第一篇:初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
一、掌握常用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)
敘事文常用的句子間連接詞
at first;at last;in the end… then / next/ after that…
when / while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time;at times;once in a while;so that To one’s surprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately… in a word/in all 議論文常用連接詞
表示并列:either…or;neither…nor;both…and;not only…but also;
表示遞進(jìn)的:besides;what’s more;what’s worse;
(moreover);
表示原因的:because;for…;because of…;thanks to…;(for
the reason that…);
表示結(jié)果的:so;as a result;so…that…;therefore;表示目的的:so that…;in order that…;(in order)to…;for…;表示對(duì)比的:while;on the one hand + on the other hand;
Each coin has two sides.;prefer…to…;would rather do…than do…;
表示轉(zhuǎn)折的:however;but;
表示舉例的:for example;for instance;such as…;like…;
that is to say…
表示總結(jié)的:in all/short;in a word;in brief/ total;last but
not least;last;
表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do
harm to sb.;…h(huán)ave great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit sb.;sb.benefit from sth.affect;have an effect on sb.;
表示喜愛(ài)的:love/like/enjoy…;be fond of…;be interested
in…;show great interest in…;lose oneself in…;put one’s heart into…;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;表達(dá)個(gè)人想法的:
I think/believe…;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;其他:
in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up one’s mind to do;in a way;
二、記住作文萬(wàn)能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true.I hope your dream will come true one day.It takes sb.+時(shí)間+to do…
Sb.spend(某種人稱時(shí)態(tài))+時(shí)間/錢+on sth./(in)doing sth.It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.)to v…
It’s nice/kind of sb.to v..It’s time for sb.to do sth.It’s a waste of time to…
It’s …years/days since sb.+ved
It’s great fun to do=sb.have great fun doing It’s a pity that… It’s an honor to…
I’m/We’re not allowed to …
I’m afraid of making mistakes… There be …doing…
Great changes have taken place in… sth is/are well worth v-ing.It seems/seemed that…
It seems(im)possible to v… It is said that…
As the saying goes, …
…and ….are different in many ways.too + adj./adv.to do There are many differences between … and … I have made up my mind to … I am sure that…
I am not sure whether/if… I would rather ….than … It doesn’t matter if…
Thank you for v-ing.If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.have/look for a chance to do do outdoor activities be/get used to(doing)sth.learn…from…
be proud of/ take pride in…
play an important/active part/role in… agree with sb.to do sth.with the help of sb.=with one’s help
(反義:without one’s help)
be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth.pay attention to… take good care of … make friends with…
get on/along well with …
wish you successful/success as time goes by… graduate from…
looking back to the past three years,…(用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài))pass the(final)exam stick to doing keep you mind on your goals make up one’s mind to do sth.(on sth.)make a decision to do work hard at English once in a while/ at times/ now and then from then on in the future(將來(lái))/ in future(從今以后)increase our knowledge in fact/as a matter of fact in the beginning/ at first feel like giving up have trouble/difficulty in(doing)sth.have(no)time to do have experience in(doing)sth.follow one’s advice/suggestions
master some basic … skills be required to do ask sb.for help can’t wait to do be supposed to do encourage sb.to do deal/do with …
work out/solve the problems all sorts/kinds of… at home and abroad one of … be full of…
learn sth.by oneself come up with good ideas be surprised at sth.(to do sth.)in order to keep healthy/fit a good way to v… keep(on)trying worry about…/ be worried about… in one’s spare/free time be kind/friendly to be strict with help others say thank you to…
have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time plenty of +C/U worry about/be worried about ask sb.for help/ turn to sb.for help/call sb.for help be popular with… share sth.with sb.know little/much about … 作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)
do/try one’s best to v… be/feel sorry for…
help sb.(to)do sth./ with sth.in/during class before/after class
teach sb.to do sth.wish you successful/success as time goes by… graduate from…
looking back to the past three years,…(用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài))pass the(final)exam stick to doing keep you mind on your goals make up one’s mind to do sth.(on sth.)make a decision to do work hard at English once in a while/ at times/ now and then from then on in the future(將來(lái))/ in future(從今以后)
increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary in fact/as a matter of fact in the beginning/ at first feel like giving up have trouble/difficulty in(doing)sth.have(no)time to do have experience in(doing)sth.follow one’s advice/suggestions master some basic … skills be required to do ask sb.for help can’t wait to do be supposed to do encourage sb.to do deal/do with …
work out/solve the problems all sorts/kinds of… at home and abroad one of … be full of…
learn sth.by oneself come up with good ideas be surprised at sth.(to do sth.)in order to
keep healthy/fit a good way to v… keep(on)trying worry about…/ be worried about… in one’s spare/free time be kind/friendly to be strict with help others say thank you to…
have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time plenty of +C/U worry about/be worried about ask sb.for help/ turn to sb.for help/call sb.for help be popular with… share sth.with sb.know little/much about … do/try one’s best to v… be/feel sorry for…
help sb.(to)do sth./ with sth.in/during class before/after class teach sb.to do sth.三、熟悉寫作步驟: 審題:審清作文體裁(類型)時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié); 列提綱(文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架):分幾段,以及每段大體內(nèi)容; 3 寫作:在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn); 復(fù)查:2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語(yǔ)法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等問(wèn)題;2遍不出聲讀查,靠語(yǔ)感檢查語(yǔ)句是否通順、連貫等; 謄抄:不允許做任何的更改。
總之做到三審:體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱; 三思:詞匯—>短語(yǔ)—>句式; 三查:要點(diǎn)、拼寫和語(yǔ)法、連貫。作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強(qiáng),最多2句話引入主題;
(2)正文——主要內(nèi)容:層次性強(qiáng),一定要有過(guò)渡型連接詞。最多展開3 個(gè)方面,每個(gè)方面最多2句話;(3)結(jié)尾:緊扣主題,2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束,盡量升華。
四、學(xué)會(huì)列作文提綱:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利與弊
Para1:(綜述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free… Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings Para4:(個(gè)人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:計(jì)劃安排型作文——談假期安排 Para1:(綜述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)例三:圖表、數(shù)字比例型作文
(提出討論或調(diào)查的事實(shí))Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表達(dá)出不同看法或觀點(diǎn))Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表達(dá)個(gè)人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 說(shuō)明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)1… Besides, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺點(diǎn)1… On the other hand, 缺點(diǎn)2…
In my opinion,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) … 例五:不同觀點(diǎn)型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾問(wèn)題.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方觀點(diǎn).First, 原因1… Besides, 原因
2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方觀點(diǎn).On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2…
As for me,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) … 例六: 解決問(wèn)題型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.掌握了以上的寫作方法和技巧,經(jīng)過(guò)反復(fù)的寫作磨練,我相信,參加中考的學(xué)子們一定會(huì)在中考中寫出一篇能夠展示內(nèi)心世界的美麗的英語(yǔ)作文。
第二篇:初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
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(4)描寫人物時(shí),要生動(dòng)具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動(dòng)作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時(shí)間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法:
1)表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說(shuō)明的過(guò)渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過(guò)渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過(guò)渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過(guò)渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過(guò)渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
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第三篇:初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧 如何寫文字結(jié)尾
初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧 如何寫文字結(jié)尾
文章結(jié)尾的作用是概括全文內(nèi)容,進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意義表達(dá)得更加深刻。
文章結(jié)尾的形式也是多種多樣的,常見(jiàn)的有以下幾種:
1、首尾呼應(yīng),畫龍點(diǎn)睛在文章的結(jié)尾,把含義較深的話放在末尾,以點(diǎn)明主題,深化主題,起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的結(jié)尾:
After her death,I felt as if something were missing in my life.I was sad over her passing away,but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2、重復(fù)主題句結(jié)尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上,達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))的結(jié)尾:
I love my home town,and I love its people.They too have changed.They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3、自然結(jié)尾隨著文章的結(jié)束,文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Fishing”(釣魚)的結(jié)尾: I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours,but my brother caught many more.Tired from fishing,we lay down on the river bank,bathing in the sun.We returned home very late.4、含蓄性的結(jié)尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點(diǎn)明作者的看法,而是讓讀者自己去領(lǐng)會(huì)和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的結(jié)尾:
Evening came before we realized it.We put down our sickles and looked at each other.Our clothes were wet with sweat,but on every face there was a smile.5、用反問(wèn)結(jié)尾
雖然形式是問(wèn)句,但意義卻是肯定的,并具有特別的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用,引起讀者深思。如“Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我們要不要學(xué)做家務(wù)?)的結(jié)尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework.Don't you agree,boys and girls?
6、指明方向,激勵(lì)讀者結(jié)尾表示對(duì)將來(lái)的展望,或期待讀者投入行動(dòng)。如“Let's Go in for Sports”(讓我們參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng))的結(jié)尾:As we have said above,sports can be of great value.They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter.A sound mind is in a sound body.Let's go in for sports.文章的結(jié)尾沒(méi)有一定的模式,可以根據(jù)表達(dá)主題的需要靈活創(chuàng)造。一般的習(xí)慣是,一些記敘文和描寫文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)尾的方法;但說(shuō)理性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)的說(shuō)明文和議論文則往往都有結(jié)束語(yǔ),以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng),結(jié)構(gòu)完整 初中英語(yǔ)作文題目及范文
「要求」
和外國(guó)朋友交談是文化生活中很重要的一部分,但是談什么話題卻要慎重考慮,因?yàn)楦鲊?guó)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣不同,談的東西要關(guān)涉到禁忌、興趣。學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)角將要組織一次對(duì)外交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以書面形式寫一些可以作為談話的材料。
「范文」
Holidays and Outings
It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place,then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over,then where they went,whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel,either at weekends or during their holiday periods,so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why,especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
看完上文,可知這實(shí)際上是一篇討論英語(yǔ)話題的文章。從這個(gè)角度來(lái)寫“Holidays and Outings”這個(gè)題目可謂不無(wú)新義。但是在與外國(guó)人交往時(shí)談些什么都是一個(gè)很現(xiàn)實(shí)的問(wèn)題。本文提供了這一范例。全篇也圍這個(gè)問(wèn)題來(lái)寫,幾乎每句話都是緊扣中心的。比如它始終突出了這是一個(gè)話題,就反復(fù)用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等詞。
第四篇:初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
初中英語(yǔ)作文高分秘訣
1.動(dòng)筆之前,認(rèn)真審題
《中考考試說(shuō)明》指出,書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認(rèn)真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動(dòng)筆,要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。
2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱
書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則有四條:
(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);
(2)運(yùn)用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量;
(3)運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性;
(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見(jiàn),要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn),同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下,形成提綱,寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散,廢話連篇,嚴(yán)重跑題。書面表達(dá),內(nèi)容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評(píng)論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字?jǐn)?shù)不要低于或超過(guò)規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)太多。
3.語(yǔ)言通順,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確
(1)避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板。
(2)多用簡(jiǎn)單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。
(3).注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。
1)語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。
2)主謂語(yǔ)要一致,主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。
3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)
A.句號(hào)。.B.省略號(hào)………
C.頓號(hào)、無(wú)
(4)描寫人物時(shí),要生動(dòng)具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動(dòng)作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時(shí)間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法:
1)表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說(shuō)明的過(guò)渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過(guò)渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過(guò)渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過(guò)渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過(guò)渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會(huì)表達(dá),另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好,造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò),容易被扣分,閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話:“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá),可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡(jiǎn)。總之,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
(1)迂回而行
當(dāng)漢語(yǔ)詞義不會(huì)用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)時(shí),可以想一個(gè)與這個(gè)漢語(yǔ)詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴(kuò)展思路,然后從英語(yǔ)中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。
(2)小詞大用
漢語(yǔ)中有些語(yǔ)意看來(lái)很復(fù)雜很文雅,但在英語(yǔ)中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達(dá)中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3)借花獻(xiàn)佛
有時(shí)書面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因?yàn)閯倓傋鲞^(guò)題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來(lái),為我所用。
5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時(shí)間和精力,想把書面表達(dá)寫得更好,那么,請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn):
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺(jué)得乏味。
(2)適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。
(3)進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí),適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句。
(4)適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ),烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。
(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下?tīng)钫Z(yǔ)在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7)上下句子緊接時(shí),其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節(jié)省篇幅。
6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認(rèn),要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時(shí),由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此,改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必
不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分,根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此,中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯(cuò)。
(2)拼寫有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。
(3)語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。
(4)時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。
(5)標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
(6)人稱是否用錯(cuò)。
【注意】此時(shí)不宜在卷面上作較大的改動(dòng),以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時(shí)同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫作并有意運(yùn)用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時(shí)間,在中考時(shí)一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。
五個(gè)步驟寫好中考英語(yǔ)作文
一、認(rèn)真審題,確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱,同時(shí)關(guān)注題材格式
時(shí)態(tài):故事性文章一般用過(guò)去時(shí),其中表達(dá)感受時(shí)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
說(shuō)明性或議論性文章一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí),舉例時(shí)可用過(guò)去時(shí)。
根據(jù)題目要求也會(huì)出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)的交錯(cuò)使用,如過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比等。
如果句中出現(xiàn)了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ),時(shí)態(tài)則要遵循時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。
如ago,last…——過(guò)去時(shí) next,in…——將來(lái)時(shí)等 人稱:注意在句子中人稱的統(tǒng)一。例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English。
其中we和our就是人稱的統(tǒng)一。
格式:注意書信格式的開頭和結(jié)尾。
二、找全信息點(diǎn),緊扣主題,突出重點(diǎn)
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息點(diǎn)。一定把題讀全,找齊信息點(diǎn),建議用鉛筆標(biāo)出,寫完后再涂掉。
根據(jù)題目,可適當(dāng)增加合理內(nèi)容。
特別注意文章要有開頭和結(jié)尾。
三、成文時(shí)表述正確,文字流暢
切忌與漢語(yǔ)提示的一一對(duì)應(yīng),使用所學(xué)表達(dá)方法將語(yǔ)義表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。
首先考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)(如主謂賓,主系表等)。
同時(shí)注意短語(yǔ)的正確使用和單詞的拼寫,最好使用課本上學(xué)過(guò)的短語(yǔ)和句式。
四、文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,重點(diǎn)句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一個(gè)檔次
考慮文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu),使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接短語(yǔ),使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
常用連接詞:
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all,F(xiàn)irstly/First,Secondly/Second…
And then,F(xiàn)inally,In the end,At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,F(xiàn)urthermore,Inaddition
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause(從句),In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand… Some…,while others… 4.表因果關(guān)系的:Because,As So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá):In other words
6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陳述事實(shí):In fact
8.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn):As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表總結(jié):In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
文中正確使用兩三個(gè)好的句型,如:賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)等。賓語(yǔ)從句舉例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。
狀語(yǔ)從句舉例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。
動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)舉例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
常用狀語(yǔ)從句句型:
1)時(shí)間when,not…until,as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do(為了)
3)結(jié)果so…that+clause,too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)條件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)
5)讓步though,although,even though,even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比較as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、認(rèn)真檢查,檢查信息點(diǎn)是否全面,時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否一致,句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰,短語(yǔ)使用、單詞拼寫是否準(zhǔn)確等。
檢查后,將草稿謄寫在紙上,請(qǐng)注意按結(jié)構(gòu)分段,書寫清晰。
下面列舉一些在檢查中可發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤:
1.We live more and more comfortable。
改正:comfortably(副詞修飾動(dòng)詞)
2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。
改正:much information
(不可數(shù)名詞由much修飾)
3.There has many programs in TV。
改正:There are many programs on TV。
(There be句型和介詞短語(yǔ))
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。
改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))
建議大家練習(xí)或模仿不同題材的文章,特別注意改錯(cuò)總結(jié)和吸取范文中好的結(jié)構(gòu)與表達(dá)方法,適當(dāng)運(yùn)用于自己的文章中。
第五篇:初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
初中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
初中英語(yǔ)作文高分秘訣 1.動(dòng)筆之前,認(rèn)真審題
《中考考試說(shuō)明》指出,書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認(rèn)真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動(dòng)筆,要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱 書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則有四條:(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);
(2)運(yùn)用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量;
(3)運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性;(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見(jiàn),要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn),同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下,形成提綱,寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散,廢話連篇,嚴(yán)重跑題。書面表達(dá),內(nèi)容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評(píng)論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字?jǐn)?shù)不要低于或超過(guò)規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)太多。3.語(yǔ)言通順,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確
(1)避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板。
(2)多用簡(jiǎn)單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。
(3).注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1)語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。
2)主謂語(yǔ)要一致,主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)A.句號(hào)。.B.省略號(hào)………C.頓號(hào)、無(wú)(4)描寫人物時(shí),要生動(dòng)具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5)動(dòng)作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時(shí)間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法: 1)表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:and, as well as, or … 2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as … 6)表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說(shuō)明的過(guò)渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過(guò)渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過(guò)渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過(guò)渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過(guò)渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會(huì)表達(dá),另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好,造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò),容易被扣分,閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話:“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá),可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡(jiǎn)。總之,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(1)迂回而行
當(dāng)漢語(yǔ)詞義不會(huì)用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)時(shí),可以想一個(gè)與這個(gè)漢語(yǔ)詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴(kuò)展思路,然后從英語(yǔ)中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。(2)小詞大用
漢語(yǔ)中有些語(yǔ)意看來(lái)很復(fù)雜很文雅,但在英語(yǔ)中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達(dá)中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3)借花獻(xiàn)佛
有時(shí)書面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因?yàn)閯倓傋鲞^(guò)題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來(lái),為我所用。5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時(shí)間和精力,想把書面表達(dá)寫得更好,那么,請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn):
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺(jué)得乏味。(2)適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。
(3)進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí),適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句。(4)適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ),烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下?tīng)钫Z(yǔ)在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子緊接時(shí),其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節(jié)省篇幅。6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認(rèn),要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時(shí),由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此,改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分,根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此,中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯(cuò)。(2)拼寫有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。(3)語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。(4)時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。(5)標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
(6)人稱是否用錯(cuò)。
【注意】此時(shí)不宜在卷面上作較大的改動(dòng),以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時(shí)同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫作并有意運(yùn)用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時(shí)間,在中考時(shí)一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。