第一篇：大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文

第一類：問題解決型，如環(huán)境污染，大學(xué)生是否該兼職，大量使用塑料袋等

1、提出問題

2、分析原因或說明弊端

3、解決問題（歸納總結(jié)，預(yù)測趨勢，建議措施）

第一段好一點(diǎn)的開頭語句：

Nowadaypeople’focusisattractedonthe issueof……

/Nowadaypeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningrelizethat……/Nowadayit is widelyacknowledgedthat……

第二段好一點(diǎn)的開頭語句：

Thereason for this is not far toseek.First…….Second…….Third……/There are serveal reasons/elements/factors/causeseatedas follow…… 接下來寫原因或者好處如以下語句可以用

Oneof the benefits is that…….But it has a hamful effect on on……

/The significant benfit/harm is……（注：此句中significant就是important的意思，四六級寫作中禁用significant，因?yàn)槟莻€(gè)詞太低端的，沒有得分點(diǎn)。同理也禁用People）

第一段好三點(diǎn)的開頭語句：

Based on the above statements/From what we have discussed/Judging from the

above evidence.We can predict the tendency that……/We may safely draw a conclusion that……

建議結(jié)尾：

Evidenced, it is high time that we took measure toslove this issue /problem/Immediate measures must be taken before it getstoo serious/late

第二類：正反觀點(diǎn)型

第一段觀點(diǎn)A

When asked about……/When to comes ^/faced with…………many people believe

that ……,they think/hold/argue/claim/maintain/advocate………………

/When it comes to ^people’s opinions differ.Some hokd the opinion that……….There is ageneral discussion today about the issue of………….These who advocate…………argue that…………

第二段：

while others think /believe …………

三段：

Weighting the pros and cons of this arguments,I am inclined to agree the former/latter point of view that…………

/In my ipinion /To my mind /As for me.Ihold a balance view /a combination of the two is a better choice.…………

第二篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文高分攻略

◆淚眼問花花不語，亂紅飛過秋千去。---歐陽修《蝶戀花》 ◆侯門一入深似海，從此蕭郎是路人。---崔郊《贈(zèng)婢》 ◆從此無心愛良夜，任他明月下西樓。---李益《寫情》 ◆曾經(jīng)滄海難為水，除卻巫山不是云。---元稹《離思》 ◆惟將終夜長開眼，報(bào)答平生未展眉。---元稹《遣悲懷》

◆秋風(fēng)清，秋月明。落葉聚還散，寒鴉棲復(fù)驚。相思相見知何日，此時(shí)此夜難為情。---李白《秋風(fēng)詞》

◆試問閑愁都幾許，一川煙草，滿城風(fēng)絮，梅子黃時(shí)雨。---賀鑄《青玉案》 ◆斷無蜂蝶慕幽香，紅衣脫盡芳心苦。---賀鑄《踏莎行》

◆彩袖殷勤捧玉鐘，當(dāng)年拼卻醉顏紅。舞低楊柳樓心月，歌盡桃花扇底風(fēng)。從別后，憶相逢，幾回魂夢與君同。---晏幾道《鷓鴣天》

◆落花人獨(dú)立，微雨燕雙飛。當(dāng)時(shí)明月在，曾照彩云歸。---晏幾道《臨江仙》 ◆獨(dú)思一夜情多少，地角天涯不是長。---張仲素《燕子樓》 ◆憑杖飛魂招楚些，我思君處君思我。---蘇軾《蝶戀花》

◆十年生死兩茫茫。不思量，自難忘，相顧無言，惟有淚千行。---蘇軾《江城子》 ◆直道相思了無益，未妨惆悵是清狂。---李商隱《無題》 ◆身無彩鳳雙飛翼，心有靈犀一點(diǎn)通。---李商隱《無題》 ◆嫦娥應(yīng)悔偷靈藥，碧海青天夜夜心。---李商隱《嫦娥》 ◆傷心橋下春波綠，曾是驚鴻照影來。---陸游《沈園》

◆昨夜西風(fēng)凋碧樹,獨(dú)上高樓,望盡天涯路.欲寄彩箋兼尺素,山長水闊知何處.---晏殊《蝶戀花》 ◆亂山千疊橫江，憶君游倦何方。知否小窗紅燭，照人此夜凄涼。---納蘭性德《清平樂》

◆回廊一寸相思地，落月成孤倚。背燈和月就花陰，已是十年蹤跡十年心。---納蘭性德《虞美人》

◆又到舊時(shí)明月路，袖口香寒，心比秋蓮苦。---納蘭性德《蝶戀花》 ◆為君沉醉又何妨，只怕酒醒時(shí)候斷人腸。---秦觀《虞美人》 ◆一登樓，便作春江都是淚，流不盡，許多愁。---秦觀《江城子》

◆上邪，我欲與君相知，長命無絕衰。山無棱，江水為竭，冬雷震震，夏雨雪，天地合，乃敢與君絕。---《漢樂府》

◆只緣感君一回顧，使我思君朝與暮。---《漢樂府》 ◆山有木兮木有枝，心悅君兮君不知。---《越人歌》

◆死生契闊，與子成說。執(zhí)子之手，與子偕老。---《詩經(jīng)*邶風(fēng)》 ◆豈不爾思，遠(yuǎn)莫致之。女子有行，遠(yuǎn)父母兄弟。---《詩經(jīng)*衛(wèi)風(fēng)》 ◆關(guān)關(guān)雎鳩，在河之洲。窈宨淑女，君子好逑。－佚名《詩經(jīng)周南關(guān)雎》

第三篇：大學(xué)英語四六級聽力高分必備詞匯

四六級聽力必備技巧、詞匯：

短對話聽力的一些原則

挫折原則：通常要辦的事情都是不順利的(如買東西買不到，訂房間客滿等)

男女原則：一般男生比較衰，女生比較牛。男生提出的觀點(diǎn)女生都是不同意或有不同看法的，反之女生提出的觀點(diǎn)男生都是同意和贊賞的。

父母一般只有一個(gè)作用教育子女好好學(xué)習(xí)

短對話十大場景及一般思路

1.借車：車一般是借不到的2.吃：匹薩，海鮮吃了一般會有不適反應(yīng)，“派”一般比較好吃

3.考試：作業(yè)、論文一般比較難，或須要熬夜 教授一般比較嚴(yán)厲，選修課較難較多

4.坐車(飛機(jī)、輪船)：一般都需要等

5.事故(災(zāi)難)：光明原則，一般不會死人

6.聽講座：題目一般是比較有趣豐富的，內(nèi)容一般是比較復(fù)雜難懂的7.論文：一般需要修改(polish)或重寫(rewrite)

8.休閑：男生一般喜歡待在家里看TV或者看moive，女生一般喜歡高雅藝術(shù)如theater

9.醫(yī)院：需要預(yù)約make an appointment

10買票：基本上是買不到的1.學(xué)校場景

課程分類

Optional/selective course 選修課Required/compulsory course 必修課Day course 白天的課Evening course 晚上的課sign up for the course 選課 full 報(bào)滿 seminar 討論班 introductory course 初級課程advanced course 高級課程

經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的科目或?qū)I(yè)

mathematic 數(shù)學(xué)chemistry 化學(xué)Literature 文學(xué) physics物理economics 經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)psychology course 心理學(xué)sociology 社會學(xué)geology 地質(zhì)學(xué)biology 生物學(xué)science 理科

考試

Final exam 期終考試middle exam 期中考試make up 補(bǔ)考pop test 事先沒有說好的測驗(yàn)quiz 測驗(yàn)

oral test 口試 credit 學(xué)分

作業(yè)場景

homework / assignment / project家庭作業(yè)、任務(wù)、項(xiàng)目

book report 讀書報(bào)告 reading list 書單 deadline最后期限extension延期

考試臨近

draw on / in sight of / draw nearly

考試延期或取消

delay / be off / defer / hold up / postpone / put off / suspend

學(xué)校分類

public school 公立學(xué)校private school 私立學(xué)校religious school 教會學(xué)校

學(xué)校中的人

president 校長dean 院長/系主任department 系professor 教授lecturer/teacher fellow 講師tutor / mentor / director / super visor 導(dǎo)師coordinator 管理員doctor 博士master 碩士bachelor 學(xué)士freshman 大一新生sophomore 大二學(xué)生junior 大三學(xué)生senior 大四學(xué)生alumni / alumnus 校友staff 全體員工(商店、企業(yè))faculty 全體教職員工

圖書館

reference book 參考書renew續(xù)借overdue過期fine罰金attend/have a lecture上課

cut a class 逃課scholarship 榮譽(yù)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金tuition fee 學(xué)費(fèi)teaching assistant 助教periodical 期刊journal學(xué)術(shù)類期刊due到期overdue 過期librarian圖書管理員

交通運(yùn)輸場景

fare 車票license 駕照rush hours 高峰時(shí)間traffic jam 交通堵塞overtake 超車one way street 單行道over speed 超速ticket 罰單fine 罰金fast way / express way / high way 高速公路motor way 機(jī)動(dòng)車道super way 飛機(jī)機(jī)動(dòng)車道free way 免費(fèi)高速公路

交通工具(出現(xiàn)頻率從高到低)

tunnel / channel 隧道ring road 環(huán)線subway(美)/ underground(英)地鐵metro 地道地鐵

underpass人行地道overhead 輕軌flyover 人行天橋mag – lev 磁懸浮

電話場景

pay phone 公用電話telephone box/booth 電話亭yellow page 黃頁dial(撥電話號碼)/ press(按電話號碼)

extension 分機(jī)operator 總機(jī)put~through 接通credit call 記賬式電話 bill the call into the 3rd party 免費(fèi)電話collect call 對方付費(fèi)電話

機(jī)場場景

book 訂票timetable 時(shí)間表destination 目的地open ticket one way ticket 單程票round trip ticket 來回票non-stop / direct flight 直航transfer / lay over / stop over 轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)first / business / economy cabin 頭等 / 商務(wù) / 經(jīng)濟(jì) 艙confirm the flight 確認(rèn)航班check in 登記boarding card 登機(jī)牌security check 安檢see off 送行 送別

board 登機(jī)take off 起飛departure 離港safety / sect belt 安全帶land 著陸arrival 進(jìn)港pick up 接機(jī) 公司場景

job vacancy 有空缺職位letter of application 求職信resume 簡歷

resume包括幾部分

basic / personal info.基本信息/個(gè)人資料academic background 教育背景certificates and honors榮譽(yù)證書offer 聘用信ask for a raise 加錢wage 周薪salary 日薪bonus獎(jiǎng)金allowance 津貼annual income 年收入promotion 升職resign 辭職laid-off 下崗post / position / vocation / title 職務(wù)

假期休息的說法(依次是從大到小)

annual leave 年假sick leave 病假break 指喝杯茶、喝杯咖啡的短暫休息 coffee break

公司職位從大到小

chairman of the board 董事長

president--general manager—manager – department manager—head – officer – specialist(專員)--clerk

租房場景

live on campus 住校live off campus 住校外for sale 可銷售的房子for rent / lease 可出租的房子to let 可出租的房子utilities 公用事業(yè)費(fèi)location 位置suburb / downtown 市郊 / 市中心

condition 住房條件furnished 配家具unfurnished 無裝修leaking 漏水blackout 斷電

land lord 房東land lady 房東太太tenant 房客 好的室友：neat 整潔的 considerate 體貼的，細(xì)心的不好的室友：messy / untidy 臟亂的 noisy 吵鬧的醫(yī)院場景

surgeon 外科醫(yī)生health center / clinic 衛(wèi)生所 / 門診部physician 內(nèi)科醫(yī)生 surgeon 外科醫(yī)生dentist 牙醫(yī)make an appointment 預(yù)約emergency 急診check up / exam 檢查

cold(感冒)—— flu(流感)—— headache(頭痛)—— sore throat(嗓子痛)——

fever(發(fā)燒)—— toothache(牙疼)—— stomachache(胃疼)

prescribe/prescription 開藥方pill / tablet 藥片liquid 喝藥水 injection => shot 注射operation 手術(shù)medical result 診斷結(jié)果

8.賓館場景

make a reservation 預(yù)訂房間confirm a reservation 確認(rèn)預(yù)訂cancel a reservation 取消預(yù)訂

fully booked / full up / full 客滿porter 行旅員tips 小費(fèi)reception 前臺check in 登記入住

single room 單人房double room 一張大床的雙人房twin room 兩張單人床的雙人房

suite 套房bathroom toilet / w.c closet restroom 廁所room service 客房服務(wù)(四級聽力中的客房服務(wù)一般只有考一種——送餐)lounge休息區(qū)lobby 大堂business center 商務(wù)中心salon 美容廳

ball 舞廳night club 夜總會check out 退房

.郵局場景

post / send / mail 寄registered mail 掛號信regular mail平信airmail 航空信parcel / package 包裹telegram / cable 電報(bào)rate 費(fèi)率overweight 超重postage 郵資forward 轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)cc(carbon copy)抄送

subject 主題attach 附件attachment

飯店場景

eat out 出去吃take away 外帶book a table 訂位子appetizer 開胃菜main course 主食dessert 餐后甜點(diǎn)bill 賬單service charge 服務(wù)費(fèi)change 找零keep the change 不用找零了Let’s split it 各付各的賬This is my treat這次我請客

銀行場景：

賬戶 account 存折bank book 開戶open an account 信用卡 credit card 存款deposit 透支overdraw 自動(dòng)提款機(jī) ATM(Automatic Teller Machine)利率interest rate銀行職員bank clerk 將支票兌換成現(xiàn)金cash the check

零星小場景：have a special/big sale大甩賣 on sale大甩賣 brand 品牌 bargain便宜貨 counter 柜臺barber’s 理發(fā)館have a haircut/have one’s hair cut 理發(fā)hairstyle 發(fā)型hairdresser美發(fā)師

干杯

Cheers/propose a toast to/bottom up

sell up 賣完，賣光 售罄sell out賣完，賣光 售罄 / 出賣朋友或原則sell off 低價(jià)處理庫存商品selling machine 自動(dòng)售貨機(jī)selling point 賣點(diǎn)count the days 渴望/數(shù)日子

關(guān)于碰見，偶遇

come across/run into/bump into

關(guān)于水

Water/running / tap ~ 自來水fresh ~ 活水still ~ 死水pure ~ 純凈水purified ~ 凈化水mineral ~ 礦泉水

關(guān)于“調(diào)查”

(Market)survey 市場調(diào)查opinion poll 名義調(diào)查民意調(diào)查questionnaire 問卷調(diào)查investigation 很正式的調(diào)查

表示同意、附和的句型

Exactly/I couldn’t agree with you more / better/

It’s my turn 輪到我了 我請客I guess so 我猜也是Out of question 毫無疑問

表示“緊張”

Tremble 發(fā)抖shake all over全身發(fā)抖get one’s tongue tied 舌頭打結(jié) have one’s mind go blank 大腦空白

? 以下詞組聽到后意思取反

?mean to 想要……planned to 原計(jì)劃…… intended to 原打算……

?tended to傾向于……used to 過去常常…… 發(fā)音相近容易混淆的詞

1)quite 相當(dāng)quiet 安靜地

2)affect v 影響, 假裝effect n 結(jié)果, 影響

3)adapt 適應(yīng)adopt 采用adept 內(nèi)行

4)angel 天使angle 角度

5)dairy 牛奶廠diary 日記

6)contend 奮斗, 斗爭 content 內(nèi)容, 滿足的 context 上下文 contest 競爭, 比賽

7)principal 校長, 主要的 principle 原則

8)implicit 含蓄的 explicit 明白的9)dessert 甜食 desert 沙漠 v 放棄 dissert 寫論文

10)pat 輕拍 tap 輕打 slap 掌擊 rap 敲，打

11)decent 正經(jīng)的 descent n 向下, 血統(tǒng) descend v 向下

12)sweet 甜的 sweat 汗水

13)later 后來 latter 后者 latest 最近的 lately adv 最近

14)costume 服裝 custom習(xí)慣

15)extensive 廣泛的 intensive 深刻的16)aural 耳的 oral 口頭的17)abroad 國外 aboard 上（船，飛機(jī)）

18)altar 祭壇 alter 改變

19)assent 同意 ascent 上升 accent 口音

20)champion 冠軍 champagne 香檳酒 campaign 戰(zhàn)役

21)baron男爵 barren 不毛之地的 barn 古倉

22)beam 梁，光束 bean 豆 beenhave 過去式

23)precede 領(lǐng)先 proceed 進(jìn)行，繼續(xù)

24)pray 祈禱 prey 獵物

25)chicken 雞 kitchen 廚房

26)monkey 猴子 donkey 驢

27)chore 家務(wù)活 chord 和弦 cord 細(xì)繩

28)cite引用 site 場所 sight 視覺

29)clash（金屬）幢擊聲 crash 碰幢，墜落 crush 壓壞

30)compliment 贊美 complement 附加物

第四篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文

一、2010上海世博會

The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.二、如何做一個(gè)可愛的上海人

How To Be A Lovely Citizen Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.三、考證熱

1)近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)“考證熱” 2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3)你的看法 【行文思路】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的“考證熱”;分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述“我”對大學(xué)生“考證熱”的看法。

Certificate Craze on Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe.Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability.In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability.Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time.To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】

[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。

[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。

[3]that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea。

[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。

[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。

[7]用于引出“我”的觀點(diǎn)。

[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。

[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。

[10]“只是，僅僅”。“而不是”。

【佳句臨摩】

1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實(shí)。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.臨摩：我認(rèn)為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。

四、追求名牌

1)現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都喜歡追求名牌

2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么

3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象

【行文思路】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象;分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述“我”對大學(xué)生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands.From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well.This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.They expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】

[1]“有…傾向”。

[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。

[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時(shí)尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。

[7]“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出他們的消費(fèi)能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。

[8]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。not…but連接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

【佳句臨摹】

1.佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.臨摹：對大學(xué)生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。

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2.佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.臨摹：在世界上或許沒有什么游戲像賭博

像賭博的那么有害和危險(xiǎn)了，它經(jīng)常會導(dǎo)致一個(gè)人破產(chǎn)，還會玷污人的心靈。

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3.佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.臨摹：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。

五、助學(xué)貸款申請信 1)簡單介紹個(gè)人情況

2)說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額

3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心

【行文思路】

本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款;說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額;保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008

To whom it may concern，I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics.I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours，Song Xue 【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】

[1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。

[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。

[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。

[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。

[5]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)。

[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。

[7]“不遺余力”。

【佳句臨摩】

1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.臨摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.臨摩：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.臨摩：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運(yùn)會。

第五篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文

大學(xué)英語語法總結(jié)之四六級作文模板tanhongjun2009

大學(xué)英語四六級作文模板

Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/… of …h(huán)as been brought into public attention.It`s shocking /…to notice that there are an increasing number of…, and it has exerted a good/great/bad influence on society.[敘述現(xiàn)象]

Obviously , It`s more difficult/…for sb to… ,and there are all sorts of reasons for this phenomenon/occurrence.First and formost ,some students claim that … it`s mainly because…

In the next place,some others maintain that…

Furthermore ,few people are more cautious about… they hold out that …

Mostimportantly , …[分析原因（正面）]

Others , however , hold a different view.they point out that …

Additionaly …[分析原因（反面）]

From my point of view , It`s of great importance for us to do sth.so that ,we should pay more attention to it , in order to gain some social experience.It`s because of the diffculties in doing sth that we should spare no effort to take measures to achieve this goal.Thus , I`am sure , it will bring about many benefits to us in the future/long run.[自我看法]

[ About 160 words] 常用句型:

A 組：好方/慣促進(jìn)無知（常用長句表達(dá)）

① be a good way of doing sth

② Make it a good habit of doing sth

③ help promote understanding and communication between …and …

④ without knowing the meaning behind them , they just do sth for …

B組：知道謝序好難同重力（To 的短語）

① as is known to all②thanks to③ in order to

④ do good to⑤take trouble to / have difficulty in doing sth

⑥ agree to/with⑦is of great importance for sb to do sth

⑧ spare no effort to do sth

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