第一篇：考研小作文高分 道歉信

考研小作文高分模板——道歉信 Dear Sir or Madam 親愛的先生或者女士 , Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party tomorrow and I have been longing for giving my sincere wishes to you on that special day非常感謝你邀請我參加你明天的生日派對。我一直都渴望能在那個特殊的日子為你獻上我誠摯的祝福.(第一段一定得簡單說明下你做了什么對不

起主人公的事情，即為什么道歉，順帶為其損失表達下遺憾。到 了第二段，就是吹牛道歉，并送上祝福)However , I am terribly sorry that I cannot be there because of a matter of some urgency.然而，非常抱歉，由于有急事我無法到場。The afternoon I got a call from my parents telling me that my sister has been hospitalized 今天下午，我父母打電話告訴我，我妹妹生病了.(妹妹生病了，自行車

壞了，作業沒帶，路上遇見老奶奶，各種理由，各種用)Both of my parents are busy at work 我父母工作都很忙.So I have to go home in a harry to take care of her所以我不得不盡快回家照顧我妹妹.I am sure you can understand this我相信你會理解的.I would like to say sorry again and wish you a happy birthday as well as a successful party我想再次表達我的歉意，以及祝你生日快樂，生日party一切順利.Yours sincerely , Li Ming 補充：可以加上第三段內容，如下：

Please accept my heartfelt apology again.請再次接受我真誠的道歉 I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my carelessness.對于我的粗心，我希望能夠獲得你的諒解

PS : 根據樓主考研的經驗，小作文對于格式的要求并不是那么死 板，越靈活越好，比如 15 年英二考了一個 notice，70%的考生都沒注

意，開頭仍然是寫 dear student，但依據最后的分數來看，大家并沒有

質的區別，只要意思大體正確，單詞不拼錯，閱卷老師不會為難你，小作文不需要花太多時間。

第二篇：考研小作文高分 感謝信

感謝信

Dear Mr.and Mrs Brown ,親愛的布朗先生和布朗太太

Thanks so much for 非常感謝…….（這邊寫出來你所用像他們所致謝的內容，如： taking care of me during my study in London在我于倫敦學習期間，照顧我）.I would avail myself of this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance when in need.謹借此機會感謝您在我需要時，給予我的及時幫助和支持（隨便寫一個與你所要感謝的人相關的事情，如夸他的房子，車子，手表，如 Your house is really spectacular你的房子真的很壯觀），and I enjoyed it so much 我非常喜歡它.What’s more而且 , Mrs.Brown ,your cooking is out of the world and beyond my words.布朗太太，你的廚藝舉世無雙，無法用言語來形容

（關于這個 cooking，根據題目具體環境，可以改成 environment環境、songs歌曲、advice建議、help幫助 等等，小作文思維要擴散點，結合語境）.You made me feel at ease during my studies in London當我再倫敦學習期間，你讓我感到安心.I really cherish the memories of those days with you 真的很懷念和你在一起的那些日子.（依據題目內容，可以寫希望和你盡快見面，希望以后多多幫忙，希望以后多多聯系等等諸如此類的話，腦袋一定要轉起來）

It could be great getting together with you once again能和你再次相聚就好了.I sincerely hope you would come to china and I wish be your guide我真誠地希望你能來中國，我希望能給你當向導.Best wishes to you!向你致以最美好的祝愿

Yours sincerely ，Li Ming PS : 根據樓主考研的經驗，小作文對于格式的要求并不是那么死 板，越靈活越好，比如 15 年英二考了一個 notice，70%的考生都沒注意，開頭仍然是寫 dear student，但依據最后的分數來看，大家并沒有質的區別，只要意思大體正確，單詞不拼錯，閱卷老師不會為難你，小作文不需要花太多時間。

第三篇：考研英語小作文道歉信

to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 考研英語作文批改點評如下： dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 8分

同學你好，作文寫的很好，但要注意時態的選擇。這是過去發生的事，因此要用過去時。

考研英語小作文批改例文：道歉信 8分

同學你好，你的作文寫的不錯。但是要注意if從句的主將從現。

第一篇

dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 8-10分

第二篇

dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday afternoon.the reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the meeting.however, considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by e-mail.i will check the record and send my feedback to you.once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday afternoon.the reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the meeting.however, considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could(刪除)send me a brief record of the project progress by e-mail.i will check(用詞不當)the record and send my feedback to you.once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming篇三：考研英語寫作小作文之道歉信

考研英語寫作小作文之道歉信

在考研英語的part a 小作文部分，書信作為考查的重點所在，種類繁多。在前面我們曾就以題目為例，詳細地解析過前五種書信：即建議信、投訴信、咨詢信、感謝信和祝賀信的寫作方法及其注意事項。今天中公考研英語教研組的張玉環老師就對考研英語小作文中的第六類書信——道歉信——進行深入的分析。

道歉信，英文中稱為 letter of apology，是由于某事向某人表示歉意的信件，通常是由于自己的過錯或不能履行承諾等而做出的道歉。寫作時，一定要態度誠懇，提供合理的理由，并需在解釋完原因后，盡可能提供一個合適的補救辦法。道歉信曾在2008年英語(一)的小作文中考查過。作為英文應用書信的一種，道歉信非常符合考研英語的考查要求，既可考查考生的英語書面表達能力，尤其是應用文的英語表達能力，又可考查到考生對內容要點的歸納、概括、表述能力。

一般來說，在考研英語中，道歉信主體部分的寫作可按照三個步驟進行，即“三步走”策略。接下來就以題目為例，具體解析一下這個策略。例題：

directions：

1)make an apology, and 2)suggest a solution.you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the address.題目要求向你在加拿大時的房東bob寫一封信，為自己未能在回國之前歸還音樂cd而向他道歉，并提出解決方案。根據上面所提的道歉信寫作“三步走”策略，具體操作如下： 首段：i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.在“三步走”策略中，第一步就是要表明寫信目的并且簡述事由。正如上面的首段，只有一句話，首先非常清晰明了地說明寫信目的。既然這是一封道歉信，那么寫信的目的自然就是向收信人表示道歉，而這也正是題目所給出的寫作要求之一。此外，在這句話中，表明寫信目的之后還簡要陳述了道歉的事由，使書信的交流功能更加準確和有效，這也是寫信的常識問題。對于以上兩點內容，簡單來說，可用一句話表達，即i am writing this letter to express my apology to you for my failing to?? 在道歉信中，本段的主要內容就是首先就上面所道歉之事進行詳細的陳述，包括事情是如何發生的以及自己為什么會犯這個錯誤而給對方造成不便。告知對方原因之后，接下來要做的事情就是為自己犯下的錯誤買單，也就是要為自己給對方造成的不便或損失進行補償、提出解決方案。做補償時務必要記住的是態度一定要誠懇、真摯，所以補償方案需要實虛結

合：既要有具體的、實實在在的解決方法，還要為可能造成的損失做出將會彌補的承諾，以在最大限度上獲得對方的原諒。

尾段：once again, i feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.please accept my apologies.本段中第一句話通過once again+i feel so sorry forany inconvenience caused的句型，再次表達了自己對收信人的道歉之意。之后，第二句話用一句非常簡單的please accept my apologies表達了自己的期待，期待收信人接受道歉，進而原諒自己。

在考研英語的書信表達中，類似的首段或尾段的套用句式比較豐富，大家需要在復習過程中進行有意的積累，并在寫作中加以運用： 1.i would like to give you my apology for...2.i must apologize to you for? 3.i express my regret at being unable to do...4.please accept my sincere apology for...5.i hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.6.i sincerely hope you can understand that i offended you unintentionally.7.we assure you that such a matter will never happen again.8.i do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.因此，該題的完整范文如下： dear bob, i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.li ming篇四：考研英語小作文之道歉信

海文名師：考研英語小作文沖刺急訓之道歉信 海文名師：考研英語小作文沖刺急訓之道歉信

萬學海文

距離最后的考試只有近兩個月的時間，最后的沖刺序幕正式拉開。英語復習到這個階段，最重要的就是作文。要想在最后的考試成績中脫穎而出，現階段就必須要把精力放在分值占在30分的寫作上。

考研英語中大作文的要求是內容切題、表達清楚、文字連貫、句式多變和語言規范。小作文考察點在信息點的覆蓋、語言的準確性、文章組織的連貫性上。

其中小作文占10分，分為求職信、祝賀信、道歉信、詢問信、推薦信、感謝信、邀請信、辭職信等等二十多種應用文。每個類別都有相對固定的語言模式，都有固定詞語要求。道歉信是指因過失或疏忽做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發覺后要立即寫信給對方賠禮道歉時寫的信件。道歉是一種禮貌，道歉信要寫得坦率，誠懇。道歉信通常包括三部分內容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由;

2、出現差錯的原因，提出彌補措施;

3、請求原諒。語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解，還會增進彼此的感情。

寫作“三步曲”：

表示歉意→說明具體原因、提出補救辦法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。注意：

理由要盡量合理，違反生活常識將導致扣分;盡量提供一個合適的補救辦法，使行文更加順暢。范文解析： directions: you were unable to attend mr.smith’s examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use “wang hua” instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：

1、i am writing to apologize for ? /i am writing to say sorry for 我寫這封信是因??向你致歉。

2、i would like to give you my apology for? 對于??我向你道歉。

3、please accept my sincere apology for? 關于??請接受我真誠的道歉。

4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had no intention to? 對于我說的話/做的事，我確實感到很抱歉。但請相信，我并非故意要??

5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.請原諒我說話欠妥。

6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.為此我感到非常內疚，所以想告訴你實情。

7、please accept my apologies for my oversight.請原諒我的疏忽。

8、please allow me to say sorry again.請允許我再次表示歉意。

9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.我真心希望你能理解我的處境/設身處地地為我考慮，并接受我的道歉。

10、once again, i’m sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.對于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。篇五：2016考研復習：考研英語道歉信萬能寫作模板

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相信各位2016考研的同學，大部分都會將作文放到最后的沖刺階段來復習。說到考研英語作文的復習，當然少不了背誦模板，模板背的多，在考場上也能發揮不小的作用。所以，不管你的英語寫作能力怎么樣，多背一些模板和佳句總是有好處的。下面，文都網校小編給大家分享一些2016考研英語小作文萬能寫作模板：

道歉信 道歉信是由于自己的疏忽失誤而向對方表達歉意并出于誠意寫出具體彌補辦法。第一段首先亮出寫作目的并簡單闡述該物品的狀態：i am writing to make an apology to you for+句子(表明事件因由)。

第二段列出出錯的原因及具體補救辦法：to make up my fault,......i will......as a token of my apology i sincerely apologize for my careless mistake as well as for any inconvenience thus caused to you.第三段再一次表達歉意：once again, i am sorry for my carelessness.looking forward to your reply.應用文中的這三類投訴信、建議信、道歉信，每一類都有其寫作的范式和具體的內容要求，并且語言要求簡單準確，所以這需要大家清楚每一類文章的一些常用語句，在平常積累背誦，在考場上信手拈來。要想在考研英語作文上獲得高分，也不能完全依靠模板，平時還是要多多練習一下寫作，背誦的一些模板、寫作佳句等，要學會運用才算是真正掌握，才能在2016考研英語的考場上用得恰到好處。

第四篇：考研英語小作文道歉信

篇一：考研英語小作文之道歉信

海文名師：考研英語小作文沖刺急訓之道歉信海文名師：考研英語小作文沖刺急訓之道歉信 萬學海文

距離最后的考試只有近兩個月的時間，最后的沖刺序幕正式拉開。英語復習到這個階段，最重要的就是作文。要想在最后的考試成績中脫穎而出，現階段就必須要把精力放在分值占在30分的寫作上。

考研英語中大作文的要求是內容切題、表達清楚、文字連貫、句式多變和語言規范。小作文考察點在信息點的覆蓋、語言的準確性、文章組織的連貫性上。

其中小作文占10分，分為求職信、祝賀信、道歉信、詢問信、推薦信、感謝信、邀請信、辭職信等等二十多種應用文。每個類別都有相對固定的語言模式，都有固定詞語要求。道歉信是指因過失或疏忽做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發覺后要立即寫信給對方賠禮道歉時寫的信件。道歉是一種禮貌，道歉信要寫得坦率，誠懇。道歉信通常包括三部分內容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由;

2、出現差錯的原因，提出彌補措施;

3、請求原諒。語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解，還會增進彼此的感情。寫作“三步曲”：

表示歉意→說明具體原因、提出補救辦法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。注意： 理由要盡量合理，違反生活常識將導致扣分;盡量提供一個合適的補救辦法，使行文更加順暢。范文解析：

directions: you were unable to attend mr.smith’s examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use “wang hua” instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：

1、i am writing to apologize for ? /i am writing to say sorry for我寫這封信是因??向你致歉。

2、i would like to give you my apology for? 對于??我向你道歉。

3、please accept my sincere apology for? 關于??請接受我真誠的道歉。

4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had nointention to? 對于我說的話/做的事，我確實感到很抱歉。但請相信，我并非故意要??

5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.請原諒我說話欠妥。

6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.為此我感到非常內疚，所以想告訴你實情。

7、please accept my apologies for my oversight.請原諒我的疏忽。

8、please allow me to say sorry again.請允許我再次表示歉意。

9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.我真心希望你能理解我的處境/設身處地地為我考慮，并接受我的道歉。

10、once again, i’m sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.對于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。篇二：考研英語寫作小作文之道歉信 考研英語寫作小作文之道歉信

在考研英語的part a 小作文部分，書信作為考查的重點所在，種類繁多。在前面我們曾就以題目為例，詳細地解析過前五種書信：即建議信、投訴信、咨詢信、感謝信和祝賀信的寫作方法及其注意事項。今天中公考研英語教研組的張玉環老師就對考研英語小作文中的第六類書信——道歉信——進行深入的分析。

道歉信，英文中稱為 letter of apology，是由于某事向某人表示歉意的信件，通常是由于自己的過錯或不能履行承諾等而做出的道歉。寫作時，一定要態度誠懇，提供合理的理由，并需在解釋完原因后，盡可能提供一個合適的補救辦法。道歉信曾在2008年英語(一)的小作文中考查過。作為英文應用書信的一種，道歉信非常符合考研英語的考查要求，既可考查考生的英語書面表達能力，尤其是應用文的英語表達能力，又可考查到考生對內容要點的歸納、概括、表述能力。一般來說，在考研英語中，道歉信主體部分的寫作可按照三個步驟進行，即“三步走”策略。接下來就以題目為例，具體解析一下這個策略。例題：

directions：

1)make an apology, and 2)suggest a solution.you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the address.題目要求向你在加拿大時的房東bob寫一封信，為自己未能在回國之前歸還音樂cd而向他道歉，并提出解決方案。根據上面所提的道歉信寫作“三步走”策略，具體操作如下：首段：i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.在“三步走”策略中，第一步就是要表明寫信目的并且簡述事由。正如上面的首段，只有一句話，首先非常清晰明了地說明寫信目的。既然這是一封道歉信，那么寫信的目的自然就是向收信人表示道歉，而這也正是題目所給出的寫作要求之一。此外，在這句話中，表明寫信目的之后還簡要陳述了道歉的事由，使書信的交流功能更加準確和有效，這也是寫信的常識問題。對于以上兩點內容，簡單來說，可用一句話表達，即i am writing this letter to express my apology to you for my failing to?? 在道歉信中，本段的主要內容就是首先就上面所道歉之事進行詳細的陳述，包括事情是如何發生的以及自己為什么會犯這個錯誤而給對方造成不便。告知對方原因之后，接下來要做的事情就是為自己犯下的錯誤買單，也就是要為自己給對方造成的不便或損失進行補償、提出解決方案。做補償時務必要記住的是態度一定要誠懇、真摯，所以補償方案需要實虛結合：既要有具體的、實實在在的解決方法，還要為可能造成的損失做出將會彌補的承諾，以在最大限度上獲得對方的原諒。尾段：once again, i feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.please accept my apologies.本段中第一句話通過once again+i feel so sorry forany inconvenience caused的句型，再次表達了自己對收信人的道歉之意。之后，第二句話用一句非常簡單的please accept my apologies表達了自己的期待，期待收信人接受道歉，進而原諒自己。

在考研英語的書信表達中，類似的首段或尾段的套用句式比較豐富，大家需要在復習過程中進行有意的積累，并在寫作中加以運用：

1.i would like to give you my apology for...2.i must apologize to you for? 3.i express my regret at being unable to do...4.please accept my sincere apology for...5.i hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.6.i sincerely hope you can understand that i offended you unintentionally.7.we assure you that such a matter will never happen again.8.i do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.因此，該題的完整范文如下： dear bob, i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.li ming篇三：考研英語小作文批改例文：道歉信

考研英語小作文批改例文：道歉信 8分

同學你好，你的作文寫的不錯。但是要注意if從句的主將從現。第一篇

dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 8-10分 第二篇

dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday afternoon.the reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the meeting.however, considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by e-mail.i will check the record and send my feedback to you.once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming dear david, once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming

第五篇：考研英語高分作文經典背誦之道歉信

考研英語高分作文經典背誦之道歉信

寫作“三步走”：

表示歉意—>說明具體原因、提出補救辦法—>再次致歉、希望得到理解 范文：

Dear Anne,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Please allow me to say sorry again.閃光詞匯及詞組：

drop sb.a line: 給某人打一個電話

preferable: adj.更好的，更可取的long for sth: 渴望

萬能句型：

Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot?

I feel terribly sorry for missing the change of?

Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterwards?

If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a call about your preferable date.Please allow me to say sorry again.范文：

Dear Prof.Patent,I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago.For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic activity.I hereby submit the doctor’s note.I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours faithfully,Li Ming

閃光詞匯及詞組：

assign: v.分配，指派

fall upon sb: 降臨到某人身上

continuous: adj.持續的prevent sb from sth/doing sth: 使某人不能做某事

hereby: adv.因此，據此

submit: v.提交，遞交

obliged: adj.感激的grant: v.同意，準予

萬能句型：

I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete?due to? I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.