第一篇：大學英語四六級寫作講稿

大學英語四六級寫作講稿

一.四六級作文測試基本要求及分析 1． 四級考試寫作要求：

《大學英語教學大綱》和《大學英語課程教學基本要求》都對培養學生的英語寫作能力做了明確規定，即學生能在半小時內完成120字左右的短文，包括書信等應用問題寫作，要求文理基本通順，表達思想清楚，無重大語法錯誤。通過分析歷年的真題，我們不難發現：英語作文考查的類型基本包括議論文(一般為三段論式的論說文字)，說明文(目前側重于這方面的寫作訓練)，圖表作文(要求描述性的語言要貼近圖表信息，真實反映語言水平)和應用文寫作(包括書信、便條、通知、海報

等)。2．近年四級寫作改革變化追蹤 2005．6

In Honour of Teachers on the Occasion of Teacher’s Day（演講致辭型）2005．12

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?（議論文）

2006．6

An announcement for a voluntary program（應用文）

2006．1CCTV Spring Festival Gala（議論文）

2007．6

Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?（議論文）2007．12

Elective courses to choose（議論文）

2008．6

Recreational activities（議論文）

從上面的題目變化趨勢看，描述現象、分析原因、個人看法仍是四、六級考試寫作部分主要考查的重點，在今后相當長的時間內，英語寫作教學和輔導的主要突破口應集中在說明文、議論文和應用文上

此外，仔細研究06年6月24日以后的四級試卷，我們還可發現，新四級的寫作題目與校園生活密切相關，學生普遍感覺親切，體裁包括兩篇議論文，一篇應用文。不僅如此，新四級寫作題中提供的文章框架清晰，思路比較明確，絕大多數考生都能利用“經典句型”或“萬能模板”寫出及格的作文。盡管新四級前兩次都考查了議論文，但這并不能說明寫作的重心有任何偏移。根據考試改革方案和課程教學要求的相關規定，應用文寫作、說明文和議論文仍將是新四級作文的主

攻方向。3．時間配置：

30分鐘

1）審題（3分鐘）： 2）寫作（25分鐘）： 3）檢查（2分鐘）：語法（時態、冠詞、主謂一致）、拼寫、標點

4．具體要求：

1）語言第一位：表達通順、無重大語言錯誤

（1）基礎一般：簡單原則、安全

第一（“平淡如水”、“簡潔就是美”、“絢爛之極，歸于平淡“，“與其寫一個錯誤的復雜句，不

如寫一個正確的簡單句。”（2）基礎較好：句子結構詞多變 2）結構第二位：（1）邏輯性：

A.并列：and/or/but B.因果：because/in that, since/as, for C.轉折：but/however（2）關聯詞：

3）內容第三位

二．四級寫作高分策略

新四級考試并沒有改變對寫作的測試標準和要求，但在出題順序上卻做了明顯的調整：寫作作為第一項考查的內容，被提到新四級試卷的最開頭，這令許多考生感覺不適應，部分網友甚至認為這是在折騰考生。其實，提高寫作能力雖然較難，但寫作教學卻是一片大有可為的沃土。在過去十多年的英語寫作輔導中，筆者堅持認為：考生如果堅持做到如下幾點，就不難在規定的時間內寫出一篇成功的英語作文。1．制造語言亮點

A.嘗試使用中高級詞匯替代低級詞匯（主要是形容詞和副詞）

Good results-----favorable results Bad effects-------negative effects Big changes------great changes;

(Data)show that-----indicate;demonstrate Important--------significant;crucial;vital More and more(problems等名詞)-------an increasing number of(problems)

More and more(important等形容詞或副詞)-------increasingly(important)All kinds of--------a variety of Many-----------a number of Deal with-------tackle

Possible--------likely(可用人或討論的問題做主語)B．英語四六級考試寫作30個最經典替換詞 1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad 如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter替換thing 8: shared代 common 9.reap huge fruits替換get many benefits)10:for my part ,from my own perspective替換 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing替換more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything,或little or nothing替換hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替換customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely替換very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in 18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth替換..reasons for sth 23.desire替換want.24.pour attention into替換pay attention to 25.bear in mind that替換remember 26.enjoy, possess替換have(注意process是過程的意思)27.interaction替換communication 28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance 30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible C.幾個不能隨意使用的詞

“good”,”bad”,”terrible”,”something”這幾個詞在學生作文中反復出現。這幾個詞本身并沒有問題，是英語常用詞，但是，很多情況下，應該使用意義更準確的詞。學生使用這幾個詞是因為懶惰，詞匯量貧乏或者是缺乏修改。

四、六級作文要求的字數很少，一個意思只能用一個句子表達，句子里的關鍵詞就要力求準確。good 原稿： Sports are definitely good for mental health.改后稿： Sports are beneficial to one’s mental health.原稿： Travelers can meet with people form other parts of the world and may develop a good relationship.改后稿： Travelers are able to make friends with people all over the world.bad 原稿：Some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people's health.改后稿： Fake goods can be dangerous to one’s health.terrible

原稿：Nowadays, the city has a lot of problems, terrible traffic, polluted air, too much noises, etc.改后稿： Today, many cities suffer from traffic congestion and air and noise pollution.something 原稿： There is something more important and that money can’t buy, for example, love.改后稿： There are more important things than money such as love.原稿：It means that people can master something perfectly by practicing it.改后稿：The meaning is that with constant practice, you can master what you set out to.2.捕獲閃光詞

基本表達(Basic Elements of English Writing)：

越來越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 人們認為：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that 許多問題：a host of/a number of problems 引起人們注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意識到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb.to the fact/danger 適應新的形勢/變化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change 接觸各種思想/經歷：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems 接觸社會：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society 獲得成功：achieve/accomplish success 提出觀點/建議：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions 作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)影響學習/工作：interfere with studies/work 產生影響：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on 較好地駕馭生活：be a better pilot of one's life 剝奪機會/權力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity 取代舊的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way 采取措施：take effective steps/measures to 控制我們的環境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment 躲避危險/挑戰：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge 滿足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of 補償損失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage 解釋某現象：account for/explain the phenomenon 對……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into 把某因素考慮進去：take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to 品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth 培養對……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in 經歷變化/困難/艱險：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience 表現出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image 生活充滿不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice 追求學習/職業：pursue one's academic interest/professional career 學習知識/技術：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill 被看作學習的……榜樣：be held up as a good example 交流經驗/知識：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge 發揮/起到重要作用：play an(important/active/great)role/part 逃學/缺課：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture 知識/經驗豐富：rich in knowledge/experience 確立/追求目標：set/pursue a goal/higher standard 到達目標：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective 克服困難：overcome obstacles/difficulty 面臨危險/困難：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty 阻礙了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth 阻礙了發展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of 持傳統的看法：hold conventional wisdom 發表看法：voice/express one's opinion 持相反/合理的觀點：take the opposite/fresh view 揭穿某種一貫的說法：shatter the myth of 求得幫助：enlist one's support/help 縮小差別：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf(between city and country)把成功/錯誤歸咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to 對……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to 施加壓力：put/exert a academic pressure on 重視：assign/attach much importance/significance to 強調：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on 把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon 提供機會/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住機會：grab/seize/take the opportunity 得到機會：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information 有可能：there is(little/much)possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that 展開競爭：compete against/with sb.for the prize/position/control/the mastery of 開展運動：conduct(carry on/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)對我很有/沒有什么意義：make much/little sense to me 帶來無窮的幸福/滿足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint 獻身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career 大不（沒什么）兩樣：make much(little/no)difference 真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …

改變生活旅程：change/alter the course of life 建立在大量的學習/實踐上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice 進行調查/執行任務：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment 辭去工作/學習：leave/quit one's job/work/school 參加考試/競賽等：enter(for)the examination/contest, race 參加活動/討論：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion 影響思想/態度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude 進入大學/社會/家庭/勞力市場/職業：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals 實現自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)減輕壓力/緊張：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension 提高社會地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership 提高技術/能力：sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one's skill/ability 加快/促進發展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of 隨著生活節奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society 開闊眼界/興趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge)one's mental horizons 有助于了解/發展/宣傳/解決：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of 有助于解決問題：go a long way to(towards)solving the problem 迷戀名利/分數：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune 把時間花/浪費在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用機會/技術：make(full/better)use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent 把知識/經驗運用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use 取得進步：make much progress/strides/gains in 充分發揮潛力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability 充滿激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion fo

第二篇：大學英語四六級短文寫作

大學英語四六級短文寫作

（一）對立觀點型

Should Firecrackers Be Banned?

（1）

setting off firecrackersit festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless.suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.be done by banning firecrackers from public places.In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.(2)

setting off firecrackers an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved.They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.Without firecrackers, festivals would become cold and cheerless.banned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.Besides, they maintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and resources.firecrackers

（二）解決問題型

3.My View on Fake Commodities quality and the like.’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even lives.the production and sale of fake goods cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful producers.the destruction of fake commodities means a grievous waste of the nation’s resources.the identifying and refusing sub-standard commodities.（三）諺語警句型

4.Haste Makes Waste “Haste makes waste”by step.Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process.One should make full preparations before beginning any task.Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way.Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions.(或fable goes that a farm tried to help the shoots grow by pulling them upward, only to find that they ’s and 1960’s.At that time, the Chinese people were so eager to develop their economy that they took some improper measures, only to hinder the expansion of economy.)

(或the age of 11 or 12, I began to learn to ride.Eager to ride as well as others, I started by sitting on the saddle at the very beginning.Predictably, I often fell from over the bike.Lots of time had been wasted before I realized that I should do it step by step.I tried to slide by standing on one pedal.Then I began to ride the bike from under the cross bar.Finally, I succeeded.)and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step.And remember, Rome was not built in a day.（四）圖表圖畫型

5.Changes in the Ownership of Houses in China

1950’s to 20% in 1990’s, that of private houses has from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.purchased houses in their own favor.（五）應用寫作型

6.A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

January 12th, 2002 the canteen on campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students' supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore,Li Ming

以上是經典范文，下面是通句，完全可以背下來直接用，寫作時可以節省很多時間

1）先背3個句子Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(講重要性)The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life.On the one hand …, But on the other hand.（講影響）

3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（結尾段）

Ps:靈活運用第1句和第2句，根據不同模板自由組合。

2）模板（2個模板）開頭段：先講重要性，然后轉講不好的地方。

中間段：措施

結尾段：先來個小轉折再進入總結

開頭段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.However, what worries most of us is that…… 中間段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……

結尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.開頭段：先講重要性，然后轉講爭論

中間段：轉折(即列出兩種不同人的觀點)

結尾段：直接進入總結（即你的觀點）

開頭段：It is accepted that ….Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of…..However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.中間段：On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..On the other hand, a great many people insist that….結尾段：From my perspective, however….(你的觀點).Therefore, it’s time that(措施之類的)

6級作文萬能句子（補充在”…..”里面的萬能句子，自己琢磨每個句子放在哪里比較適合）重點背：1）5）6）7）句子，最好全部都被過一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。

1）Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.....能讓我們的生活更美好，也就是說，....可以給我們枯燥的生活帶來色彩

2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives

and the source of their happiness and contentment 對于很多人來說，學習一門新技術占據了他們的生活和充實了他們的生活。

3）......, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.......占據了某人大部分時間，使得某人沒空想東想西（充實了某人生活）

4）What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校為學生省去了不少時間，這樣學生可以把更多的時間用在學習上

5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一點一滴，這樣做可以豐富我們的知識和拓寬我們的視野

6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.對于想過一種有意義的人來說，抽空學習一門新技術很重要

7）The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼職可以讓學生們學習個人技巧，這樣可以在找工作時更有競爭力

8）By taking a major-related part-time job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.學生不僅可以提高學習成績，還可以獲得在課本上學不到的工作經驗

9）Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.10）1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么東西可帶來好影響 2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么東西可帶來不好的影響

11）sth is a queer thing.It brings you great gifts with one hand, but it stabs you at the backwith the other.(將兩方面的利弊轉折句，相當喜歡這句啊！呵呵）

第三篇：大學英語四六級寫作(辯論式)

大學英語四六級寫作模板——辯論式議論文

模版1

Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 觀點1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 論據1.More importantly, 論據2.Most important of all, 論據3.In summary, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預測.模版2

People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1, while others point out that 觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 論據1.For another, 論據2.Last but not the least, 論據3.To conclude, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預測.模版3

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（爭論的焦點）。Some people are of the view that 觀點1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 論據1。

Furthermore, 論據2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預測.

第四篇：大學英語四六級寫作：圖表式作文

大學英語四六級寫作模板：圖表式作文

It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一個原因).More importantly, …(第二個原因).Most important of all, …(第三個原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).（范文參見《四級考試作文題型及范文》）

第五篇：大學英語四六級作文

一、2010上海世博會

The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.二、如何做一個可愛的上海人

How To Be A Lovely Citizen Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.三、考證熱

1)近幾年大學校園內出現“考證熱” 2)產生這一現象的原因

3)你的看法 【行文思路】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析產生這種現象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述近幾年大學校園內的“考證熱”;分析越來越多的大學生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述“我”對大學生“考證熱”的看法。

Certificate Craze on Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe.Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability.In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability.Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time.To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點點評】

[1]祈使句使用恰當。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機地”。

[2]限定詞使用恰當，使文章表達更嚴謹，增強了說服力。

[3]that引導同位語從句，修飾the idea。

[4]設問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[5]強調句型，此處是強調主語。

[6]which引導非限制性定語從句，充當介詞賓語。

[7]用于引出“我”的觀點。

[8]“當談到或提及…時”。

[9]since引導原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。

[10]“只是，僅僅”。“而不是”。

【佳句臨摩】

1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.臨摩：我認為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。

四、追求名牌

1)現在很多大學生都喜歡追求名牌

2)產生這種現象的原因是什么

3)你如何看待這一現象

【行文思路】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析產生這種現象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。

根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述目前熱衷于大學生追求名牌的現象;分析大學生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述“我”對大學生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands.From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well.This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.They expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點點評】

[1]“有…傾向”。

[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。

[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引導非限制性定語從句。

[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。

[7]“遠遠超出他們的消費能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。

[8]強調句型，此處是強調主語。not…but連接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

【佳句臨摹】

1.佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.臨摹：對大學生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。

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2.佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.臨摹：在世界上或許沒有什么游戲像賭博

像賭博的那么有害和危險了，它經常會導致一個人破產，還會玷污人的心靈。

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3.佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.臨摹：很多同學經常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。

五、助學貸款申請信 1)簡單介紹個人情況

2)說明申請助學貸款的原因、數額

3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心

【行文思路】

本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學貸款;說明申請助學貸款的原因、數額;保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008

To whom it may concern，I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics.I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours，Song Xue 【亮點點評】

[1]“主修…”，現在分詞作伴隨狀語。

[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。

[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。

[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。

[5]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結構。

[6]“我保證…”，that引導同位語從句。

[7]“不遺余力”。

【佳句臨摩】

1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.臨摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機都從大海上離奇消失了。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.臨摩：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.臨摩：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運會。