第一篇：書面表達

18。(四川樂山)從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費提供塑料袋，掀起全國“拒塑”的環保運動。假如你是李華，準備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護環境的英語演講稿。

內容包含：1.在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋；2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本； 3.離開教室應關燈；

4.最好走路或騎自行車上學；5.簡述理由：保護環境，減少污染，節約能源等 注意：1.詞數：80詞左右。開頭和結尾已經為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

2.可根據要點適當增加細節，使行文連貫；3.文章中不能出現真實姓名和校名，否則以零分處理。

3.參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保護protect能源energy污染pollution課本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

參考作文：What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse（重復利用）the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more（更多的是，經典詞組多用！）, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

第二篇：書面表達

中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓練

【考點掃描】

書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的。【名師解難】 一.訓練方法

1.記。認真系統復習和背誦基礎知識和優美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們若有大量的現成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發揮。

2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進行實戰寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內寫出100個詞的短文，并且質量高、1 內容全、形式正確。這樣形成習慣，考試時就能得心應手。二.應試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意。《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。

2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調：定出時態、人稱、順序、開頭、結尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態、時態要準確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法： 1）表示并列關系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉折關系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時間關系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態、語態錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項

書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關。【中考范例】

VII.書面表達（共1題，計10分）

假如你叫張強。請根據下面美國朋友Bob的來信內容，結合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數：80左右。回信的開頭、結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。注意：回信中不得出現你的真實地址和所在學校的名稱。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內容應是介紹張強自己的情況。

2.圈要點：根據來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調：1.時態：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結尾題目已經給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正。【滿分演練】

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華山是中國名山之一。假設外國友人到你校參觀后，準備去旅游。請根據以下要點向外國友人簡單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。

3．登山便可領略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字數：80詞左右。2．請不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝。回信要包括以下內容： 1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。

注意1.信的格式已經給出。

2.信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。（3）

根據中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動物十分有趣，人見人愛。當你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說……

請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經歷。（請注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據中文設置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字數60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當發揮）3.發言稿的開頭和結尾已給出。

假設你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國中學生要來你們學校訪問。請你寫一篇有關西安的簡介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字數100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫話。

根據以上四幅圖和提示詞語，寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、語句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數60~80個左右。3.要表達自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語言規范，語意完整，內容豐富。2.表達符合圖意，書寫規范。3.給出自己的觀點。4.文章的開頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請根據下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經給出，不算入總詞匯數內。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫話。

要求：1.根據圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態，70詞以上。不得使用真實姓名、地名、學校名。

3.標題和第一句已給出，但不計入70詞之內。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

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假如你所在的學校要出一期英語壁報。你準備就自己經歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內容 2.詞數：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數：50~80，不包括已經給出的單詞）

內容要點：

過去 現在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

(3)參考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

(10)參考答案：

Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內容要點：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點半我就起床了。（3）我帶著桶去學校，同學們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開始植樹。（也可描寫動場面。）（5）看著新種下的樹，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當媽媽為我倒水時，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當媽媽為我夾我喜歡吃的菜時，我卻沒想過他們是愛吃淡一點，還是濃一點。。。2009年到了，意味著過去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細想想，現在的我也應該為她做一點點事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學著爸爸平時沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會，水開了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因為第一次自己動手，蓋碗的燙手是我所沒想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因為外婆特別喜歡喝茶。當外婆從廚房走出來的時候我已經把茶都給倒好了，這時，外婆才告訴我哪一個是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫熱的心。媽媽一愣，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對媽媽說：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了。”媽媽仰起了脖子，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的樣子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我記得在我小學的時侯，就讀過一首曹值的七步詩：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時只知其大意，只知道曹操的長子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內作出一首詩來，否則處死；結果他的弟弟就在七步之內寫出了流傳至今的“七步詩”。當時這首詩對曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個世紀過去了，社會和生活都發生了極大的變化；應該說人的素質也應有所提高；一個人生活在世上，是離不開親情、友情和愛情的；有人說：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團結并不是真對與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業上應是不可或缺的照應；俗話說“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見，團結是一種力量，只有團結才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因為一點小事，一點利益而你爭我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時有時聊及這個問題，有人這樣評論：一個人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個社會上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發生的，但要看你怎樣去對待，把金錢和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢面前，我們何不禮讓一點，做一個有道德、有素質、有親情的人呢？

家和萬事興，團結是一種力量，讓我們團結友愛，和睦共處，為個人的事業、為家庭的生活、為國家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛情；把金錢和利益看淡一些吧！人過留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當你離開這個世界的時侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經六十多歲了,為了子女的成長與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說過來,人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個電話甚至一個短信,父母也已經很知足了.我由于長期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長真的付出了很多,然而他們現在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實實地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔憂,這是最基本的我們應當做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實性,主要考究它的內涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛的家。然而在一個暴風雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復發，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進了四個孩子的家。性格剛強的哥哥無法忍受這個新家庭的種種，無奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開了家。他們開始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當實在沒有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對正要出國的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對老人家中請他們收養。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當上了出租車司機；齊思甜出國受到良好的教育，成了音樂家；齊天成為東北大學學生；齊妙卻當上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂會上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂霎時凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚的樂曲落下，聽眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個音樂教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂的天堂里，這也為后來思甜成為音樂家打好了基礎。父親說：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞。”這位父親是偉大的，他樂觀開朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時又是一個嚴厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動邊教音樂時，他對這“莫須有的罪名”并沒有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當搬運工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒有一絲怨言，還對孩子說：“我沒事。”懂事的孩子們也拿起了工具，幫父親干活。他哼著小調，陽光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見,這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動告訴了孩子們音樂的重要性及如何面對生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來的四個孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個孩子依偎在車站。他們在為下一餐飯而擔心著。“哥，我餓。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈。”事實上他也這么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時對他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開原來的家后，養父母去世得早，加上無人看管，就開始墮落下去了。她在20年后與齊思甜相遇時，大言不慚地對她說她滿足于當前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發現自己對不起所有愛她的人，她的良心受到了譴責。于是，親情的歸來使她的精神方面的巨人復活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮心劑。

親情是心中的太陽，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說，親情一定是無價的寶藏。

沒有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒有了親情，生命則無法繁衍后代；沒有了親情，生活就單調枯燥；沒有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結兩顆心的紐帶。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，誰也不認得誰。但落在地下后，結成一體，結成冰，化成水，就永遠也分不開了。”

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情。“我在這頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無價的親情呵，愿我們在你的鼓舞下，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關于親情的影片..我看這部影片時,心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們去刻苦努力,只要我們在心理上能夠戰勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強者!

第三篇：書面表達

中考中的書面表達題，主要有“補全對話”、“看圖填詞”、“看圖寫話”、“看圖作答”、“看圖完成短文”、“看圖完成句子”和“根據提示的內容，完成某項寫作”等形式。這類題型的考試目的在于：通過書面形式測試考生口頭會話和作簡單書面表達的能力。下面作一簡單介紹：

一、測試要點

一般說來，測試的主要內容都是以日常生活為背景，進行簡單的會話或寫作。例如：問候、問路、看病、打電話、購物、自我介紹等功能意念項目和簡單的應用文，例如：便條、通知、短信等。一個題目寫10個左右的句子，字數為80－100個左右。

二、日常訓練與應試注意事項

1.平時要注意句型與對話的學習，注意聽說訓練，積極參與聽說訓練的教學活動，以達到會話相當熟練的程度。

2.在會話中，注意常在情景中使用的習慣用語、套語的歸納和應用，做到脫口而出，應對如流。

3.注意口語與書面語的區別及一些特殊的表達方法，做題時一定要瞻前顧后，既要看到前面的內容，又要看到后面的語句；既要符合習慣用法，又要注意表達的準確性。

4.要經常進行日常應用文和命題作文的學習與訓練。

三、解題技巧

1.要注意看清題目的要求與提供的情景，需用哪些習慣用語，哪種時態，根據詞數限制，應選用哪一種表達方式為最佳。

2.表達要正確，要注意英美人的習慣用語，切忌隨心所欲，用中文去對照英文進行翻譯。例如：A：How do you do？此題只能選擇How do you do?”來回答，除此，無第二種選擇。如果從語法和字數方面來考慮，那將會有“How old are you?”“What is your

name?”“Where are you from?”等多種與問句不符的答語。

3.注意在一些交際場合中，習慣使用的客套語。只要根據已知部分，就可推測出未知部分。例如：How are you?回答 可用“fine ” “I ’m fine.Thank you.”如果用“How do you do?”來回答，就大錯特錯了。

4.在寫應用文類命題作文或對話時，應注意應用文的格式、人稱、動詞的時態等用法；寫短文或對話時，要注意切題，不寫沒有把握的句子，切忌為使文章生動，在句中隨意增加自己無把握的詞，導致中文式英語而影響考試成績。盡量用自己熟悉的句型和詞匯來表達一個完整的意思就可以了。

四、舉例分析

1.寫短文。以Self Introduction為題，要求寫出10個意思連貫、表述正確、無嚴重語法錯誤、語言流暢的句子，向新來的老師作自我介紹。第一句已給出：My name is Cheng Hui.分析：該題是要求考生向新來的老師作自我介紹。那么，該短文的寫法可從如下三個自然段來寫。第一段，向新老師介紹自己在學校學習、生活的情況；第二段向新老師介紹自己在家里與父母之間的關系及生活情況；第三段可以寫自己與父母、同學和老師之間相處情況等。

2.寫對話。以“A Talk About English Study”為題寫一篇對話，要求所問所答必須與英語學習有關，問答表述完整、正確、無嚴重語法錯誤、語言流暢、提問不少于5項內容。分析：寫對話一要采用問答的形式；二要掌握好對話的內容與中心思想；三要在落筆之前，心里有一個構思計劃?即該對話要從哪幾方面進行表述?。就該對話而言，可從5個方面的內容進行表達：一是談對英語這一門學科了解得怎樣；二是談學習英語用了多長時間；三是談是否在課后還練習講英語；四是談英語這門學科是否難學；最后可以說明自己為什么喜歡學習英語。

第四篇：書面表達

書面表達

1．書面表達（本題20分）根據要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中學生，看了上述故事后，你想表達自己的看法。請你給欄目編輯寫一封電子郵件，內容包括： 1.你對其中的哪個故事感興趣？原因是什么？ ．．．．．．．2.你對這個故事所提及的現象的看法。3.就該現象提出至少兩條解決問題的建議。作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。

2.語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today，__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Ming

2．書面表達(滿分15分)

假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英語教師)要求你們在下午的班會課上用英語演講的形式參與班長(monitor)競選，請根據圖片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 為題寫一篇演講稿。要求:

1.短文必須包括三個方面內容：我的優秀品質；我的能力；我將為大家做什么； 2.短文內容可適當發揮，提示詞可選用； 3.短文中不得出現真實的人名和校名；

4..短文詞數為80左右，開頭、結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。

I believe I can

Good aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen!My name is Li Ming

Thank you!

試卷第1頁，總3頁 3．書面表達

從前，我們通訊不便捷，只能通過書信與千里之外的親朋交流，富有濃濃的親情。今天，隨著互聯網的發展，智能手機（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。人們的交流變得非常的方便，可我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見，很多人都有同感：“距離近了，可親情遠了。”請根據圖中所示，結合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要求：1.短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當發揮；2.題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】 試題分析：本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點是兩個方面，一是現象與弊端：揭示現代人用手機的惡習及其產生的危害；二是觀點與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機，利用好這個現代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現在時態。第三人稱或第一稱形式。寫作亮點：短文首先結合現代人使用手機的現象，說明了人們使用手機給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴

試卷第2頁，總3頁 人們怎樣正確地使用好手機。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等結構，給短文增色不少。

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參考答案

1．Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours, 【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇電子郵件。本題所給材料是是根據上文的故事表達自己的感受。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。

寫作亮點：文章直接談到作者對麥克的故事感興趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I can't stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.給文章增色不少。考點：考查提綱作文。2．

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!

My name is Li Ming!I'm very glad to be a member of our class.I want to be monitor for these reasons.First, I’m hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second, I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing.I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields.I'm sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.That’s all.Thank you!【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇演講稿，要按照要求，從：我的優秀品質；我的能力；我將為大家做什么三個方面進行寫作。用第一人稱形式，我的品質和能力用一般現在時態，我將為大家做的用一般將來時態。要根據演講稿的特點選擇恰當的詞語和句型結構，增加語言的感染力。

寫作亮點：范文開頭簡單的自我介紹后直接點題：我要當班長；接著由first, second 等等列出自己想當班長的原因；后面用兩個一般將來時的句子說明自己將會怎樣當好班長。敘述清楚，結構明晰。文中的I believe I wi11?；I'm sure we will?充分表達了作者的自信，彰顯了作者個性，突出了短文主題，語言精煉，符合演講稿的特點。【考點定位】 考查提綱類作文。3．

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead

答案第1頁，總2頁 本卷由系統自動生成，請仔細校對后使用，答案僅供參考。

of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】

試題分析：本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點是兩個方面，一是現象與弊端：揭示現代人用手機的惡習及其產生的危害；二是觀點與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機，利用好這個現代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現在時態。第三人稱或第一稱形式。

寫作亮點：短文首先結合現代人使用手機的現象，說明了人們使用手機給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴人們怎樣正確地使用好手機。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等結構，給短文增色不少。

【考點定位】圖畫及提綱類作文。

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第五篇：書面表達感謝信

感 謝 信 dear______, i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _________(感謝的原因).if it had not been for your assistance in ___________(對方給你的具體幫助), i fear that i would have been_________(沒有對方幫助時的后果).every one agrees that it was you who______________(給出細節).again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely 你的姓名

extend [?kstend] vt.延伸；擴大；推廣；伸出；給予；使竭盡全力；對?估價 vi.延伸；擴大；伸展；使疏開

gratitude [gr?t?tju?d] n.感謝（的心情）；感激 assistance [?s?st(?)ns] n.援助，幫助；輔助設備

感謝信

1）感謝信的寫法

人們在交往中常需要相互致謝，收到別人贈送的禮物，得到別人的幫助、受到別人的慰問，都應該表示感謝。感謝信是人們常用的一種感謝方式。

感謝信最主要的特點是真誠。缺乏真摯的感情答謝他人，收信人將對你的謝意產生懷疑，感謝的目的也就失去了。因此，寫感謝信首先得真心誠意。

感謝信另一個特點是具體。寫感謝信切忌泛泛而談，而應著重于具體的感謝事由。其次一個特點是及時。收到別人禮物、得到別人幫助，應及時寫信予以答謝。否則，人家會對你的謝意大打折扣。

收到他人贈送的禮物應當及時寫封感謝信，感謝信除了應寫得真誠、具體、及時外，還應當特別提及所收禮物的具體內容，否則，泛泛而談，使人覺得你不夠真誠。為此，當你寫感謝信時，應這樣寫：“thank you for your beautiful roses.”(謝謝您送的美麗的玫瑰花。)；而不要籠統地寫上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(謝謝您送給我的漂亮禮物。)，這樣，使人覺得你既禮貌，又誠心，從而真正達到交往的目的。下面我們來看看具體的范例。

范例1 dear laura, i was truly enraptured beyond expression to receive your flowers which turned our living room into a garden.how considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday.you just couldnt have selected anything i had have liked more!you have a positive genius for selecting the right gift!the four years i spent with you at the college have been the pleasa ntest period in my life.i will cherish this memory forever.how nice it would be to see you again.you have been more than kind, and i wont ever forget it.my love and deepest gratitude, now and always!sincerely yours, jane 范例2 dear dan and laura, jim and i want to thank you for the beautiful salad bowl set.we are looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical wedding gift.thanks again for the lovely gift.fondly, minnie 范例3 dear mrs.gorden, id like you to know how much the week at your lovely house meant to me.i not only enjoyed myself immensely, but also i felt relaxed a nd refreshed as i havent felt for months.please give my love to helen.it was so nice being with her again just like our old days together at school.many thanks to you and mr.gordon for asking me.sincerely yours，jean brown 2）感謝信模板 date：_________ dear____, ①i am now writing to express my sincere thanks for____.②id like you to know how much your _____ meant to me.③you have a positive genius for ______.④i not only enjoyed_____ , but also___.⑤i shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life.⑥i _____.⑦i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.⑧ would you kindly let me know _____.⑨i will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____.⑩ how nice it would be to see you again and i am looking forwards to seeing you next time!i repeat my thanks again for your_____.please give my kind regards to your_____.yours truly, signature 信息提示

信件啟首

①直接表達謝意

②表達出自己非常珍惜對方的付出/禮物 ③對對方一定的贊美

④ 對方的情意對自己的影響

⑤介紹自己的近況

⑥表達出自己希望有回報的機會 ⑦ 詢問對方是否有時間

⑧ 表達自己回報的心情

⑨ 提出希望下次見面的愿望

⑩再次表達感謝

最后表達真摯的祝福

信件結尾與簽名篇二：高考英語感謝信匯總

感謝信

1.表達感激之情，簡單陳述寫這封感謝信的原因； 2.詳細說明要感謝的事由，措詞更加具體真誠。再 次表示真誠的感謝； 3.向對方表達自己真誠的祝福，再次道謝。有時可向對方發出邀請。感謝信模板 1 dear ________，① i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感謝的原因)．

② if it had not been for/had it not been for/ without your assistance in ________(對方給你的具體幫助)，i would(not)have been ________(沒有對方幫助的后果)． ③ everyone agrees that it was you who ________(給出細節)． ④ again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!⑤ please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, li ming 感謝信模板 2 dear _____________ , ① i am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _____________(感謝事由)。② id like you to know how much your meant to me.③ you have a positive genius for_____________(對收信人某一方面的贊美).④ i not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________.⑤ i shall ever remember _____________as one of the most _____________in my life.⑥ i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(報答).⑦ i will feel very honored and pleased if you _____________(表達自己回報的心愿)。⑧ i am looking forward to seeing you next time!⑨ i repeat my thanks for your_____.⑩ please give my kind regards to your________.yours sincerely li ming 1（2010年浙江省衢州市）假設你是某中學高三某班學生李華，高二多年來，經歷很多次成功與失敗的你，覺得自己似乎一下子成熟了許多，有一種真的長大了的感覺，面對緊張的學習，一次次的考試及今后的打算。。，你有太多的話想對關愛你的父母說。請以書信形式和爸爸媽媽談談。參考詞匯 鼓勵encourage /encouragement 對。。感激be grateful to sb.dear mum and dad how are you doing? 參考范文

dear mum and dad how are you doing? how time flies。i am now a senior three student ,enjoying many successes as well as going through a number of failures,which shows that i have really grown up.whenever i am thinking of these,i can’t help feeling grateful to you.it is you who first give me encouragement when i meet with difficulties,especially when i am not getting along well with my my studies.indeed,your inspiration seems to be a lamp,which offers me light of hope,courage and confidence.and more importantly,you are always teaching me to be good to others,and try to contribute to our society.yours sincerely, 2假設你叫王華，家住外地，暑假期間來北京游玩，住在朋友李海家里。李海為你安排了一周愉快的假期生活，還請假帶你出去到許多地方玩。李海的母親做了美味可口的飯

菜款待你。假期期滿你回家后寫信給李海表示感謝，并請他有機會到你處游玩。

請用英語寫一封100詞左右的感謝信。li hua dear li hai, yours, wang hua 3假如你是一名失學兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國工作的mr.brown的資助，可以重返校園。你給mr.brown寫了一封信，內容如下： ★ 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激；

★ 在老師的幫助下，學習有了很大的進步，受到老師的表揚和鼓勵； ★ 決心更加努力學習，取得更大的進步；

★ 盼望見到mr.brown，希望他寄來一張照片。

注意：1.書信應包括以上所有要點，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；2.詞數：100左右

dear mr.brown，i am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.i could not have returned to school without your help.thank you so much.i have been working hard since i went back to school.i have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers.they often praise me and encourage me.but for your help, i might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education.i have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.how are you getting on with your life and work? i would like to meet you in person, but i have no opportunity to do so.would you please send me a photo of yourself? thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!yours sincerely, li hua 假設你是李華上周參觀倫敦時，你父親的朋友rogers,把你照顧的很好，寫一封信給 rogers先生，表達你的感激之情，字數100詞左右，不得出現真實姓名與地址。dear mr.rogers, it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for your hospitality and courtesy to me during my stay in london.originally i only wanted to call on you and gave my father’s regards to you, as it had been three years since you and he last saw each other.but you insisted that i stay in your house during my visit in london and took good care of my life as if i were a family member of you instead of the daughter of one of your friends.you really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.thank you again for your kindness and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality.yours faithfully, li hua篇三：2014北京書面表達(應用文)書面表達歸類整理

書信類文體：包括求職信、祝賀信、道歉信、詢問信、推薦信、感謝信、邀請信、辭職信等多種應用文。每個類別都有相對固定的語言模式，都有固定詞語要求。

（一）感謝類

1、假如你叫李平，現在給住在北京的green先生寫一封感謝信，green先生曾經是你校的外教，曾花了很多時間輔導你英語口語，使你在全市英語口語競賽中獲得冠軍。你對此非常感激。這次聽說green夫婦要回到你校訪問。你很高興 dear mr．green, how is your stay in beijing? yours sincerely, li ping

2、假設你是李華，因為英語成績突出，已經被北京大學提前錄取。請用英語給你的高三英語老師mr.zhang寫封信。

內容包括： 1.好消息； 2.感恩，因為?..;3.你在北大的學習計劃或對未來的打算； 4.對老師的關心和祝愿? dear mr.wang, we haven?t seen each other for ages.how is everything going with you? i am writing to tell you the good news that i have already been admitted into beijing university in advance.actually speaking, you are the very person i should first say thanks to.it is you who helped develop my interest in english.without your help, i would not be good at english.beijing university is a place which i have been longing for.i am sure i will learn a lot there.besides my major, i will take part in all kinds of activities, which will surely do good to my future career.best wishes!

3、假設你叫李華，你在朋友王林家度過一周假期，昨天（2013年11月21日星期三）剛剛返校。現在給你的朋友王林寫封感謝信，內容包括：

感謝王林為你安排一周愉快的假期；

簡單回憶假期中的愉快生活，感謝王林請假帶你游玩了許多地方；

認為王林的母親是一位非常出色的廚師，美味可口的飯菜使你體重增加了5磅

再次感謝，并希望保持聯系。歡迎他有機會來你校游玩。i?m writing to express my thanks to you for the wonderful vacation.i spent with you and your family.surely i ?ve spent a happy vacation during which you taught me how to swim, boat ,and fish.i really appreciate your taking time off work to take me around and show me so many places.your mother is a wonderful cook who can cook delicious food and i think i must have gained 5 pounds just a week i spent with you.i hop you ?ll be able to visit our school some time.（二）求職信、招聘信

假如你是校報負責人，急需在學校內聘一位同學任英文版的編輯，請你用英文以“an english editor wanted”為題，按照以下要點寫一則120-150字的招聘啟事。1.描述主要的工作內容。2.希望該同學應滿足的條件與要求。3.感興趣的同學請在本周內與學生會（students’ union）聯系。an english editor wanted our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its english edition.the job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper english articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students.the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.we hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.first, he/she is willing to devote some of the those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the students’ union this week.students’ union

2、假設你是李雷，是北京一中的一名學生, 想要參加北京大廈的招聘工作，請你根據下列內容給公司經理寫一份申請。

1.1991年5月1日生于北京；2.今年7月高中畢業，學習英語6年； 3.對英語感興趣，尤其擅長口語和寫作4.熟練掌握電腦操作技術，會編程，打字每分鐘100。

注意：1.詞數：100字左右；2.可適當加入細節，以使行文連貫； 3.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）。4.參考詞匯：編程make programs dear manager, i am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely, li lei 假設你是李華，你的美國筆友peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你校現需招聘外教，請給他寫封信，告知招聘信息。內容主要包括：

教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等

授課對象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎）工作量：——每周12學時，任選三門課

——擔任學生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問（advisor）

注意：詞數100左右；可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫； dear peter, i remember you told me you were interested in teaching in china.our school now is looking for a please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.i’d be more than happy to help.best wishes.li hua

（三）道歉信

道歉信是指因過失或疏忽做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發覺后要立即寫信給對方賠禮道歉時寫的信件。道歉是一種禮貌，道歉信要寫得坦率，誠懇。

道歉信通常包括三部分內容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；

2、出現差錯的原因，提出彌補措施；

3、請求原諒。語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解，還會增進彼此的感情。寫作三步曲：表示歉意→說明具體原因、提出補救辦法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。

注意：理由要盡量合理，違反生活常識將導致扣分；盡量提供一個合適的補救辦法，使行文更加順暢。道歉信中開頭段常用句式和套話 i am writing this letter to express my regret? i am writing to apologize for ? i would like to give you my apology for? i am very sorry to say that ? i must apologize about(not)doing sth? please accept my sincerely apology for? i am writing to say sorry for? i am terribly sorry, but? 道歉信中結尾段常用句式和套句 once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.please allow me to say sorry again.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now.i am sorry that i can’t? and trust that you will be able to understand.書信作文優秀模板——道歉信 dear ______, ①i am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②the reason is that ______（介紹原因）.③once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.例文 假設你是新華中學的學生李華，你和在上海上學的英國朋友tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件： 1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.另約時間。注意：1.詞數120~150； how are you going? we made a plan that we would travel in beijing together next week.while, i should apologize to you because i cannot go there on time for the reasons as follows.first, i cannot deny that it can help us broaden our horizon and deepen our mind when we travel in beijing.however, the government encourages us students to go to shanghai due to the fact that the expo is being held in shanghai now.as the saying goes, ’strike while the iron is hot’.after finish my college entrance examination, i am eager to learn something about study from the expo to prepare for my education in college.in addition, i have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired.i need some time to relax instead of traveling.for the reasons that i mentioned above, i want to show my apology again.and would you please reschedule your time? shall we travel in beijing after two weeks? i am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.yours, li hua 范文2：

directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua dear susan: we’re planning supper at six;that will give us a nice long evening to talk.if i don’t hear from you before then, i’ll be expecting you on the [twelfth]!affectionately yours, li ming an invitation for a reception dear mr.smith: it would give [me/us] great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the chinese delegation.the reception will be held in the [the city hall], on [tuesday, october the fourth].cocktails will be served promptly at [six] to be followed b dinner at [eight].[i/we] sincerely hope you can attend.let [me/us] know.sincerely yours，li ming

（五）投訴信 假設你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

要點：1.問題：手機不響鈴，不能發短信；該產品已售完，無法更換； 型號新，無配件，無法維修。2.要求：公司應盡快予以更換。

注意：1.詞數為100左右；2.參考詞匯：配件—— spare part;dear sir，i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r.china.ten days after that, it didn?t ring and send short messages.then i took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one.later i went to the repairman.he said since it was a new model in china, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.i was so desperate on hearing that.how can i wait that long? therefore, i require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.thank you for your consideration.sincerely yours, bu manyi 2假如你叫李華，上周日在green supermarket 超市里買了一支“no-spot”面霜，你使用以后發現該產

品并沒有廣告中所宣傳的功效。請根據以下要點向超市經理寫一封投訴信，希望能解決此事。需包含下列要點：（1）廣告中承諾no-spot 安全有效，能去除斑點；（2）謹遵說明使用，效果并非如此：

①有副作用—舉例子說明； ②影響工作。

（3）要求賠償醫療費；（4）發票保留至今，以備起訴使用。dear manager, i bought this cream in green supermarket last sunday.i still retain the receipt.last sunday evening, i applied the cream to my face following the instructions carefully.to my great surprise, when i got up the next morning, i felt my face tickling.during the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work.yours faithfully, li hua(六）詢問信 即尋求信息，征求建議、提議或求助之類的信件。

1、假設你是新華中學的學生張華，班里從外地轉來一名同學李明，他一時無法融入到新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據下列要點用英語（q吧）給他寫封信。best regards, zhang hua

2、設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在mr．brown家里，剛回到國內。回國后，你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：

感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助 一本英語詞典忘記帶回

詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴 詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上 郵資自己付 mr．brown，im now safely back home．thank you very much for all the kindness i got from you during my stay．hope everything is fine with you there． now i wonder whether i could ask you a favour．when i came back, i suddenly realizes that i had left my english dictionary behind at your place．it is a precious gift from mu american teacher．would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? ill pay for the postage．the dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom．it is the one with a red cover． thanks and all the best． yours,篇四：感謝信格式以及范文

感謝信的格式和寫法

一、感謝信的概念和主要特點 1.感謝信的含義

感謝信是向幫助、關心和支持過自己的集體（黨政機關、企事業單位、社會團體等）或個人表示感謝的專用書信，有感謝和表揚雙重意思。寫感謝信既要表達出真切的謝意，又要起到表揚先進，弘揚正氣的作用。它廣泛應用于個人與個人之間、個人與組織之間、組織與組織之間，用以向給予自己幫助、關心和支持的對方表示感謝。2.感謝信的主要特點

?感謝對象要確指

感謝信都有確切的感謝對象，以便讓大家都清楚是在感謝誰。

?表述事實要具體

感謝別人是有具體的事由的，否則就會顯得抽象空洞。

?感情色彩要鮮明

感動和致謝的色彩強烈鮮明，言語里充滿感激之情。

二、感謝信的種類

感謝信依據不同的標準可以有不同的分法。1.按感謝對象的特點來分

?寫給集體的感謝信

這類感謝信，一般是個人處于困境時，得到了集體的幫助，并在集體的關心和支持下，自己最終克服了困難，度過了難關，擺脫了困境，所以要用感謝信的方式表達自己的感激之情。

?寫給個人的感謝信

這類感謝信，可以是個人也可以是單位也可以是集體為

了感謝某個人曾經給予的幫助或照顧而寫的。2.按感謝信的存在形式來分

?公開張貼的感謝信

這種感謝信包括可在報社登報、電臺廣播或電視臺播報的感謝信，是一種可以公開張貼的感謝信。

?寄給單位、集體或個人的感謝信

這種感謝信直接寄給單位、集體或個人。

三、感謝信的格式和寫法

感謝信通常有標題、稱呼、正文、結語和落款五部分構成。1.標題

感謝信的標題的寫法有這樣幾種形式：“感謝信”——單獨由文種名稱組成的：“致鬃椎母行恍擰薄篩行歡韻蠛臀

鬧置乒餐槌傻模骸白捉值樂倫拙繚旱母行恍擰薄篩行凰膠臀鬧置譜槌傻摹?/p> 2.稱呼

開頭頂格寫被感謝的機關、單位、團體或個人的名稱或姓名，并在個人姓名后面附上“同志”等稱呼，然后再加上冒號。3.正文

感謝信的正文從稱呼下面—行空兩格開始寫，要求寫上感謝的內容和感謝的心情。應分段寫出以下幾個方面：

?感謝的事由

概括敘述感謝的理由，表達謝意。

?對方的事跡

具體敘述對方的先進事跡，敘述時務必交待清楚人物、事件、時間、地點、原因和結果，尤其重點敘述關鍵時刻對

方給予的關心和支持。

?揭示意義

在敘述事實的基礎上指出對方的支持和幫助對整個事情成功的重要性以及體現出的可貴精神。同時表示向對方學習的態度和決心。4.結語

寫感謝信收束時表示敬意的話、感謝的話。如“此致敬禮”、“致以最誠摯的敬禮”等。5.落款

感謝信的落款署上寫信的單位名稱或個人姓名，并且署上成文日期。前者在上，后者在下。

四、寫作感謝信的注意事項 1.內容要真實，評譽要恰當篇五：書面表達申請信

英語書面表達訓練探討

失分原因 1.不會審題，偏離主題 2.漢語思維，逐字翻譯 3.句子邏輯關系混亂 4.語法錯誤

書面表達訓練建議

(一)多讀、多背好文章、范文，聽、仿、看全面訓練(二)限時訓練 1.讀題（定體裁）2.確定內容 3.確定時態、語態、人稱等 4.寫：時間（25分鐘左右）；（收攏：基本詞匯、句型）(附:關聯過渡語)

1、時間順序：first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin/start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, at present, lately, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment

2、平行對等類：and, both?and, as well as, as well, neither?nor?, or, either? or?.3、轉折關系類：but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand，4、因果關系類: for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to

5、空間順序類: on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/end of, in the middle of

6、解釋說明類: to put it another way, that is(to say), in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on 7 表陳述事實的in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。8.表強調的過渡詞：certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, absolutely without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, in particular，9、遞進關系類: what’s more, what’s worse, what’s better, in addition, worse still, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only...but also, for one thing?for another 10.總結類: in short, in brief, in a word, all in all, on the whole, to sum up, in general, generally speaking, above all, after all, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。

應用文

書信(letter)、日記(diary)、便條(note)、通知(notice)、請柬(invitation card)、海報(poster)、致詞(speeches)、失物招領（lost and found）

書信

申請信、建議信、感謝信、邀請信、投訴信、求助信、祝賀信、高考英語求職信（申請信）

求職信的結構及常用句型

一、介紹消息來源;表明求職心愿

二、介紹個人簡歷，擺出求職優勢

三、請求答復聯系 表明感激之情

1)開篇點題，交代消息來源、寫明寫信的目的.第一段開頭：寫信的目的（purpose）i’m writing to apply for the job(求職)i learn from/read in the newspaper that?/i was told that?/be experienced in?

/i would be grateful if you could? 1.i learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a ? 2.i saw from your advertisement in yesterday’s china daily that ? 3.having known that your office needs a ? i would like to apply for the post.4.i’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s china daily.5.i’m looking for a job as a?and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.2)介紹個人簡歷，重點放在與所申請的工作相關的知識技能的介紹上，要有詳有略.第二段：自我介紹（self-introduction）

常用短語: graduate from? be good / skilled at? enjoy doing sth / in one’s spare time? / get on well with?1.i’m good at.../ i do well in.../ i master...well......2.i have a good knowledge of.../ i have the ability to...5.i’ll get on very well with my fellow workers.6.once i’m hired, i’ll devote myself to the cause of the...工作經歷的常用句型：work experiences 1.i once worked as a...for two years 2.i was working as a...during the period of....3.in 2000 i worked....4.i’ve had the experience of...5.i’ve been...since...能力：

1、i have learned english for 8 years.i am very good at english, so i have been an editor of my schools english paper in the past two years.2、i’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.my grades are among the best ones in my department.第三段：表達盼望盡快收到答復的迫切愿望并表明感激之情.常用句式： i would appreciate it very much if you could give me the opportunity.thank you for your consideration./ i am looking forward to receiving your reply.結尾：

1.if i could have the opportunity to get the job i will be quite appreciative.thank you for your consideration.i look forward to hearing from you.2.i think i’m suited for the job.if you can let me have this chance i will try my best to do it well.expecting you answer.you can connect me by posting a letter to 3.i will be quite appreciative if i am offered the opportunity.thank you for your consideration.i wish to get your answer soon.4.i would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.高考英語建議信

寫作要點

建議信：作者就有關問題進行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。2 對象： 1）寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點。2）寫給某個組織和機構，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。3基本框架：

開頭（beginning）：開門見山，向對方陳述自己的觀點。（state your idea）主體（body）：對所提出的問題進行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議。（reasons and evidence）結尾（ending）：呼應開頭，重申觀點。（restate your opinion）

（說明寫信目的； 介紹詳情，說明原因；提出建議；希望采納建議，并盼望回復。）4 注意事項 1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要合呼情理，語氣要委婉禮貌。總之要簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復。