第一篇：英語書面表達限時訓練

英語書面表達限時訓練

國內某英文報招聘兼職記者，報道2012年奧運會。假設你是李 目前在英國做交換生，想應聘這份工作，請按下列要點寫一封自薦信。

1.個人情況：熟悉本地情況，有相關工作經歷。

2.能力優勢：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、團隊合作等。

3.承諾：保證按要求完成任務。

注意：詞數100-120，參考詞匯：交換生 exchange student Dear Sir or Madam:,I am writing to apply for the job as a part-time repoter for The london Olympic Games.

第二篇：初三英語書面表達訓練

中考作文】2013中考英語作文預測

2012中考英語作文預測：8個要準備的話題 1.關于學習英語的話題: 復習要點 Learn English 請你以“How to learn English well?”寫份演講稿80字左右.范文: Dear classmates: We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!

2.衛生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據下表內容談談你的看法,寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的結論

(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強體;3.鄙棄不良習慣

(你的看法?)How to stay our health /fit? 范文1: Dear boys and grils : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you bye!范文2:Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李華,你校初三年級同學正在開展一場討論,主題是“初三學生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。請根據下面所提供的信息,用英語總結出討論情況。

提示: 70%的學生

30%的學生

應該每天進行體育鍛煉,但不要時間過長

鍛煉浪費時間、使人疲勞

鍛煉能增強體質,保持健康

鍛煉以后很興奮,較長時間不能投入學習

鍛煉能使大腦休息,使學習效果更好

鍛煉中可能會受傷

要求:語句通順,句意連貫;詞數為80詞左右;發言稿的開頭已寫好,但不計入總詞數。

Dear classmates: I’m Li Hua.After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.環境問題:今天環境變得越來越糟糕環境問題影響著人們的工作學習生活等而我們的工作生活生產等又使環境污染越來越嚴重..........如何保護我們的環境?請以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴重 2.砍伐森林嚴重 3.大氣污染嚴重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保護環境?至少:3---4個方面, 80字左右的。

范文: How to protect/save our environment/world? The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.關于“人口問題 POPULATION ”

6.關于中學生使用手機的優缺點,談談你的看法(見2008年初中畢業寫作專題復習)。范文:略

7.介紹自己的興趣余愛好(單元四)。

8.春節習俗與計劃,如何過2009年的春節,假如你是LINGLING給外國朋友JHON發一份電子郵件。

The spring Festival Dear John, The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中國的農歷).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(裝飾)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(團聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friends.I ’m going to Disneyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessons do exercise every day help the old and children.Welcome to China.Waiting for your e –mail.Yours

Lingling

Happy new year to everyone!

英語書面表達

一、人物

1、以“The Most Interesting Teacher”為題，根據下面的提示，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，可以作適當的發揮。

注意：如果是女教師，則稱她為“Sue”;如果是男教師，則稱他為“Oliver”.1.Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? And what does the teacher teach? 2.What is the teacher like? 3.Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? The most interesting teacher

The Most Interesting Teacher I think my history teacher is the most interesting teacher in our school.His name is Oliver.He is a tall man with glasses.He is kind to everyone.In my mind, Oliver is the most knowledgeable person.He often tells us some interesting historical stories in class, such as Cao Cao and Liu Bei.I became interested in history when I was very young.I fell in love with Oliver and his classes.I regard Oliver as the most interesting teacher.2、Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.(以“我為自己感到自豪”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不計入總詞數。)（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分）Use the following points as are reference(以下內容僅供參考)What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?

I'm proud of myself I used to be a shy girl and I used to be afraid of speaking in public.But now I am outgoing.All is because of the last speech competition.I am good at English, so the teacher asked me to enter the speech competition.My classmates supported me and they were sure I could win the competition.I didn't want to let them down.So I encouraged myself to be brave.I took a deep breath and kept smiling.I practiced so }lard that I won the competition successfully.My teacher and classmates are proud of me, and I am proud of myself, too.二、假期計劃

3、同學們很快就畢業了, 馬上要迎來快樂的暑假和2012年的倫敦奧運會,你的心中是否充滿期待?請用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文, 和大家分享你心中的暑期計劃.寫作要求: 1.主要選擇通過電視或現場看哪幾種比賽項目? 最喜歡哪幾位體育明星?為什么? 2.主要安排哪幾項體育鍛煉活動?(包括時間,地點和目的意義等)注意: 短文中不允許出現與考生本人相關的相關的真實姓名,地名,校名等信息.The summer vacation and the 2012 London Olympic Games are coming.It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.During these days, I'll choose to watch the Olympic Games by TV, especially I will spend my time on the table tennis, badminton and weight lifting because I like these sports.Of all the players I like Zhang Yining, Lin Dan and l.iu Xiang best.1 think they are very excellent players.As for myself, I'll also plan for several PE exercise activities.Firstly, I'll do morning exercises every morning to build up my body.Secondly, I'll play table tennis with my friends to be a second Zhang Yining.Through these activities, I believe I'll be stronger and more energetic to get prepared for the study of senior middle school.Hello, everyone!Summer vacation is coming.I'd like to talk about my plan for the summer vacation.I have two plans.The first plan is to teach stay-at-home kids in the village.I'm always looking forward to being an English teacher.I will prepare for the class and teach the children carefully.If I do it, I can get much experience about being a teacher.That will be useful for me.As for the second plan, it's to raise money for the children in Yushu.I think we should try our best to help them rebuild their new home.I am sure I can have a special and exciting vacation.Let's be helpful and useful in the summer vacation.That's all.Thank you.4、暑假是每個中學生期盼的一段時光，請你圍繞如何過一個輕松、愉快、有意義的暑假，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文。

注意：

1、文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名；

2、下列詞匯可供參考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …

A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a good summer holiday.I think traveling is the best choice on holiday.We could have a good rest and go to visit lots of places of interest.We could do some sports, like basketball, football and so on.What's more, we can have fun doing some reading.()f course, we can't forget to help our parents with housework.If we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer holiday.三、一次經歷

5、在你成長的歷程中，有些日子會讓你開心快樂，經久難忘。請以“My Pleasant Day”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，記述你那天的活動和感受（如exciting, fun…）Ways to relax? TV, Computer, Sports, Music, Shopping… Work? Homework, Housework, Cooking, Cleaning… Other things? Enough sleep, Delicious food… 寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當發揮； 2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。

My Pleasant Day

Yesterday I was busy, but I was really happy.After breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement park.We took some photos over there.My mother bought me a toy car.I even played the roller coaster and that made me felt excited.After leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my grandparents.I spent the whole afternoon chatting with my grandfather.My parents prepared delicious food for us.We had a wonderful dinner together.What a pleasant day it was!

6、反思可以使每個人成長進步，為未來做好計劃可以鑄就成功。初中的即將結束，新的高中學習將要學習將要到來。請你用英語記錄下一兩件最讓你感動或遺憾的事，同時為你將來的生活做一點設計，下列句型可以幫助你完成作文：One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…

寫作要求：內容真實，要點齊全，行文邊貫，詞數90詞左右。

My life in junior school will come to an end soon.I am happy that I am going to have another chance of beginning my study again.It is a pity that I didn't study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing computer games.Once I even fell asleep in front of a computer.However, in last year's Paralympics, Nataliya, a ping-pong player, changed my attitude towards life.She was known as “Venus in Poland” for having only one arm and set: a good example for me.So I will take part in more activities and make more friends to make my life more meaningrul.四、英語學習

7、回想你三年的英語學習歷程，豐富多彩的英語課堂活動一定給你留下了許多難忘的印象。請你以“What should we do in English class?”為題寫一篇英語短文，談談你在英語課堂上學生應該怎樣做，才能使英語學習更有效。

寫作提示：1.Listen to the teacher;2.Take part in activities;3.Be confident in ourselves.寫作要求：1.文稿須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。

2.文稿中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；3.詞數：80詞左右

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.This is the most important for us.When we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at once.It's necessary for us to take notes in class, too, because reading notes is helpful to review what we have learned in class.When the teacher asks us to practice English in groups, we should take an active part in the activity.We should be confident in ourselves and not be afraid of making mistakes.If we keep on working hard at English, we'll be able to be good at it one day.五、健康

8、某英語網站進行了一次中學生健康情況調查，發現很多中學生的健康狀況令人擔憂。主要原因有：飲食結構不合理；體育鍛煉不足；理壓力過大，不能與人很好地溝通等。為此，他們發起了題為“How to keep Fit”的征文活動，倡導中學生的健康生活方式。請你寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說明如何保持身體健康。（文中不要出現作者本人的真實信息）寫作參考：

1、保持健康的重要性

2、保持健康的方法

3、談談你的看法

How to Keep Fit

Everyone wants to keep healthy.But how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you'd better go to bed early and get up early.As we all know “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.” Thirdly, you should do more exercise.For example, you can run in the park and the street in the morning.No sports, no life.At last, you should always try to make yourself happy.If you can do these, I think you can keep healthy.Keeping Health

Health is very important for us.Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything.While poor health means nothing.So, we mus keep healthy.How to keep healthy then?

First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat.Second, we'd better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong.Besides, we should be happy every day.Finally, we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and smoking.In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves.六、畢業留言

9、初中生活即將結束，新的生活即將開啟，請為你最好的同學寫一段畢業留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、你們在一起的快樂時光及對他（她）最美好的祝愿。

寫作要求：1.可參考下圖所給提示詞,也可適當發揮,開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)2.80詞左右.How time flies!We have been studying together for 3 years.You are always so happy that your smiles seem to be more shining than the sunlight.!shall never forget that monthly-examination, in which I got a really low mark.I just felt the sky was going to fall down.Just then, you came out.You comforted me a lot, which encouraged me to keep studying hard.You touched me deeply.You are so diligent a person that you certainly will have a bright future.Good luck to you.七、愛好

10、現在網絡越來越發達，中學生上網的利弊已成為人們討論的焦點。請參考下面的信息并結合自己的觀點寫一篇90詞左右的短文談談你的看法。

網絡的優點：課后放松，輔助學習，傳遞信息，開闊視野，網絡交友等…

網絡的缺點：上網時間長有害健康，沉迷網絡游戲，不思學業，不良網站，誤導學業，虛擬網絡，真假難辨…

Internet plays an important role in my daily life.But it has both positive and negative points.On the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular

among teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and relaxed.On the other hand, surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the games that they can't get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their health.I think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it sometimes.Habits Habits whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again, he'll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps win the respect and trust of others.If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by them.We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and others.八、關系處理

11、父母與孩子之間常有摩擦.父母想讓孩子聽他們的,按他們說的做,但孩子更愿意自己選擇朋友,自己設計(design)未來，更加獨立（independent）地生活，所以不和往往在所難免。解決（solve）這一問題的最好辦法只有相互理解。孩子們應學會尊重父母，聆聽他們的意見，因為他們有更豐富的人生閱歷（experiences）.父母也應盡量和孩子交換（exchange）意見，不能過分地責備（scold）和打罵，那樣會使孩子遠離父母。把孩子當作朋友，這樣他們會信任父母，會使家庭生活更幸福。

請根據中文提示，用英語寫一篇短文，把以上觀點正確表達出來，不少于90詞

Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each other.Parents want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to do.But children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent way.So the disagreement between them can't be avoided.The best way to solve the problem is to understand each other.Children should learn to respect their parents' opinions, for parents have richer experiences of life.Parents should also try to exchange opinions with their children.Don't scold or beat them too much.These will make them away from parents.Treat them as friends.Then children will believe in their parents.It will make family life much happier.How to Get along Well with Others

In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along with other people.To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words.To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean.Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run.After all, honesty is the best policy.Second, we have to be humble enough.If we are proud in public, we can hardly win other's respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be selfish.We should learn how to show concern for others.As long as we abide by get along well with others.what mentioned above, we will find it easy

九、夢想

12、請你以未來計劃為話題,根據以下提示寫一篇90詞左右的短文.1.你的夢想職業及居住地等 2.你做出這些選擇的理由;

3.你為實現未來計劃應做的努力;4.有一天你實現了你的理想,你怎樣回報父母,回報社會.My Dream in the Future I have a great dream.I want to be adoctor when I grow up.I will work in the hospital in my hometown.On the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and useful.Because a doctor can help people who are ill.And a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their life.On the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family healthy.When they are ill, I can give them some advice on health.I love my hometown and I love the people there.So I want to be a doctor.At present.I must study hard so that I can learn more knowledge.Then I may go to a medical university.If I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other people.I hope my dream will come true.十、最喜愛的學科

13、My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese teacher.I like it because I have a lovely Chinese teacher.She is very kind to us.She teachers us very carefully.And her classes are very interesting and funny.In Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take notes.I am not afraid of making mistakes in learning.I often read Chinese novels and watch the TV program-Quiz Show after school.That not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese skills.Thanks to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.十一、環保

14、從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費提供塑料供袋，從而掀起了全國性的“拒塑”環保運動。假如你是李華，準備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護環境的英語演講稿。

寫作提示：1.在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋.2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本.3.離開教室應關燈.4.走路或騎自行車上學齡前5.簡述理由: 保護環境,減少污染,節約能源等 寫作要求: 1.詞數90詞左右

2.可根據要點適當增加細節,使文章連貫，3.文中不能出現真實姓名和校名,否則以零分處理.What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

第三篇：中考英語書面表達訓練教案

一． 教學課題：

中考英語書面表達訓練教案

二． 教案背景：

外研版、九年級、中考專項復習-書面表達訓練。

英語書面表達題是學生比較頭疼的題型。學生表達思想時往往寫成了漢語式。錯誤多，不連貫。近幾年的中考作文失分很大，有的學生還養成了抄前面閱讀理解的習慣。三． 教材分析：

外研版教材每個模塊后都設計了針對模塊內容writing。這對于學生習作有一定的幫助，但由于題型設計與中考作文要求有差別，加之英語課時較少，有時僅用幾分鐘時間說說而已，甚至是放棄。缺少系統的練習，學生對作文有畏懼心理，寫作方面的障礙自然就多了。

四．教學方法：

本節課針對學生作文練習少，對作文有恐懼心理的特點，設計了低層次，小梯度練習。從句子結構、動詞的時態、常用作文的開頭、結尾，到作文實戰練習，中考作文評析、作文修改。采用自主練習、小組互評、范文共賞的形式調動學生寫作的積極性。五． 教學過程： 導入：

Step1：同學們，今天我們針對書面表達題進行專項復習。書面表達題就是要求同學們針對題目的要求用英語寫作文，我們在日常作文

中主要出現的錯誤有： 1.句子結構錯誤。

eg.I very like music.→I like music very much.I am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a doctor.2.動詞時態、語態使用不當。

eg.He goes to the hospital last Sunday.→

He went to the hospital last Sunday.She chose to give a speech at the party.→ She was chosen to give a speech at the party.3.詞匯運用錯誤。名詞、動詞、形容詞、副詞/連詞等，也包含短語、不定式使用不當。

eg.They had to work very hardly when they were young.→

They had to work very hardly when they were young.Discuss:小組討論一下，平時自己在作文過程中常出現的錯誤。Step2:師：怎樣減少出錯呢？首先讓我們看一下常用的句子結構。句子成分可分為主語,謂語,賓語,表語,定語,狀語,同位語。但我們常用的簡單句的結構有： 主語 + 謂語(及物動詞)+ 賓語 People enjoy music.主語 + 謂語(不及物動詞)He often swims in a river.主語 + 系動詞 + 表語 You look lovely.I’m impressed.所以我們下筆時要分清句中的主語、謂語、賓語、表語，注意他們的位置。

小組活動：請同學們翻譯下列句子。

1.她母親是一位教師。（Her mother is a teacher.）

2.昨天湯姆去了網球俱樂部。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：師：接下來讓我們討論一下怎樣減少動詞時態或語態錯誤。

生：關鍵是確定文章的要求，是記敘過去的事還是描寫現在或將來的事。

師：很對，2009年濰坊市初中學業水平考試考試書面表達題的要求是：豐富多彩的初中生活即將結束，有哪件事情讓你至今印象深刻，甚至難以忘懷？請以An unforgettable experience為題，寫一篇英語短文。你們覺得應該用什么時態來寫呢？

生：多用動詞的一般過去時態。

師：很好。

Step4: 當然文章寫作自然有一些常用的開頭、結尾可以借鑒。那么常用的開頭有： 1.時間開頭法：

eg.Today is Thursday,----------

It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading newspaper.2.天氣開頭法： eg.It was rainy today.It happened on a wet day of July.3.開門見山：

eg.Last weekends we went out for a walk.4.名言引人：

eg.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.------------------常用的結尾有： 1.總結法

eg.Tough we were tired, we felt very tired.2.發出號召或倡議

eg.I’m proud of what I’ve learned.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will become much more beautiful.3.表達祝愿

eg.I hope you will have a wonderful time.師：當然常用的開頭結尾還有不少，希望同學們多總結學習。Step5最后，作文的關鍵還在于審題：一定要讀懂要求。如要求寫得體裁、字數、必須包含的內容、書寫等等。我們就以2010年濰坊市中考英語試題為例：大家熱熱身：

某英語網站進行了一次中學生健康情況調查，發現很多中學生的健康狀況令人擔憂。主要原因有：飲食結構不合理；體育鍛煉不足；心理壓力大，不能與人很好地溝通等等。為此，他們發起了題為How Io Keep Fit的征文活動，倡導中學生的健康生活方式。請你寫一篇 80詞左右的英語短文，說明如何保持身體健康。（文中不要出現作者

本人的真實信息）

小組活動：把寫好的作文在小組之內交流，選出寫得較好的在班內展示。

（小組優秀者到講臺讀自己文章）Step6.Sum-up

這節課我們學習了書面表達題的一些解題技巧，當然在實際學習中還需要不斷的總結練習，如養成記筆記的習慣。學生個人總結自己學習體會。Step7.Homework:

我們以2011年濰坊市初中學業水平考試作文題為作業：

假設你是某文雜志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 請閱讀下面的這封求助信，并根據信的內容寫一封回信。要求：1.80詞左右；2.文中不要出現作者本人的真實信息。

Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park.I wanted to take some photos.My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him.Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill.It didn’t work at all.I put it back quietly after I returned home.And I haven’t told him till now.when I face to my father, I feel terrible.What should I do?

Yours, David

Dear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes，Helen

六．教學反思：

本節課我從學生習作易出現的錯誤入手，分析出錯的原因，進行及時的練習。開頭結尾進行了適當的總結，小組之內交流合作。以濰坊市近三年中考作文為題例，讓學生感受中考作文的要求、難度。不足之處是學生練習時間相對少一些。

七．教學資源

2010年山東省濰坊市初中學業水平考試寫作答案（滿分15分）One possible version: How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food.Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks.Secondly, it's good for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on.At last, we should learn to relax ourselves.We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.評分標準：詞數在70—100之間；如果少于70詞，應酌情扣分。1．內容充實、語言流暢，能恰當地運用較復雜句式及習慣用法等，語法、拼寫錯誤極少（13—15分）：

2．較通順完整，有少量語法、拼寫錯誤（10—12分）； 3．基本要點寫出，有稍多語法、拼寫錯誤（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，錯誤較多，語句小通順（3—5分）； 5．雙寫了個別句子或單詞（0—2分）。

2011年濰坊市初中學業水平考試英 語 試 題 寫作答案及評分標準： One possible version: Dear David, First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately.It you tell him the truth, he'll be angry with you.But at least you'll prove how honest you are.Then I think you should offer to pay.But you shouldn't use your pocket money.Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it.If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Best wishes, Helen 評分標準：詞數在60—100之間；如果少于60詞，應酌情扣分。

1.內容充實、語言流暢，能恰當地運用較復雜句式及習慣用法等，語法、拼寫錯誤極少（13—15分）；

2.較通順完整，有少量語法、拼寫錯誤（10—12分）； 3.基本要點寫出，有較多語法、拼寫錯誤（6—9分）； 4.篇幅不足，錯誤較多，語句吧通順（3—5分）； 5.只寫了個別句子或單詞（0—2分）。

第四篇：英語書面表達

寒假作業Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基礎寫作：

上周六下午，你們宿舍幾個同學去森林公園野炊，回來途中淋了雨。晚上李華頭疼得厲害。你給她量體溫，發現她發高燒。你馬上帶她去看醫生。醫生說她得了重感冒，要臥床休息三天。請你代她給劉老師寫一張請假條說明情況，并幫她請假兩天（周一、周二），因此她不能參加周二的羽毛球比賽了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任務型寫作

總結：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你認為制訂目標很重要嗎？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你認為制訂目標后怎樣才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.舉例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基礎寫作

社會實踐是學校教育的一個重要組成部分；書本知識有限；社會實踐有諸多好處，能用所學的知識解決實際問題，獲取經驗，了解社會，端正學習態度，激勵學習。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任務型寫作

總結：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你對童年生活的認識 我認為從某種意義上來說，艱苦的環境可以激發一個人的潛能，為他的成功鋪平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一個人在經歷了磨難之后可以變得堅強，勇敢和忠實可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.總而言之，我認為溫室里的花朵經受不起風暴的洗禮，艱苦的生活對孩子來說是有好處的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

熱愛社會工作，性格樂觀，富有愛心和責任心；英語口語流利，具有相關的教學經驗；工作時間：周六和周日，按每小時5元付費；這份工作給自己在經濟和人際關系方面的好處；:表達自己做好工作的決心：把快樂和舒適帶給自己工作的對象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就學校取消高三音樂課這一事件給校長寫一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同學們對學校取消音樂課意見不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你對此決定贊成或反對？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受來說明開設音樂課的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕頭一模

1.為何與人合作：現代社會必備；可省時間和精力；更多互相學習的機會

2.與誰合作：A與喜歡的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B與不喜歡的人合作：學會容忍，學會挖

掘其優點

3.你的看法：傾聽別人意見，不把你的觀點強加給別人，有禮貌地指出別人的錯誤

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失敗是件壞事嗎？

概括短文要點Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失敗并非壞事，但從失敗中站起來并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失敗對勝利者是必修課，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你對失敗的看法和態度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.廣州一模

基礎寫作簡介學校的植物園

1.概況：位于校園西南角，面積1000平方米 2.歷史：20年的歷史，2008年重建 3.特色：各種花卉、樹木、藥用植物 4.功能：美化校園、研究植物場所、休閑之地 5.其他：觀賞至少許一小時

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.讀寫任務就學生違紀的處理方式寫一篇簡評

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要點：校長的做法、想法、結果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持該校長的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假設你是校長，你會如何處理違紀學生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模寫一篇短文介紹大豆的生長過程

1.發芽的條件：水分充足，溫度適宜，種子就開始發芽了 2.第一步：出現幼根，并朝下生長 3.第二步：幼苗出現，并朝上生長，直至變成綠色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝葉出現 5.第四步：數月后開花結果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.經濟危機，大學生就業難

概括材料主要內容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.現狀：經濟危機影響全球，就業機會少，工人工資低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建議：樹立正確的擇業觀，降低預期工資，先就業再擇業，自己創業，開公司，展示自己的才華Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各種優惠政策，免除各種稅費，提供一定數量的無息貸款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第五篇：英語書面表達

2014年濟寧市中考英語書面表達

假設你是李華，已報名參加暑期英語夏令營，根據夏令營之活動安排，你需要準備一份關于英語夏令營英語閱讀方面的發言稿，具體要求如下：

1.對英語閱讀重要性的認識；

2.個人開展英語閱讀的情況（1-2點具體做法）及感悟；

3.將來的打算。

參考詞匯：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.詞數，100詞左右；（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；）

2.可根據具體要求及參考詞匯適當發揮；

3.文中不得出現真實姓名。

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