第一篇:果果作文我受到了批評
我受到了批評
湖北仙桃“小金筆”作文培訓班熊羿
受到了批評的滋味可不好受,我就受到一次嚴歷的批評,并不是因為我粗心,而是把滅火器打開了!
那天,我把王天宇請來玩,我和他不知不覺玩起CS槍戰,我端起“AK—47”對著他掃射起來。誰知,過了一會兒,他就不見了,我打了好久也沒有發現他。突然,我聽到一聲輕輕地笑,原來他躲在沙發下。他看到我四處找他的樣子,不禁笑出了聲。我連忙朝他撲過去,他手上沒有‘武器’,便瞅準一個空檔,躥了出去,我聽到了“嗖”的一聲響,便想去搬“法寶”——滅火器,誰知,“法寶”卻不見了。一定是王天宇搬走了!
果然不出我所料,他真提著滅火器來了,只見他對準我,拔下銷子,一捏鐵把,只聽“刺啦”一聲,一條白霧從客廳里沖到陽臺,整層樓立刻彌漫了干粉,有好些甚至落到了地上!我著急地指責他說:“你怎么把滅火器釋放了?你真闖了大禍了!快,快點和我一起掃地!”我操起掃帚,掃了起來,他也過來幫我的忙,可沒等我掃完,媽媽就回來了。媽媽見滿地狼籍,連忙問:“怎么了?怎么搞成這樣了?”我紅著臉說:“我們把滅火器打開了!”媽媽生氣極了,大聲訓斥我們說:“這個也是能玩的東西嗎?你不知道滅火器噴出的東西對身體有害嗎?真是胡鬧,再這樣小心我揍你!”媽媽說完就去拿雞毛撣子了,我嚇得老老實實地呆在墻角,心里直埋怨自己太調皮了。可誰知媽媽并沒有打我們,只是語重心長地說:“你們要知錯就改,下次再也不能這樣了!”我和王天宇連忙小聲說:“對不起,下次不敢了!
這事雖然過去很久了,但每次想起那次所受的批評我都會臉紅。
指導老師:祁先利
第二篇:我受到了批評
我受到了批評
今天,我在寫作業時不細心做錯了許多題,受到了爸爸媽媽的批評,我心里很難過。我下定決心,以后做作業時一定不能馬虎,要認認真真很細心地寫,寫完再檢查一遍。
白欣睿
2009年5月14日
第三篇:我受到了批評
我受到了批評
合肥慶平希望學校2018屆六(4)
鄭家馨
從小到大,我得到的批評有很多,那就是因為我很笨,腦袋轉的比別人慢好幾倍。就是因為笨,我在補習的時候,補習老師經常批評我,之后,就會有很多同學嘲笑我,不愿意和我一起玩,我的性格就變得特別內向。我就會覺得老師在挑自己的刺兒,明明我做的沒有錯,也拿我撒氣。媽媽對我好像也是如此,但有一次,我終于明白了媽媽批評我是因為她愛我。
那是一天下午,我放學回來,媽媽早就在門口等我了。為什么媽媽會在門口等我呢?原來是因為今天考數學了,而我昨天晚上也沒有好好的復習,早早的就睡下了。我的心里開始變不安起來,開始回想起早上的事。早上第一節課數學考試,我一來學校,就發現同學們都在埋頭背公式,有的已經開始準備小抄了。我想:“考試這么簡單,還需要你們這樣的受苦,真是多此一舉啊。”到了第一節課,開始考試了,我粗略的掃了一下試卷,發現大部分都不會。頓時心里難受極了,就像一團亂麻塞在心里,又緊張又恐懼,頭腦也變得昏昏沉沉的!我只好硬著頭皮做起試卷……到了該交卷的時候了,我還有一題沒寫,那題我也不會,也就睜一只眼閉一只眼的交上去了。到了下午,發卷子了,我的心緊張的快爆炸了。當聽見老師念到 “鄭家馨,81分”時,我不由得想:“完蛋了,回家后又是一頓臭罵。” 媽媽就問我:“你在那發什么呆呢?考試考的怎么樣?考了多少分兒?”我吞吞吐吐了半天,才把分數說了出來。媽媽說:“果然不出我所料。”之后,把我臭罵了一頓。罵就罵吧,后來竟然罵我都不如爺爺奶奶家養的畜生聰明,我實在是忍無可忍了,沖媽媽大聲的說:“那還有比我考的還低的人,你憑什么這么說我?”說完,我便怒氣沖沖地朝書房走去,把門“轟”一聲關上了。過了一會兒,媽媽輕敲我的門,說:“對不起,我剛才說話口氣太重了,你別往心里去。”其實我氣早就消了,我也反思過:“我不應該這么對媽媽說話,他怎么說也是為了我好。”我把門打開了,媽媽看我開門了,便也開心的笑了。
啊,這次批評真是令人歡喜也令人憂啊!
第四篇:冰果作文
Love is understanding
Everyone of us is surrounded by love.we love others and they love us.The most basic,it takes the form of caring for others an considers others,we always can’t help attenting them.However,although we love each other,we are still having troubles with them sometimes,which makes us unhappy ,pained and influences our emotion.So ,I hold that love is understanding.We should trade our others including our friends and families with generosity and thoughtfulness.Maybe we will encounter something which are plensant ,maybe nothing seems to be going right for us at some moment,maybe we not like the people who are in front of us at all,we should always have a love for them.Understanding is the best way to show our love.because of it ,we can hang on our family bond,our friendship and our tendresse that are the most things for our lives.In summary,if you love somebody,try your best to understand he or she.It will be the most precious wealth in your life.
第五篇:冰果作文
A Conflict between My Parents and Me
When I was in junior school,I had a bad habit which led to a conflict between my parents and me.But through that conflict I learn a lot and what makes me moving is that I find how heavy the love which exists there all the time is.Every night I was accustomed to play some games before I begin to do my homework,so I may study until the 12 o’clock is around the corner,and what is the worst,I would sleep in the class the next day.Before long,my parent were aware of this case.It’s a normal night, I do the same thing as usual.When the clock struck 12,my father came in.He shout at me and suddenly he tear my textbook into pieces.I watched the pieces sinking down, and suddenly I felt my heart was broken.I thought there was no love, and I would be lonely.The next morning, although the sky was black, I waked up and went to my study room.Strangely, a beam of light came out from thr room.Slowly, I moved to the door and looked what happened,and what I saw shocked me.My mother seated there and glued my textbook, my tears came out like rain.I saw love is there and it never escaped.I love my parents and my parents love me.