第一篇：四級作文 私人書信和原因分析句型

四級作文 私人書信和原因分析模板句型

基礎好的同學就直接改寫提綱來寫私人書信就行了。因為私人書信寫作比較任意，模板不好確定?；A不好的同學，就把提綱中規定的東西都寫到第二段，一三段按照我寫的，模板化。

第一段 客套話+寫作目的It is great to hear from you again.Nothing could have given me greater pleasure than to get news of you.You have no idea how happy I was to receive your letter.As to/with reference to /with regard to/as regards … ,引出寫作目的第三段 問候語+期待回信

nothing could have given me greater pleasure than to get news of you

in answer to your kind letter last time, i am writing the letter to tell you that

you have no idea how happy i was to receive your letter

I look forward to hearing from you at your earlist concenience.Please bring my best wished to your family.I wish you good health and lots of happiness.I wish every success for your career/study in the future

原因分析

A a host of elements can account for the phenomenon/situation;

B Why do I hold the point? There exist several factors accounting for/contributing to my outlook.C There exist an ocean of elements why I hold the belief, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.D among countless factors which contribute to … ,there exist three conspicuous(明顯的)aspects as follows.E The first role that should be emphasized is that… …, another equally essential factor is that… …, what is also worth noticing fact is that … ….書信作文范文

投訴信

Dear Mr.President:

I am sophomore from the Department of Low.I’m writing the letter in purpose of complaining about the food and service in the canteen or campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, Price and service in the canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of

competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens should be

subject to the students’ supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above be solved as soon as possible.求學信

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am a Chinese student who wish to study at your prestigious/esteemed university.My plan is to start my course next term , and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.First , what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university ? I alreaday had a bachelor’s degree from BeiJing Vniversity , but I wonder if there are any further academic

requirements.Second , how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self –supporting.I would be interested to here if there are any scholarships available for international students.Third , what is the situation as regards a commodation ?

I look forward to your reply.and to attend your esteemed institution.Yours Sincerely

LiMing

邀請信

Dear WangCai:

I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr old fish’s wedding

ceremong with Miss Micky Mouse to be held in ZhouJi Hotel on April 2009

If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1.We look forword to the pleasure of your company.Yours Sincerely

LiMing

感謝信變體

September 10th is the day that every student should bear in mind.It is the time to express our congratulations to our teachers ,who have devoted most of their time and energy to us。

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude;I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by taxi.If it had not been for my teachers’ timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was his quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.I will repay my teacher’s kindness with my unselfish help to others.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like my teacher, this would be a much nicer place.

第二篇：大學英語四級作文萬能句型-書信

書信

Dear Sir or Madam，Mr.Mrs.Miss.Ms.Yours sincerely, yours truthfully，Love，Yours affectionately, 書信作文常用套句

1：The time flies, we haven’t seen each other for a long time.All the things here are going on pretty well, I just miss you so much!時間過得很快，我們已經很久沒見了。這里一切都好，就是很想你。2：It is so great to hear from you again.能再次收到你的來信我很開心。3：Long time no see!好久不見。

4：I trust that everything is going smoothly for you.我相信你那里一切都好。

5：It is a great pleasure for me to have this wonderful chance to put pen to paper and send greetings to you.很高興我有這樣的機會提筆給你寫信，寄給你我的問候和祝福。

中間部分：

Give advice:

In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following action:

在下認為，如果你能采取以下措施，將是一種明智的選擇。

I hope you will not find it too forward for me to suggest that you…

請原諒我的直接，不過，希望你能___________。

In my experience, it seems that _______ would make sense in your situation.從我的經驗來看，針對你的情況，似乎________會有幫助。

At the risk of overstepping my boundaries, allow me to suggest that you____。

請原諒我的冒昧，不過我建議你_____________。

Gratitude

I truly appreciate your kindness.我很欣賞你的仁慈。

I am grateful to you for…

非常感謝你_________________。

I appreciate it more than I can say.我對你表示萬分感謝。

I can never thank you enough.萬分感謝。

I wish there were a better word than “ thanks “ to express my appreciation for your generous help.其實，對你的幫助豈能用“謝謝”兒子可以表達的。

It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.你對我如此慷慨，真是對您感激不盡。

Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality.非常感謝你的仁慈和好客。

Now we have arrived back home safe and sound.現在我已經安全到家。

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for…

我打從心底謝謝你（真誠地感謝你）。

Thank you again for your kindness.謝謝你的好意。

Apology

Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology.請接受我最誠摯、最深刻的道歉。

I apologize most sincerely for…

我誠摯地對___________向你道歉。

I am truly sorry to have done…

我對________向你表示道歉。

Please forgive me…

請原諒我曾__________。

I owe you an apology…

我為______向你道歉。

I regret to inform you that I am unable to do..很遺憾地告訴你，我沒法___________。

I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble…

很抱歉給你帶來這么多麻煩，__________。

Invitation

The honor of your presence is requested…

若你能出席________，我（們）將感到萬分榮幸。

It’s a pleasure for me to invite you to…

我很榮幸地邀請你參加__________。

We sincerely hope that you make it.我們真誠地希望你能參加。

We would be honored to have you there with us…

如果您能參加我們的__________，我們將不甚榮幸。

I will cover all the expense involved.我將負擔所有的費用。

Sympathy

I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support.我能想象你所經歷的一切，而且，我想告訴你，我會永遠支持你。

Complain

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction withat…

我寫這封信是想告訴你們我對________不是很滿意。

I very much regret to have to inform you that…

很遺憾地通知你，__________。

I would like to draw the attention of the authorities concerned to the …

我想就_____________問題引起有關部門的重視。

I feel something ought to be done about…

我覺得________方面還可以作一些努力（需要改進）。

I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.我希望以上問題（情況）能盡快解決（改進）。

Your effort to provide good services will be highly appreciated by all.我們會很感激您作出的一切努力。

We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.我們真的希望你們能對損失作出補償。

Inquiry

I would like to request some information about…

我想對_______問題向您咨詢。

My first question is… 我的問題就是__________。

I am greatly concerned about… 我對_________較為關注。

Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.我是否需要再寄其他資料給你，請及時告知。

Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.能否針對上述的問題寄些相關的小冊子給我。

結尾部分：

Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.我想再次對你表示感謝。

I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.我希望待盡快給我回復。

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.謝謝你關心（關注），我期待你的回復。

圖表作文

圖表作文常用句型

As is shown in the graph… 如圖所示…

The graph shows that… 圖表顯示…

As can be seen from the table,… 從表格中可以看出…

From the chart, we know that… 從這張表中,我們可知…

All these data clearly prove the fact that…

所有這些數據明顯證明這一事實,即…

The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%...在這個城市的增長已達到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,這個數字保持不變.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出現了逐漸下降的情況.

第三篇：四級常用句型

一)比較

1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B，but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that...but it would be foolish to claim that...5.For all the disadvantages，it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else，it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However，the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently，it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think...，but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is，it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A...，but the chief faults are...二)原因

1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute tothe phenomenon.2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4.The factors that contribute to this situation include...5.The change in...largely results from the fact that...6.We may blame...，but the real causes are...7.Part of the explanations for it is that...One of the most common factorsis that...Another contributing factoris...Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that...三)后果

1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is...3.It will exercise a profound influence upon...4.Its consequence can be so great that...四)批駁

1)It is true that...，but one vital point is being left out.2)There is a grain of truth in these statements，but they ignore a more important fact.3)Some people say...，but it does not hold water.4)Many of us have been under the illusion that...5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6)It makes no sense to argue for...7)Too much stress placed on...may lead to...8)Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that...9)Contrary to what is widely accepted，I maintain that...五)舉例

1)A good case in point is...2)As an illustration，we may take...3)Such examples might be given easily.4)...is often cited as an example.六)證明

1)No one can deny the fact that...2)The idea is hardly supported by facts.3)Unfortunately，none of the available data shows...4)Recent studies indicate that...5)There is sufficient evidence to show that...6)According to statistics proved by...，it can be seen that...七)開篇 1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6)Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...8)According to a recent survey，...9)With the rapid development of...，...八)結尾

1)From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that...2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4)In conclusion，it is imperative that...5)There is no easy method，but...might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem，we must...7)In summary，if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue，more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned，the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10)Taking all these into account，we...11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative，one thing is certain/clear...英語作文四六級開頭公式

1.開頭萬能公式一：

名人名言：有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語名言？”，很好辦：編！原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢！對吧？經典句型：A proverb says, “ You are only young once.”(適用于已記住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言)更多經典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2.開頭萬能公式二：

數字統計原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。原則上在議論文當中不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的，其實都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造：

Honesty

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。

Youth

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，在某個大學，學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：A recent statistics shows that …

二結尾萬能公式：

1.結尾萬能公式一：如此結論

說完了，畢竟要歸納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經歷，領導長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領導說結束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2.結尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典，因為考官本來經?？歼@個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英語模板：發表問題

問題的常用詞：question, problem, issue

Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近來，_______的問題引起了社會的廣泛關注。

Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.現在我們進入了一個充滿機遇和創新的嶄新時代，很多人對某些傳統的看法也發生了很大改變。

Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.近來，是否_______的問題已經非常明確而且引起了社會的廣泛關注。

The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利與弊已在全國范圍內引起熱烈的討論。

At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前，一些人認為_______而另一些人則認為_______。其實，兩種觀點都其可取之處。

People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.對于這種極具爭議的話題，我們很難作出絕對的回答。

People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行業的人對同一種問題的解釋不盡相同。

The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.這中極具爭議性的話題往往很受社會的關注。不同的人對此問題的看法也不盡相同。

When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...說到______，有人認為________，而另一些人則認為__________。

Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗話說，""。不同的人對此有不同的看法是可以理解的。

To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.對于這個問題，不同的人持不同的觀點。

There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...萬事萬物都有其兩面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。

When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________問題，很多人認為_________，不過，一些人則認為______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________問題，僅少數人認為________，但另一些人則認為_________。

There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue that...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前，_______問題爭議較大。批判_______的人認為_______，他們認為_______，不過，另一方面，贊同_______的人則認為_________。

Some people are of the opinion that..有些人認為_____________。

第四篇：英文書信作文常用句型

英文書信作文常用句型

感謝信(A Letter of Thanks)

1.Thank you so much for …….2.I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for……

3.I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for……

4.I’m grateful to you for ……

5.I truly appreciate your ……

6.Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.道歉信(A Letter of Apology)

1.I would like to express my apology for……

2.Excuse me for……

3.Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for……

4.I’m terribly sorry to tell you that……

5.Will you be good enough to excuse me for……

6.I am writing to apologize to you for ……

7.Would you mind if I change the appointment time.(你是否介意如果我更改約會時間)

8.To make up my thoughtless behavior, I……(我想……以彌補……)

9.I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.詢問信(A Letter of Inquiry)

1.I amwriting to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning……(我寫信是希望得到……的信息)

2.I amwriting to you in the hope that I may obtain some materials about……

3.I would be grateful if you inform me ……

4.I should be obliged if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects.(若能獲悉……，將不勝感激)

5.I am writing to seek for your assistance in……(我寫信是要請求您的幫助)

6.I would appreciate it if you could provide us with ……

(如果您能為我們提供……,我將不勝感激)

7.The questions I need answering are listed below.(下列是我想咨詢的問題)

8.Will you please send me the relevant information and application forms

(您能給我寄相關的資料和申請表嗎？)

9.Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.(我是否需要再寄其他資料給你，請及時告知。)

10.Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.(能否針對上述的問題寄些相關的小冊子給我。)

11.I am eagerly awaiting your reply to this matter.12.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated1

13.I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.(感謝您在這件事上的慷慨相助)

14.I am looking forward to a favourable reply at your earliest convenience(期盼回復)投訴信(A Letter of Complaint)

1.Much to my regret,I am writing to make a complaint about/against……

2.I am completely disappointed /upset to find……

3.I am writing to inform you of my unhappy experience

4.I would like to draw your attention to……(我希望你們能注意……)

5.I would very much appreciate it if you would……(如能……,我將不勝感激)

6.I should be very obliged if you would look into this matter as soon as possible.(如果您能盡快調查此事，我將不勝感激)

7.To improve the situation/ solve the above problem ,it is advisable for you to take the following measures:……(為了解決以上問題,建議您采取以下措施)

8.I am looking forward to an early reply.9.I would like to see a prompt settlement of the issue.(期待此事的盡快解決)

10.We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.(我們真的希望你們能對損失作出補償。)

建議信(A Letter of Suggestion)

1.I am writing to express my views concerning……

2.You have asked me for my advice about……,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.(對于你來信問我關于……的事，現提供幾條建議)

3.I would like to suggest that ……

4.I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning……

5.It’s my great honor to recommend ……,a worthy candidate for…….(我很榮幸地推薦……作為候選人)

6.Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks.(請仔細考慮我的建議，謝謝。)

7.Thank you for your attention.(就你對此事的關注不勝感激)

邀請信(A Letter of Invitation)

1.I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on ……(我代表我系全體學生邀請您為我們就……進行講座)

2.I am writing on behalf of all the members of our club to extend to you our formal invitation to visit ……

3.We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on……

4.The honor of your presence is requested...（若你能出席……，我（們）將感到萬分榮幸。）

5.It's a pleasure for me to invite you to...（我很榮幸地邀請你參加……）。

6.Please kindly confirm that you will be able to attend the meeting by advising us of

your time and we can arrange for you to be met.7.I will cover all the expense involved.（我將負擔所有的費用。）

拒絕信（A Letter of refusal）

1.many thanks for your letter dated 10th October ,inviting me to …….I amsorry to tell you that I shall not ……because……

2.I am terribly sorry to say that I am unable to ……

3.Thank you for inviting me to the meeting,I 'd like to go very much,but it is pity that I am so busy with my work for the moment and I cannot go.4.I am much touched by your kind invitation but I do not see any chance of my being able to be there in the near future.5.Thank you for your interest to pursue a career with our company.We were impressed that you chose our company to enhance your career potential.While we were convinced that you could make a contribution to our company, we have not identified a suitable position that fits your experience and qualifications.Your application will be retained for our future consideration.申請信（A Letter of Application）

1.I amwriting to you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of ……which you advertised in Yesterday’s China Daily.(我寫信想表達我對你們在昨日中國日報上刊登廣告中所說職位的濃厚興趣)

2.In reply to your advertisement in……,I beg to apply for the post of……in your company.3.I would like to apply for the position of……(我想申請……)

4.I would like to apply for the scholarship(獎學金)that your school may be offering.the membership of your club(會員資格)

5.I am very glad to avail myself of the chance to recommend myself to you.my name is …….I’m studying in……,majoring in……(非常榮幸利用這個機會向你推薦我自己)

6.I graduated from……university in ……,majoring in……

7.I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.(我相信我的專業知識能讓我勝任這份工作)

8.The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interested me.(貴公司目前從事的這種工作特別讓我感興趣)

9.It seems to me that this experience,together with my education,has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of ……in a firm such as yours.(對我來說，這些經驗加上我的學歷，使我具備了擔任貴公司……一職的條件)

10.Would you please send me the necessary application form and any further details about……

11.I am available for an interview at any time.(隨時恭候面試)

12.I request an interview,and assure you that if appointed,I will do my best to give you

satisfaction.(懇請惠予面試之榮。如蒙錄用，本人必竭盡全力，為公司服務，以符厚望。)

13.Should this application meet with your favorable consideration,I will do my utmost to justify the confidence you repose in me.（對此申請，貴公司如惠予考慮，本人必竭盡全力，為公司效勞）

回信開頭：

1.Thank you for your letter of November 29,telling me that……

2.It’s good to hear from you and know that……

3.Thank you for the information about……

4.I’m sorry that it has taken me so long to replyin answering……

5.I’m very delighted to receive your letter dated November 29,but sorry to hear ……

6.Thanks very much for your kind invitation.I feel quite honored that someone noticed me.I'd be delighted to accept the invitation.[示例]

June 18th, 2009 Dear Sir or Madam，I'm a Chinese student who will graduate from college in the coming July and wishes to study for M.A.degree in your university.my plan is to start mycourse next term and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with the information below.First, what are the qualifications neededfor studying as a postgraduate student in your university? I'm going to take bachelor's degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if they'reany furtheracademic requirements.Do I need to take the GRE test? Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I wonder if there are any scholarships available for the international students.Third, what about the accommodation? I would prefera single room, which is more conducive to studying.But if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share.,I'm looking forward to your early reply, and to attending your prestigious institution.Sincerely yours,Li Ming

第五篇：英語四級作文書信

2002年1月份四級作文范文KK版

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假設你是李明，請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內容應涉及食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環境、服務等，可以是表揚，可以是批評建議，也可以兼而有之。

分析：這篇作文為典型的信件應用文，中文提示部分指出可以寫成表揚，也可以寫成批評建議，也可以兼而有之。這里建議大家在寫作時以批評建議為主，加上少部分的贊揚來寫作，因為對于食堂服務這種大眾經常詬病的話題寫批評建議更加有話可說。因此這篇文章可以當成投訴建議信來處理。

文章格式：正文三段式。但是請注意英文信件的格式，首先在信件左上角寫上收信人是誰，這篇文章的收信人是校長，所以寫Dear Mr.President。如果當你不知道收信人是誰的時候，可以寫Dear Sir or Madam，或者寫成To whom it may concern。在正文結束之后，請在右下角寫上落款Yours sincerely，Li Ming（注意要寫成兩行）正文部分：

第一段：信件作文的第一段可以寫成2句。第一句表明身份，說明自己是誰，第二句說明自己的寫信目的。

第二段：提出你認為的餐廳不好的地方和好的地方。在寫作時可以就食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環境、服務等方面構思。第三段：希望對方重視你提出的問題，并且期待對方回信。Dear Mr.President，My name is Li Ming and I major in Economics.I venture to write this letter because I am not content with the canteen service on campus.(注：這里是學生寫給校長可以用I venture to write this letter，口氣比較謙卑，也可以直接使用I am wrting to來表示寫作目的)Although the canteen workers are very patient and always friendly，students are complaining about the unsatisdying service of it.(注：此句為二段主題句)To begiin with, the quality of the dishes should be improved due to the fact that all the dishes available are the same all the year round.What is more, the price is always too high so we hope that the canteen can provide us with not only deletable but also cheaper food.Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood.I suggest that there should be some soft

music to help us relax.These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of many other students.We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to hearing from you.sincerely，Liming

Yours