業(yè)崗位

③缺點：本區(qū)很多老人，將極大影響他們的生活，其他人的生活也不再安寧

④缺點：交通、環(huán)境問題轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng)-[Examw.Com]

My community is located in a quiet and small town with very

beautiful natural sceneries.The environment is very suitable for a new university.Everyone in my community would without doubt enjoy a sense of pride when informed that a new university will be built here.However, just as any other constructions, this action will bring many advantages as well as disadvantages to my community.The most essential and exciting advantage is that a new university will definitely enhance the education on all levels in my community.Usually, children living nearby a university would frequently visit or play in the university, and thus they can be unconsciously influenced by the academic environment.This influence might be more effective to them than any preach from their parents about the importance of studying.By building a new university, children in my community will develop a greater motivation for studying hard.Moreover, with a university located nearby, all the primary schools, middle schools will have a greater sense of competition.The teachers may encourage the students to work harder to get a university degree, since it would be very embarrassing that the students of their own community could not be admitted by the new university.Besides, a new university in my community will boom the local economy.As we all know, universities are always surrounded by a wide range of stores, restaurants and markets which provide services to the students and faculty.Thus it is very likely that the new university will

encourage the local residents to offer their services around the school.As a result, more people will be employed and the employment rate which bothers the government for years might eventually drop.However, with closer examination, the disadvantages of building a new university in my community could also be formidable.Since my community is far from the city, most of its residents are seniors.Even for the younger people living here, they prefer a quiet environment and are afraid of any major changes made to their lives.Therefore, the attention brought by a new university might be unbearable to these local people.To be specific, traffic will no doubt increase in the near future.With more cars and people on the roads, it is possible that the local environmental quality will decrease.If the air is no more clean, our community might lose its strongest attraction.Then current residents might feel quite reluctant to live here in the future.In sum, the advantages of building a new university in my community seems very promising, yet we have to consider the undesirable consequences it might bring about.The government should really be cautious and take all the possible factors into consideration before making such a decision.'

我們并不主張考生死記范文，考試時如果遇到類似題目照搬上去，這并不能考察考生的寫作能力。新托福考試寫作多背一些范文，可以積累一些素材，像好的短語、詞、句等，靈活運用。

第四篇：托福寫作心得

關(guān)于托福作文的幾個比較常見的問題：

1,多少字?jǐn)?shù)合適？OG上說綜合寫作150-225，獨立寫作300。個人認(rèn)為綜合250字，獨立380+比較妥當(dāng)，但是不用追求太多的字?jǐn)?shù)，有字?jǐn)?shù)沒質(zhì)量的作文絕對不能得高分。但是有質(zhì)量的作文字?jǐn)?shù)肯定少不了，ETS要求Use specific reasons and details to supportyour choice，你想想達到這個要求的作文字?jǐn)?shù)能太少嗎？

2,要準(zhǔn)備多少時間？三到四周第一周把***185范文看透，每個題目自己都分析一下，同時學(xué)習(xí)好的句子。后面兩周每天練一篇綜合一篇獨立，練手感，同時練打字速度。（用老鍵盤練，不能用筆記本鍵盤）3，托福作文這么八股，考了高分其實不算什么，為了達到北美大陸以后我們寫起論文來杠杠的，我們一起為提高整體英語綜合實力努力吧。

一定要嚴(yán)格按照lecture的內(nèi)容進行寫作，千萬不要添加自己的東西。綜合寫作不需要你表態(tài)的，你要做的就是用不同的句子對就lecuture進行復(fù)述。

第一段就對論點進行簡單評述，表達自己的立場。

第二段舉出一個例子進行描述，穿插idea

第三段通過另一個不同方面的例子

第四段作一個小結(jié)

這樣寫的話，就是以例子為主，議論為輔了。

句子盡量簡潔,略微的加入一些特殊句式.開篇段落的寫作可分為兩大步驟，第一步就是用簡潔明了的句子對原題目的意思進行同義替換；

第二步是提出自己的觀點。

這兩大步驟細化起來可以概括為四句話：

第一句，采用同義替換的方式對原題目的意思進行更改，當(dāng)然是“形變神不變”；第二句，對題目的意思進行解釋

第三句，提出自己的觀點；

第四句，概括自己所提出觀點的理由，引起下文。

案例1：誤解原意思

Do you agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?

Original：

Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things well even if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during a given period.Although plausible at the first glance, I disagree with the statement.Depending on my own personal experience and personality, I firmly maintain that people can do few things well when they are busy with doing so many things.My arguments of this opinion are listed as follows.解析：

文章第一句話不是對原題目意思進行解釋，而是采用采取了和原意思相反的做法來進行題目詮釋；第二句表明自己對誤解題目的觀點；第三句話對自己的觀點進行近一步的解釋；

第四句一個過渡性的句子。開篇內(nèi)容安排倒是很好，但是作者犯了誤解原題目意思的錯誤導(dǎo)致后面整個文字都做了無用功。

改后：

When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously, they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly.Just imagine how terrible it will be: too many jobs need to be done by the same person in a given time.Once such a picture appears in my mind, I feel dizzy.To me, it is impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many others factors.Therefore , I agree with the statement too many things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done.The reasons are as follow.Revised：

第一句話對原題目意思進行了很好的詮釋；第二、三句話進一步解釋原題目；第四句話提出自己的觀點；第五句話過渡性句子引起下文。

案例2 ：語言羅嗦，繞彎子給出自己觀點，浪費時間

Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time.Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.original：

With the development of science and technology, people’s living standard has been improving day by day.According to the family plan, one couple could have only one child.So child becomes the center of the whole family.Some of them are even spoiled.Therefore, I think it is better if the young adult could live independent from their parents as soon as possible.解析：

這個開頭看似沒有任何問題，但是仔細分析就會發(fā)現(xiàn)很多問題。首先，作者繞了個大彎才給出自己的觀點。其次，觀點是對原題目的抄寫，改動的比較少。最后，開篇缺少引起下文的過渡句。更大的錯誤是這個開頭更像是一個全文主要觀點的一個分論點。

Revised:

As we all know, some young adults have the sense of independence in a special period so that they want to choose to live apart from their family, while others still choose to stay with parents in the family.Family can provide young adults a warm bay where he or she could turn to whenever any problems arise.However, considering the sound development of the young adult both mentally and physically, I think to live independently the earlier, the better.Independence is a lesson that each of us must face one day.The detailed reasons are listed below.解析：

第一句話詮釋原題目意思；第二句話進一步解釋第一句話；第三句話提出自己的觀點；第四句話解釋自己的觀點，引出下文。

integrated writing/綜合寫作:要求考生在3分鐘內(nèi)讀一篇文章，然后聽一個lecture，在20分鐘內(nèi)根據(jù)文章和lecture內(nèi)容寫一篇250字左右文章比較兩者的觀點。（注：文章內(nèi)容和lecture內(nèi)容注定是對立的，如果你考的不是對立的，那只有一種可能，你的RP次到了人神共憤的地步了。）

綜合寫作的八股在于：第一段指出reading passage和lecture內(nèi)容是對立的；第二、三、四段從三個方面/點來說明他們的內(nèi)容是怎樣對立的；第五段總結(jié)一下他們之間確實是對立關(guān)系。

independent writing/獨立寫作：給定一個題目，要求考生在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出400字左右的文章，要求邏輯清晰，論述有力，無明顯的語法和詞法錯誤。

獨立寫作八股在于：第一段陳述你的觀點，支持哪一方；第二、三、四段從三個方面論述你的觀點；最后一段總結(jié)一下，綜上所述，某某觀點是正確的。

既然新托福兩篇作文都是八股文，那必然有各自的八卦寫法，接下來，讓我們來看一下怎樣寫八股托福作文。

綜合寫作：模板，套模板，一定要套模板！

理由：1，模板讓你的思路更加清晰，這是ETS要求的。

2，20分鐘！開玩笑，怎么湊到300字？當(dāng)然要用模板！

3，閱讀聽力我都不怕，就怕作文，寫三句話錯兩句，我怎么得26+？當(dāng)然還是用模板，既然是模板就意味著是你精挑細選的句子，保證了寫作的質(zhì)量！

提醒：1，模板要富于變化，一篇只能用5句那你就要準(zhǔn)備10句！

2，模板不能一味照搬別人的，避免重復(fù)！

3，保證模板里的句子沒有語法和用詞錯誤！

一般來說，大家把一下幾個句子稍微變形，即完成了綜合寫作第一步

1.The lecturediscusses…which differs from the main idea in the reading that…（用于第一段）

2.The professormade the point that …The reading , in contrast, held a different view.（用于第一或第二三四段）

3.Another important pointshowed in the listening material is that …but the reading presents aconflicting idea that…（用于第三四段）

4.Finally, the professorstated that...which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who saidthat...（用于第四段）

5.In general, the professordiscussed the problem of …that the reading viewed in acontraryopposingdifferent angle.（最后總結(jié)段）

6.According tothe lecture… on the other hand while the reading stated that …

7.The professor made the pointthat… on the contrary in contrast however, the writer demonstrated an ideathat…

8.The lecturesupportsillustrates the idea that…

9.The lecturecontradictsrefutes is contrary to is the opposite of the idea that…

10.Contrary tothe belief in the passage that …the professor says that…

11.The professorrefutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that… by saying that…（6-11均用于第二三四段）

大家可以把連接詞變化一下，把動詞變化一下或句式稍變，11句話靈活運用。

除了模板以外，綜合寫作我們還需要做什么？

做筆記，做聽力筆記！

99．9%的情況下，綜合寫作的主體內(nèi)容是三個對立的觀點，所以大家只要把這個三個點記下來，然后把閱讀里相應(yīng)的三點摳出來放到模板里面去，你的綜合寫作就做完了，就是這么簡單！

獨立寫作怎么辦？

很遺憾，獨立寫作沒有固定的模板，起碼我沒用過。沒有模板怎么能叫八股文呢？獨立

寫作的八股在于它的題目很固定，如果不信，請翻看OG上給出了那幾百道例題。絕大部分題目是：**和**相比，你覺得哪個更好/更合理？/你更支持哪個觀點？一部分題目是：*******，你怎么辦？/你是怎么看的？

還有極小部分發(fā)散性題目很少考，而前面兩種其實是一種題目，不信？你看個例子。Q：Yourschoolhasreceived a gift of money.What do you think is the best wayforyourschool to spend this money? Use specific reasons and detailstosupport yourchoice.這個題目沒有給你二選一的選項，我們要做的是把它轉(zhuǎn)化為二選一，捐款的用途無外乎這么幾種：建圖書館、體育館（還可細分籃球、**。。）、學(xué)生公寓、辦公大樓、買電腦。。這么多選項你只要從中挑選一個，然后把這個和其他的相比較這篇文章你就搞定了！除了題目固定之外，寫作的手法同樣很固定。其實大家只要熟讀范文100篇，不會背書也能寫。而且能寫高分作文。具體的方法就是在論壇找到那誰誰誰的185篇滿分作文，挑選其中你覺得寫的不錯的把其中鋪墊的句型，轉(zhuǎn)換詞挑出來，背一背，背多了你會發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的滿分作文其實是一個套路出來的流水線作品（除極少數(shù)作文）。流水線作文誰不會寫呢？那滿分作文其實很簡單的！

第五篇：托福寫作四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

托福寫作四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

新托福寫作是考試的最后一部分，包含兩道試題，一篇綜合寫作(Integrated writing)，一篇“獨立寫作”，需在大約50分鐘內(nèi)完成。熟悉和理解新托福4大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是高分關(guān)鍵，下面我們就來看一下這幾個評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1：effectively addresses the writing topic and task。

托福寫作要求考生有效地闡明主題，考生千萬不要跑題。一般來說，考生全部跑題現(xiàn)象較少，但是局部跑題現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重，這也是考生不能輕取高分的緣故。

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2：well organized and well developed

邏輯條理清楚，發(fā)展充分。每次托福寫作中作者在講寫作時總是把它和閱讀相對照。各位考生要想拿到獨立寫作滿分必須真正理解“八股文”的結(jié)構(gòu)，千萬不要寫中國式的“八股文”，而應(yīng)寫出“美式八股文”。

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)3：uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的論據(jù)一定要具體、明確，且對論點有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而談。

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)4：displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom。

(通過譴詞造句和習(xí)慣表達來展示語言的熟練程度)這一點是各位考生經(jīng)常忽視，迷惘和不清楚的一點。新托福寫作占總分120分的30分。我們對大家的要求是在作文上花的時間既要少又要拿高分，至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至滿分以上的同學(xué)一定要注意此項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。能用first千萬不要用firstly，能用finally千萬不要用last but not least.不少同學(xué)花了很多功夫背這一外國人都不用的詞組，能用常用的詞千萬不要用偏詞，同時我們要熟練掌握ETS喜歡的5大語法結(jié)構(gòu)和2種從句。

對于托福寫作的建議是不要寫得太多，而要認(rèn)真寫上幾篇，再讓老師或?qū)＜規(guī)兔π薷模苊庠俜割愃棋e誤。同時也要注意邏輯清晰，語言簡潔，求精而不求量。