第一篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文高分秘訣 1.動筆之前,認真審題
《中考考試說明》指出,書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動筆,要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱 書面表達評分原則有四條:(1)內容要點;
(2)運用詞匯和結構的數量;
(3)運用語法結構和詞匯的準確性;(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見,要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾,設想幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,寫時切忌結構分散,廢話連篇,嚴重跑題。書面表達,內容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字數不要低于或超過規定的字數太多。3.語言通順,表達準確
(1)避免使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復和呆板。
(2)多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。
(3).注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1)語態、時態要準確無誤。
2)主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標點符號特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語英語A.句號。.B.省略號………C.頓號、無(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3)內心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學們應把寫好的句子,根據故事情節,事情發生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法: 1)表示并列關系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or … 2)表示轉折關系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as … 6)表示對照關系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會表達,另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好,造復合句容易出錯,容易被扣分,閱卷場上有句話:“錯誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達,可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡。總之,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。(1)迂回而行
當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時,可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路,然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。(2)小詞大用
漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很文雅,但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3)借花獻佛
有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現。因為剛剛做過題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來,為我所用。5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時間和精力,想把書面表達寫得更好,那么,請注意以下幾點:
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。(2)適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句。
(3)進一步描繪人或事物時,適當使用定語從句。(4)適當使用分詞或分詞短語,烘托謂語動詞。(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子緊接時,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節省篇幅。6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認,要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時,由于時間緊、內容多,同學們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯。(2)拼寫有無錯誤。(3)語言是否用錯。(4)時態、語態錯誤。(5)標點錯誤。
(6)人稱是否用錯。
【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動,以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時同學們多練習寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時間,在中考時一定能寫出高質量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。
第二篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
熟悉寫作步驟:審題:審清作文體裁(類型)時態、人稱等細節;列提綱(文章結構框架):分幾段,以及每段大體內容;寫作:在提綱的基礎上補充要點;復查:2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標點等問題;2遍不出聲讀查,靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等; 5 謄抄:不允許做任何的更改。
總之做到三審:體裁、時態、人稱;
三思:詞匯—>短語—>句式;
三查:要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。
作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強,最多2句話引入主題;
(2)正文——主要內容:層次性強,一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面,每個方面最多2句話;
(3)結尾:緊扣主題,2句話內結束,盡量升華。
四、學會列作文提綱:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利與弊
Para1:(綜述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings
Para4:(個人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:計劃安排型作文——談假期安排
Para1:(綜述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
例三:圖表、數字比例型作文
(提出討論或調查的事實)Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表達出不同看法或觀點)Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表達個人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 說明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 優點1… Besides, 優點2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺點1… On the other hand, 缺點2…
In my opinion,個人觀點 …
例五:不同觀點型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾問題.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方觀點.First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方觀點.On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2.。As for me,個人觀點 …
例六: 解決問題型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.范文1.How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time.It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.Don’r be afraid to show people what you are really good at.Talk about the things you like and do best.Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.Be a good listner.Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.Be friendly to a lot of people.Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.范文2.My view on television
Television has come into our life for many years.We can’t live happily without television.Jt can give us the latest information and news.It can open up our eyes and enlarge our knowledge.We can get happiness from the plays on television.We’ll be boring all day if there is no television.Television programs are attractive.After a whole day’s hard worlk we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea.How wonderful it is!
Television is also bad for people’s health.It’s bad for you to watch TV too long, especially bad for your eyes.It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior.However, it depends on what we do.范文3.My view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day.The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly.We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes.Our teachers believe that if we did that.We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies.We disagree.We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying.If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.We also think everyone should be different from others.That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
第三篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文寫作技巧
一、掌握常用過渡性詞語
敘事文常用的句子間連接詞
at first;at last;in the end…
then / next/ after that…
when / while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time;at times;once in a while;
so that
To one’s surprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
in a word/in all
議論文常用連接詞
表示并列:either…or;neither…nor;both…and;not only…but also;
表示遞進的:besides;what’s more;what’s worse;(moreover);
表示原因的:because;for…;because of…;thanks to…;(for the reason that…);
表示結果的:so;as a result;so…that…;therefore;
表示目的的:so that…;in order that…;(in order)to…;for…;
表示對比的:while;on the one hand + on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;prefer…to…;would rather do…than
do…;
表示轉折的:however;but;
表示舉例的:for example;for instance;such as…;like…;that is to say…
表示總結的:in all/short;in a word;in brief/ total;last but not least;last;
表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;…have great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit
sb.;sb.benefit from sth.affect;have an effect on sb.;
表示喜愛的:love/like/enjoy…;be fond of…;be interested in…;show great interest in…;lose oneself in…;put one’s
heart into…;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;
表達個人想法的:
I think/believe…;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;
其他:
in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up one’s mind to do;in a way;
二、記住作文萬能句式
常考主題的典型句子
1、環保
1.It's our duty to protect our environment。
2.It is very important to take care of our environment
3.We should not throw litter onto the ground
4.We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees
5.We should plant more flowers and trees。
6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
2、旅游
1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…),it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)
2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus,…
3.We enjoyed ourselves。
4.We forgot the time.We didn't come back until 5 o'clock。
5.We all felt very tired, but we were happy。
6.I thought I would never forget this trip。
7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。
8.We visited a lot of places of interest。
9.We had a good time there。
10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap。
3、比賽
1.Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two。
2.All of us went to watch it。
6.Class One won this match.Class Two lost。7.Class One played well.They deserved to win。8.Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance。
4、健康 1.It is very important to keep healthy。2.How can we keep healthy? 3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late。4.We should eat the food healthily。5.We should do more exercise。6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。7.I didn't feel like eating anything。8.I decided to see the doctor。9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully。10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
5、學科 1.My favorite subject is English。2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful。5.So English is very important and I like English very much。6.We have a lot of fun in the English class。7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。9.I like English and try my best to learn it。
6、節日 1.In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival。2.It comes in January or February。3.On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner.They have a lot of nice food to eat。4.During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do。5.People visit their relatives and friends。6.They greet each other with a hug and say, “Happy New Year”。7.As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways。
7、寫人 1.His name is Jack。2.He was born in London in 1982。3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。4.He is 20 years old。5.He comes from England。6.He is a good ping-pong player。7.He is medium build。8.He has short hair。9.He is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us。10.He teaches English very well。11.He works very hard.He works in No.5 Middle School。12.He loves watching football games after work。13.He often helps me with my English。14.At the age of six, he began to play table tennis。
8、生活 1.Jim got up very early。2.Jim cleaned the room and do the housework。3.Jim went to shop and did some shopping。
7.He washes the dishes。8.He has lunch at school。9.It is a busy day.He is very tired.But he feels happy。
三、熟悉寫作步驟:審題:審清作文體裁(類型)時態、人稱等細節;列提綱(文章結構框架):分幾段,以及每段大體內容;寫作:在提綱的基礎上補充要點;復查:2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標點等問題;2遍不出聲讀查,靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等;謄抄:不允許做任何的更改。
總之做到三審:體裁、時態、人稱;
三思:詞匯—>短語—>句式;
三查:要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。
作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強,最多2句話引入主題;
(2)正文——主要內容:層次性強,一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3 個方面,每個方面最多2句話;
(3)結尾:緊扣主題,2句話內結束,盡量升華。
四、學會列作文提綱:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利與弊
Para1:(綜述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings
Para4:(個人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:計劃安排型作文——談假期安排
Para1:(綜述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
例三:圖表、數字比例型作文
(提出討論或調查的事實)Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表達出不同看法或觀點)Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表達個人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 說明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 優點1… Besides, 優點2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺點1… On the other hand, 缺點2…
In my opinion,個人觀點 …
例五:不同觀點型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾問題.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方觀點.First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方觀點.On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2…
As for me,個人觀點 …
例六: 解決問題型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.掌握了以上的寫作方法和技巧,經過反復的寫作磨練,我相信,參加中考的學子們一定會在中考中寫出一篇能夠展示內心世界的美麗的英語作文。
第四篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
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(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學們應把寫好的句子,根據故事情節,事情發生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法:
1)表示并列關系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉折關系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對照關系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
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第五篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文高分秘訣
1.動筆之前,認真審題
《中考考試說明》指出,書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動筆,要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。
2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱
書面表達評分原則有四條:
(1)內容要點;
(2)運用詞匯和結構的數量;
(3)運用語法結構和詞匯的準確性;
(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見,要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾,設想幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,寫時切忌結構分散,廢話連篇,嚴重跑題。書面表達,內容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字數不要低于或超過規定的字數太多。
3.語言通順,表達準確
(1)避免使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復和呆板。
(2)多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。
(3).注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。
1)語態、時態要準確無誤。
2)主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。
3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標點符號特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語英語
A.句號。.B.省略號………
C.頓號、無
(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學們應把寫好的句子,根據故事情節,事情發生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法:
1)表示并列關系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉折關系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對照關系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會表達,另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好,造復合句容易出錯,容易被扣分,閱卷場上有句話:“錯誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達,可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡。總之,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。
(1)迂回而行
當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時,可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路,然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。
(2)小詞大用
漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很文雅,但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3)借花獻佛
有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現。因為剛剛做過題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來,為我所用。
5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時間和精力,想把書面表達寫得更好,那么,請注意以下幾點:
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。
(2)適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句。
(3)進一步描繪人或事物時,適當使用定語從句。
(4)適當使用分詞或分詞短語,烘托謂語動詞。
(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7)上下句子緊接時,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節省篇幅。
6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認,要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時,由于時間緊、內容多,同學們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環節必
不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯。
(2)拼寫有無錯誤。
(3)語言是否用錯。
(4)時態、語態錯誤。
(5)標點錯誤。
(6)人稱是否用錯。
【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動,以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時同學們多練習寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時間,在中考時一定能寫出高質量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。
五個步驟寫好中考英語作文
一、認真審題,確定時態人稱,同時關注題材格式
時態:故事性文章一般用過去時,其中表達感受時可用現在時。
說明性或議論性文章一般用現在時,舉例時可用過去時。
根據題目要求也會出現時態的交錯使用,如過去和現在的對比等。
如果句中出現了時間狀語,時態則要遵循時間狀語。
如ago,last…——過去時 next,in…——將來時等 人稱:注意在句子中人稱的統一。例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English。
其中we和our就是人稱的統一。
格式:注意書信格式的開頭和結尾。
二、找全信息點,緊扣主題,突出重點
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息點。一定把題讀全,找齊信息點,建議用鉛筆標出,寫完后再涂掉。
根據題目,可適當增加合理內容。
特別注意文章要有開頭和結尾。
三、成文時表述正確,文字流暢
切忌與漢語提示的一一對應,使用所學表達方法將語義表達出來即可。
首先考慮句子結構(如主謂賓,主系表等)。
同時注意短語的正確使用和單詞的拼寫,最好使用課本上學過的短語和句式。
四、文章結構清晰,重點句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一個檔次
考慮文章的篇章結構,使用適當的連接短語,使文章結構緊湊。
常用連接詞:
1.表文章結構順序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…
And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列補充關系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表轉折對比關系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause(從句),In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand… Some…,while others… 4.表因果關系的:Because,As So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表換一種方式表達:In other words
6.表進行舉例說明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陳述事實:In fact
8.表達自己觀點:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表總結:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
文中正確使用兩三個好的句型,如:賓語從句、狀語從句、動名詞做主語等。賓語從句舉例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。
狀語從句舉例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。
動名詞做主語舉例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
常用狀語從句句型:
1)時間when,not…until,as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do(為了)
3)結果so…that+clause,too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)條件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)
5)讓步though,although,even though,even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比較as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、認真檢查,檢查信息點是否全面,時態、人稱是否一致,句子結構是否清晰,短語使用、單詞拼寫是否準確等。
檢查后,將草稿謄寫在紙上,請注意按結構分段,書寫清晰。
下面列舉一些在檢查中可發現的錯誤:
1.We live more and more comfortable。
改正:comfortably(副詞修飾動詞)
2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。
改正:much information
(不可數名詞由much修飾)
3.There has many programs in TV。
改正:There are many programs on TV。
(There be句型和介詞短語)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。
改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(動名詞作主語)
建議大家練習或模仿不同題材的文章,特別注意改錯總結和吸取范文中好的結構與表達方法,適當運用于自己的文章中。