第一篇：1. 大學英語四級寫作閱卷老師評判標準

大學英語四級寫作閱卷老師評判標準

1.大學英語四級寫作的要求 大學英語四級考試對寫作的基本要求： 能就一定的話題和給定的 提綱寫短文，能寫短信或便條；表達意思清楚，屋重大語言錯誤；能 在半小時內寫出 120---150 個詞的短文。《大學英語四級考試大綱》對寫作考試要求作了具體規定：短文 寫作共 1 題，考試時間為 30 分鐘。要求學生寫出一篇 120---150 個詞 的短文。試卷上可能給出題目或規定情景，或給出段首句要求續寫，或要求看圖作文，或給出題目謝短文等。要求切題，能正確表達思想，意義連貫，文理基本通順，無重大語言錯誤。

2.大學英語四級寫作的評分原則 大學英語四級寫作的評分原則：(1)評分避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低 分的給低分，包括零分。(2)采用總體評分方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分，而不 是按語言點的錯誤數目扣分。(3)從兩個方面進行綜合評判：內容和語言。作文應表達題目所 規定的內容，作文要切題。內容要通過語言來表達，因此語言要清楚 而貼切地表達思想。

3.閱卷的五檔標準 五檔：2 分，5 分，8 分，11 分，14 分 具體要求為： 2 分： 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均 有錯誤，且均為嚴重錯誤。5 分： 基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較嚴重 的錯誤。8 分： 基本切題，表達思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言 錯誤較多。11 分：切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14 分：切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上 無語言錯誤。

4.字數不足扣分 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 扣1分 扣2分 扣3分 扣4分

5.在語言方面的評判：(1)基本正確 四、六級考生的最大問題不是寫得太簡單，而是嚴重錯誤太多。

基礎一般的同學即使使用小學或中學詞匯和句型，只要使用得基本正 確，也可以得到及格分數。考生最常犯的語言錯誤有三類：語法、拼 寫、標點。最常犯的語法錯誤包括：時態、冠詞、主謂一致、名詞單 復數等。(2)豐富多變 基礎較好的同學，要想取得四、六級寫作高分，應做到豐富多變。豐富多變體現在詞匯和句型兩方面。同一詞語在一句話、一個段落乃 至一篇文章中最好 不要重復出現，應盡量使用同、近義詞替換（無 法替換的關鍵詞除外）例如：。think 可以替換為 reckon, assume, argue 等詞。如果想不到同、近義詞，可以使用上義詞進行替換。此外，句 型也應富于變化，不要拘泥于主謂賓句型，可以使用主系表、過去分 詞和現在分詞短 語作狀語、不定式短語作狀語、狀語從句等多種句

3.閱卷的五檔標準

五檔：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分

具體要求為：

2分： 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均

有錯誤，且均為嚴重錯誤。

5分： 基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較嚴重的錯誤。

8分： 基本切題，表達思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言

錯誤較多。

11分：切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分：切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上

無語言錯誤。

4.字數不足扣分

110-119扣1分

100-109扣2分

90-99扣3分

80-89扣4分

5.在語言方面的評判：

(1)基本正確四、六級考生的最大問題不是寫得太簡單，而是嚴重錯誤太多。

基礎一般的同學即使使用小學或中學詞匯和句型，只要使用得基本正確，也可以得到及格分數。考生最常犯的語言錯誤有三類：語法、拼寫、標點。最常犯的語法錯誤包括：時態、冠詞、主謂一致、名詞單復數等。

(2)豐富多變

基礎較好的同學，要想取得四、六級寫作高分，應做到豐富多變。豐富多變體現在詞匯和句型兩方面。同一詞語在一句話、一個段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重復出現，應盡量使用同、近義詞替換（無法替換的關鍵詞除外）。例如：think可以替換為reckon, assume, argue等詞。如果想不到同、近義詞，可以使用上義詞進行替換。此外，句型也應富于變化，不要拘泥于主謂賓句型，可以使用主系表、過去分詞和現在分詞短 語作狀語、不定式短語作狀語、狀語從句等多種句型。

四級作文如果量化成句數，只需寫10句左右；六級只需12句左右。全文應以短句為主，長短句相結合。所謂短句是指10個詞左右的句子，不能全篇 都是5、6個詞的短句。同時，全文應有一定數量的長句，一般15~20詞即可，太長則易冗贅。有的同學以為只寫長句不寫短句，就能取得高分，實際上老師看 長句會覺得很累，以為你不會寫短句，通常不會給高分。如果一篇中文作文每句都30多個字，定然晦澀難懂，英文也不例外。精煉的短句可以放在段首表示強調； 復雜的長句可以進行具體的論證、舉例或描述。

6.高分真經

（1）背誦

背誦是提高英語綜合能力的法寶，可分為以下5個層次：（1）精彩詞匯，（2）精彩句型，（3）精彩句子，（4）萬能框架，（5）經典范文。注意句子和句型不一樣，精彩句子應作為單詞來記憶。背誦前，確保自己已充分理解所有內容。

語言學習有兩個關鍵詞——輸入（INPUT）和輸出（OUTPUT）。聽力和閱讀屬于輸入，考生處于被動狀態，只需在考場上將聽到和看到的東西 弄懂。應對這種題目的技巧很多，容易在短期內提高。但口語和寫作屬于輸出，考生必須變被動為主動，這很難在短期內突破。沒有大量的輸入，很難進行自由輸 出。

四、六級寫作需要在30分鐘內完成一篇短文，共計120或150余字，很多同學叫苦不迭。但若將其改為中文作文，大家就會覺得易如反掌。原因何在？俗話說：“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會做詩也能吟。”同學們從小到大背誦了大量中文佳作，可以隨意組合，自由輸出。然而，在英語學習中，多數同學只沉溺于背單詞、摳語法、做閱讀，很少有人背誦英文文章。正因為沒有大量輸入，寫作才始終處于“擠牙膏”狀態，想一句說一句，說一句翻譯一句。

提高英語寫作要多讀、多背、多寫、多改。多讀、多背是首要任務，是積累輸入的關鍵。考生應大量積累經典英文句型、表達和范文，平時勤于背誦。

有的同學問我，說自己背過很多英文文章，但上了考場還是大腦

一片空白，什么都想不起來。這種情況很常見，主要有兩個原因：一是沒有進行造句的工作，只是盲目背誦。二是背得不夠熟練。學習任何東西都講究先求質，再求量。大家英語學了很多年，文章看了很多，為什么寫作還是學不好？關鍵是量鋪開了，但質沒有上去。一篇文章應背到脫口而出的程度，如果還需要過腦子，就證明背得不夠熟練。一知半解，背得再多也是徒勞。

（2）默寫

背完經典范文后，進行默寫。然后對照原文糾錯，搞清楚錯在什么地方。多數同學在寫的時候都會犯小錯誤，如拼寫、單復數、大小寫等。這些就是你在寫作中的弱點，也是閱卷老師最不能容忍的地方。培根說過：“Writing makes an exact man.”（寫作使人精確。）只有默寫下來你才會發現自己常犯哪些錯誤。

（3）中譯英

中譯英也是提高寫作的好方法。根據范文的中文譯文，將其按自己的理解譯成英文。譯完后，你就會發現自己的翻譯和原文有很大差距，這些差距就是取 得寫作高分的關鍵。這時，對照范文，看看原作者是怎么寫的，思考為什么這么寫。同樣的一句中文，范文中使用了哪些詞匯和句型？你使用了哪些詞匯和句型？學習范文使用不同的詞匯和句型。通過不斷練習，你的寫作水平不知不覺就提高了。

（4）寫作

模仿范文寫作新的文章，套用范文的精彩詞匯、句型、句子和框架。最初套用時可能比較生硬，但隨著不斷的積累，組合起來會越來

越順手。

上述的高分策略是提高四、六級英語寫作水平最有效的方法。在練習寫作的初始階段, 可勤查語法書和字典等工具書, 背記常用詞和短語, 以擴大詞匯量, 拓展知識面。背單詞時要深刻理解所背詞語的內在含義, 并了解其使用環境。備考時，熟記一些過渡詞、句型和范文，并進行仿寫。考試時，使用學習過的、熟悉而有把握的詞匯和句型，沒有把握的句子，盡量采取“回避 政策”，切忌自編自造漢語式的英語詞組和句型。

第二篇：大學英語四級寫作閱卷老師評判標準 Microsoft Word 文檔

大學英語四級寫作閱卷老師評判標準

閱卷老師在語言方面主要從兩個方面進行評判：

1、基本正確四、六級考生的最大問題不是寫得太簡單，而是嚴重錯誤太多。基礎一般的同學即使使用小學或中學詞匯和句型，只要使用得基本正確，也可以得到及格分數。考生最常犯的語言錯誤有三類：語法、拼寫、標點。最常犯的語法錯誤包括：時態、冠詞、主謂一致、名詞單復數等。

2、豐富多變

基礎較好的同學，要想取得四、六級寫作高分，應做到豐富多變。豐富多變體現在詞匯和句型兩方面。同一詞語在一句話、一個段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重復出現，應盡量使用同、近義詞替換（無法替換的關鍵詞除外）。例如：think可以替換為reckon, assume, argue等詞。如果想不到同、近義詞，可以使用上義詞進行替換。此外，句型也應富于變化，不要拘泥于主謂賓句型，可以使用主系表、過去分詞和現在分詞短 語作狀語、不定式短語作狀語、狀語從句等多種句型。

四級作文如果量化成句數，只需寫10句左右；六級只需12句左右。全文應以短句為主，長短句相結合。所謂短句是指10個詞左右的句子，不能全篇 都是5、6個詞的短句。同時，全文應有一定數量的長句，一般15~20詞即可，太長則易冗贅。有的同學以為只寫長句不寫短句，就能取得高分，實際上老師看 長句會覺得很累，以為你不會寫短句，通常不會給高分。如果一篇中文作文每句都30多個字，定然晦澀難懂，英文也不例外。精煉的短句可以放在段首表示強調； 復雜的長句可以進行具體的論證、舉例或描述。

二、高分真經

（一）背誦

背誦是提高英語綜合能力的法寶，可分為以下5個層次：（1）精彩詞匯，（2）精彩句型，（3）精彩句子，（4）萬能框架，（5）經典范文。注意句子和句型不一樣，精彩句子應作為單詞來記憶。背誦前，確保自己已充分理解所有內容。

語言學習有兩個關鍵詞——輸入（INPUT）和輸出（OUTPUT）。聽力和閱讀屬于輸入，考生處于被動狀態，只需在考場上將聽到和看到的東西 弄懂。應對這種題目的技巧很多，容易在短期內提高。但口語和寫作屬于輸出，考生必須變被動為主動，這很難在短期內突破。沒有大量的輸入，很難進行自由輸 出。

四、六級寫作需要在30分鐘內完成一篇短文，共計120或150余字，很多同學叫苦不迭。但若將其改為中文作文，大家就會覺得易如反掌。原因何 在？俗話說：“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會做詩也能吟。”同學們從小到大背誦了大量中文佳作，可以隨意組合，自由輸出。然而，在英語學習中，多數同學只沉溺于背單詞、摳語法、做閱讀，很少有人背誦英文文章。正因為沒有大量輸入，寫作才始終處于“擠牙膏”狀態，想一句說一句，說一句翻譯一句。提高英語寫作要多讀、多背、多寫、多改。多讀、多背是首要任務，是積累輸入的關鍵。考生應大量積累經典英文句型、表達和范文，平時勤于背誦。

有的同學問我，說自己背過很多英文文章，但上了考場還是大腦一片空白，什么都想不起來。這種情況很常見，主要有兩個原因：一是沒有進行造句的工 作，只是盲目背誦。二是背得不夠熟練。學習任何東西都講究先求質，再求量。大家英語學了很多年，文章看了很多，為什么寫作還是學不好？關鍵是量鋪開了，但 質沒有上去。一篇文章應背到脫口而出的程度，如果還需要過腦子，就證明背得不夠熟練。一知半解，背得再多也是徒勞。

（二）默寫

背完經典范文后，進行默寫。然后對照原文糾錯，搞清楚錯在什么地方。多數同學在寫的時候都會犯小錯誤，如拼寫、單復數、大小寫等。這些就是你在 寫作中的弱點，也是閱卷老師最不能容忍的地方。培根說過：“Writing makes an exact man.”（寫作使人精確。）只有默寫下來你才會發現自己常犯哪些錯誤。

（三）中譯英

中譯英也是提高寫作的好方法。根據范文的中文譯文，將其按自己的理解譯成英文。譯完后，你就會發現自己的翻譯和原文有很大差距，這些差距就是取 得寫作高分的關鍵。這時，對照范文，看看原作者是怎么寫的，思考為什么這么寫。同樣的一句中文，范文中使用了哪些詞匯和句型？你使用了哪些詞匯和句型？學習范文使用不同的詞匯和句型。通過不斷練習，你的寫作水平不知不覺就提高了。

（四）寫作

模仿范文寫作新的文章，套用范文的精彩詞匯、句型、句子和框架。最初套用時可能比較生硬，但隨著不斷的積累，組合起來會越來越順手。

上述的高分策略是提高四、六級英語寫作水平最有效的方法。在練習寫作的初始階段, 可勤查語法書和字典等工具書, 背記常用詞和短語, 以擴大詞匯量, 拓展知識面。背單詞時要深刻理解所背詞語的內在含義, 并了解其使用環境。備考時，熟記一些過渡詞、句型和范文，并進行仿寫。考試時，使用學習過的、熟悉而有把握的詞匯和句型，沒有把握的句子，盡量采取“回避 政策”，切忌自編自造漢語式的英語詞組和句型。

第三篇：四級英語口試評判標準（范文）

四級英語口試評判標準描述

語言準確性和范圍

語法和詞匯基本正確 話語的長短和連貫性 語言靈活性和適切性 ?在討論有關話題時?能夠自然、積極地參表達過程中詞匯豐富、語法結構較能進行較長時間的、語與討論

5為復雜 言連貫的發言，但允許?語言的使用總體上能分

發音較好，但允許有一些不影響理由于無法找到合適的詞與語境、功能和目的相解的母語口音 語而造成的偶爾停頓 適應

語法和詞匯有一些錯誤，但未嚴重?能進行較連貫的發?能夠較積極地參與討影響交際

表達過程中詞匯較豐富

4發音尚可 分 言，但多數發言較簡短 論，但有時內容不切題或?組織思想和搜尋詞未能與小組成員直接交語時頻繁出現停頓，有流

時會影響交際 ?語言的使用基本上能

與語境、功能和目的相適

應

語法和詞匯有錯誤，且有時會影響?發言簡短

交際 ?不能積極參與討論，?組織思想和搜尋詞有時無法適應新話題或3表達過程中詞匯不豐富，語法結構語時頻繁出現較長時間討論內容的改變 分

較簡單 的停頓，影響交際，但

發音有缺陷，有時會影響交際 能夠基本完成交際任務

語法和詞匯有較多錯誤，以致妨礙?發言簡短且毫無連?不能參與小組討論 理解 貫性，幾乎無法進行交

2表達過程中因缺乏詞匯和語法結際 分

構而影響交際

?發音較差，以致交際時常中斷

第四篇：大學英語四級寫作

Exercise

For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.You should write at least 120words following the outline given below:

1.如今不少學生在英語學習中不重視拼寫

2.出現這種現象的原因是……

3.為了改變這種狀況，我認為……

Outline：

I.fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling

1.can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but be incapable of spelling it

II.There are some causes for it

1.fewer and fewer students need to write English essays

2.the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination

3.the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers

III.Measures should be taken to solve the problem.1.we need to attach great importance to word-spelling.2.should write English as much as they can

3.the dictations should be reinforced in the class.滿分范文：

Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling

Nowadays, students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help student pay more attention to spelling.Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.大學生應該學選擇什么書讀？

Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life.And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively.The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part.That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other

types of books do.What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on

relevant fields are highly demanding.For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to

understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books.On the one hand,in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major.On the

other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons.In brief, college students should choose

books according to their interests and needs.2.對比選擇型作文模板

1.Different people have different views on——

2.Some people prefer,——.3.Others tend to, ——.4.As to me, I agree with /to ——

5.Of course,——.6.For example,——

7.But,——

8.The following reasons can account for my preference——

9.The main reason is ——.10.A good example to illustrate is ——

11.Fur another,——

12.From the foregoing（綜上所述）,——

1．開門見山直入主體，表明對某事人們的不同看法。(上述12點譯文)

2．表明一部分人的看法。

3．另一部分的看法。

4．作者的看法。

5．承認自己不贊同的看法有一定的合理性。

6.舉例說明支持第五句。轉折指出這種觀點的不足。啟下句過度到下段具體闡述自己所支持的觀點的理由。

9.支持觀點的理由一。

10.舉例說明理由一。

11.理由二。

12.總結全文，從長遠看來。

Is a test of spoken necessary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English

Test(CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others

tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long

enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate

draws a topic which he or she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken

English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.The following reasons can account for my preference.The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance

of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only

stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For

another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test

of spoken English is of necessity.3.問題解決型作文模板

1.Withthedevelopment/improvementof ——,——.2.It is necessary that——.3.On the one hand, ——.4.On the other hand, ——

5.Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention.6.Firstly——7.Secondly——

8.For example,——9.Thirdly, ——.10.In other words,——

11.In fact, ways to —— are countless.12.It’s time that ——

1．空格一處鋪墊，空格二處填寫某一問題。

2．關注解決現象引出的問題很必要

3．解決問題很必要的理由一。

4．解決問題很必要的理由二。

5．承上啟下，填要解決的問題。

6.解決辦法一。解決辦法二。

8.舉例解釋解決辦法二。

9.解決辦法三。

10.闡明解決辦法三。

11.指出解決問題的辦法多種多樣。

12.強調解決問題時不可待。

Reduce Waste on Campus

With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious.It is

necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus.On the one hand, our waste

has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity.On the other

hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention.Firstly, we should

turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as

possible.Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes.For

example, we should use a basin when we clean faces.Thirdly, we should be economical.In other

words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need.In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless.It’s time that we cultivate the

habit of thrift in every possible way.4.觀點論證型作文模板

1.It is true that——.2.However,——.3.I think——.4.—— can be listed as follow.5.First of all, ——

6.Secondly ——

7.For example——

8.Thirdly,——

9.A case in point is ——.10.It goes without saying that ——

11.There is no doubt that ——

12.In conclusion ——

1．提出普遍存在地觀點。

2．談不同地觀點。

3．自己地觀點，即文章地論點4．過度句，轉折到觀點地論證，由題目選擇具體的詞。5．論

證理由一

6．論證理由二。

7．舉例具體說明理由二。

8.論證理由三。

9.舉例說明理由三。

10.提出執行該觀點時應注意的事項。

11.得出結論。

12.總結全文。

It Pays to Be Honest

It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront

confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.I think that we should be

honest.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends

over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being

overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers.Thirdly,honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of

trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the collective and the

individual.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying

stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.應用文作文模板

建議信模板

Dear——

1.I am delighted to learn that——.2.It——.3.In my opinion,——.4.On the one hand,——.5.On the other hand, ——

6.As to the——, I suggest——.7.If ——

8.It is unnecessary for you to——

9.In addition,——.10.I am sure——

11.Please inform me ——

12.I am looking forward to ——

1．寫信的原因。

2．引出作者的建議。

3．表達建議內容。

4．提出建議的理由一。

5．建議的理由二。

6．具體到某一方面的建議內容。

7．供被建議人選擇的條件。

8．建議內容的另一方面。

9．其它的建議。

10．對建議內容的評價。

11.對建議內容所做出的承諾。

12.表達個人的愿望。

Sincerel

Signature:(個人簽名)

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 7th, 2010

Dear Wang,I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national days.It has been

several years since we departed last time, and I am looking forward to your visit.In my opinion,Nanjing is your best choice for this holiday.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and

historical sites in Nanjing.On the other hand, Nanjing is a cultural center with various artistic and

musical performances.As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit the Confucius Temple and Dr.Sun

Yat-sen Mausoleum.If you are interested in parks, the XXX park will be your best choice.It is not

necessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little chill in the evening.In

addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings

unattended!I am sure you will enjoy your visit in Nanjing.Please inform me once you have made your decision.I am looking forward to seeing you

soon.，yours

Sincerely Yours,Zhang Ying

第五篇：大學英語四級寫作——經典模塊

大學英語四級考試寫作模板——經典范文模塊

一、不同觀點列舉型 There is a widespread concern over the issue that(作 文 題 目),but it is well know that the opinion concerning this hot topic various from person to person.A majority of people think that(觀點一).In their views there are factors contributing to this attitude as

fellow.In the first place ,(原因一),Further more ,in the secend place ,(原因二).So it goes without saying that(觀點一).People ,however differ in their opinions ,on this mather ,some people hold the idea that(觀點二).In their point of view ,on the hand ,(原 因 一),on the other hand ,(原因二).There is no doubt that(觀點二).As far as i am concerned ,i firmly support the view the(觀點一或觀點二).It is not only because(),but

also because().The more.the more().二、利弊型的議論文 Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over the issue that(作文題目).In fact,there are both advantages in().Generally speaking ,it is widely believed that

there are several positive aspects as follows.Fisrtly(優 點一).And secendly(優點二).Just as a popular saying goes “every coin has two sides”.()is no expection ,and in another word ,it still has negative aspects,to begin with(缺點一), in addition(缺 點二).To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of()into full play ,and reduce the disadvantages to the

minium at the same time.In that case ,we will definitly make a better use of the().三、說明原因型模塊 Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon

(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注釋：

1、XX 的第一個優點

2、支持 XX 的做法

3、不支持 XX 的做法

4、XX 的第二個優點

5、舉例證明優點二

6、說明 XX 優點三的影響

相應作文： The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my

standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).四、說明原因型模塊 In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for

(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相應作文：

The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.三、說明原因型模塊 For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注釋：

1、人們針對 XX 的態度和舉措

2、歸納現狀

3、第一個原因

4、第二個原因

5、第三個原因

6、重申造成現狀的最重要原因

相應作文： Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water

and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).五、說明原因型模塊 These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注釋：

1、提出論題

2、說明現狀

3、理由一

4、理由二

5、理由三

6、理由三引起的后果

7、解決方法

相應作文： Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living

conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and

learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.六、圖表式作文寫作模板 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多 少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第 一個原因).More importantly,……(第二個原因).Most important of all,……(第三個原 因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken 括號里的使用于那些不 太好的變化趨勢).七、提綱式作文寫作模板

1、對立觀點式 A.有人認為 X 是好事，贊成 X，為什么？ B.有人認為 X 是壞事，反對 X，為什么？ C.我的看法。Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第一個原因。They also argue that 支持 X 的另一個原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反對 X 的第一個理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個壞處。

2、批駁觀點式 A．一個錯誤觀點。B． 我不同意。Many people argue that 錯誤觀

點。saying that, they mean 對 By 這個觀點的進一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊 成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。

3、社會問題(現象)式 A．一個社會問題或者現象 B．產生的原因

C．對社會和我們生活的影響 D．如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)E．前景的預測。Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 調查內容說明這種現象的情 況。(或者是一個例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……

辯論式議論文模版

（一）Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 觀點1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 論據1.More importantly, 論據2.Most important of all, 論據3.In summary, 總結觀點。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決 心。或 From above, we can predict that 預測。

辯論式議論文模版

（二）People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1.While others point out that 觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 論據1.For another, 論據2.Last but not the least, 論據3.To conclude, 總結觀點.As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或 From above, we can predict that 預測。

辯論式議論文模版

（三）There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that 觀點1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 論據1.Furthermore,論據2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 總結觀點。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。