第一篇：6級(jí)寫作

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Long Holidays.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.長假給大學(xué)生帶來的好處

2.長假可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題

3.我應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣利用好長假

【范文】

Long Holidays

Generally speaking, long holidays are good for us college students.On the one hand, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesses and further develop strengths.On the other hand, we can take part-time jobs, which can make us realize responsibility and make ourselves better prepared for social life.But every coin has two sides.Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicted to various computer games.I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way.As far as I am concerned, I will try to make the best use of my precious time.I will spend most of my holidays studying English for that I am very poor at it.In addition, I will take a part-time job as private teacher.By this means, I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well.五、議論文的框架

（1）不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型（選擇型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.首先，一個(gè)段落必須有一個(gè)中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達(dá)。整個(gè)段落必須緊扣這個(gè)主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統(tǒng)一性（unity）。其次，一個(gè)段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個(gè)完整的感覺，這就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一個(gè)段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機(jī)的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個(gè)句子到另一個(gè)句子的過渡必須流暢（smooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。下面我們就對(duì)這三個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別加以說明。

1、統(tǒng)一性

一個(gè)段落內(nèi)的各個(gè)句子必須從屬于一個(gè)中心，任何游離于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請(qǐng)看下例：

Joe and I decided to take the long trip we’d always wanted across the country.We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life.Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie.We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country.We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park.Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner.To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)irrelevant sentences，一個(gè)是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I，中間出現(xiàn)一個(gè)Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關(guān)。再看一個(gè)例子：

My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit.I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program.In one year I lost eighty pounds.I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again.I bought two new suitcases last week.Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour.My mother was a premature baby.本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個(gè)irrelevant sentences，一個(gè)是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一個(gè)是My mother was a premature baby。

從上面兩個(gè)例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會(huì)造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴(yán)重了。

2、完整性

正像我們前面說得那樣，一個(gè)段落的主題思想靠推展句來實(shí)現(xiàn)，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進(jìn)一步交待和充實(shí)，就不能構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的段落。同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對(duì)圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如：

Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil.Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task.Besides, it is more useful to work----you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression.本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個(gè)推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什么它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。由于四級(jí)統(tǒng)考的作文部分只要求寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的三段式短文，每一段只有大約40個(gè)詞左右，因此，要達(dá)到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如：

It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words.Often writing is much clearer than a picture.It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.段首句所表達(dá)的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗(yàn)證。上述兩個(gè)推展句只是在文字上對(duì)主題作些解釋，整個(gè)段落內(nèi)容空洞，簡而不明。如果用一兩個(gè)具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段：

It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words.Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things.If you can’t swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming “Help”?

3、連貫性（coherence）

連貫性包括意連和形連兩個(gè)方面，前者指的是內(nèi)在的邏輯性，后者指的是使用轉(zhuǎn)換詞語。當(dāng)然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內(nèi)在的有機(jī)的聯(lián)系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時(shí)行文就不夠流暢。

1）、意連

段落中句子的排列應(yīng)遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就寫什么。如果在下筆之前沒有構(gòu)思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。

A.按時(shí)間先后排列（chronological arrangement）

We had a number of close calls that day.When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast;we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o’clock.Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours-----it must have been close to noon----the heat nearly hid us in;the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down.By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o’clock and we were exhausted.Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert.Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.本段從“rose”（起床）寫起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o’clock”），然后是“close to noon”，一直寫到這一天結(jié)束（“By nine--”）。

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四六級(jí)作文預(yù)測(cè)1：志愿者活動(dòng)

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1.越來越多的人從事志愿者工作

2.志愿者工作的社會(huì)意義

3.作為大學(xué)生，應(yīng)該怎么做

范文：

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters.According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games.Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China。

Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society.Olympic Games are a good example.As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games.Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games.Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games。

As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities.By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability.Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth.So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow.(161words)

四六級(jí)作文預(yù)測(cè)2 書信：畢業(yè)時(shí)就業(yè)還是上研究生

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about Plan after graduation.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

假如你是李明，你的朋友石頭來信咨詢你的畢業(yè)之后的計(jì)劃，考研還是就業(yè)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)自己的情況寫封回信告知石頭你的態(tài)度，并說明理由。

范文：

Dear Shitou，So great to recieve your letter on May 1st, in which you inquired about my plan after graduation.Now, I am writing to illustrate it and my accounts。

As is known to all, so many graduates are eager to set feet on their work-life roads.According to a survey by National Department of Education, more than six million college students will leave the so called “Ivory Tower” this year.It is clear that the competition of job-hunting will be extremely furious.On the contrary, it seems advisable for me to further my study and get a master’s degree.What makes me convinced is that a higher degree and better educational background will, undoubtedly, enable me to make full preparation for entering the society.Besides, if possible, I will get involved in social and practical activities in my spare time。

Taking all aspects into account, I choose to study as a postgraduate。

Many thanks for your concern.Best wishes!(160)

四六級(jí)作文預(yù)測(cè)3：大城市就業(yè)還是小城鎮(zhèn)

Direction:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town？ You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.很多的大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后留在大城市工作；

2.也有人選擇到小城鎮(zhèn)開始自己的職業(yè)生涯；

3.結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā?/p>

范文：

Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the other way round? Every graduate faces this question when starting his career.A large number of college graduates prefer to stay in big cities,which mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space for career development.At the same time, higher salary is another temptation。

But some other graduates intend to start in small towns.Even though there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life.Another reason is that they can be a big fish in a small pond.They can easily get the management’s attention and may win promotion earlier。

As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a metropolis like Shanghai.A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures.I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.真題網(wǎng)提供

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（一）作文題目： “Women in the Modern World” 提綱：

1.Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.____________ 2.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.___________________ 3.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.___________________________ 例1．（2分段）

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.Long age, women only did something in the kitchen or at home.Now many of them have serious jobs to serve for people.What men can do so can women.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.Today in the family, the wife often lots her husband to do something at home bat ago, only women did something.Men are foned of doing something at home.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened.In the factory the wonmen to as much as the men, but they are paid less than the men.Some people have not completely realized the liberation of women.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：條理不清，思路紊亂，大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，有的甚至影響理解。

具體問題剖析：(1)缺乏邏輯，東一句西一句，沒有圍繞中心論述，如第一段就沒有展開論述婦女社會(huì)角色的轉(zhuǎn)變，說得太籠統(tǒng)而缺乏說服力。

（2）用漢語思維，句子有明顯的漢語痕跡，如“What men can do so can women.”，應(yīng)改為“Women can do what men can do”。（3）銜接不自然，沒有用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，如“Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened”，應(yīng)改為“The case that husband hits his wife often happens.”（4）拼寫錯(cuò)誤很多，大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤。例2．（5分段）

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In today, many women have a work.They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories.There are many women in government also.They lead other people country, and make out plans.There are many scientist slso.They event new things to improve our life.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.In ancient, women’s position in family is pity.They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do.But now it is changed.They are equal to her husband.They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.We also should realize, women’ likerty are limited.For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men.Everyone should do their best to change this condition.I’m sure, the liberation of women would be increased.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：基本切題。但表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。具體問題剖析：（1）各段圍繞中心句論述不深入，沒有說服力。（2）銜接不自然，沒有用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，如第一段幾個(gè)句子之間可以用一些“besides”、“on the other hand”、“furthermore”、“in addition”等。（3）語言錯(cuò)誤較多，很多句子不通順，如“In today, many women have a work.”應(yīng)改為“Today, many women get a job.”(濫用介詞)；“In ancient, women’s position in family is pity”中pity應(yīng)改為pitiful（詞形誤用）；“They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do.”中every 改為everything，how改為what（代詞錯(cuò)誤）；“They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do.”應(yīng)改為“They have the right to express ideas, discuss things with their respective husband, and do what they want to.”(人稱代詞前后不一致)。例3．（8分段）

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.Many Women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before.For an example.Some women are not secrtary in the office, instead, they become manager of a company.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.In the world today, more and more women have their own job.They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband.With the economic situation improved, their family position is improving.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do house works or do some shopping.They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。具體問題剖析：（1）論證不夠深入，缺少事例，缺少說服力。

（2）文字缺連貫、且顯累贅，如第二段可以把各句再改得簡練一點(diǎn)并且有適當(dāng)?shù)霓D(zhuǎn)承詞。（3）語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，如“For an example”，“Some women are not secrtary in the office, instead, they become manager of a company.”應(yīng)改為“Some women are on longer secretaries in the office, instead, they become managers of the companies.”（單復(fù)數(shù)）例4．（11分段）

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children.Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field.As we know, many women sports teams have won the world’s champions such as Chinese women’s Volleyball Team.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places.Husbands and wives are equal now.They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.Also in some places.Women are considered being “thing” belong to men.They have little chance to find jobs.They don’t get equal pay for equal job.This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，用詞比較準(zhǔn)確，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，如“Also in some places.Women are considered being “thing” belong to men”，應(yīng)改為“Also in some places，women are considered being the “things”that belong to men” 例5．（14分段）

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders.We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.Husband and wife are now equal in the family.They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each ther.Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature.Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men.That’s really the problems we should solve immediately.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：切題。論證充分，有說服力，論證手段豐富（舉例、正反）表達(dá)思想清楚，語言流暢，詞匯豐富，連貫性好。用詞準(zhǔn)確，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。

p.s.由于一些例文錯(cuò)誤較多，點(diǎn)評(píng)中只是列舉了部分的典型錯(cuò)誤，而且為了保持原文面貌，編輯沒有做過多的改動(dòng)，所以歡迎大家一起來挑錯(cuò)，有問題和小水一起討論。

（二）2003年9月考試四級(jí)作文題：The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Got Injured)提綱：

1.簡單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生病（或受傷）的情況 2.同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的

3.人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是?? 例1．（2分段）

One day, we are all in classroom.Wang fang said, “Oh!” We all see her and found that she was crying!Teacher turned to ask her what was wrong.She said, “I do got a fever, my head is very hot!” Feng Gang sent she to hospital, we all followed they.In the hospital, doctor Wang give a inject to her, she gradually calm and not hot as before.We all thanked the doctor.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：未能按照題目要求寫，沒有著重寫“同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的” “人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是??”。條理不清，思路紊亂，大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，有的甚至影響理解。原文修改后：

One day, when we were all in classroom., Wang fang Suddenly cried， “Oh!” We all looked at her and found that she was groaning.Teacher turned to ask her what was wrong.She said, “I have got a fever, my head is very hot!”

Immediately, our teacher sent her to hospital, and we all followed them.In the hospital, we asked doctor Wang to give an injection to her, and she gradually became calm and not as hot as before.We all thanked the doctor.The day has passed, but it is clearly in my mind.I think if we can do things like that in the incident, the society will be better, and the relationship between people will be better as well!

例2．（5分段）

Last week, li ning and I studied in classroom.Suddenly, lining said to me that he had a headache.I asked he to see doctor.he said it was not bad.After 5 miniuts, lining sai to me his headache very serious.So I helped him go to hosptial.Students and teacher heard lining went to hosptial, all of them went to the hosptial.Some teacher asked lining dont worry, it will be good.Some students asked lining take care of himself.lining said that he was very moved.Thought this things, I think a lot.The world is beautiful, because the love filled in it.people can help each other when who are in trouble.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文基本切題。語句銜接不自然，簡單句使用得太多，有些表達(dá)不太準(zhǔn)確，有明顯的中文痕跡。要加強(qiáng)銜接詞的運(yùn)用，單復(fù)句的轉(zhuǎn)換，句式的多樣化，還有語言基本功的訓(xùn)練。原文修改后：

Last week, Li ning and I studied in classroom.Suddenly, lining told me that he had a headache.I asked him to see the doctor.he said it was not so serious.After 5 minutes, Lining told me that his headache became worse.So I helped him go to hospital.When Students and teachers heard that Lining had gone to hospital, all of them went to the hospital.Some teachers asked Lining not to worry and to take care of himself.Lining said that he was very moved.Throught this, I think a lot.The world is beautiful because it was filled in love--people help each other in trouble.例3．（8分段）

One day there is a student who was isolated for infectious disease.We and our teachers are concerting about his situation.But he must be isolated from us for relivesing measure.In this important period, we telephoned to him, we also told him that he had a good rest time.we suggested that he call up his friends who were not kept in touch because of burden study and read some books which he enjoys but have no time to read.At last we told him that he must get over this fell.I think we should love each other.when somebody needs help we should lend our one hand to him.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文基本切題，也有必要的細(xì)節(jié)描述。但有的地方表達(dá)不清楚。有比較多的語言錯(cuò)誤。要注意連接詞的使用和句式多樣化，長短句可以間隔使用，使用長句時(shí)注意語法、力求表達(dá)清楚。

具體問題剖析：(1)全文時(shí)態(tài)不統(tǒng)一（舉例略）。

（2）第二段語句銜接不自然，句式重復(fù)，且長句組織起來顯得有點(diǎn)凌亂，語法錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多。在原文基礎(chǔ)上修改如下：“In this important period, we telephoned him, and told him to have a good rest.Besides, we advised him to call up his friends who were not kept in touch because of burdensome study ,on the other hand, to read some books which he enjoyed but had no time to read.At last we told him that he must overcome this ill.”

例4．（11分段）

In 1 April 2003, one of my classmates was get serious cold.First day when he came to school, we found that his eyes were red and his sound was rough.The second day, his cold was too bad that he couldn't go to school.At that time, there was a serious ill called SARS in our country.It's just like badly cold and can infected others easily.But our classmates didn't go away from him.They seemed more close to him.Our classmates helped him to take back breakfast.Our teacher came to see him with his notes book.He helped him to study in order that he didn't drop behind my classmates' For he was my best friend, I just sat on his bed and do my best to comfort him.Althought there was SARS around us, but I felt very warm from this thing.It told me that the love from true heart can help come across any difficult.We are so lucky that we live in a big warmth family.And not very long, my classmate was getting healthy and could come to school again.How happy we were!

東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字比較連貫, 但有一些語法錯(cuò)誤。

具體問題剖析：全文有一些語法、語言錯(cuò)誤，如“In 1 April 2003, one of my classmates was get serious cold.”應(yīng)改為“In 1 April 2003,one of my classmates got serious cold.”（時(shí)態(tài)）；“First day when he came to school,”應(yīng)改為“The first day when he came to school,”（介詞遺漏）；“his sound was rough.”應(yīng)改為“his voice was rough.”（用詞）；“Althought there was SARS around us, I felt very warm from this thing.”應(yīng)把but去掉（連詞）； “It told me that the love from true heart can help come across any difficult.”應(yīng)改為“It told me that the love from true heart could help come across any difficulties.”（時(shí)態(tài)、詞性錯(cuò)誤）；“We are so lucky that we live in a big warmth family.”應(yīng)改為“We are so lucky that we live in a big warm family.”（詞性）。

例5．（14分段）

During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, Li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.The news spread quickly on campus.At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too.However, through our government's publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try out best to help her.Some teachers provided darly necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Li ming could not be left behind.With our care and concern, Li ming recovered quickly.Such an incident teaches us a good moral.Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand.Just like a famous song goes, “the world will turn itto heaven only if everyone contributes a little.” and I do believe that it's my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文切題，論證豐富生動(dòng)，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好。基本上無大的語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。

p.s.由于一些例文錯(cuò)誤較多，點(diǎn)評(píng)中只是列舉了部分的典型錯(cuò)誤，而且為了保持原文面貌，編輯沒有做過多的改動(dòng)，所以歡迎大家一起來挑錯(cuò)，有問題和小水一起討論。

（三）2003年9月六級(jí)考試作文題： 圖表作文，關(guān)于一個(gè)美國大學(xué)圖書館的圖書流動(dòng)量（pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等），給出他們的流動(dòng)比例對(duì)比，說明原因，并說明你自己喜歡閱讀什么樣的書。例1．（2分段）

此分段標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為條理不清，思路紊亂，大部分句子均有嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。（為了不影響市容，給大家造成負(fù)面影響，故此處略去100字??）例2．（5分段）

From the novel, we can see that the students like read(reading)novel, at the same time, only(a)small part of students like read(reading)science and art.The reason to(for)this is novel is intereting(interesting), students like reading it.Most of the students read too much(many)major books when they have classes, so they want to read some(something)interesting(when)they have time.Novel can let them relax(relaxed).So they choose novel.I like read(reading)novel, by reading it I know a lot of things, I also relax my brains.So I choose the novel.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：(1)基本切題。(2)表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。(3)有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。（4）字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，要酌情扣分。例3．（8分段）

We can know from the picture that most of students like reading popular novel instead of reading science, poetry.From this we can know different people have different addiction to(preferences for)books.Different people have different addiction to(preferences for)books.They read different books just to meet their different needs.Because different people have different meets to read the different kinds of books.From this we can also see that different people have different intentions and notions.So they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life.I like reading poetry because I think poetry can make me calm, pleased, comfort(comforted),(and)I can see many beautiful thing(things)in the poetry.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：(1)基本切題。(2)第二段表達(dá)有點(diǎn)亂。

（3）語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。例4．（11分段）

Book is the source of life.When we read a book, we should not only linger on the surface of a book, but also we should(刪掉)master its intrinsic.As is charted in the blank, we can see clearly that a majority of the university students in America are addictet(addicted)to the popular fiction, and a minority of student like reading the science, poetry.Why do they like reading popular novels? In my opinion, popular novel books are usually interesting, earthly, close to our lives.In contrast, science, poetry books are usually serious, dull and difficult.Therefore, most of the students prefer the popular novels.I like reading the since book（science books）.For one thing, it can make me enhance my speciality knoweledy(specialized knowledge);In addition, it can help me know the frontier about my speciality and master the newest things in since(science);thirdly, it can give a good chance to know a lot and can help me to study the useful subject when I graduate from the university.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）本文基本切題，表達(dá)思想清楚。（2）文字連貫，語言通順。（3）有一些語言錯(cuò)誤。例5．（14分段）

It can be discerned

that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular(unpopular)novel, the books of technology, poem and so on.The percentage of the popular novel current(currently)is about 68.2%.Other kind of novels' current(currently)is, reletively(relatively), about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students.The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate(mathematic formulae).However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do.So we should pay more attention to the books about our major.Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper...Because I want do to(刪掉)a good job in my subjects.Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I 've gained other things--I found（have founded）a solid basic knowledge about my major(加破折號(hào))make me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years.Thanks to those books!東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）切題。

（2）論證比較有力，表達(dá)思想清楚。

（3）文字通順，連貫性較好，但有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤。

注： 文中劃線部分為原文的一些明顯語言錯(cuò)誤，括號(hào)里的為修改建議，為保持原文面貌，對(duì)于結(jié)構(gòu)沒有做過多改動(dòng)。

（四）2003年6月考試四級(jí)作文題：An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。見證書須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1、車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；

2、你所見到的車禍情況；

3、你對(duì)車禍原因的分析。例1．（2分段）

At 9:00, Jan.20, 2003, I eye-witness a traffic accident in Dongfang Street.I see that a（an）old people is hitted(hit)by a car.In my opinion, the rapid driver is the main reason, but the old people also has his error.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)明顯不夠，盡管都點(diǎn)題了，但只有三句話。（2）有語法錯(cuò)誤。例2．（5分段）

In my opinion, the driver of Benz auto should be blamed on(for)the traffic accident.It was his drunk driving that resulted in this accident.It is not(no)doubt that the traffic accident is a high(hot)topic in the modern(modern)society, different people have different attitude(attitudes)to this.When it come(comes)to the accident, people think it responsible for the driver.But last Sunday I see(saw)a(an)accident.A woman crossed a street when a car turn(turned at)the crossing.it is too late to stop the car ,The women was bad(badly)hurt.The people who was walking along the street took the woman to hospital,(and)the driver came with them.As far as（I am）concerned, the both sides have responsibility for this, begin（at the beginning）, the woman shouldnot cross the street.Forthemore, the driver should pay more attention.Last.we should take proper measure.Only(when)we take the measure and we（become）more careful can we have a colorful（life）tomorrow.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：(1)本文基本切題。

（2）但有的地方表達(dá)思想不清楚，層次不夠清楚。如第二段把描述車禍情況和發(fā)生原因混為一談，而最后一段的總結(jié)又很牽強(qiáng)。

（3）全文有比較多的語言錯(cuò)誤，而且有些是嚴(yán)重的錯(cuò)誤。例3．（8分段）

At 9:00am October 25st(25th)2003, I saw a traffic accident on Daxue Road.At that time, I was on my way to school.When I turned right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car.The motorbike was red, and there are(were)two persons on the motorbike.The car was yellow.The motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slight injured.The(car)driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons.As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110.The traffic police arrived in a short time.According to what I saw, I thought there may be one reason leading to the accident.That was the motorbike kept too short（a）distant from the car.When the car slowed down, the motorbike couldn't slow down in time.So the accident took place.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）基本切題。

（2）文字連貫性不強(qiáng)，尤其是第二段，缺少一些必要的銜接詞。（3）簡單句太多，可以考慮把一些合并成復(fù)合句。（4）有些地方人稱指代不明（如司機(jī)），容易引起誤解（5）有一些基本的時(shí)態(tài)、語法錯(cuò)誤。例4．（11分段）

Last Friday afternoon, when I was on my way home, a traffic accident took place at the crossing of Shanghai Road.A pupil was knocked down by a black car when he was walking across the street.His legs were badly hurt.Sever(Several)minutes later an ambulance came, and the driver of the black car sent the pupil to the hospital immediately.In my eyes, this accident was due to that the pupil broke the traffic rules.That is to say, the pupil walked across the street when the traffic lights were red.As soon as the driver saw the pupil, he stopped the car, however, it was too late.In my opinion, it was necessary to advocate people to confirm to the traffic rules.If the pupil hadn't broken the traffic rules, the accident might not have happened.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：(1)本文比較切題，表達(dá)思想清楚。（2）語句比較通順，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。例5．（14分段）

My name is Liming.I am studying at college.A week ago I saw a traffic accident , which is still vivid in my mind.It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university.I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the T-junction about 10 meters away.Two taxis crashed together.It was a traffic accident.

I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged.Both hoofs were out of shape.One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road.One driver was blooding and another was shut in the taxi.Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car.One man was calling to the traffic policeman station.A lot of cars were jammed on the road.

From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast.But it is just one of the reasons.In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money.On the other hand, both drivers don't show concern for one another.Both of them wanted to run in front of another.Therefore, the accident is inevitable.So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer.Taking care of other's lives means taking care of your own life.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）切題。

（2）表達(dá)清楚，描述詳細(xì)生動(dòng)。（3）文字通順，連貫性較好。

（4）基本上無大的語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。

注： 文中劃線部分為原文的一些明顯語言錯(cuò)誤，括號(hào)里的為修改建議，為保持原文面貌，對(duì)于結(jié)構(gòu)沒有做過多改動(dòng)。

（五）2003年6月考試六級(jí)作文題：Changes of Ownership of Houses in China 圖表作文，圖表內(nèi)容是1990，1995，2000的公房和私房變化柱狀表，趨勢(shì)是公房越來越少，私房越來越多。

提綱：1.簡單描述一下圖表內(nèi)容 2.變化原因

3.這個(gè)變化對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)的影響 例1．（2分段）

此分段標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為條理不清，思路紊亂，大部分句子均有嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。為了不影響市容，給大家造成負(fù)面影響，故此處略去100字?? 例2．（5分段）

It is descerned that（刪掉）the number of pirate（private）

houses had been on a（an）increase from 1990 to 2000.In 1990, it was about 20 percent;In 1995 it was 40 percent;In 2000, it was 80 percent.There were some reasons for this fact.One of them was the improvement of people's living conditions（condition）, all people wanted to own pirate houses.On the other hand, people's income was on a（an）

increase, they could afford to buy pirate houses!

Obviously, there were some good things resulted from this fact.Such as it could improve Chinese economy.But there were also some bad things, such as it took much time to go to work!

東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）本文基本切題。（2）字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，要酌情扣分。

（2）第一段描述圖表不應(yīng)該單列舉出數(shù)字，而是應(yīng)該重點(diǎn)描寫變化趨勢(shì) ；第二段說明理由不夠充分；第三段說明影響有點(diǎn)牽強(qiáng)。（4）全文語言錯(cuò)誤較多。例3．（8分段）

From the graph it is clear that the percentage of the state owned house in china in a city has decreased greatly from 75% in 1990 to 20% in 2000, while the private house has increased sharply.what has caused these changes?

There are, I think, at least two main reasons for these changes.to begin with, with the development of the technology and science, people"s living standard has improved greatly and they can afford to buy high-graded things such as TV, computer and even house.Secondly it is due to the mind people hold and the ecomonic policy.As is known to all, the price of house is often very high, and people must(used to)save their money(for)many years,（however,）as their minds changed, they went to the bank to borrow money and the ecomonic policy also encouraged them to do so.There may be some other reasons, but the above mentiond are commonly acceptable.To conclude, the ownership of houses reflect the development of our country and people are enjoying a better life, I am firmly sure that the productivity of the society will keep improving and people will enjoy a more affluent life in the near future.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）本文基本切題，語句基本通順

（2）第一段描述圖表太簡單，第二段有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，第三段太簡單。（3）不少語言錯(cuò)誤。例4．（11分段）

As is shown by the bar chart, we can see that great changes have been taken place in a big city in China during the year from 1990 to 2000.The number of stated-owned houses is on the decline, while the private houses are（is）on the rise.To get the sourse(source)of this changes, it is nature for us to come up with the following reasons.In the first place, owning to the advance in people's living standard ,people are better off today, and they have more money to buy a house.In the second place , with the development of society and economy, some achievements have been maken(made)in housing construction.Last but not least, thanks to the increasing consciousness of confortable(comfortable)life, people are in favor of buying a house.All this results in the boom of private housing.Benefits of this(these)changes are obvious.It is advantage to both people and society.For one thing, with house, people can enjoy their confortable(comfortable)life.For another, this(these)changes can stimulate our nation's economic development.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：(1)切題。

（2）表達(dá)思想清楚，語句通順。（3）但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。例5．（14分段）

It can be obviously seen from the chart above that our modern society has experienced a great change, and in the last decade, from 1990 to 2000, more and more people prefer private houses to state-owned ones.There are a lot of reasons for it.First of all, state-owned houses lack the individualized characteristics, which are highly advocated in the modern society today.In addition, The declining prices of the private houses, with the skyrocketing income of people in recent years, contribute to the increase of purchases of private houses because, after all, economy is the most basic factor each family or individual can decide on.At last, the purchases of private houses can entitle consumers to a more flexible selection in terms of location, house type and even the relevant service than that of its state-owned counterpart.This phenomenon, in my opinion, has not only upgraded the quality and standard of life of people , but also improved the value of consumption of our modern society.And it is more significant that the phenomenon has formed a social atmosphere in our life in which everyone strives harder and harder for the sake of his life and future.東方教育點(diǎn)評(píng)：（1）切題。

（2）表達(dá)思想清楚，論證比較有力。

（3）文字通順，連貫性好，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。

注： 文中劃線部分為原文的一些明顯語言錯(cuò)誤，括號(hào)里的為修改建議，為保持原文面貌，對(duì)于結(jié)構(gòu)沒有做過多改動(dòng)。

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第二篇：A級(jí)寫作資料

1.2011年 12月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：請(qǐng)給經(jīng)理寫一份電子郵件，要求購買電腦和打印機(jī)（printer）。

內(nèi)容：因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在電腦和打印機(jī)已使用五年以上，經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)故障，影響工作；此外，3名新員工也需要電腦。總計(jì)需購買電腦8臺(tái)，打印機(jī)1臺(tái)，需要人民幣約5萬元。

范文：

Dear Manager, I am writing for a purchase request of some computers and a printer for the following reasons.First, the computers and the printer we are using in the office have been used for more than 5 years.They are so overused that they often break down and bring us a lot of trouble when we are working.Second, we have three new employees this month, and they also need computers for daily tasks.What we need to buy now are eight computers and one printer, which will cost about 50,000 yuan totally.Thank you for considering this request and i am looking forward to your reply.Best regards.Sincerely yours，Wendy

2.2011年6月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：假設(shè)您是某公司銷售經(jīng)理David Wang，給總經(jīng)理寫一份電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1.本人參加了美國紐約電子產(chǎn)品展銷會(huì)，為期一周； 2.本公司設(shè)了3個(gè)展臺(tái)，產(chǎn)品深受客戶歡迎； 3.有5家美國公司于我們簽訂了銷售合同； 4.我們的產(chǎn)品在美國市場一定會(huì)有良好的前景； 5.客戶希望我們能夠提供優(yōu)質(zhì)售后服務(wù)。

Words for reference: 電子產(chǎn)品展銷會(huì)

electronic products fair

售后服務(wù)

after-sales service

范文：

Dear General Manager, I attended the electronic products fair in New York, U.S., which lasted for a week.And I am now writing to give you some information about the fair.In the fair our company set up three booths.Our products were very popular with the customers, and we have signed sales contracts with five U.S.Companies.I believe our products will sell well in the American market.Customers said they hoped our company would provide good after-sales service.Sincerely yours，David Wang

Sales Manager 3.2010年 12月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：假設(shè)你是某公司員工Susan Waters。根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容給公司人事部經(jīng)理Ms.Bush 寫一封辭職信。

寫信日期：2010年12月19日 內(nèi)容：1.表示要辭職；

2.解釋辭職的原因（自擬）；

3.告知離職的時(shí)間（一個(gè)月后）；

4.對(duì)于在工作期間所得到的指導(dǎo)和幫助表示感謝。注意信函格式！Words for reference: 辭職：resign v./ resignation n.范文：

December 19，2010 Dear Ms.Bush，I am writing to inform you of my intention of resigning from my current position in the company, effective Jan.19, 2011.The past several years at the company have been rewarding as i worked my way up.I will always remember my years here with affection.My parents and i will move to another city where we will set up our own business and begin our new life.Sorry for my leaving.Thank you for your guidance and help during my association with the company.Yours sincerely，Susan Waters

4.2010年 6月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：假設(shè)你是一個(gè)醫(yī)療設(shè)備公司的經(jīng)理。你收到一家代理公司的經(jīng)理Peter Smith先生的信。他想了解你公司的情況，你寫信向他介紹并表示希望他能作為你公司的代理。公司簡介：

公司名稱：廣安醫(yī)療設(shè)備有限公司 成立年份：1980年

公司總部地址：中國神州市 主要產(chǎn)品：醫(yī)療測(cè)試設(shè)備

雇員人數(shù)：1000名，其中120人從事研究與開發(fā) 銷售市場：大部分產(chǎn)品銷往東南亞和南美 注意書信格式！

Words for reference: 醫(yī)療測(cè)試設(shè)備 medical testing equipment

總部 headquarters

從事 engage in

東南亞 Southeast Asia

代理 agent

范文：

Dear Mr.Smith, Thanks a lot for your letter, and it's my pleasure to give you some information about our company.Guang An Medical Equipment Company Limited was set up in 1980, with the headquarters in Shenzhou City, China.We have 1,000 employees, and 120m of them are engaging in Research and Development work.We manufacture medical testing equipment, and most of our products are sold to Southeast Asia and South America.We are planning to enter the European market, and since you are interested in our products, would you please consider being our European agent? If you have any ideas, please don't hesitate to let us know.Hope to receive your reply soon.Sincerely yours，Wendy

Manager of Guang An Medical Equipment Company Limited

5.2009年 12月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：根據(jù)下面中文信息寫一封詢問信。發(fā)信人：Mark Zhang 收信人：Mr.Zhang 發(fā)信日期：2009年12月22日

內(nèi)容：1.Mark 在最近的廣交會(huì)上認(rèn)識(shí)了Smith先生；

2.Mark對(duì)Smith先生所在公司展出的新款手機(jī)很感興趣；

3.詢問產(chǎn)品的詳細(xì)信息，包括產(chǎn)品的規(guī)格、顏色、價(jià)格和功能等；

4.說明該款手機(jī)市場銷售前景看好；

5.希望和對(duì)方建立長遠(yuǎn)的商務(wù)關(guān)系。

Words for reference: 廣交會(huì) Guangzhou Trade Fair

規(guī)格

specifications

范文：

December 22, 2009 Dear Mr.Smith.It's so nice to have known you at the Guangzhou Trade Fair last month!I am really impressed by the new type of mobile phone you displayed in the fair.I wonder if you can tell me the details of this product, such as its specifications, colors, price and function.I am quite sure that this type of mobile phone will sell well in our market, so i am really interested in establishing a long-term business relationship with you.Your early reply will be highly appreciated.Sincerely yours，Mark Zhang 6.2009年 6月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：假設(shè)你是某公司人事部職員王林，為安排一次職工的假期旅行，向某旅行社寫信詢問有關(guān)事宜。

內(nèi)容：1.詢問旅游信息（如：線路、價(jià)格、折扣等）；

2.告訴對(duì)方參加旅游的人數(shù)和時(shí)間安排；

3.索要相關(guān)的資料，特別是行程安排；

4.告知聯(lián)系方式。

Words for reference: 旅行社

travel agency

范文：

June 22, 2009 Dear Sir or Madam, We are arranging a tourist trip for all our staff members next month, and I am writing to inquire about the tourist packages you can offer.We have 30 people and can have a 5-day trip starting from 15th.We hope to go to some famous scenic spots, hopefully in Yunnan.Will you please tell me what tourist routes you have? And what is the price for each person? Can you give us a discount? It is highly appreciated if you can send us brochures about the tour arrangement you offer.P;ease contact me at telephone number 84144666, or fax 84144667.Sincerely yours，Wang Lin

Human Resources Department of ABC Company

7.2008年 12月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：請(qǐng)以王華的名義向商店經(jīng)理寫一封投訴信。內(nèi)容如下： 投訴人：王華

投訴對(duì)象：第一百貨公司 投訴商品：SQ200手機(jī)

投訴原因：不能拍照，不能收發(fā)短信，.......等等 投訴要求：退貨或更換 提出希望：及早回復(fù)

寫信日期：2008年12月21日 注意信函格式！

范文：

December 2, 2008 Dear Manager, Last month I bought a SQ200 mobile phone in your department store.After I used for several days, I found there is something wrong with this mobile phone.It could not be used to take photos or send messages.Now, its function is limited to receiving calls, which does not worth the price I paid for.The problem of this mobile phone has greatly affected my normal life.Would you please let me know whether your store can replace this one for me or take it back? An early reply will be appreciated and I hope that my problem will get your prompt consideration.Yours faithfully，Wang Hua

8.2008年 6月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：假定你是新蒂服裝公司（Cindy Garment CO.）銷售經(jīng)理丁志文，根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容個(gè)客戶（Mr.John Smith）寫一封信函。發(fā)信日期：2008年6月22日

內(nèi)容：1.告知原材料（raw material）價(jià)格上漲，產(chǎn)品價(jià)格上調(diào)；

2.原定貨物仍維持原價(jià)；

3.希望今后繼續(xù)向本公司訂貨；

4.隨函寄去調(diào)整后的價(jià)目單（price list）；

5.表示歉意，敬請(qǐng)諒解。

注意書信格式！

范文：

June 22, 2008 Dear Mr.John Smith.There is an increase of the price of the products because the price of the raw material has risen recently.However, the price of those goods that you have ordered keeps the same.I sincerely hope that you will continue to put in orders with our company in the future.I would like to say sorry to you and your company for the increase.And enclosed please find the revised price list.Sincerely yours，Ding Zhiwen

Sales Manager of Cindy Garment Co.9.2007年 12月A級(jí)寫作題

假定你是李明，給北京市奧組委寫一封申請(qǐng)函，申請(qǐng)做一名奧運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者。寫信日期：2007年12月23日 申請(qǐng)函需要包括：

1.個(gè)人信息（年齡、性別、外語能力、社會(huì)活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷等）； 2.擔(dān)任志愿者的理由；

3.希望擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)闹驹刚吖ぷ鳎ㄈ鐚?dǎo)游、翻譯或接待服務(wù)等）； 4.聯(lián)系方式。

Words for reference: 志愿者 volunteer

奧運(yùn)會(huì) the Olympic Games 范文：

December 23, 2007 Dear Sir or Madam, In reply to your advertisement in yesterday's China Daily, I am writing to apply for a position as a voluntary tourist guide for the Beijing Olympic Games.I am Li Ming, a 20-year-old girl major in English from Beijing University.The reasons for my application are as follows.Firstly, as a college student, I'd like to make some contributions to the Beijing Olympic Games, a significant event that Chinese people have been expecting for years.Secondly, being a local resident, I am very familiar with the tourist sites in Beijing.Thirdly, I have a good command of English.Last but not least, as a part-time tourist guide in a travel agency for over three years, I have mastered all the basic techniques of being a tourist guide.I hope u can get an opportunity for a personal interview.I am available at 010-87989986.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

10.2007年 6月A級(jí)寫作題

說明：以部門經(jīng)理（Ruth Crawford）的名義給公司全體員工發(fā)一份內(nèi)部通知。時(shí)間：2007年6月24日

事由：有關(guān)更換電話系統(tǒng)事宜

內(nèi)容：1.由于業(yè)務(wù)需要，公司擬更新目前使用的電話系統(tǒng)；

2.現(xiàn)有3個(gè)通訊公司提交的更新方案，內(nèi)容見附件；

3.請(qǐng)員工仔細(xì)閱讀并提出自己的建議；

4.提交建議的時(shí)間：本月底前；

5.公司將于下個(gè)月初訂貨。

注：請(qǐng)將上述內(nèi)容寫成一段文字，不得逐條羅列，不得簽考生自己的姓名。

Words for reference: 事由 Re

更新 update

附件 attachment

訂貨 place an order 通訊公司 communications company

范文：

Memo

To: All Staff Employees From: Ruth Crawford Re: Updating Telephone System Date: June 24, 2007

Because of the requirement of our business, our company intends to update the telephone system being used.Up to now three communications companies have offered us their updating solutions which are included in the attachments.Please read the solutions proposed carefully and make your own suggestions.Suggestions should be submitted before the end of this month and we will place an order early next month.Ruth Crawford

Department Manager

第三篇：最新全國英語六級(jí)級(jí)寫作

最新全國英語六級(jí)級(jí)寫作范文

A Campaign Speech for the Monitor

1．介紹演講者的身份和競選的職位；

2．說明所具備的勝任本職位的能力和資格；

3．表示感謝同時(shí)爭取獲得競選的成功。

A Campaign Speech for the Monitor

Good morning everyone.I'm Li Wen.I feel greatly pleasant to compete for our monitor.As a freshman like all of you, I feel curious and excited about the beginning of new campus life and hope for doing more for our class.This is the reason why I run for the monitor.Then please allow me to introduce myself, I have three advantages which make me think that will be qualified for the role of the monitor at the university.Firstly, I am a responsible, friendly and open-minded person with the warm heart to help others.I owe this personality to the prerequisite condition for a popular leader.Secondly, I ever worked as the monitor at the high school and my class was honored as “advanced class” during this period of time.Thirdly, I am capable of coordination and organization and have a good performance on my study which enables me to pay more attentions on our class.If you vote for me, you find that you have made a wise choice in the following days.Please believe me that I will not make you disappointed.Thanks for your listening.Studying Alone or Studying in a Group

Directions: Some students prefer to study alone, while others prefer to study with a group of people.Which opinion do you support? Write a composition at least 150 words on the following topic: Studying Alone or Studying in a Group.Studying Alone or Studying in a Group

Studying habit is a very individual thing.Some people like to study alone, while others prefer to study in a group.Both ways of study have their own advantageous.But personally I would rather study alone than study in a group.Firstly studying alone can help one to digest knowledge that he or she has learned better.One can review the part that he or she did not understand during the class according to their own conditions.Secondly, studying alone will help one to concentrate his or her attention.While, studying in a group can, more or less, disperse one's attention.If one is studying with his or her friends, they will be much easier to get their concentration wander and may talk, laugh and play.Thirdly, studying by oneself could cultivate student's independent thinking ability.Through study alone, one has to tackle problems on his or her own which is an exercise for one's thinking ability.Through the above analysis, we could find many advantages of study alone.For example, it could help you absorb knowledge better focus on your stud and cultivate your independent thinking ability.Therefore, if you want to study more efficiently, study by yourself.Remote Education

1．遠(yuǎn)程教育在各高校蓬勃發(fā)展；

2．試論述遠(yuǎn)程教育的優(yōu)勢(shì)和不足；

3．你對(duì)遠(yuǎn)程教育的前景的看法。

Remote Education

When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet, recently more people choose to receive remote education, especially for those white collars, college students and professionals.In the eyes of those people studying through Internet remote education has its own advantages which are beneficial to their study.In the first place, studying through Internet is more efficient and flexible because learners will not be bound up in the classroom at the required time.In the second place, they can listen to the lessons from the famous teachers who are uneasy to contact at campus.But remote education is still far from perfection.On one hand, staying before computers too long will make students neglect the importance of communication.On the other hand, different from the traditional teaching methods, students find it more difficult to get feedback from their teachers on time.As discussed above, it is obvious that remote education is a new teaching model without offices, classrooms and paper, and in my opinion it represents the trend of educational development and the most effective way to realize the popularity and justice of educational resource.Of course, presently it is only a complement to the traditional education.Should a College Graduate Rent or Purchase a House?

1．隨著房價(jià)的逐年攀高，高校畢業(yè)生紛紛采取了租房和蝸居的不同態(tài)度；

2．試分析租房和買房的利弊；

3．簡述你對(duì)此的態(tài)度。

Should a College Graduate Rent or Purchase a House?

With the soaring of the house price the dream of having a house becomes unattainable for most of the new graduates.They face a dilemma of dwelling narrowly or renting a room.People holding the idea of purchasing a house think that the advantages of owning a house of their own outweigh another choice.On the one hand, according to the historical record, house price is expected to rise in the future.The possession of a house is expected to make profits in the long run.On the other hand, a house belonging to yourself makes you feel safety and comfort.Nevertheless, dissenters do not agree with the idea.In their view, the house price is too high to afford for graduates.If graduates decide to buy a house, they are certain to increase the burden of their family.In my opinion, it is more advisable to rent a house during the first years than to buy a house because it is unwise to buy a house at such a high price.It is reasonable to save money and purchase a house at a suitable time.Surely, graduates can decide when to buy a house in accordance with their family condition.Is the Independent Enrollment of University a Good Thing?

1．部分高校開始試點(diǎn)進(jìn)行自主招生；

2．有些人對(duì)高校自主招生表示贊成，有的人卻反對(duì)這種做法；

3．簡述你的觀點(diǎn)和理由。

Is the Independent Enrollment of University a Good Thing?

Many colleges and universities have ploughed into enrolling students independently.Both students and parents are keen on shuttling between those famous universities for taking examinations.Most of voices are on the side of the independent enrollment of university.Because they regard it as another opportunity for high school students to enter into prestigious universities.College entrance examination is no longer the only approach to the university, especially for those students with special talents.However, some people object to it with their own reasons.For one thing, they think those difficult examinations organized by universities for their independent enrollment are bound to make students bear greater burden.For another thing, it might bring about injustice if there is barely strict supervision, let alone whether the examination is authentic enough to select qualified students.In spite of all this, I am still confident that the independent enrollment is of great benefit to our society and examinees.With the perfection of our educational system, the problem as mentioned above will be solved.We have the enough reason to believe that all roads lead to Rome.Online Examination

1．現(xiàn)在一些大學(xué)開始試點(diǎn)進(jìn)行在線考試，也就是網(wǎng)考；

2．請(qǐng)簡述網(wǎng)考的優(yōu)勢(shì)和所面對(duì)的挑戰(zhàn)；

3．你認(rèn)為網(wǎng)考的未來是怎樣。

Online Examination

The pilot project of online examinations recently is under heatedly discussed in the universities.Though online examinations have tried in some foreign countries, they are still fresh for Chinese colleges.People hold unanimous views on them.Online examinations have their own special advantages of creating a just environment for tests, which is called green tests and permits no cheat because each student will have a different online paper.However, the popularization of online examination is unavoidably facing many challenges, such as the establishment of a complete performance criterion on online examination, principles of supervision and strict training of staff, but among them the most important one is the requirement for equipment.Due to the unbalanced development in education, many universities in some remote areas are incapable to purchase so many computers for testing and create an examination point.In spite of so many challenges for online exams as the reform of modern examinations I believe that they will be adopted in more examinations only of both government and universities could make full preparation.Every trial will be perfected in practice and there is no exception to online examinations.The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance Examination

1．以下是某省報(bào)考碩士研究生的人數(shù)及被錄取人數(shù)。請(qǐng)簡略敘述圖表；

2．說明造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因和可能的結(jié)果；

3．你的觀點(diǎn)。

The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance Examination

It can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraduate entrance examination year bye year.Meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising.What are the reasons and the possible consequences? On the one hand, there are three reasons for this.First, the job market becomes more and more competitive.As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree.Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graduation from the undergraduate.Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society.On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this.For one thing, most people will be forced to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability.For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the individual but also on the society.In my opinion, high degree doesn't necessarily mean great ability.It is important for us to pay more attention to the improvement of our abilities than to the examinations.Study Abroad or in China?

1．有人認(rèn)為出國留學(xué)好處多；

2．有人認(rèn)為國內(nèi)教育好處多；

3．你的觀點(diǎn)。

Study Abroad or in China?

There is no consensus of opinions among people as to whether students should study abroad or not.Some people are of the view that the youths should go overseas for further study if possible, while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that it is unnecessary for students to study in a foreign country.Those people who agree with studying abroad believe that diverse culture backgrounds can broaden students' horizon.They also claim that overseas study can shape students' personality because they are forced to deal with all kinds of difficulties by themselves.Nevertheless, the other people who agree with domestic education argue that our educational programs have been greatly improved during the past decades.They also point out that domestic education is convenient and economical.As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight.For one thing, it can strengthen the learners' abilities to understand and communicate with people from other cultures.For another, the developed countries still have a lot advanced knowledge we need to study.When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that studying abroad is advisable.Book Knowledge and Experience

1.學(xué)習(xí)書本知識(shí)的意義；

2.實(shí)踐給我們帶來的好處

3.你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該怎樣獲得知識(shí)。

Book Knowledge and Experience

Knowledge can be acquired from many sources.These include reading books, classroom activities and practice, and each has its own advantages.The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in our daily life.First of all, we can study all the places in the world and learn from people we will never meet in our lifetime, just by reading about them in books.Second, we can also develop our analytical skills and learn how to view and interpret the world around us in different ways.Last but not least we can shuttle between the past and the future by reading books.In this way, we won't repeat the mistakes of others.Practice, on the other hand, offers us more useful knowledge.In fact, as we all know failure is the mother of success.Moreover, if one wants to make new advances, it is necessary to act.Innovations and inspiration do not only come about through reading but through experimentation.one can apply the skills and insights gained through the study, of books to practical experience making an already meaningful experience more meaningful.My View on the Post-graduate Craze

1．目前考研究生形成熱潮；

2．我認(rèn)為這股熱潮的原因是…

My View on the Post-graduate Craze

Every year, millions of college students attend the post-graduate entrance examination, An increasing number of students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education.What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma?

First, it is the demand of the society.In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society.Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more.That is why many students will further their studies.Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed.Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training.A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce.In conclusion, one way to gain some advantages over others in our society is to have a higher degree.No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life

1．在大學(xué)里，大部分人都住集體宿舍；

2．有人認(rèn)為集體生活好處多，也有人不同意這種觀點(diǎn)。

The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is a new experience for some university students who have never lived far away from their parents before.There are striking difference between home life and dormitory life.Students must begin to be responsible for their own behavior.For example, they must depend on themselves to get up in the morning on time for class and to set aside an appropriate amount of time for study and relaxation.Some people believe there are more advantages about dormitory life.In a dormitory, on the one hand, students have more chances to communicate with and learn from each other.On the other hand, students have a great deal more freedom than they might have at home.They can act according to their own will rather than to that of parents'.But some others disagree.They think dormitory rooms are often small and crowded, This lack of space can limit one's privacy and make it difficult for students to be engaged in their studies.In general, there are both sunshine and shadow about life in student dormitory.Whether they like it or not, most students have to face the reality of living with others.Studying in Colleges or Through Internet?

1．有人認(rèn)為在校學(xué)習(xí)好處多；

2．有人認(rèn)為通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)好處多；

3．你的觀點(diǎn)。

Studying in Colleges or Through Internet?

When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet different people hold different views.Some argue that they can learn better in colleges, while others believe that there are more advantages to studying through Internet.I the eyes of the first group of people studying in colleges is beneficial to their study for the following reasons.In the first place, they feel more at home in colleges, because to them, it's a more “natural” way of study.In the second place, they can communicate with the teachers and schoolmates easily, which will help them to develop their interpersonal skills.In comparison those who argue for self-study have their arguments as

On one hand, they can save a lot of time of going to and from school.On the other hand, they can listen to the lectures of all the best teachers available on the Internet.Therefore, they have a wide range of choices of teachers and lessons.As discussed above, it is obvious that each side has its distinctive features.I think the best choice is to use the Internet as often as possible while staying on campus.A Boom in Continuing Education

1．上圖為某城市1992—2007年參加繼續(xù)教育的人數(shù)情況，請(qǐng)描述其中的變化；

2．變化的原因；

3．談?wù)勀銓?duì)繼續(xù)教育的看法。

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 1992 to 2007 in X city.In 1992 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing, education but in 1995 the number grew to 60 thousand and in 2000 140, and by 2007 the number has reached 210 thousand.It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity.The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education.Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough.So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills.Secondly, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves.Last but not least, in modern society, those without bachelor's degrees or above are less competitive.As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity.It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge.In brief, as our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future.Student Use of Mobile Phones

1．手機(jī)已成為一種最普遍的通訊工具；

2．隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展，手機(jī)的服務(wù)功能更加多樣化了；

3．手機(jī)的發(fā)展前途光明。

Student Use of Mobile Phones

Mobile phones are now becoming an ordinary means of communication.Now you may find almost everyone is communicating with others with a mobile phone.Even pupils of primary schools are armed with mobile phones so that it is very convenient for them to contact their parents or their classmates.As science and technology develop, various functions of the mobile phone have been developed.Now people can conveniently exchange information with the help of a mobile phone.With it, businessmen can surf on the Internet and search for the necessary information they need.Directors may keep themselves well-informed so that they can manage their enterprises with the mobile phones.Students may play games, hand in their homework to and receive comments from their teachers.Doctors may diagnose diseases and prescribe medicine for their patients even though they are far away from them.In short, the functions of the mobile phone have been widely diversified.With the further development of technology, more and more functions of the mobile phone are certain to be found, so it is quite safe to say that the mobile phone will have an even brighter future tomorrow.Reading Books

1．現(xiàn)在讀書的人越來越少；

2．但是讀書有很多好處；

3．人們應(yīng)該多讀書。

Reading Books

Nowadays fewer and fewer people like reading books.This tendency is rather disturbing for one should know that books are no less necessary to one's mental life than fresh air is to one's physical life.In fact, we can get many benefits from reading good books.First of all, a good book is our faithful friend.It can increase our contentment when we are cheerful and happy, and lessen our pain when we are sad or lonely.Besides, books can also offer us a wide range of experiences.For instance, few of us can travel far from home or live long over one hundred, but all of us can live many lives through the pages of books.Last but not least, reading books can increase our intellectual ability, broaden our minds and make us wise.In conclusion, though with the advent of TV, books are no longer read as widely as they once were, nothing can replace the role that books play in our lives.Therefore, we should read more books than what we have done in the past.Certificate Mania

1．簡述社會(huì)上大學(xué)生忙于報(bào)考各種證書的現(xiàn)象；

2．分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因；

3．闡述考證熱的影響，并簡述你的觀點(diǎn)。

Certificate Mania

In the face of the mounting pressure nowadays, many university students take various training courses and sit certificate exams, in order to gain a competitive edge on the job market.They usually spend weekends or vacations in training camps, polishing up on their current skills or acquiring a new one.A chain of reasons lead to this certificate mania.At the heart of the phenomenon, there is an increasing number of university graduates while that of job Vacancies does not grow in proportion to it.As a result, employers have bountiful options and would like to recruit the ones with more related experience and skills.Since exams and certificates in some way reflect one's mastery of certain skills, many students would like to give them a try.To be sure, it is a good thing to be spurred on to learn new things.However, “certificate mania” goes to extremes.It is not only misleading but also places a great burden on students.In my opinion, a certificate does not necessarily reflect one's ability that really counts, and so we had better keep a skeptical eye on this mania and prevent vain and burdensome efforts.earning Chinese Fever in the World

1．近年來，中國的世界影響力日益增強(qiáng)，全球形成了一股學(xué)習(xí)漢語潮；

2．中國的語言和文化在世界廣泛傳播的原因；

3．海外“漢語熱”的重要意義。(如正推動(dòng)中華文化走向世界、消除西方社會(huì)對(duì)中國的文化誤讀、促進(jìn)世界和平等。)

earning Chinese Fever in the World

Recently, with the fact that China influences the world greater and greater learning Chinese fever has arisen in the world.There are many reasons for this phenomenon.First of all, the 5000-year-old splendid history of Chinese civilization is another aspect counting for the highly increasing number of students studying Chinese.Numerous foreigners have stepped into this ancient land, appreciating Chinese culture.Besides, China's rapid economic growth and especially its entry to the WTO attribute greatly to the fever.More and more business people cast their eyes on the Chinese market, and want to get more profit from it, which largely inspires the enthusiasm for learning the Chinese language.Therefore, the world sees the bright prospect of China from the past years' rapid and steady development and learning Chinese fever arises naturally.Learning Chinese fever is of great importance.On the one hand, it promotes Chinese culture to the world.On the other hand it helps put an end to the misunderstanding of Chinese culture and facilitate the peace of the world.Away from Net-bar Campaign

1．新聞媒體披露，徐州某中學(xué)1000多名學(xué)生簽名，莊嚴(yán)承諾“遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧”；

2．分析“遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧”運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因；

3．你的觀點(diǎn)。

Away from Net-bar Campaign

It has been reported that a middle school in Xuzhou City has recently launched a campaign named“Away from Net-bar”.More than a thousand students have signed their solemn promise that they will not spend a single minute in net-bars.With the summer vacation drawing near, this campaign is especially meaningful for the development of the minors.It cannot be denied that many net-bars are running illegally in some cities or towns, and even some are offering unhealthy programs that involve violence and sex.Besides, staying away from net-bars also does some good to students' physical health.By sitting too long in front of the computer screen, both their eyesight and physique suffer.Although, to some extent the Internet has brought people great convenience in getting information entertainment and contact with others especially for those businessmen, Nevertheless, for those youngsters, typically those teenagers who are not rational enough to control themselves, the Internet should not be allowed to intrude into their daily life and they should stay away from net-bars.

第四篇：CET6級(jí) 寫作佳篇

CET6級(jí)英語精選作文

一

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Asking for Leave of Absence.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:

Your name and role : Sam , a sophomore in English Class Two

Your Foreign Teacher's name : Ms.Riddle

Incident: you cannot come to her class for some reason

Task: write her a note , asking for leave of absence

Asking for Leave of Absence

To: Ms.Riddle , my dear Oral English teacher

From: Sam , a respectful sophomore student of yours in Oral English Class Two

Date : January 8,2005

Subject: Asking for Leave of Absence

Dear Ms.Riddle，I would like to know if I could ask for a casual leave of absence from your Oral English class this Wednesday morning.Yesterday evening I got a phone call from my cousin , who is now running a small firm in suburbs of this city.He needs an interpreter for two days but cannot find the most reliable person, so he wants me to have a try.Personally , I regard this as a golden opportunity to put what I have learned in your class into practice, but I need your permission of absence.If you think I may go and help him get over the difficulty, I am confident that I 'll do a good job and both of us will grateful.Earnestly yours，Sam

二

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled On Power Failure.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines（given in Chinese）:

1.很多城市缺電現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重

2.分析原因

3.提出建議

On Power Failure

Recently, every morning when I wake up, I find my air-conditioner automatically turned off.I didn't understand why at first , but soon I learned that there was a great shortage of electricity supply in our citythey work form Saturday to Wednesday and have the following two days off instead.This is also a way out , isn't it? 三

假期即將到來，你（付萍）打算做一次為期三周的旅行，希望找個(gè)外國朋友作為游伴（Travel-mate）。擬一個(gè)尋游伴的啟示，交代清楚日程安排、費(fèi)用分擔(dān)情況、對(duì)對(duì)方的要求，說明對(duì)方和你一起出游的好處。

Travel-mate Wanted

I'm a 19-year-old female sophomore named Fu Ping.I hereby earnestly invite a foreign young lady-college student preferred-to make a three-week touring trip with me.My plan is to set off next weekend, when the summer vacation officially begins.The first stop is Kunming, the world-renowned city for its beauty and mild temperature.We'll get there by train and stay there for 2 days, and then we'll head for Jinggangshan, a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot.After a 3-day visit there , we will take a long-distance coach to a nearby port city by the Changjiang River and board a downstream ship to Shanghai, so that we can enjoy the great scenery alongside the third longest river in the world.As everybody knows, Shanghai is the busiest and fastest developing city in China.I'd like to have a look at its prosperity, so the stay there will be about half a week.And a famous Chinese saying goes, “Just as there is Paradise in heaven, there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on Earth ”, so a 4-day visit to these two cities near Shanghai is must.All together, our trip will last about three weeks.I only expect that my travel-mate could split the expenses with me and talk with me in beautiful English, and I would be an excellent guide for her since I major in tourist guiding.Those interested please contact me either through email（fuping@126.com）or phone call（52222221）.四

Suppose you are required to write a Want Ad for the Dean.You are supposed to base this ad on the outline given below: Student Consultant to the Dean Wanted Duties: meeting with students;presenting oral and written reports;attending sessions Requirements: full-time student with a strong sense of responsibility Salary: 6000RMB an academic year Time Commitment : 15h weekly Deadline: Dec.23;to Li Meng 74543322

The office of Dean of students is looking for a Student Consultant to the Dean for the upcoming academic year.Duties of this position will include: meeting with students as individuals and groups to discuss issues, opinions , problems ,complains suggestions and recommendations regarding all areas of college policy;presenting regularly oral and written reports to the Dean of students;and attending various college sessions in the capacity as the student spokesperson.Candidates should be full-time students of this college.The ideal applicant will be skilled in report writing and oral communication;will get along with other individuals;and will demonstrate a strong sense of responsibility.The salary of this position is 6000 RMB an academic year, and the time required for this job is 15 hours a week.Applicants can make a telephone call to Li Meng before Dec.23.The phone number is 74543322

五

Away from Net-bar Campaign 1.新聞媒體披露，徐州某中學(xué)1000多名學(xué)生簽名，莊嚴(yán)承諾“遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧” 2.分析“遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧”運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因 3.作出對(duì)比的評(píng)論

Away from Net-bar Campaign

It has been reported that a middle school in Xuzhou City has recently launched a campaign named “Away from Net-bar”.More than a thousand students have signed for their solemn promise that they will not spend a single minute in the net-bars.With the nearing of the summer vacation, this campaign is especially meaningful for the healthy development of the minors.The internet has brought people great convenience in getting information, entertainment and contact with others, and it has also benefited some businessmen, especially the owner of net-bars.While it is true that most net-bars are running legally, it is also true that some are offering unhealthy programs that involve violence and sex content.Since most middle school students are prone to be influenced and they can hardly tell which bars are doing well and which ones are not, it is only advisable that they stay away from all.Besides , staying away from net-bars also does good to students' physical health.By passively sitting too long in front of the computer screen, both their eyesight and physique suffer.Obviously , the Away from Net-bars Campaign is an activity that is worth advocating and it merits other schools' reference

六

Online Education 1.目前網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育形成熱潮

2.我認(rèn)為這股熱潮的的原因是…… 3.我對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育的評(píng)價(jià)

Being online is no longer something strange in our life.To some degree, it has become part of our daily life.We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far and near.But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”.That is online education.Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible.Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology.Today ,modern science and technology is developing with lightening speed.To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study.However , due to the great pace of modern society , many people are too busy to study full time at school.Online education just comes to their aid.Personally , I appreciate this new form of education.It's indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means.It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning.Most of all ,with online education, we can sick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.七

Air Pollution

根據(jù)所給的題目和下面的關(guān)鍵詞，寫一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文：

health , surrounded by , smog , anything but , gases , impurities , absorb , poisonous , try hard , blacked out

We all know that clean air is important to good health.Wherever you go and whatever you do, you are always surrounded by a sea of gases that we call air.If there are impurities in the air, they may be absorbed by our bodies and make us ill.We need clean air, but unfortunately , air pollution is globally present , especially in cities.Many large cities are anything but pollution-free.Our cities have many factories, which we need to make food, clothing and other things.Every year these factories pour millions upon millions of tons of smog into air.Power plants and houses that burn coal add greatly to air pollution.Besides , there are more cars in cities now.Once out on the streets, they will take in fresh air and replace it with poisonous gases.Our country is trying hard to prevent and control air pollution.As long as every citizen also realizes its importance and makes join efforts, the day will come soon when people will take in only clean air.Then , the sunlight will no longer be blackened out by smoke and soot.八

Direction: Read the following ad carefully , and you, by name of Wang Peng , are then asked to write a reply to apply for the job.Remember to send your letter to the company as given in the ad.You should write about 120 words.中國四達(dá)國際經(jīng)濟(jì)技術(shù)合作公司（CSCIETC）誠聘文秘一員，要求如下：

年齡20-30歲，大專以上學(xué)歷

流利的英語聽說讀寫能力

熟練的計(jì)算機(jī)操作能力

良好的溝通和協(xié)調(diào)能力

有外企工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)者優(yōu)先

應(yīng)聘者請(qǐng)將簡歷、聯(lián)系方式以及待遇要求寄至：上海市淮海中路8560號(hào)攬盛大廈人力資源部收。郵編200033

Department of Human Resources

Lansheng Building

No.8560 , Huaihai Zhong Road

Shanghai , 200033

Wang Peng

No.31020, Zhongshan Road

Xu Hui District

Shanghai , 200076

January 8th, 2005

Dear Sir or Madam，I learned from Beijing Youth Daily Jan.2 that your company is offering a position for a secretary, and it's a great pleasure for me to write to explore the possibility of seeking the job.I graduated two years form ** University, and obtained a bachelor's degree in the field of business management.During my stay in the university my major courses included macro-economics , business communication skills marketing and computer applications.I was especially fond of the communication skills which enabled me to deal with people and thing around well.Upon graduation I engaged with HP China Branch as an assistant to the head of Marketing Department.My responsibilities consisted of carrying out market surveys, writing reports and organizing meetings within the department.This is two-year experience has helped me a lot in many ways.In particular, I become increasingly aware of the importance of co-ordination and co-operation among co-workers.I also believe the experience will qualify me for the current vacancy in your company.I passed CET-6 with high marks.My spoken English is also fluent enough to organize meetings in English , which was actually my routine work in HP.Most of my market reports were presented in English , as my former boss is a native English speaker.I enclose herein my resume and some relevant documents as required.And if you need any further information on me, I also refer you to Mr.Johnson, my ex-colleague, who is available at 021-66668888.I appreciate your sincere consideration of me, and am looking forward to an early interview with you.Sincerely yours，Wang Peng 九

To Be a small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond? 1.在大企業(yè)工作的特點(diǎn) 2.在小企業(yè)工作的特點(diǎn) 3.我的選擇

Just as there are

distinct differences between being a small fish is a big pond and a big fish in a small pond, so it is with working as a subordinate in a large enterprise and presiding in a small firm.With the former, you can derive a deep sense of satisfaction from being a member of a well-known organization such as General Motors, or the Bell Telephone System.You have the opportunities of learning from experienced executives and knowing about the standard working process.With the latter, you have greater responsibilities and your decision may bring immediate effect.Normally you are expose to various experiences and expected to do a great many thing without much help or guidance.Personally I prefer to work in a small enterprise, where my prospect of promotion is good as long as I work hard.To tell the truth , I'd rather become a well-known and important figure within my own small pond.十Styles of Living 1.有些人愿意和父母居住在一起 2.有些人想自己獨(dú)立居住 3.我的看法

Some people enjoy living together with their parents after they have grown up.They hold the opinion because , living with parents , they can take better care of their parents and vice versa.Meanwhile , they can turn to their parents for help if they get into trouble or have some difficulties.To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable than that in a small family.Others, however , prefer to live separately.They cherish the idea to be independent of their parents, seek more freedom and wish to have a place of their own, in which they can do what they like.Bedsides , they don't want to be overprotected by their parents but long for chance to face the society by themselves.As to me , I like an independent life style in spite of the fact I love my parents.Different generations have different life styles and values.What one generations likes may not be another generation's fondness.Living separately , each generation can enjoy different value.In addition , by leading an independent life , I can train my character and develop my own ability to deal with things encountered in my life.十一

My View on the income Gap

1.收入差距懸殊是當(dāng)前社會(huì)的一種現(xiàn)象

2.人們對(duì)之褒貶不一

3.我的看法

Now the income gap is getting wider and wider.In some privately owned firms, joint-ventures, or foreign-funded companies , an executive's yearly income is ten times or even a hundred times as much as an ordinary worker's

Faced with this situation, people will undoubtedly have different opinions.Some believe that it benefits the social and economic development since driving force is often derived from the gap.In other words , the gap inspires people and gives a push to advancement.Other speak of its side effect: income gap is often the root of social unrest and also contrary to our country's principle.From my point of view, while it is true that the income may stimulate the social development to some extent, it causes trouble as well.An income gap that is too wide for most people to bear can neither contribute to the stability of a country nor promote its economic development.Therefore , while we are advocating the rapid development of our country , we should tolerate the narrow income gap but narrow the wide one.十二

The Teacher-Student Relationship

1.好的師生關(guān)系有益于學(xué)生的發(fā)展

2.不良的師生關(guān)系有害于學(xué)生的發(fā)展

3.我認(rèn)為……

A good teacher-student relationship is ab1e to effective1y further the student to a higher level in study.The teacher with patience and understanding encourages the student instead of pushing or forcing him.The relationship of this sort makes learning so enjoyable and funny that the student would work hard willingly.However, a bad relationship seriously weakens the achievement of teaching.It discourages the student from 1earning, leaving him with a wrong and negative attitude towards studying.Thus, teaching also becomes an unpleasant task, which forms a vicious cycle.As I see it, the relationship between a teacher and a student should be attached much importance to.A good relationship makes the teacher's job worthwhile while a bad one ill-affects the student's development, even to the rest of his life.十三

Turn off Your Mobile Phone

1.移動(dòng)電話給我們的生活帶來了便利

2.移動(dòng)電話有時(shí)也會(huì)影響別人

3.在某些場合請(qǐng)關(guān)掉你的手機(jī)

With the development of information techno1ogy and reduced price of communication products, the mobi1e phone has become a necessity for most people.Obviously, it shortens the distance between people and makes our life more convenient.Thanks to it, it's easy for us to contact or be contacted by others anytime and anywhere.We will never miss any important meetings，great deals or admirable opportunities.But，have you noticed sometimes the mobile phone also brings embarrassment to us? It's not rare to see someone pressing the mobile phone to his ear and shouting 1oud1y in public as if there were no one else present.And I'm sure each one has had such an experience that the mobi1e phone ring continuous1y on a formal occasion.Perhaps these People have many 1ife-and-death reasons to keep the phone working at all times, but it interrupts people around them who have to hear what they don't care when they want to concentrate on what they're doing.So if you are one of them, please shut off your cell phone in public, especially on a quiet and serious occasion.It's a respect for both others and yourself.十四

Traveling by Train or by Plane

1.我們出遠(yuǎn)門總要坐火車或飛機(jī)

2.坐火車和坐飛機(jī)各有什么利弊

3.你的結(jié)論如何

When we go on a business trip, we will be faced with the choice of traveling by train or by plane.Before making the right choice，we had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.First of all, a train will take us to our target railway station.Also, a plane will take us to the target airport，Second, in a train we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the countryside.Likewise, in a plane we can command a good view of fields, buildings, mountains and even plains of clouds.Despite these similarities, they differ in the following aspects.First, a train ticket is cheap.Most of us can afford it.However, a plane ticket is about twice as expensive as a train ticket.Most of us grudge paying for it.Besides, it is safer to travel by train.If the train gets into some trouble, we may survive by jumping out of it.On the contrary, if we travel by plane, we have to ask God to bless us.However, it takes us longer time to travel by train than by plane.Therefore, it depends which transportation tool we should choose.If we just want to save money，we will travel by train;but if we want to save time, we will turn to the plane.十五

Foreign Investment

1.外商投資的優(yōu)越性

2.外資給中國經(jīng)濟(jì)建設(shè)帶來的變化

3.如何進(jìn)一步吸引外資

The merit of foreign investments 1ies in many aspects.It increases capital investment in our economic construction, speeds up the technical innovation in our enterprises and accelerates our output.In brief, the foreign investment Plays an important m1e in the modernization of our country.Thanks to the foreign investment, great changes have taken place in our economic construction.Many new and advanced enterprises have been set up, old enterprises have been revolutionized and the living standards of our Peop1e have been great1y improved.All these have something to do with the foreign investment.Then, how can we attract more foreign investment? We must maintain our country's stability to create a good investment environment.Meanwhile we should carry out some favorable policies, making the foreign businessmen believe that to invest in China does pay off.Only in this way can we further attract and secure foreign investment.十六

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Jill.Write a letter to your friend Li Fang.You should write at least 120 words according to the situation given below in Chinese:

假設(shè)你的好朋友李芳是大學(xué)四年級(jí)學(xué)生，正在考慮是考研究生繼續(xù)深造還是大學(xué)畢業(yè)后就踏上工作崗位。請(qǐng)給她寫封信表明你的態(tài)度。

Dear Fang，I understand that you are in a dilemma.Although so many graduates are eager to set feet on their work-life road, there are still some who prefer to start their new life after gaining another degree to make better preparation for entering society.In my opinion, the latter are more admirable.You are good at all your course these years, so if you do like to spend another two or three years on campus, you should stick to it.In today's society, the achievement and status you can get and the devotion you can make are no doubt in proportion to your educational background and degrees, coupled with the efforts you put in them.If you want to stride to your destinations more smoothly and easily, why not head for the further study courageously?

Whichever you choose, I firmly believe your industry will ensure your success.After all, it is you who have the finally say on the final choice.Best wishes，Yours sincerely 十七

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My View on the post-graduate Craze.You should write at least 120 words and base yourcomposition on the outline（given in Chinese）below: 目前考研究生形成熱潮 我認(rèn)為這股熱潮的原因是……

My View on the Post-graduate Craze

Every year, million of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination.More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education.What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma?

First, it is the demand of the time.In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society.Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever.That is why many students will further their studies.Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed.Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training.A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce.One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher degree.No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.十八

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Something I admire about the Western Culture.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below :

1.Is there anything in the Western culture you admire?

2.What is it（are they）and why do you like it（them）?

Something I Admire about the Western Culture

Despite the cultural conflicts between the Orient and the Occident, there do exist some admirable ingredients in the Western culture.First and foremost, the equality between parents and children.The parents are not always superior to their children, and the children do not always need to obey their parents order, that is, they are more like close friends.Second, the independent personality.Western people have a strong sense of supporting themselves and being independent.They begin earning their pocket money early in their life, even as kids.Last, Western people do not always assess a person according to his background.If only he can achieve success through personal struggle, he can win status.It's a talent-oriented society, not background-oriented.All the above mentioned are what I admire in the western culture and what I think we Chinese should learn.十九

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Campus Life.You should write at least 120 words according to the situation given below in Chinese:

1.有的大學(xué)生認(rèn)為大學(xué)生活是豐富多彩，充實(shí)的 2.有的大學(xué)生對(duì)校園生活不滿意

3.你理想中的大學(xué)生活是什么樣的?談?wù)勀愕母惺?/p>

Campus Life

Early in senior high school, we longed to be enrolled in a university.Now the dream has come true.But how do we college students like our campus life?

Certainly, some relish it, finding it colorful and rewarding.Besides study, they spend considerable amount of time improving themselves in various aspect.Yet others do not think much of their college life, thus do not benefit as much.In their eyes, the university is just a bigger high school.The only difference is that they have more time at their disposal without parents looking over their shoulder.As to me, college life is ideal if only I have abundant books to read, some bosom friends to keep me company, a couple of conscientious professors to instruct me, and an easy access to the Internet.二十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Opinion on Advertisement.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

Some people hold the idea that the advertisement is a necessary evil in modern life.What do you think?

My Opinion on Advertisement

As is known to all, angels and evils are poles apart.But is there anything that combines the two perfectly? Some there is-the advertisement.With the growing influence of mass media, advertising invades every aspect of our lives.Whenever we turn on the TV, look through a newspaper, open the mailbox, or surf on the Internet, advertisements would immediately jump into our sight.As they make things so attractive, we often end up buying things that we do not really need.Advertising not only adds to the price of the goods, thus harming the consumer's interest, but also imposes a kind of materialistic value upon the audience.But that is only part of the story-advertisements are informative as well as persuasive.They provide us with up-to-date information about the latest products.Some advertisements are so elegantly presented that we are inspired or even moved.No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an indispensable part of our modern life.二十一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below:

1.友誼是人生永恒的主題

2.友誼到底意味著什么

3……友誼的重要性。

What does friendship mean?

There is no definite answer.An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.Friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes.When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade;when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation;if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you;if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help.We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.二十二

On Overseas Study

1.有人認(rèn)為出國留學(xué)是個(gè)人發(fā)展的最佳選擇

2.也有人堅(jiān)持在國內(nèi)也能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想

3.我的看法

With the deepening of reform and opening-up of our country, many people dream of going abroad for further study.They insist that the modern research facilities, world famous professors and excellent environment in those foreign co11eges and universities can help lay a perfect foundation for their future development.However, there are still many people who favor studying at home.They argue that studying abroad is too expensive and therefore doesn't pay, They also Point out that there are no language and cu1tural barriers if they study in our country，Just as the old saying goes, “Every advantage has its disadvantage.” Both opinions are acceptable in some sense.If students have the chance and financial resources, they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their eyes.On the other hand, if conditions don't permit, they can pursue their studies in top universities at home.What counts is not the place where they study, but what they can learn..二十三

Private Tutoring

1.為孩子聘請(qǐng)家教目前非常普遍

2.家教的利與弊

3.我的看法

Private tutoring is “in”.A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors，Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education.Many parents, for various reasons，missed the chance of obtaining a good education.when their children meet with difficulties in study, they arc helpless, Private tutoring is the only solution.As private tutoring is usually one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as we11 as the weak points of the pupil, clearly.However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages, for one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils' time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health.For another, some teachers, busy“shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.What's more，some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-ca11ed tips for test-taking Father than help them acquire what is more meaningful.Generally speaking, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils' potentials.Only in this way can we generation be healthily brought up.二十四

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic City Problems.You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1.越來越多的人涌入大城市，有些問題隨之產(chǎn)生

2.比較明顯的大問題有

3.我對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的想法。

City Problems

Nowadays, millions of migrant workers flock into cities in search of jobs and better living.However, with the sharp rise in the urban population, many problems arise in the development of cities.Firstly, cities become more and more crowded, putting much pressure upon transportation, housing, sanitation, education, employment and so on.City services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point.Secondly, a growing number of private cars emit huge amount of carbon dioxide, leaving the air mercilessly polluted.What is more, the city is also threatened by rising crime.Not a single day passes without the report of someone being robbed, kidnapped or murdered.Last but not least, city-dwellers are not only separated from the natural world but also isolated from each other, even not knowing the name of their next-door neighbor.All these problems have harmed the attractiveness of the city.Unless there is some improvement, more and more people may seek to live in the suburbs.二十五

Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cars and Air Pollution.You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1.私家轎車越來越多，有些問題隨之產(chǎn)生

2.比較明顯的大問題有……

3.我對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法

Car and Air Pollution

Too many cars have created a lot of serious problems in our world.Besides congestion, accidents and fast fuel consumption, cars are responsible for a good part of air pollution in big cities.All the time, they are pumping huge amounts of waste gases into the atmosphere.These gases are very harmful, causing disease and even death.One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and clean fuels.In Shanghai, some of the public buses begin to run on natural gas, which does not give off as much carbon dioxide as the petrol.But it may take decades for the new models of clean cars completely replace the traditional ones.Another solution is to develop modern public transportation systems and restrict the use of private cars.If the price of petrol rises constantly and the public vehicles are efficient and convenient enough, most people will not buy private cars.And the total number of cars in big cities will reduce greatly.On the whole, the elimination of air pollution needs the collective efforts from the government, the public and the environmentalists.二十六

Overseas Study at an Early Age

1.目前很多父母在孩子高中畢業(yè)前就總他們出國學(xué)習(xí)

2.導(dǎo)致這種趨勢(shì)的原因是什么

3.我對(duì)此的看法

Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children.They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study.With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too.Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining a better future.Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason.The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children's overseas study.As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial.The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves.I do think that overseas study can contribute to one's self-improvement, but it's better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.二十七

Statistics of Family Expenses in Shanghai

1980

1990

2000

Food & Clothing

68%

45%

20%

Recreation

3%

5%

8%

Education

6%

16%

22%

Health Care

6%

10%

16%

Others

17%

24%

35%

1.根據(jù)上圖描述該城市家庭支出的變化

2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因

3.說明這些變化對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生的影響

As is shown in the table above, dramatic changes have taken place in family expenses in the City of Shanghai within two decades（from 1980 to 2000）.The most obvious change is in expense on food and clothing, which has dropped by 48%, while those on recreation, education and health care have increased respectively by 5%, l6% and l0%.Expenses on other things keep rising from 17% to 35%.The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but are in fact closely related to one another.The most likely factors accounting for these changes are as follows:

Development in economy is the fundamental one.The increased income results in the lowering percentage of food and clothing.That is to say, a small percentage of the total income is enou5h to cover food and clothing expenses.Another factor lies in the development of people's concept.When people are well fed and well dressed, they begin to interest themselves in recreation and education.These changes should also be attributed to social reforms.In the 1990's, college education was not totally free as it was before, which also accounts for the rising expenses on education.Soon after, the government gradually stopped offering houses to its citizens without charges.People had to save a large proportion of their money for housing.That's partly why the expenses for ''others'' doubled.As for the more expenses on health care, I figure there are two main reasons: the cancellation of free medical care and people's awareness of the importance of health.The changes reflect the development of the city and indicate that people are enjoying more.二十八

On Space Project

給《**周刊》宇航專欄的編輯寫一封信，說明你對(duì)太空探索項(xiàng)目的態(tài)度（支持或反對(duì)），并簡單陳述你的理由。

Dear Editor，Thank you for your starting a specia1 co1umn jor the discussion on space projects.Frankly, it seems to me that our space projects so far have been in the main a waste of money, time, energy, human lives and resources.The richer countries are pouring large sums of money into space research programs which are of no benefit to human beings while in underdeveloped countries thousands of people are dying of hunger.Besides, many scientists' time and energy are wasted, which could have been devoted to improving our living condition.What's more, many astronauts have died complete1y uselessly in space vehicles which have been faulty.They were young people who hadn't enjoyed the fruit of life yet.Apart from human wastage, there is the wastage of resources which are finite and essential if man is to survive.I think it's high time we stopped these meaningless programs.注：上文是一篇持反對(duì)態(tài)度的文章，同學(xué)也可以試寫支持態(tài)度的文章。

CET6級(jí)寫作原則

一、長短句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人!寫一個(gè)短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長短句結(jié)合，抑揚(yáng)頓挫，豈不爽哉?牢記!

強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短;在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主題句原則

國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無首”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學(xué)，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi)，結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無事!

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原則

領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）

10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時(shí)說話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!

四、短語優(yōu)先原則

寫作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語，有兩個(gè)好處：其

一、用短語會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語，必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)-精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其

二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦?用短語是一個(gè)辦法!比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達(dá)：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達(dá)：I am looking forward to it.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。

五、多實(shí)少虛原則

原因很簡單，寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如：

走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說：slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說：sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說：dance out of the room

老人走出房間應(yīng)該說：stagger out of the room

所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會(huì)大放異彩!

六、多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯(lián)）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）

批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩，然后我主動(dòng)搭訕，然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d，然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了，然后我們成為了朋友…可見，講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個(gè)樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。

舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分：

When to go, Why he goes away…

5）附加（多此一舉）

如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說，我昨天見過他;或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don't enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實(shí)很簡單，同位語——要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語從句-借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句，一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句，一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式，一個(gè)個(gè)地詞，一個(gè)個(gè)的短語，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢(shì)恢宏）

要想寫出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

第五篇：2009年6月A級(jí)寫作

2009年6月

說明：假設(shè)你是某公司人事部職員王林，為安排一次職工的假期旅行，向某旅行社寫信詢問有關(guān)事宜。

內(nèi)容：

1.詢問旅游信息（如：線路、價(jià)格、折扣等）；

2.告訴對(duì)方參加旅游的人數(shù)和時(shí)間安排；

3.索要相關(guān)的資料，特別是行程安排；

4.告之聯(lián)系方式

Words for reference:

Travel Agency 旅行社

范文

June 22nd, 2009

Dear Sir or Madam,I am Wang Lin from the personnel department

of XXX Company.I know from a friend that your

travel agency provides good service and enjoys a

high reputation.I am writing to ask for some traveling information,including the traveling routes, the prices for them, and

the discount you may offer.Our company will arrange

workers to travel in mid-July, so please send us

some related material, especially the traveling schedule.If you have any question, please call 138XXX, or

send an email to Wanglin@126.com.Best wishes!

Sincerely yours,Wang Lin

【評(píng)析】

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