第一篇：高中英語書面表達(dá)[精華版]

高中英語書面表達(dá)精華版

1、（1）Our English Teacher（我的英語老師）We have a good English teacher whose name is Bruce.He comes from Britain and he is about forty years old.He is a tall and thin person, wearing a pair of glasses which makes him more like a gentleman.He is strict with us.He often makes full preparations for his class and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is very unique, because he is used to encouraging all of us to think by ourselves and study on our own.The relationship between Bruce and us is harmonious.He is so kind and friendly that every student likes him and respects him deeply.Our teacher is so excellent that we all love him very much.（2）Our English teacher, Bruce, is from Britain.He is forty years old or so.He is a tall and thin man, wearing a pair of glasses.Bruce is very strict with us.He always makes full preparations for his classes and corrects our homework carefully.His teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers.He always encourages all of us to think by ourselves and learn on our own.Now our ability to study independently has been greatly improved.Bruce has been getting along very well with all of us.He is so kind and friendly to us that we all love him and respect him deeply.2、Getting Up Early Is a Good Habit 以“早起是好習(xí)慣”為題寫一篇議論文。

1.早起與健康；

2.早起與朗讀；

3.早起與一天的工作。

Getting Up Early Is a Good Habit Getting up early is a good habit.It is of great importance to us all.First it helps to keep us healthy.If we can get up early，we can breathe fresh air，and do morning exercise，which builds our bodies.Second，it helps us to memorize what we have learned in class by reading aloud in the morning.Third，it can help us to find enough time to prepare our work of the day.In one word，if we form the good habit of getting up early every day，It will do us a lot of good.3、The Most Important Thing in the World Directions：

A）Title：The Most Important Thing in the World B）提示：有人認(rèn)為，世界上最重要的東西是“錢”。許多人不同意這個(gè)看法。

請就這個(gè)問題談?wù)勀愕囊庖姟?/p>

The Most Important Thing in the World

In my opinion，the most important thing in the world is TIME.However long one may live，his life consists of a certain number of years，and a year has only12months，a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.Even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question：Can you buy time？

The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.4、Walking is good to peoples health(步行有益健康)題目要求：寫一篇 100 ～ 120 字的短文。說明步行有益健康。（內(nèi)容自選）

范文：

Walking is good to people's health

As everyone knows，either fast walk or slow walk does good to the muscles（肌肉）and lungs of human.So people walk to build up their body，or to lose weight.But only some of them know that taking a walk every day is also good for protecting man's heart.Heart attack has become the first disease in the world because most people suffer from it.Taking a walk can improve the blood supply to our heart.If you try to walk as often as possible，you'll have a healthier heart.5、How to Make Friends(如何交朋友)How to Make Friends Everyone needs friends.A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness.But how can we make friends?

First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be.Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel.When you don't agree someone, please discuss with him.Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble.And never leave your friend when he is in trouble.Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.Friends should be faithful to each other.So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.(162 words)

5、It is good to keep a diary in English(談?wù)剬懹⒄Z日記的好處)題目要求：自擬題目寫一篇 100 ～ 120 字的短文，談?wù)剬懹⒄Z日記的好處。It is good to keep a diary in English

Keeping a diary in English does a great deal of good to my English study.Keeping a diary can help you review all the English knowledge you have learned.For example，you must know the correct spelling of each word needed in the diary； you must use the phrases correctly and choose the suitable sentence patterns，meanwhile，it is also necessary to use you knowledge of grammar in a correct way.Keeping a diary can help you not only to console your knowledge of English，but to form the habit of thinking in English.Practice makes perfect.By and by，your English writing will be greatly improved.Smoking and Health 6、4 月 7 日是世界禁煙日，為配合世界禁煙日活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)下列提示，用英文寫一篇 120 詞左右的短文，以便刊登在“ CHINA DAILY ”上。

據(jù)報(bào)道，世界上有四分之一的人吸煙，而中國 15 歲以上的人，有 33.9% 的吸煙。不僅老人、青年抽，中學(xué)生也抽。

許多酗煙者明知吸煙有害于健康，但他們一次又一次的戒煙，就是戒不掉。

科學(xué)研究表明，吸煙不僅對吸煙者有害，而且對公眾健康特別是對婦女、兒童健康危害更大。煙中的毒氣是多種疾病的致病原因?，F(xiàn)在許多國家禁止在影院、醫(yī)院、車站等公共場所吸煙。

Smoking and Health

Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world.It was reported recently that smokers make up one quarter of the world population，while in China，33.9 precent above the age of 15 are smokers.It's a very serious problem because not only the old，the youth，but also middle school students and girls have been engaged in smoking.Many heavy smokers say they cannot leave off，although they know smoking is harmful to their health and they have tried again and again to stop.Scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves，but also a threat to public health，especially to women and children.The poisonous gas from smoking is one of the major causes of many kinds of diseases.Therefore，many countries have worked out laws forbidding smokers to smoke in public places such as cinemas，hospitals and stations.7、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)能使我們身體健康

體育運(yùn)動(dòng)能使我們身體健康，工作學(xué)習(xí)精力充沛。大家都喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，但許多人不知如何正確鍛煉，有時(shí)甚至出錯(cuò)。

你很幸運(yùn)，上學(xué)后得到體育老師的正確指導(dǎo)，運(yùn)動(dòng)起來相當(dāng)愉快，所以身體健康。你一年中幾乎天天游泳，你還喜歡其他運(yùn)動(dòng)，并計(jì)劃在今年秋季中學(xué)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)上參加幾個(gè)項(xiàng)目的比賽。

請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇 80~120 詞的短文，不要逐字翻譯。

Sports keep us fit land fresh.Everybody likes to do one kind or another.But not all people know how to do them correctly and sometimes the advice we got may be wrong.I'm lucky，for since my first day at school I have always had a good teacher of physical education.I have always been very strong.I go swimming almost every day all the year round，of course I like many other sports too.I am thinking of taking part in a few items at the school sports meeting this autumn.8、Great Changes in My Hometown(家鄉(xiāng)的變化)Great Changes in My Hometown

I used to live in a small town with trees all around.There was no tall building and the only street was narrow.Just outside the town，there was a river.You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water.People here lived a simple life.Great changes have taken place here.You can see tall buildings，big department stores and factories everywhere.Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets.But with the development of the industry，we have fewer trees.Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful

9、The Sport I like Best

請以 The Sport I like Best 為題，寫一篇 120 個(gè)詞左右的議論文。

提示：

1.乒乓球不僅是一種運(yùn)動(dòng)而且是一門藝術(shù)。

2.有人認(rèn)為打乒乓球不用花力氣，我卻不以為然??

3.你經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn)球快速運(yùn)動(dòng)，運(yùn)動(dòng)員的動(dòng)作很美。

4.雖然我打乒乓球不是很好，但對此頗感興感。它能使我們強(qiáng)身健體，學(xué)會(huì)合作。

The Sport I like Best

Of all the sports，I like table-tennis best.I think it is not only a sport but also an art，because it is a game that needs strength and skill.Some people think that playing table-tennis needs little strength，but I don't think so.In playing table-tennis，we should judge the direction of the ball，and hit it back with great strength

so that we can win the game.At the same time we need to pick up the ball which falls to the ground.So after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.But，as a sport，I think it is more like an art.In the game，you can often find the ball moving quickly，and each of the players' movements is very beautiful.So I like the sport very much.Though I can't play it very well，I still show great interest in it.I think playing table-tennis can build our bodies，keep us healthy and train our brains.What's more，it an help us to learn to co-operate with each other.So I like it very much.10、Why we learn English(我們?yōu)槭裁磳W(xué)習(xí)英語)Why we learn English

The English language has become an international language because it is used by people in the most countries in the world now.In the open times, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must English because most of them speak and write in English, English is one of the working languages at international meetings，Today, most of valuable books are written inEnglish, If you know mush English, you will read newspapers and magazines in English and learn a lot of knowledge about interaction better.You also can do What you should do for the world peace.English is very important to us, but many students don't know why;hey should learn it.I hope that all the students should pay more attention to English study and use it freely.(133 words)

11、On the Internet 在日常生活中，因特網(wǎng)起著越來越重要的作用。請根據(jù)下表所給提示為某英文報(bào)寫一篇題為On the Internet的征文稿。因特網(wǎng)的主要用途信息 看國內(nèi)外新聞、獲取其他信息通訊 發(fā)e-mail、打電話學(xué)習(xí)上網(wǎng)上學(xué)校、閱讀各種書籍、自學(xué)外語娛樂 欣賞音樂、觀看體育比賽、玩棋牌游戲生活 購物注意： 1.征文稿必須包括表內(nèi)所有信息，行文連貫通順； 2.詞數(shù)100－120詞； 3.標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。On the Internet The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.（2分）On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well.（4分）We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls（4分）, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves.（4分）Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards.（4分）On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.（4分）In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful.12、城市生活的利與弊

某英文報(bào)社準(zhǔn)備刊發(fā)一篇題為Living in the city的有關(guān)城市生活的利和弊的

文章，根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇詞數(shù)為100左右的短文。Advantages Disadvantages 找工作容易生活消費(fèi)高 交通便利 人口多，擁擠 有公園、飯店等休閑場所 空氣污染、居住環(huán)境差要求：1．覆蓋以上內(nèi)容，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2．詞數(shù)100左右。Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.It is often easier to find work.There are always many choices of public transport.Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see.You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.However, living in a city is often very expensive.You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do.What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty.It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.13、關(guān)于學(xué)生看電視問題

你校課外活動(dòng)小組將舉行一次英語討論會(huì)，討論關(guān)于學(xué)生看電視的問題。請你用英語寫一發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，如看電視獲取信息便捷，可以了解世界、學(xué)習(xí)知識，但看多了影響視力，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)等。詞數(shù)：100左右 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? I’m going to talk something about students watching TV.As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life.It’s quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers.Providing us with lively and interesting moving pictures, TV enables us not only to see what is happening in the world but to learn many things, including foreign languages.So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV.But watching TV too long is not good.Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study.So we should take a correct attitude to students watching TV.Thank you for your listening.14、No Breakfast No Good(不吃早餐不好)

Now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast.But not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.Having no breakfast will throw the normal work of our digestive system into confusion.As a result, it will do harm to our health.And at our age it is high time for us to grow up.So our bodies are in great need of energy.If we don't have breakfast,there will be not enough energy to supply.This may stunt our growth.What's more, it is a long period between breakfast and lunch.Breakfast provides us with the energy needed for the class.Without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes.So for the sake of our health and our study, we must have breakfast.15、Getting up Early ts a Good Habit

Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times.Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be vigorous the whole day.In fact, spring is the best season of a year;morning is the best time of a day.In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.If we do some exercises or only take a short walk in the morning, we will be full of energy the whole day.Also we will have enough time to prepare our work of the day if we get up early.In short, getting up early can do us a lot of good.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it.We will certainly benefit a lot from it.16、運(yùn)動(dòng)對我們的健康有益(sports exercise health)Sports help everyone to keep healthy, happy, and efficient.So I pay special attention to games, especially table-tennis.Table tennis is my favorite game.I play it almost every day.Table-tennis is an ideal game us because it brings the whole body into action.It strengthens our muscles, expands our lungs, promotes the circulation of the blood, and causes a healthy action of the skin.Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money.Table-tennis is very moderate.it is not so rough as football.It is an indoor game and can be played even on rainy days.Thus, it is my favorite kind of exercise.17、Should Students Make Friends On Line? Should students make friends on line?

Some people say yes.The Internet helps make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students, get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other, things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.18、如何向網(wǎng)友介紹自己？ Dear Tony，I am Li Hua, a boy of 16 from China.I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese on the Internet.I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA.I’m a sociable and supportive person who likes talking with people and helping with their problems.I’m good at English and I think we can communicate with each other by sending e-mails or chatting on the Internet.I like table tennis, enjoy singing and I’m crazy about popular music.At the same time, I like traveling around in my spare time.I hope you can come to visit China, and I’ll show you around many places of interest.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua

第二篇：高中英語書面表達(dá)--書信作文

高中英語滿分書信作文模板——投訴信1 Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（總體介紹）.④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一個(gè)方面）.⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二個(gè)方面）.⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感覺）to______（抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果）.⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建議和請求）, preferably ______（進(jìn)一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（設(shè)定解決事情最后期限）.⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.高中英語滿分書信作文模板——建議信

Dear ______, ①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______（建議的內(nèi)容）.③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely, 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——請求信 Dear ______ , ①I am writing to formally request to ______（請求的內(nèi)容）.②The reason for ______is that ______（給出原因）.③I ______ , so I ______（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.④I would also like to request ______（提出進(jìn)一步的要求）.⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______（電話號碼）.⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Sir or Madam, ①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______（報(bào)紙名稱）of ______（廣告發(fā)布時(shí)間）.②Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a ______（工作名稱）.③In the one hand, ______（第一個(gè)原因）.④On the other hand, ______（另一個(gè)原因）.⑤Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.⑥If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ______（電話號碼）.⑦Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely，（求職信）

Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——邀請信 Dear ______ , ①There will be a ______（內(nèi)容）at/in ______（地點(diǎn)）on ______（時(shí)間）.②We would be honored to have you there with us.③The occasion will start at ______（具體時(shí)間）.④This will be followed by a ______（進(jìn)一步的安排）.⑤At around ______（時(shí)間）, ______（另一個(gè)安排）.⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ______（通知你的最后期限）.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——道歉信 Dear ______, ①I am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②The reason is that ______（介紹原因）.③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④Hope you can accept my appologieze and understand my situation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——感謝信

模板一：

Dear _________(收信人)

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for __________(感謝的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________(對方給你的具體幫助)，I fear that I would have been _______(沒有對方幫助時(shí)的后果)。

Everyone agrees that it was you who __________(具體幫助的細(xì)節(jié))。Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

模板二：

Dear ________(收信人)，I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for ________（感謝的原因）.I?d like you to know how much your __________(對方的幫助)meant to me.I not only enjoyed __________(具體細(xì)節(jié))，but also __________（具體細(xì)節(jié)）

I repeat my thanks again for your _________(感謝原因).Please give my kind regards to your _______(問候?qū)ο?.Yours truly

Li Ming

模板三： Dear

______ , ①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感謝的原因）.②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（對方給予的具體幫助）, I fear that I would have been ______（沒有對方幫助時(shí)的后果）.③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——詢問信 Dear ______ , ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要詢問的內(nèi)容）.③First of all, what are ______（第一個(gè)問題）? ④Secondly, when will ______（第二個(gè)問題）? ⑤Thirdly, is ______（第三個(gè)問題）? ⑥I would also like to inquire ______（將最重要的問題單獨(dú)成段）.⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——推薦信（求職/求學(xué)）Dear ______ , ①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______（要推薦的人）to you.② During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______.③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______（介紹與此人的關(guān)系）.④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding.⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______.⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always.⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介紹此人的能力）

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.Yours sincerely, 高中英語滿分書信作文模板——祝賀信 Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝賀事由）.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成績）is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨詢對方何時(shí)有空）.⑨I hope ______（表達(dá)自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 開頭句

論述的展開提出觀點(diǎn)：

◆No one would deny that…… 沒有人會(huì)否認(rèn)......◆Now it is widely believed that…… 現(xiàn)在人們普遍認(rèn)為，......◆When it comes to……, some think…… 當(dāng)涉及到......，有些人認(rèn)為......◆There is a public debate today that...有今天的公開辯論......◆A is a common way of……, but is it a wise one? A是一種常見的方式......，但它是一個(gè)明智的嗎？

◆Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位語從句…… 最近帶來的問題已經(jīng)成為關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)+同位語從句......◆Different people hold different opinions.不同的人持有不同意見。◆Opinions are divided.意見分歧。

◆People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …… 人已經(jīng)采取/采取了不同的的態(tài)度對......◆With the rapid improvement in……/growing awareness of……，more and more……

隨著迅速改善....../意識不斷增強(qiáng)......，越來越多......（e.g.：With the rapid improvement in building industry，more and more structures are being erected to set the people?s minds at ease.）

（在建筑行業(yè)的迅速改善，越來越多的結(jié)構(gòu)正在架設(shè)，設(shè)置放心人心。）

◆ Recently，sth'/the problem of……h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern……

近日，一些事情/問題......一直頗受關(guān)注/已成為市民關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)...（e。g。Recently，the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）（最近，失業(yè)問題已帶來了這種頗受關(guān)注，世界各國政府都致力于找到有用的解決方案）

◆ In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in……

在過去幾年中，一直存在著繁榮/急劇增長/下降了...（e。g。In the past ten years，there has been a sharp decline in the number of species。）在過去十年中，一直在物種的數(shù)量急劇下降。）

◆ Nowadays，more/most important/dangerous for our society is……

如今，越來越//我們的社會(huì)最重要的危險(xiǎn).....（e。g。Nowadays，most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles。）

如今，為我們的社會(huì)最危險(xiǎn)的傾向照顧彼此在政界的優(yōu)勢。）

◆Now there is a growing awareness that+同位語從句...現(xiàn)在有越來越清楚地認(rèn)識到，+同位語從句......◆It is time we explore the truth of...這是我們探索真理的......進(jìn)一步提出觀點(diǎn)：

Li Ming

◆…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆People who are for/against the idea think …（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆However, each coin has two sides.（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆Different from those…., …people think ….（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反對道…）.（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆A is but one of the many effects.Another is...◆ Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式：

◆Suppose that...◆Just imagine what would be like if...◆It is reasonable to expect...◆ It is not surprising that...舉普通例子：

◆For example(instance),...◆...such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)

◆We can take something for example.◆A particular example for this is...引用：

◆One of the greatest early writers said...◆Knowledge is power, such is the remark of...◆As somebody once put it, “…”

◆.......How often we hear such words like these.提出原因：

◆There are many reasons for...◆Why....? For one thing,...;for another thing,…

◆The answer to this problem involves many factors.◆Most people would agree that...◆Some people may neglect that in fact...◆Others suggest that...◆ Part of the explanation is...進(jìn)行對比： ◆The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...◆Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...◆Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.◆ A maybe..., but it has the disadvantage that...承上啟下：

◆To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...◆A study of...will make this point clear 讓步：

◆Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...◆ I do not deny that A has its own merits.結(jié)尾：

◆From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...◆In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

◆In short...注（圖表型）

◆According to the information given in the table/graph,we can find that。。

◆As can be seen from the table/graph/figure，there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable（an unfavorable）change in。。

◆ As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in。。over the period of time from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ The table/graph shows that there is a（n）declining/increasing trend of。。from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that。。

第三篇：高中英語書面表達(dá)--書信作文

高中英語滿分作文模板

一.書信體 投訴信

Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（總體介紹）.④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一個(gè)方面）.⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二個(gè)方面）.⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感覺）to______（抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果）.⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建議和請求）, preferably ______（進(jìn)一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（設(shè)定解決事情最后期限）.⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.建議信

Dear ______, ①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______（建議的內(nèi)容）.③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely, 請求信 Dear ______ , ①I am writing to formally request to ______（請求的內(nèi)容）.②The reason for ______is that ______（給出原因）.③I ______ , so I ______（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.④I would also like to request ______（提出進(jìn)一步的要求）.⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______（電話號碼）.⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Sir or Madam, ①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______（報(bào)紙名稱）of ______（廣告發(fā)布時(shí)間）.②Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a ______（工作名稱）.③In the one hand, ______（第一個(gè)原因）.④On the other hand, ______（另一個(gè)原因）.⑤Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.⑥If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ______（電話號碼）.⑦Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely，（求職信）

Li Ming 邀請信

Dear ______ , ①There will be a ______（內(nèi)容）at/in ______（地點(diǎn)）on ______（時(shí)間）.②We would be honored to have you there with us.③The occasion will start at ______（具體時(shí)間）.④This will be followed by a ______（進(jìn)一步的安排）.⑤At around ______（時(shí)間）, ______（另一個(gè)安排）.⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ______（通知你的最后期限）.Yours sincerely, 道歉信

Dear ______, ①I am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②The reason is that ______（介紹原因）.③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④Hope you can accept my appologieze and understand my situation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

Li Ming 感謝信

模板一：

Dear _________(收信人)

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for __________(感謝的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________(對方給你的具體幫助)，I fear that I would have been _______(沒有對方幫助時(shí)的后果)。

Everyone agrees that it was you who __________(具體幫助的細(xì)節(jié))。Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

模板二：

Dear ________(收信人)，I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for ________（感謝的原因）.I?d like you to know how much your __________(對方的幫助)meant to me.I not only enjoyed __________(具體細(xì)節(jié))，but also __________（具體細(xì)節(jié)）

I repeat my thanks again for your _________(感謝原因).Please give my kind regards to your _______(問候?qū)ο?.Yours truly

Li Ming

模板三： Dear

______ , ①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感謝的原因）.②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（對方給予的具體幫助）, I fear that I would have been ______（沒有對方幫助時(shí)的后果）.③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 詢問信

Dear ______ , ①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要詢問的內(nèi)容）.③First of all, what are ______（第一個(gè)問題）? ④Secondly, when will ______（第二個(gè)問題）? ⑤Thirdly, is ______（第三個(gè)問題）? ⑥I would also like to inquire ______（將最重要的問題單獨(dú)成段）.⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 推薦信（求職/求學(xué)）Dear ______ , ①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______（要推薦的人）to you.② During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______.③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______（介紹與此人的關(guān)系）.④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding.⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______.⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always.⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介紹此人的能力）

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.Yours sincerely，Li Ming ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝賀事由）.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成績）is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨詢對方何時(shí)有空）.⑨I hope ______（表達(dá)自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

二、議論文

Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention, one of which is that....隨著社會(huì)的不斷發(fā)展，出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is worthwhile X there is a long-running debate.關(guān)于是否值得X的問題，一直以來爭論不休.Just as the saying goes: “so many people so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗話說，""。不同的人對此有不同的看法是可以理解的。

Those who criticize X argue that X They believe that X But people who favor X on the other hand argue that.X 1.To begin /start with 2.furthermore/besides/in addition 3.last but not least.批判X的人認(rèn)為X。他們相信X，不過，另一方面，贊同X的人則認(rèn)為X。After a thorough consideration for my part I am in favor of the latter view that

X 經(jīng)過深思熟慮，我較支持后一種看法，亦即X。

三、說明文 Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention one of which is that X 隨著社會(huì)的不斷發(fā)展，出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是X。Why have there been so many X maybe the reasons can be listed as follows 1.To begin /start with 2.furthermore/besides/in addition 3.last but not least.為什么有這么多X，理由如下

Obviously it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem For one thing

For another 很明顯，我們現(xiàn)在必須采取一些措施 一方面

另一方面

I think all the measures above can make present situation better.Let us all start to do so by ourselves.我認(rèn)為上述措施能使現(xiàn)狀變好。讓我們都從自身做起！

四、圖表作文（圖表型）

◆According to the information given in the table/graph,we can find that。。

◆As can be seen from the table/graph/figure，there is an obvious and rapid increase /decrease/decline/favorable（an unfavorable）change in。。

◆ As we can see from the table/graph/form /figure above, great changes have taken place in。。over the period of time from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ The table/graph shows that there is a（n）declining/increasing trend of。。from。。（年份）to。。（年份）

◆ Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that。。

As is shown by the percentage in the picture X has been on rise/ decrease, X dramatically decreasing from X in X to X in X.From the sharp decline in the chart, it goes without saying that X.There are at least two good reasons accounting for X.In one hand, X.In the other hand, X is due to the fact that X.In addition, X is responsible for X.Maybe there are some other reasons to show X.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that X.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.五、話題作文

Nowadays, there are more and more X in X.It is estimated that X.Why have there been so many X ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is

X.Besides, X The third one is X.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to X.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing X.For another thing, X.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of X.開頭句

論述的展開提出觀點(diǎn)：

◆No one would deny that…… 沒有人會(huì)否認(rèn)......◆Now it is widely believed that…… 現(xiàn)在人們普遍認(rèn)為，......◆When it comes to……, some think…… 當(dāng)涉及到......，有些人認(rèn)為......◆There is a public debate today that...有今天的公開辯論......◆A is a common way of……, but is it a wise one? A是一種常見的方式......，但它是一個(gè)明智的嗎？

◆Recently the problem has been brought into focus that+同位語從句…… 最近帶來的問題已經(jīng)成為關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)+同位語從句......◆Different people hold different opinions.不同的人持有不同意見?！鬙pinions are divided.意見分歧。

◆People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …… 人已經(jīng)采取/采取了不同的的態(tài)度對......◆With the rapid improvement in……/growing awareness of……，more and more……

隨著迅速改善....../意識不斷增強(qiáng)......，越來越多......（e.g.：With the rapid improvement in building industry，more and more structures are being erected to set the people?s minds at ease.）

（在建筑行業(yè)的迅速改善，越來越多的結(jié)構(gòu)正在架設(shè)，設(shè)置放心人心。）

◆ Recently，sth'/the problem of……h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern……

近日，一些事情/問題......一直頗受關(guān)注/已成為市民關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)...（e。g。Recently，the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments worldwide are committed to finding useful solutions.）（最近，失業(yè)問題已帶來了這種頗受關(guān)注，世界各國政府都致力于找到有用的解決方案）

◆ In the past few years，there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in……

在過去幾年中，一直存在著繁榮/急劇增長/下降了...（e。g。In the past ten years，there has been a sharp decline in the number of species。）在過去十年中，一直在物種的數(shù)量急劇下降。）

◆ Nowadays，more/most important/dangerous for our society is……

如今，越來越//我們的社會(huì)最重要的危險(xiǎn).....（e。g。Nowadays，most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles。）

如今，為我們的社會(huì)最危險(xiǎn)的傾向照顧彼此在政界的優(yōu)勢。）

◆Now there is a growing awareness that+同位語從句...現(xiàn)在有越來越清楚地認(rèn)識到，+同位語從句......◆It is time we explore the truth of...這是我們探索真理的......進(jìn)一步提出觀點(diǎn)：

◆…of them hold the opinion that ….（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆…of them are in favor of the idea that…（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆People who are for/against the idea think …（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆However, each coin has two sides.（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆Different from those…., …people think ….（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆On the other hand, … people object that（有些人反對道…）.（不同觀點(diǎn)）

◆A is but one of the many effects.Another is...◆ Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式：

◆Suppose that...◆Just imagine what would be like if...◆It is reasonable to expect...◆ It is not surprising that...舉普通例子：

◆For example(instance),...◆...such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)

◆We can take something for example.◆A particular example for this is...引用：

◆One of the greatest early writers said...◆Knowledge is power, such is the remark of...◆As somebody once put it, “…”

◆.......How often we hear such words like these.提出原因：

◆There are many reasons for...◆Why....? For one thing,...;for another thing,…

◆The answer to this problem involves many factors.◆Most people would agree that...◆Some people may neglect that in fact...◆Others suggest that...◆ Part of the explanation is...進(jìn)行對比：

◆The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...◆Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...◆Indeed , A has more advantages than B when sth is concerned.◆ A maybe..., but it has the disadvantage that...承上啟下：

◆To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...◆A study of...will make this point clear 讓步：

◆Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...◆ I do not deny that A has its own merits.結(jié)尾：

◆From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...◆In summary, it is wiser of somebody to do something

◆In short...說明：請大家朗讀熟記各類文體套語，摘抄你喜歡的表達(dá)并背誦仿寫。

第四篇：高中英語書面表達(dá)講解與訓(xùn)練

高中英語書面表達(dá)講解與訓(xùn)練

——如何寫好書信

云南省騰沖縣第六中學(xué) <679114>許叁華

書面表達(dá)是英語學(xué)習(xí)聽、說、讀、寫過程中不可或缺的部分，主要是考查學(xué)生是否能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)過的英語知識和掌握的技巧進(jìn)行思想交流，也就是說該題主要測試學(xué)生交際能力和語言綜合運(yùn)用能力。

高中英語試題中書面表達(dá)與語文命題不同，它是一種指導(dǎo)式作文，在一定程度上限定學(xué)生的表達(dá)思路，不允許學(xué)生自行立意，漫無邊際地發(fā)揮；而且對考生的寫作范圍也做出了比較明確的限定。但試題中任然會(huì)具有一定的開放性，給學(xué)生留出了一定的自由發(fā)揮的空間，有利于學(xué)生充分展示自己的英語書面表達(dá)能力?？v觀歷年高考英語書面表達(dá)（全國卷I），命題思路變化不大，多采用的是應(yīng)用文的考查形式，是提綱類作文，體現(xiàn)了高考命題的穩(wěn)定性，其中又以書信（或e-mail）的形式最為常見。

一、如何寫好書信：

（一）、盡管高考試題中已給出了書信的基本格式，但考生應(yīng)熟掌握書信寫作要求。

1、書信(Letter)一般可分為事務(wù)信件或公函(Business Letter or Offical Correspondence)以及私人信件Private Letter)兩大類。一般包括以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：

1）收信人的姓名和地址；

2）寄信人的姓名及其與收信人的關(guān)系；

3）寄信人的地址（有時(shí)可以省略）；

4）寫信的時(shí)間；

5）信的內(nèi)容。

2、書信的格式

1）信頭(Heading)；

2）稱呼(Salutation)；

3）正文(Body of the letter)；

4）結(jié)束語(Complimentary close)；

5）簽名(signature)。

（二）、認(rèn)真審題，確定篇章結(jié)構(gòu)或提綱，主要涉及具體內(nèi)容。

1、根據(jù)寫作的對象，寫出必要的客套用語（一句話就夠用了，從這句話可以看出你是給人寫信還是寫回信）。

2、根據(jù)情況，寫出寫信的意圖或目的。

3、根據(jù)題目要求（判斷出是議論文，說明文還是其它文體），并按某種文體寫主體內(nèi)容（注意：題目如果給了開頭，那么你要寫的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該和前面講的某種文體模式是一樣的）。

（三)、再讀細(xì)節(jié)，確定人稱（多以第一人稱為主，有時(shí)會(huì)穿插使用到其它人稱）、時(shí)態(tài)、主要情節(jié)、句式等。尤其要考慮動(dòng)詞的搭配（動(dòng)詞與名詞的搭配，動(dòng)詞與介詞、副詞的搭配），（例如：give a talk, give in, give up），相關(guān)同義或詞組（如：put on, have on, dress sb/ oneself, be dressed in, be in, pull on, fit on）。

（四）、成文（100—120詞），10句話左右，囊括要點(diǎn)，按篇章要求組織語篇。

（五）、潤色，注意措辭，復(fù)雜句式及承上啟下的自然銜接，校對細(xì)節(jié)。

二、書信寫作常用語句

英語書信類語言要根據(jù)書信的內(nèi)容和功能來確定，常用的一些客套語言表達(dá)方式有：

1.感謝信常用句型：I am grateful to you for?;I take this opportunity to express to1

you my deep appreciation for?；It is kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.2.致歉信常用句型：I must apologize to you for?;I regret to inform you that I am unable to do?

3.邀請信常用句型有：I am pleased to invite you to attend?;I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here;We look forward to seeing you.4.求職信常用句型有：I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today’s newspaper.;I have learned from a friend that your company is looking for a?；I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.5.信件開頭常用語：

1）、I was delighted to receive your letter.我很高興收到你的來信。

2）、Your letter came to me this morning.我今天上午收到了你的來信。

3)、It was a great pleasure to learn that you’ve been elected president of the Student Union , and I would like to express my warmest congratulations.聽說你當(dāng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席，我非常高興并向你表示最熱烈的祝賀。

4)、I have received your letter of July the 29th.我已經(jīng)收到了你7月29號的來信。

5）、I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.我給你寫信是想打聽下星期一講座的事。

6）、I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.我給你寫信是想問你下個(gè)星期能不能來？

7）、How time flies!It’s three months since I saw you last.光陰似箭，我們已經(jīng)三個(gè)月沒見面了。

8）、Thank you for your letter.謝謝你給我寫信。

9）、In reply to your letter about the exhibition this year ?

現(xiàn)在回答你上封信當(dāng)中關(guān)于今年的展覽事宜??

10）、Let me tell you that ? 讓我告訴你??

6.信件結(jié)尾常用語

1）、Tom joins me in sending all good wishes to you and your family.我和湯姆祝福你們?nèi)摇?/p>

3）、I imagine we’ll see you again , so I’ll end for now.我想我們很快就會(huì)見面的，就寫到這兒吧。

4）、Please remember me to your whole family.請代我向你全家問好。

5）、Give my best regards（wishes）to your mother.請代我向你媽媽致意。

6）、Best wishes.致以最良好的祝愿。

7）、With love 愛你的8）、Wish you a pleasant journey.祝你旅途愉快。

9)、Wish you success.祝你成功。

10)、Wish you the best of health（luck）祝你健康（好運(yùn)）。

11）、Looking forward to your next visit to China.歡迎您下次再來中國。

12）、Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.希望能盡快收到你的來信。

三、典型例文（2010全國卷Ⅰ）假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師 Smith 女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。英語演講比賽

主題：人與自然

時(shí)間：6月15日下午2:00-5:00

地點(diǎn)：501教室

參賽選手：10名學(xué)生

聯(lián)系人：李華（電話 44876655）

歡迎大家光臨

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Ms.Smith,_________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________

With best wishes,Lihua

寫作提示

1.確定文章體裁、格式、結(jié)構(gòu)及常用時(shí)態(tài)。書信以應(yīng)用文形式出現(xiàn)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。

2.依據(jù)題目列出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、分清文章層次。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1）.自我介紹2）.邀請做評委3）.演講主題

4）.比賽時(shí)間5）.參賽選手6）.聯(lián)系方式

3.只寫與要求一致的內(nèi)容，文章層次應(yīng)結(jié)合問題特點(diǎn)來安排。在確定內(nèi)容時(shí)，應(yīng)使用自己最熟悉的英語詞匯或句型來表述。

4、遣詞造句及連句成篇：提示學(xué)生注意謀篇布局和選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡語。在行文的整體性上，要合理使用到一些連接詞或短語或結(jié)構(gòu)，比如：you’d better?;I think?;I suggest that?.;first / at first / first of all?;secondly;then;as a matter of fact?;generally speaking;I wish?/I hope?etc.參考范文：

Dear Ms.Smith,I'm Li Hua, a chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university.I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2:00 pm in Room 501 and last for about three hours.Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Yours

Li Hua

四．即時(shí)練習(xí)（2008年全國卷Ⅰ）

假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：

1.自我介紹；2.祝賀蘇琳生日；3.感謝工作人員；4.索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

注意：

1、詞數(shù)100左右；

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3、開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!

__________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,Li Hua

寫作提示

1.確定文章體裁、格式、結(jié)構(gòu)及常用時(shí)態(tài)。書信以應(yīng)用文形式出現(xiàn)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。

2.依據(jù)題目列出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、分清文章層次。

1).自我介紹2).信息來源3).祝賀生日4).感謝照顧5).索取照片6).合適的結(jié)尾

3.只寫與要求一致的內(nèi)容，文章層次應(yīng)結(jié)合問題特點(diǎn)來安排。在確定內(nèi)容時(shí)，應(yīng)使用自己最熟悉的英語詞匯或句型來表述。

練習(xí)及講評

1.叫學(xué)生按要點(diǎn)寫出關(guān)鍵詞；2.讓學(xué)生造句子；3.讓學(xué)生發(fā)表意見；4.老師點(diǎn)評。

參考范文

Dear Sir/ Madam,Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Hua

總之，寫作是對學(xué)生綜合知識運(yùn)用能力的考查，只有擁有了牢固的基礎(chǔ)知識，并不斷練習(xí)才能寫出好的文章。

第五篇：高中英語書面表達(dá)教學(xué)反思

高中英語書面表達(dá)教學(xué)反思

李彬

河南省西峽縣第一高級中學(xué)分校

長期以來，如何有效地進(jìn)行英語寫作教學(xué)一直困擾著廣大英語教師。中學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱和高考說明都要求學(xué)生能根據(jù)所給提示條件寫出１００個(gè)單詞左右的英語短文。內(nèi)容連貫，文理通順，無嚴(yán)重語法或結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤。這看上去似乎是不很高的要求，在教和學(xué)的實(shí)踐中達(dá)到卻非易事。學(xué)生也普遍反映英文書面表達(dá)難，到底難在哪里？為此筆者對學(xué)生進(jìn)行測試調(diào)查，對答卷錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行了分析統(tǒng)計(jì)。結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生在有英語謂語的時(shí)態(tài)、語氣、動(dòng)詞詞義辯析和句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤，拼寫單詞錯(cuò)誤，名詞、代詞和冠詞類的錯(cuò)誤，介詞和關(guān)連詞使用不當(dāng)占，形容詞、副詞的誤用等等。評講后學(xué)生感到書面表達(dá)短文內(nèi)容所用詞語和結(jié)構(gòu)不難，很容易理解，就是當(dāng)時(shí)自己想不起來，寫不好。結(jié)合統(tǒng)計(jì)分析結(jié)果及學(xué)生評講后的整體感受和部分外語程度中上的學(xué)生進(jìn)行了個(gè)別面對面的交談?dòng)懻?，發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生英語書面表達(dá)的主要困難有：

１、語法不正確，錯(cuò)誤不斷 有的同學(xué)在做單選題時(shí)還能考慮語法和結(jié)構(gòu)，一旦自己動(dòng)手寫時(shí)，就把語法和結(jié)構(gòu)忘在一邊，不考慮時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)等語法問題，結(jié)果丟分很多。在英語中尤其是謂語的變化多。時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣的語法概念和英語動(dòng)詞變化之間的關(guān)系，寫作應(yīng)用起來不明確不熟練，用英語寫作時(shí)就很容易出錯(cuò)。有必要加強(qiáng)英語謂語動(dòng)詞變化的訓(xùn)練。２、語言不地道，漢式思維 英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)以動(dòng)詞為中心各有特定的搭配，學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)感到缺乏表達(dá)思想的語感。經(jīng)常有漢英翻譯詞對字硬譯的現(xiàn)象，加之英漢兩種語言在文化思維方面語言表達(dá)有相當(dāng)?shù)牟町?，也造成英語書面表達(dá)的一定困難。要培養(yǎng)學(xué)生英語表達(dá)的語感必須加強(qiáng)平時(shí)口頭和筆頭造句表達(dá)習(xí)慣的建立。

３、用詞不貼切，缺乏積累 進(jìn)行寫作，詞匯是必不可少。從生理和心理方面看，中學(xué)生已相對成熟，而他們所能用的英語語言在英語的書面表達(dá)上就是想說的話很多，意思也很好，使用的語言形式卻詞不達(dá)意，錯(cuò)誤百出，為此要盡可能使學(xué)生接觸大量和他們生理發(fā)展相適應(yīng)的英語語言材料，以便于他們吸收豐富自己的英語知識。

４、過渡不自然，單純翻譯 一篇好的短文不是由簡單的句子堆砌而成，而是由一些意義相關(guān)、合乎邏輯圍繞一個(gè)中心思想的句子組成。書面表達(dá)不同于翻譯，要有一定的靈活性，句與句之間要有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。

以上學(xué)生英語書面表達(dá)中的錯(cuò)誤和困難，也提示了解決這些難題的可能途徑和策略。

（一）、詞匯的掌握?！霸~”是基礎(chǔ)，是說話、寫作的必需材料，衡量一個(gè)學(xué)生英語水平及交際能力的高低，詞匯量的多少是一個(gè)關(guān)鍵。詞匯量的訓(xùn)練可以從三個(gè)方面入手。首先是聽寫：學(xué)生寫作時(shí)容易忘記單詞或把漢英詞匯等同起來。因此，學(xué)生應(yīng)堅(jiān)持每天聽寫、默寫、循環(huán)記憶，鞏固詞匯。并且要求學(xué)有余力的學(xué)生給出與該單詞相關(guān)的同義、近義、反義詞，使詞匯得到最大限度的復(fù)現(xiàn)。其次是學(xué)會(huì)銜接詞：銜接詞是黏合劑,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用銜接詞可以承上啟下,達(dá)到語言流暢、邏輯清晰。如：after a while, just then, several minutes later, even though, at that time, however, at last, before long, from now(then)on等。應(yīng)用了銜接詞之后，可增加文章的連貫性與可讀性。(二)．注重寫作教學(xué)的基本訓(xùn)練

英語屬于結(jié)構(gòu)語言，它有自己的基本句型、固定搭配、固定短語等，這些都是不可變的，要想在寫作中用上它們，用好它們，必須加強(qiáng)這方面的基本訓(xùn)練。首先，加強(qiáng)五種基本句型結(jié)構(gòu)教學(xué)。幾乎所有的英語句型都是五種句型的擴(kuò)大、延伸或變化，因此訓(xùn)練學(xué)生“寫”就要抓住五種基本句型的訓(xùn)練，讓他們把這五種基本句型記牢，不斷運(yùn)用。五種是：

（１）Ｓ＋Ｖ；

（２）Ｓ＋Ｖ＋Ｏ；

（３）Ｓ＋Ｖ＋Ｏ＋Ｏ；

（４）Ｓ＋Ｖ＋Ｐ；

（５）Ｓ＋Ｖ＋Ｏ＋Ｃ。

英語中千變?nèi)f化的句子歸根到底都離不開這五個(gè)基本句型，因此這五個(gè)基本句型應(yīng)作為寫作訓(xùn)練的出發(fā)點(diǎn)。五種基本句型雖然能表達(dá)一定的意思，但無法比較自由地表達(dá)思想，因此還必須對學(xué)生進(jìn)一步進(jìn)行擴(kuò)句訓(xùn)練，在課堂上充分發(fā)揮學(xué)生的想象力，進(jìn)行擴(kuò)句練習(xí)。其次，加強(qiáng)句型教學(xué)，要對一些句子進(jìn)行分析，增強(qiáng)他們利用各種句子進(jìn)行一意多種表達(dá)的訓(xùn)練。再次，充分利用新教材中“鞏固語言的練習(xí)，”對學(xué)生進(jìn)行基本語感的訓(xùn)練。

(三).圍繞課文內(nèi)容，對學(xué)生進(jìn)行階梯式，即“5S（5 steps）”演進(jìn)成文訓(xùn)練。

第一步：仿寫

由模仿到創(chuàng)造，這是學(xué)習(xí)寫作的一條規(guī)律，也是提高英語書面表達(dá)能力的有效途徑。在仿寫前，教師應(yīng)為 學(xué)生提供各種文體的范文，如短文、日記、便條、書信、通知等，并向?qū)W生講明格式及內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，有時(shí)要給予 必要的提示。教師規(guī)定的題目一定要有課文作范例，且應(yīng)與學(xué) 生的實(shí)際生活相關(guān)，這樣，學(xué)生才會(huì)感到有樣可學(xué)、有話可說，才能達(dá)到訓(xùn)練的目的。

第二步：縮寫

縮寫練習(xí)能培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的概括能力，使學(xué)生掌握文章的敘述方法和結(jié)構(gòu)，一般適用于篇幅較長、故事性較強(qiáng) 的文章。訓(xùn)練時(shí)應(yīng)以強(qiáng)調(diào)篇幅、概括內(nèi)容為宗旨。具體的訓(xùn)練步驟如下：①教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生將課文分成若干段并 寫出段意；②由學(xué)生自己合并段落大意，形成文章的初稿；③學(xué)生根據(jù)要求擴(kuò)充初稿，形成短文。同時(shí)，教師 應(yīng)指導(dǎo)學(xué)生在寫作中以“4W1H”（what, who, when, where, how）為線索寫出提綱。高中英語教科書中每單元的 第二課均為閱讀文章，且在Workbook中有針對該文的問答題，所以，還可采用教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生用完整句回答所有 問題并按順序排列后適當(dāng)修改成文的方法進(jìn)行練習(xí)。也可由教師提供提綱，讓學(xué)生按課文大意將提綱進(jìn)行擴(kuò)寫，這也是一種比較有效的訓(xùn)練方法。

第三步：改寫

改寫是一種被廣泛采用的語言教學(xué)策略，它的目的在于讓學(xué)生廣泛地了解和學(xué)習(xí)各種不同類型和風(fēng)格的課 文，如，要求學(xué)生把學(xué)過的短文改寫成對話、把對話改寫成短文、把說明文改寫成記敘文等。這樣既有利于復(fù)習(xí)、鞏固所學(xué)知識，加強(qiáng)對所學(xué)語言知識的運(yùn)用，又能很好地訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力。訓(xùn)練時(shí)宜從改變文章 中人稱、時(shí)態(tài)等較為簡單的內(nèi)容入手。

第四步：給關(guān)鍵詞寫作

讓學(xué)生聽一段故事錄音一兩遍后，教師在黑板上寫出幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)這些詞說出故事大意，并 視情況對內(nèi)容進(jìn)行增改。然后叫兩名學(xué)生將自己的文章寫在黑板上，由其他學(xué)生進(jìn)行分組討論和修改。在這一 教學(xué)過程中，最重要的是對關(guān)鍵詞的選擇。

按上述要求訓(xùn)練一段時(shí)間后可以適當(dāng)加大難度。教師可以在黑板上寫下十個(gè)左右的詞或短語，讓學(xué)生用一 個(gè)完整的情景把這些詞串起來。這項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練可以是小組活動(dòng)，也可以作為個(gè)別操練，既進(jìn)行了聽說訓(xùn)練，又考查了學(xué)生對所學(xué) 知識的運(yùn)用能力，有利于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的創(chuàng)造性思維能力。

(四)、注重寫作訓(xùn)練的規(guī)范化

高中起始階段的寫作訓(xùn)練，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的寫作模式是非常重要的。我按教師用書上說明的寫作步驟，即：（１）構(gòu)思（討論題目）（２）寫提綱（理順?biāo)枷氲倪壿嬯P(guān)系）（３）起草（打草稿）（４）校訂（檢查錯(cuò)誤，重新安排內(nèi)容）（５）修改（定稿）。對學(xué)生進(jìn)行寫作模式的訓(xùn)練。這樣看起來比較麻煩，但避免了反復(fù)，養(yǎng)成了好的寫作習(xí)慣。再就是書寫和文體格式要規(guī)范。嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生正確、端正、熟練地書寫字母、單詞和句子，注意大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，養(yǎng)成良好的書寫習(xí)慣。同時(shí)對各種文體特點(diǎn)、格式要講清楚，使學(xué)生熟悉規(guī)范的書面表達(dá)形式，用正確的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評析和規(guī)范自己的書面表達(dá)。

（五）要抓好指導(dǎo)和評價(jià)雙環(huán)節(jié)

1．指導(dǎo)是寫作教學(xué)不可缺少的環(huán)節(jié)，尤其是剛開始訓(xùn)練寫作時(shí)。

其內(nèi)容可包括：師生共同分析所給材料應(yīng)表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)；討論結(jié)構(gòu)層次如何安排；師生共同討論如何表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)，選擇合適的句型和主要詞匯；討論句與句、段與段如何連接，用那些連接詞為宜等。

2．自評，互評與教師評價(jià)相結(jié)合

教學(xué)實(shí)踐中發(fā)現(xiàn)，學(xué)生均能在積極，主動(dòng)的情感支配下進(jìn)行自評和互評，這一活動(dòng)喚起了學(xué)生強(qiáng)烈的求知欲望，從而漸漸提高了他們的寫作興趣。教師評價(jià)，應(yīng)該有總結(jié)，一方面指出其成功處，另一方面指出其不足處，使學(xué)生有努力的方向。對于基礎(chǔ)較差的學(xué)生,需要教師對其面批面改，做到邊啟發(fā)，邊批改，邊解釋。這樣學(xué)生更能集中注意力，老師也更能把問題講清，說透，從而取得更好的效果，大面積提高了教學(xué)質(zhì)量。教師將一些寫得較好的錯(cuò)誤較少的習(xí)作張貼出來，或講評時(shí)讀給全班學(xué)生聽，給予鼓勵(lì)。公布參考答案供學(xué)生作為學(xué)習(xí)的范文。評價(jià)有利于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生對學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)責(zé)的態(tài)度，并能促使學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)思考，隨時(shí)看到自己取得的成績和存在的不足，幫助反思自主學(xué)習(xí)過程，調(diào)整學(xué)習(xí)目的和學(xué)習(xí)策略，樹立新的超越自我的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，更有效地進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)。

總之，寫是一種綜合能力的訓(xùn)練，是對學(xué)生所學(xué)語言知識的綜合運(yùn)用，是一個(gè)系統(tǒng)工程，它應(yīng)貫穿于教學(xué)活動(dòng)的全過程。作為教師，必須長期堅(jiān)持不懈地對學(xué)生進(jìn)行全方位的訓(xùn)練，才能真正提高學(xué)生寫的能力。只有堅(jiān)持多寫、多讀、多練，才能寫出內(nèi)容充實(shí)、語言豐富、文字優(yōu)美、行文連貫、過渡自然、表達(dá)地道、語域恰當(dāng)?shù)暮梦恼?，才能逐步提高學(xué)生書面表達(dá)能力，以適應(yīng)中高考的要求。

河南省西峽縣第一高級中學(xué)分校（高中）