第一篇：英語書面表達十大常見錯誤解析

在長期的英語教學過程中，我分析了學生寫作時常犯的錯誤，主要表現在以下幾個方面：

（1）時態錯誤：文章中忽視了動作發生的時間。

（2）人稱代詞錯誤：單復數、形容詞性物主代詞與名詞性物主代詞錯誤。

（3）名詞單復數、動詞單復數、主謂語不一致。

（4）用詞錯誤：對同義詞的區別、使用場合、習慣用法不熟悉，或者忘記了單詞。

（5）內容不連貫：不會用關聯詞，語序混亂。沒有統籌安排，寫到哪里，就停在哪里。

（6）不會使用某些英語應用文格式。

（7）大小寫、標點符號錯誤，缺少冠詞。

（8）書寫混亂，卷面潦草。

根據以上分析，若要提高學生書面表達能力，就需要進行大量訓練和指導，就寫作步驟來說，要指導學生遵循以下幾點：

（1）認真審題，確定體裁。要求學生仔細審題，明確體裁，領會出題者用意。

（2）構思要點。根據題目要求，理解要表達的要點，設計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態、人稱等，把要點串聯起來，構成文章框架。

（3）選詞造句，避難選易。在要點、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞、句式進行造句，如果不會用復雜句就用簡單句表達要點，注意主謂語一致、人稱、數量、大小寫、標點。

（4）認真檢查，避免錯誤。仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確，邏輯是否一致。

面表達是中學生學習英語應掌握的一項基本技能，它要求學生有扎實的語言基本功，具備一定的審題能力、想象能力、表達能力和評價能力等。《英語課程標準》也對學生的寫作提出了一定的要求，然而從近幾年的考試情況來看，學生書面表達錯誤較多，與《英語課程標準》前言中“發展學生綜合語言運用能力”的要求還有一定的差距。具體說來，學生書面表達中主要存在以下錯誤：

1．時態誤用

主要表現在兩方面：1）學生寫作之前沒有判斷整篇文章主要用哪種時態，常出現該用一般現在時的句子，用了一般過去時；而該用將來時的句子，用了完成時。2）時態構成表達錯誤。由于學生對各種時態掌握不好，常常將所學的各種時態混淆，以致出現如下的錯誤如，I?m go to school by bike.He told some children that there are some places of interest in Beijing.2.漢語式英語

由于受漢語的影響，再加上對英語句子結構掌握不好，導致學常常按漢語的詞序來翻譯句子，在學生的作文中常常見到這樣的句子： You can be bus.In china have different places of interest.In autumn is best season for traveling.3.邏輯錯誤

在做書面表達的過程中，有的學生一拿到考題慌慌張張開始寫，在寫作之前沒有構思好先寫什么后寫什么，哪些內容應該詳寫，哪些內容應該略寫，而是一邊寫一邊構思，從而導致整個文章邏輯不清，層次感不強，整篇文章不知所云。

4．單詞拼寫錯誤

由于部分學生平時不注意記憶單詞，基礎知識掌握不牢固，所以在文章中常出現單詞拼寫錯誤如，September 寫為 septber because 寫為 beacause

5.缺少銜接

有些學生雖然在詞匯運用書面表達方面能夠達到基本要求，但由于句子之間沒有添加適當的銜接成分，使句子之間和文段之間缺乏必要的過渡和連貫，影響了信息的傳遞和表達效果。

6．文體不對

中學階段要求學生掌握的文體主要有說明文、記敘文、議論文和應用文，其中應用文又包括通知、請假條、書信和電子郵件等，由于一些學忽視了各種體裁的寫作特點，從而導致文章體裁格式不正確如：將寫信的日期寫在信末；寫請假條不寫署名等。

英語書面表達十大常見錯誤解析

俗話說“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從平時的課堂學習一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇優秀的英語作文在內容和語言兩方面應是一個統一體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經常出現名詞不變復數、第三人稱單數不加s，前后不一致，以及時態語態、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。

1.審題不清

如2004年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。

2.拼寫錯誤

拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。

3.名詞單復數問題

誤 my father and my mother is all teacher.正 my father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少動詞

在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有

動詞來構成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：i'm tired.誤 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.誤 the apples cheap.i'll take some.正 the apples are cheap.i'll take some.5.缺少介詞、冠詞等

還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。

誤 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代詞的誤用

英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。

誤 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整

有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

誤 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example, my friend in high school.(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致

所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等.例1.when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has;同理，want應改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致.改為 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)

9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤

漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。例：

誤 when i get to the station the train leave.正 when i got to the station the train had left.10.綜合性錯誤

綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養。

第二篇：中考英語書面表達常見錯誤解析課件

中考英語書面表達常見錯誤解析課件

俗話說：“千里之行始于足下”。英語書面表達能力的形成不是一日之功，必須從平時的課堂學習一點一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇優秀的英語作文在內容和語言兩方面應是一個統一體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質量。然而，很多考生在寫作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎實而經常出現名詞不變復數、第三人稱單數不加s、前后不一致，以及時態語態、句子完整性等方面的錯誤。

1.審題不清。如XX年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為零分。

2.拼寫錯誤拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。

3.名詞單復數問題。

誤：My father and my mother is all teacher.正：My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少動詞。在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但英語中每個完整的句子都必須有動詞來構成，如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語，而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一定要寫成：I'm tired.誤：I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正：I am happy I come to Beijing Zoo.誤：The apples cheap.I'll take some.正：The apples are cheap.I'll take some.5.缺少介詞、冠詞等還有一些考生因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法，不了解中英文語言習慣的不同，也會出現明顯的錯誤，造成丟分現象。

誤：Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正：Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代詞的誤用。英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。

誤：I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正：My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整有的考生因為對句子結構認識模糊，所以出現只寫半句的現象，這也是造成失分的原因之一。

誤：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.For example，my friend in high school.(這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞，他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。)

正Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致。所謂不一致，包括數的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。

例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知識，他就能想干什么就干什么。)剖析：one是單數第三人稱，因而本句的have應改為has ；同理，want應改為wants，本句是典型的主謂不一致。

改為When one has knowledge, he can do what he wants(to do).9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤。漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化，而對英語來說，這些都至關重要。

誤：When I get to the station the train leave.正：When I got to the station the train had left.10.綜合性錯誤。綜合性錯誤是指單詞的大小寫和標點符號的錯誤等，以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時知識的積累，所以考生應該從平時練習出發，每天堅持寫英語日記，多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作，提高自己的英語素養。

人們常說寫作文要有“鳳頭豹尾”，就是說作文的開頭要寫得像鳳凰的頭一樣引人注目，而結尾要像豹尾那樣剛勁有力、戛然而止。那么，怎樣讓自己的作文具有“鳳頭豹尾”呢?下面筆者針對不同的文體和題材對英語作文的開頭和結尾的寫作方法進行了歸納總結。

開頭是作文在閱卷老師面前的第一次亮相，它將決定你所寫的文章在閱卷老師心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味著有了良好的開端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我們該怎樣一提起筆就讓自己成功一半呢?

1.“開門見山”式開頭

一般來說，文章的開頭應盡量做到“開門見山”，即要用簡單明了的語言引出文章的話題，使人一開始就能了解文章要說明的內容。

①.對于敘事類的文章，可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train.It took us ten hours to get there.What a long and tiring journey!We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.②.對于論述性的文章，可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點，接著展開進一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money(時間和金錢)”的開頭可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time.But I don’t think so.First, when money is used up, you can earn it back，but

2.回憶性開頭

在描述事件或游記類的文章中，采用回憶性的開頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類型的開頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯，如never forget(永遠無法忘記)、remember(記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、exciting(令人激動的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad(難過的)如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭還以這樣寫：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.3.疑問性開頭

在敘事類或論述性的文章中，都可采用疑問型開頭，這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(種樹)”的開頭可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is 再如“Traveling Abroad(出國之旅)”的開頭可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

4.倒敘式開頭

在有的文章，特別是敘事類的文章中，可以采用倒敘的寫作手法，先寫出事件的結果，再陳述過程。如“Catching Thieves(捉賊)”的開頭可以這樣寫：I lay in bed in the hospital.I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt.Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you.It’s a story.文章的結尾沒有固定的模式，同學們可以根據表達主題的需要靈活創造。一般情況下，記敘文和說明文經常采用自然結尾的方法；但夾敘夾議和發表觀點類的文章則往往有結束語，以使文章首尾呼應，結構完整。文章結尾的形式也因文章類別和開頭的風格而靈活多變。

1.自然結尾，點明主題

隨著文章的結束，文章自然而然地結尾。如“Helping the Policeman(幫助警察)”的結尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)”的結尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2.首尾呼應，升華主題

在文章的結尾可以用含義較深的話點明主題，深化主題，起到“畫龍點睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我愛家鄉)”的結尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.3.反問結尾，引起深思

這種方式的結尾雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，而且具有一定的強調作用，可引起他人的深思。如“Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure(學英語能為我們帶來許多樂趣)”的結尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can Don’t you think learning English is great fun?

4.表達祝愿，闡述愿望

這種方式的結尾常出現在書信或演講稿的文體中，表示對他人的祝福或對將來的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農民們的一封信)”的結尾可以是：I hope the farmers’ life will be better and better.另外，書信的結尾常有以下形式的祝福語：Best wishes；I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year；I wish you have a good time等。

第三篇：英語書面表達

Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名師點評]

本文行文自然流暢，文章要點齊全，意思表達真切。詳略得當，重點突出。從語言使用的角度來說，不但使用了一些生動的動詞，準確的名詞，同時為了使本文串聯自然，又使用了時間狀語為連接詞，將文章按照時間順序敘述完整。

第四篇：英語書面表達

2014年濟寧市中考英語書面表達

假設你是李華，已報名參加暑期英語夏令營，根據夏令營之活動安排，你需要準備一份關于英語夏令營英語閱讀方面的發言稿，具體要求如下：

1.對英語閱讀重要性的認識；

2.個人開展英語閱讀的情況（1-2點具體做法）及感悟；

3.將來的打算。

參考詞匯：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.詞數，100詞左右；（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；）

2.可根據具體要求及參考詞匯適當發揮；

3.文中不得出現真實姓名。

Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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第五篇：英語書面表達

寒假作業Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基礎寫作：

上周六下午，你們宿舍幾個同學去森林公園野炊，回來途中淋了雨。晚上李華頭疼得厲害。你給她量體溫，發現她發高燒。你馬上帶她去看醫生。醫生說她得了重感冒，要臥床休息三天。請你代她給劉老師寫一張請假條說明情況，并幫她請假兩天（周一、周二），因此她不能參加周二的羽毛球比賽了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任務型寫作

總結：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你認為制訂目標很重要嗎？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你認為制訂目標后怎樣才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.舉例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基礎寫作

社會實踐是學校教育的一個重要組成部分；書本知識有限；社會實踐有諸多好處，能用所學的知識解決實際問題，獲取經驗，了解社會，端正學習態度，激勵學習。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任務型寫作

總結：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你對童年生活的認識 我認為從某種意義上來說，艱苦的環境可以激發一個人的潛能，為他的成功鋪平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一個人在經歷了磨難之后可以變得堅強，勇敢和忠實可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.總而言之，我認為溫室里的花朵經受不起風暴的洗禮，艱苦的生活對孩子來說是有好處的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

熱愛社會工作，性格樂觀，富有愛心和責任心；英語口語流利，具有相關的教學經驗；工作時間：周六和周日，按每小時5元付費；這份工作給自己在經濟和人際關系方面的好處；:表達自己做好工作的決心：把快樂和舒適帶給自己工作的對象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就學校取消高三音樂課這一事件給校長寫一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同學們對學校取消音樂課意見不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你對此決定贊成或反對？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受來說明開設音樂課的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕頭一模

1.為何與人合作：現代社會必備；可省時間和精力；更多互相學習的機會

2.與誰合作：A與喜歡的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B與不喜歡的人合作：學會容忍，學會挖

掘其優點

3.你的看法：傾聽別人意見，不把你的觀點強加給別人，有禮貌地指出別人的錯誤

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失敗是件壞事嗎？

概括短文要點Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失敗并非壞事，但從失敗中站起來并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失敗對勝利者是必修課，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你對失敗的看法和態度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.廣州一模

基礎寫作簡介學校的植物園

1.概況：位于校園西南角，面積1000平方米 2.歷史：20年的歷史，2008年重建 3.特色：各種花卉、樹木、藥用植物 4.功能：美化校園、研究植物場所、休閑之地 5.其他：觀賞至少許一小時

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.讀寫任務就學生違紀的處理方式寫一篇簡評

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要點：校長的做法、想法、結果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持該校長的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假設你是校長，你會如何處理違紀學生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模寫一篇短文介紹大豆的生長過程

1.發芽的條件：水分充足，溫度適宜，種子就開始發芽了 2.第一步：出現幼根，并朝下生長 3.第二步：幼苗出現，并朝上生長，直至變成綠色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝葉出現 5.第四步：數月后開花結果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.經濟危機，大學生就業難

概括材料主要內容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.現狀：經濟危機影響全球，就業機會少，工人工資低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建議：樹立正確的擇業觀，降低預期工資，先就業再擇業，自己創業，開公司，展示自己的才華Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各種優惠政策，免除各種稅費，提供一定數量的無息貸款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.