第一篇：書面表達--環境保護

萬能模板

環境保護

世界環境存在的問題：There are more and more···in the world.They are bad for our life.分析出現問題的原因：I think they are caused by human beings.With the development of···more and more···are/is···At the same time，people always···They hardly···So···

解決措施：In order to···we must···

經典范文

你聽說過某些瀕臨滅絕的動物嗎？請以“Why should we protect wildlife animals？”為題，用英文寫一篇短文，說明為什么要保護野生動物。詞數為80左右。

提示：

1、為什么有些野生動物處于危險之中？

2、為什么保護野生動物很重要？

3、我們應該采取什么措施來保護野生動物？

參考詞匯：

wildelife 野生的 endangered 瀕臨滅絕的 destroy破壞ivory象牙 take measures 采取措施

Why should we protect wildlife animals/?

elephants and pandas.When farmers cut down trees，the animals’ living places were destroyed.Elephants can no longer getanimals.

第二篇：2011高考英語書面表達 預測-環境保護

2011高考英語書面表達預測-環境保護

倡議書——環境保護

假如你是李華，現任你們學校的學生會主席。你將代表學生會起草一份倡議書，號召全校同學行動起來，為環保運動做出自己的努力。同時下周六學校將組織同學在全市進行環保宣傳活動，征召志愿者到校學生會報名。

注意：（1）短文應該包括以上所提供的主要信息，可適當發揮：

（2）詞數：120左右；

（3）倡議書格式以提供，不計入總詞數；

（4）參考詞匯：征召（新人）recruit。May, 2010

Dear brothers and sisters,Yours sincerely,Li Hua

University Students’ Union

【猜題理由】隨著經濟的高速發展，社會自然環境遭受嚴重污染。環保意識的培養和環保工作的開展成為國人，乃至世人共同關注的熱點和焦點。對環保問題而言，“只要人人獻出一點愛，世界將變成美好人間！”此話題為學生熟知，與高中生的生活實際貼近，而且具有一定的開放性，使得每個學生都能夠有話可說，符合新課標理念下的命題方向。

【構思點撥】首先簡要介紹環保問題之重要，號召同學們行動起來，共同參與環保活動；其次就環保發出倡議，并征召志愿者。這樣既把考生限定在一定范圍之內，又給予了考生相當的發揮的自由，有助于考生的作文脫穎而出。

【參考范文】May, 2010

Dear brothers and sisters,Oh behalf of the University Students’ Union, I, the Chairman of the Union, am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campaign.It is the duty of every global villager;man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.Do you cherish precious opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth;Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city.The University Students’ Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers.Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.[來源:學科網ZXXK]

Yours sincerely,Li Hua

Univers

第三篇：書面表達

中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓練

【考點掃描】

書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的。【名師解難】 一.訓練方法

1.記。認真系統復習和背誦基礎知識和優美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們若有大量的現成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發揮。

2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進行實戰寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內寫出100個詞的短文，并且質量高、1 內容全、形式正確。這樣形成習慣，考試時就能得心應手。二.應試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意。《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。

2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調：定出時態、人稱、順序、開頭、結尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態、時態要準確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法： 1）表示并列關系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉折關系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時間關系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態、語態錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項

書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關。【中考范例】

VII.書面表達（共1題，計10分）

假如你叫張強。請根據下面美國朋友Bob的來信內容，結合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數：80左右。回信的開頭、結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。注意：回信中不得出現你的真實地址和所在學校的名稱。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內容應是介紹張強自己的情況。

2.圈要點：根據來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調：1.時態：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結尾題目已經給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正。【滿分演練】

（1）

華山是中國名山之一。假設外國友人到你校參觀后，準備去旅游。請根據以下要點向外國友人簡單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。

3．登山便可領略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字數：80詞左右。2．請不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝。回信要包括以下內容： 1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。

注意1.信的格式已經給出。

2.信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。（3）

根據中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動物十分有趣，人見人愛。當你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說……

請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經歷。（請注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據中文設置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字數60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當發揮）3.發言稿的開頭和結尾已給出。

假設你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國中學生要來你們學校訪問。請你寫一篇有關西安的簡介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字數100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫話。

根據以上四幅圖和提示詞語，寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、語句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數60~80個左右。3.要表達自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語言規范，語意完整，內容豐富。2.表達符合圖意，書寫規范。3.給出自己的觀點。4.文章的開頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請根據下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經給出，不算入總詞匯數內。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫話。

要求：1.根據圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態，70詞以上。不得使用真實姓名、地名、學校名。

3.標題和第一句已給出，但不計入70詞之內。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

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假如你所在的學校要出一期英語壁報。你準備就自己經歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內容 2.詞數：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數：50~80，不包括已經給出的單詞）

內容要點：

過去 現在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

(3)參考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

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Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內容要點：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點半我就起床了。（3）我帶著桶去學校，同學們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開始植樹。（也可描寫動場面。）（5）看著新種下的樹，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當媽媽為我倒水時，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當媽媽為我夾我喜歡吃的菜時，我卻沒想過他們是愛吃淡一點，還是濃一點。。。2009年到了，意味著過去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細想想，現在的我也應該為她做一點點事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學著爸爸平時沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會，水開了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因為第一次自己動手，蓋碗的燙手是我所沒想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因為外婆特別喜歡喝茶。當外婆從廚房走出來的時候我已經把茶都給倒好了，這時，外婆才告訴我哪一個是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫熱的心。媽媽一愣，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對媽媽說：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了。”媽媽仰起了脖子，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的樣子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我記得在我小學的時侯，就讀過一首曹值的七步詩：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時只知其大意，只知道曹操的長子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內作出一首詩來，否則處死；結果他的弟弟就在七步之內寫出了流傳至今的“七步詩”。當時這首詩對曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個世紀過去了，社會和生活都發生了極大的變化；應該說人的素質也應有所提高；一個人生活在世上，是離不開親情、友情和愛情的；有人說：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團結并不是真對與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業上應是不可或缺的照應；俗話說“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見，團結是一種力量，只有團結才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因為一點小事，一點利益而你爭我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時有時聊及這個問題，有人這樣評論：一個人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個社會上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發生的，但要看你怎樣去對待，把金錢和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢面前，我們何不禮讓一點，做一個有道德、有素質、有親情的人呢？

家和萬事興，團結是一種力量，讓我們團結友愛，和睦共處，為個人的事業、為家庭的生活、為國家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛情；把金錢和利益看淡一些吧！人過留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當你離開這個世界的時侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經六十多歲了,為了子女的成長與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說過來,人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個電話甚至一個短信,父母也已經很知足了.我由于長期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長真的付出了很多,然而他們現在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實實地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔憂,這是最基本的我們應當做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實性,主要考究它的內涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛的家。然而在一個暴風雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復發，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進了四個孩子的家。性格剛強的哥哥無法忍受這個新家庭的種種，無奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開了家。他們開始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當實在沒有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對正要出國的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對老人家中請他們收養。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當上了出租車司機；齊思甜出國受到良好的教育，成了音樂家；齊天成為東北大學學生；齊妙卻當上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂會上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂霎時凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚的樂曲落下，聽眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個音樂教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂的天堂里，這也為后來思甜成為音樂家打好了基礎。父親說：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞。”這位父親是偉大的，他樂觀開朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時又是一個嚴厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動邊教音樂時，他對這“莫須有的罪名”并沒有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當搬運工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒有一絲怨言，還對孩子說：“我沒事。”懂事的孩子們也拿起了工具，幫父親干活。他哼著小調，陽光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見,這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動告訴了孩子們音樂的重要性及如何面對生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來的四個孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個孩子依偎在車站。他們在為下一餐飯而擔心著。“哥，我餓。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈。”事實上他也這么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時對他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開原來的家后，養父母去世得早，加上無人看管，就開始墮落下去了。她在20年后與齊思甜相遇時，大言不慚地對她說她滿足于當前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發現自己對不起所有愛她的人，她的良心受到了譴責。于是，親情的歸來使她的精神方面的巨人復活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮心劑。

親情是心中的太陽，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說，親情一定是無價的寶藏。

沒有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒有了親情，生命則無法繁衍后代；沒有了親情，生活就單調枯燥；沒有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結兩顆心的紐帶。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，誰也不認得誰。但落在地下后，結成一體，結成冰，化成水，就永遠也分不開了。”

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情。“我在這頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無價的親情呵，愿我們在你的鼓舞下，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關于親情的影片..我看這部影片時,心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們去刻苦努力,只要我們在心理上能夠戰勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強者!

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nowadays many middle schools prefer to---------.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First,----------.Besides / What’s more,-------.Meanwhile,-----.On the other hand,/ However,-----------------------.The most important thing is that------------.As a result,-----------------------

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高考英語滿分作文范文:A Letter of Thanks(一封感謝信)

時間： 2008-04-08 17:11:41作者：來源：

Dear Mr.John,How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you.You tutored me in my spoken English

before you went to Beijing.With your help I made such rapid progress that I won

the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.My achievement is owed to your help.Thank you very much.I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school.I am very glad at the news.In that case we can see each other again.I am looking forward to your coming.I am sending you a telescope as a small gift.I hope you will like it.All the best.Yours,Liu Jie

第五篇：書面表達

書面表達

1．書面表達（本題20分）根據要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中學生，看了上述故事后，你想表達自己的看法。請你給欄目編輯寫一封電子郵件，內容包括： 1.你對其中的哪個故事感興趣？原因是什么？ ．．．．．．．2.你對這個故事所提及的現象的看法。3.就該現象提出至少兩條解決問題的建議。作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。

2.語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today，__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Ming

2．書面表達(滿分15分)

假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英語教師)要求你們在下午的班會課上用英語演講的形式參與班長(monitor)競選，請根據圖片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 為題寫一篇演講稿。要求:

1.短文必須包括三個方面內容：我的優秀品質；我的能力；我將為大家做什么； 2.短文內容可適當發揮，提示詞可選用； 3.短文中不得出現真實的人名和校名；

4..短文詞數為80左右，開頭、結尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數。

I believe I can

Good aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen!My name is Li Ming

Thank you!

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從前，我們通訊不便捷，只能通過書信與千里之外的親朋交流，富有濃濃的親情。今天，隨著互聯網的發展，智能手機（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。人們的交流變得非常的方便，可我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見，很多人都有同感：“距離近了，可親情遠了。”請根據圖中所示，結合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要求：1.短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當發揮；2.題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】 試題分析：本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點是兩個方面，一是現象與弊端：揭示現代人用手機的惡習及其產生的危害；二是觀點與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機，利用好這個現代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現在時態。第三人稱或第一稱形式。寫作亮點：短文首先結合現代人使用手機的現象，說明了人們使用手機給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴

試卷第2頁，總3頁 人們怎樣正確地使用好手機。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等結構，給短文增色不少。

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參考答案

1．Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours, 【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇電子郵件。本題所給材料是是根據上文的故事表達自己的感受。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。

寫作亮點：文章直接談到作者對麥克的故事感興趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I can't stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.給文章增色不少。考點：考查提綱作文。2．

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!

My name is Li Ming!I'm very glad to be a member of our class.I want to be monitor for these reasons.First, I’m hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second, I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing.I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields.I'm sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.That’s all.Thank you!【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇演講稿，要按照要求，從：我的優秀品質；我的能力；我將為大家做什么三個方面進行寫作。用第一人稱形式，我的品質和能力用一般現在時態，我將為大家做的用一般將來時態。要根據演講稿的特點選擇恰當的詞語和句型結構，增加語言的感染力。

寫作亮點：范文開頭簡單的自我介紹后直接點題：我要當班長；接著由first, second 等等列出自己想當班長的原因；后面用兩個一般將來時的句子說明自己將會怎樣當好班長。敘述清楚，結構明晰。文中的I believe I wi11?；I'm sure we will?充分表達了作者的自信，彰顯了作者個性，突出了短文主題，語言精煉，符合演講稿的特點。【考點定位】 考查提綱類作文。3．

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead

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of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】

試題分析：本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點是兩個方面，一是現象與弊端：揭示現代人用手機的惡習及其產生的危害；二是觀點與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機，利用好這個現代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現在時態。第三人稱或第一稱形式。

寫作亮點：短文首先結合現代人使用手機的現象，說明了人們使用手機給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴人們怎樣正確地使用好手機。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等結構，給短文增色不少。

【考點定位】圖畫及提綱類作文。

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