第一篇：大學英語四六級作文

口頭作文

1、真題回顧：

1）2004－6：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guideline:

Your role: a tour guide

Your audience: a group of foreign tourists

Your introduction should include:

（1）Some welcoming words

（2）The schedule for the day

（3）A description of the place the tourists will be visiting

(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)

You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.2）2005－1：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed to write A Campaign Speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

（1）你認為自己具備了什么條件（能力、性格、愛好等）可以

勝任學生會主席的工作，（2）如果當選你將會為本校同學做什么？

2、經典范文：

1）2004－6：

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing!To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am your guide from China Travel Agency.Today I’m very glad to be your guide.It’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”.I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is the time schedule.First, the Great Wall is the major attraction in this morning.Second, having lunch nearby, we will go to visit the Summer Palace in the afternoon.This is a must!Last, after dining at Night in Beijing, it’s time to watch traditional Chinese performances.At 10 p.m., we will go back to Beijing Hotel.Next, I would like to introduce the Great Wall to you.It is called the Eighth Wonder in the world.Built 2000 years ago, the present relics are constructed in the Ming Dynasty.Hope you enjoy yourselves.2）2005－1：

Today I am very glad to run for the chairperson of the Student Union.I am junior in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.First, I am good at communicating and organizing.By the way, with my outstanding leadership, I have been elected president of our department several times.Second, I am warm-hearted and easygoing.Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate, my cheerful personality is well suited for the position.Last, my hobbies include sports and music.If I am elected, I will exert all my efforts.Firstly, I will organize suitable activities.Secondly, I will try to reach your demands as well.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend myself as an ideal candidate.I am sure you will make a wise decision in voting for me.I hope the above information will help you to know about myself.If any of you have any question/advice/recommendation for me/ need any further information, please feel free/do not hesitate to ask at any time.Thanks for your listening/attention.3）祝酒辭：

Mr.Vice President, our American friends, my colleagues, ladies and gentlemen,On behalf of all the members of our mission/delegation, I would like to express our sincere thanks to you for inviting us to such a marvelous Christmas party.We really enjoyed the delicious food and excellent wine.Also, the music was perfect.I enjoyed meeting and talking to you, and sharing the time together.As we say, well begun is half done.I hope we will be able to maintain this good relationship and make next year another great one together.Thank you again for the wonderful party.We had a great time.In closing, I would like to invite you to join me in a toast.To the health of Mr.Vice President, to all the ladies and gentlemen present here, cheers!

3、兩大原則：

1）句子寫作：

（1）句子原則：長短結合、以短句為主

（2）基本句型：

A.主謂：I succeed.B.主謂賓：I like Caicai.C.主系表：ZY is smart.D.主謂雙賓：Wei Xiaobao gave Ake an English dictionary.E.主謂賓賓補：Tulongdao makes many people selfish.（3）長句寫法：

A.并列句：and/or/but/while/whereas

B.從句：

a.定語從句：who/that/which/when/where

b.狀語從句：when/where/if/because/though

c.名詞性從句：主語、賓語、表語、同位語從句

The fact that a great many teachers are respected shows/indicates/suggests that we should repay them.What they fail to understand is that we should reciprocate out teachers.C.非謂語動詞：

a.動名詞：

b.分詞：過去分詞、現在分詞

c.不定式：

d.獨立主格：Time permitting, I will go to Beijing tomorrow.2）段落寫作：

（1）Introduction：引言/起始/淘金段，3句

A.Thesis statement：中心思想，1句

B.Background information：背景信息，2句

a.Background背景

b.Facts事實

c.Others’ opinions反方觀點

（2）Body：主體/拓展段，4句

A.Topic sentence：主題句，1句

B.Argument：論證，2句

a.Classification：分類

b.Exemplification：舉例

Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).This story tells us that….c.Cause and effect：因果

d.Comparison and contrast：比較和對比

e.Definition and explanation：定義和事實

f.Statistics and facts：統計和事實

According to the recent survey/data/figure/statistics/study by the Chinese Academy of Social Science, …%(percent)….C.Summary：小結，1句

（3）Conclusion：結論段，3句

A.Topic sentence：主題句，1句

B.Argument：論證，1句

C.Summary：小結，1句

第二篇：大學英語四六級作文

大學英語四六級作文模板

A.現象描述+原因分析+個人觀點B.現象描述+對比分析+個人觀點C．現象描述+批判觀點/支持的觀點+個人觀點D． 問題描述+問題分析+ 解決方式E、圖表式作文寫作模板

A.現象描述+原因分析+個人觀點

原因分析模塊一

Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注釋：

1、XX的第一個優點

2、支持XX的做法

3、不支持XX的做法

4、XX的第二個優點

5、舉例證明優點二

6、說明XX優點三的影響

原因分析模塊二

In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).原因分析模塊三

For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The significance for

(6).Therefore,(7).注釋：

1、人們針對XX的態度和舉措

2、歸納現狀

3、第一個原因

4、第二個原因

5、第三個原因

6、重申造成現狀的最重要原因

原因分析模塊四

These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since

(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注釋：

1、提出論題

2、說明現狀

3、理由一

4、理由二

5、理由三

6、理由三引起的后果

7、解決方法

B.現象描述+對比分析+個人觀點

一．1.關于 X的利弊2.X的優點3．X的缺點4.我的觀點

One of the controversial issues today is ____________.According to a recent survey, ___________________________.In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it.On the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that ____________________(優點一).Moreover, _________________________________(優點二).Perhaps the primary advantage is that ___________________________.(優點三)On the negative aspect, for one thing, _________________________________.(缺點一)For another, ___________________________________.(缺點二)

As far as I’m concerned, the benefits of ___________(主題)greatly outweigh its drawbacks.We should make better use of ____________(主題)and bypass its negative effects.二．A.有人認為X 是好事，贊成X，為什么？B.有人認為X 是壞事，反對X，為什么？

C.我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反對X 的第一個理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個壞處。

C．現象描述+批判觀點/支持的觀點+個人觀點

1．一個錯誤觀點。2.．我不同意。

Many people argue that 錯誤觀點。By saying that, they mean 對這個觀點的進一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。

D． 問題描述+問題分析+ 解決方式

A．一個社會問題或者現象B．產生的原因 C．對社會和我們生活的影響 D．如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)E．前景的預測。

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 調查內容說明這種現象的情況。(或者是一個例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this

problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。X has caused substantial impact on the

society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will...辯論式議論文模版

（一）Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that

觀點1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that

觀點2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,論據1.More importantly,論據2.Most important of all,論據3.In summary, 總結觀點。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或From above, we can predict that 預測。

辯論式議論文模版

（二）People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that

觀點1.While others point out that

觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,論據1.For another,論據2.Last but not the least,論據3.To conclude, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或From above, we can predict that 預測。

辯論式議論文模板

（三）There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that

觀點1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that

觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,論據1.Furthermore,論據2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,論據3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 總結觀點。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或 From above, we can predict that 預測。

E、圖表式作文寫作模板描述圖片內容+分析原因+總結結果

一．it is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of...(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are...(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,...(第一個原因).More importantly,...(第二個原因).Most important of all,...(第三個原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).二、As is shown in the graph… 如圖所示…

As can be seen from the table,… 從表格中可以看出…

All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有這些數據明顯證明這一事實,即…

The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在這個城市的增長已達到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,這個數字保持不變.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出現了逐漸下降的情況。

論說文總論：

1）第一段

現狀說明When it comes to, people’s opinions differ.Some hold the opinion that…, while others claim that…

圖表描述In1990, it increased /decreased from …to…

By comparison with 1998, it decreased/ increased by

The figure has nearly doubled, compared with/ as against that of last year.It has increased /decreasedalmost twice/six times/ two and half times.compared with

2）第二段

原因列舉There are many causes/reasons for this dramatic growth/decrease.One reason is… Another is… Perhaps the primary reason is…

駁斥Although it is widely accepted that…, I doubt/wonder whether the argument bears much analysis/ close examination

提出兩個觀點，正面論證，列舉原因；正反論證，觀點陳述

3）第三段

4）Judging from all evidence offered

There is little doubt/ no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem of …

考試應注意：

1.字跡清楚，段落明朗（clear）：字體不要太大，也不要太小，以行間距的三分之一到二分之一為合適；另外，大小要一致，不要忽大忽小；字母的傾斜方向要一致，不要東倒西歪；要抵著給出的虛線寫，不能上竄下跳；總之，要給閱卷人清楚、工整的感覺。段落一般為三段，采用段首縮進式，即每段開頭空4至8個字母的格，每段段首縮進的量要一致，要讓閱卷人一目了然。

2.內容完整，緊扣提綱（complete）：一般來說，六級寫作都會給出三點漢語提綱，考生應嚴格按照三點寫成三段。不要有遺漏，也不要隨意改變提綱要點的順序。因為閱卷人要在30秒左右的時間打出分數，所以不希望看到與提綱嚴重背離的作文。

3.首保正確，再求閃光（correct）：

4.先總后分，連詞用上（coherent）：

5.語言簡練，論據得當（concise）：另外，要敢于表達自己的思想，不要一味地為了保證語

言正確而裹步不前，只說一些小學生的話。

6.檢查。一般可以用一條斜線劃掉錯詞，然后在其上方寫出正確的7.三段式：平均每段四句話

8.提綱式作文，看把哪句話或哪兩句話作為開頭，內容等。

其它一些總結：

開頭

Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…

引出不同觀點:

People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that….However, others believe that….人們對…的觀點因人而異.有些人認為…..然而其他人卻認為．．．

All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現的新問題.提出建議:

It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).該是我們停止這一趨勢的時候了.Obviously,….If we want to do something… , it is essential that…

顯然,如果我們想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we… 只有這樣,我們才能…

預示后果:

No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…

毫無疑問,除非我們采取有效措施,很可能會…

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很緊迫的是,應立即采取措施阻止這一事態的發展.論證

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看來,支持第一種觀點比支持第二種觀點更有道理.給出原因:

列出解決辦法:

Here are some suggestions for handling… 這是如何處理某事的一些建議.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解決這些麻煩的最好辦法是…

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人們已找出許多辦法來解決這個問題.批判錯誤觀點和做法:

As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,…

It was obvious that… 很顯然,….It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是對的,但這并不意味著…

It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…

認為….是很自然的,但我們不應忽視….There is no evidence to suggest that… 沒有證據表明…

轉折詞

遞進 What is more, in addition, besides,總結 in conclusion, to a large extent（在很大程度上）,其它寫得好的模板，看看有無借鑒之處:

一、which reveals____________（稍作評價）.In my perspective of view, ____________（表明個人觀點）。

Apparently, ____________（將個人觀點和圖片內容相結合，得出觀點。）For one thing, ____________（從社會角度論證）.For another thing, ____________（從個人角度說明）.For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或聽過的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（從反面角度談論）.As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建議或措施）.Only in this way can we____________（展望結果）.In conclusion，二、It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated。

So far as I’m concerned, I’d prefer earning the scholarship.This means I must study hard and be a top student, which has always been my goal.After all, the task of a student is to study.And in addition to solving my financial problems, getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my future.As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct.

第三篇：大學英語四六級作文

Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.。。能讓我們的生活更美好，也就是說。。可以給我們枯燥的生活帶來色彩

2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 對于很多人來說，學習一門新技術占據了他們的生活和充實了他們的生活。

3）。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.。。占據了某人大部分時間，使得某人沒空想東想西（充實了某人生活）

4）What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校為學生省去了不少時間，這樣學生可以把更多的時間用在學習上

5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一點一滴，這樣做可以豐富我們的知識和拓寬我們的視野

6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.對于想過一種有意義的人來說，抽空學習一門新技術很重要

7）The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable

position in the future job markets.兼職可以讓學生們學習個人技巧，這樣可以在找工作時更有競爭力

8）By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.學生不僅可以提高學習成績，還可以獲得在課本上學不到的工作經驗

There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫無疑問,跳槽有優點也有缺點.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現的新問題.提出建議:

It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).該是我們停止這一趨勢的時候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …該是采納…的 的建議,并對…的進展給予特殊重視的時候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫無疑問,對…問題應予以足夠的重視.Only in this way can we… 只有這樣,我們才能…

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.很明顯,如果我們不能控制這一問題,很有可能我們會陷入危險.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…

毫無疑問,除非我們采取有效措施,很可能會…

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很緊迫的是,應立即采取措施阻止這一事態的發展.論證

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看來,支持第一種觀點比支持第二種觀點更有道理.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…

給出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, …

這一現象的存在是有許多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …

I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分贊同這一論述,即…,其主要原因如下:

列出解決辦法:

Here are some suggestions for handling… 這是如何處理某事的一些建議.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解決這些麻煩的最好辦法是…

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人們已找出許多辦法來解決這個問題.強調

still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially.Obviously, clearly.比較

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.對比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列舉

for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.時間

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.順序

first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.解釋

in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.遞進

What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.讓步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.轉折

however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately.whereas原因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.結果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.總結

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他

Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent（在很大程度上）, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,As is shown in the graph… 如圖所示…

The graph shows that… 圖表顯示…

As can be seen from the table,… 從表格中可以看出…

From the chart, we know that… 從這張表中,我們可知…

All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有這些數據明顯證明這一事實,即…The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在這個城市的增長已達到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,這個數字保持不變.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出現了逐漸下降的情況。

第四篇：大學英語四六級作文

大學英語語法總結之四六級作文模板tanhongjun2009

大學英語四六級作文模板

Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/… of …has been brought into public attention.It`s shocking /…to notice that there are an increasing number of…, and it has exerted a good/great/bad influence on society.[敘述現象]

Obviously , It`s more difficult/…for sb to… ,and there are all sorts of reasons for this phenomenon/occurrence.First and formost ,some students claim that … it`s mainly because…

In the next place,some others maintain that…

Furthermore ,few people are more cautious about… they hold out that …

Mostimportantly , …[分析原因（正面）]

Others , however , hold a different view.they point out that …

Additionaly …[分析原因（反面）]

From my point of view , It`s of great importance for us to do sth.so that ,we should pay more attention to it , in order to gain some social experience.It`s because of the diffculties in doing sth that we should spare no effort to take measures to achieve this goal.Thus , I`am sure , it will bring about many benefits to us in the future/long run.[自我看法]

[ About 160 words] 常用句型:

A 組：好方/慣促進無知（常用長句表達）

① be a good way of doing sth

② Make it a good habit of doing sth

③ help promote understanding and communication between …and …

④ without knowing the meaning behind them , they just do sth for …

B組：知道謝序好難同重力（To 的短語）

① as is known to all②thanks to③ in order to

④ do good to⑤take trouble to / have difficulty in doing sth

⑥ agree to/with⑦is of great importance for sb to do sth

⑧ spare no effort to do sth

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第五篇：大學英語四六級作文

大學英語四六級作文：如何寫出高分句式

一、句子開頭多樣化英語(論壇)是一種句型結構靈活多變的語言。由于拘泥于傳統語法框架，許多初學寫作的人都喜歡用名詞開頭寫句子。這樣寫倒是無可非議，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同樣結構的句子，就顯得呆板生硬，缺乏生氣了。事實上，在英語寫作中除名詞可放在句子的開頭外，許多其它詞類及詞組均可放在句子開頭的位置。

例句：Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time passes.上面這句話至少還有兩種開頭方式：

1.As time passes, women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society.2.To take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time passes.二、避免一個“I”寫到底

初學英文寫作的人的另一通病是一個“I”寫到底，句首僵硬，缺乏變化。

試讀下面這段文章：

One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well.I loved especially to grow peas.I was proud when we had them on our table.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up.I would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury them.上面這一段共用了八個“I”。當然上文若出自一個幼童筆下，倒不乏天真純樸的趣味。不妨改寫如下：

According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of peas.Having them on the table made me proud.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying them.改寫后的段落僅有三個“I”，一看就出自成人手筆。

三、注意句子的緊湊性

1.當兩個句子是圍繞著同一主題的不同方面進行說明時，可以將兩句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，從而使句子更加緊湊。這也就是省略結構所表達出的英文的緊湊性。需要注意的是兩句中形成對應關系的something要完全一致才可以省略，而且與相同成分相關的短語（主要是動詞短語中的介詞）不可以省略。另外，如果表示比較結構的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短語修飾，后面的相同成分要由代詞來置換，而不能直接將其省略。（如下面的例句三）

例句： They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the society.他們不僅要從書本中學習知識，還要從社會中汲取知識。

Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be(responsible for the matter).或者賽麗對此事負責，或者由我們來承擔責任。

The population of this country is three times as large as that of its neighbor.這個國家的人口是它鄰國的三倍。（漢語可以說是它鄰國的三倍，但英語一定要說是它鄰國的人口的三倍，這也是英語較為漢語更為嚴密的一種表現）

2.條件句也是使句子緊湊的一種表達方式。這里我們介紹一下in which在條件句中的用法，它相當于條件句的引導詞if，這時可譯作“如果．．．那么．．．”或“當．．．時”。

例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that concert.當另外一個樂團演奏A（樂曲）時，那麼演奏B（樂曲）的樂團就有充分的理由不去彩排了。