第一篇：全國高考英語滿分作文賞析（寫寫幫推薦）

一.用詞準確;表達地道

【北京卷】

【試題回放】

【名師點評】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。二.非謂語動詞為作文添彩

【北京卷】

【試題回放】情景作文

假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區植樹，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

注意：詞數不少于60

提示詞：郊區 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】

本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

【北京卷】

【試題回放】開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】

本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。三.復合句為寫作增色

【全國卷】

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假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

1、自我介紹;

2、祝賀蘇琳生日;

3、感謝工作人員;

4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

注意：

1、詞數100左右;

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

3、開頭語已為你寫好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua

【名師點評】本文寫作的內容要點如下：

1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結尾。

這封信格式正確，行文規范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

【全國卷II】【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預定。

注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB 100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：

自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現你的真實情況。

3.詞數100左右。

4.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名師點評]

本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。

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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈

好句1.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。

四.結構清晰,句式準確

【江蘇卷】

【試題回放】

2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。

教育部倡導學生：

u 每天鍛煉一小時

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一輩子

請你根據以上提示，用英語準備一份發言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、發言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發揮。

2、詞數：120左右。發言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點評】

本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發表觀點，典型的作文結構。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復雜的句式是本文的特點之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發動2.aim v.瞄準3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。

評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態動詞。

好句2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學習成績就不會很好。

評析：虛擬語氣。

第二篇：全國高考英語滿分作文賞析

李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中

一.用詞準確;表達地道

【北京卷】

【試題回放】

李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中

【名師點評】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。二.非謂語動詞為作文添彩

【北京卷】

【試題回放】情景作文

假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區植樹，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

注意：詞數不少于60

提示詞：郊區 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】

本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

【北京卷】

【試題回放】開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】

本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。三.復合句為寫作增色

【全國卷】

【試題回放】

假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中

1、自我介紹;

2、祝賀蘇琳生日;

3、感謝工作人員;

4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

注意：

1、詞數100左右;

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

3、開頭語已為你寫好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua

【名師點評】本文寫作的內容要點如下：

1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結尾。

這封信格式正確，行文規范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

【全國卷II】【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預定。

注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中

【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：

自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現你的真實情況。

3.詞數100左右。

4.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名師點評]

本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。

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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈

好句1.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!

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好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。

四.結構清晰,句式準確

【江蘇卷】

【試題回放】

2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。

教育部倡導學生：

u 每天鍛煉一小時

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一輩子

請你根據以上提示，用英語準備一份發言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、發言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發揮。

2、詞數：120左右。發言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點評】

本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發表觀點，典型的作文結構。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復雜的句式是本文的特點之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發動2.aim v.瞄準3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。

評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態動詞。

好句2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學習成績就不會很好。

評析：虛擬語氣。

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1、這山望著那山高 The grass is always greener on the other hill.人都是這山望著那山高，對自己的狀況沒有滿意的時候。

Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other hill.They never feel satisfied with what they’ve already got.2、上癮get into one’s blood

說來也怪，很多不好的事往往會使人上癮。

It’s astoundingly funny that many harmful things usually get into our blood.3、發牢騷 beef 他坐在那里什么事也不干，總是發牢騷，真煩死人。

I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but beefing.4、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱們快點吧，孩子們都等不及了。

Let’s shake the leg.The kids are champing at the bit.5、點頭哈腰bow and scrape 從她在老板前點頭哈腰地那個模樣，你就知道她是個什么人了。

From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she is.6、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對他的話不要太在意了，他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。

Don’t take what he says so seriously.He’s always going gaga.李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中

7、說話不算數go back on one’s words 他那個人說話從不算數,我們可不能依靠他。

We cannot account on him.He always goes back on his words.8、廢話連篇beat one’s gums 誰喜歡坐在那里聽你的廢話連篇？

Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?

9、恩將仇報 bite the hand that feeds one 你難道不知道她是個恩將仇報的人？

Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?

10、不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你，我可不忍心把孩子們就在家里沒人照看

If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared for.11、勤快an eager beaver 他特別勤快，從來沒有閑著的時候。

He’s an eager beaver, never staying idle

第三篇：全國高考英語滿分作文賞析

嘉興英語教學網收集整理 歡迎使用

一.用詞準確;表達地道

【北京卷】【試題回放】第一節情景作文(20分)

美國中學生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經協商安排住在你家。假設你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好。2.詞數不少于60。

Dear Jeff,I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes,Li Hua

[名師點評]

這篇文章的特點還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內容充實而豐富，結構緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。

【安徽卷】【試題回放】

假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：

l 表示贊成。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。l 簡要說明理由。

注意：1.詞數100左右。2.新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

3.適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。4.參考欄目：欄目—columnDear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

【名師點評】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

二.非謂語動詞為作文添彩

【北京卷】【試題回放】情景作文

假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區植樹，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

注意：詞數不少于60提示詞：郊區 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】

本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

【北京卷】【試題回放】開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】

本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。

三.復合句為寫作增色

【全國卷】【試題回放】

假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

1、自我介紹;

2、祝賀蘇琳生日;

3、感謝工作人員;

4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

注意：

1、詞數100左右;

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

3、開頭語已為你寫好。例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly, Li Hua 【名師點評】本文寫作的內容要點如下： 1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結尾。

這封信格式正確，行文規范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

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好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

【全國卷II】【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預定。注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

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好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【重慶卷】【試題回放】

據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現你的真實情況。

3.詞數100左右。

4.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Amy,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours,Li Hua

[名師點評]

本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。

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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈

好句1.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

好處：which引導限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。

四.結構清晰,句式準確

【江蘇卷】【試題回放】

2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。

教育部倡導學生：

u 每天鍛煉一小時

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一輩子

請你根據以上提示，用英語準備一份發言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、發言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發揮。

2、詞數：120左右。發言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點評】

本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發表觀點，典型的作文結構。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復雜的句式是本文的特點之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發動2.aim v.瞄準3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。

評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態動詞。

好句2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學習成績就不會很好。

評析：虛擬語氣。

第四篇：2015年高考英語滿分作文賞析

2015年高考英語滿分作文賞析

一.用詞準確;表達地道

【北京卷高考英語】

【試題回放】

第一節情景作文(20分)

美國中學生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經協商安排住在你家。假設你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好。

2.詞數不少于60。

Dear Jeff，I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes，Li Hua

[名師點評]

這篇文章的特點還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內容充實而豐富，結構緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。

【安徽卷高考英語】【試題回放】

假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：

l 表示贊成。

l 提出你喜歡的欄目。

l 簡要說明理由。

注意：

1.詞數100左右。

2.新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

3.適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

4.參考欄目：欄目—column

Dear Mr.Green，I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully，Li Hua

【名師點評】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

二.非謂語動詞為作文添彩

【北京卷高考英語】

【試題回放】情景作文

假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區植樹，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

注意：詞數不少于60

提示詞：郊區 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】

本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

【北京卷高考英語】

【試題回放】開放作文

請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】

本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。

三.復合句為寫作增色

【全國卷高考英語】

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假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

1、自我介紹;

2、祝賀蘇琳生日;

3、感謝工作人員;

4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

注意：

1、詞數100左右;

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

3、開頭語已為你寫好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua

【名師點評】本文寫作的內容要點如下：

1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結尾。

這封信格式正確，行文規范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

【高考英語全國卷II】【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預定。

注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【重慶卷高考英語】

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據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：

自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現你的真實情況。

3.詞數100左右。

4.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名師點評]

本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。

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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈

好句1.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

好處：which引導限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。

四.結構清晰,句式準確

【江蘇卷高考英語】

【試題回放】 2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。

教育部倡導學生：

u 每天鍛煉一小時

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一輩子

請你根據以上提示，用英語準備一份發言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、發言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發揮。

2、詞數：120左右。發言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點評】

本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發表觀點，典型的作文結構。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復雜的句式是本文的特點之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發動2.aim v.瞄準3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。

評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態動詞。

好句2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學習成績就不會很好。

評析：虛擬語氣。

第五篇：高考英語滿分作文賞析S

高考英語滿分作文賞析

高考英語滿分作文

作文題目

假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.詞數：100左右：

2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a flat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,Li Hua

Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

Dear Bob,How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you’ll like it.If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua

作文：

Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I’ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know.I’ll try my best to help you.Yours,Li Hua

高考英語作文 浙江卷：滿分范文一

在英語課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時只用英語，還是英語、漢語兼用？某英語雜志社就此話題邀請中學生發表看法。請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English, or in both English and Chinese?”這個問題，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文。

授課形式一：只用英語

優點：有助于提高聽說能力等

缺憾：不易聽懂等

結論：??授課形式二：英語、漢語兼用

優點：易于理解等

缺憾：英語氛圍不濃等

結論：??

注意：詞數100~120，短文開頭已給出(不計詞數)。

參考詞匯：atmosphere氛圍。

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage.That will be good for us.However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong.Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes.It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.