第一篇：專四作文考綱要求及評分標準

專四作文考綱要求及評分標準

(1)能根據各種不同的聽讀材料筆頭回答問題，復述內容寫摘要、寫提綱和記筆記。(2)能根據題目列出寫作提綱，在一小時內寫出 200～250 詞的短文。以上均要求做到內容完整、條理清楚，語法基本正確，語言通順恰當。(3)能寫一般的書信、通知、便條、請帖，填寫簡單的表格，格式正確，語言得體。寫作課培養學生初步寫作能力，包括提綱、文章摘要、短文以及最簡單的常用應用文。具體的寫作的要求和規定如下：(1)測試目的： 檢查學生在專業英語學習的基礎階段末期的英語寫作能力。(2)題型： 主觀試題，分為 Section A 和 Section B 兩個部分。Section A: Composition 寫作文 Section B: Note-writing 寫便條(3)測試要求： a)作文。要求根據所給的題目和列出的寫作提綱或圖表、數字統計表等(也附有寫作提 綱)寫一篇 150 詞的短文，能做到內容切題、完整，條理清楚，文章結構嚴謹，語法正確，語言通順恰當。作文的類別有說明文、議論文或記敘文。考試時間為 35 分鐘。 b)便條。要求根據提示寫大約 50～60 詞的便條、通知、請帖等。要求做到格式正確，語言得體。考試時間為 10 分鐘。評分標準 評分標準共有以下七條：(1)文章內容切題、豐富，文章通順，表達清楚。(2)行文流暢。(3)組織嚴密，邏輯性強。(4)句型多樣化，句法結構正確。(5)用詞得體、恰當、豐富。(6)語法正確。(7)拼寫及標點正確，書寫整潔。

第二篇：專四聽寫和作文評分標準

專四聽寫和作文評分標準

聽寫評分原則

1.1.聽寫共分15小節，每節1分，扣分一律寫在試卷右邊的空白處。大錯誤下面畫線。小錯誤用圓圈表示，重復錯誤用三角記號表示。

2.2.每節最多扣1分。

3.3.重復錯誤，僅扣一次分。

4.4.錯誤共分兩類：小錯誤（minor mistakes）和大錯誤（major mistakes），分別扣0.25分和0.5分。

A.A.小錯誤： 1）單詞拼寫錯一到兩個字母。例： steadily → staedily； harbor → habor 兩個字母以下的詞、次序顛倒算小錯。

2）2）標點符號錯誤（含大小寫）。例： World War I → world war one , and then adopted →.And then adopeted

3)3)冠詞、單復數錯誤。例： until the beginning → until beginning;parent → parents

4）4）小錯誤扣分標準：小錯誤在一節中出現一次，留作總計；出現兩次：扣0.5分；出現三次： 扣0.5分后留作總計；出現四次：扣1分。

5）5）未扣分小錯誤的扣分標準：累計2 ~ 4 個：扣0.5分累計5 ~ 8 個：扣1分。

B.大錯誤：漏寫、加詞、造詞、換詞（冠詞作小錯計）、大移位、時態錯誤，每個錯誤扣0.5分。例： loved → love；task — test； trip — trap； flee — flea；have finished — finsh（ed）5.一些特例的扣分標準：下列情況不扣分： World War I → World War One race car → racecar well-balanced → well balanced 90 percent → 90% 6.總分只有0.5分時，以1分計算；其余總分中如含小數點的，小數舍去，保留整數，如12.5 → 12；7.5 → 7 7.空白卷一律打0分一、四級作文的要求、評分標準及評卷實例

(一)四級考試對作文的要求

《大學英語考試大綱》明確規定：四級大學英語寫作考試時間為30分鐘。要求應試者寫出一篇不少于120個的短文：寫作命題源于日常生活和有關科技、社會文化等方面的一般常識，不涉及知識面過廣、專業性太強的內容。其命題方式有：給出題目、或規定隋景，或給段首句續寫；或給出關鍵詞寫短文、或看圖作文。要求內容切題，文理通順，表達正確，語義連貫，無重大語言錯誤。

(二)四級考試作文評分原則。評分標準和評卷實例

1．評分原則．

四級考試作文采用總體評分(GLOBAL SCORING)的方法，即把內容和語言作為一個統一體進行綜合評判。主要是看內容是否切題，表達是否充分，所用語言是否能清楚而明確地表達思想。評卷人員根據思想內容和語言表達的總體印象給出獎勵分（REWARD SCORES），并不是按語言點錯誤的多少扣分。

2．評分標準

作文題滿分為15分。

閱卷標準共分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。

2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數為嚴重錯誤。5分——基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴重錯誤。

8分——基本切題，表達思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多。

11分——切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。

14分——切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤。

0分——白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想。

閱卷人員根據閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數檔次(如8分)相似，即定為(8分)，若認為稍優或劣于該檔次，則可加一分(9分)或減一分(7分)，但不得加減半分。字數不足應酌情扣分：

110--119詞：扣1分； 100--109詞：扣2分；90--99詞：扣3分；80--89分：扣5分： 50以下詞：扣9分

*作文最低分： 6分

題目： Bicycles: An Important Means of Transport in China

提綱：（1）為什么自行車在中國這樣普及

（2）和汽車的比較（3）自行車在中國的前途 Score: 14

Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people--man and woman, old and young--ride theft bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles.”

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap,convenient and easy to ride.Second, riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They

consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country, and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.Score: 11

There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of

transport in people' s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider' s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a

developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the countary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China' s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it' s quality will be improved.Score: 8

Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn't ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn' t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn' t need any oil, and it can' t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modem bicycles.Score: 5

Perhaps the amount of bicycle in China is the largest in the world.Why was it so widely used in China? I thought the answer was: the population in China is too large and the price of bicycle is much cheaper.The third answer is that the bicycle is easier in using than other transportations.Comparing with the car, the bicycle is cheaper and it is easier in using than the car, but its speed is lower than that of the car.The bicycle will be remained for a long time in China but in the end it will be disappeared with the improval of people' s living level.Scoer: 2

As every body know, China a big developing country.So, the living standard of people not very high at present people' s income is not enough for they to buy cars motorcycles.And bike is easy to ride.Bicycle is cheaper be made.And I think bicycle the useful tool of tsansport in China now.So, it is quite porpular and wildly used in China's cities and country sides than the personal transportation-tool.Bike is a kind of clean tools of transport.It not use gas and other energers.For this reason it not creat polution.But in fact in any way Bicycle is not advanced than car.If it is raining, the rider will suffer from wet, on the other hand, bike can not carry much goods.According to the our country' s developing rate.I firmly believe that Bicycle will replaced by car or motorcycle in that nearly future.But undoubtfully it continue the important means of transport in China for a long time.Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Outline:1.有人認為讀書要有選擇2.有人認為應當博覽群書3.我的看法 Score: 14

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively? They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them.Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree.They emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who's right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we shouldread extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.Score: 11

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as

many as bad books.Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of

information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.Score: 8

Some people think reading shall be choosed.Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely.Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge.And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively.Because reading is important to man.Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime.It can be seen in the

newspapers and watched on TV.We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge.It can make our life more beautiful.We must give up those unhelpful books.They are not good to us.Reading them is wasting time and money.Soreading selectively is an important part in reading.Score:5

I think reading not only selectively but also extensively.Because the two sides are not

contradict．Our time is limited．So we can not read every book in the world．However, we will not be interested in every book．We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like．But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge，news and so on，it also make ours become a wise man．0n the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted．Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read．On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life．They are all useful to ours．

Score: 2

Most people thought that read books should have been selectived.But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?

Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for us.We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.on another hand, Someone' s intresting was wide.Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn' t reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us.Don' t treat these books with rackless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.

第三篇：專四作文

1.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

At present, people become more cautious when they meet strangers, let alone to help them.Trust between person is at stake.Offer your idea about such a phenomenon and your suggestions to make a change.On Aiding Strangers

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You are invited to attend a friend’s birthday party.Write a note to your friend, Mike, explaining briefly why you cannot take part in it and give him your best wishes.2.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Nowadays Internet is revolutinizing our globe and greatly facilitating our modern life.As a matter of fact, we can do almost everything on the Net, including shopping.However, people take different attitudes towards the new way of shopping.What do you think of it?

Shopping on the Net

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Emerson’s paper ranks on the top and earns fame for the English department.Write a note to him on behalf of the department, expressing the appreciation and good wishes to him.3.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

It is a popular phenomenon that nowadays some houses in China are labeled with foreign names and some traditional Chinese houses are demolished for the new foreign ones.Analyzing the possible reasons and the consequences of such a phenomenon.Foreign Names for Chinese Houses

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You just got recovered from illness.Write a note to your partner, Jason, expressing your appreciation to his care and great help.4.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Job-hunting is a tough challenge to the graduates.Someone says graduation means the coming of unemployment.Provide your opinion on such a phenomenon and give some advice for such a dilemma.Graduation, Synonym of Unemployment?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You have got in trouble in your computer installment.Write a note to your friend, Roger, describe briefly what it is and ask him to give you a hand.5.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Now many universities are asking their students to evaluate their teachers.Many students are excited at this, but some teachers seem to hold different opinions.What’s your opinion?

Should Teachers Be Evaluated by Students?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

A College English Speech Contest is to be held in the city.You want to take part in it.Write a note to Mr.Brown, inquiring the details about the contest and procedure.6.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Career planning is an important step for graduates, and it is of great importance.Offer your idea about it.Some of the tips and potential flaws must be included in your composition.Career Planning

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Your friend Steven has been enrolled by Yale University.Write a note to congratulate him, expressing your happiness and admiration for him.7.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Nowadays tourism is more and more indispensable to people’s life.But which way is a better choice: joining package tour or travelling on your own?

Which Do You Prefer: Joining Package Tours or Travelling on Your Own?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Your friend just failed in a contest and was very sad.Write a note to your friend, Allan, comforting and encouraging him not to lose heart and make further success.8.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

A scholar’s professional ethics is essential to his career and in a sense determines his contribution to the public.What does the professional ethics really mean, and what is its importance to a scholar?

My Idea of Professional Ethics for a Scholar

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You are informed that your friend Lily has failed her final examination and is very frustrated now.Write a note to Lily, offering some suggestions and try to cheer her up.9.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Some people argue that athletes, while playing games, should adhere to the principle “Friendship first, competition second”, but others are against this view.They think that “Playing a game is fun when you win.” What is your opinion?

Playing a game is fun when you win

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

You have found a book in the dining hall;write a “Lost and Found” note.10.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

More and more adult students are renting flats to live away from campus, and some of them are students lovers.Some students think it unacceptable, but others think it OK.What’s your opinion?

On Cohabitation of Student Lovers

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Write a note to Tom to invite him to see a film with you.11.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Under the one-child policy carried out in China, the “one” generation born between 1978 and 1985 has grown up.Directly affected by the family planning policy of China, whether they feel any loneliness as the only child of the families is being discussed.Does the Only Child Feel Lonely?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

Write a “Thank you” letter to Mr.Smith for his recommendation of your competence to the manager of the Medical Company.12.SECTION ACOMPOSITION

Many universities oblige the students to attend the spoken English test.What is your opinion?

Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?

SECTION BNOTE-WRTITING

The heating system in the hotel where you live didn’t work well last night.Write to the manager to complain about this.

第四篇：09年專四作文

Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? China’s economic growth has brought fast development to tourism since 1978.An increasing number of people start to go on traveling, which unavoidably bring harm to the environment.On the one hand, tourism leads to the destruction of ecological balance.Many so called green parks have been built to attract visitors.However, the constructions of those parks need lots of trees because they can be made into artificial chairs, tables or wood house, so tourism also causes the decline in areas of the green land, which adds the risk of floods.On the other hand, tourism causes water pollution.Some places of interest are famous for natural beauty, like some big waterfalls and lakes, but some rude behaviors, such as leaving plastic bags in the water indeed have a bad effect to water.To sum up, I think it is not worth sacrificing environment to develop economic.As citizens, everyone should do their own part to protect our environment.March 27, 2009 Dearly Lily, I have learned from an ad that a schoolboy is looking for a private English-language tutor.I think it is a good chance for you so you can get a part-time job at your free time.Most important of all, you want to be a teacher, your dream.I hope you will take the opportunity and may you succeed.Yours，Rose

第五篇：專四作文萬能開頭

四大開頭模板式寫法

第一大模板法：

1.①引題+②一方觀點+另一方觀點+③我方觀點

①引題：九大引題方法

一、在談到?時，人們對這個充滿爭議的話題所持的觀點各不相同。

① When talking about(it comes to / it refers to)_______, people’s opinion are divergent on such a controversial issue.二、最近經常辯論的一個問題是：

① A much debated issue these day is whether…

① There is a pubic(general)debate(discussion / controversy)today(nowadays)on(about/over/as to)the problem(issue)of …

三、最近?的問題已經引起了人們廣泛的關注。

① Recently the problem(issue)of ______ + has drawn(aroused)public(worldwide)attention.或 + has caused(aroused)wide(general / considerable / international)concern.四、近來?的問題已經廣為天下人所知。

① Recently the issue(problem)of … has been in the limelight(brought into focus / brought to public attention / posed among the general public).五、在過去的?年里，很多城市面臨了?的嚴重問題。

① In recent(past)years, many cities(nations / people)have been faced with(plagued with / troubled with / experienced / witnessed / undergone)the(a / an)serious problem of(acute shortage of / alarming increase in)…

六、如今我們國家面臨的最為緊迫的任務之一是?

① One of the burning(pressing / urgent)problems facing(confronting / troubling)our nation(society / world / community)today is that…

七、現在很多人談論的最熱門的話題之一是?

① One of the biggest issues(hottest topics / most popular things / most serous problems)many people talk(complain)about now is …

八、隨著

① With the rapid(marked / amazing)development(increase / improvement / expansion / growth / decline)of _____,① With the general(growing / common)recognition(realization / acknowledgement)of ______,① With he general(growing / common)interest in(concern over / enthusiasm for)________,① With ________ playing an increasingly big role in ______,① With _______ attaching much importance to ______,九： 如今有一種…趨勢。

① Nowadays(Currently / Recently), there is a growing(unhealthy)tendency to(in / that)…

②一方觀點 + 另一方觀點：兩大表述方法一、一些人認為?,另一些人認為?.② The vast(overwhelming)majority of people say(think / believe/ maintain/ hold)that …, while other people(others)claim(argue / insist)that …

② Most(Many / Quite a few /Some)people say(think / believe / maintain / hold)that, but other people(others)claim that …

② The vast(overwhelming)majority of people say(think / believe/ maintain/ hold)that …, but others view quite differently(but others think a bit differently / but others think that the opposite is true).They argue(claim)that …,② The overwhelming majority would support that …, others, however, take the negative attitude.二、反對者認為…, 擁護者認為…

② Those who criticize(oppose / object to)… argue that ….They believe that …, but people who advocate(favor)…, on the other hand, maintain(assert)that…

③ 我方觀點

一、就我個人而言，我認為?

③ However, I firmly believe(hold/maintain)…

③ From the personal perspective, I prefer A than B as my inclination.③ Personally, I am in favor of(support)the view(idea / opinion / argument)that…

二、agree / disagree型加入：我同意/不同意前/后者觀點，我認為…

③ I agree /disagree with the former / latter.I hold(maintain / believe)that …

③ I approve / disapprove of the former / latter idea.I hold(maintain / believe)that…

③ I am(not)in favor of the former / latter idea.I hold(maintain / believe)that…

變體一：②一方觀點+另一方觀點+③我方觀點一

變體二：①引題+③我方觀點

第二大模板法：

④流行觀點 + ③我方觀點(五大表述方法)

一、如今人們普遍認為?, 他們說? + 我方觀點

④ Now, it is commonly(generally / widely)believed(thought / held / accepted / felt / recognized / acknowledged)that … They claim(believe / argue)that …+ For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行觀點)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

二、如今經常聽到的一種批評聲音是…他們說… + 我不同意這種觀點，原因如下。

④ A criticism often heard these days is that … They say that … I disagree with this point of view for the following two / three reasons.三、對于公眾來說… + 我方觀點

④ To the general public, …For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行觀點)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

四、關于這個問題，多數人說… + 我方觀點

④ In response(reaction / answer)to the event(phenomenon / idea / question), the majority of people say(think)… + For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行觀點)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

五、近來我們一直聽到關于…的說法。+ 我方觀點

④ These days we often hear that … + For my part, I would choose to support.(表示支持流行觀點)/ For me, the viewpoint sounds biased / one-sided.After considering the issue, I hold(maintain / believe)…

第三大模板法：①引題 + ④流行觀點 + ⑤提出質疑（四大質疑法）

一、①引題 + ④流行觀點 + ⑤但是他們沒有意識到?

①引題句型 + ④流行觀點句型+ ⑤ But do they realize…?

二、①引題 + ④流行觀點 + ⑤但是這種做法明智么？越來越多的人，包括我對此表示質疑。

①引題句型 + ④流行觀點句型 + ⑤ But is it a fair(wise/reasonable)one? This way is now being questioned(challenged)by more people, including me.三、①引題 + ④流行觀點 + ⑤ 但是果真如此嗎？仔細分析一下，就證明這種觀點站不住腳。

①引題句型 + ④流行觀點句型 + ⑤ But is it true? Close examination(analysis)doesn’t bear out(證實)the claim(view/argument).四、①引題 + ④流行觀點 + ⑤ 但是情況果真如此嗎？我不認為,因為以下原因。

①引題句型 + ④流行觀點句型 + ⑤ But is this really the case? I disagree for the following reasons.第四大模板法： ①引題 + ⑥ 讓步轉折句（五大轉折法）

一、①引題 + ⑥ 的確?，不過?

①引題句型 + ⑥ It is true that …, but …

二、①引題 + ⑥ 似乎 ?, 不過?

①引題句型 + ⑥ It seems that …, but …

三、①引題 + ⑥ 不可否認的是?, 不過?

①引題句型 + ⑥ It is undeniable that …, but … / Undeniably, …, but …

四、①引題 + ⑥ 但是盡管?, 幾乎沒有證據證明?

①引題句型 + ⑥ But although(Admittedly,)…, there is no(little)evidence.it is questioned(doubted)that …

五、①引題 + ⑥ 但是盡管?, 我還是認為?

①引題 + ⑥ Although …, I believe one should …

注：開頭段落提出觀點可以出現各種格的“我”，但之后的段落不要使用 “I” “me” “my” “we” “us” “our”!